UNIT 8 LITERATURE Part 6 Writing写作点拔学案（含解析）
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Part 6 Writing
介绍名著中的人物
写作题目
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom正在学习中文,想要了解中国古代名著《西游记》(Journey to the West)的相关知识,请你写一封回信,介绍《西游记》中你最喜欢的人物——孙悟空,并说明你喜欢的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为100个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm so glad to hear about your experience of learning one of China's four great classics, Journey to the West.
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空
1. adj.引人入胜的
2. adj.给人深刻印象的
3. adv.显然
4. adv.然而,不过
答案 1.absorbing 2.dramatic 3.evidently
4.nevertheless
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:提及来信内容及回信目的
(1) (我写信是为了分享) with you my favorite character, Sun Wukong, in this absorbing novel.
第二段:介绍最喜欢的人物——孙悟空
(2) (不可否认) so many dramatic characters have been created by ancient Chinese novelists.
(3)In Journey to the West, Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King, (与生俱来) supernatural powers.
(4)He learns the 72 transformations, and this ability allows him to transform himself into (各种各样的) animals and objects.
(5)Sun is courageous enough to fight against various evil spirits all the way and (忠诚于)his master Tang Priest (尽管被误解), and this makes their journey to the Western Paradise successful.
第三段:说明喜欢孙悟空的原因
(6)I consider Sun as my favorite character because of his always telling the truth, even (面对) power or authority.
答案 (1)I'm writing to share (2)There is no denying that (3)is born with (4)a wide variety of (5)faithful to; despite being misunderstood (6)in the face of
2.句式升级
(7)用现在分词作状语改写句(4)。
(8)用现在分词作状语改写句(5)。
(9)把句(6)改写成包含why引导的表语从句的主从复合句。
答案 (7)He learns the 72 transformations, allowing him to transform himself into a wide variety of animals and objects.
(8)Sun is courageous enough to fight against various evil spirits all the way and faithful to his master Tang Priest despite being misunderstood, making their journey to the Western Paradise successful.
(9)His always telling the truth, even in the face of power or authority, is why I consider Sun as my favorite character.
连句成篇
Dear Tom,
I'm so glad to hear about your experience of learning one of China's four great classics,Journey to the West. Today I'm writing to share with you my favorite character, Sun Wukong, in this absorbing novel.
There is no denying that so many dramatic characters have been created by ancient Chinese novelists. In Journey to the West, Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King, is born with supernatural powers. He learns the 72 transformations, allowing him to transform himself into a wide variety of animals and objects. Sun is courageous enough to fight against various evil spirits all the way and faithful to his master Tang Priest despite being misunderstood, making their journey to the Western Paradise successful.
Sun is evidently rebellious. Nevertheless, his always telling the truth, even in the face of power or authority, is why I consider Sun as my favorite character.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
文学介绍常用词块
1.classical literature/works古典文学/作品
2.a vivid description/account of...对……生动的描述
3.be adapted from...改编自……
4.be set in...以……为背景
5.cover a wide range of topics涉及各种各样的话题
6.get a taste of...体验……;尝试……
7.bring sb. happiness给某人带来快乐
8.enrich one's life丰富某人的生活
9.shape one's character塑造某人的性格
10.broaden one's horizons开阔某人的眼界
11.open one's eyes to the world放眼世界
12.in terms of就……而言;在……方面;谈及
13.the key to success成功的关键
14.win the Nobel Prize in Literature获得诺贝尔文学奖
15.set a good example树立好榜样
16.deserve one's admiration and respect值得某人钦佩和尊重
17.achieve great success取得巨大成功
18.inspire sb. to do sth.激励某人做某事
实战演练
假定你是李华,你的英国网友Peter上周在邮件中提到想阅读中国著名的小说,请你就此用英语给他写封回信。内容包括:
1.推荐一本小说;
2.小说的内容简介;
3.给出阅读建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为100个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Hua
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mother's Gift
I grew up in a small town where the primary school was a ten-minute walk from my house. When the noon bell rang, I would run breathlessly home. My mother would be standing at the top of the stairs, smiling down at me.
One lunchtime when I was in the third grade will always stay with me. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had rehearsed my lines so hard with me. But no matter how easily I acted at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator's(旁白员)part to the play, and asked me to change roles. Her words, kindly expressed, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn't tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my pain. Instead of suggesting we practise my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英)in the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by its roots. “From now on, we'll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful—even dandelions.”
My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn't it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.” Knowing that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地).
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said,
After the play, I took home the dandelion.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.sense vt.觉察到
2.bunch n.串,束,扎
3.casually adv.随意地,漫不经心地
4.dig up挖出
5.protest v.反对;坚决地表示
6.shame n.羞耻;丢脸
障碍词汇
1.rehearse v.排演,排练
2.vine n.藤蔓;藤
3.win over说服,赢得……的支持
长难句
原句 Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions in the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold.
分析 该句是一个主从复合句。as if引导方式状语从句,从句中使用了虚拟语气。
译文 在大树下,我们可以看到草地上一丛丛黄色的蒲公英,仿佛是一位画家为我们的风景增添了一点金色。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:她说:“但你会成为一名出色的旁白员。”→妈妈又说了一些鼓励“我”的话→“我”接受了旁白员的角色,努力排练→“我”在演出前看到了妈妈送的一朵蒲公英,战胜了紧张→演出成功
第二段:话剧演出结束后,“我”把蒲公英带回家→妈妈和“我”一起把这朵蒲公英封存起来留作纪念→带给“我”的感触
遣词造句
1.用单词或短语填空
(1) a shining smile 带着灿烂的笑容
(2)be of vital 至关重要的
(3)go on 上台
(4)keep... 陪伴……
(5) 结果是
(6) 注视
(7) v.记起,回忆起
(8) adj.宝贵的
答案 (1)wear (2)significance/importance
(3)stage (4)company (5)turn out
(6)gaze at (7)recall (8)precious
2.完成句子
(1)“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, (鼓励) and (安慰)me as she always did.
(2)“The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, (带着灿烂的微笑) on her soft face.
(3)Time had (飞逝) and it reached the performance day.
(4)At that very moment, I found a dandelion (被塞进我的口袋) by my mother to (陪伴我).
(5)Mom carefully (注视)the dandelion, gently (把它放入) a dictionary and smiled as usual.
(6)Though decades have passed, I (不断回忆起宝贵的午餐时光) we were together.
(7)I (感激) the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
答案 (1)encouraging; comforting
(2)wearing a shining smile (3)flown by
(4)put into my pocket; keep me company
(5)gazed at; placed it into (6)constantly recall the precious lunchtime (7)am grateful for
3.句式升级
(8)用强调句型强调时间状语改写句(4)。
(9)用形容词作状语合并句(6)和句(7)。
答案 (8)It was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company.
(9)Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
连句成篇
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, encouraging and comforting me as she always did. “The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, wearing a shining smile on her soft face. I began to accept that the narrator part was of vital significance and rehearsed even harder. Time had flown by and it reached the performance day. Before going on stage I still felt nervous, but it was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company. The play turned out to be a great success.
After the play, I took home the dandelion. Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently placed it into a dictionary and smiled as usual. “We were perhaps the only people who would keep such a sorry-looking weed.” Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
写作积累
环境描写
一、环境描写的分类
1.自然环境描写。如:The country is very green in spring.
2.社会环境描写。如:This small village was filled with flames of war at that time.
二、环境描写的手法
1.借助感官(视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、触觉)来进行环境描写。如:After the rain, the lotus flowers in the pond are in full blossom. They give off a faint scent.(借助视觉和嗅觉进行描写)
2.从时空的角度进行环境描写,例如,由上到下、由远及近等方式。如:I saw many kids who were laughing happily on the lawn. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky.(采用视觉上的由下到上的方式进行描写)
三、环境描写的素材
the blue sky蓝天,the songs of birds鸟鸣,the fragile flowers娇嫩的花,the raining evening 雨夜,the green grass青草,the fragrant roses芬芳的玫瑰,the setting/rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太阳,a gust of wind一阵狂风,the drooping branches of the weeping willow垂柳的低垂枝条,the soft and cool wind轻柔且凉爽的风
Part 6 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to know that you have interest in Chinese novels. There are so many famous novels written in Chinese, including classical novels and modern novels, among which I like Dream of the Red Chamber most, which is excellent beyond comparison. Based on Jia and Lin's love story, it describes a tragedy about love and the decline of a big family, exposing the social crisis.
The book is written in old Chinese, which is difficult to understand. So when you read it, you'd better get a Chinese dictionary at hand. In addition, you'd better have some background knowledge about the Qing Dynasty.
Yours,
Li Hua
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介绍名著中的人物
写作题目
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom正在学习中文,想要了解中国古代名著《西游记》(Journey to the West)的相关知识,请你写一封回信,介绍《西游记》中你最喜欢的人物——孙悟空,并说明你喜欢的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为100个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm so glad to hear about your experience of learning one of China's four great classics, Journey to the West.
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空
1. adj.引人入胜的
2. adj.给人深刻印象的
3. adv.显然
4. adv.然而,不过
答案 1.absorbing 2.dramatic 3.evidently
4.nevertheless
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:提及来信内容及回信目的
(1) (我写信是为了分享) with you my favorite character, Sun Wukong, in this absorbing novel.
第二段:介绍最喜欢的人物——孙悟空
(2) (不可否认) so many dramatic characters have been created by ancient Chinese novelists.
(3)In Journey to the West, Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King, (与生俱来) supernatural powers.
(4)He learns the 72 transformations, and this ability allows him to transform himself into (各种各样的) animals and objects.
(5)Sun is courageous enough to fight against various evil spirits all the way and (忠诚于)his master Tang Priest (尽管被误解), and this makes their journey to the Western Paradise successful.
第三段:说明喜欢孙悟空的原因
(6)I consider Sun as my favorite character because of his always telling the truth, even (面对) power or authority.
答案 (1)I'm writing to share (2)There is no denying that (3)is born with (4)a wide variety of (5)faithful to; despite being misunderstood (6)in the face of
2.句式升级
(7)用现在分词作状语改写句(4)。
(8)用现在分词作状语改写句(5)。
(9)把句(6)改写成包含why引导的表语从句的主从复合句。
答案 (7)He learns the 72 transformations, allowing him to transform himself into a wide variety of animals and objects.
(8)Sun is courageous enough to fight against various evil spirits all the way and faithful to his master Tang Priest despite being misunderstood, making their journey to the Western Paradise successful.
(9)His always telling the truth, even in the face of power or authority, is why I consider Sun as my favorite character.
连句成篇
Dear Tom,
I'm so glad to hear about your experience of learning one of China's four great classics,Journey to the West. Today I'm writing to share with you my favorite character, Sun Wukong, in this absorbing novel.
There is no denying that so many dramatic characters have been created by ancient Chinese novelists. In Journey to the West, Sun Wukong, also known as the Monkey King, is born with supernatural powers. He learns the 72 transformations, allowing him to transform himself into a wide variety of animals and objects. Sun is courageous enough to fight against various evil spirits all the way and faithful to his master Tang Priest despite being misunderstood, making their journey to the Western Paradise successful.
Sun is evidently rebellious. Nevertheless, his always telling the truth, even in the face of power or authority, is why I consider Sun as my favorite character.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
文学介绍常用词块
1.classical literature/works古典文学/作品
2.a vivid description/account of...对……生动的描述
3.be adapted from...改编自……
4.be set in...以……为背景
5.cover a wide range of topics涉及各种各样的话题
6.get a taste of...体验……;尝试……
7.bring sb. happiness给某人带来快乐
8.enrich one's life丰富某人的生活
9.shape one's character塑造某人的性格
10.broaden one's horizons开阔某人的眼界
11.open one's eyes to the world放眼世界
12.in terms of就……而言;在……方面;谈及
13.the key to success成功的关键
14.win the Nobel Prize in Literature获得诺贝尔文学奖
15.set a good example树立好榜样
16.deserve one's admiration and respect值得某人钦佩和尊重
17.achieve great success取得巨大成功
18.inspire sb. to do sth.激励某人做某事
实战演练
假定你是李华,你的英国网友Peter上周在邮件中提到想阅读中国著名的小说,请你就此用英语给他写封回信。内容包括:
1.推荐一本小说;
2.小说的内容简介;
3.给出阅读建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为100个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Hua
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mother's Gift
I grew up in a small town where the primary school was a ten-minute walk from my house. When the noon bell rang, I would run breathlessly home. My mother would be standing at the top of the stairs, smiling down at me.
One lunchtime when I was in the third grade will always stay with me. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had rehearsed my lines so hard with me. But no matter how easily I acted at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator's(旁白员)part to the play, and asked me to change roles. Her words, kindly expressed, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn't tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my pain. Instead of suggesting we practise my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英)in the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by its roots. “From now on, we'll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful—even dandelions.”
My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn't it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.” Knowing that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地).
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said,
After the play, I took home the dandelion.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.sense vt.觉察到
2.bunch n.串,束,扎
3.casually adv.随意地,漫不经心地
4.dig up挖出
5.protest v.反对;坚决地表示
6.shame n.羞耻;丢脸
障碍词汇
1.rehearse v.排演,排练
2.vine n.藤蔓;藤
3.win over说服,赢得……的支持
长难句
原句 Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions in the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold.
分析 该句是一个主从复合句。as if引导方式状语从句,从句中使用了虚拟语气。
译文 在大树下,我们可以看到草地上一丛丛黄色的蒲公英,仿佛是一位画家为我们的风景增添了一点金色。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:她说:“但你会成为一名出色的旁白员。”→妈妈又说了一些鼓励“我”的话→“我”接受了旁白员的角色,努力排练→“我”在演出前看到了妈妈送的一朵蒲公英,战胜了紧张→演出成功
第二段:话剧演出结束后,“我”把蒲公英带回家→妈妈和“我”一起把这朵蒲公英封存起来留作纪念→带给“我”的感触
遣词造句
1.用单词或短语填空
(1) a shining smile 带着灿烂的笑容
(2)be of vital 至关重要的
(3)go on 上台
(4)keep... 陪伴……
(5) 结果是
(6) 注视
(7) v.记起,回忆起
(8) adj.宝贵的
答案 (1)wear (2)significance/importance
(3)stage (4)company (5)turn out
(6)gaze at (7)recall (8)precious
2.完成句子
(1)“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, (鼓励) and (安慰)me as she always did.
(2)“The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, (带着灿烂的微笑) on her soft face.
(3)Time had (飞逝) and it reached the performance day.
(4)At that very moment, I found a dandelion (被塞进我的口袋) by my mother to (陪伴我).
(5)Mom carefully (注视)the dandelion, gently (把它放入) a dictionary and smiled as usual.
(6)Though decades have passed, I (不断回忆起宝贵的午餐时光) we were together.
(7)I (感激) the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
答案 (1)encouraging; comforting
(2)wearing a shining smile (3)flown by
(4)put into my pocket; keep me company
(5)gazed at; placed it into (6)constantly recall the precious lunchtime (7)am grateful for
3.句式升级
(8)用强调句型强调时间状语改写句(4)。
(9)用形容词作状语合并句(6)和句(7)。
答案 (8)It was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company.
(9)Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
连句成篇
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, encouraging and comforting me as she always did. “The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, wearing a shining smile on her soft face. I began to accept that the narrator part was of vital significance and rehearsed even harder. Time had flown by and it reached the performance day. Before going on stage I still felt nervous, but it was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company. The play turned out to be a great success.
After the play, I took home the dandelion. Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently placed it into a dictionary and smiled as usual. “We were perhaps the only people who would keep such a sorry-looking weed.” Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
写作积累
环境描写
一、环境描写的分类
1.自然环境描写。如:The country is very green in spring.
2.社会环境描写。如:This small village was filled with flames of war at that time.
二、环境描写的手法
1.借助感官(视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、触觉)来进行环境描写。如:After the rain, the lotus flowers in the pond are in full blossom. They give off a faint scent.(借助视觉和嗅觉进行描写)
2.从时空的角度进行环境描写,例如,由上到下、由远及近等方式。如:I saw many kids who were laughing happily on the lawn. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky.(采用视觉上的由下到上的方式进行描写)
三、环境描写的素材
the blue sky蓝天,the songs of birds鸟鸣,the fragile flowers娇嫩的花,the raining evening 雨夜,the green grass青草,the fragrant roses芬芳的玫瑰,the setting/rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太阳,a gust of wind一阵狂风,the drooping branches of the weeping willow垂柳的低垂枝条,the soft and cool wind轻柔且凉爽的风
Part 6 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to know that you have interest in Chinese novels. There are so many famous novels written in Chinese, including classical novels and modern novels, among which I like Dream of the Red Chamber most, which is excellent beyond comparison. Based on Jia and Lin's love story, it describes a tragedy about love and the decline of a big family, exposing the social crisis.
The book is written in old Chinese, which is difficult to understand. So when you read it, you'd better get a Chinese dictionary at hand. In addition, you'd better have some background knowledge about the Qing Dynasty.
Yours,
Li Hua
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