UNIT 5 EDUCATION Part 6 Writing写作点拔学案（含解析）

UNIT 5　EDUCATION
Part 6　Writing
看图写作
写作题目
　　如今,随着智能手机等电子设备的普及,人们沉迷于手机等电子设备而忽略了和他人的沟通交流。请根据下图写一篇英语短文,内容要点如下:
1.描述图画内容;
2.针对图画内容加以分析;
3.针对该现象提出自己的看法或建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1.　　　　 adj.生动的,逼真的
2.　　　　 adj.热衷的
3.　　　　 adj.显然的,明显的
4.　　　　 vt.表明;意味着
5.　　　　 n.倾向
6.　　　　 vt.约束,限制
7.　　　　 adj.宝贵的
8.　　　　　　　　　非常重要
答案　1.vivid　2.enthusiastic　3.obvious 4.imply　5.tendency　6.restrict　7.precious 8.be of great significance
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:描述图画内容
(1)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(从生动的图画中可以看出), a big family get together to have a splendid dinner.
(2)At the table, the young　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(热衷于玩)with their electronic devices, 　　　　 　　　　(不顾)the elders' obvious awkwardness and disappointment.
第二段:针对图画内容加以分析
(3)The picture implies that electronic devices　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　 　　　　(对我们的生活有不好的影响).
(4)Young addicts 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(倾向于表现出) poor academic performance, which adds to the elders' worry.
第三段:针对该现象提出自己的看法或建议
(5)As far as I'm concerned, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(很重要的是限制) the time we spend on electronic devices and value precious face-to-face communication with our family members.
(6)It 　　　　 　　　　(有助于)a harmonious family atmosphere.
答案　(1)As can be seen from the vivid picture
(2)are enthusiastic about playing;regardless of
(3)have bad influence on our lives (4)have a tendency to show 　(5)it is of great significance to restrict　(6)contributes to
2.句式升级
(7)用分词短语作状语改写句(4)。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(8)把句(5)和句(6)合并成含有非限制性定语从句的主从复合句。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(7)Young addicts have a tendency to show poor academic performance, adding to the elders' worry.　(8)As far as I'm concerned, it is of great significance to restrict the time we spend on electronic devices and value precious face-to-face communication with our family members, which contributes to a harmonious family atmosphere.
连句成篇
　　As can be seen from the vivid picture, a big family get together to have a splendid dinner. But at the table, the young are enthusiastic about playing with their electronic devices, regardless of the elders' obvious awkwardness and disappointment.
The picture implies that electronic devices have bad influence on our lives. Overuse of electronic devices widens the distance between teenagers and their elders. Worse still, young addicts have a tendency to show poor academic performance, adding to the elders' worry.
　　As far as I'm concerned, it is of great significance to restrict the time we spend on electronic devices and value precious face-to-face communication with our family members, which contributes to a harmonious family atmosphere.
写作积累
关于看图写作的增分佳句
1.开头:根据画面,予以描述
①This is an interesting but thought-provoking picture.这是一幅有趣但是引人深思的图画。
②From the picture we can see that...从图画上我们可以看到……
③As is vividly shown in the picture...正如画中生动显示的那样……
2.主体:分析现象,找出原因
①There are two main reasons. On the one hand...On the other hand...有两个主要原因。一方面……另一方面……
②There are three reasons for this phenomenon. To begin with...What's more...Last but not least...产生这个现象有三个原因。首先……其次……最后但同样重要的是……
3.结尾:总结问题,提出建议
①We ought to/should...我们应该……
②It is suggested/advised that...建议……
③Consequently/As a result...因此……
④In consequence/In brief/To sum up/In conclusion/To summarize/All in all...总之/简而言之/作为结论/总之/总的来说……
实战演练
请根据下面的图片写一篇短文,内容包括:
　　1.描述漫画内容及其寓意;
　　2.发表你的观点。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头语已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加内容,以使行文连贯。
　　As can be seen in the picture, the young tree is supported by a stick while growing.　 　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 5　EDUCATION
Part 6　Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
　　As can be seen in the picture, the young tree is supported by a stick while growing. However, once there is no support, the tree breaks off. In fact, it reflects a common phenomenon—many parents take care of their children too much.
In our daily life, some parents often take unnecessary action, which will contribute to an undesirable result in the long run. Children need not only support and care but also challenges of difficulties and experiences of hardships. Too much care is not beneficial to their growth and development.Consequently, it is suggested that parents should give children more space to deal with their own things independently as they grow up.
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