译林版选择性必修三Unit 2 Part 4 Writing写作点拔学案（含解析）
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Unit 2 Out of this world
Part 4 Writing
太空探索
写作题目
假如现在是2050年,你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观、举行聚会……总之,你们玩得很愉快。请根据以上内容,写一篇日记描述一下你的火星之旅。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.全体工作人员
2. n.宇宙
3. n.航天飞机
4. 为……打下基础
答案 1.crew 2.universe 3.shuttle 4.lay the foundation for...
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:点明主题
(1)Our school organized (一次很棒的火星之旅) today.
第二段:介绍在火星上的活动
(2)We (邀请了全体工作人员) to our party.
(3)The party (在航天飞机里举行).
(4)Their songs (棒极了).
(5)All of us (兴奋地尖叫起来).
第三段:个人感受
(6)We had a good time on Mars and (对宇宙有了更多的了解).
(7)It (为……奠定了基础) our following study.
答案 (1)a great trip to Mars (2)invited the crew (3)was held in the shuttle (4)were awesome (5)screamed with excitement
(6)learned more about the universe (7)laid the foundation for
2.句式升级
(8)把句(2)和句(3)合并为含有定语从句的句子
(9)把句(4)和句(5)合并为含有so...that...引导的结果状语从句的句子
(10)把句(6)和句(7)合并为含有定语从句的句子
答案
(8)We invited the crew to our party, which was held in the shuttle.
(9)Their songs were so awesome that all of us screamed with excitement.
(10)We had a good time on Mars and learned more about the universe, which laid the foundation for our following study.
连句成篇
May 2, 2050 MondaySunny
Our school organized a great trip to Mars today.
We went to Mars in a shuttle. On Mars we looked around, and found a lot of things different from those on our Earth. After that, we invited the crew to our party, which was held in the shuttle. They danced and sang together with us. Their songs were so awesome that all of us screamed with excitement.
We had a good time on Mars and learned more about the universe, which laid the foundation for our following study. The trip was very interesting and I hope to travel to Mars again soon.
写作积累
关于太空旅行的增分佳句
1.开头:点明主题
①The space travel is the dream of human beings.太空旅行是人类的梦想。
②Do you want to travel in outer space 你想在太空旅行吗
③How much do you know about space exploration 你对太空探索了解多少
④With my curiosity about your life and work in the space station, I am writing to enquire about your current situation.出于对你在空间站的生活和工作的好奇,我写信是想询问你目前的情况。
2.主体:介绍在太空的活动
①We succeeded in reaching the space station by spacecraft after a two-day journey.经过两天的旅程,我们乘宇宙飞船成功到达了空间站。
②The aliens on Mars were very kind and friendly.火星上的外星人非常善良和友好。
③The living environment of aliens was really comfortable, and it was much better than we had thought.外星人的生活环境非常舒适,比我们想象的要好得多。
3.结尾:个人感受
①It is plain to see that it was a wonderful journey.很明显,这是一次奇妙的旅行。
②The trip was very interesting and I am looking forward to traveling to space again.这次旅行非常有趣,我期待着再次去太空旅行。
实战演练
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,2021年12月9日你和同学一起观看了神舟十三号航天员太空授课,请你发送一封电子邮件给三位航天员,内容包括:
1.感谢航天员们的精彩授课;
2.观看太空授课后的收获和感想;
3.祝愿航天员们凯旋。
参考词汇:triumphant高奏凯歌的;大获全胜的
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear astronauts,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear astronauts,
I'm Li Hua from Xinhua High School. I'm writing to express my gratitude to you for your splendid science lecture inside the space station on December 9, 2021.
After watching the televised demonstrations, I have a better knowledge of space science. What's more, I'm more enthusiastic about our country's space exploration program. I'm so proud of our country's advances in science that I'm determined to devote myself to developing the space industry and make contributions to our motherland.
Wish you a triumphant return.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①express one's gratitude to...向……表达某人的感谢 ②enthusiastic adj.极感兴趣的;热情的 ③make contributions to为……做出贡献
2.亮点句型
①After watching the televised demonstrations, I have a better knowledge of space science.(“After...demonstrations”作时间状语)在观看了电视上的演示之后,我对太空科学有了更好的了解。
②I'm so proud of our country's advances in science that I'm determined to devote myself to developing the space industry and make contributions to our motherland.(so...that...引导结果状语从句)我为我们国家在科学方面的进步感到非常骄傲,所以我决心要投身于发展航天产业,为我们的祖国做出贡献。
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Part 4 Writing
太空探索
写作题目
假如现在是2050年,你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观、举行聚会……总之,你们玩得很愉快。请根据以上内容,写一篇日记描述一下你的火星之旅。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.全体工作人员
2. n.宇宙
3. n.航天飞机
4. 为……打下基础
答案 1.crew 2.universe 3.shuttle 4.lay the foundation for...
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:点明主题
(1)Our school organized (一次很棒的火星之旅) today.
第二段:介绍在火星上的活动
(2)We (邀请了全体工作人员) to our party.
(3)The party (在航天飞机里举行).
(4)Their songs (棒极了).
(5)All of us (兴奋地尖叫起来).
第三段:个人感受
(6)We had a good time on Mars and (对宇宙有了更多的了解).
(7)It (为……奠定了基础) our following study.
答案 (1)a great trip to Mars (2)invited the crew (3)was held in the shuttle (4)were awesome (5)screamed with excitement
(6)learned more about the universe (7)laid the foundation for
2.句式升级
(8)把句(2)和句(3)合并为含有定语从句的句子
(9)把句(4)和句(5)合并为含有so...that...引导的结果状语从句的句子
(10)把句(6)和句(7)合并为含有定语从句的句子
答案
(8)We invited the crew to our party, which was held in the shuttle.
(9)Their songs were so awesome that all of us screamed with excitement.
(10)We had a good time on Mars and learned more about the universe, which laid the foundation for our following study.
连句成篇
May 2, 2050 MondaySunny
Our school organized a great trip to Mars today.
We went to Mars in a shuttle. On Mars we looked around, and found a lot of things different from those on our Earth. After that, we invited the crew to our party, which was held in the shuttle. They danced and sang together with us. Their songs were so awesome that all of us screamed with excitement.
We had a good time on Mars and learned more about the universe, which laid the foundation for our following study. The trip was very interesting and I hope to travel to Mars again soon.
写作积累
关于太空旅行的增分佳句
1.开头:点明主题
①The space travel is the dream of human beings.太空旅行是人类的梦想。
②Do you want to travel in outer space 你想在太空旅行吗
③How much do you know about space exploration 你对太空探索了解多少
④With my curiosity about your life and work in the space station, I am writing to enquire about your current situation.出于对你在空间站的生活和工作的好奇,我写信是想询问你目前的情况。
2.主体:介绍在太空的活动
①We succeeded in reaching the space station by spacecraft after a two-day journey.经过两天的旅程,我们乘宇宙飞船成功到达了空间站。
②The aliens on Mars were very kind and friendly.火星上的外星人非常善良和友好。
③The living environment of aliens was really comfortable, and it was much better than we had thought.外星人的生活环境非常舒适,比我们想象的要好得多。
3.结尾:个人感受
①It is plain to see that it was a wonderful journey.很明显,这是一次奇妙的旅行。
②The trip was very interesting and I am looking forward to traveling to space again.这次旅行非常有趣,我期待着再次去太空旅行。
实战演练
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,2021年12月9日你和同学一起观看了神舟十三号航天员太空授课,请你发送一封电子邮件给三位航天员,内容包括:
1.感谢航天员们的精彩授课;
2.观看太空授课后的收获和感想;
3.祝愿航天员们凯旋。
参考词汇:triumphant高奏凯歌的;大获全胜的
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear astronauts,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear astronauts,
I'm Li Hua from Xinhua High School. I'm writing to express my gratitude to you for your splendid science lecture inside the space station on December 9, 2021.
After watching the televised demonstrations, I have a better knowledge of space science. What's more, I'm more enthusiastic about our country's space exploration program. I'm so proud of our country's advances in science that I'm determined to devote myself to developing the space industry and make contributions to our motherland.
Wish you a triumphant return.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①express one's gratitude to...向……表达某人的感谢 ②enthusiastic adj.极感兴趣的;热情的 ③make contributions to为……做出贡献
2.亮点句型
①After watching the televised demonstrations, I have a better knowledge of space science.(“After...demonstrations”作时间状语)在观看了电视上的演示之后,我对太空科学有了更好的了解。
②I'm so proud of our country's advances in science that I'm determined to devote myself to developing the space industry and make contributions to our motherland.(so...that...引导结果状语从句)我为我们国家在科学方面的进步感到非常骄傲,所以我决心要投身于发展航天产业,为我们的祖国做出贡献。
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