(共45张PPT)
Section Ⅵ
Writing
NO 1
(写作项目——Writing a job advertisement)
NO 2
课时跟踪检测
目 录
(写作项目——Writing a job advertisement)
本单元的写作任务是写一则招聘启事。招聘启事是用人单位公开招聘有关人员时使用的一种应用文书，其内容应包括完善的职位说明以及对招聘人员的具体要求，最后还应给出明确的应聘方式。
一、学写作范式
由课文学写作要点
二、学逻辑组材
本文主体部分采用了分条列举法，条目清晰地介绍了涵盖岗位职责与应聘条件等的繁杂内容；各要点在呈现时根据其重要程度采用了不同的表达方式，要点与要点之间的安排详略得当；对于需要特别提醒的内容，文中以蓝体字做了标识，突出、醒目。
三、学靓丽表达
1．本文运用了大量的名词短语、动名词短语，同时搭配以短句、祈使句，使得语言简洁有力、表达精准高效。
2．在表述对应聘者的要求时，本文使用了“All applications welcome, but preference will be given to those with diving qualifications.”语气委婉，不失礼貌，且but一词以及第二分句中被动语态的使用很好地强调了对应聘资格的要求。另外，本句中those后面运用了with介词短语来作进一步的解释说明，简化了句式表达，符合本文整体上的精简用词风格。
①Priority and _____________________________ experienced in other similar activities.
将优先考虑那些有过其他类似活动经验的人。
②She is a doctor ___________________________.
她是一位具有强烈使命感的医生。
仿写训练/完成句子
preference will be given to those
with a strong sense of mission
一、背写作词汇
1．participant n． 参与者；参加者
2．participate in 参与；参加
3．ability n. 能力
4．certificate n. 证明；证书
5．work as ... 担任……工作
重积累丰富文笔
6．warm-hearted and patient 热心且有耐心的
7．communicate with 与……交流
8．be in good health 身体健康的
9．have a good command of 精通
10．meet the following requirements 满足以下要求
二、背写作佳句
[常用开头句]
1．Our university is looking for a ....
我们大学正在招聘一名……
2．Our school newspaper is in great need of ...
我们校报急需……
3．An experienced ...is wanted in our company.
我们公司需要一名有经验的……
4．Our school has an exciting opportunity for ...to do ...
我们学校有一个令人兴奋的机会让……做……
5．A computer company wants two English translators who can meet the following requirements.
一家电脑公司需要能满足以下要求的两名英语翻译。
[常用主体句]
1．It's necessary for ...to be good at ...
对……来说，擅长……是必要的。
2．We offer free accommodation and a seven-day paid leave.
我们提供免费住宿和一周的带薪休假。
3．If you want to apply for the job, you must meet the following requirements.
如果你想申请这份工作，你必须满足以下要求。
4．Preference will be given to ...
将优先考虑……
5．Candidates must have strong ...skills.
应聘者必须有很强的……技能。
[常用结尾句]
1．You are welcome to call 8101688 at any time, except at night.
欢迎您随时致电8101688，晚上除外。
2．Please contact Albert Lee for application or for more information.
请联系Albert Lee进行申请或获取更多信息。
3．Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with the Students' Union this week.
对这份工作感兴趣的人，请在本周与学生会联系。
4．Whoever is interested in the job and meets the requirements please contacts us by email.
对这个工作感兴趣并且符合要求的，请通过邮件联系我们。
Ⅰ.基础写作(根据汉语提示补全作文)
English Study Advisor Wanted
The Students' Union of our school ①______________________
____________________________________________________________
(决定下学期邀请一位国际学生担任英语学习顾问)．
多练笔成就美文
decides to invite an
international student to work as an English study advisor next term
The main responsibilities of the advisor ②________________________
_________________________ (包括帮助学生练习英语口语), answering their questions, and helping to organize activities, such as singing English songs, English evenings, and English lectures on interesting topics.
include helping students to
practice their oral English
③_____________________________________________ (申请人的母语应为英语)．Fluency in Chinese is preferred.④_______________
________________________________ (顾问预计每周工作4小时)．
⑤___________ (如果感兴趣), please call Li Hua at 130-1122-3344 for an interview.Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.
The Students' Union
The applicant should be a native speaker of English
The advisor is
expected to work 4 hours per week
If interested
Ⅱ.片段续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a lovely spring morning in the mountains of my home.Here was full of natural atmosphere.The sky was blue, the sun was warm, and the air was fresh.
As driving along the winding road, I could see thousands of wild flowers in bloom.When I turned round, I slowed down as I saw some volunteers picking up garbage along the side of the road.I just smiled as I saw them doing some cleaning in spring for Mother Earth and my mind suddenly floated back in time to another spring morning long ago.
When my children were younger, I used to walk along a small route around the lake near my home.It was also on a spring morning that I noticed much garbage lying along the route.The next day, I brought a big garbage bag and started to slowly pick up the garbage along my way.All kinds of deserted objects lay all over the floor.There were pop cans, plastic water bottles, wrappers for candy bars, empty chip bags, pieces of broken fishing line and even an old shoe.Every time I stopped, I picked up a piece of garbage.And I even fished some garbage out of the edge of the water.By the time I circled the lake, the garbage bag had been nearly full.
Tired but happy, I put the bag in an empty garbage can.I stopped before I headed home and took one last look at the lake as the sun set.It looked more beautiful than ever and I felt like the angels were looking down upon it with me and sharing my smiles.
I always think that at times this world's problems can seem overwhelming and you may wonder what you can do to make a difference.But the truth is that every good thing you do matters a lot! I do believe every time I stop to pick up a single piece of garbage, I can make a difference.As my children are adults now, I decide to spend more time protecting the environment.
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，着重描写作者采取的具体行动及取得的成效。
参考范文：
I begin to encourage others to develop the environmental awareness. I know that there is power in numbers, and I want to get as many people involved as possible.I've convinced my children to take action with me like I did before.We learn to make many cards to hand out to people, with some words about environment protection written on them.We've also set up signs around the lake to remind people to pay attention to the environment.
Other members of my family also go to the lake to pick up garbage on weekends.Many days have passed, and the surroundings have improved a lot. I am pleased to note that more people actively volunteer to pick up the garbage. This gives us more confidence to protect our nearby environment.
Ⅰ.阅读七选五
As adolescents, having a great impact on the world may seem like an impossible task.Changing the world does not only mean finding a cure for cancer, or finding the origin of human beings, but also recycling some things as well. 1 .
No.2 课时跟踪检测
Recycle
According to a report, 63 million newspapers go out to customers every day and of those 44 million are thrown away. 2 .
The age of technology constantly creates new phones, or new computers.Many people will stand in line for hours to get their hands on the new technology, but about 75% of the old devices sit in the back of a drawer collecting dust.By taking them to the local stores that collect them, they go to people in need.
3
Here are some astonishing facts on going vegetarian (素食的) for only one day.The Environmental Defense concludes that if the entire population omitted (省去) one meal of chicken, the amount of carbon dioxide reduced would be the same amount as more than half a million cars are taken off the US roads.
Ditch (丢弃) bottled water
Most people drink bottled water because of the common conception that bottled water is healthier than regular tap water. 4 . All that is done extra is water going through a filter (过滤器)．Companies do not need to list where they get the water from, how they purify the water, or what chemicals their plastic water bottles contain. 5 . It results in 1.5 million tons of plastic in landfill.
Keep in mind what Margaret Mead once said, “Never doubt that a small group of thoughtful and committed citizens can change the world; indeed, it's the only thing that ever has.”
A．Let's take action right now
B．Go vegetarian one day a week
C．Learn some astonishing facts
D．As a result, 90% of the plastic bottles do not get recycled
E．Actually, 25% of bottled water comes from regular tap water
F．Recycling the newspapers alone we could save half a million trees a week
G．What follows are three simple ways adolescents can go green and change the world
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了三个环保小贴士，并鼓励人们保护环境可以从身边的小事做起。
1．选G 上文讲到做一些回收也会影响我们所生活的世界，下文提到了三个有益于环保的做法，故G项承上启下，符合语境。
2．选F 根据此段小标题Recycle和空前一句可知，此段在谈论回收废报纸的好处，故选F。
3．选B 本段主要讲素食对环保的影响，故B项“每周吃一天素食”能概括本段内容。
4．选E 根据上下文语境可知，人们喝瓶装水是因为认为它比自来水更健康，但实际上，25%的瓶装水来自自来水，只是多了一个过滤的程序而已，故选E。
5．选D 根据空后一句可知，垃圾填埋池有这么多的废弃塑料是因为很多塑料瓶没有被回收，故选D。
Ⅱ.应用文写作
近几年，人们越来越喜欢走近大自然，去远足、踏青、野餐等，但这些活动也给自然环境带来了许多问题。假定你是李华，请你就此事用英文写一份倡议书，倡导保护自然。主要内容包括：
1．人类带给大自然的伤害；2．你的倡议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear citizens，
Nowadays, nature is constantly harmed by people, which in turn affects the life of the mankind.
Take picnicking for example, fires caused by it have caused great damage to the wildlife and the forest.The rubbish left after the picnic also has negative impacts on the environment.
In order to cope with these problems and protect the ecosystem, we appeal to everyone's participation in fighting against unfriendly behavior: when getting close to nature, choose areas where tourists are allowed to get in; when having a picnic, never make a fire near a forest; when leaving the spots, place all the waste you have produced in the dustbins. Any of the above can make a difference to the environment.
Let's work together and start now! Your action counts.
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
To mark their hard work and contribution to wildlife protection in the reserve, last year, Shi's 20-member team was recognized with a special award at an online award ceremony for the IUCN World Commission on Protected Areas' International Ranger Awards.
Kathy MacKinnon, head of the commission, speaks highly of their work, saying that they are “critical to our global conservation efforts, helping to stem (遏止) biodiversity loss and protect the important ecosystems that serve as natural solutions to climate change and other global challenges”．
Shi realizes that through protecting endangered animals, like giant pandas and snow leopards, the rich biodiversity of the environment can also be maintained, which is a win-win situation.
After graduation from Sichuan Forestry School(now Sichuan Agricultural University) in 1992, Shi became a forest guardian at the Wolong National Nature Reserve.
Established in 1963, Wolong is the country's earliest panda reserve.It experienced serious human-animal conflict, such as illegal logging and hunting before the 1990s.In 1978, an observation tent, claimed to be the country's first field camp to study wild giant pandas, was built on a steep forested slope in the reserve.
In the early 1980s, the government cooperated with a conservation organization to establish the China Conservation and Research Center for the Giant Panda to save the endangered animal.
At the very beginning, it was really difficult for rangers.With no proper outdoor equipment, like protective jackets or sleeping bags, every time, going around the area could be a life-threatening adventure. Plastic woven bags were commonly used for warmth and as makeshift tents for emergency cases.For Shi, the real challenges are natural disasters, which cannot be predicted.
参考范文：
He has a vivid memory of a snowslide in June 2017 during a routine inspection.“We were about to climb over a 400-meter-long mountain pass, about 5,500 meters in altitude, which was the most dangerous place for us with snow depth on the ground reaching up to two meters and the wind blowing heavily，” Shi says.Suddenly Shi heard thundering sounds and a mass of snow came rolling down the mountain.Quickly throwing himself at the rock and grabbing onto it, Shi survived but was injured.
There is a lot of hard work involved in protecting wildlife, but there are also some surprises from the job. Shi has a soft spot for giant pandas.Although he has patrolled the reserve for three decades, he has only met the pandas twice. In order to record videos of the wild giant pandas in the reserve, they searched for them for several days in the forest, but didn't spot one.When they were about to give up, there was a sound from the bamboo forest behind, and they turned around and saw a fat panda about six meters away, hiding in the woods. It ran quickly. It was funny to see a group of people chasing the panda in the wild.The scene is just like hide-and-seek which will never be forgotten.Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Writing a job advertisement
本单元的写作任务是写一则招聘启事。招聘启事是用人单位公开招聘有关人员时使用的一种应用文书，其内容应包括完善的职位说明以及对招聘人员的具体要求，最后还应给出明确的应聘方式。
由课文学写作要点
一、学写作范式
二、学逻辑组材
本文主体部分采用了分条列举法，条目清晰地介绍了涵盖岗位职责与应聘条件等的繁杂内容；各要点在呈现时根据其重要程度采用了不同的表达方式，要点与要点之间的安排详略得当；对于需要特别提醒的内容，文中以黑体字做了标识，突出、醒目。
三、学靓丽表达
1．本文运用了大量的名词短语、动名词短语，同时搭配以短句、祈使句，使得语言简洁有力、表达精准高效。
2．在表述对应聘者的要求时，本文使用了“All applications welcome, but preference will be given to those with diving qualifications.”语气委婉，不失礼貌，且but一词以及第二分句中被动语态的使用很好地强调了对应聘资格的要求。另外，本句中those后面运用了with介词短语来作进一步的解释说明，简化了句式表达，符合本文整体上的精简用词风格。
①Priority and ________________________ experienced in other similar activities.
将优先考虑那些有过其他类似活动经验的人。
②She is a doctor __________________________.
她是一位具有强烈使命感的医生。
重积累丰富文笔
一、背写作词汇
1．participant n． 参与者；参加者
2．participate in 参与；参加
3．ability n. 能力
4．certificate n. 证明；证书
5．work as ... 担任……工作
6．warm hearted and patient 热心且有耐心的
7．communicate with 与……交流
8．be in good health 身体健康的
9．have a good command of 精通
10．meet the following requirements 满足以下要求
二、背写作佳句
[常用开头句]
1．Our university is looking for a ....
我们大学正在招聘一名……
2．Our school newspaper is in great need of ...
我们校报急需……
3．An experienced ...is wanted in our company.
我们公司需要一名有经验的……
4．Our school has an exciting opportunity for ...to do ...
我们学校有一个令人兴奋的机会让……做……
5．A computer company wants two English translators who can meet the following requirements.一家电脑公司需要能满足以下要求的两名英语翻译。
[常用主体句]
1．It's necessary for ...to be good at ...
对……来说，擅长……是必要的。
2．We offer free accommodation and a seven day paid leave.
我们提供免费住宿和一周的带薪休假。
3．If you want to apply for the job, you must meet the following requirements.
如果你想申请这份工作，你必须满足以下要求。
4．Preference will be given to ...
将优先考虑……
5．Candidates must have strong ...skills.
应聘者必须有很强的……技能。
[常用结尾句]
1．You are welcome to call 8101688 at any time, except at night.
欢迎您随时致电8101688，晚上除外。
2．Please contact Albert Lee for application or for more information.
请联系Albert Lee进行申请或获取更多信息。
3．Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with the Students' Union this week.对这份工作感兴趣的人，请在本周与学生会联系。
4．Whoever is interested in the job and meets the requirements please contacts us by email.对这个工作感兴趣并且符合要求的，请通过邮件联系我们。
多练笔成就美文
Ⅰ.基础写作(根据汉语提示补全作文)
English Study Advisor Wanted
The Students' Union of our school ①_________________________________________________ (决定下学期邀请一位国际学生担任英语学习顾问)．The main responsibilities of the advisor ②________________________________________ (包括帮助学生练习英语口语), answering their questions, and helping to organize activities, such as singing English songs, English evenings, and English lectures on interesting topics.
③________________________________________ (申请人的母语应为英语)．Fluency in Chinese is preferred.④________________________________________________ (顾问预计每周工作4小时)．
⑤____________________ (如果感兴趣), please call Li Hua at 130 1122 3344 for an interview.Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.
The Students' Union
Ⅱ.片段续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a lovely spring morning in the mountains of my home.Here was full of natural atmosphere.The sky was blue, the sun was warm, and the air was fresh.As driving along the winding road, I could see thousands of wild flowers in bloom.When I turned round, I slowed down as I saw some volunteers picking up garbage along the side of the road.I just smiled as I saw them doing some cleaning in spring for Mother Earth and my mind suddenly floated back in time to another spring morning long ago.
When my children were younger, I used to walk along a small route around the lake near my home.It was also on a spring morning that I noticed much garbage lying along the route.The next day, I brought a big garbage bag and started to slowly pick up the garbage along my way.All kinds of deserted objects lay all over the floor.There were pop cans, plastic water bottles, wrappers for candy bars, empty chip bags, pieces of broken fishing line and even an old shoe.Every time I stopped, I picked up a piece of garbage.And I even fished some garbage out of the edge of the water.By the time I circled the lake, the garbage bag had been nearly full.
Tired but happy, I put the bag in an empty garbage can.I stopped before I headed home and took one last look at the lake as the sun set.It looked more beautiful than ever and I felt like the angels were looking down upon it with me and sharing my smiles.
I always think that at times this world's problems can seem overwhelming and you may wonder what you can do to make a difference.But the truth is that every good thing you do matters a lot! I do believe every time I stop to pick up a single piece of garbage, I can make a difference.As my children are adults now, I decide to spend more time protecting the environment.
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.要求逻辑通顺，情节合理，着重描写作者采取的具体行动及取得的成效。
I begin to encourage others to develop the environmental awareness.
Section Ⅵ
由课文学写作要点
三、①preference will be given to those
②with a strong sense of mission
多练笔成就美文
Ⅰ.①decides to invite an international student to work as an English study advisor next term ②include helping students to practice their oral English ③The applicant should be a native speaker of English ④The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week ⑤If interested
Ⅱ.参考范文：
I begin to encourage others to develop the environmental awareness. I know that there is power in numbers, and I want to get as many people involved as possible.I've convinced my children to take action with me like I did before.We learn to make many cards to hand out to people, with some words about environment protection written on them.We've also set up signs around the lake to remind people to pay attention to the environment.Other members of my family also go to the lake to pick up garbage on weekends.Many days have passed, and the surroundings have improved a lot. I am pleased to note that more people actively volunteer to pick up the garbage. This gives us more confidence to protect our nearby environment.UNIT 6 课时检测(六) Writing
Ⅰ.阅读七选五
As adolescents, having a great impact on the world may seem like an impossible task.Changing the world does not only mean finding a cure for cancer, or finding the origin of human beings, but also recycling some things as well.__1__.
Recycle
According to a report, 63 million newspapers go out to customers every day and of those 44 million are thrown away.__2__.
The age of technology constantly creates new phones, or new computers.Many people will stand in line for hours to get their hands on the new technology, but about 75% of the old devices sit in the back of a drawer collecting dust.By taking them to the local stores that collect them, they go to people in need.
__3__
Here are some astonishing facts on going vegetarian (素食的) for only one day.The Environmental Defense concludes that if the entire population omitted (省去) one meal of chicken, the amount of carbon dioxide reduced would be the same amount as more than half a million cars are taken off the US roads.
Ditch (丢弃) bottled water
Most people drink bottled water because of the common conception that bottled water is healthier than regular tap water.__4__. All that is done extra is water going through a filter (过滤器)．Companies do not need to list where they get the water from, how they purify the water, or what chemicals their plastic water bottles contain.__5__. It results in 1.5 million tons of plastic in landfill.
Keep in mind what Margaret Mead once said, “Never doubt that a small group of thoughtful and committed citizens can change the world; indeed, it's the only thing that ever has.”
A．Let's take action right now
B．Go vegetarian one day a week
C．Learn some astonishing facts
D．As a result, 90% of the plastic bottles do not get recycled
E．Actually, 25% of bottled water comes from regular tap water
F．Recycling the newspapers alone we could save half a million trees a week
G．What follows are three simple ways adolescents can go green and change the world
Ⅱ.应用文写作
近几年，人们越来越喜欢走近大自然，去远足、踏青、野餐等，但这些活动也给自然环境带来了许多问题。假定你是李华，请你就此事用英文写一份倡议书，倡导保护自然。主要内容包括：
1．人类带给大自然的伤害；
2．你的倡议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
To mark their hard work and contribution to wildlife protection in the reserve, last year, Shi's 20 member team was recognized with a special award at an online award ceremony for the IUCN World Commission on Protected Areas' International Ranger Awards.
Kathy MacKinnon, head of the commission, speaks highly of their work, saying that they are “critical to our global conservation efforts, helping to stem (遏止) biodiversity loss and protect the important ecosystems that serve as natural solutions to climate change and other global challenges”．
Shi realizes that through protecting endangered animals, like giant pandas and snow leopards, the rich biodiversity of the environment can also be maintained, which is a win win situation.
After graduation from Sichuan Forestry School(now Sichuan Agricultural University) in 1992, Shi became a forest guardian at the Wolong National Nature Reserve.
Established in 1963, Wolong is the country's earliest panda reserve.It experienced serious human animal conflict, such as illegal logging and hunting before the 1990s.In 1978, an observation tent, claimed to be the country's first field camp to study wild giant pandas, was built on a steep forested slope in the reserve.
In the early 1980s, the government cooperated with a conservation organization to establish the China Conservation and Research Center for the Giant Panda to save the endangered animal.
At the very beginning, it was really difficult for rangers.With no proper outdoor equipment, like protective jackets or sleeping bags, every time, going around the area could be a life threatening adventure. Plastic woven bags were commonly used for warmth and as makeshift tents for emergency cases.For Shi, the real challenges are natural disasters, which cannot be predicted.
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He has a vivid memory of a snowslide in June 2017 during a routine inspection. “We were about to climb over a 400 meter long mountain pass，
There is a lot of hard work involved in protecting wildlife, but there are also some surprises from the job.
UNIT 6 课时检测(六)
Ⅰ.阅读七选五
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了三个环保小贴士，并鼓励人们保护环境可以从身边的小事做起。
1．选G 上文讲到做一些回收也会影响我们所生活的世界，下文提到了三个有益于环保的做法，故G项承上启下，符合语境。
2．选F 根据此段小标题Recycle和空前一句可知，此段在谈论回收废报纸的好处，故选F。
3．选B 本段主要讲素食对环保的影响，故B项“每周吃一天素食”能概括本段内容。
4．选E 根据上下文语境可知，人们喝瓶装水是因为认为它比自来水更健康，但实际上，25%的瓶装水来自自来水，只是多了一个过滤的程序而已，故选E。
5．选D 根据空后一句可知，垃圾填埋池有这么多的废弃塑料是因为很多塑料瓶没有被回收，故选D。
Ⅱ.应用文写作(参考范文)
Dear citizens，
Nowadays, nature is constantly harmed by people, which in turn affects the life of the mankind.
Take picnicking for example, fires caused by it have caused great damage to the wildlife and the forest.The rubbish left after the picnic also has negative impacts on the environment.In order to cope with these problems and protect the ecosystem, we appeal to everyone's participation in fighting against unfriendly behavior: when getting close to nature, choose areas where tourists are allowed to get in; when having a picnic, never make a fire near a forest; when leaving the spots, place all the waste you have produced in the dustbins. Any of the above can make a difference to the environment.
Let's work together and start now! Your action counts.
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅲ.读后续写(参考范文)
He has a vivid memory of a snowslide in June 2017 during a routine inspection.“We were about to climb over a 400 meter long mountain pass, about 5,500 meters in altitude, which was the most dangerous place for us with snow depth on the ground reaching up to two meters and the wind blowing heavily，” Shi says.Suddenly Shi heard thundering sounds and a mass of snow came rolling down the mountain.Quickly throwing himself at the rock and grabbing onto it, Shi survived but was injured.
There is a lot of hard work involved in protecting wildlife, but there are also some surprises from the job. Shi has a soft spot for giant pandas.Although he has patrolled the reserve for three decades, he has only met the pandas twice. In order to record videos of the wild giant pandas in the reserve, they searched for them for several days in the forest, but didn't spot one.When they were about to give up, there was a sound from the bamboo forest behind, and they turned around and saw a fat panda about six meters away, hiding in the woods. It ran quickly. It was funny to see a group of people chasing the panda in the wild.The scene is just like hide and seek which will never be forgotten.
