Section Ⅵ Writing
写作项目——Write a letter of advice
本课时的写作任务是写一封建议信。该写作项目旨在训练学生把解决问题的能力落实到书面表达上。通过提出合理建议,让学生体会到互相沟通、真诚相助的重要性并对照反思自己的行为,解决现实生活中出现的问题。
由课文学写作
一、学格式明确
本篇课文是一封比较正式的书信,包括日期、称呼、正文、结尾和签名。其正文结构如下:
二、学语言鲜明
本篇文章是解决青少年网瘾的一封建议信,其语言特征十分鲜明:文章中使用了表示“建议”的词汇与句式,如“recommend, should, why not”等;也使用了与网瘾有关的一些话题词汇,如“chat, online, be attracted to, computers, games, the online world, the Internet”等。
①I strongly ____________________________ what we can to save our planet.
我强烈建议我们都尽我们所能来拯救我们的地球。
②_____________________________ the time that you ________________________.
对你来说,限制你玩电脑游戏的时间是很重要的。
三、学亮点表达
1.亮点词汇
本文第一段中使用了quite well这一副词短语,表达了写信人切实了解了对方的真实感受。 anxious 和terrible突出表现了对方关心与担忧的心情,让读者感同身受。
针对练笔/完成句子
I _________________________and can talk with foreigners fluently.
我的英语很好,能和外国人流利地交谈。
2.亮点句式
(1)第一段中“You wrote that ...; I understand quite well that ...; You think that ...”连用三个宾语从句,这样使句子之间结构有序,文章层次清晰。这三个从句的使用不仅陈述了对方的问题,表达了作者的关心之情,而且为后面提出建议作好了铺垫。
You wrote ________________________ the coming exam. I understand quite well __________________ now. I think ____________________ yourself and be confident.
你写信说你担心即将到来的考试。我十分理解你现在的感受。我认为你应当相信自己,并且要自信。
(2)第二段中运用it作形式主语,不定式短语作真正的主语(It is not unusual ... to be attracted ...);动名词短语作主语(spending too much time online ...);it作形式宾语,不定式短语作真正的宾语(makes it very difficult to focus on ...);why not+动词原形(Why not discuss ...)等高级句式,使表达灵活多变,韵味十足。作者在理解对方苦恼的同时,一针见血地指出花太长时间上网的危害,紧接着提出建议,循序渐进,容易被对方接受。
①积极参加课外活动对你是有益的(beneficial)。(it作形式主语)
____________________________________ after class activities actively.
②我发现做好这项工作不容易。(it作形式宾语)
________________________ the job well.
③早晨大声朗读英语会给你带来许多好处。(动名词短语作主语)
________________________ in the morning will do you a lot of good.
写作技法指导
一、写作范式
建议信要求我们就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。其基本框架为:
二、详略得当
详略得当是指在写作时,对某些部分写得简略,而对另一些部分写得详细。建议信开头部分和结尾部分不是建议信的重点,因此可以略写。建议信的中间部分,也就是给对方提出具体可行的合理化建议,是写作的重点,需要详写。
三、注意事项
1.开门见山,直入主题。在建议信正文的开头找准话题的切入点,如表达对对方困境的理解或安慰对方, 自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。提出建议时要充分了解情况,有的放矢,以使建议更有针对性。
2.给出希望对方采取或者终止某种行为的理由。在陈述理由的过程中要换位思考,尽量为对方考虑。要用事实说话,以增强说服力。
3.语气要和缓。要让对方容易接纳你的想法或者建议, 以理服人是关键,不能把自己的想法强加于人。
4.给出合理建议。提出建议时,要从实际出发,要合情合理,通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向, 从而达到写信的最终目的。
四、注重培养创造性思维能力——让建议更中肯
建议信不仅可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的建议,也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进服务等提出建议或忠告。无论是哪种情况,都考查了创造性思维能力。在日常生活和学习中,学生应独立思考并保持应有的好奇心,激发想象力,提高发现和解决问题的能力。
高中生John被自己的成绩压得喘不过气来。他发现自己经常将自己的表现与同龄人进行比较,导致了不足和失败的感觉。
你的建议:
写作素材储备
一、建议信常用佳句
1.明快热情开头句
①I'm sorry to hear that your friend Chen Lei is addicted to computer games. Now I'd like to give you some advice on how to deal with it.
听说你的朋友陈雷沉迷于电脑游戏,我很难过。现在我想给你一些关于如何处理它的建议。
②From your letter, I know you have difficulty making new friends in high school. My suggestions are as follows.
从你的信中,我知道你在高中很难交到新朋友。我的建议如下。
2.丰富委婉中间句
①First of all, I suggest you reading English words, sentences and short articles aloud every morning.
首先,我建议你每天早上大声朗读英语单词、句子和短文。
②To start with, it is important to tell him that spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on his studies.
首先,重要的是要告诉他,花太多的时间在网上是不健康的,也使他很难集中精力学习。
③In addition, you may as well encourage your friend to try new hobbies like playing the guitar or playing basketball.
此外,你也可以鼓励你的朋友尝试新的爱好,比如弹吉他或打篮球。
④Last but no least, why not take part in some outdoor activities together
最后但同样重要的是,为什么不一起参加一些户外活动呢?
3.简洁真诚结尾句
①I firmly believe you will make rapid progress.
我坚信你会进步很快的。
②I hope my advice will be of benefit to you. May you get rid of your trouble soon.
我希望我的建议对你有帮助。祝你早日摆脱烦恼。
二、“建议”类俗语警句积累
1.Better late than never. 迟做总比不做好。
2.Strike while the iron is hot. 趁热打铁。
3.Constant dropping wears the stone.滴水穿石。
4.God helps those who helps themselves.
天助自助者。
5.Knowledge makes humble, while ignorance makes proud.
博学使人谦逊,无知使人骄傲。
三、主题写作素材
1.网瘾
play the Internet games 玩网络游戏
stay up late 熬夜
be addicted to 对……上瘾
go from bad to worse 每况愈下
spend much time on 花太多时间在……上
do great harm to 对……伤害大
a convenient tool 一个便利工具
worse still/what's worse 更糟糕的是
get rid of the bad habit 去掉坏毛病
do some physical exercise 做锻炼
both mentally and physically 身心上
2.学习困难
have difficulty in 在……方面有困难
have pressure in face of 面对……有压力
read a variety of books 博览群书
hold on to your dream 坚持梦想
search it on the Internet 在互联网上搜索它
make rapid progress 取得快速进步
practice makes perfect 熟能生巧
have a positive attitude to study 学习态度积极
make good plans for 为……做好计划
turn to sb. 向某人求助
[随堂针对练笔]
假定你是李华,你的好友于潇前不久和父母一起去了英国,最近写信告诉你她很不适应那里的校园生活,感到很难过。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封建议信。
1.学好英语,从而有更多和别人交流的机会;
2.多交一些朋友,乐于助人;
3.积极参加各种社团活动。
根据提示完成书信,选择恰当的句子并认真抄写在文中空白处。
Dear Yu Xiao,
Thank you for writing to me. I'm sorry to hear that ①__________________ in England. I'm glad to ②________________.
Firstly, ③________________________ work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, you should make friends with your classmates, which can help you ④______________________. Thirdly, you can ⑤________________. It can help you ⑥______________, and make your life more interesting. By doing so, you will be happier with the new life soon.
I hope ⑦__________________________, and I'm looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
A.join in all kinds of activities
B.it is very important for you to
C.give you some advice on how to face this situation
D.you are having trouble getting used to your new school life
E.get along well with each other
F.forget your loneliness
G.my advice will be useful to you
Section Ⅵ
由课文学写作
二、①recommend that we all do
②It's very important for you to limit; play computer games
三、1.do quite well in English
2.(1)that you are worried about; how you are feeling; that you should believe in
(2)①It is beneficial for you to take part in
②I found it difficult to do ③Reading English aloud
写作技法指导
I think you should set realistic goals and celebrate small achievements. You'd better know that it is important to focus on the journey rather than the destination. Why not seek support from others, such as your teachers, your parents, or the school adviser. I am sure it will help, since it happens to everyone when teenagers often face the pressure of study.
随堂针对练笔
①~⑦ DCBEAFG(共56张PPT)
Section Ⅵ
Writing
目 录
写作项目——Write a letter of advice
课时跟踪检测
写作项目——Write a letter of advice
本课时的写作任务是写一封建议信。该写作项目旨在训练学生把解决问题的能力落实到书面表达上。通过提出合理建议,让学生体会到互相沟通、真诚相助的重要性并对照反思自己的行为,解决现实生活中出现的问题。
由课文学写作
一、学格式明确
本篇课文是一封比较正式的书信,包括日期、称呼、正文、结尾和签名。其正文结构如下:
二、学语言鲜明
本篇文章是解决青少年网瘾的一封建议信,其语言特征十分鲜明:文章中使用了表示“建议”的词汇与句式,如“recommend, should, why not”等;也使用了与网瘾有关的一些话题词汇,如“chat, online, be attracted to, computers, games, the online world, the Internet”等。
①I strongly ________________________ what we can to save our planet.
我强烈建议我们都尽我们所能来拯救我们的地球。
②_________________________________ the time that you ____________________.
对你来说,限制你玩电脑游戏的时间是很重要的。
针对练笔/完成句子
recommend that we all do
It's very important for you to limit
play computer games
三、学亮点表达
1.亮点词汇
本文第一段中使用了quite well这一副词短语,表达了写信人切实了解了对方的真实感受。 anxious 和terrible突出表现了对方关心与担忧的心情,让读者感同身受。
I ______________________ and can talk with foreigners fluently.
我的英语很好,能和外国人流利地交谈。
针对练笔/完成句子
do quite well in English
2.亮点句式
(1)第一段中“You wrote that ...; I understand quite well that ...; You think that ...”连用三个宾语从句,这样使句子之间结构有序,文章层次清晰。这三个从句的使用不仅陈述了对方的问题,表达了作者的关心之情,而且为后面提出建议作好了铺垫。
You wrote __________________________ the coming exam. I understand quite well ___________________ now. I think __________
________________ yourself and be confident.
你写信说你担心即将到来的考试。我十分理解你现在的感受。我认为你应当相信自己,并且要自信。
针对练笔/完成语段
that you are worried about
how you are feeling
that you
should believe in
(2)第二段中运用it作形式主语,不定式短语作真正的主语(It is not unusual ... to be attracted ...);动名词短语作主语(spending too much time online ...);it作形式宾语,不定式短语作真正的宾语(makes it very difficult to focus on ...);why not+动词原形(Why not discuss ...)等高级句式,使表达灵活多变,韵味十足。作者在理解对方苦恼的同时,一针见血地指出花太长时间上网的危害,紧接着提出建议,循序渐进,容易被对方接受。
①积极参加课外活动对你是有益的(beneficial)。(it作形式主语)
_________________________________ after-class activities actively.
②我发现做好这项工作不容易。(it作形式宾语)
______________________ the job well.
③早晨大声朗读英语会给你带来许多好处。(动名词短语作主语)
_____________________ in the morning will do you a lot of good.
针对练笔/完成句子
It is beneficial for you to take part in
I found it difficult to do
Reading English aloud
写作技法指导
一、写作范式
建议信要求我们就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。其基本框架为:
二、详略得当
详略得当是指在写作时,对某些部分写得简略,而对另一些部分写得详细。建议信开头部分和结尾部分不是建议信的重点,因此可以略写。建议信的中间部分,也就是给对方提出具体可行的合理化建议,是写作的重点,需要详写。
三、注意事项
1.开门见山,直入主题。在建议信正文的开头找准话题的切入点,如表达对对方困境的理解或安慰对方, 自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。提出建议时要充分了解情况,有的放矢,以使建议更有针对性。
2.给出希望对方采取或者终止某种行为的理由。在陈述理由的过程中要换位思考,尽量为对方考虑。要用事实说话,以增强说服力。
3.语气要和缓。要让对方容易接纳你的想法或者建议, 以理服人是关键,不能把自己的想法强加于人。
4.给出合理建议。提出建议时,要从实际出发,要合情合理,通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向, 从而达到写信的最终目的。
四、注重培养创造性思维能力——让建议更中肯
建议信不仅可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的建议,也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进服务等提出建议或忠告。无论是哪种情况,都考查了创造性思维能力。在日常生活和学习中,学生应独立思考并保持应有的好奇心,激发想象力,提高发现和解决问题的能力。
高中生John被自己的成绩压得喘不过气来。他发现自己经常将自己的表现与同龄人进行比较,导致了不足和失败的感觉。
你的建议:
针对练笔/根据John所面临的问题提出你的建议
I think you should set realistic goals and celebrate small achievements. You'd better know that it is important to focus on the journey rather than the destination. Why not seek support from others, such as your teachers, your parents, or the school adviser. I am sure it will help, since it happens to everyone when teenagers often face the pressure of study.
写作素材储备
一、建议信常用佳句
1.明快热情开头句
①I'm sorry to hear that your friend Chen Lei is addicted to computer games. Now I'd like to give you some advice on how to deal with it.
听说你的朋友陈雷沉迷于电脑游戏,我很难过。现在我想给你一些关于如何处理它的建议。
②From your letter, I know you have difficulty making new friends in high school. My suggestions are as follows.
从你的信中,我知道你在高中很难交到新朋友。我的建议如下。
2.丰富委婉中间句
①First of all, I suggest you reading English words, sentences and short articles aloud every morning.
首先,我建议你每天早上大声朗读英语单词、句子和短文。
②To start with, it is important to tell him that spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on his studies.
首先,重要的是要告诉他,花太多的时间在网上是不健康的,也使他很难集中精力学习。
③In addition, you may as well encourage your friend to try new hobbies like playing the guitar or playing basketball.
此外,你也可以鼓励你的朋友尝试新的爱好,比如弹吉他或打篮球。
④Last but no least, why not take part in some outdoor activities together
最后但同样重要的是,为什么不一起参加一些户外活动呢?
3.简洁真诚结尾句
①I firmly believe you will make rapid progress.
我坚信你会进步很快的。
②I hope my advice will be of benefit to you. May you get rid of your trouble soon.
我希望我的建议对你有帮助。祝你早日摆脱烦恼。
二、“建议”类俗语警句积累
1.Better late than never. 迟做总比不做好。
2.Strike while the iron is hot. 趁热打铁。
3.Constant dropping wears the stone.滴水穿石。
4.God helps those who helps themselves. 天助自助者。
5.Knowledge makes humble, while ignorance makes proud.
博学使人谦逊,无知使人骄傲。
三、主题写作素材
1.网瘾
play the Internet games 玩网络游戏
stay up late 熬夜
be addicted to 对……上瘾
go from bad to worse 每况愈下
spend much time on 花太多时间在……上
do great harm to 对……伤害大
a convenient tool 一个便利工具
worse still/what's worse 更糟糕的是
get rid of the bad habit 去掉坏毛病
do some physical exercise 做锻炼
both mentally and physically 身心上
2.学习困难
have difficulty in 在……方面有困难
have pressure in face of 面对……有压力
read a variety of books 博览群书
hold on to your dream 坚持梦想
search it on the Internet 在互联网上搜索它
make rapid progress 取得快速进步
practice makes perfect 熟能生巧
have a positive attitude to study 学习态度积极
make good plans for 为……做好计划
turn to sb. 向某人求助
[随堂针对练笔]
假定你是李华,你的好友于潇前不久和父母一起去了英国,最近写信告诉你她很不适应那里的校园生活,感到很难过。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封建议信。
1.学好英语,从而有更多和别人交流的机会;
2.多交一些朋友,乐于助人;
3.积极参加各种社团活动。
根据提示完成书信,选择恰当的句子并认真抄写在文中空白处。
Dear Yu Xiao,
Thank you for writing to me. I'm sorry to hear that ① in England. I'm glad to ② .
Firstly, ③ work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, you should make friends with your classmates, which can help you ④ . Thirdly, you can ⑤ . It can help you ⑥ , and make your life more interesting. By doing so, you will be happier with the new life soon.
I hope ⑦ , and I'm looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
A.join in all kinds of activities
B.it is very important for you to
C.give you some advice on how to face this situation
D.you are having trouble getting used to your new school life
E.get along well with each other
F.forget your loneliness
G.my advice will be useful to you
答案:①~⑦ DCBEAFG
课时跟踪检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1.在你离开之前,我想向你表达我的感激之情。(express)
Before you leave, I want to ____________________ to you.
express my gratitude
2.你为我的英语学习提供了如此多的解决方案,我的感激之情是无法用语言表达的。(solution)
You have provided ____________________ my English learning that my thanks are beyond words.
3.我仍然记得去年我学英语有多困惑。(confusing)
I still remember ______________ it was for me to learn English last year.
so many solutions for
how confusing
4.然而,是你教会了我关注听和阅读。(focus on)
However, it was you that taught me to __________________________.
5.此外,你还推荐我课外看英文电影和听英文歌。(recommend)
Besides, you _________________________ English movies and listen to English songs after school.
focus on listening and reading
recommended me to watch
6.结果,我喜欢上了英语,这帮助我流利地说英语并取得了一个好成绩。(be attracted to )
As a result, I _______________ English, which helped me to speak English fluently and get a good grade.
was attracted to
Ⅱ.应用文写作
假定你是李华,你的笔友Peter在协调学习与社团活动的关系方面有些困难。请你根据下面提示给他写一封电子邮件。
1.表示安慰; 2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
参考范文:
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you have some trouble in balancing study and club activities. Here are my tips.
Firstly, put study in the first place, because our first responsibility is learning all we can from classes.Then draw up a schedule.
When making a schedule, be sure to leave enough studying time.Finally, select a club activity carefully.We should choose wisely among activities we are truly interested in and those that will help on our way to success.
I do hope you will find my suggestions useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mei Mei frowned (皱眉) as she helped her mother and father set out the cooking supplies in the shiny steel kitchen. Her family had just moved here from San Francisco, having bought a small restaurant, which was set to open in the next few days.
“Moving here was a stupid idea.I have lost all my friends in San Francisco. What should I do now?” Mei Mei grumbled (抱怨), mostly to herself.
“What's that?” Her mother asked, opening a box and lifting out several pots and a wok (炒锅).“Nothing,” Mei Mei said. The girl had been complaining about the move, but her parents had made the decision and were now too busy getting ready for the grand opening to listen to her complaints.
The first few days at her new school hadn't been easy, either.She found it hard to talk to people she didn't know, and it seemed like the students hadn't even noticed her.Mei Mei sighed and got back to washing dishes.
On the day of the grand opening Mei Mei's parents both smiled, welcoming customers into the restaurant, brightly decorated in gold and red.Even Mei Mei was in a good mood as she rushed around, seating guests, handing out menus, and pouring tall glasses of water.This was a big day for her family.
At one of the tables sat a family with two daughters who were about Mei Mei's age. As she filled their glasses, Mei Mei realized the twins were in her class.Mei Mei lowered her head so her long hair covered her face, and she turned away from the table.
Mei Mei's mother found her soon after, in the kitchen loading the dishwasher.
“Honey, what are you doing back here We need you out front with the customers.”
(上文提到因为搬家的缘故,梅梅在新学校没朋友。后来自己家的饭店开张,双胞胎同学来吃饭。根据段首的句子可知续写的线索为:妈妈鼓励她去和同学接触→梅梅的反应及做法→用饼干招待→这次事件对她产生的影响。要求逻辑通顺,情节合理。词数80左右。)
参考范文:
“Mom!They are my classmates and I don't want to greet them in this situation.” Mei Mei whispered. But her mother encouraged her not to be afraid and said it was a chance to communicate with her classmates. Mei Mei hesitated and accepted her mother's suggestion. When Mei Mei served the twins the cookies, they recognized her at once and said hello to her warmly. And Mei Mei was very happy to talk to them just a few moment. It was the first time since she had been there that she had opened up to her classmates.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
How to Handle Being the New Kid at School
Being the new kid at school can be a terrible experience!It might seem like everybody else knows exactly how to act.But remember you aren't alone.Actually, everybody is nervous on their first day and you can fit right in with the help of the following tips.
Plan ahead the night before. 1 .Lay out your first day outfit (全套服装), pack a lunch, and make sure you have all your school supplies ready to go.Planning ahead can help you get a good night's sleep and feel less nervous about your first day.
2 .Make sure your clothes are cleaned and pressed and that you've showered and brushed your teeth.If you're hoping to attract friends with similar interests, try wearing a shirt with your favourite show, musician, or sports team on it. 3 .
Do your best to stay calm and positive.It's normal to feel nervous or anxious when you're the new kid at school.If you feel nervous, start by taking some deep breaths. 4 .You can listen to music that makes you feel calm or happy.Try imagining a good first day in your mind instead of keeping thinking about things that could go wrong.
Use your body language to show confidence. 5 , your shoulders lowered, and your eyes on the floor.Walk with your head held up, your back straight, and a bright expression on your face.Make eye contact with other people, and smile if they look at you or speak to you.
A.Choose clothes that make you feel great
B.Introduce yourself to your teachers and classmates
C.Don't come in on the first day with your head hanging down
D.This can be an easy way to start a talk and break the ice a little
E.You should keep talking and let people know that you are friendly
F.Remember that everyone is the new kid at some point and that it's not a big deal
G.You'll feel less worried if everything is ready before you wake up for your first day
语篇解读:本文为说明文。文章针对如何为高中第一天做准备提出了一些建议。
1.选G 根据本段主题句“Plan ahead the night before.”以及下文介绍的各种准备活动可知,G项符合语境。
2.选A 设空处为本段主题句。根据设空处后面提到的clothes和shirt可知应选A项。
3.选D 根据设空处前一句 “If you're hoping to attract friends ...sports team on it.” 可知,D项承接上文,符合语境。
4.选F 根据设空处前的 “If you feel nervous, start by taking some deep breaths.”和设空处后的“You can listen to music that makes you feel calm or happy.”可知,设空处应是继续建议“你”要放松,所以,F项符合语境。
5.选C 根据本段主题句 “Use your body language to show confidence.”可知本段是关于用肢体语言表示自信的。设空处后的 “your shoulders lowered, and your eyes on the floor”列举了一些不自信的肢体语言来告诫读者不要这么做;C项中的“with your head hanging down”为关键信息,符合语境。UNIT 1 课时检测(六) Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1.在你离开之前,我想向你表达我的感激之情。(express)
Before you leave, I want to __________________ to you.
2.你为我的英语学习提供了如此多的解决方案,我的感激之情是无法用语言表达的。(solution)
You have provided ________________________ my English learning that my thanks are beyond words.
3.我仍然记得去年我学英语有多困惑。(confusing)
I still remember ________________ it was for me to learn English last year.
4.然而,是你教会了我关注听和阅读。(focus on)
However, it was you that taught me to ____________________________________.
5.此外,你还推荐我课外看英文电影和听英文歌。(recommend)
Besides, you ________________________ English movies and listen to English songs after school.
6.结果,我喜欢上了英语,这帮助我流利地说英语并取得了一个好成绩。(be attracted to )
As a result, I ____________________ English, which helped me to speak English fluently and get a good grade.
Ⅱ.应用文写作
假定你是李华,你的笔友Peter在协调学习与社团活动的关系方面有些困难。请你根据下面提示给他写一封电子邮件。
1.表示安慰; 2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mei Mei frowned (皱眉) as she helped her mother and father set out the cooking supplies in the shiny steel kitchen. Her family had just moved here from San Francisco, having bought a small restaurant, which was set to open in the next few days.
“Moving here was a stupid idea.I have lost all my friends in San Francisco. What should I do now?” Mei Mei grumbled (抱怨), mostly to herself.
“What's that?” Her mother asked, opening a box and lifting out several pots and a wok (炒锅).“Nothing,” Mei Mei said. The girl had been complaining about the move, but her parents had made the decision and were now too busy getting ready for the grand opening to listen to her complaints.
The first few days at her new school hadn't been easy, either.She found it hard to talk to people she didn't know, and it seemed like the students hadn't even noticed her.Mei Mei sighed and got back to washing dishes.
On the day of the grand opening Mei Mei's parents both smiled, welcoming customers into the restaurant, brightly decorated in gold and red.Even Mei Mei was in a good mood as she rushed around, seating guests, handing out menus, and pouring tall glasses of water.This was a big day for her family.
At one of the tables sat a family with two daughters who were about Mei Mei's age. As she filled their glasses, Mei Mei realized the twins were in her class.Mei Mei lowered her head so her long hair covered her face, and she turned away from the table.
Mei Mei's mother found her soon after, in the kitchen loading the dishwasher.
“Honey, what are you doing back here We need you out front with the customers.”
(上文提到因为搬家的缘故,梅梅在新学校没朋友。后来自己家的饭店开张,双胞胎同学来吃饭。根据段首的句子可知续写的线索为:妈妈鼓励她去和同学接触→梅梅的反应及做法→用饼干招待→这次事件对她产生的影响。要求逻辑通顺,情节合理。词数80左右。)
“Mom!They are my classmates and I don't want to greet them in this situation.” Mei Mei whispered.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
How to Handle Being the New Kid at School
Being the new kid at school can be a terrible experience!It might seem like everybody else knows exactly how to act.But remember you aren't alone.Actually, everybody is nervous on their first day and you can fit right in with the help of the following tips.
Plan ahead the night before.__1__.Lay out your first day outfit (全套服装), pack a lunch, and make sure you have all your school supplies ready to go.Planning ahead can help you get a good night's sleep and feel less nervous about your first day.
__2__.Make sure your clothes are cleaned and pressed and that you've showered and brushed your teeth.If you're hoping to attract friends with similar interests, try wearing a shirt with your favourite show, musician, or sports team on it.__3__.
Do your best to stay calm and positive.It's normal to feel nervous or anxious when you're the new kid at school.If you feel nervous, start by taking some deep breaths.__4__.You can listen to music that makes you feel calm or happy.Try imagining a good first day in your mind instead of keeping thinking about things that could go wrong.
Use your body language to show confidence.__5__, your shoulders lowered, and your eyes on the floor.Walk with your head held up, your back straight, and a bright expression on your face.Make eye contact with other people, and smile if they look at you or speak to you.
A.Choose clothes that make you feel great
B.Introduce yourself to your teachers and classmates
C.Don't come in on the first day with your head hanging down
D.This can be an easy way to start a talk and break the ice a little
E.You should keep talking and let people know that you are friendly
F.Remember that everyone is the new kid at some point and that it's not a big deal
G.You'll feel less worried if everything is ready before you wake up for your first day
[答题区] 1~5 __________
UNIT 1 课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.express my gratitude 2.so many solutions for
3.how confusing 4.focus on listening and reading
5.recommended me to watch 6.was attracted to
Ⅱ.应用文写作(参考范文)
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you have some trouble in balancing study and club activities. Here are my tips.
Firstly, put study in the first place, because our first responsibility is learning all we can from classes.Then draw up a schedule.When making a schedule, be sure to leave enough studying time.Finally, select a club activity carefully.We should choose wisely among activities we are truly interested in and those that will help on our way to success.
I do hope you will find my suggestions useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅲ.读后续写(参考范文)
“Mom!They are my classmates and I don't want to greet them in this situation.” Mei Mei whispered. But her mother encouraged her not to be afraid and said it was a chance to communicate with her classmates. Mei Mei hesitated and accepted her mother's suggestion. When Mei Mei served the twins the cookies, they recognized her at once and said hello to her warmly. And Mei Mei was very happy to talk to them just a few moment. It was the first time since she had been there that she had opened up to her classmates.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读:本文为说明文。文章针对如何为高中第一天做准备提出了一些建议。
1.选G 根据本段主题句“Plan ahead the night before.”以及下文介绍的各种准备活动可知,G项符合语境。
2.选A 设空处为本段主题句。根据设空处后面提到的clothes和shirt可知应选A项。
3.选D 根据设空处前一句 “If you're hoping to attract friends ...sports team on it.” 可知,D项承接上文,符合语境。
4.选F 根据设空处前的 “If you feel nervous, start by taking some deep breaths.”和设空处后的“You can listen to music that makes you feel calm or happy.”可知,设空处应是继续建议“你”要放松,所以,F项符合语境。
5.选C 根据本段主题句 “Use your body language to show confidence.”可知本段是关于用肢体语言表示自信的。设空处后的 “your shoulders lowered, and your eyes on the floor”列举了一些不自信的肢体语言来告诫读者不要这么做;C项中的“with your head hanging down”为关键信息,符合语境。