Section Ⅴ Writing
写作项目——Write a description of someone you admire
本单元的写作任务是“介绍你钦佩的人”，为人物介绍类文章，属于记叙文的范畴，主要介绍人物的生平经历、精神品格、典型事迹等。写作时要抓住人物的典型事例和行为来刻画人物特征，并把握好时间、地点、人物、事件等记叙文的要素。本类型的写作旨在引导学生关注优秀人物及其对社会的贡献，学习优秀人物的责任担当、无私奉献的品质以及坚韧不拔的意志，树立正确的人生观与价值观。
|由教材学写作|
一、学写作架构
阅读课文，总结本课的篇章结构如下：
二、学写作手法
人物介绍类写作在介绍人物的主要事迹时一般会有明显的时间线索，如本文第二至四段中以时间顺序客观陈述了爱因斯坦的人生关键经历，阅读时，应抓住这些表示时间的关键信息，如第二段中on 14 March 1879, When he was 16, in 1896 and graduating in 1900；第三段中After two years, in 1905, In 1922；第四段中 in 1933, After spending time in Europe, Following that等。通过这些时间线索，梳理人物的故事脉络，进而了解爱因斯坦的重要经历和突出成就，从而受到鼓舞，为科学探索而付出不懈的努力。
三、学亮点表达
人物介绍类写作在描述人物的某些特点或成就时，作者可能会使用适当的情感词汇，如使用形容词、副词等来表达对人物的尊重、钦佩或其他情感，增强描述的生动性和形象性。如课文中使用 the greatest scientist in modern physics，one of the smartest men，the most well known being ..., a courageous and kind figure, exceptional scores等词汇形象地表达了爱因斯坦在近代物理学方面的影响力和地位以及人们对他爱戴的原因。
She is a _______________， _______________， ________________ and renowned person.Her ____________ qualities make her __________.People all adore her.
她是一个勇敢、善良、聪明、出名的人。她的优秀品质使她出名。人们都崇拜她。
四、学细节描写
He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock.
赏析：句中黑体部分从胡子、头发两方面描写了爱因斯坦的典型外貌特征。同时，句中还使用了as though引导的从句，且该从句使用了比喻修辞格。一个头发竖直、可爱但又略显古怪的爱因斯坦形象跃然纸上，令人印象深刻。
①There is still a heart of loving beauty ________________________.
她沧桑的面容下依然保持着一颗爱美的心。
②He was a kind old man with ____________， ____________， and _______________.
他是一位和蔼善良的老人，长着灰白色的胡子，有一双蓝色的眼睛和小鸟都喜欢的声音。
|写作项目指导|
Write a description of someone you admire
——介绍一位你钦佩的人
第一步：构思谋篇
体裁 人物介绍类文章
时态 描写人物的外貌、性格、爱好等常用一般现在时，而介绍人物的出生时间及地点、教育背景、工作经历和主要事迹则常用一般过去时
人称 以第三人称为主
写作要点 1.开头：先总体描写，即对该人物进行简要介绍，如年龄、性别、出生地、职业、教育背景、外表、性格特点和特长爱好等。2.主体：详细介绍人物的特点及事迹，重点突出人物的优秀品行，可以按照时间顺序或在事件中的主次地位进行描述。3.结尾：对此人的评价或感想。
第二步：要点表达
第一部分：开头引出人物
①The person I admire most is Qian Xuesen, ______________________ “the father of China's space program”．(用同位语)
我最敬佩的人是钱学森，一位被誉为“中国航天之父”的著名科学家。
②Of all the outstanding people, I admire Tu Youyou the most, ______________________ for her great achievements in curing malaria.(用定语从句)
在所有杰出的人中，我最钦佩的是屠呦呦，她是第一位因在治疗疟疾方面取得的巨大成就而获得诺贝尔奖的中国科学家。
第二部分：介绍人物的生平及成就
1．介绍人物的生平
①________________________ on September 12th, 1980, he is one of the best basketball players in China.
他1980年9月12日出生于上海，是中国最好的篮球运动员之一。
②The scientist, who was born in 1930, __________________ swimming at an early age.
出生于1930年，这位科学家从小就对游泳感兴趣。
2．介绍人物的主要经历及贡献
①________________ Beijing University in 1993, he worked as a teacher in Wuhan University.
他1993年毕业于北京大学，在武汉大学任教。
②He has ____________________ researching on rice.他把他的一生奉献给了水稻研究。
第三部分：结尾表达人物的影响及评价
①________________________________， he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.(分词短语作状语)
他为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，他是一个优秀的人，完全值得我们的钦佩和尊重。
②__________________________________ is his famous philosophy of life, _______________________.(主语从句，定语从句)
令我印象最深的是他著名的人生哲学，这激励我做一个正直的人。
[针对练笔]
假定你是李华，你校英文校报正在征集关于我国明代医学家李时珍的文章。请你写一篇短文投稿。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文。
①__________________________________ (被称为著名的医药学家) in the Ming Dynasty, Li Shizhen was born in 1518.He wrote a book called Ben Cao Gang Mu, ②____________________________________________________ (它是一本中草药集) including about 2,000 Chinese herbs.③________________________ (为了完成这项工作), he visited mountains, ④________________________ (拜访普通大众), tasted different kinds of herbs and even did experiments by himself.It took him 27 years to finish the task, and his book ⑤_____________________________________________ (被认为是对中医药发展的巨大贡献)．
|写作素材储备|
一、“人物介绍”类写作佳句
1．介绍人物的出生日期、出生地、出身及外貌特征：
①He had fair hair and blue eyes.
②Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809.
③She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.
④Sue was a young woman who was studying art.
⑤He is a good looking and kind hearted man.
2．介绍人物的事迹及成就
①During her career life, she obtained many championships, including four Olympic championships.
②When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in literature.
③His stories, most of which are short ones, give people surprising endings.
④He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers.
3．介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价：
①He became famous for his new theory.
②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.
③We regard him as our role model.
④Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.
⑤Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
二、人物描写精彩语段
1．肖像描写
When the young man on board saw this person approach, he left his station by the pilot, and, hat in hand, leaned against the ship's side. He was a fine, tall, slim young fellow of eighteen or twenty, with black eyes, and hair as dark as a raven's wing.His whole appearance showed his calmness and resolution.
甲板上的这个年轻人看到有人走近时，他从领航员身边走开了，恭恭敬敬地，斜靠在船沿上。他是一个仪表堂堂、个子高高、身材瘦削的小伙子，年龄十八、二十岁的样子，一双黑色的眼睛，头发乌黑。他整个外形表现出镇定与刚毅。
2．神态描写
Her eyes lit up when she walked into the room.A smile lit up her face.The smile spread across her face, which lit up her gloomy afternoon.
当她走进房间时，眼前一亮。她脸上露出了笑容。笑容在她脸上散开，这点亮了她阴郁的下午。
3．性格描写
Axel Aleman, who is from Sheridan High School, is a friendly and generous person and he always cares more about others than himself.
Axel Aleman 来自 Sheridan 高中，他友好、慷慨。他总是关心别人胜过关心自己。
Section Ⅴ
由教材学写作
三、courageous/brave; kind/kind hearted; intelligent；
good; well known
四、①under her wrinkled face
②gray beard; blue eyes; a voice that the birds loved
写作项目指导
第一部分
①a famous scientist known as
②who is the first Chinese scientist awarded the Nobel Prize
第二部分
1．①Born in Shanghai ②had a passion for
2．①Graduating from ②devoted all his life to
第三部分
①Having set a great example to us ②What impresses me most; which inspires me to be a man of integrity
针对练笔
①Known as a famous medical scientist
②which is a collection of Chinese herbs
③In order to finish the task ④called on ordinary people
⑤is considered to be a great contribution to the development of Chinese medicine
5 / 5(共50张PPT)
Writing
Section Ⅴ
写作项目——Write a description of someone you admire
课时跟踪检测
Contents 目录
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写作项目——Write a description
of someone you admire
本单元的写作任务是“介绍你钦佩的人”，为人物介绍类文章，属于记叙文的范畴，主要介绍人物的生平经历、精神品格、典型事迹等。写作时要抓住人物的典型事例和行为来刻画人物特征，并把握好时间、地点、人物、事件等记叙文的要素。本类型的写作旨在引导学生关注优秀人物及其对社会的贡献，学习优秀人物的责任担当、无私奉献的品质以及坚韧不拔的意志，树立正确的人生观与价值观。
|由教材学写作|
一、学写作架构
阅读课文，总结本课的篇章结构如下：
二、学写作手法
人物介绍类写作在介绍人物的主要事迹时一般会有明显的时间线索，如本文第二至四段中以时间顺序客观陈述了爱因斯坦的人生关键经历，阅读时，应抓住这些表示时间的关键信息，如第二段中on 14 March 1879, When he was 16, in 1896 and graduating in 1900；第三段中After two years, in 1905, In 1922；第四段中 in 1933, After spending time in Europe, Following that等。通过这些时间线索，梳理人物的故事脉络，进而了解爱因斯坦的重要经历和突出成就，从而受到鼓舞，为科学探索而付出不懈的努力。
三、学亮点表达
人物介绍类写作在描述人物的某些特点或成就时，作者可能会使用适当的情感词汇，如使用形容词、副词等来表达对人物的尊重、钦佩或其他情感，增强描述的生动性和形象性。如课文中使用 the greatest scientist in modern physics，one of the smartest men，the most well-known being ..., a courageous and kind figure, exceptional scores等词汇形象地表达了爱因斯坦在近代物理学方面的影响力和地位以及人们对他爱戴的原因。
仿写训练/完成句子
She is a ________________，__________________，__________，
and renowned person.Her ______ qualities make her___________.People
all adore her.
她是一个勇敢、善良、聪明、出名的人。她的优秀品质使她出名。人们
都崇拜她。
good
well known
courageous/brave
kind/kind-hearted
intelligent
四、学细节描写
He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock.
赏析：句中黑体部分从胡子、头发两方面描写了爱因斯坦的典型外貌特征。同时，句中还使用了as though引导的从句，且该从句使用了比喻修辞格。一个头发竖直、可爱但又略显古怪的爱因斯坦形象跃然纸上，令人印象深刻。
仿写训练/完成句子
①There is still a heart of loving beauty ______________________.
她沧桑的面容下依然保持着一颗爱美的心。
②He was a kind old man with_____________,_____________, and
_________________________.
他是一位和蔼善良的老人，长着灰白色的胡子，有一双蓝色的眼睛和小鸟都喜欢的声音。
under her wrinkled face
gray beard
blue eyes
a voice that the birds loved
|写作项目指导|
Write a description of someone you admire
——介绍一位你钦佩的人
第一步：构思谋篇
体裁 人物介绍类文章
时态 描写人物的外貌、性格、爱好等常用一般现在时，而介绍人物的出生时间及地点、教育背景、工作经历和主要事迹则常用一般过去时
人称 以第三人称为主
写作 要点 1.开头：先总体描写，即对该人物进行简要介绍，如年龄、性别、出生地、职业、教育背景、外表、性格特点和特长爱好等。
2.主体：详细介绍人物的特点及事迹，重点突出人物的优秀品行，可以按照时间顺序或在事件中的主次地位进行描述。
3.结尾：对此人的评价或感想。
续表
第二步：要点表达
第一部分：开头引出人物
①The person I admire most is Qian Xuesen, __________________________
“the father of China's space program”．(用同位语)
我最敬佩的人是钱学森，一位被誉为“中国航天之父”的著名科学家。
a famous scientist known as
②Of all the outstanding people, I admire Tu Youyou the most, ___________________________________________________ for her great achievements in curing malaria.(用定语从句)
在所有杰出的人中，我最钦佩的是屠呦呦，她是第一位因在治疗疟疾方面取得的巨大成就而获得诺贝尔奖的中国科学家。
who is the first Chinese scientist awarded the Nobel Prize
第二部分：介绍人物的生平及成就
1．介绍人物的生平
①________________ on September 12th, 1980, he is one of the best basketball players in China.
他1980年9月12日出生于上海，是中国最好的篮球运动员之一。
②The scientist, who was born in 1930, ____________________
swimming at an early age.
出生于1930年，这位科学家从小就对游泳感兴趣。
Born in Shanghai
had a passion for
2．介绍人物的主要经历及贡献
①________________ Beijing University in 1993, he worked as a teacher in Wuhan University.
他1993年毕业于北京大学，在武汉大学任教。
②He has ____________________ researching on rice.
他把他的一生奉献给了水稻研究。
Graduating from
devoted all his life to
第三部分：结尾表达人物的影响及评价
①_____________________________, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.(分词短语作状语)
他为我们树立了一个伟大的榜样，他是一个优秀的人，完全值得我们的钦佩和尊重。
②______________________ is his famous philosophy of life, ______
_______________________________.(主语从句，定语从句)
令我印象最深的是他著名的人生哲学，这激励我做一个正直的人。
Having set a great example to us
What impresses me most
which
inspires me to be a man of integrity
[针对练笔]
假定你是李华，你校英文校报正在征集关于我国明代医学家李时珍的文章。请你写一篇短文投稿。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文。
①_________________________________ (被称为著名的医药学家) in the Ming Dynasty, Li Shizhen was born in 1518.He wrote a book called Ben Cao Gang Mu, ②__________________________________ (它是一本中草药集) including about 2,000 Chinese herbs.
Known as a famous medical scientist
which is a collection of Chinese herbs
③________________________ (为了完成这项工作), he visited mountains, ④________________________ (拜访普通大众), tasted different kinds of herbs and even did experiments by himself.It took him 27 years to finish the task, and his book ⑤____________________
__________________________________________________ (被认为是对中医药发展的巨大贡献)．
In order to finish the task
called on ordinary people
is considered to be a
great contribution to the development of Chinese medicine
|写作素材储备|
一、“人物介绍”类写作佳句
1．介绍人物的出生日期、出生地、出身及外貌特征：
①He had fair hair and blue eyes.
②Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809.
③She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.
④Sue was a young woman who was studying art.
⑤He is a good-looking and kind-hearted man.
2．介绍人物的事迹及成就
①During her career life, she obtained many championships, including four Olympic championships.
②When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in literature.
③His stories, most of which are short ones, give people surprising endings.
④He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers.
3．介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价：
①He became famous for his new theory.
②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.
③We regard him as our role model.
④Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.
⑤Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
二、人物描写精彩语段
1．肖像描写
When the young man on board saw this person approach, he left his station by the pilot, and, hat in hand, leaned against the ship's side. He was a fine, tall, slim young fellow of eighteen or twenty, with black eyes, and hair as dark as a raven's wing.His whole appearance showed his calmness and resolution.
甲板上的这个年轻人看到有人走近时，他从领航员身边走开了，恭恭敬敬地，斜靠在船沿上。他是一个仪表堂堂、个子高高、身材瘦削的小伙子，年龄十八、二十岁的样子，一双黑色的眼睛，头发乌黑。他整个外形表现出镇定与刚毅。
2．神态描写
Her eyes lit up when she walked into the room.A smile lit up her face.The smile spread across her face, which lit up her gloomy afternoon.
当她走进房间时，眼前一亮。她脸上露出了笑容。笑容在她脸上散开，这点亮了她阴郁的下午。
3．性格描写
Axel Aleman, who is from Sheridan High School，is a friendly and generous person and he always cares more about others than himself.
Axel Aleman 来自 Sheridan 高中，他友好、慷慨。他总是关心别人胜过关心自己。
02
课时跟踪检测
一、写作专项训练
Ⅰ.完成句子(10分)
1．___________________________________________________, it must be Confucius, China's most famous educator, philosopher, and political theorist.
说到中国历史上我最喜欢的人物，那一定是孔子，中国最著名的教育家、哲学家和政治理论家。
When it comes to my favourite figure in Chinese history
2．To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping ________
_________________________________________.
为了帮助更多的人获得足够的粮食，袁隆平致力于提高杂交水稻的产量。
3．More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others,__________________________________________.
更重要的是，袁隆平愿意与他人分享他的成就，这有助于消除世界饥饿。
devoted
himself to improving the output of hybrid rice
which contributes to ridding the world of hunger
4．___________________ makes him successful and his commitment has inspired me a lot.
正是他的奉献精神使他取得了成功，他的奉献精神激励了我很多。
5．I sincerely hope that everyone can learn from the person you admire and ____________________________________________.
我真诚地希望每个人都能向你钦佩的人学习，从而为整个世界作出巨大的贡献。
It is his devotion that
thus make great contributions to the whole world
Ⅱ.应用文写作(15分)
请根据以下内容写一篇文章介绍中国科学家钱学森。
1．1911年出生于上海，1935年赴美留学，成绩优异；
2．1939年在美国获航空、数学博士学位；
3．于1955年回到祖国；
4．为新中国的航天事业做出巨大的贡献，被誉为“新中国航天之父”；
5．2009年于北京去世。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
参考词汇：航空航天科学技术aerospace science and technology；博士学位doctorate
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文：
Qian Xuesen, regarded as the “Father of China's Space Program”， was born in 1911 in Shanghai.In 1935, Qian went to America for further study.In 1939, he obtained his doctorates in aerospace science and mathematics in the US.He succeeded in coming back to China in 1955.After that, he devoted himself to aerospace science and technology and contributed a lot to the cause of China's aerospace.In 2009, he passed away in Beijing.Because of the love for his country and the great achievements, he has received respect and admiration from home and abroad.
Ⅲ.读后续写(25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On Nov.18, 1995, Itzhak Perlman, the violinist, came to give a concert on stage at Avery Fisher Hall at Lincoln Center in New York City.
If you have ever been to a Perlman concert, you know that getting on stage is no small achievement for him.He was stricken with polio (小儿麻痹) as a child, so he has braces on both legs and walks with the aid of two crutches (腋杖)．To see him walk across the stage one step at a time, painfully and slowly, is an awesome sight.Then he sits down, slowly, puts his crutches on the floor, undoes the clasps on his legs, tucks one foot back and extends the other foot forward.Then he bends down and picks up the violin, puts it under his chin, nods to the conductor and proceeds to play.
By now, the audience is used to this practice.They remain silent while he undoes the clasps on his legs.They wait until he is ready to play.
But this time, something went wrong.Just as he finished the first few bars, one of the strings on his violin broke.You could hear it snap — it went off like gunfire across the room.
I here was no mistaking what that sound meant.
People who were there that night thought to themselves：“We figured that he would have to get up, put on the clasps again, pick up the crutches and limp his way off stage — to either find another violin or else find another string for this one.”
But he didn't.Instead, he waited a moment, closed his eyes and then signaled the conductor to begin again.The orchestra began, and he played from where he had left off.And he played with such passion and such power and such purity as they had never heard before.
Anyone knows it is impossible to play a symphonic work with just three strings.But that night, he was seen modulating, changing, and recomposing the piece in his head.He was detuning the strings to get new sounds they had never made before.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
When he finished, there was an awesome silence in the room.
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He has prepared all his life to make music on a violin of four strings.
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参考范文：
When he finished, there was an awesome silence in the room. And then people rose and cheered.There was an extraordinary outburst of applause from every corner of the hall.We were all on our feet, screaming and cheering, doing everything we could to show how much we appreciated what he had done with just three strings on the stage.We were all astonished by his excellent skills and brilliant performances.
He has prepared all his life to make music on a violin of four strings. All of a sudden, in the middle of a concert he found himself with only three strings; so he made music with three strings.The music he made that night with just three strings was more beautiful, more sacred, more memorable, than any that he had ever made before, when he had four strings.Perhaps our task in this fast-changing world is to make music, at first with all that we have, and then, when that is no longer possible, to make music with what we have left.
二、阅读拓展训练
With fingers and wrists wrapped in medicated tape, Zhang Guimei, founder and principal of the first free high school for girls in China, was presented with the July 1 Medal on Tuesday.
Zhang met her husband in Dali and worked as a teacher in a local school.Unfortunately, her husband died of cancer not long after their marriage.Sadly, Zhang decided to leave this familiar place.Therefore, she volunteered to teach at a middle school in Huaping, a poverty-stricken county located in the mountains.
Over time, Zhang witnessed the gender gap in education in relatively poor rural areas.Urban and rural students already faced unequal access to quality education, and the traditional belief of male superiority worsened rural girls' situation.She discovered many girls were pulled out of class for many reasons just before the College Entrance Exam.
In 2002, Zhang came up with an idea to found a free high school for girls.In 2008, with help from the Party, the local government and personal donations, she founded the Huaping All-Girls High School.With the goal of never letting a girl fall behind in schooling, she often works overtime despite of illnesses.She has walked to almost every household deep in the mountains, talking to the parents about the importance of education for girls.
The efforts paid off.Over the past 13 years, her school has sent 1,800 girls to university.“A cultured, responsible mother won't let her daughter drop out of school，” Zhang said.
语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了全国第一所免费女子高中的创始人兼校长张桂梅的事迹。她致力于缩小贫困地区教育的性别差距，最终得到了回报。
1．What probably made Zhang Guimei decide to leave the local school in Dali
A．Her loss of husband.
B．Her desire for exploration.
C．Her love for teaching.
D．Her eagerness for adventure.
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解析：细节理解题。根据第二段中“Unfortunately, her husband died of cancer not long after their marriage.Sadly, Zhang decided to leave this familiar place.”可知，失去丈夫让张桂梅决定离开大理当地的那所学校。
2．What can we learn about the Huaping All-Girls High School
A．It was founded in 2002.
B．It accepts both boys and girls.
C．It was founded with the help of the local government alone.
D．It aimed to narrow down the gender inequality in education.
√
解析： 推理判断题。根据第三段首句及第四段首句可知，华坪女高旨在缩小教育中的性别不平等。
3．Which of the following words can best describe Zhang Guimei
A．Determined. B．Pessimistic.
C．Economical. D．Outspoken.
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解析：推理判断题。根据第四段前两句及最后一句可知，张桂梅2002年提出建立华坪女高的想法，直到2008年才得以建成，她几乎访遍每家每户，讲述女孩接受教育的重要性，所以她是一个有决心的人。
4．What's the main idea of the text
A．A free high school for girls was successfully set up.
B．A woman with illnesses faces ups and downs in life.
C．The gender gap in education in rural China is bridged.
D．A woman's devotion to girls' education finally paid off.
√
解析：主旨大意题。根据全文内容，并结合最后一段内容可知，本文主要讲述了全国第一所免费女子高中的创始人兼校长张桂梅的事迹，她致力于缩小贫困地区教育的的性别差距，最终得到了回报，故D项能够总结本文大意。UNIT 1 课时检测(五) Writing
一、写作专项训练
Ⅰ.完成句子(10分)
1．________________________________________， it must be Confucius, China's most famous educator, philosopher, and political theorist.
说到中国历史上我最喜欢的人物，那一定是孔子，中国最著名的教育家、哲学家和政治理论家。
2．To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping __________________________.
为了帮助更多的人获得足够的粮食，袁隆平致力于提高杂交水稻的产量。
3．More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others,
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更重要的是，袁隆平愿意与他人分享他的成就，这有助于消除世界饥饿。
4．______________________ makes him successful and his commitment has inspired me a lot.
正是他的奉献精神使他取得了成功，他的奉献精神激励了我很多。
5．I sincerely hope that everyone can learn from the person you admire and
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我真诚地希望每个人都能向你钦佩的人学习，从而为整个世界作出巨大的贡献。
Ⅱ.应用文写作(15分)
请根据以下内容写一篇文章介绍中国科学家钱学森。
1．1911年出生于上海，1935年赴美留学，成绩优异；
2．1939年在美国获航空、数学博士学位；
3．于1955年回到祖国；
4．为新中国的航天事业做出巨大的贡献，被誉为“新中国航天之父”；
5．2009年于北京去世。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
参考词汇：航空航天科学技术aerospace science and technology；博士学位doctorate
Ⅲ.读后续写(25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On Nov.18, 1995, Itzhak Perlman, the violinist, came to give a concert on stage at Avery Fisher Hall at Lincoln Center in New York City.
If you have ever been to a Perlman concert, you know that getting on stage is no small achievement for him.He was stricken with polio (小儿麻痹) as a child, so he has braces on both legs and walks with the aid of two crutches (腋杖)．To see him walk across the stage one step at a time, painfully and slowly, is an awesome sight.Then he sits down, slowly, puts his crutches on the floor, undoes the clasps on his legs, tucks one foot back and extends the other foot forward.Then he bends down and picks up the violin, puts it under his chin, nods to the conductor and proceeds to play.
By now, the audience is used to this practice.They remain silent while he undoes the clasps on his legs.They wait until he is ready to play.
But this time, something went wrong.Just as he finished the first few bars, one of the strings on his violin broke.You could hear it snap — it went off like gunfire across the room.
I here was no mistaking what that sound meant.
People who were there that night thought to themselves：“We figured that he would have to get up, put on the clasps again, pick up the crutches and limp his way off stage — to either find another violin or else find another string for this one.”
But he didn't.Instead, he waited a moment, closed his eyes and then signaled the conductor to begin again.The orchestra began, and he played from where he had left off.And he played with such passion and such power and such purity as they had never heard before.
Anyone knows it is impossible to play a symphonic work with just three strings.But that night, he was seen modulating, changing, and recomposing the piece in his head.He was detuning the strings to get new sounds they had never made before.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
When he finished, there was an awesome silence in the room.
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
He has prepared all his life to make music on a violin of four strings.
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
二、阅读拓展训练
With fingers and wrists wrapped in medicated tape, Zhang Guimei, founder and principal of the first free high school for girls in China, was presented with the July 1 Medal on Tuesday.
Zhang met her husband in Dali and worked as a teacher in a local school.Unfortunately, her husband died of cancer not long after their marriage.Sadly, Zhang decided to leave this familiar place.Therefore, she volunteered to teach at a middle school in Huaping, a poverty stricken county located in the mountains.
Over time, Zhang witnessed the gender gap in education in relatively poor rural areas.Urban and rural students already faced unequal access to quality education, and the traditional belief of male superiority worsened rural girls' situation.She discovered many girls were pulled out of class for many reasons just before the College Entrance Exam.
In 2002, Zhang came up with an idea to found a free high school for girls.In 2008, with help from the Party, the local government and personal donations, she founded the Huaping All Girls High School.With the goal of never letting a girl fall behind in schooling, she often works overtime despite of illnesses.She has walked to almost every household deep in the mountains, talking to the parents about the importance of education for girls.
The efforts paid off.Over the past 13 years, her school has sent 1,800 girls to university.“A cultured, responsible mother won't let her daughter drop out of school，” Zhang said.
1．What probably made Zhang Guimei decide to leave the local school in Dali？( )
A．Her loss of husband.
B．Her desire for exploration.
C．Her love for teaching.
D．Her eagerness for adventure.
2．What can we learn about the Huaping All Girls High School？( )
A．It was founded in 2002.
B．It accepts both boys and girls.
C．It was founded with the help of the local government alone.
D．It aimed to narrow down the gender inequality in education.
3．Which of the following words can best describe Zhang Guimei？( )
A．Determined. B．Pessimistic.
C．Economical. D．Outspoken.
4．What's the main idea of the text？( )
A．A free high school for girls was successfully set up.
B．A woman with illnesses faces ups and downs in life.
C．The gender gap in education in rural China is bridged.
D．A woman's devotion to girls' education finally paid off.
UNIT 1 课时检测(五)
一、写作专项训练
Ⅰ.1.When it comes to my favourite figure in Chinese history
2．devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice
3．which contributes to ridding the world of hunger
4．It is his devotion that
5．thus make great contributions to the whole world
Ⅱ.应用文写作(参考范文)
Qian Xuesen, regarded as the “Father of China's Space Program”， was born in 1911 in Shanghai.In 1935, Qian went to America for further study.In 1939, he obtained his doctorates in aerospace science and mathematics in the US.He succeeded in coming back to China in 1955.After that, he devoted himself to aerospace science and technology and contributed a lot to the cause of China's aerospace.In 2009, he passed away in Beijing.Because of the love for his country and the great achievements, he has received respect and admiration from home and abroad.
Ⅲ.读后续写(参考范文)
When he finished, there was an awesome silence in the room. And then people rose and cheered.There was an extraordinary outburst of applause from every corner of the hall.We were all on our feet, screaming and cheering, doing everything we could to show how much we appreciated what he had done with just three strings on the stage.We were all astonished by his excellent skills and brilliant performances.
He has prepared all his life to make music on a violin of four strings. All of a sudden, in the middle of a concert he found himself with only three strings; so he made music with three strings.The music he made that night with just three strings was more beautiful, more sacred, more memorable, than any that he had ever made before, when he had four strings.Perhaps our task in this fast changing world is to make music, at first with all that we have, and then, when that is no longer possible, to make music with what we have left.
二、阅读拓展训练
语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了全国第一所免费女子高中的创始人兼校长张桂梅的事迹。她致力于缩小贫困地区教育的性别差距，最终得到了回报。
1．选A 细节理解题。根据第二段中“Unfortunately, her husband died of cancer not long after their marriage.Sadly, Zhang decided to leave this familiar place.”可知，失去丈夫让张桂梅决定离开大理当地的那所学校。
2. 选D 推理判断题。根据第三段首句及第四段首句可知，华坪女高旨在缩小教育中的性别不平等。
3．选A 推理判断题。根据第四段前两句及最后一句可知，张桂梅2002年提出建立华坪女高的想法，直到2008年才得以建成，她几乎访遍每家每户，讲述女孩接受教育的重要性，所以她是一个有决心的人。
4．选D 主旨大意题。根据全文内容，并结合最后一段内容可知，本文主要讲述了全国第一所免费女子高中的创始人兼校长张桂梅的事迹，她致力于缩小贫困地区教育的的性别差距，最终得到了回报，故D项能够总结本文大意。
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