Unit 6 How do you feel？单元专项提升--书面表达（含答案解析）

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Unit 6 How do you feel？单元专项提升--书面表达
人教PEP版六年级上册
1．书面表达。
每个人都有情绪波动的时候。当我们生病时，我们的心理会特别脆弱，这时应该怎么办呢？联系自己生病时的感受，写一篇短文。
要求:
①书写规范，语句通顺，条理清楚；
②不少于5句话。
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2．写一写。
Oliver总是容易生气但不知道如何调节自己的情绪，为此他感到非常苦恼，请你根据下列提示给他一些建议吧。（首段已给出，不计入总词数）
1. 深呼吸并数到十；②与家人或者好朋友交谈；③听听音乐。
参考词汇：suggestions 建议，calm down平静下来，feel better感觉好一些
要求：(1)条理清晰，语句通顺，书写工整、规范。
(2)不能出现自己的真实姓名及学校名称；不少于50个单词。
Oliver, don’t worry. I have some suggestions for you. _______________________________________
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3．回想一下你做过什么难忘的事情，这些事情让你感受如何。可以挑选其中的一两件事叙述一下，并描述一下自己当时的感受。
要求：①条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范；
②不少于30个单词。
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4．同学们，在我们的生活中，生病是难免的。假如你今天感冒了，感觉不舒服，你的感受是怎样的呢？请以“A bad cold”为题写一篇作文，描述你感冒时的感受，50个词左右。
A bad cold
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5．假如你是图片中的孩子张梅，请根据图片和文字提示写一篇50词左右的短文，可以适当发挥。
ill, worried see a doctor feel well, happy
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6．假设你是张伟，你明天将有一场英语测试，你很担心，你应该怎么做？请根据所给信息及提示词用英语写一写。(不少于4句话)
提示词：will；English test (英语测试)；should
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7．看图片，根据提示写一篇小作文。
提示：Clara生病了，今天没有去上学。她很难过。她必须去看医生，需要多喝水，多穿厚衣服，多运动，争取早日康复去上学。
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8．你生过病吗？生病时你是怎么做的？你的感觉如何？请你写一篇作文描述一次你生病的经历。
要求不少于五句话。
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9．请从下面两幅图中选择一幅图进行描写。
要求：①认真观察图片，展开想象，写出通顺的语篇。可以给图中人物命名，有总起句，有细节描写。
②作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。
③不少于五句话，注意书写规范。

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10．书面表达。
Lisa生病了。假如你是医生，请给她写一张便条，给她几条建议。不少于5句话。
参考词汇：cold, exercise, drink, vegetable, better
参考句型：You should …
Dear Lisa,
Don’t worry. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Doctor
《Unit 6 How do you feel？单元专项提升--书面表达 六年级上册 人教PEP版 （含答案解析）》参考答案
1．范文：
I have a fever today. I am not feeling well. I can’t go to school. I should see a doctor. My mum takes me to the hospital. The doctor gives me some medicine. And he tells me to wear warm clothes and do more exercise. I hope I can be better soon. I want to go to school earlier.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称联系自己生病时的感受，写一篇短文。然后再阐述感受，应该做什么。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：have a fever发烧，see a doctor看医生，hospital医院，medicine药，wear warm clothes穿暖和的衣服，do more exercise多做锻炼
参考句型：I …； My mum …；The doctor …； And he …；I hope I can ...
2．范文：
Oliver, don’t worry. I have some suggestions for you.
First, you should take a deep breath and count to ten. It can help you calm down. Then, you should try to talk to your family or your good friends. After that, I think you will feel better. Next, you can listen to music. Beautiful music can make you calm and happy.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求给Oliver一些建议，让他学会调节自己的情绪。可以从几方面建议：① 深呼吸并数到十；② 与家人或者好朋友交谈；③ 听听音乐。注意文章为一般现在时态并且满足字数要求。
参考词汇和句型
参考单词：suggestions 建议，take a deep breath深呼吸，count数，talk谈话，listen to music听音乐，calm down平静下来，feel better感觉好一些，happy开心的
参考句型：you should...；It can help you...； I think you will...；you can...；
3．范文：
Last Sunday was a sunny day. When I got up in the morning, I decided to visit my grandparents. I got there by bus at noon. They were happy to see me, and I was also very excited. In the afternoon, my farther asked me to help him water the flowers, and I was glad to see the flowers smiling in the wind.
In a word, what an unforgettable day!
【详解】题目解读：该题要求用第一人称写一写自己做过的难忘的事情，自己当时的感受如何。注意时态以一般过去时为主，要求条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范，不少于30词。
参考词汇和参考句型：
参考词汇：sunny晴朗的，get up起床，visit拜访，by bus乘公交车，happy开心的，excited激动的，water the flowers浇花，unforgettable难忘的
参考句型：When I…, I decided to…；I got there…；I was…；My father…；
4．参考例文：
A bad cold
I don’t feel well today. I think I have a bad cold. I am sad and my mother is worried about me. She takes me to see a doctor. The doctor asks me to wear warm clothes and take some medicine. I’m fine now. My mother doesn’t need to worry about me. I think I should do more exercise to keep healthy.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求以“A bad cold”为题写一篇作文，描述自己感冒时的感受。然后再阐述感冒时做了什么，和谁一起。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数要求。
参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：sad伤心的，be worried about担心，see a doctor看医生，wear warm clothes穿暖和的衣服，take some medicine吃些药，do more exercise多做锻炼，healthy健康的
参考句型：I don’t feel …；I think I …； I am …； She takes me to …；The doctor asks me to ...；My mother doesn’t need to ...；
5．范文：
I’m Zhang Mei. I was ill yesterday morning. So I didn’t go to school. My mother was very worried about me. Then we went to see a doctor together. I took some medicine. I should drink more water and have a good rest. Today I feel well. We are very happy now.
【详解】题干分析：该题目要求作为图片中的孩子张梅，根据图片和文字提示写一篇短文。根据所给图片和文字提示，可知文章大意为张梅生病了，妈妈很担心，去看医生后，感觉很好，张梅和妈妈很开心。时态用一般过去时和一般现在时，注意单词数量要符合要求。
参考词汇与句型
参考词汇：ill生病的；be worried about sb担心某人；see a doctor看医生；drink more water多喝水；have a good rest好好休息；feel well感觉良好；happy开心的
参考句型：I was ill...；My mother was...；We went to...；I should...；I feel...；
6．范文：
My name's Zhang Wei. I will have an English test tomorrow. I'm worried now. First, I should take a deep breath and count to ten. Then, I should go to bed early today. Tomorrow I should go to school early. Then，I should be careful. I think I'll do it well.
【详解】题目解读：该题目要求以第一人称来描写我考试前的心情以及我该怎么做，文章时态以一般现在时为主，并满足句子数量要求。
参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：
will 一般将来时的助动词，worried担心； take a deep breath深呼吸；careful认真的；English test 英语测试，
参考句型：
I will…；I should…；
【点睛】
7．参考范文：
Clara is not feeling well today. She has a bad cold. She is very sad. She doesn't go to school today. She should go to see a doctor, and she should drink more water, wear warm clothes and do more exercise. She wants to be healthy and go to school early.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求根据图片和提示写一篇小作文。然后再阐述需要做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态。
参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：have a bad cold患重感冒，go to school去上学，see a doctor看医生，wear warm clothes穿暖和的衣服，do more exercise多做锻炼，healthy健康的
参考句型：She is …；She doesn't …；She should …；She wants …；
【点睛】
8．范文：
I’m not feeling well today. I think l have a fever. And my nose hurts. I should see a doctor. The doctor asks me to have more hot water. I 'm so sad. I hope I can be better soon. After that I should do more exercise.
【详解】题干解读：
该题目要求描述一次你生病的经历。可以写生病时做的事情和感觉，以后要怎么办。注意满足句子数量要求。
参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：have a fever发烧，hurt受伤，see a doctor看医生，sad悲伤的。better更好的，do more exercise做更多运动
参考句型：I'm not feeling...；I think I have...；I should...；I hope I can...；The doctor asks me...
【点睛】
9．范文：
Lingling didn’t go to school yesterday, because she felt very tired. She had a fever and her mother took her to see a doctor. The doctor gave some medicine and told her to have a good rest at home. It was not too serious. Lingling feels much better now. She hopes she can be well soon.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求选择一幅图进行描写，可以给图中人物命名，有总起句，有细节描写。展开想象，作文内容要逻辑合理。句子要符合数量要求。
参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：tired累的，have a fever发烧，see a doctor看医生，medicine药，have a good rest好好休息，serious严重的，be well soon早日康复。
参考句型：Lingling didn't go to school yesterday, because she...；She had a...；The doctor gave her...；The doctor told her...；It was...；She feels...；She hope...
【点睛】
10．范文：
It’s very cold. You should wear warm clothes and do more exercise. You should drink hot water and stay in bed for a few days. Eat more vegetables and less meat, and you will feel better.
【详解】题干解读：该题目要求假设自己是医生用第一人称给Lisa写几条建议。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：cold冷的，warm温暖的，exercise锻炼，drink喝，vegetable蔬菜，meat肉，better更好，
参考句型：You should …；Eat more … and less …；
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