2026届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写真题课件(共31张PPT)
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(共31张PPT)
2025年新课标I卷
读后续写
《兄弟俩和一只狗》
Brainstorm:
Q：Have you ever had conflicts with your family
What’s the problem
How do you solve the problem
Lead-in
misunderstanding
inconsideration（不体谅）
generation gap
Indifference(冷漠）
miscommunication
ego(自我，固执己见）
expectation（期望过高）
jealousy(嫉妒)
disagreement
试题分析
写作思路
微技能-情绪&动作
范文赏析
目录
CONTENTS
01
02
03
04
2025
试题分析
高考英语读后续写真题分析
01
安排顺利，但突如其来的降雨迫使所有人进屋
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
who
when
where
what
"我"和妻子举办家庭聚会，妻子准备食物，"我"负责后院安排。 哥哥带着爱犬Toby前来，由于担心活泼的Toby会伤到小孩，"我"要求哥哥把狗留在室外。
How？
It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned.
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
我不让狗进屋，导致哥哥生气地带着淋湿的狗提前离开。
之后两个月哥哥拒绝联系，"我"经过内心挣扎，最终理解 哥哥的处境并主动登门道歉和解。
Read for basic information Who
when
where
what Gathering with family and friends, my brother came with his dog Toby. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house despite raining and my brother wasn’t happy and left. my conscience kept bothering me. I tried to__________________________________ (设身处地为哥哥着想). I reflected, wanting to______________(道歉).
I, my brother, my wife, Toby(a dog)
in the early summer.
our new home, brother’s home
put myself in my brother’s shoes
apologize
文章风格
人称：______________________; 时态：_________________
写作主题: ______________________________________________;
第一人称
过去式
亲情与关爱．
2025
写作思路
高考英语读后续写真题分析
02
I realized it was me who was at fault._______________________
本段要详细描写“我”是如何认识到自己错误的，最终内心的愧疚感必须转化为“必须去道歉”的具体行动决心。
① what was my fault
② how did I do
③what did I decide to do and what did we prepare
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.______
本段描写和解场面：抵达时的紧张、真诚的道歉、哥哥渐进的反应，并可以利用Toby的动作作为“催化剂”来打破僵局，最终以一个象征和解的开放式动作（如开门邀请）结尾。
① who answered the door What were their reaction
② what did I say and do What was my brother’s response
③what did we do together
④ what was the theme
2025
微技能
高考英语读后续写真题分析
03
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 1 ：
I realized it was me who was at fault._______________________
I let them leave in the rain without being understood.
I headed to my brother’s home.
I felt guilty (内疚的）.
词汇：guilty； ashamed；embarrassed； awkward.
How to show guilt in different ways
情绪描写
表情描写（五官）
动作描写（肢体语言）
语言描写
The Micro-skills training 表达微技能：情绪描写——内疚
词块和句的积累
scene 1:
Discovering the truth, the old man realized his misjudgment,
he was deeply ashamed of his behavior
A wave of ______ washed over him,
making it hard for him to breathe.
tip1 ：具体描写使文章内容更生动，更
有表现力。
shame
The next few days _________ his conscience being tortured deeply, feeling like sitting in pins and needles.(如坐针毡）
witnessed
scene 2:
The old man failed to keep his promise and didn’t know what to do next.
he was ashamed.
He _______his face with his hands in shame for what he had done.
covered
scene 3:
The old man misunderstood his son.
tip2 ：动作描写使表达多样化。
1.这只狗对他来说不仅仅是宠物，这是他的家人。
句子润色
The dog wasn’t just a pet for him; it was his family.
2.我的不体谅迫使他和托比冒雨离开，无人理解。
force sb to do sth
My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave
in the rain without being understood.
3.一想到这，我就感到内疚和羞愧，呼吸困难。
句子润色
At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame
washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe.
4.一个内心的声音一直在我的脑海中回荡，我不能再拖延这个道歉了。
keep echoing in my mind
An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I
couldn’t delay this apology any longer.
delay
5.当我告诉妻子我的计划时，她表示支持并建议烤一些哥哥最喜欢吃的饼干。
句子润色
When I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and
suggested baking some of my brother’s favorite biscuits
6.我抓起钥匙，跳进车里，毫不犹豫地往哥哥家去。
without hesitation/ without a second thought.
I grabbed my keys, jumped into the car and headed to
my brother’s home without a second thought.
bake
I realized it was me who was at fault. The dog wasn‘t just a pet for him; it was his family. My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave in the rain without being understood. At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe. An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I couldn’t delay this apology any longer. when I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and suggested baking some of my brother's favorite biscuits. I grabbed my keys, jumped into the car and headed to my brother's home without a second thought.
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 2 ：
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.______
My brother opened the door.
I apologize to my brother.
Toby wagged his tail.
We sat together in the living room.
tips: every creature has a soul/spirit (万物有灵）
道歉___________________ 打破僵局____________________
敲门___________________ 消失_____________________
开门___________________ 治愈伤口____________________
摇尾巴_________________
接饼干____________________
示意某人做某事______________________
深呼吸__________________________
心跳加快_______________________________________
The Micro-skills training 表达微技能2：动作
词块和句的积累
take a deep breath
apologize
Heart beat faster/heart pound
knock at the door
open the door
wag the tail
take the biscuits
signal sb to do sth
break the ice
disappear/fad
heal the wound
1.我的心因紧张砰砰直跳。我深吸一口气，敲了门。
句子润色
My heart pounded with nervousness. Taking a deep
breath, I knocked at the door.
2.托比冲了出来，疯狂地摇尾巴。
rush out
Toby rushed out, wagging his tail wildly.
3. 我看到了一个惊讶的表情，夹杂着哥哥的冷漠和恼怒。
句子润色
I saw a look/expression of surprise, mixed with
indifference and annoyance from my brother.
4. 我来真诚地道歉，非常抱歉给你造成的痛苦。
sincerely
I came to apologize sincerely. I’m so sorry for the
Pain I caused you.
Indifference and annoyance
5. 他接过饼干，示意我进去。
句子润色
He took the biscuits and signaled me to enter.
6. 当我们坐在舒适的客厅时，尴尬慢慢消失了，取而代之的是故事，笑声和泪水。
awkwardness
As we sat in the living room, the awkwardness
slowly faded, replaced by stories, laughter and tears.
7. 通过坦诚的对话，我们逐渐治愈了伤口，打破了我们之间的僵局。
句子润色
Through open-hearted conversations, we gradually
Healed the wound and broke the icy wall between us.
gradually
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. My heart pounded with nervousness. Taking a deep breath, I knocked at the door. The door creaked open and out rushed Toby, with his tail wagging wildly. Then I saw a look of surprise, mixed with indifference and annoyance from my brother. I took a deep breath and began, "Brother, I came to apologize sincerely. I’m so sorry for the pain I caused you. Toby is as much a part of your family as any human member, and I should have shown greater empathy." Almost instantly, his eyes wet with tears as he took the biscuits and signaled me to enter. As we sat in the cozy living room, the awkwardness slowly faded, replaced by stories, laughter and tears. Through open - hearted conversations, we gradually healed the wound and broke the icy wall between us, (proving that empathy, forgiveness and communication are the true bridges to mend broken bonds.)
Write
字迹工整
篇幅充实：____________________________;
语言丰富：___________________________________________;
内容得体：____________________________________________;
空白横线至多剩余一；
无基本语法错误；衔接得当；有形容词和副词；有从句和非谓语
情节向前发展；
符合原文逻辑；
体现作者写作目的
2025
范文赏析
高考英语读后续写真题分析
04
I realized it was me who was at fault. The dog wasn‘t just a pet for him; it was his family. My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave in the rain without being understood. At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe. An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I couldn’t delay this apology any longer. when I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and suggested baking some of my brother's favorite biscuits. I grabbed my keys, jumped into the car and headed to my brother's home without a second thought.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. My heart pounded with nervousness. Taking a deep breath, I knocked at the door. The door creaked open and out rushed Toby, with his tail wagging wildly. Then I saw a look of surprise, mixed with indifference and annoyance from my brother. I took a deep breath and began, "Brother, I’m so sorry for the pain I caused you. Toby is as much a part of your family as any human member, and I should have shown greater empathy." Almost instantly, his eyes wet with tears as he took the biscuits and signaled me to enter. As we sat in the cozy living room, the awkwardness slowly faded, replaced by stories, laughter and tears. Through open - hearted conversations, we gradually healed the wound and broke the icy wall between us.
亲情友情主题升华
As the saying goes, “Honesty is the best policy. /No pains, no gains. /A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
俗话说：“诚实是上策。/不劳无获。/患难见真情。”
2. It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.
就是在那一刻，我完全明白了家庭的重要性。
3. Their friendship grew stronger as they embraced each other's imperfections and stood by each other's side.
随着彼此接纳对方的不完美并始终相互支持，他们的友谊变得更加牢固。
4. There is no shame in admitting our mistakes or forgiving each other because we are a family.
承认错误或原谅彼此并不可耻，因为我们是一家人。
2025年新课标I卷
读后续写
《兄弟俩和一只狗》
Brainstorm:
Q：Have you ever had conflicts with your family
What’s the problem
How do you solve the problem
Lead-in
misunderstanding
inconsideration（不体谅）
generation gap
Indifference(冷漠）
miscommunication
ego(自我，固执己见）
expectation（期望过高）
jealousy(嫉妒)
disagreement
试题分析
写作思路
微技能-情绪&动作
范文赏析
目录
CONTENTS
01
02
03
04
2025
试题分析
高考英语读后续写真题分析
01
安排顺利，但突如其来的降雨迫使所有人进屋
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
who
when
where
what
"我"和妻子举办家庭聚会，妻子准备食物，"我"负责后院安排。 哥哥带着爱犬Toby前来，由于担心活泼的Toby会伤到小孩，"我"要求哥哥把狗留在室外。
How？
It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned.
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
我不让狗进屋，导致哥哥生气地带着淋湿的狗提前离开。
之后两个月哥哥拒绝联系，"我"经过内心挣扎，最终理解 哥哥的处境并主动登门道歉和解。
Read for basic information Who
when
where
what Gathering with family and friends, my brother came with his dog Toby. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house despite raining and my brother wasn’t happy and left. my conscience kept bothering me. I tried to__________________________________ (设身处地为哥哥着想). I reflected, wanting to______________(道歉).
I, my brother, my wife, Toby(a dog)
in the early summer.
our new home, brother’s home
put myself in my brother’s shoes
apologize
文章风格
人称：______________________; 时态：_________________
写作主题: ______________________________________________;
第一人称
过去式
亲情与关爱．
2025
写作思路
高考英语读后续写真题分析
02
I realized it was me who was at fault._______________________
本段要详细描写“我”是如何认识到自己错误的，最终内心的愧疚感必须转化为“必须去道歉”的具体行动决心。
① what was my fault
② how did I do
③what did I decide to do and what did we prepare
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.______
本段描写和解场面：抵达时的紧张、真诚的道歉、哥哥渐进的反应，并可以利用Toby的动作作为“催化剂”来打破僵局，最终以一个象征和解的开放式动作（如开门邀请）结尾。
① who answered the door What were their reaction
② what did I say and do What was my brother’s response
③what did we do together
④ what was the theme
2025
微技能
高考英语读后续写真题分析
03
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 1 ：
I realized it was me who was at fault._______________________
I let them leave in the rain without being understood.
I headed to my brother’s home.
I felt guilty (内疚的）.
词汇：guilty； ashamed；embarrassed； awkward.
How to show guilt in different ways
情绪描写
表情描写（五官）
动作描写（肢体语言）
语言描写
The Micro-skills training 表达微技能：情绪描写——内疚
词块和句的积累
scene 1:
Discovering the truth, the old man realized his misjudgment,
he was deeply ashamed of his behavior
A wave of ______ washed over him,
making it hard for him to breathe.
tip1 ：具体描写使文章内容更生动，更
有表现力。
shame
The next few days _________ his conscience being tortured deeply, feeling like sitting in pins and needles.(如坐针毡）
witnessed
scene 2:
The old man failed to keep his promise and didn’t know what to do next.
he was ashamed.
He _______his face with his hands in shame for what he had done.
covered
scene 3:
The old man misunderstood his son.
tip2 ：动作描写使表达多样化。
1.这只狗对他来说不仅仅是宠物，这是他的家人。
句子润色
The dog wasn’t just a pet for him; it was his family.
2.我的不体谅迫使他和托比冒雨离开，无人理解。
force sb to do sth
My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave
in the rain without being understood.
3.一想到这，我就感到内疚和羞愧，呼吸困难。
句子润色
At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame
washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe.
4.一个内心的声音一直在我的脑海中回荡，我不能再拖延这个道歉了。
keep echoing in my mind
An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I
couldn’t delay this apology any longer.
delay
5.当我告诉妻子我的计划时，她表示支持并建议烤一些哥哥最喜欢吃的饼干。
句子润色
When I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and
suggested baking some of my brother’s favorite biscuits
6.我抓起钥匙，跳进车里，毫不犹豫地往哥哥家去。
without hesitation/ without a second thought.
I grabbed my keys, jumped into the car and headed to
my brother’s home without a second thought.
bake
I realized it was me who was at fault. The dog wasn‘t just a pet for him; it was his family. My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave in the rain without being understood. At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe. An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I couldn’t delay this apology any longer. when I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and suggested baking some of my brother's favorite biscuits. I grabbed my keys, jumped into the car and headed to my brother's home without a second thought.
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 2 ：
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.______
My brother opened the door.
I apologize to my brother.
Toby wagged his tail.
We sat together in the living room.
tips: every creature has a soul/spirit (万物有灵）
道歉___________________ 打破僵局____________________
敲门___________________ 消失_____________________
开门___________________ 治愈伤口____________________
摇尾巴_________________
接饼干____________________
示意某人做某事______________________
深呼吸__________________________
心跳加快_______________________________________
The Micro-skills training 表达微技能2：动作
词块和句的积累
take a deep breath
apologize
Heart beat faster/heart pound
knock at the door
open the door
wag the tail
take the biscuits
signal sb to do sth
break the ice
disappear/fad
heal the wound
1.我的心因紧张砰砰直跳。我深吸一口气，敲了门。
句子润色
My heart pounded with nervousness. Taking a deep
breath, I knocked at the door.
2.托比冲了出来，疯狂地摇尾巴。
rush out
Toby rushed out, wagging his tail wildly.
3. 我看到了一个惊讶的表情，夹杂着哥哥的冷漠和恼怒。
句子润色
I saw a look/expression of surprise, mixed with
indifference and annoyance from my brother.
4. 我来真诚地道歉，非常抱歉给你造成的痛苦。
sincerely
I came to apologize sincerely. I’m so sorry for the
Pain I caused you.
Indifference and annoyance
5. 他接过饼干，示意我进去。
句子润色
He took the biscuits and signaled me to enter.
6. 当我们坐在舒适的客厅时，尴尬慢慢消失了，取而代之的是故事，笑声和泪水。
awkwardness
As we sat in the living room, the awkwardness
slowly faded, replaced by stories, laughter and tears.
7. 通过坦诚的对话，我们逐渐治愈了伤口，打破了我们之间的僵局。
句子润色
Through open-hearted conversations, we gradually
Healed the wound and broke the icy wall between us.
gradually
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. My heart pounded with nervousness. Taking a deep breath, I knocked at the door. The door creaked open and out rushed Toby, with his tail wagging wildly. Then I saw a look of surprise, mixed with indifference and annoyance from my brother. I took a deep breath and began, "Brother, I came to apologize sincerely. I’m so sorry for the pain I caused you. Toby is as much a part of your family as any human member, and I should have shown greater empathy." Almost instantly, his eyes wet with tears as he took the biscuits and signaled me to enter. As we sat in the cozy living room, the awkwardness slowly faded, replaced by stories, laughter and tears. Through open - hearted conversations, we gradually healed the wound and broke the icy wall between us, (proving that empathy, forgiveness and communication are the true bridges to mend broken bonds.)
Write
字迹工整
篇幅充实：____________________________;
语言丰富：___________________________________________;
内容得体：____________________________________________;
空白横线至多剩余一；
无基本语法错误；衔接得当；有形容词和副词；有从句和非谓语
情节向前发展；
符合原文逻辑；
体现作者写作目的
2025
范文赏析
高考英语读后续写真题分析
04
I realized it was me who was at fault. The dog wasn‘t just a pet for him; it was his family. My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave in the rain without being understood. At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe. An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I couldn’t delay this apology any longer. when I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and suggested baking some of my brother's favorite biscuits. I grabbed my keys, jumped into the car and headed to my brother's home without a second thought.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. My heart pounded with nervousness. Taking a deep breath, I knocked at the door. The door creaked open and out rushed Toby, with his tail wagging wildly. Then I saw a look of surprise, mixed with indifference and annoyance from my brother. I took a deep breath and began, "Brother, I’m so sorry for the pain I caused you. Toby is as much a part of your family as any human member, and I should have shown greater empathy." Almost instantly, his eyes wet with tears as he took the biscuits and signaled me to enter. As we sat in the cozy living room, the awkwardness slowly faded, replaced by stories, laughter and tears. Through open - hearted conversations, we gradually healed the wound and broke the icy wall between us.
亲情友情主题升华
As the saying goes, “Honesty is the best policy. /No pains, no gains. /A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
俗话说：“诚实是上策。/不劳无获。/患难见真情。”
2. It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.
就是在那一刻，我完全明白了家庭的重要性。
3. Their friendship grew stronger as they embraced each other's imperfections and stood by each other's side.
随着彼此接纳对方的不完美并始终相互支持，他们的友谊变得更加牢固。
4. There is no shame in admitting our mistakes or forgiving each other because we are a family.
承认错误或原谅彼此并不可耻，因为我们是一家人。