2026届高考二轮英语复习：读后续写 课件 (共15张PPT)
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2025高考一卷读后续写
一、如何读原材料：捕捉关键细节要点
阅读原材料时，需聚焦与人物情感、矛盾冲突及后续发展相关的细节，这些细节是续写的重要依据：
人物情感细节：
哥哥因狗被禁而不满离开，“Not a chance” 的回复体现其愤怒；“我” 从最初认为哥哥会 “get over it” 到良心不安，情感有转变；哥哥丧妻、健康不佳，对狗 Toby 极度依赖，Toby 是他的 “constant companion”。
矛盾冲突细节：
聚会时 “我” 担心 Toby 冲撞孩子，让其待在户外，雨后 “我” 仍不让狗进屋，导致哥哥无奈离开，这是核心矛盾。
潜在发展细节：
妻子两次提议 “我” 联系哥哥，为后续 “我” 的行动提供了侧面推动；Toby 活泼友好，可能在和解中发挥作用。
二、根据每段首句构思内容及语言生成
（一）第一段 “I realized it was me who was at fault.”
构思本段三到四个场景：
场景一：“我” 陷入回忆，意识到自己有错
场景二：“我” 回想哥哥的处境，明白自己忽视了他的感受
场景三：“我” 为自己没找折中办法让哥哥难堪而愧疚
场景四：妻子看出 “我” 的愧疚，准备饼干让 “我” 送去赔罪
从简单语言到完美句子，逐步添加描写：
场景一：
简单句：I knew I was wrong when I thought about that day.
逐步添加描写：As I reflected on what had happened that evening, shame washed over me.（添加时间状语从句 “as I reflected on...”，让回忆更具体；用 “shame washed over me” 这种情感描写，体现 “我” 强烈的愧疚，对应原材料中 “my conscience kept bothering me” 的情感）
场景二：
简单句：My brother was sad, and I didn't care about him.
逐步添加描写：My brother, already burdened with grief and loneliness, had only sought companionship in Toby, while I had prioritized my own comfort over his feelings.（用 “already burdened with grief and loneliness” 补充哥哥丧妻、健康差的处境，这是原材料中的关键细节；用 “while” 形成对比，突出 “我” 的自私，让愧疚更有依据）
场景三：
简单句：I didn't find a way to solve the problem, and he had no choice.
逐步添加描写：Instead of finding a compromise by setting up a space indoors for the dog, I had left him little choice. The thought of him spending these months being isolated filled me with deep regret.（“instead of finding a compromise” 具体指出 “我” 的错误做法，与原材料中 “我” 不让狗进屋的行为对应；“filled me with deep regret” 强化愧疚的情感描写）
场景四：
简单句：My wife saw I was sorry and baked biscuits for me to take to him.
逐步添加描写：Seeing this, my wife decided to do something, so she baked some biscuits for me to bring to my brother.（“seeing this” 衔接上文 “我” 的愧疚状态，让情节更连贯；“baked some biscuits” 为下一段 “我” 带饼干上门做铺垫）
第二段 “With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.”
构思本段三到四个场景：
场景一：“我” 带着饼干到达哥哥家门口，内心紧张
场景二：哥哥开门，看到 “我” 很惊讶
场景三：“我” 递上饼干并真诚道歉，哥哥态度有所缓和
场景四：Toby 出现活跃气氛，兄弟二人和解
从简单语言到完美句子，逐步添加描写：
场景一：
简单句：I took the biscuits and got to my brother's door. I was nervous.
逐步添加描写：With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. Hesitating, I raised my hand to knock, my heart pounding with uncertainty.（“with the biscuits...” 衔接上一段妻子烤饼干的情节；“hesitating”“my heart pounding with uncertainty” 通过动作和心理描写，体现 “我” 的紧张，符合去道歉时的状态）
场景二：
简单句：My brother opened the door and was surprised to see me.
逐步添加描写：When the door opened, my brother’s eyes widened in surprise.（“eyes widened in surprise” 通过神态描写，生动展现哥哥的惊讶，让场景更形象）
场景三：
简单句：I gave him the biscuits and said sorry. He didn't look so angry.
逐步添加描写：Before he could speak, I handed him the biscuits, saying sorry to him sincerely. The stiffness in his expression softened slightly.（“before he could speak” 体现 “我” 道歉的急切；“sincerely” 强调道歉的诚意；“the stiffness...softened slightly” 描写哥哥态度的变化，为和解铺垫）
场景四：
简单句：Toby came over. My brother smiled. We talked happily.
逐步添加描写：It was at this moment that Toby bounced over, wagging his tail merrily. A faint smile touched my brother’s lips, which spread into a brilliant smile. The next few hours witnessed us taking a walk outside and talking open-heartedly.（“bounced over, wagging his tail merrily” 描写 Toby 的活泼，呼应原材料中其 “friendly” 的特质；通过 “a faint smile...spread into a brilliant smile” 的神态变化，展现哥哥情绪的转变；“taking a walk outside and talking open-heartedly” 描绘和解后的场景，让结局更完整）
三、从句到篇：形成最终范文
将上述各场景的句子按照逻辑顺序串联起来，注意句子之间的衔接与过渡，形成连贯的段落，进而组成完整的范文。
第一段中，从 “我” 意识到错误的回忆，到分析自己对哥哥的忽视，再到因哥哥被孤立而愧疚，最后妻子准备饼干，各句围绕 “我” 的愧疚情感展开，衔接自然。
第二段中，从 “我” 到达哥哥家门口的紧张，到哥哥开门的惊讶，再到 “我” 道歉、哥哥态度缓和，最后 Toby 促成和解，情节逐步推进，逻辑清晰。
四、最终范文展示
I realized it was me who was at fault. As I reflected on what had happened that evening, shame washed over me. My brother, already burdened with grief and loneliness, had only sought companionship in Toby, while I had prioritized my own comfort over his feelings. Instead of finding a compromise by setting up a space indoors for the dog, I had left him little choice. The thought of him spending these months being isolated filled me with deep regret. Seeing this, my wife decided to do something, so she baked some biscuits for me to bring to my brother.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. Hesitating, I raised my hand to knock, my heart pounding with uncertainty. When the door opened, my brother’s eyes widened in surprise. Before he could speak, I handed him the biscuits, saying sorry to him sincerely. The stiffness in his expression softened slightly. It was at this moment that Toby bounced over, wagging his tail merrily. A faint smile touched my brother’s lips, which spread into a brilliant smile. The next few hours witnessed us taking a walk outside and talking open-heartedly.
2025高考一卷读后续写
一、如何读原材料：捕捉关键细节要点
阅读原材料时，需聚焦与人物情感、矛盾冲突及后续发展相关的细节，这些细节是续写的重要依据：
人物情感细节：
哥哥因狗被禁而不满离开，“Not a chance” 的回复体现其愤怒；“我” 从最初认为哥哥会 “get over it” 到良心不安，情感有转变；哥哥丧妻、健康不佳，对狗 Toby 极度依赖，Toby 是他的 “constant companion”。
矛盾冲突细节：
聚会时 “我” 担心 Toby 冲撞孩子，让其待在户外，雨后 “我” 仍不让狗进屋，导致哥哥无奈离开，这是核心矛盾。
潜在发展细节：
妻子两次提议 “我” 联系哥哥，为后续 “我” 的行动提供了侧面推动；Toby 活泼友好，可能在和解中发挥作用。
二、根据每段首句构思内容及语言生成
（一）第一段 “I realized it was me who was at fault.”
构思本段三到四个场景：
场景一：“我” 陷入回忆，意识到自己有错
场景二：“我” 回想哥哥的处境，明白自己忽视了他的感受
场景三：“我” 为自己没找折中办法让哥哥难堪而愧疚
场景四：妻子看出 “我” 的愧疚，准备饼干让 “我” 送去赔罪
从简单语言到完美句子，逐步添加描写：
场景一：
简单句：I knew I was wrong when I thought about that day.
逐步添加描写：As I reflected on what had happened that evening, shame washed over me.（添加时间状语从句 “as I reflected on...”，让回忆更具体；用 “shame washed over me” 这种情感描写，体现 “我” 强烈的愧疚，对应原材料中 “my conscience kept bothering me” 的情感）
场景二：
简单句：My brother was sad, and I didn't care about him.
逐步添加描写：My brother, already burdened with grief and loneliness, had only sought companionship in Toby, while I had prioritized my own comfort over his feelings.（用 “already burdened with grief and loneliness” 补充哥哥丧妻、健康差的处境，这是原材料中的关键细节；用 “while” 形成对比，突出 “我” 的自私，让愧疚更有依据）
场景三：
简单句：I didn't find a way to solve the problem, and he had no choice.
逐步添加描写：Instead of finding a compromise by setting up a space indoors for the dog, I had left him little choice. The thought of him spending these months being isolated filled me with deep regret.（“instead of finding a compromise” 具体指出 “我” 的错误做法，与原材料中 “我” 不让狗进屋的行为对应；“filled me with deep regret” 强化愧疚的情感描写）
场景四：
简单句：My wife saw I was sorry and baked biscuits for me to take to him.
逐步添加描写：Seeing this, my wife decided to do something, so she baked some biscuits for me to bring to my brother.（“seeing this” 衔接上文 “我” 的愧疚状态，让情节更连贯；“baked some biscuits” 为下一段 “我” 带饼干上门做铺垫）
第二段 “With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.”
构思本段三到四个场景：
场景一：“我” 带着饼干到达哥哥家门口，内心紧张
场景二：哥哥开门，看到 “我” 很惊讶
场景三：“我” 递上饼干并真诚道歉，哥哥态度有所缓和
场景四：Toby 出现活跃气氛，兄弟二人和解
从简单语言到完美句子，逐步添加描写：
场景一：
简单句：I took the biscuits and got to my brother's door. I was nervous.
逐步添加描写：With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. Hesitating, I raised my hand to knock, my heart pounding with uncertainty.（“with the biscuits...” 衔接上一段妻子烤饼干的情节；“hesitating”“my heart pounding with uncertainty” 通过动作和心理描写，体现 “我” 的紧张，符合去道歉时的状态）
场景二：
简单句：My brother opened the door and was surprised to see me.
逐步添加描写：When the door opened, my brother’s eyes widened in surprise.（“eyes widened in surprise” 通过神态描写，生动展现哥哥的惊讶，让场景更形象）
场景三：
简单句：I gave him the biscuits and said sorry. He didn't look so angry.
逐步添加描写：Before he could speak, I handed him the biscuits, saying sorry to him sincerely. The stiffness in his expression softened slightly.（“before he could speak” 体现 “我” 道歉的急切；“sincerely” 强调道歉的诚意；“the stiffness...softened slightly” 描写哥哥态度的变化，为和解铺垫）
场景四：
简单句：Toby came over. My brother smiled. We talked happily.
逐步添加描写：It was at this moment that Toby bounced over, wagging his tail merrily. A faint smile touched my brother’s lips, which spread into a brilliant smile. The next few hours witnessed us taking a walk outside and talking open-heartedly.（“bounced over, wagging his tail merrily” 描写 Toby 的活泼，呼应原材料中其 “friendly” 的特质；通过 “a faint smile...spread into a brilliant smile” 的神态变化，展现哥哥情绪的转变；“taking a walk outside and talking open-heartedly” 描绘和解后的场景，让结局更完整）
三、从句到篇：形成最终范文
将上述各场景的句子按照逻辑顺序串联起来，注意句子之间的衔接与过渡，形成连贯的段落，进而组成完整的范文。
第一段中，从 “我” 意识到错误的回忆，到分析自己对哥哥的忽视，再到因哥哥被孤立而愧疚，最后妻子准备饼干，各句围绕 “我” 的愧疚情感展开，衔接自然。
第二段中，从 “我” 到达哥哥家门口的紧张，到哥哥开门的惊讶，再到 “我” 道歉、哥哥态度缓和，最后 Toby 促成和解，情节逐步推进，逻辑清晰。
四、最终范文展示
I realized it was me who was at fault. As I reflected on what had happened that evening, shame washed over me. My brother, already burdened with grief and loneliness, had only sought companionship in Toby, while I had prioritized my own comfort over his feelings. Instead of finding a compromise by setting up a space indoors for the dog, I had left him little choice. The thought of him spending these months being isolated filled me with deep regret. Seeing this, my wife decided to do something, so she baked some biscuits for me to bring to my brother.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. Hesitating, I raised my hand to knock, my heart pounding with uncertainty. When the door opened, my brother’s eyes widened in surprise. Before he could speak, I handed him the biscuits, saying sorry to him sincerely. The stiffness in his expression softened slightly. It was at this moment that Toby bounced over, wagging his tail merrily. A faint smile touched my brother’s lips, which spread into a brilliant smile. The next few hours witnessed us taking a walk outside and talking open-heartedly.