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tip 1 杜绝写作中的常见错误
1.词性不明
【误】Those who strongly against the idea think animals will lose their freedom and nature if caged in the zoo.
【改】Those who are strongly against the idea think animals will lose their freedom and nature if caged in the zoo.
2.措辞不当
【误】Under the help of my classmates and teachers, I managed to make up for the lessons .
【改】With the help of my classmates and teachers, I managed to make up for the lessons .
3.用法不妥
【误】I'm delighted to tell you that great changes have been taken place here in my hometown.
【改】I'm delighted to tell you that great changes have taken place here in my hometown.
4.重复累赘
【误】The moment when I think of my motto, I'll become energetic and devote myself to what I am doing.
【改】When I think of my motto, I'll become energetic and devote myself to what I am doing.
5.句法混乱
【误】There is going to have an evening party in the meeting hall.
【改】There is going to be an evening party in the meeting hall.
6.中式英语
【误】My body is healthy.
【改】I am healthy.
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tip 2 一定要写够词数
1.追加成分
在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分,如定语(从句)、状语(从句)、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等,不仅增加了词数,而且使表达更清晰、准确,主题更突出。
【典例1】(开设英语电影欣赏课)建议多选择英语电影。
【原句】I suggest that the teacher should choose more English films.
【改】as a young student, I suggest that the teacher should choose more English films that appeal to us teenagers, [thus making learning English more interesting].
1.追加成分
【典例2】(演讲注意事项)要面带微笑;要讲慢些,讲清楚。
【原句】Be sure to wear a smile on your face. Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly.
【改】Be sure to wear a smile on your face which can help you feel relaxed.
Besides, remember to speak slowly and clearly so as to make the audience understand more easily and leave a good impression on the judges.
2.补加语句
根据行文走向,适当增加一些与主题相关的语句,或由要点衍生出的句子,既能起到前引后联的作用,又能补充一些相关信息,帮助读者理解所写内容。
【典例1】(提醒考生注意)要按时进入考场。
【原句】Be sure to enter the examination room on time.
+ (Whoever is late for the exam) is not allowed to enter.
任何迟到的人是不被允许进入的。
语料
2.补加语句
【典例2】(谈论善款用途)由慈善拍卖募捐得来的钱将送给急需的人。
【原句】The money collected in the charity sale will be sent to those in great need.
+Therefore, the money can not only protect them agasinst starvation, but also
3.添加过渡
根据行文或段落需要,在句与句或段与段之间适当增加一些承上启下的过渡性词语,以及过渡句,可以使文章浑然一体,同时也能充实文章。
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tip 3 适当运用高级词汇
第1招:“语”众不同,避免人云亦云
写作时恰当地使用他人可能想象不到的词汇或表达,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
【例1】I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems.
more than delighted
【例2】I should be free any time after school next week.
available
第2招:更新换代,避免重复
写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词汇,要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异,也是高级语法。
第3招:单词、短语,巧妙互用
一般情况下短语优先,应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动,可以“一词传神”。所以我们应把单词和短语巧妙互用。
【例1】I want to tell you something about my plan for the summer vacation and I'd like you to help me.
do me a favor
【例2】We can look at this problem in many ways.
view
第4招:高级表达,佳作之道
【例】This summer I want to do a part-time job in a foreign capital company, through which I would like to broaden my horizons, get some working experience and meet more new friends.
gain
intend to take up
【微积累】优化表达创造亮点
be bery important
be of great importance
I want to know...
I am eager to know...
I don't understand...
I have no idea about...
Could you...
Would you be so kind as to...
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tip 4 打造增分句式
一、利用复合句和非谓语动词,提升文章档次
1.增加亮点的定语从句
定语从句的应用可以非常有效地提升表达档次,在写作中如果我们可以把两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句,或者把并列句改为含有定语从句的复合句,这些都能为文章增加亮点。
【例】I have a good command of both Chinese and English. And it enables me to communicate with visitors fluently.
一、利用复合句和非谓语动词,提升文章档次
2.吸引眼球的状语从句
在英语写作中,状语从句是经常用到的句型,它的灵活运用能使作文更具吸引力。
【例】She has been teaching English for twenty years.
She is still passionate about teaching.
一、利用复合句和非谓语动词,提升文章档次
3.提升档次的名词性从句
名词性从句包括主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句,是写作中常见的高级表达方式。
【例】I'm writing to tell you a piece of good news (that there will be a volleyball match in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th).
一、利用复合句和非谓语动词,提升文章档次
4.言简意明的非谓语动词
恰当地运用非谓语动词,不仅使句型多样、句子活泼,而且读起来结构紧凑、言简意明。
【例】I know that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held at the gallery next month, so I am writing to apply to become a volunteer.
Knowing that.....,I am writing to apply to become a volunteer
二、灵活应用7大句式,力避句式单一、平铺直叙
1.强调句型
【例1】The match will be held in the gym.
【例2】I hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation.
【改】It is in the gym that the match will be held.
【改】I do hope you can accept my apology and understand my situation.
二、灵活应用7大句式,力避句式单一、平铺直叙
2.倒装句
【例1】We had hardly arrived at the farm when we saw many organges hanging from the branches.
【例2】You can learn Chinese well only if you take the above suggestions.
【改】Hardly had we arrived at the farm when we saw many organges hanging from the branches.
【改】Only if you take the above suggestions can you learn Chinese well.
二、灵活应用7大句式,力避句式单一、平铺直叙
3.省略句
【例】Bathed in sunshine, we sang and laughed while we were picking oranges.
二、灵活应用7大句式,力避句式单一、平铺直叙
4.虚拟语气
【例】If you can consider my application, I will be more than grateful.
【改】If you should consider my application, I would be more than grateful.
Should you consider my application, I would be more than grateful.
if条件状语从句的虚拟语气(对将来):从句(did/were to do/should do);主句(wcms do)
当虚拟条件状语从句的谓语部分有had, should, were,可以将其置于句首,省略if
二、灵活应用7大句式,力避句式单一、平铺直叙
5.with复合结构
【例1】You're an experienced player and you have a wonderful talent for volleyball.
【例2】As Double Ninth Day is appraoching, we are scheduled to visit the nursing home on that day.
with a wonderful talent for volleyball
With Double Ninth Day approaching
二、灵活应用7大句式,力避句式单一、平铺直叙
6.并列句型
【例】The team from Hongxing High School we will play against is great.
We should get fully prepared and need to be in a good state.
【改】The team from Hongxing High School we will play against is great, so we should get fully prepared and need to be in a good state.
二、灵活应用7大句式,力避句式单一、平铺直叙
7.it作形式主语或形式宾语的句型
【例】Hoping you can take my application into consideration.
“如果……我将不胜感激。”
I'd appreciate it if you could ...
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tip 5 巧妙衔接过渡
1、表示时间顺序的过渡性词汇
at the beginning/end of, in the end, afterwards, since then, meanwhile, after that, immediately, from then on, all of a sudden, at present, after a while, at the same time, in the past, to begin/start with
afterward
Not long afterward I will be the volunteer to welcome exchanged students from America.
不久之后
2、表示递进关系的过渡性词汇
what's more=moreover=furthermore=besides=in addition
to make things worse, worst of all
especially, in particular
3、表示并列和转折关系的过渡性词汇
however, while, otherwise, on the contrary, nevertheless,
despite=in spite of
after all
either... or..., neither...nor...
4、表示条件和让步关系的过渡性词汇
as(so) long as, unless, in case (of), on condition that
5、表示因果关系的过渡性词汇
because (of), now that, thanks to..., due to...,
as a result/consequence (of), therefore/thus, since
6、表示列举事实或观点过渡的词汇
such as, for example/instance, take... for example,
that is to say, as follows, in other words
on the one hand...on the other hand...
for one thing... for another...
personally, in my opinion/view, as far as I'm concerned, as for me
7、表示总结的过渡性词汇
in short, in brief, in a word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole,
in general, generally speaking, in conclusion
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tip 6 结构错落有致
一、句式多样,力避单一句式的罗列
二、合理分段,力避一段到底
短语优先原则
句式多变原则
三段式