读后续写 写作 课件(共16张PPT) -2026届高三英语二轮复习专项
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(共16张PPT)
Continuation Writing
读后续写 写作指导
汇报人姓名
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In a world where bad news often seems to dominate the headlines, it's easy to overlook the small acts of kindness that can melt our heart. Last week, I was lucky enough to experience such an act of kindness in person.
It was a particularly challenging week. Problems just kept arising everywhere and I struggled to deal with them. By the end of the week, I felt like I was at the boiling point. So I made a trip across town to my favorite store to let off the steam（释放压力）.
To my disappointment, I found the parking lot unexpectedly packed. To make things worse, a small vehicle next to where I was going to park stopped on the middle line between two parking spots. I had to squeeze my car in. I felt really mad when I finally parked my car and then realized I had left my wallet in the office. Thankfully, I still had small amount of cash in my bag. Thinking that it would be enough, I went inside and went straight to the shelves. Having found the few things I needed, I got in one of the long lines to check out.
As I waited, my impatience grew. After a stressful week, all I wanted to do was go home, but I was stuck in a long line that seemed to crawl at a snail's pace（像蜗牛一样缓慢爬行）. I felt increasingly stressed and kept shifting restlessly（不安地移动） while waiting for my turn.
At the moment, the old lady standing in front of me turned around and smiled at me. It seemed that she had sensed my anxiety. Awkwardly returning a smile, I kept waiting. After what seemed like an age, it was my turn, finally!
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The shopping assistant scanned all my items quickly and told me the total.
Just then, the old lady who was still wrapping her goods offered to help.
step 1: 串核心要点，理故事脉络
起（开端） Para 1&2
承（发展） Para 3
承（发展） Para 4
承（发展） Para 5
转（高潮） 续写第一段
合（结局） 续写第二段
Last week, I was lucky enough to experience such an act of kindness in person, when I made a trip across town to my favorite store to let off the steam.
I finally parked my car but realized I had left my wallet. Thankfully, I still had a little cash in my bag. I found some items and got in line to check out.
As I waited, my impatience grew. I felt increasingly stressed.
The old lady standing in front of me turned around and smiled at me. It was my turn, finally!
上周当我为了释放压力开车去最爱的店里购物时，我亲身体验了一次善举。
我最终停好车却发现没拿钱包；幸运的是包里有点现金。我选好物品排队结账。
越等越没耐心，越来越焦虑。
我前面的老妇人转身冲我笑。终于轮到我了。
售货员扫描所有物品并告诉我总钱数......
就在那时，老妇人正在把货物包好，她主动帮忙......
Step 2: 连环发问，构思续写情节
Para 1: The shopping assistant scanned all my items quickly and told me the total.
由提示首句，我们可以进行以下连环发问，构思情节：
连环发问 情节设想
我现在什么心情？为什么？
顺利买单了吗？为什么？
我接下来什么反应？做了什么？
我身后排队的人什么反应？
我感受如何？
想到马上就能回家了，感到很开心。
没有顺利买单，因为发现钱不够
尴尬地看着售货员，告诉她我不得不把两个物品放回货架上。
变得不耐烦，抱怨
绝望，无助
Step 2: 连环发问，构思续写情节
Para 2: Just then, the old lady who was still wrapping her goods offered to help.
由提示首句，我们可以进行以下连环发问，构思情节：
连环发问 情节设想
这个老妇人怎么帮我？
我的感受怎样？我做了什么？
她的反应是什么？
我学到了什么？
帮我付钱
感动，热泪盈眶，买单，感谢她，想要日后还钱
微笑，挥手作别
她的善举教我去帮助他人，传递爱
Step 3 细节刻画，针对性语料输入
Thinking that it would be enough, I went inside and went straight to the shelves. Having found the few things I needed, I got in one of the long lines to check out.（para. 3）
1. 回归原文总结亮点句式
向售货员投去一个尴尬的目光，我用一个很低的嗓音解释道：“抱歉，我除了将这两个物品放回货架别无选择。
现在分词短语作
伴随状语
Casting an embarrassed look at the shop assistant, I explained in a low voice: “Sorry, I guess I have no choice but to send the two items back to the shelf.”
Step 3 细节刻画，针对性语料输入
By the end of the week, I felt like I was at the boiling point.（para. 2）
After a stressful week, all I wanted to do was go home, but I was stuck in a long line that seemed to crawl at a snail's pace. (para. 4)
After what seemed like an age, it was my turn, finally!（para. 5）
1. 回归原文总结亮点句式
与此同时，我身后的人开始变得不耐心，他们的抱怨似乎像冰冷黑暗的海水向我袭来。
比喻句
Meanwhile, people behind me got impatient and their complaints seemed to sweep over me like cold, dark sea water.
在那一刻，我感觉像是漂浮在绝望的海洋里。
At that moment, I felt like I was floating in the sea of despair.
Step 3 细节刻画，针对性语料输入
她帮我付钱。
巧用动作链
1
2. 万能公式
她拿出钱包，递给我三美元，并且温和地说：......
She took out her wallet, handed me 3 dollars and uttered gently:
Step 3 细节刻画，针对性语料输入
Had it not been for sth. , I would never have done sth.
万能结尾
2
2. 万能公式
要不是因为......我就不会......
要不是因为她的善举，我就不会下定决心去帮助我身边那些有需要的人，去传递爱。
Had it not been for her act of kindness, I would never have made up my mind to help those in need around me, so as to pay it forward.
Step 5 分享展示，互相学习
Step 4 细节刻画，连句成文
The shopping assistant scanned all my items quickly and told me the total. On the thought of getting things I needed immediately and going home afterwards, a sense of relief washed through me. With a slight smile on my face, I was ready to pay, only to find that I was short of 3 dollars. Casting an embarrassed look at the shop assistant, I explained in a low voice: “Sorry, I guess I have no choice but to send the two items back to the shelf.” Meanwhile, people behind me got impatient and their complaints seemed to sweep over me like cold, dark sea water. At that moment, I felt like I was floating in the sea of despair.
a sample
Just then, the old lady who was still wrapping her goods offered to help. She took out her wallet, handed me 3 dollars and uttered gently: “Tough days don’t last. Tough people do.” Her kindness pulled at my heartstrings and saved my day, warm tears welling up in my eyes. After paying the bill, I expressed my sincere gratitude and asked for her phone number, intending to return the money, while she just smiled and waved goodbye. On the way home, calm and moved, I recalled the old lady and came to realize: had it not been for her act of kindness, I would never have made up my mind to help those in need around me, so as to pay it forward.
a sample
Homework
完善作文
积累背诵有用的表达
THANK YOU
Continuation Writing
读后续写 写作指导
汇报人姓名
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In a world where bad news often seems to dominate the headlines, it's easy to overlook the small acts of kindness that can melt our heart. Last week, I was lucky enough to experience such an act of kindness in person.
It was a particularly challenging week. Problems just kept arising everywhere and I struggled to deal with them. By the end of the week, I felt like I was at the boiling point. So I made a trip across town to my favorite store to let off the steam（释放压力）.
To my disappointment, I found the parking lot unexpectedly packed. To make things worse, a small vehicle next to where I was going to park stopped on the middle line between two parking spots. I had to squeeze my car in. I felt really mad when I finally parked my car and then realized I had left my wallet in the office. Thankfully, I still had small amount of cash in my bag. Thinking that it would be enough, I went inside and went straight to the shelves. Having found the few things I needed, I got in one of the long lines to check out.
As I waited, my impatience grew. After a stressful week, all I wanted to do was go home, but I was stuck in a long line that seemed to crawl at a snail's pace（像蜗牛一样缓慢爬行）. I felt increasingly stressed and kept shifting restlessly（不安地移动） while waiting for my turn.
At the moment, the old lady standing in front of me turned around and smiled at me. It seemed that she had sensed my anxiety. Awkwardly returning a smile, I kept waiting. After what seemed like an age, it was my turn, finally!
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The shopping assistant scanned all my items quickly and told me the total.
Just then, the old lady who was still wrapping her goods offered to help.
step 1: 串核心要点，理故事脉络
起（开端） Para 1&2
承（发展） Para 3
承（发展） Para 4
承（发展） Para 5
转（高潮） 续写第一段
合（结局） 续写第二段
Last week, I was lucky enough to experience such an act of kindness in person, when I made a trip across town to my favorite store to let off the steam.
I finally parked my car but realized I had left my wallet. Thankfully, I still had a little cash in my bag. I found some items and got in line to check out.
As I waited, my impatience grew. I felt increasingly stressed.
The old lady standing in front of me turned around and smiled at me. It was my turn, finally!
上周当我为了释放压力开车去最爱的店里购物时，我亲身体验了一次善举。
我最终停好车却发现没拿钱包；幸运的是包里有点现金。我选好物品排队结账。
越等越没耐心，越来越焦虑。
我前面的老妇人转身冲我笑。终于轮到我了。
售货员扫描所有物品并告诉我总钱数......
就在那时，老妇人正在把货物包好，她主动帮忙......
Step 2: 连环发问，构思续写情节
Para 1: The shopping assistant scanned all my items quickly and told me the total.
由提示首句，我们可以进行以下连环发问，构思情节：
连环发问 情节设想
我现在什么心情？为什么？
顺利买单了吗？为什么？
我接下来什么反应？做了什么？
我身后排队的人什么反应？
我感受如何？
想到马上就能回家了，感到很开心。
没有顺利买单，因为发现钱不够
尴尬地看着售货员，告诉她我不得不把两个物品放回货架上。
变得不耐烦，抱怨
绝望，无助
Step 2: 连环发问，构思续写情节
Para 2: Just then, the old lady who was still wrapping her goods offered to help.
由提示首句，我们可以进行以下连环发问，构思情节：
连环发问 情节设想
这个老妇人怎么帮我？
我的感受怎样？我做了什么？
她的反应是什么？
我学到了什么？
帮我付钱
感动，热泪盈眶，买单，感谢她，想要日后还钱
微笑，挥手作别
她的善举教我去帮助他人，传递爱
Step 3 细节刻画，针对性语料输入
Thinking that it would be enough, I went inside and went straight to the shelves. Having found the few things I needed, I got in one of the long lines to check out.（para. 3）
1. 回归原文总结亮点句式
向售货员投去一个尴尬的目光，我用一个很低的嗓音解释道：“抱歉，我除了将这两个物品放回货架别无选择。
现在分词短语作
伴随状语
Casting an embarrassed look at the shop assistant, I explained in a low voice: “Sorry, I guess I have no choice but to send the two items back to the shelf.”
Step 3 细节刻画，针对性语料输入
By the end of the week, I felt like I was at the boiling point.（para. 2）
After a stressful week, all I wanted to do was go home, but I was stuck in a long line that seemed to crawl at a snail's pace. (para. 4)
After what seemed like an age, it was my turn, finally!（para. 5）
1. 回归原文总结亮点句式
与此同时，我身后的人开始变得不耐心，他们的抱怨似乎像冰冷黑暗的海水向我袭来。
比喻句
Meanwhile, people behind me got impatient and their complaints seemed to sweep over me like cold, dark sea water.
在那一刻，我感觉像是漂浮在绝望的海洋里。
At that moment, I felt like I was floating in the sea of despair.
Step 3 细节刻画，针对性语料输入
她帮我付钱。
巧用动作链
1
2. 万能公式
她拿出钱包，递给我三美元，并且温和地说：......
She took out her wallet, handed me 3 dollars and uttered gently:
Step 3 细节刻画，针对性语料输入
Had it not been for sth. , I would never have done sth.
万能结尾
2
2. 万能公式
要不是因为......我就不会......
要不是因为她的善举，我就不会下定决心去帮助我身边那些有需要的人，去传递爱。
Had it not been for her act of kindness, I would never have made up my mind to help those in need around me, so as to pay it forward.
Step 5 分享展示，互相学习
Step 4 细节刻画，连句成文
The shopping assistant scanned all my items quickly and told me the total. On the thought of getting things I needed immediately and going home afterwards, a sense of relief washed through me. With a slight smile on my face, I was ready to pay, only to find that I was short of 3 dollars. Casting an embarrassed look at the shop assistant, I explained in a low voice: “Sorry, I guess I have no choice but to send the two items back to the shelf.” Meanwhile, people behind me got impatient and their complaints seemed to sweep over me like cold, dark sea water. At that moment, I felt like I was floating in the sea of despair.
a sample
Just then, the old lady who was still wrapping her goods offered to help. She took out her wallet, handed me 3 dollars and uttered gently: “Tough days don’t last. Tough people do.” Her kindness pulled at my heartstrings and saved my day, warm tears welling up in my eyes. After paying the bill, I expressed my sincere gratitude and asked for her phone number, intending to return the money, while she just smiled and waved goodbye. On the way home, calm and moved, I recalled the old lady and came to realize: had it not been for her act of kindness, I would never have made up my mind to help those in need around me, so as to pay it forward.
a sample
Homework
完善作文
积累背诵有用的表达
THANK YOU