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读后续写
做题思路与步骤
1.读原文 划要素 填表格
勾画:
人物 : ○
·关键动词:双横线
关键句子:单横线
·主人公形容词()
·时间、地点、副词〖〗)
2.读两段提示语和最后一段 ,定主题和故事走向
情节大致走向,会发生什么事情?
②:文章的主题是什么?
3.细读续写段1和续写段2提示句, 构思情节发展
①:人物的情感线?
②:根据情节发展,人物可能会做的事,动作有那些?
③:人物间的对话可能会有哪些,互动会有哪些?
④:可以通过哪些环境描写来衬托人物的心情,渲染氛围?
①:
4.5句定框架:3衔句,1结尾句,1升华句
Para1:首句衔接句(衔1),
结尾衔接句(衔2)
Para2:首句衔接句(衔3),
正向结尾句(1句)
文尾升华句(1升华)
读后续写扩句思路
读后续写可通过:一系列动作链的连接和环境描写,情绪描写,心理描写的合作来扩充写作内容
读后续写两段套用句
第一个续写段:I(he,she) was entirely overwhelmed with tremendous happiness/regret/sadness/shock when knowing what happened. .......just stand in place with not a single word slipped out of my/his/her throat. And all the things around seemed to wait for an answere, silently but hopefully. After a while, sb collected sb’s emotion, then sb said with a .......tone:“.......................................”
读后续写两段套用句
第二个续写段:
what happened was really a shock/surprise to sb. words spread in the air to create a mixture of happiness/sadness and joy/gloom. All the things seemed to be animated, they danced, singed to add a spark of enjoyment/misery to the place. .......picked onself up,and cleared one’s throat and said:“..................”. In the end, we laughed goodbye to each other. For us.......
读后续写主旨升华句
一.成长主题升华
第一类:追逐梦想
1.It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dream.
追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会,充分利用机会,你就有机会实现梦想。
第二类:克服困难促"改变(坚持)
The journey to success is not smooth. It's full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don'tgive up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties we will surely achieve our goal eventually.通往成功的路不会是一帆风顺的,充满挑战和艰辛。我们要要敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难,我们最终会宾现我们的目标。
二.亲情(友情)主题升华
1.Love and care for the one you love every single day of your life.You may think what you did is just a small deed but it may mean a lot. Some relations are made to last longer but they still need to benurtured with love and care.爱和关心你生命中每一天所爱的人。你可能认为你所做的只是一件小事,但它可能意味着很多。有些关系会持续更长时间,但它们仍然需要用爱和关怀来培育。
三.积极态度主题升华
1.The more you feed your mind with positive thoughts,the more you can attract great things into your life
你越用积极的的思想充实你的头脑,你就越能吸引积极的事物进入你的生活
四。逆境,改变,希望 主题升华
Success is to be measured not so much the position that one has reached in life as by the obstacles which he has overcomed
成功与其说是由一个人在生活中所达到的地位来衡量,不如说由他所克服的困难来衡量
五.助人为乐(善良)
with a small gesture,we can changed a person’s life,for better for worse. No act of kindness,however small,will go waste.
通过一个小小的善举我们可以改变一个人的生活,无论好坏,无论多么微小的善举都不会被浪费。
六.脱困
We will meet various challenges in life, but we should never give up easily。Just as the famous saying goes,sunshine always comes after the rain.
人生总会遇到各种挑战,但是不要轻易放弃.正如名言所说,风雨后总能见阳光。
七.人与自然(动物,自然环境,植物等)
There is no doubt that human activities has an extensive effect on the planet,however people can certainly live in harmany with nature as long as we keep a kind heart
毫无疑问人类活动对地球有着广泛的影响,然而人类一定能和自然和谐共存的,只要我们持有一颗善良的心。
感恩
Learn to cherish the things and person that once have inspired you when you are in trouble .With each step forward, the support from others brings us overwhelming courage to sparkle in the dark time
当你身处困境时,要学会珍惜那些曾经激励过你的人和事。每向前一步,他人的支持都会给我们带来无尽的勇气,在黑暗时刻闪耀光芒。
冒险
The adventure had come to en end,however the memories would last a lifetime.They had explored the unknown and discovered not just the new lands but new parts of themselves.
冒险已经结束,但记忆将终生难忘。他们探索了未知领域,不仅发现了新大陆,还发现了自己的新方面
承担责任
1.Responsibility is not just a burden, but a privilege that shapes our character and defines our actions."
责任不仅仅是负担,它是一种塑造我们性格、定义我们行为的特权。
2.True maturity is not reached until one learns to shoulder the burdens of responsibility without complaint."
真正的成熟是在学会毫无怨言地承担起责任的重担时才达到的。
消除误会
This conversation cleared the air,leaving no room for doubt. They had learned the value of open communication and the importance of understanding each other’s perspectives.
这次对话消除了误会,没有留下任何怀疑的空间。他们学会了开放沟通的价值和理解彼此观点的重要性。