读后续写 课件(共14张PPT)-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项
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(共14张PPT)
读后续写
十句五定法练习之容貌焦虑篇
Eggs, bacon, bagels and croissants（羊角面包）, her favourite meal of the day sat right in front of her telling her to have more, probably just this one day. Her hand reached out for the last croissant; “STOP” said her mind, “PLEASE” begged the nineteen-year-old heart. Annie could feel the tires around her waist, weighing her down, emotionally and physically. She pulled her hand back, eyeing the inviting croissant, which would have been hers if only she had not decided to follow her dream, a dream which seemed beyond her reach.
But there she was, she wanted it, and wanted it badly, a fantasy of a teenager to fit into the beautiful peacock green bikini（比基尼）. A trip had been planned, to the sunny beaches, by a group of friends, and the trip included her. She used to sit depressed listening to her slim friends discuss about the kind of clothes they purchased, and how short each of their skirts were, and how beautiful they looked. She wanted to see their expression change from surprise to admiration, so she decided to go on diet and take fitness courses.
Weeks passed and her patience started to die away. The fat was stubborn and refused to melt fast, but the time went fast. No matter how less she ate, she still looked awfully plump (丰满的), which annoyed her and she was ready to call it quits. She sat on her bed and wept an entire evening ignoring her dinner. Her tears dried up, and she lay down on her bed staring at the ceiling, letting random thoughts pass through her mind, then she heard two women talking outside her window. She heard one woman saying: “My child is special, and every child is god’s gift. It doesn’t matter what’s on the outside, inner self is what matters.”
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Curious, Annie got up and looked out of her window. ______________
Annie turned her eyes away from the scene and saw her own figure in the mirror .___________________________
Step1.读原文，理情节
when
where
who
what
why
friends, two women
Annie
Just one day
She wanted to amaze her friends by wearing a bikini during the trip.
At her home
She tried to lose weight, but failed
beginning
climax/conflict
ending
rising action
falling action/solution
Read for action and emotion
be fat and attracted by food
dream to wear bikini to amze friends
fail to lose weight
depressed
P1
desiring
hopeless
P2
P3
change of mind
accept herself/inner beauty
step2
十句五定构思情节
十句五定法 展开剧情
十句五定法
读后续写要求续写词数为150词左右。若一句话平均15词，则10句话就够了。
“十句五定”通常指10句话中5句的位置及内容已定。
para1 para2
第1句：接着para1给出首句（心理/动作链） 第6句：接着para2给出首句（心理/动作链）
第2句：语言描写（人物对话或心理话） 第7句：语言描写
第3句：动作描写 第8句：动作描写
第4句：情绪描写 第9句：故事结局
第5句：根据para2首句来写 第10句：主题升华
十句五定法 展开剧情
(para1) Curious, Annie got up and looked out of her window.
第1句话：Annie看到了什么？（那人何出此言？）
第5句话：Annie意识到自己在意外表很肤浅。
(para2)Annie turned her eyes away from the scene and saw her own figure in the mirror.
第2-4句：动作，语言（人物对话）心理描写
十句五定法 展开剧情
(para2)Annie turned her eyes away from the scene and saw her own figure in the mirror.。
第6句话：Annie意识到自己虽然胖，但是却拥有健康
第9句话：Annie从此不再身材焦虑（故事的结局）
第10句话：内在美才是真正重要的东西（情感的升华）
第7-8句：继续动作/语言/心理活动描写
"Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart."
— Kahlil Gibran
"美不在容颜，而在心中闪耀的光芒。" —— 纪伯伦
"Beauty begins the moment you decide to be yourself."
— Coco Chanel
"当你决定做自己的那一刻，美便开始了。"
—— 可可·香奈儿
step3
写出具体10句话
Para 1
S1: 两名女人站在下面的花园里，一个是她的邻居Mrs.Thompson, 牵着一个明显残疾的女孩，另一个人是是个陌生人。
S2：小女孩似乎很开心，笑声在空中回荡。
S3: Mrs.Thompson温暖地笑着说道：“她也许看起来不像其他孩子，但是她有一颗金子般的心。”
S4：Mrs.Thompson的话回响在Annie耳中，一种耻辱感涌上她的心头。
S5：她太聚焦于改变自己的身体而忘记了感激自己拥有的东西。
Para 2
S1：数月以来她第一次没有自我批评。
S2：她突然想到她不需要穿进那条孔雀绿的比基尼才会变得漂亮。
S3：美丽不是关于减肥，而是关于拥抱真正的自己。
S4: 从那天起，Annie一周锻练几次，但只是为了保持健康，而不是获得关注。
S5：正如可可·香奈儿说的，"当你决定做自己的那一刻，美便开始了。"
Filled with curiosity, Annie got up and looked out the window. She saw her neighbor Mrs. Thompson standing in the garden below with a visibly disabled little girl and a stranger. The child seemed utterly happy, her laughter ringing through the air. "She may not look like other children," Mrs. Thompson said warmly, "but she has a heart of gold." Her words echoed in Annie's ears, bringing with them a wave of shame - she'd been so focused on changing her body that she'd forgotten to appreciate what she already had.
For the first time in months, Annie looked at herself without criticism. It suddenly struck her that she didn’t need to fit into that peacock-green bikini to be beautiful. True beauty wasn’t about losing weight, but about embracing who she truly was. From that day on, Annie exercised a few times a week—not for attention, but simply to stay healthy. As Coco Chanel once said, "Beauty begins the moment you decide to be yourself."
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读后续写
十句五定法练习之容貌焦虑篇
Eggs, bacon, bagels and croissants（羊角面包）, her favourite meal of the day sat right in front of her telling her to have more, probably just this one day. Her hand reached out for the last croissant; “STOP” said her mind, “PLEASE” begged the nineteen-year-old heart. Annie could feel the tires around her waist, weighing her down, emotionally and physically. She pulled her hand back, eyeing the inviting croissant, which would have been hers if only she had not decided to follow her dream, a dream which seemed beyond her reach.
But there she was, she wanted it, and wanted it badly, a fantasy of a teenager to fit into the beautiful peacock green bikini（比基尼）. A trip had been planned, to the sunny beaches, by a group of friends, and the trip included her. She used to sit depressed listening to her slim friends discuss about the kind of clothes they purchased, and how short each of their skirts were, and how beautiful they looked. She wanted to see their expression change from surprise to admiration, so she decided to go on diet and take fitness courses.
Weeks passed and her patience started to die away. The fat was stubborn and refused to melt fast, but the time went fast. No matter how less she ate, she still looked awfully plump (丰满的), which annoyed her and she was ready to call it quits. She sat on her bed and wept an entire evening ignoring her dinner. Her tears dried up, and she lay down on her bed staring at the ceiling, letting random thoughts pass through her mind, then she heard two women talking outside her window. She heard one woman saying: “My child is special, and every child is god’s gift. It doesn’t matter what’s on the outside, inner self is what matters.”
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Curious, Annie got up and looked out of her window. ______________
Annie turned her eyes away from the scene and saw her own figure in the mirror .___________________________
Step1.读原文，理情节
when
where
who
what
why
friends, two women
Annie
Just one day
She wanted to amaze her friends by wearing a bikini during the trip.
At her home
She tried to lose weight, but failed
beginning
climax/conflict
ending
rising action
falling action/solution
Read for action and emotion
be fat and attracted by food
dream to wear bikini to amze friends
fail to lose weight
depressed
P1
desiring
hopeless
P2
P3
change of mind
accept herself/inner beauty
step2
十句五定构思情节
十句五定法 展开剧情
十句五定法
读后续写要求续写词数为150词左右。若一句话平均15词，则10句话就够了。
“十句五定”通常指10句话中5句的位置及内容已定。
para1 para2
第1句：接着para1给出首句（心理/动作链） 第6句：接着para2给出首句（心理/动作链）
第2句：语言描写（人物对话或心理话） 第7句：语言描写
第3句：动作描写 第8句：动作描写
第4句：情绪描写 第9句：故事结局
第5句：根据para2首句来写 第10句：主题升华
十句五定法 展开剧情
(para1) Curious, Annie got up and looked out of her window.
第1句话：Annie看到了什么？（那人何出此言？）
第5句话：Annie意识到自己在意外表很肤浅。
(para2)Annie turned her eyes away from the scene and saw her own figure in the mirror.
第2-4句：动作，语言（人物对话）心理描写
十句五定法 展开剧情
(para2)Annie turned her eyes away from the scene and saw her own figure in the mirror.。
第6句话：Annie意识到自己虽然胖，但是却拥有健康
第9句话：Annie从此不再身材焦虑（故事的结局）
第10句话：内在美才是真正重要的东西（情感的升华）
第7-8句：继续动作/语言/心理活动描写
"Beauty is not in the face; beauty is a light in the heart."
— Kahlil Gibran
"美不在容颜，而在心中闪耀的光芒。" —— 纪伯伦
"Beauty begins the moment you decide to be yourself."
— Coco Chanel
"当你决定做自己的那一刻，美便开始了。"
—— 可可·香奈儿
step3
写出具体10句话
Para 1
S1: 两名女人站在下面的花园里，一个是她的邻居Mrs.Thompson, 牵着一个明显残疾的女孩，另一个人是是个陌生人。
S2：小女孩似乎很开心，笑声在空中回荡。
S3: Mrs.Thompson温暖地笑着说道：“她也许看起来不像其他孩子，但是她有一颗金子般的心。”
S4：Mrs.Thompson的话回响在Annie耳中，一种耻辱感涌上她的心头。
S5：她太聚焦于改变自己的身体而忘记了感激自己拥有的东西。
Para 2
S1：数月以来她第一次没有自我批评。
S2：她突然想到她不需要穿进那条孔雀绿的比基尼才会变得漂亮。
S3：美丽不是关于减肥，而是关于拥抱真正的自己。
S4: 从那天起，Annie一周锻练几次，但只是为了保持健康，而不是获得关注。
S5：正如可可·香奈儿说的，"当你决定做自己的那一刻，美便开始了。"
Filled with curiosity, Annie got up and looked out the window. She saw her neighbor Mrs. Thompson standing in the garden below with a visibly disabled little girl and a stranger. The child seemed utterly happy, her laughter ringing through the air. "She may not look like other children," Mrs. Thompson said warmly, "but she has a heart of gold." Her words echoed in Annie's ears, bringing with them a wave of shame - she'd been so focused on changing her body that she'd forgotten to appreciate what she already had.
For the first time in months, Annie looked at herself without criticism. It suddenly struck her that she didn’t need to fit into that peacock-green bikini to be beautiful. True beauty wasn’t about losing weight, but about embracing who she truly was. From that day on, Annie exercised a few times a week—not for attention, but simply to stay healthy. As Coco Chanel once said, "Beauty begins the moment you decide to be yourself."
范文
Thank
You