Unit 3 Family matters Writing 课件(共13张PPT)-2025-2026学年外研版（2019）必修第一册
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| 名称 | Unit 3 Family matters Writing 课件(共13张PPT)-2025-2026学年外研版（2019）必修第一册 |  | |
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(共13张PPT)
B1U3 Family
matters
Period 6 Writing
When and where, who did what for what purpose
Read the journal entry and answer the questions.
Read for the main idea
Ten years ago, the author cooked the scrambled eggs（炒鸡蛋） in the kitchen at home for her mother to celebrate her birthday!
Work in groups, discuss the questions.
mother and daughter
at the mother’s birthday ten years ago
The author wanted to surprise her mother with home-made scrambled eggs on her mother’s birthday. Unluckily, the eggs were burnt, but they ended up laughing about it and eating them all anyway.
at home
Because it shows the love between the author and her mother.
Read for the plot.
Para1:The big day eventually came, and I rushed into the kitchen early in eagerness to surprise my mother.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para2:Everything went smoothly(平稳地). Unexpectedly, I didn’t realize my mum had gazed at me leaning against(斜靠在) the door.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Continuation writing
1. 做炒鸡蛋
2. 做的过程（心情、动作）
3. 如何体现一切进展顺利？——成品(样子，香味，形状等描写)
1. 母亲的反应
2. 吃炒鸡蛋
3. 主题升华
Family love makes life happy, and we should treasure it and show gratitude to our family members.
How to make your description vivid（生动的）
Action description动作描写
open the fridge打开冰箱
fetch the food取食物
turn on the stove扭开炉灶
pour …into…把…倒入…
add the scallion to..把葱花加到…
stir the eggs搅打鸡蛋
scent the air使空气弥漫香味
动作链
pan平底锅
salt盐
apron围裙
plate盘子
dish碟子
bowl碗
cupboard碗橱
参考名词
The big day eventually came, and I rushed into the kitchen early in eagerness to surprise my mother. I first opened the fridge and fetched two eggs and some scallion. Next, I broke the eggs in a bowl and cut up the scallion. And then I mixed them with some oil and salt and stirred them together hard. Afterwards, I turned on the stove and put the pan on it. When the pan got hot, I poured some oil into it , and when the oil boiled I put the mixture into it and scrambled the eggs . After a while, it scented the morning air. Looking at the scrambled eggs in the pan, my heart was filled with joy and pride.
衔接句1：冲去厨房接下来做什么？
衔接句2：如何体现一切进展顺利？——成品(样子，香味，形状等描写)
Everything went smoothly. Unexpectedly, I didn’t realize my mum had gazed at me leaning against the door. “What are you doing here, my dear “ she asked softly. I put the scrambled eggs on a plate, showed it to her and said, “Happy birthday ,my dear mother! Hope you will enjoy the breakfast made of love! This time, the scrambled eggs are not burnt !”. Hearing my words, she gave me a warm hug with a smile of happiness on her face. I woke father up and we sang a birthday song for my mother while having breakfast. Laughter lingered around the room and she said it was the best breakfast she had ever had. Family love makes life happy, and we should treasure it and show gratitude to our family members.
衔接句3：母亲的反应。
主旨升华句：家人的爱，珍惜感恩。
动作公式1：a，b and c
动作公式2：V1-ing..., 主语+V2
Emotional description 情绪描写
1. Hearing these words, she couldn’t control herself anymore.
听到这些话，她再也不能控制自己。
2. A tear or two slipped from my eyes, rolled down her cheeks and splashed on the bowl.
一两滴眼泪从眼睛里滑落，顺着脸颊，溅在碗上。
3. She fondly gathered into her arms with a smile of happiness on her face.
她开心地拥抱了我，脸上洋溢着幸福的笑容。
4.She felt a great sense of happiness welling up in her heart and surging through her.
她感到一股强烈的幸福感在她内心升起、奔涌着。
5. Laughter lingered around the room.
笑声在房间里萦绕。
6. She said it was the best breakfast that she had ever had .
她说这是她吃过的最好的早餐
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para.1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. ___________________________________________________________________________
Para.2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. __________________________________________________________________________
1.What did the twins do
2. What is the mother’s reaction
3. What was the result
1.What was the father’s reaction
2.What did his father do？
3. What was the result
Paragraph 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Judging from his expression, It was evident that he was about to explode after seeing the mess. But to their relief, having learned their plan, he knelt down, patted them on their shoulders and said, “Time is on our side. Let's do it together.” Without the slightest hesitation, they started their battle once again. Before long, with the experience of failure and an extra helping hand, the breakfast was ready, giving off pleasant smell. Hurt and tired though Jeff was, his heart was filled with nothing else but joy and pride.
Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “HappyMother's Day!”They uttered the words with one voice. Under no circumstances had their mother expected her day would start with such a lovely gift. The smell of the food filled the bedroom,which, as if by magic, had turned into the most lovely place in the world. But then, the mother's throat tightened when she noticed Jeff”s hand. She understood the whole thing at once and felt a warm current welling up in her heart and surging through her. She fondly gathered the twins into her arms. “Thank you, my honey. Thank you,” the happiest mother in the world kept repeating these words.
As the twins looked around them in dismay, their father appeared in the doorway. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their crestfallen faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked back to bed.
The twins prepared the breakfast tray, adding a card they had made, and then carried the tray upstairs to their parents' bedroom. The twins woke their mother up by hugging her and yelling Happy Mother's Day, darling Mummy! Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook Father who was pretending to snore. He feigned astonishment when he saw the breakfast Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each other secretly.
注意问题：
1. 想好四个衔接句。
2. 减少对话描写。能用动作就不要用对话。
3. 时态：谓语动词+ed ；注意不规则动词的变形。
4. 不增加分段。
5. 每段比重平均分配。
6. 注意把握时间。原则上30分钟包括读-思-写的过程。
7. 有意识地注意书写
B1U3 Family
matters
Period 6 Writing
When and where, who did what for what purpose
Read the journal entry and answer the questions.
Read for the main idea
Ten years ago, the author cooked the scrambled eggs（炒鸡蛋） in the kitchen at home for her mother to celebrate her birthday!
Work in groups, discuss the questions.
mother and daughter
at the mother’s birthday ten years ago
The author wanted to surprise her mother with home-made scrambled eggs on her mother’s birthday. Unluckily, the eggs were burnt, but they ended up laughing about it and eating them all anyway.
at home
Because it shows the love between the author and her mother.
Read for the plot.
Para1:The big day eventually came, and I rushed into the kitchen early in eagerness to surprise my mother.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para2:Everything went smoothly(平稳地). Unexpectedly, I didn’t realize my mum had gazed at me leaning against(斜靠在) the door.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Continuation writing
1. 做炒鸡蛋
2. 做的过程（心情、动作）
3. 如何体现一切进展顺利？——成品(样子，香味，形状等描写)
1. 母亲的反应
2. 吃炒鸡蛋
3. 主题升华
Family love makes life happy, and we should treasure it and show gratitude to our family members.
How to make your description vivid（生动的）
Action description动作描写
open the fridge打开冰箱
fetch the food取食物
turn on the stove扭开炉灶
pour …into…把…倒入…
add the scallion to..把葱花加到…
stir the eggs搅打鸡蛋
scent the air使空气弥漫香味
动作链
pan平底锅
salt盐
apron围裙
plate盘子
dish碟子
bowl碗
cupboard碗橱
参考名词
The big day eventually came, and I rushed into the kitchen early in eagerness to surprise my mother. I first opened the fridge and fetched two eggs and some scallion. Next, I broke the eggs in a bowl and cut up the scallion. And then I mixed them with some oil and salt and stirred them together hard. Afterwards, I turned on the stove and put the pan on it. When the pan got hot, I poured some oil into it , and when the oil boiled I put the mixture into it and scrambled the eggs . After a while, it scented the morning air. Looking at the scrambled eggs in the pan, my heart was filled with joy and pride.
衔接句1：冲去厨房接下来做什么？
衔接句2：如何体现一切进展顺利？——成品(样子，香味，形状等描写)
Everything went smoothly. Unexpectedly, I didn’t realize my mum had gazed at me leaning against the door. “What are you doing here, my dear “ she asked softly. I put the scrambled eggs on a plate, showed it to her and said, “Happy birthday ,my dear mother! Hope you will enjoy the breakfast made of love! This time, the scrambled eggs are not burnt !”. Hearing my words, she gave me a warm hug with a smile of happiness on her face. I woke father up and we sang a birthday song for my mother while having breakfast. Laughter lingered around the room and she said it was the best breakfast she had ever had. Family love makes life happy, and we should treasure it and show gratitude to our family members.
衔接句3：母亲的反应。
主旨升华句：家人的爱，珍惜感恩。
动作公式1：a，b and c
动作公式2：V1-ing..., 主语+V2
Emotional description 情绪描写
1. Hearing these words, she couldn’t control herself anymore.
听到这些话，她再也不能控制自己。
2. A tear or two slipped from my eyes, rolled down her cheeks and splashed on the bowl.
一两滴眼泪从眼睛里滑落，顺着脸颊，溅在碗上。
3. She fondly gathered into her arms with a smile of happiness on her face.
她开心地拥抱了我，脸上洋溢着幸福的笑容。
4.She felt a great sense of happiness welling up in her heart and surging through her.
她感到一股强烈的幸福感在她内心升起、奔涌着。
5. Laughter lingered around the room.
笑声在房间里萦绕。
6. She said it was the best breakfast that she had ever had .
她说这是她吃过的最好的早餐
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para.1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. ___________________________________________________________________________
Para.2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. __________________________________________________________________________
1.What did the twins do
2. What is the mother’s reaction
3. What was the result
1.What was the father’s reaction
2.What did his father do？
3. What was the result
Paragraph 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Judging from his expression, It was evident that he was about to explode after seeing the mess. But to their relief, having learned their plan, he knelt down, patted them on their shoulders and said, “Time is on our side. Let's do it together.” Without the slightest hesitation, they started their battle once again. Before long, with the experience of failure and an extra helping hand, the breakfast was ready, giving off pleasant smell. Hurt and tired though Jeff was, his heart was filled with nothing else but joy and pride.
Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “HappyMother's Day!”They uttered the words with one voice. Under no circumstances had their mother expected her day would start with such a lovely gift. The smell of the food filled the bedroom,which, as if by magic, had turned into the most lovely place in the world. But then, the mother's throat tightened when she noticed Jeff”s hand. She understood the whole thing at once and felt a warm current welling up in her heart and surging through her. She fondly gathered the twins into her arms. “Thank you, my honey. Thank you,” the happiest mother in the world kept repeating these words.
As the twins looked around them in dismay, their father appeared in the doorway. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their crestfallen faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked back to bed.
The twins prepared the breakfast tray, adding a card they had made, and then carried the tray upstairs to their parents' bedroom. The twins woke their mother up by hugging her and yelling Happy Mother's Day, darling Mummy! Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook Father who was pretending to snore. He feigned astonishment when he saw the breakfast Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each other secretly.
注意问题：
1. 想好四个衔接句。
2. 减少对话描写。能用动作就不要用对话。
3. 时态：谓语动词+ed ；注意不规则动词的变形。
4. 不增加分段。
5. 每段比重平均分配。
6. 注意把握时间。原则上30分钟包括读-思-写的过程。
7. 有意识地注意书写