【期末专项培优】应用文写作（含解析）2025-2026学年高一上学期英语期末必刷卷人教版（2019）
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期末专项培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假设你是校英文报的记者．上周六上午，你校高二学生刘伟去参加英语演讲比赛的路上，发现一位妇女从自行车上摔了下来并且右腿流血较多．刘伟对其进行了简单的急救处理并将其送到了医院，但却错过了英语演讲比赛．请你就刘伟的事迹写一篇新闻报道，并号召全校师生向他学习．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．报道的标题已给出，不计入总词数．
A Heroic Teen Missed a Competition but Saved an Injured Woman
2．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问如何保持健康．请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议．内容要点如下：
1．合理饮食；
2．加强锻炼；
3．保证睡眠．
注意：1．词数：100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；邮件的开头已写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy．__________________．
3．上周五你校组织学生去自然灾害体验馆参加了一次活动，让学生在虚拟现实（VR）环境中体验自然灾害。请你为校微信公众号写一篇英文新闻稿，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动过程；
3.活动反响。
提示词：自然灾害体验馆 （Natural Disaster Experience Hall）
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
4．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信说近期要来北京，希望你为他设计一个三天的旅行计划，推荐一些有中国特色的活动。请根据以下提示写一封回信。
旅行计划
时间 活动
第一天 参观故宫
第二天 参观中国美术馆
第三天 …
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：故宫the Forbidden City 中国美术馆the National Art Museum of China
Dear Peter，
I'm so happy to hear you're coming to Beijing.___________
Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David计划暑期到中国旅游，请你给他写封邮件推荐一个城市，并说明推荐理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
Long time no see.__________.
Yours，
Li Hua
6．假如你是李华，你班计划在艺术周期间表演英语情景剧 （sitcom），并想请对此颇有兴趣的外教Mr.Smith给予指导。现请你给他写一邮件，内容包括：
1.提出请求；
2.指导内容；
3.期待回复。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
7．假设你是李华，你捡到了你校交换生Mike的书包，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.如何发现书包的；
2.送还书包的时间和地点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
8．假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动．请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．参加人员；
2．跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3．活动反响．
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答．
A Cross﹣Country Running Race
_____________
9．你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择："长江之行"或者"泰山之旅"．Jim来信希望你能给些建议．请你给他回信，内容包括：
1．你建议的线路；2．你的理由；3．你的祝愿．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
10．假定你是李华，你校英语角拟举行一次英文演讲比赛，需要两名主持人（host）．你对此很感兴趣．请你用英语给外籍负责人布朗先生写一封自荐信，内容包括：
1．个人基本情况；
2．口语水平；
3．相关经验．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mr．Brown，
___________________
Yours，
Li Hua
11．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况．请给他回信，内容包括：
1．学校的体育场馆；2．主要的运动项目；3．你喜欢的项目；
注意：1．词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．3．参考词汇：体育馆gym
Dear Peter，
_________
Yours，
Li Hua
12．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy想来你的家乡旅游，希望你能提供建议。请你给她回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.推荐一处旅游景点并作简要介绍。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
13．假定你是红星中学李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 热爱体育运动，他将作为交换生到你校学习一年。请你给他写一封邮件，主要内容包括：
（1）介绍你校体育课程及活动；
（2）推荐一项中国传统体育项目。
注意： （1）词数 100 左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school on a one﹣year exchange program.
_________
Yours，
Li Hua
14．假定你是李华，得知暑假回国的外教Jeff家乡遭受了飓风灾害，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.询问近况表示慰问；
2.询问其是否能如期主持开学举行的英语节活动；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
15．如今，游泳已成为各校争相开展的体育活动．假定你是李华，你校组建了游泳俱乐部．请给在我校留学的朋友Peter写信，邀请他加入．内容包括：
1．组建俱乐部的目的； 2．俱乐部的主要活动； 3．报名的时间和地点；
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
期末专项培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假设你是校英文报的记者．上周六上午，你校高二学生刘伟去参加英语演讲比赛的路上，发现一位妇女从自行车上摔了下来并且右腿流血较多．刘伟对其进行了简单的急救处理并将其送到了医院，但却错过了英语演讲比赛．请你就刘伟的事迹写一篇新闻报道，并号召全校师生向他学习．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．报道的标题已给出，不计入总词数．
A Heroic Teen Missed a Competition but Saved an Injured Woman
Last Saturday， Liu Wei， a Senior Two student of our school， helped an injured woman． On that day， Liu Wei was on his way to the hall where the English speaking competition took place when a woman fell off her bicycle carelessly． The woman struggled to get to her feet but failed， because her right leg was bleeding badly． Without any hesitation， Liu Wei came to her assistance． He applied pressure to the bleeding area and then tied his handkerchief firmly to the wound． Finally， he took the woman to the hospital nearby． It was after it that he realized it was too late for the competition， he missed it．
In order to give people in need a hand， Liu Wei gave up the competition． As his fellow schoolmates and teachers， we should learn from him．
【考点】提纲作文；报道．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
高分句型一： On that day， Liu Wei was on his way to the hall where the English speaking competition took place when a woman fell off her bicycle carelessly．那天，刘伟在去参加英语演讲比赛的大厅的路上，一个妇女不小心从自行车上摔了下来．本句中where引导的是定语从句，先行词是hall，在定语从句中做状语，所以用where引导．
高分句型二：In order to give people in need a hand， Liu Wei gave up the competition．为了给需要帮助的人，刘薇放弃了竞争．本句中in order to是固定短语"为了"，在句中做目的状语，give up是固定短语"放弃"．
【解答】书面表达
Last Saturday， Liu Wei， a Senior Two student of our school， helped an injured woman． On that day， Liu Wei was on his way to the hall where the English speaking competition took place when a woman fell off her bicycle carelessly．（高分句型一） The woman struggled to get to her feet but failed， because her right leg was bleeding badly． Without any hesitation， Liu Wei came to her assistance． He applied pressure to the bleeding area and then tied his handkerchief firmly to the wound． Finally， he took the woman to the hospital nearby． It was after it that he realized it was too late for the competition， he missed it．【描述事情的经过】
In order to give people in need a hand， Liu Wei gave up the competition． （高分句型二）As his fellow schoolmates and teachers， we should learn from him．【学些刘伟的精神】
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
2．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问如何保持健康．请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议．内容要点如下：
1．合理饮食；
2．加强锻炼；
3．保证睡眠．
注意：1．词数：100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；邮件的开头已写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy．__________________．
【考点】提纲作文；身心健康．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：As you know，we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet．
译文：如你所知，我们青少年正在经历一个快速的成长和发展，这需要一个健康和均衡的饮食支持．
分析：which引导定语从句．
高分句型二：Only in this way can you keep fit．
译文：只有这样你才能保持健康．
分析：only+介词短语，后面接部分倒装句．
【解答】Dear Jack，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me about how to keep healthy．I'd like to give you some advice．（写信目的）
As you know，we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet．【高分句型一】In order to get enough energy and nutrients，we need a variety of food，such as fish and meat，especially fresh vegetables and fruits．You'd better cut down the food rich in sugar or fat．（加强锻炼） Besides，you should take physical exercise regularly．For example，you can play basketball or take a walk after school． （加强锻炼）What's more，having enough sleep is of great importance．Therefore，I advise that you have at least eight hours sleep every day and not stay up too late．Only in this way can you keep fit．【高分句型二】（保证睡眠）
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变他化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
3．上周五你校组织学生去自然灾害体验馆参加了一次活动，让学生在虚拟现实（VR）环境中体验自然灾害。请你为校微信公众号写一篇英文新闻稿，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动过程；
3.活动反响。
提示词：自然灾害体验馆 （Natural Disaster Experience Hall）
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】To help students learn more about natural disasters，our school organized an activity in the Natural Disaster Experience Hall last Friday.
During the activity，students learned some basic ways to deal with different natural disasters.They were also exposed to VR environment where they deeply felt the strength and danger of natural pared to the knowledge they had learned in class，what they experienced in person was more practical and impressive.Undoubtedly，the students had their survival skills boosted and they were deeply convinced of the importance of staying in harmony with nature.
This activity turned out an enormous success and all the participants spoke highly of it.
【分析】高分句型一 To help students learn more about natural disasters，our school organized an activity in the Natural Disaster Experience Hall last Friday.
翻译：为了帮助学生更多地了解自然灾害，我们学校上周五在自然灾害体验厅组织了一次活动。
分析：句中使用了to do不定式作目的状语。
高分句型二 Compared to the knowledge they had learned in class，what they experienced in person was more practical and impressive.
翻译：与他们在课堂上学到的知识相比，他们亲身经历的更实际、更令人印象深刻。
分析：句中使用了what引导的主语从句。
【解答】To help students learn more about natural disasters，our school organized an activity in the Natural Disaster Experience Hall last Friday.【高分句型一】（活动目的）
During the activity，students learned some basic ways to deal with different natural disasters.They were also exposed to VR environment where they deeply felt the strength and danger of natural pared to the knowledge they had learned in class，what they experienced in person was more practical and impressive.【高分句型二】Undoubtedly，the students had their survival skills boosted and they were deeply convinced of the importance of staying in harmony with nature.（活动过程）
This activity turned out an enormous success and all the participants spoke highly of it.（活动反响）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
4．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信说近期要来北京，希望你为他设计一个三天的旅行计划，推荐一些有中国特色的活动。请根据以下提示写一封回信。
旅行计划
时间 活动
第一天 参观故宫
第二天 参观中国美术馆
第三天 …
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：故宫the Forbidden City 中国美术馆the National Art Museum of China
Dear Peter，
I'm so happy to hear you're coming to Beijing.___________
Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】图表作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Peter，
I'm so happy to hear you're coming to Beijing.I think it is a good chance to experience Chinese culture.Here is the travel plan I prepare for you.
On Friday you may go to the Forbidden City.There you will visit the old impressive royal houses.The National Art Gallery is a good choice for the next day，because you can appreciate Chinese traditional paintings.If you have interest in the life of local people，I strongly suggest you visit Laoshe Tea House on Sunday.Besides drinking tea and enjoying Beijing Opera，you can chat with people there，which will surely be interesting and relaxing.
Please let me know if you need more information.
Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The National Art Gallery is a good choice for the next day，because you can appreciate Chinese traditional paintings.
译文：国家美术馆是第二天的好选择，因为你可以欣赏中国传统绘画。
分析：这句话使用because引导原因状语从句。
高分句型二：Besides drinking tea and enjoying Beijing Opera，you can chat with people there，which will surely be interesting and relaxing.
译文：除了喝茶、欣赏京剧外，你还可以和那里的人聊天，那一定会很有趣，很放松。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm so happy to hear you're coming to Beijing.I think it is a good chance to experience Chinese culture.Here is the travel plan I prepare for you. （写信目的）
On Friday you may go to the Forbidden City.There you will visit the old impressive royal houses. （第一天参观故宫）The National Art Gallery is a good choice for the next day，because you can appreciate Chinese traditional paintings. 【高分句型一】（第二天参观中国美术馆）If you have interest in the life of local people，I strongly suggest you visit Laoshe Tea House on Sunday.Besides drinking tea and enjoying Beijing Opera，you can chat with people there，which will surely be interesting and relaxing. 【高分句型二】（第三天去老舍茶社）
Please let me know if you need more information.
Looking forward to meeting you soon!（盼望）（乐意提供信息）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
5．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David计划暑期到中国旅游，请你给他写封邮件推荐一个城市，并说明推荐理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
Long time no see.__________.
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】主题式．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear David，
Long time no see.Hearing that you're planning a trip to China，I feel excited to recommend a city that you can't miss.
Beijing，located in the north of China，is not only the capital of our country，but also a world﹣famous tourist destination.The city is a perfect combination of old and new.You can see thousands of historical sites as well as modern buildings.Rich and colorful culture will also leave you a deep impression.
A letter is too short to include all the greatness and beauty of Beijing.Looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Hearing that you're planning a trip to China，I feel excited to recommend a city that you can't miss.
分析：句子里，现在分词Hearing that you're planning a trip to China作原因状语；代指先行词a city，关系词that引导定语从句you can't miss.
翻译：听说你计划来中国旅行，我很高兴能推荐一个你不能错过的城市。
高分句型二
Beijing，located in the north of China，is not only the capital of our country，but also a world﹣famous tourist destination.
分析：句子里，修饰名词Beijing，过去分词located in the north of China作定语。
翻译：北京位于中国北方，不仅是我国的首都，也是世界著名的旅游目的地。
【解答】Dear David，
Long time no see.Hearing that you're planning a trip to China，I feel excited to recommend a city that you can't miss.【高分句型一】（点明主题）
Beijing，located in the north of China，is not only the capital of our country，but also a world﹣famous tourist destination.【高分句型二】The city is a perfect combination of old and new.You can see thousands of historical sites as well as modern buildings.Rich and colorful culture will also leave you a deep impression.（推荐北京，说明理由）
A letter is too short to include all the greatness and beauty of Beijing.Looking forward to your coming.（期待到来）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
6．假如你是李华，你班计划在艺术周期间表演英语情景剧 （sitcom），并想请对此颇有兴趣的外教Mr.Smith给予指导。现请你给他写一邮件，内容包括：
1.提出请求；
2.指导内容；
3.期待回复。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望；兴趣爱好．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mr.Smith，
I am Li Hua，monitor of Class 3.Our class plans to perform an English sitcom during the art cycle aimed at providing the students with a stage where we can show ourselves and arousing our interest in English.Knowing you are interested in sitcoms，we would like to invite you to give us some guidance.
We hope you can give us some precious advice on the pronunciation and performance skills，which we are not good at.We would feel honored if you could accept our invitation.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Our class plans to perform an English sitcom during the art cycle aimed at providing the students with a stage where we can show ourselves and arousing our interest in English.
分析：句子里，修饰名词the art cycle，过去分词aimed at providing the students with a stage where we can show ourselves and arousing our interest in English.作定语。
翻译：我们班计划在艺术周期内表演一部英语情景喜剧，这个艺术周旨在为学生提供一个舞台，让我们展示自己，激发我们对英语的兴趣。
高分句型二
Knowing you are interested in sitcoms，we would like to invite you to give us some guidance.
分析：句子里，现在分词Knowing you are interested in sitcoms作原因状语。
翻译：知道您对情景喜剧感兴趣，我们想请您给我们一些指导。
【解答】Dear Mr.Smith，
I am Li Hua，monitor of Class 3.Our class plans to perform an English sitcom during the art cycle aimed at providing the students with a stage where we can show ourselves and arousing our interest in English. 【高分句型一】Knowing you are interested in sitcoms，we would like to invite you to give us some guidance.【高分句型二】（提出请求）
We hope you can give us some precious advice on the pronunciation and performance skills，which we are not good at.We would feel honored if you could accept our invitation.（指导内容）
I am looking forward to your coming.（期待回复）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲类书面表达主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔。此类试题中有较多的文字说明，实际上规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避。考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和语汇上的单调，因此平时要多练习，活用语言，使文章流畅。
7．假设你是李华，你捡到了你校交换生Mike的书包，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.如何发现书包的；
2.送还书包的时间和地点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mike，
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you that I found your lost schoolbag on the playground early in the morning when I was running. To find out who it belonged to， I opened it and found your name and email address.
Can you tell me when it is convenient for you to fetch it？ Is it OK if we make it at six this afternoon？ I have taken it to my classroom， which is on the fifth floor of the green building. Please write to me soon.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：To find out who it belonged to， I opened it and found your name and email address.
译文：为了找出它是谁的，我打开它，找到了你的名字和电子邮件地址。
分析：这句话使用不定式作目的状语，who引导宾语从句。
高分句型二：I have taken it to my classroom， which is on the fifth floor of the green building.
译文：我把它带到了我的教室，在绿色建筑的五楼。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you that I found your lost schoolbag on the playground early in the morning when I was running. To find out who it belonged to， I opened it and found your name and email address. 【高分句型一】（如何发现书包的）
Can you tell me when it is convenient for you to fetch it？ Is it OK if we make it at six this afternoon？ I have taken it to my classroom， which is on the fifth floor of the green building. 【高分句型二】Please write to me soon.（送还书包的时间和地点）
Best wishes.（祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
8．假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动．请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．参加人员；
2．跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3．活动反响．
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答．
A Cross﹣Country Running Race
_____________
【考点】提纲作文；报道．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：Participants included students from all grades and teaching staff，who were enthusiastic about track sports．
译文：参与者包括来自各个年级的学生和对田径运动热情高涨的教职员工．
分析：这句话使用who引导非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二：Having interviewed some participants after the race，we found that the event was well received．
译文：在赛后采访了一些参赛者，我们发现这次比赛受到了好评．
分析：这句话使用现在分词的完成式作时间状语．
【解答】A Cross﹣Country Running Race
To promote healthy lifestyles in the campus and around the city，Red Star Secondary School organized a cross﹣country running race last Sunday．（活动目的）
Participants included students from all grades and teaching staff，who were enthusiastic about track sports．【高分句型一】（参加人员） The route of the race started from the school's gate and ended at the foot of the Southern Mountain．（跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下） Having interviewed some participants after the race，we found that the event was well received．【高分句型二】 "I felt like I have achieved something great when I reached the goal line，" said a 9th﹣grade student．（活动反响）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
9．你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择："长江之行"或者"泰山之旅"．Jim来信希望你能给些建议．请你给他回信，内容包括：
1．你建议的线路；2．你的理由；3．你的祝愿．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
高分句型一：Learning that your school is going to organize a trip to China，I am more than delighted to offer you some suggestions．得知贵校将组织一次中国之行，我很高兴能给您一些建议．本句中learning是现在分词在句中做状语．
高分句型二：Last but not least，there are many sacred temples，which offer you the opportunity to be exposed to Chinese culture in person at the foot of mountain．最后但并非最不重要，有许多神庙，提供您在山脚亲自接触中国文化的机会．本句中which引导的是非限制性定语从句，先行词是temple，在从句中做主语．
【解答】Dear Jim，
Learning that your school is going to organize a trip to China，I am more than delighted to offer you some suggestions．（高分句型一）【愿意提供建议】
As far as I am concerned，the best choice is visiting Mountain Tai．Here are the reasons．First you can either go sightseeing by cable or climb the mountain and enjoy the nature at the same time．Besides，you can gain a sense of achievement when admiring the breathtaking scenery at the top of the mountain．Last but not least，there are many sacred temples，which offer you the opportunity to be exposed to Chinese culture in person at the foot of mountain．（高分句型二）【建议选择的路线及理由】
Wish my advice turn to be useful and hope you have a nice trip in China．Best wishes to you and your classmates !【表达祝愿】
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
10．假定你是李华，你校英语角拟举行一次英文演讲比赛，需要两名主持人（host）．你对此很感兴趣．请你用英语给外籍负责人布朗先生写一封自荐信，内容包括：
1．个人基本情况；
2．口语水平；
3．相关经验．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mr．Brown，
___________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；兴趣爱好．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：I've learnt that two hosts are needed for the coming English speech contest．
译文：我知道即将到来的英语演讲比赛需要两位主持人．
分析：that引导宾语从句．
高分句型二：As a hard﹣working student，I have a good command of English，especially spoken English．
译文：作为一个勤奋的学生，我的英语很好，尤其是口语．
分析：as意为"作为"，especially"尤其"．
【解答】Dear Mr．Brown，
I've learnt that two hosts are needed for the coming English speech contest．【高分句型一】I would like very much to be one of them．（写信目的）
I'm Li Hua，a handsome boy of about 180 cm in height．（个人基本情况）As a hard﹣working student，I have a good command of English，especially spoken English．【高分句型二】I have won first prizes in many English speech contests．（口语水平）What's more，I have been the host of English parties since I entered junior high school．It gave me much experience in hosting big events．So I believe I can do the job perfectly．（相关经验）
I'm looking forward to your early reply．（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇图表类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
11．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况．请给他回信，内容包括：
1．学校的体育场馆；2．主要的运动项目；3．你喜欢的项目；
注意：1．词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．3．参考词汇：体育馆gym
Dear Peter，
_________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；文娱与体育．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．To begin with，a fabulous new stadium has been built up，which has become the new landmark in our school．
句子里，修饰先行词a fabulous new stadium ，关系词 which引导非限制性定语从句 has become the new landmark in our school．
首先，一个漂亮的新体育场已经建成，它已经成为我们学校的新地标．
2．I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life．
句子里，since引导原因状语从句 it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life．
我对篮球很感兴趣，因为它给了我力量去面对生活中的挑战．
【解答】Dear Peter，
I am delighted to hear from you．You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch．（点明主题）
To begin with，a fabulous new stadium has been built up，which has become the new landmark in our school． 【高分句型一】Moreover，with the stadium set up，a wide range of sports events are able to be held，of which ping﹣pong，football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity．As for me，I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life．【高分句型二】（介绍学校的体育场馆；主要的运动项目；以及自己喜欢的项目）
All in all，I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself．（提出邀请）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数．写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程．积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效．
12．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy想来你的家乡旅游，希望你能提供建议。请你给她回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.推荐一处旅游景点并作简要介绍。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Lucy，
I'm so glad to receive your email and know you're coming to my hometown in the winter vacation.You are welcome to my hometown，Xuzhou.I'd like to offer you some information to make your journey enjoyable.
Xuzhou，located in the north of Jiangsu Province，is a beautiful city with a long history.In recent years，it has taken on a new look.There are many places of interest here，among which Yunlong Mountain Scenic Spot is a must﹣see place.Yunlong Mountain is covered with green trees throughout the year，and at its foot lies Yunlong Lake，surrounded by varieties of flowers and differently﹣shaped trees，impressing visitors with its beauty forever，attracting millions of visitors from home and abroad each year.I hope this is helpful.
I look forward to seeing you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Xuzhou，located in the north of Jiangsu Province，is a beautiful city with a long history.
分析：句子里，修饰名词Xuzhou，过去分词located in the north of Jiangsu Province作定语。
翻译：徐州，位于江苏省北部，是一个美丽的城市，有着悠久的历史。
高分句型二
There are many places of interest here，among which Yunlong Mountain Scenic Spot is a must﹣see place.
分析：句子里，修饰先行词many places of interest here，介词among后的关系词which引导非限制性定语从句Yunlong Mountain Scenic Spot is a must﹣see place.
翻译：这里有许多名胜古迹，其中云龙山风景名胜区是必看之地。
【解答】Dear Lucy，
I'm so glad to receive your email and know you're coming to my hometown in the winter vacation.You are welcome to my hometown，Xuzhou.I'd like to offer you some information to make your journey enjoyable.（表示欢迎）
Xuzhou，located in the north of Jiangsu Province，is a beautiful city with a long history.【高分句型一】In recent years，it has taken on a new look.There are many places of interest here，among which Yunlong Mountain Scenic Spot is a must﹣see place. 【高分句型二】Yunlong Mountain is covered with green trees throughout the year，and at its foot lies Yunlong Lake，surrounded by varieties of flowers and differently﹣shaped trees，impressing visitors with its beauty forever，attracting millions of visitors from home and abroad each year.I hope this is helpful. （推荐一处旅游景点并作简要介绍）
I look forward to seeing you soon!（期盼见面）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文的选材范围很广，内容简单易懂，且多是考生熟悉的话题。这类题型的主要特点是要点明确，范围具体。但考生也容易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和词汇上的单调，甚至写 出结构不完整的句子。
13．假定你是红星中学李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 热爱体育运动，他将作为交换生到你校学习一年。请你给他写一封邮件，主要内容包括：
（1）介绍你校体育课程及活动；
（2）推荐一项中国传统体育项目。
注意： （1）词数 100 左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school on a one﹣year exchange program.
_________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；文娱与体育．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school on a one﹣year exchange program.Since you enjoy sports，I would like to introduce the sports courses in our school as well as a Chinese traditional sport.
First of all，for each class in our school，there are two to three periods of PE class every week.Basic courses，including playing basketball and running，are offered to students.Besides，the school sports meeting is held annually，which students can take part in according to their interests.What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu，a traditional sport in China.Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.
Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Since you enjoy sports，I would like to introduce the sports courses in our school as well as a Chinese traditional sport.
分析：句子里，Since 引导原因状语从句you enjoy sports.
翻译：因为你喜欢运动，我想介绍一下我们学校的体育课程以及一项中国传统体育项目。
高分句型二
What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu，a traditional sport in China.
分析：句子里，What 引导主语从句I recommend to you to learn；Chinese kungfu和a traditional sport in China是同位语。
翻译：我向你推荐的是中国功夫，这是中国的一项传统运动。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school on a one﹣year exchange program.Since you enjoy sports，I would like to introduce the sports courses in our school as well as a Chinese traditional sport.【高分句型一】（点明书信主题）
First of all，for each class in our school，there are two to three periods of PE class every week.Basic courses，including playing basketball and running，are offered to students.Besides，the school sports meeting is held annually，which students can take part in according to their interests. （介绍本校体育课程及活动）What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu，a traditional sport in China. 【高分句型二】Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.（推荐一项中国传统体育项目）
Looking forward to your arrival!（期盼到来）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上。一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次。
14．假定你是李华，得知暑假回国的外教Jeff家乡遭受了飓风灾害，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.询问近况表示慰问；
2.询问其是否能如期主持开学举行的英语节活动；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jeff，
How are you recently？I am sorry to hear that a hurricane struck your hometown and you went home to deal with the effect of the disaster.
With the approaching of the English Festival in our school，I am concerned that you will not be able to come back in time.As scheduled，you will be the host of the English Festival.If you can't make it，you can tell me in advance so that we can choose a suitable person to take your place.
It is my hope that your hometown will return to normal，and you will come back soon.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：With the approaching of the English Festival in our school，I am concerned that you will not be able to come back in time.
译文：随着我们学校英语节的临近，我担心你不能及时回来。
分析：这句话使用that引导宾语从句。
高分句型二：It is my hope that your hometown will return to normal，and you will come back soon.Looking forward to your early reply.
译文：我希望你的家乡能恢复正常，你很快就会回来。期待您的早日答复。
分析：这句话使用that引导同位语从句。
【解答】Dear Jeff，
How are you recently？I am sorry to hear that a hurricane struck your hometown and you went home to deal with the effect of the disaster. （询问近况表示慰问）
With the approaching of the English Festival in our school，I am concerned that you will not be able to come back in time. 【高分句型一】As scheduled，you will be the host of the English Festival.If you can't make it，you can tell me in advance so that we can choose a suitable person to take your place.（询问其是否能如期主持开学举行的英语节活动）
It is my hope that your hometown will return to normal，and you will come back soon.Looking forward to your early reply.【高分句型二】（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
15．如今，游泳已成为各校争相开展的体育活动．假定你是李华，你校组建了游泳俱乐部．请给在我校留学的朋友Peter写信，邀请他加入．内容包括：
1．组建俱乐部的目的； 2．俱乐部的主要活动； 3．报名的时间和地点；
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；文娱与体育．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．With swimming sweeping nationwide， a swimming club has been formed recently in our school．
句子里，With 的复合结构swimming sweeping nationwide做伴随状语．
随着游泳运动席卷全国，我们学校最近成立了一个游泳俱乐部．
2．In addition， a diversity of water﹣based activities are held， ranging from routine practice to regularly﹣organized matches， which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills．
句子里， 现在分词ranging from routine practice to regularly﹣organized matches做伴随状语；关系词 which 引导非限制性定语从句cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills．
此外，还举办了多种多样的水上活动，从日常练习到定期组织的比赛，既培养了体育精神，又提高了游泳技能．
【解答】Dear Peter，
With swimming sweeping nationwide， a swimming club has been formed recently in our school．【高分句型一】 In light of your great passion about it， I'm writing to invite you to join it．（提出邀请）
In order to enrich our campus life， the swimming club without doubt provides us with an opportunity to build up our strength and foster a healthy lifestyle．（组建俱乐部的目的） In addition， a diversity of water﹣based activities are held， ranging from routine practice to regularly﹣organized matches， which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills．【高分句型二】 More appealing water games are arranged for us to get entertained and refreshed． Amazing， isn't it？ （俱乐部的主要活动）Please sign up in Mr． Smith's office before next Friday．（报名的时间和地点）
Such a great chance is it that you can't afford to miss it． I'm convinced that it will live up to your expectations．（再次邀请）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．
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期末专项培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假设你是校英文报的记者．上周六上午，你校高二学生刘伟去参加英语演讲比赛的路上，发现一位妇女从自行车上摔了下来并且右腿流血较多．刘伟对其进行了简单的急救处理并将其送到了医院，但却错过了英语演讲比赛．请你就刘伟的事迹写一篇新闻报道，并号召全校师生向他学习．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．报道的标题已给出，不计入总词数．
A Heroic Teen Missed a Competition but Saved an Injured Woman
2．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问如何保持健康．请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议．内容要点如下：
1．合理饮食；
2．加强锻炼；
3．保证睡眠．
注意：1．词数：100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；邮件的开头已写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy．__________________．
3．上周五你校组织学生去自然灾害体验馆参加了一次活动，让学生在虚拟现实（VR）环境中体验自然灾害。请你为校微信公众号写一篇英文新闻稿，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动过程；
3.活动反响。
提示词：自然灾害体验馆 （Natural Disaster Experience Hall）
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
4．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信说近期要来北京，希望你为他设计一个三天的旅行计划，推荐一些有中国特色的活动。请根据以下提示写一封回信。
旅行计划
时间 活动
第一天 参观故宫
第二天 参观中国美术馆
第三天 …
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：故宫the Forbidden City 中国美术馆the National Art Museum of China
Dear Peter，
I'm so happy to hear you're coming to Beijing.___________
Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David计划暑期到中国旅游，请你给他写封邮件推荐一个城市，并说明推荐理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
Long time no see.__________.
Yours，
Li Hua
6．假如你是李华，你班计划在艺术周期间表演英语情景剧 （sitcom），并想请对此颇有兴趣的外教Mr.Smith给予指导。现请你给他写一邮件，内容包括：
1.提出请求；
2.指导内容；
3.期待回复。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
7．假设你是李华，你捡到了你校交换生Mike的书包，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.如何发现书包的；
2.送还书包的时间和地点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
8．假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动．请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．参加人员；
2．跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3．活动反响．
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答．
A Cross﹣Country Running Race
_____________
9．你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择："长江之行"或者"泰山之旅"．Jim来信希望你能给些建议．请你给他回信，内容包括：
1．你建议的线路；2．你的理由；3．你的祝愿．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
10．假定你是李华，你校英语角拟举行一次英文演讲比赛，需要两名主持人（host）．你对此很感兴趣．请你用英语给外籍负责人布朗先生写一封自荐信，内容包括：
1．个人基本情况；
2．口语水平；
3．相关经验．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mr．Brown，
___________________
Yours，
Li Hua
11．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况．请给他回信，内容包括：
1．学校的体育场馆；2．主要的运动项目；3．你喜欢的项目；
注意：1．词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．3．参考词汇：体育馆gym
Dear Peter，
_________
Yours，
Li Hua
12．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy想来你的家乡旅游，希望你能提供建议。请你给她回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.推荐一处旅游景点并作简要介绍。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
13．假定你是红星中学李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 热爱体育运动，他将作为交换生到你校学习一年。请你给他写一封邮件，主要内容包括：
（1）介绍你校体育课程及活动；
（2）推荐一项中国传统体育项目。
注意： （1）词数 100 左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school on a one﹣year exchange program.
_________
Yours，
Li Hua
14．假定你是李华，得知暑假回国的外教Jeff家乡遭受了飓风灾害，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.询问近况表示慰问；
2.询问其是否能如期主持开学举行的英语节活动；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
15．如今，游泳已成为各校争相开展的体育活动．假定你是李华，你校组建了游泳俱乐部．请给在我校留学的朋友Peter写信，邀请他加入．内容包括：
1．组建俱乐部的目的； 2．俱乐部的主要活动； 3．报名的时间和地点；
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
期末专项培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假设你是校英文报的记者．上周六上午，你校高二学生刘伟去参加英语演讲比赛的路上，发现一位妇女从自行车上摔了下来并且右腿流血较多．刘伟对其进行了简单的急救处理并将其送到了医院，但却错过了英语演讲比赛．请你就刘伟的事迹写一篇新闻报道，并号召全校师生向他学习．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．报道的标题已给出，不计入总词数．
A Heroic Teen Missed a Competition but Saved an Injured Woman
Last Saturday， Liu Wei， a Senior Two student of our school， helped an injured woman． On that day， Liu Wei was on his way to the hall where the English speaking competition took place when a woman fell off her bicycle carelessly． The woman struggled to get to her feet but failed， because her right leg was bleeding badly． Without any hesitation， Liu Wei came to her assistance． He applied pressure to the bleeding area and then tied his handkerchief firmly to the wound． Finally， he took the woman to the hospital nearby． It was after it that he realized it was too late for the competition， he missed it．
In order to give people in need a hand， Liu Wei gave up the competition． As his fellow schoolmates and teachers， we should learn from him．
【考点】提纲作文；报道．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
高分句型一： On that day， Liu Wei was on his way to the hall where the English speaking competition took place when a woman fell off her bicycle carelessly．那天，刘伟在去参加英语演讲比赛的大厅的路上，一个妇女不小心从自行车上摔了下来．本句中where引导的是定语从句，先行词是hall，在定语从句中做状语，所以用where引导．
高分句型二：In order to give people in need a hand， Liu Wei gave up the competition．为了给需要帮助的人，刘薇放弃了竞争．本句中in order to是固定短语"为了"，在句中做目的状语，give up是固定短语"放弃"．
【解答】书面表达
Last Saturday， Liu Wei， a Senior Two student of our school， helped an injured woman． On that day， Liu Wei was on his way to the hall where the English speaking competition took place when a woman fell off her bicycle carelessly．（高分句型一） The woman struggled to get to her feet but failed， because her right leg was bleeding badly． Without any hesitation， Liu Wei came to her assistance． He applied pressure to the bleeding area and then tied his handkerchief firmly to the wound． Finally， he took the woman to the hospital nearby． It was after it that he realized it was too late for the competition， he missed it．【描述事情的经过】
In order to give people in need a hand， Liu Wei gave up the competition． （高分句型二）As his fellow schoolmates and teachers， we should learn from him．【学些刘伟的精神】
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
2．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack来信向你询问如何保持健康．请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议．内容要点如下：
1．合理饮食；
2．加强锻炼；
3．保证睡眠．
注意：1．词数：100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；邮件的开头已写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Jack，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy．__________________．
【考点】提纲作文；身心健康．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：As you know，we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet．
译文：如你所知，我们青少年正在经历一个快速的成长和发展，这需要一个健康和均衡的饮食支持．
分析：which引导定语从句．
高分句型二：Only in this way can you keep fit．
译文：只有这样你才能保持健康．
分析：only+介词短语，后面接部分倒装句．
【解答】Dear Jack，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me about how to keep healthy．I'd like to give you some advice．（写信目的）
As you know，we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet．【高分句型一】In order to get enough energy and nutrients，we need a variety of food，such as fish and meat，especially fresh vegetables and fruits．You'd better cut down the food rich in sugar or fat．（加强锻炼） Besides，you should take physical exercise regularly．For example，you can play basketball or take a walk after school． （加强锻炼）What's more，having enough sleep is of great importance．Therefore，I advise that you have at least eight hours sleep every day and not stay up too late．Only in this way can you keep fit．【高分句型二】（保证睡眠）
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变他化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
3．上周五你校组织学生去自然灾害体验馆参加了一次活动，让学生在虚拟现实（VR）环境中体验自然灾害。请你为校微信公众号写一篇英文新闻稿，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动过程；
3.活动反响。
提示词：自然灾害体验馆 （Natural Disaster Experience Hall）
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】To help students learn more about natural disasters，our school organized an activity in the Natural Disaster Experience Hall last Friday.
During the activity，students learned some basic ways to deal with different natural disasters.They were also exposed to VR environment where they deeply felt the strength and danger of natural pared to the knowledge they had learned in class，what they experienced in person was more practical and impressive.Undoubtedly，the students had their survival skills boosted and they were deeply convinced of the importance of staying in harmony with nature.
This activity turned out an enormous success and all the participants spoke highly of it.
【分析】高分句型一 To help students learn more about natural disasters，our school organized an activity in the Natural Disaster Experience Hall last Friday.
翻译：为了帮助学生更多地了解自然灾害，我们学校上周五在自然灾害体验厅组织了一次活动。
分析：句中使用了to do不定式作目的状语。
高分句型二 Compared to the knowledge they had learned in class，what they experienced in person was more practical and impressive.
翻译：与他们在课堂上学到的知识相比，他们亲身经历的更实际、更令人印象深刻。
分析：句中使用了what引导的主语从句。
【解答】To help students learn more about natural disasters，our school organized an activity in the Natural Disaster Experience Hall last Friday.【高分句型一】（活动目的）
During the activity，students learned some basic ways to deal with different natural disasters.They were also exposed to VR environment where they deeply felt the strength and danger of natural pared to the knowledge they had learned in class，what they experienced in person was more practical and impressive.【高分句型二】Undoubtedly，the students had their survival skills boosted and they were deeply convinced of the importance of staying in harmony with nature.（活动过程）
This activity turned out an enormous success and all the participants spoke highly of it.（活动反响）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
4．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信说近期要来北京，希望你为他设计一个三天的旅行计划，推荐一些有中国特色的活动。请根据以下提示写一封回信。
旅行计划
时间 活动
第一天 参观故宫
第二天 参观中国美术馆
第三天 …
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：故宫the Forbidden City 中国美术馆the National Art Museum of China
Dear Peter，
I'm so happy to hear you're coming to Beijing.___________
Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】图表作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Peter，
I'm so happy to hear you're coming to Beijing.I think it is a good chance to experience Chinese culture.Here is the travel plan I prepare for you.
On Friday you may go to the Forbidden City.There you will visit the old impressive royal houses.The National Art Gallery is a good choice for the next day，because you can appreciate Chinese traditional paintings.If you have interest in the life of local people，I strongly suggest you visit Laoshe Tea House on Sunday.Besides drinking tea and enjoying Beijing Opera，you can chat with people there，which will surely be interesting and relaxing.
Please let me know if you need more information.
Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The National Art Gallery is a good choice for the next day，because you can appreciate Chinese traditional paintings.
译文：国家美术馆是第二天的好选择，因为你可以欣赏中国传统绘画。
分析：这句话使用because引导原因状语从句。
高分句型二：Besides drinking tea and enjoying Beijing Opera，you can chat with people there，which will surely be interesting and relaxing.
译文：除了喝茶、欣赏京剧外，你还可以和那里的人聊天，那一定会很有趣，很放松。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm so happy to hear you're coming to Beijing.I think it is a good chance to experience Chinese culture.Here is the travel plan I prepare for you. （写信目的）
On Friday you may go to the Forbidden City.There you will visit the old impressive royal houses. （第一天参观故宫）The National Art Gallery is a good choice for the next day，because you can appreciate Chinese traditional paintings. 【高分句型一】（第二天参观中国美术馆）If you have interest in the life of local people，I strongly suggest you visit Laoshe Tea House on Sunday.Besides drinking tea and enjoying Beijing Opera，you can chat with people there，which will surely be interesting and relaxing. 【高分句型二】（第三天去老舍茶社）
Please let me know if you need more information.
Looking forward to meeting you soon!（盼望）（乐意提供信息）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
5．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David计划暑期到中国旅游，请你给他写封邮件推荐一个城市，并说明推荐理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David，
Long time no see.__________.
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】主题式．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear David，
Long time no see.Hearing that you're planning a trip to China，I feel excited to recommend a city that you can't miss.
Beijing，located in the north of China，is not only the capital of our country，but also a world﹣famous tourist destination.The city is a perfect combination of old and new.You can see thousands of historical sites as well as modern buildings.Rich and colorful culture will also leave you a deep impression.
A letter is too short to include all the greatness and beauty of Beijing.Looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Hearing that you're planning a trip to China，I feel excited to recommend a city that you can't miss.
分析：句子里，现在分词Hearing that you're planning a trip to China作原因状语；代指先行词a city，关系词that引导定语从句you can't miss.
翻译：听说你计划来中国旅行，我很高兴能推荐一个你不能错过的城市。
高分句型二
Beijing，located in the north of China，is not only the capital of our country，but also a world﹣famous tourist destination.
分析：句子里，修饰名词Beijing，过去分词located in the north of China作定语。
翻译：北京位于中国北方，不仅是我国的首都，也是世界著名的旅游目的地。
【解答】Dear David，
Long time no see.Hearing that you're planning a trip to China，I feel excited to recommend a city that you can't miss.【高分句型一】（点明主题）
Beijing，located in the north of China，is not only the capital of our country，but also a world﹣famous tourist destination.【高分句型二】The city is a perfect combination of old and new.You can see thousands of historical sites as well as modern buildings.Rich and colorful culture will also leave you a deep impression.（推荐北京，说明理由）
A letter is too short to include all the greatness and beauty of Beijing.Looking forward to your coming.（期待到来）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
6．假如你是李华，你班计划在艺术周期间表演英语情景剧 （sitcom），并想请对此颇有兴趣的外教Mr.Smith给予指导。现请你给他写一邮件，内容包括：
1.提出请求；
2.指导内容；
3.期待回复。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望；兴趣爱好．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mr.Smith，
I am Li Hua，monitor of Class 3.Our class plans to perform an English sitcom during the art cycle aimed at providing the students with a stage where we can show ourselves and arousing our interest in English.Knowing you are interested in sitcoms，we would like to invite you to give us some guidance.
We hope you can give us some precious advice on the pronunciation and performance skills，which we are not good at.We would feel honored if you could accept our invitation.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Our class plans to perform an English sitcom during the art cycle aimed at providing the students with a stage where we can show ourselves and arousing our interest in English.
分析：句子里，修饰名词the art cycle，过去分词aimed at providing the students with a stage where we can show ourselves and arousing our interest in English.作定语。
翻译：我们班计划在艺术周期内表演一部英语情景喜剧，这个艺术周旨在为学生提供一个舞台，让我们展示自己，激发我们对英语的兴趣。
高分句型二
Knowing you are interested in sitcoms，we would like to invite you to give us some guidance.
分析：句子里，现在分词Knowing you are interested in sitcoms作原因状语。
翻译：知道您对情景喜剧感兴趣，我们想请您给我们一些指导。
【解答】Dear Mr.Smith，
I am Li Hua，monitor of Class 3.Our class plans to perform an English sitcom during the art cycle aimed at providing the students with a stage where we can show ourselves and arousing our interest in English. 【高分句型一】Knowing you are interested in sitcoms，we would like to invite you to give us some guidance.【高分句型二】（提出请求）
We hope you can give us some precious advice on the pronunciation and performance skills，which we are not good at.We would feel honored if you could accept our invitation.（指导内容）
I am looking forward to your coming.（期待回复）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲类书面表达主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔。此类试题中有较多的文字说明，实际上规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避。考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和语汇上的单调，因此平时要多练习，活用语言，使文章流畅。
7．假设你是李华，你捡到了你校交换生Mike的书包，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.如何发现书包的；
2.送还书包的时间和地点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mike，
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you that I found your lost schoolbag on the playground early in the morning when I was running. To find out who it belonged to， I opened it and found your name and email address.
Can you tell me when it is convenient for you to fetch it？ Is it OK if we make it at six this afternoon？ I have taken it to my classroom， which is on the fifth floor of the green building. Please write to me soon.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：To find out who it belonged to， I opened it and found your name and email address.
译文：为了找出它是谁的，我打开它，找到了你的名字和电子邮件地址。
分析：这句话使用不定式作目的状语，who引导宾语从句。
高分句型二：I have taken it to my classroom， which is on the fifth floor of the green building.
译文：我把它带到了我的教室，在绿色建筑的五楼。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you that I found your lost schoolbag on the playground early in the morning when I was running. To find out who it belonged to， I opened it and found your name and email address. 【高分句型一】（如何发现书包的）
Can you tell me when it is convenient for you to fetch it？ Is it OK if we make it at six this afternoon？ I have taken it to my classroom， which is on the fifth floor of the green building. 【高分句型二】Please write to me soon.（送还书包的时间和地点）
Best wishes.（祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
8．假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动．请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1．参加人员；
2．跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；
3．活动反响．
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答．
A Cross﹣Country Running Race
_____________
【考点】提纲作文；报道．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：Participants included students from all grades and teaching staff，who were enthusiastic about track sports．
译文：参与者包括来自各个年级的学生和对田径运动热情高涨的教职员工．
分析：这句话使用who引导非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二：Having interviewed some participants after the race，we found that the event was well received．
译文：在赛后采访了一些参赛者，我们发现这次比赛受到了好评．
分析：这句话使用现在分词的完成式作时间状语．
【解答】A Cross﹣Country Running Race
To promote healthy lifestyles in the campus and around the city，Red Star Secondary School organized a cross﹣country running race last Sunday．（活动目的）
Participants included students from all grades and teaching staff，who were enthusiastic about track sports．【高分句型一】（参加人员） The route of the race started from the school's gate and ended at the foot of the Southern Mountain．（跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下） Having interviewed some participants after the race，we found that the event was well received．【高分句型二】 "I felt like I have achieved something great when I reached the goal line，" said a 9th﹣grade student．（活动反响）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
9．你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择："长江之行"或者"泰山之旅"．Jim来信希望你能给些建议．请你给他回信，内容包括：
1．你建议的线路；2．你的理由；3．你的祝愿．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
高分句型一：Learning that your school is going to organize a trip to China，I am more than delighted to offer you some suggestions．得知贵校将组织一次中国之行，我很高兴能给您一些建议．本句中learning是现在分词在句中做状语．
高分句型二：Last but not least，there are many sacred temples，which offer you the opportunity to be exposed to Chinese culture in person at the foot of mountain．最后但并非最不重要，有许多神庙，提供您在山脚亲自接触中国文化的机会．本句中which引导的是非限制性定语从句，先行词是temple，在从句中做主语．
【解答】Dear Jim，
Learning that your school is going to organize a trip to China，I am more than delighted to offer you some suggestions．（高分句型一）【愿意提供建议】
As far as I am concerned，the best choice is visiting Mountain Tai．Here are the reasons．First you can either go sightseeing by cable or climb the mountain and enjoy the nature at the same time．Besides，you can gain a sense of achievement when admiring the breathtaking scenery at the top of the mountain．Last but not least，there are many sacred temples，which offer you the opportunity to be exposed to Chinese culture in person at the foot of mountain．（高分句型二）【建议选择的路线及理由】
Wish my advice turn to be useful and hope you have a nice trip in China．Best wishes to you and your classmates !【表达祝愿】
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
10．假定你是李华，你校英语角拟举行一次英文演讲比赛，需要两名主持人（host）．你对此很感兴趣．请你用英语给外籍负责人布朗先生写一封自荐信，内容包括：
1．个人基本情况；
2．口语水平；
3．相关经验．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mr．Brown，
___________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；兴趣爱好．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：I've learnt that two hosts are needed for the coming English speech contest．
译文：我知道即将到来的英语演讲比赛需要两位主持人．
分析：that引导宾语从句．
高分句型二：As a hard﹣working student，I have a good command of English，especially spoken English．
译文：作为一个勤奋的学生，我的英语很好，尤其是口语．
分析：as意为"作为"，especially"尤其"．
【解答】Dear Mr．Brown，
I've learnt that two hosts are needed for the coming English speech contest．【高分句型一】I would like very much to be one of them．（写信目的）
I'm Li Hua，a handsome boy of about 180 cm in height．（个人基本情况）As a hard﹣working student，I have a good command of English，especially spoken English．【高分句型二】I have won first prizes in many English speech contests．（口语水平）What's more，I have been the host of English parties since I entered junior high school．It gave me much experience in hosting big events．So I believe I can do the job perfectly．（相关经验）
I'm looking forward to your early reply．（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇图表类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
11．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况．请给他回信，内容包括：
1．学校的体育场馆；2．主要的运动项目；3．你喜欢的项目；
注意：1．词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．3．参考词汇：体育馆gym
Dear Peter，
_________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；文娱与体育．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．To begin with，a fabulous new stadium has been built up，which has become the new landmark in our school．
句子里，修饰先行词a fabulous new stadium ，关系词 which引导非限制性定语从句 has become the new landmark in our school．
首先，一个漂亮的新体育场已经建成，它已经成为我们学校的新地标．
2．I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life．
句子里，since引导原因状语从句 it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life．
我对篮球很感兴趣，因为它给了我力量去面对生活中的挑战．
【解答】Dear Peter，
I am delighted to hear from you．You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch．（点明主题）
To begin with，a fabulous new stadium has been built up，which has become the new landmark in our school． 【高分句型一】Moreover，with the stadium set up，a wide range of sports events are able to be held，of which ping﹣pong，football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity．As for me，I'm intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life．【高分句型二】（介绍学校的体育场馆；主要的运动项目；以及自己喜欢的项目）
All in all，I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself．（提出邀请）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数．写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程．积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效．
12．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy想来你的家乡旅游，希望你能提供建议。请你给她回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.推荐一处旅游景点并作简要介绍。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Lucy，
I'm so glad to receive your email and know you're coming to my hometown in the winter vacation.You are welcome to my hometown，Xuzhou.I'd like to offer you some information to make your journey enjoyable.
Xuzhou，located in the north of Jiangsu Province，is a beautiful city with a long history.In recent years，it has taken on a new look.There are many places of interest here，among which Yunlong Mountain Scenic Spot is a must﹣see place.Yunlong Mountain is covered with green trees throughout the year，and at its foot lies Yunlong Lake，surrounded by varieties of flowers and differently﹣shaped trees，impressing visitors with its beauty forever，attracting millions of visitors from home and abroad each year.I hope this is helpful.
I look forward to seeing you soon!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Xuzhou，located in the north of Jiangsu Province，is a beautiful city with a long history.
分析：句子里，修饰名词Xuzhou，过去分词located in the north of Jiangsu Province作定语。
翻译：徐州，位于江苏省北部，是一个美丽的城市，有着悠久的历史。
高分句型二
There are many places of interest here，among which Yunlong Mountain Scenic Spot is a must﹣see place.
分析：句子里，修饰先行词many places of interest here，介词among后的关系词which引导非限制性定语从句Yunlong Mountain Scenic Spot is a must﹣see place.
翻译：这里有许多名胜古迹，其中云龙山风景名胜区是必看之地。
【解答】Dear Lucy，
I'm so glad to receive your email and know you're coming to my hometown in the winter vacation.You are welcome to my hometown，Xuzhou.I'd like to offer you some information to make your journey enjoyable.（表示欢迎）
Xuzhou，located in the north of Jiangsu Province，is a beautiful city with a long history.【高分句型一】In recent years，it has taken on a new look.There are many places of interest here，among which Yunlong Mountain Scenic Spot is a must﹣see place. 【高分句型二】Yunlong Mountain is covered with green trees throughout the year，and at its foot lies Yunlong Lake，surrounded by varieties of flowers and differently﹣shaped trees，impressing visitors with its beauty forever，attracting millions of visitors from home and abroad each year.I hope this is helpful. （推荐一处旅游景点并作简要介绍）
I look forward to seeing you soon!（期盼见面）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文的选材范围很广，内容简单易懂，且多是考生熟悉的话题。这类题型的主要特点是要点明确，范围具体。但考生也容易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和词汇上的单调，甚至写 出结构不完整的句子。
13．假定你是红星中学李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 热爱体育运动，他将作为交换生到你校学习一年。请你给他写一封邮件，主要内容包括：
（1）介绍你校体育课程及活动；
（2）推荐一项中国传统体育项目。
注意： （1）词数 100 左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school on a one﹣year exchange program.
_________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；文娱与体育．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school on a one﹣year exchange program.Since you enjoy sports，I would like to introduce the sports courses in our school as well as a Chinese traditional sport.
First of all，for each class in our school，there are two to three periods of PE class every week.Basic courses，including playing basketball and running，are offered to students.Besides，the school sports meeting is held annually，which students can take part in according to their interests.What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu，a traditional sport in China.Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.
Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Since you enjoy sports，I would like to introduce the sports courses in our school as well as a Chinese traditional sport.
分析：句子里，Since 引导原因状语从句you enjoy sports.
翻译：因为你喜欢运动，我想介绍一下我们学校的体育课程以及一项中国传统体育项目。
高分句型二
What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu，a traditional sport in China.
分析：句子里，What 引导主语从句I recommend to you to learn；Chinese kungfu和a traditional sport in China是同位语。
翻译：我向你推荐的是中国功夫，这是中国的一项传统运动。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school on a one﹣year exchange program.Since you enjoy sports，I would like to introduce the sports courses in our school as well as a Chinese traditional sport.【高分句型一】（点明书信主题）
First of all，for each class in our school，there are two to three periods of PE class every week.Basic courses，including playing basketball and running，are offered to students.Besides，the school sports meeting is held annually，which students can take part in according to their interests. （介绍本校体育课程及活动）What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu，a traditional sport in China. 【高分句型二】Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.（推荐一项中国传统体育项目）
Looking forward to your arrival!（期盼到来）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上。一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次。
14．假定你是李华，得知暑假回国的外教Jeff家乡遭受了飓风灾害，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.询问近况表示慰问；
2.询问其是否能如期主持开学举行的英语节活动；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jeff，
How are you recently？I am sorry to hear that a hurricane struck your hometown and you went home to deal with the effect of the disaster.
With the approaching of the English Festival in our school，I am concerned that you will not be able to come back in time.As scheduled，you will be the host of the English Festival.If you can't make it，you can tell me in advance so that we can choose a suitable person to take your place.
It is my hope that your hometown will return to normal，and you will come back soon.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：With the approaching of the English Festival in our school，I am concerned that you will not be able to come back in time.
译文：随着我们学校英语节的临近，我担心你不能及时回来。
分析：这句话使用that引导宾语从句。
高分句型二：It is my hope that your hometown will return to normal，and you will come back soon.Looking forward to your early reply.
译文：我希望你的家乡能恢复正常，你很快就会回来。期待您的早日答复。
分析：这句话使用that引导同位语从句。
【解答】Dear Jeff，
How are you recently？I am sorry to hear that a hurricane struck your hometown and you went home to deal with the effect of the disaster. （询问近况表示慰问）
With the approaching of the English Festival in our school，I am concerned that you will not be able to come back in time. 【高分句型一】As scheduled，you will be the host of the English Festival.If you can't make it，you can tell me in advance so that we can choose a suitable person to take your place.（询问其是否能如期主持开学举行的英语节活动）
It is my hope that your hometown will return to normal，and you will come back soon.Looking forward to your early reply.【高分句型二】（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
15．如今，游泳已成为各校争相开展的体育活动．假定你是李华，你校组建了游泳俱乐部．请给在我校留学的朋友Peter写信，邀请他加入．内容包括：
1．组建俱乐部的目的； 2．俱乐部的主要活动； 3．报名的时间和地点；
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；文娱与体育．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．With swimming sweeping nationwide， a swimming club has been formed recently in our school．
句子里，With 的复合结构swimming sweeping nationwide做伴随状语．
随着游泳运动席卷全国，我们学校最近成立了一个游泳俱乐部．
2．In addition， a diversity of water﹣based activities are held， ranging from routine practice to regularly﹣organized matches， which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills．
句子里， 现在分词ranging from routine practice to regularly﹣organized matches做伴随状语；关系词 which 引导非限制性定语从句cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills．
此外，还举办了多种多样的水上活动，从日常练习到定期组织的比赛，既培养了体育精神，又提高了游泳技能．
【解答】Dear Peter，
With swimming sweeping nationwide， a swimming club has been formed recently in our school．【高分句型一】 In light of your great passion about it， I'm writing to invite you to join it．（提出邀请）
In order to enrich our campus life， the swimming club without doubt provides us with an opportunity to build up our strength and foster a healthy lifestyle．（组建俱乐部的目的） In addition， a diversity of water﹣based activities are held， ranging from routine practice to regularly﹣organized matches， which cultivate the sports spirit as well as sharpen swimming skills．【高分句型二】 More appealing water games are arranged for us to get entertained and refreshed． Amazing， isn't it？ （俱乐部的主要活动）Please sign up in Mr． Smith's office before next Friday．（报名的时间和地点）
Such a great chance is it that you can't afford to miss it． I'm convinced that it will live up to your expectations．（再次邀请）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．
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