【期末专项培优】读后续写(含解析)2025-2026学年高二上学期英语期末必刷卷人教版(2019)

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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末专项培优 读后续写
一.书面表达(共15小题)
1. "Breakfast time!" I quickly put on my clothes and rushed down the stairs.
" Come on,we don't want to be late!"My mom said.The aroma(香味)of pancakes filled the kitchen,making the room warm.I looked out of the window.The sun was out,making a warm and bright morning.
"Today's the day,zip lining(高空滑索)!" My dad said,sounding very enthusiastic early this morning.
Today we would go zip lining.The excitement built up inside of me as breakfast went on.After breakfast,we set out in my dad's car.Half way through the ride,the sun grew hot,and the leather on the seats burned my legs.I thought about the trip,how my parents went but not me.It was my first time experiencing something like this.I also thought about my fear of heights,one thing I tried to get rid of multiple times.It got in the way of so many fun activities,like roller coasters at Kings Island.
We were basically there by now,the sun still blazing hot.We pulled up to big sign where our instructor waited for us.
"Hi y'all!"said our instructor cheerfully.
"So,have y'all done this before?"
My parents nodded but I shook my head.Our instructor went over safety instructions while we each put on a safety harness(安全带).I started to get nervous.A never﹣ending roller coaster of excitement and anxiousness built inside of me.I looked down the cliff(悬崖).My heart skipped a beat when the wind howled,blowing leaves and twigs in the trees.My legs started to shake.
Para.1:
"Alright y'all,time to hit the trails".Said the instructor with too much enthusiasm.
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My turn finally came.
2.
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
3.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During this past year,I've had three instances of car trouble.Each time these things happened,I was sick of the way most people hadn't bothered to help.One of those times,I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep.I put signs in the windows,big signs that said NEED A JACK(千斤顶),and offered money.Nothing.Right as I was about to give up,a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over,and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter,who spoke English.He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep,so we would need something to support it.Then he got a saw(锯子)from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road.We rolled it over and put his jack on top,and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off,and then,if you can believe it,I broke his tire iron.No worries:He handed it to his wife,and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron.She was back in 15 minutes.We finished the job,and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty.His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands.I tried to put a 20 bill in the man's hand,but he wouldn't take it,so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could.I asked the little girl where they lived.Mexico,she said.They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks.Then they would go home.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I was about to say goodbye,the girl asked if I'd had lunch.__________
After they left,I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.__________
4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The event that stands out in Tom's memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old.He was at home with his elder sister Jane.Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices.At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud,but he soon realized this time it was different.
"Quick!Quick!Remove the motorcycles from the shop." someone shouted.Then a thick burning smell filled the air.When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate,a thick cloud of smoke greeted him.The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.
Jane,who had been playing the violin in her room,hurried to the living room.They rushed out of the door and along the corridor(走廊) through the smoke.
They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane suddenly stopped in her track.She turned around and headed back the way they came.Tom had no idea what she was doing,but he followed her.
Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them,who they called Makcik.Jane began banging on Makcik's door,but got no answer.As the smoke thickened around them,Tom could see many of their neighbors﹣some still in their pajamas(睡衣)﹣running for safety.The thought of fear crossed his mind.
"She would have run for safety like everyone else!" Tom cried.However,Jane refused to give up."I know Makcik's still inside." She said she was familiar with Makcik's daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping.She pounded against the door."Go downstairs.Go now!Go!"
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Tom noticed the flame (火焰) was reaching up._______
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Luckily,some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.________
5.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The most important change in a person's life is the change of his or her attitude. Right attitudes produce right actions. Have you ever met someone who gave you a different view of life?
On a Sunday morning, I saw something very interesting as I went to the greengrocer's. To get there,I had to cross a bridge over railway tracks. The bridge was pretty high. A steep set of steps had to be climbed; then the bridge flattened out(变平),followed by coming down another set of steps. On my way back from the greengrocer's, I saw an elderly gentleman running up the steps. After watching him run up the steps so fast, I thought that he must be in a rush.
Before I knew it, he had crossed the bridge, and then he ran back to where, he started. To my surprise,he did not stop. He turned around, and then went up and down the bridge again. He was not struggling,and seemed to enjoy going up and down the bridge. Being a fitness fanatic(热衷于健美的人) myself,I admired his ability to cross the bridge so quickly. My curiosity got the better of me, and I came up to him to have a chat with him.
"Excuse me, sir. Are you training for an event?" I asked.
He stopped and smiled. "No, not training for an event. Well,I am training for life, " he said with a broad smile on his face as sweat rolled down his cheeks.
I told him that I had been looking for a role model of fitness, and that I hoped to be as strong as he is when I get to his age. He said that everyone has a choice about what they do with their life. "I am not different," he added. With much admiration, I asked,"What drives you to maintain good health?"
Then he told me the accident he met when he was young.
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"I used to be a cyclist. " he said. ﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
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His great determination paid off, and he was able to walk again. ﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
6.When Dr.Henderson was assigning(指定) project mates for his psychology class,I secretly hoped he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with.Above all,I hoped he wouldn't assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match.As fate(命运) would have it,Dr.Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.
I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself.He looked at me as though I weren't there.I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course.He wasn't mean or abusive.He just gave me the impression that he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.
Needless to say,I didn't look forward to an entire team of being brushed off,but I tried to make the best of it and didn't say anything for fear that I would make things worse.
The project required each team to develop a hypothesis(假说),set up an experiment to test the hypothesis,do the statistical analysis and present the findings.Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students.
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project,I was uneasy.Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single﹣mindedness and good grades—the exact opposite of me.I actually wanted to drop the class at one point,but stopped short because I didn't want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out.I decided to stick to it no matter what.
After long discussions,we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well﹣being of teenagers.I wasn't sure what it meant exactly,but at least we had a topic.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para.1:
We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.
_______________
Para.2:
Then one day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease.
_______________
7.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Once,when I was a teenager my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus.Finally there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.
This family made a big impression on me.There were eight children,all probably under the age of twelve.You could tell they didn't have a lot of money.Their clothes were not expensive,but they were clean.The children were well﹣behaved,all of them standing in line,two﹣by﹣two behind their parents,holding hands.They were excitedly talking about the clowns,elephants and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice.One could sense they had never been to the circus before.It promised to be a highlight of their young lives.
The father and mother were at the head of the pack,standing proud as they could be.The mother was holding her husband's hand,looking up at him as if to say,"You are my knight in shining armor." He was smiling and responding in pride,looking back at her as if to say "You got that right".The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted.He proudly responded "please let me buy eight children's tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus."
The ticket lady gave the price.The man's wife let go of his hand,lowered her head and her lips began to shake.The father leaned a little closer and asked,"How much did you say?" The ticket lady again told him the price.The man obviously didn't have enough money.
How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn't have enough money to take them to the circus?Actually we were not wealthy in any sense,so I understand how the kids would feel.I felt sorry for them.
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Seeing what was going on,my dad seemed to have an idea. ______
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That day my father and I went back to our car._______
8.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成﹣ ﹣篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The big Town Hall clock was striking midnight when Frank began to cross the bridge,The dark night air was cold and wet,and the street lamps gave little light.Frank was anxious to get home and his footsteps rang loudly on the silent night.
When he reached the middle of the bridge,he thought he could hear someone coming near behind him.He looked back but could see no one.However,the sound continued,and Frank began walking more quickly.Then he slowed down again,thinking there was nothing to fear in a town as quiet as this.The short,quick steps grew louder and seemed very near.
Frank found it impossible not 10 turn round.As he did so,he caught sight of a human form coming towards him.After reaching the other side of the bridge,Frank stopped and pretended to look down at the water.From the comer of his eyes he could now make out the for of a man dressed in a large overcoat.A hat was pulled down over his eyes and very little of his face could be seen.
As the man came near,Frank turned towards him and said something about the weather in an effort to be friendly.The man did not answer but asked roughly where Oakfield House was.Frank pointed to a big house in the distance and the stranger continued his way.
Then Frank wondered why the stranger had wanted to find Oakfeld House at such an hour.He knew that the person who lived there was very rich.Almost without realizing what he was doing.Frank began following the stranger quietly.
The man was soon outside the house and Frank saw him look up at the windows.A light was still on,and the man waited until it went out,When about half an hour had passed,Frank saw him climb noiselessly over the wall and heard him drop onto the ground at the other side.
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Now Frank knew what the man wanted to do.__________
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Frank couldn't just stand in the dark and wait.__________
9.One day,I found a wallet on the street.The wallet contained only three dollars and a very old letter.The envelope was worn and the only thing on it was the return address.I started to open the letter,hoping to find some information.Then I saw the date﹣1990,and the signature﹣Beatrice.The letter was written several decades ago.
Then I made every effort and found out that Beatrice was now working in a hospital.I showed her the letter.The second she saw the letter,she took a deep breath. "Young man,this letter was the last contact I ever had with Henry.He is my only brother.I loved him very much.I was only 16 at the time and my brother is two years younger than me.If you can find him,tell him I'm still looking for him," she said and tears began to well up in her eyes. "Mother is waiting for him to come back home."
When I walked out of the building with the wallet in my hand,the guard of the building recognized the wallet,and with his help,I finally found its owner,Henry.I handed the wallet to Henry and he said,"Yes,that's mine!It must have dropped out of my pocket this afternoon."
"I read the letter in the hope of finding out who owned the wallet," I said.The smile on his face suddenly disappeared.He asked,"You read that letter?" "Not only did I read it,but also Beatrice read," I replied.He suddenly became excited. "Beatrice?You know where she is?How is she?Please tell me," he begged. "She's fine.She has been looking for you," I said softly.
He grabbed my hand and said, "Sir,you know she is my only sister in this world and I've always missed her."
Henry and I took the elevator(电梯)down to Beatrice's room.I walked over to her. "Beatrice," I said softly,pointing to Henry,who was waiting with me in the doorway. "Do you know the man?"
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
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Beatrice adjusted her glasses,looked for a moment,but didn't say a word.___________
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About three weeks later,I got a call at my office from Beatrice._____________
10.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
From the first day he entered my classroom,Willard P.Frank existed in his own world,shutting out his classmates and me.My attempts at building a friendly relationship with him were met with complete indifference.I could see that his classmates fared no better.Willard was strictly a loner who seemed to have no desire or need to break his silence.
Shortly after the Thanksgiving holiday,we received word of the annual Christmas collection of money for the less fortunate people in our school district. "Christmas is a season of giving," I told my students. "There are a few students in the school who might not have a happy holiday season.By contributing to our Christmas collection,you will help buy food,clothing and toys for these needy people.We will start the collection tomorrow."
When I called for the contributions the next day,I discovered that almost everyone had forgotten except for Willard P.Frank.The boy dug deep into his pants pockets as he walked slowly to my desk.Carefully,he dropped two quarters into the small container. "I don't need milk for lunch," he mumbled.For a moment,just a moment,he smiled.Then he turned and walked back to his desk.
That night,after school,I took our few contributions to the school principal.I couldn't help sharing the incident that had taken place. "I may be wrong,but I believe Willard might be getting ready to become a part of the world around him," I told the principal. "Yes." he nodded. "And we might do well to have him share a bit of his world with us.I just received a list of the poor families in our school who most need help through the Christmas collection.Here,take a look at it." As I gazed down to read,I discovered Willard P.Frank and his family were the top names on the list.Seeing this,I decided to do something for him.
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On that Sunday,I paid a visit to Willard's family.________
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The next day,I had a special class for Willard.________
11.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Most people around the world are right﹣handed.This fact also seems to have held true throughout history.In 1977 scientists studied works of art made at various times in history.Most of the people shown in these works of art are right handed,so scientists guessed that right﹣handedness has always been common.But what do Leonardo da Vinci,Marie Curie,and Albert Einstein have in common?They were all left﹣handed along with other famous people including Brad Pitt Prince William,and Barack Obama.In fact,an estimated 13 percent of the world's population may be left﹣handed.
Many researchers claim to have found relationships between left﹣handedness and various physical and mental characteristics,such as blond hair,blue eyes,and sleep difficulties.Other studies have found a higher﹣than﹣normal level of left﹣handed people in certain occupations(职业),including professional baseball players,architects,as well as prisoners.However,some of these connections are very weak,and others have not been proven.
What makes a person become right﹣handed rather than left﹣handed?One simple idea suggests that people normally get right﹣handedness from their parents.Studies have found that two right﹣handed parents have only a 9.5﹣percent chance of having a left﹣handed child,while two left﹣handed parents have a 26﹣percent chance of having a left﹣handed child.Another common theory is that left﹣handed people suffer mild brain damage during birth,which makes them left﹣handed.
Whatever the reasons behind it,people's attitudes toward left﹣handedness have changed a lot over the years.Statistics show that although 13 percent of young people are left﹣handed,only six percent of the elderly are left﹣handed.Left﹣handed children used to be punished until they began using their right hand like other children,but today people who are left﹣handed are no longer looked down on nor are they considered abnormal For most people today,either case is perfectly acceptable.There are even a number of shops now selling products for left﹣handed people,such as left﹣handed can openers,guitars,and even a left﹣handed camera.
12.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I have been in the teaching profession for more than thirty years,and one of the best teachers I have ever known is Mr.Rowe.I was lucky enough to teach fourth grade together with him.
Mr.Rowe had endless patience and understanding and I learned so much from watching him.He could perform miracles,like the one he performed with Steven,one of the unhappiest kids I had ever seen.Steven couldn't stand school.He didn't like being picked last for kickball.He didn't like the kids who raised their hands and knew the answers,and most importantly,he didn't like himself.
The first day he walked into Mr.Rowe's classroom,he ignored the other students,looking angry and annoyed,and slid into his chair,knocking a couple of textbooks onto the floor.
Mr.Rowe walked over to him and touched Steven's shoulder,but Steven pulled away.Nevertheless,Mr.Rowe welcomed him: "Hi,Steven.I'm happy you are in my class.We are gonna have a great year." Steven looked around the room as if Mr.Rowe were mistaken.No teacher in his right mind would want Steven to be part of his class.
So,while Mr.Rowe seemed cheerful and relaxed that day of school,it seemed that Steven was angry and confused.
That day after classes,Mr.Rowe chose Steven to pitch(投球)the kickball at recess. "Hey,Steven," Mr.Rowe commented,"You are good at pitching.Let me show you my secret trick." Mr.Rowe taught Steven one of the tricks that not a single kid could perform.Steven learned fast and did quite well!Everyone cheered for him!
After the kickball,Steven sat as close to Mr.Rowe in classes as he could.When a question was asked,Steven lit up;when he knew the answer,he raised his hand;when he answered the question,his voice shook.However,he got the answer right!He said,with Mr.Rowe,his days of the fourth grade promised wonderful.
That is not to say that every day went smoothly,but it was obvious that Steven grew to love Mr.Rowe more and more with each passing day.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应的位置作答。
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Time passed quickly that year,and before we all knew it,it was the last day of school.___________.
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Many years later,Mr.Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom,dressed in army uniform.___________.
13.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was a very hot afternoon. My friend Leah and I were waiting for the rush hour train. We were tired and couldn't wait to get back to the place where we were living.
When the train arrived, we got into the second carriage from the front. The air﹣conditioning wasn't working at the rear(后部), so the front was particularly crowded that day. I sat by the window admiring the changing landscape.
Suddenly we felt an enormous pressure pushing us backwards into our seats. The windows broke into tiny pieces and dust flew around violently. I could barely open my eyes.
The train was suffering from a crash, and it didn't feel as if it were going to stop. When it did, I thought,I would be dead. I thought about my husband Guy, who was supposed to receive the news first. I thought of my dear father and other family members, wondering how each would deal with my death.
Voices began to break through my thoughts.People were anxious. Strangely,I was totally calm. I wasn't panicking: my heart wasn't even beating fast.
When the train finally stopped,we slowly stood up,pushing off the table that had fallen onto us; others stayed in their seats and many were injured and covered in blood. I could hear screaming. A soldier pushed the damaged door open for us to escape.
Our carriage had run out of rails and we were halfway home. We had a lot of blood on us and I searched my body for wounds, but I didn't find any.My knees felt painful and my hips were black and blue,and Leah had her hand cut when jumping off the train,but that wasn't serious.
Helicopters landed and we saw soldiers running in and out. All around us were ambulances, and people lying on the ground. Everyone was shouting for help. I rang Guy, who was very calm and said he would come and get us. Seeing all these brought me great emotional hurt.
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It was almost dark by the time we found Guy and he drove us home.﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
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In the days that followed, I convinced myself I had internal bleeding. ﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
14.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I have been a teacher for more than thirty years and Mr.Rowe is one of the best teachers I have ever worked with.He had so much from watching him.
He could perform miracles,like the one he performed with Steven in the fourth grade.Steven was one of the unhappiest kids I ever saw.He couldn't stand school.He didn't like being picked last for kickball.He didn't like the kids who raised their hands and knew all the answers,and most importantly,he didn't like himself.
The first day Steven walked into Mr.Rowe's classroom,he ignored the other students,looking angry and annoyed,and slid into his chair,knocking a couple of textbooks onto the floor.
Mr.Rowe walked over to him and touched Steven's shoulder,but Steven pulled away.Nevertheless,Mr.Rowe welcomed him: "Hi,Steven.I'm happy you are in my class.We are gonna have a great year." Steven looked around the room as if Mr.Rowe must be mistakes.No teacher in his right mind would want Steven to be part of his classroom.
So,while Mr.Rowe seemed cheerful and relaxed that day of school,it seemed like Steven was angry and confused.
That day after classes,Mr.Rowe chose Steven to pitch(投球) the kickball. "Hey,Steven," Mr.Rowe said, "You are good at pitching.Let me show you my secret trick." Mr.Rowe taught Steven one of the tricks that not a single kid could did.Steven learned fast and did quite well!Everyone cheered for him!
After the kickball,Steven sat as closer to Mr.Rowe in classes as he could.When a question was asked,Steven lit up;he knew the answer!He raised his hands.When he answered the question,his voice shook.However,he got the answer right!He said,with Mr.Rowe,his days of the fourth grade promised wonderful.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Time passed quickly and our school had a very special tradition on the last day._____________.
Many years later,Mr.Rowe and I were working in the teachers' office when a handsome young man walked in,dressed in the police uniform._____________.
15.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。
An old saying goes that a near neighbor is better than a distant cousin.This saying has fully proved that neighbors are so significant in our life.
In the past,neighbors helped one another build houses and clear fields.They could offer timely help when someone was in trouble.Families depended on one another for friendship and entertainment.They shared happiness and sorrow from time to time,which brought a harmonious atmosphere.
However,nowadays,lack of communication and interaction between neighbors is a norm.Close relationship between neighbors is not common in our cities.A family may not even know the other families that live next door to them.We live in an age of machines and the Internet,and each family have its own car,TV set,and washing machine.People no longer depend on neighbors as much as they once did.Machines and the Internet keep people apart.In our grandparents' time,women met while they hung out the washing,and men stopped and talked while they mowed their lawns.Today,they can't hear anything above the noise of their power lawn mowers.And women stay inside with their electrical dryers.Children are inside watching their favorite TV shows or playing computer games.
Is the idea of being a good neighbor old﹣fashioned?In 1965,a power cut hit New York City,and many thousands of people were left helpless.Suddenly everyone shared the same problem,and the largest city became a group of eight million neighbors.People with cars offered rides to those walking.Other people helped direct traffic.Trapped in elevators,people played word games and helped keep each other in good spirit.In times of trouble,people still depend on one another.As time goes on,people may once again feel that being a good neighbor is important.
期末专项培优 读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共15小题)
1. "Breakfast time!" I quickly put on my clothes and rushed down the stairs.
" Come on,we don't want to be late!"My mom said.The aroma(香味)of pancakes filled the kitchen,making the room warm.I looked out of the window.The sun was out,making a warm and bright morning.
"Today's the day,zip lining(高空滑索)!" My dad said,sounding very enthusiastic early this morning.
Today we would go zip lining.The excitement built up inside of me as breakfast went on.After breakfast,we set out in my dad's car.Half way through the ride,the sun grew hot,and the leather on the seats burned my legs.I thought about the trip,how my parents went but not me.It was my first time experiencing something like this.I also thought about my fear of heights,one thing I tried to get rid of multiple times.It got in the way of so many fun activities,like roller coasters at Kings Island.
We were basically there by now,the sun still blazing hot.We pulled up to big sign where our instructor waited for us.
"Hi y'all!"said our instructor cheerfully.
"So,have y'all done this before?"
My parents nodded but I shook my head.Our instructor went over safety instructions while we each put on a safety harness(安全带).I started to get nervous.A never﹣ending roller coaster of excitement and anxiousness built inside of me.I looked down the cliff(悬崖).My heart skipped a beat when the wind howled,blowing leaves and twigs in the trees.My legs started to shake.
Para.1:
"Alright y'all,time to hit the trails".Said the instructor with too much enthusiasm.
Para.2:
My turn finally came.
【考点】记叙文;读后续写;生活感悟.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】
"Alright y'all,time to hit the trails".Said the instructor with too much enthusiasm.My mom stepped up first.She got hooked up to the metal wire,ready to get pushed off the cliff.She jumped off the stool and zipped across the metal line,the wind blowing on her face.My dad gave me an encouraging smile before he followed suit.I got woozy.What if the zip line failed me?The sun kept beating down on me and I had to brace myself up.Since my parents had made it,why couldn't I?
My turn finally came.My hands grew clammy,and I started to sweat.The smell of metal came upon my hands from holding my harness.I jumped and closed my eyes,my legs folding up in unison.All the nervousness went away as soon as I jumped.I flew across that wire.I looked down to see the river below my feet while still hearing my family's faint cheers.The wind blew against my face and I felt alive and refreshed from it.When I reached the end,my family greeted me with a huge embrace.I realized how far I had come,conquering my fear of heights.
【分析】本文为记叙文,讲述了作者和父母一起去高空滑索,当作者俯瞰悬崖时,作者内心产生了无尽的兴奋和焦虑。当风呼啸着吹动树叶和树枝时,作者的腿开始发抖。
高分句型一:She jumped off the stool and zipped across the metal line,the wind blowing on her face.
译文:她从凳子上跳下来,飞快地穿过金属线,风吹在她的脸上。
分析:这句话使用了独立主格结构the wind blowing on her face。
高分句型二:I realized how far I had come,conquering my fear of heights.
译文:我意识到自己已经走了多远,克服了恐高症。
分析:这句话使用了how引导的宾语从句,conquering my fear of heights是现在分词短语作状语。
【解答】"Alright y'all,time to hit the trails".Said the instructor with too much enthusiasm.My mom stepped up first.She got hooked up to the metal wire,ready to get pushed off the cliff.She jumped off the stool and zipped across the metal line,the wind blowing on her face.【高分句型一】My dad gave me an encouraging smile before he followed suit.I got woozy.What if the zip line failed me?The sun kept beating down on me and I had to brace myself up.Since my parents had made it,why couldn't I?(父母都准备好了高空滑索以及作者的想法)
My turn finally came.My hands grew clammy,and I started to sweat.The smell of metal came upon my hands from holding my harness.I jumped and closed my eyes,my legs folding up in unison.All the nervousness went away as soon as I jumped.I flew across that wire.I looked down to see the river below my feet while still hearing my family's faint cheers.The wind blew against my face and I felt alive and refreshed from it.When I reached the end,my family greeted me with a huge embrace.I realized how far I had come,conquering my fear of heights.【高分句型二】(作者高空滑索的情景以及作者克服了恐高。)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
2.
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
【考点】读后续写.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Father's appearing was like a savior to the two children.Under the guidance of their father,they took positive actions and started all over again.They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge.Father helped them adjust the fire,which was the key to success.It was all right this time.Delicious breakfast was ready.How happy they were!
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised.It was not only the gift,but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.The two children could finish cooking a breakfast,which she didn't expect.The children said loudly, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
【分析】本文为记叙文,讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐,自己动手,做起饭餐来,但是不幸的是,他们连连失败,后来在父亲的帮助下,获得成功,他们把早餐献给亲爱的母亲,妈妈非常感动的故事。
高分句型一:Fatherhelped them adjust the fire,which was the key to success.
译文:父亲帮助他们调整炉火,这是成功的关键。
分析:这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二:Whentheir mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised.
译文:当他们的母亲看到面前美味完美的早餐时,她非常惊讶。
分析:这句话使用when引导时间状语从句。
【解答】As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.Father's appearing was like a savior to the two children.Under the guidance of their father,they took positive actions and started all over again.They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge.Father helped them adjust the fire,which was the key to success.【高分句型一】It was all right this time.Delicious breakfast was ready.How happy they were!(他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐)
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised.【高分句型二】It was not only the gift,but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.The two children could finish cooking a breakfast,which she didn't expect.The children said loudly, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.(母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐,非常感动)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
3.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During this past year,I've had three instances of car trouble.Each time these things happened,I was sick of the way most people hadn't bothered to help.One of those times,I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep.I put signs in the windows,big signs that said NEED A JACK(千斤顶),and offered money.Nothing.Right as I was about to give up,a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over,and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter,who spoke English.He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep,so we would need something to support it.Then he got a saw(锯子)from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road.We rolled it over and put his jack on top,and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off,and then,if you can believe it,I broke his tire iron.No worries:He handed it to his wife,and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron.She was back in 15 minutes.We finished the job,and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty.His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands.I tried to put a 20 bill in the man's hand,but he wouldn't take it,so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could.I asked the little girl where they lived.Mexico,she said.They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks.Then they would go home.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I was about to say goodbye,the girl asked if I'd had lunch.__________
After they left,I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.__________
【考点】读后续写.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】When I was about to say goodbye,the girl asked if I'd had lunch.I told her I hadn't had lunch because I'd been waiting here for help for nearly three hours.The girl said they didn't have lunch either.She suggested to her parents that we have lunch together.Their truck happened to have some food and some things for the picnic.So we ate together in a vacant lot by the side of the road.During that time,I told about what had happened to me and how I felt.They shared interesting stories about their lives in Mexico and on fruit farms.After lunch,the girl's mother put a paper bag of fruit in my jeep.I showed my gratitude again and we said goodbye to each other.
After they left,I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag.There are some delicate fruits in the paper bag.I was surprised to find the money I had quietly left them.At the same time,there was a note written by a girl,which read "We are very happy to be able to help you.We have encountered many difficulties and been disappointed.But we met a lot of helpful people,which made us feel very warm.To help others with one's own ability is also a kind of lifting a finger.The beauty of life comes from these lifting a finger.I hope you have a good life and a happy mood." This made me very moved,and I would try my best to help more people in the future to make our world more beautiful and warmer.
【分析】本文为记叙文,讲述了去年作者汽车出现了三次故障,大多数人都懒得帮忙,作者对此感到很厌烦。有一次,他的汽车又出故障了。他在路边求助了接近3个小时,但是没有人停下来帮忙。就在打算放弃的时候,一个过路的墨西哥家庭停下来,提供了帮助。
高分句型一:I was surprised to find the money I had quietly left them.
译文:我惊讶地发现我悄悄地留给了他们的钱。
分析:I had quietly left them是定语从句修饰the money。
高分句型二:But we met a lot of helpful people,which made us feel very warm.
译文:但是我们遇到了很多乐于助人的人,这让我们感到很温暖。
分析:这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】When I was about to say goodbye,the girl asked if I'd had lunch.I told her I hadn't had lunch because I'd been waiting here for help for nearly three hours.The girl said they didn't have lunch either.She suggested to her parents that we have lunch together.Their truck happened to have some food and some things for the picnic.So we ate together in a vacant lot by the side of the road.During that time,I told about what had happened to me and how I felt.They shared interesting stories about their lives in Mexico and on fruit farms.After lunch,the girl's mother put a paper bag of fruit in my jeep.I showed my gratitude again and we said goodbye to each other.(作者和墨西哥家庭一块儿吃午饭的过程)
After they left,I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag.There are some delicate fruits in the paper bag.I was surprised to find the money I had quietly left them.【高分句型一】At the same time,there was a note written by a girl,which read "We are very happy to be able to help you.We have encountered many difficulties and been disappointed.But we met a lot of helpful people,which made us feel very warm.【高分句型二】To help others with one's own ability is also a kind of lifting a finger.The beauty of life comes from these lifting a finger.I hope you have a good life and a happy mood." This made me very moved,and I would try my best to help more people in the future to make our world more beautiful and warmer.(作者在这一家人离开后,在纸袋里发现什么,以及自己的感受)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
(5)关键用词,标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时,务必做到"字迹工整、清晰"。
4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The event that stands out in Tom's memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old.He was at home with his elder sister Jane.Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices.At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud,but he soon realized this time it was different.
"Quick!Quick!Remove the motorcycles from the shop." someone shouted.Then a thick burning smell filled the air.When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate,a thick cloud of smoke greeted him.The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.
Jane,who had been playing the violin in her room,hurried to the living room.They rushed out of the door and along the corridor(走廊) through the smoke.
They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane suddenly stopped in her track.She turned around and headed back the way they came.Tom had no idea what she was doing,but he followed her.
Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them,who they called Makcik.Jane began banging on Makcik's door,but got no answer.As the smoke thickened around them,Tom could see many of their neighbors﹣some still in their pajamas(睡衣)﹣running for safety.The thought of fear crossed his mind.
"She would have run for safety like everyone else!" Tom cried.However,Jane refused to give up."I know Makcik's still inside." She said she was familiar with Makcik's daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping.She pounded against the door."Go downstairs.Go now!Go!"
Paragraph 1:
Tom noticed the flame (火焰) was reaching up._______
Paragraph 2:
Luckily,some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.________
【考点】读后续写.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】Tom noticed the flame was reaching up.Frozen with fear,he stood rooted to the spot.He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane's hand tightly.Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging.Time seemed to stand still,though they were probably there for only two or three minutes.Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head.She kept pounding against the door.Tom burst out crying.
Luckily,some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind.She told them Ms.Makcik must be still in the room.They forced the door open with all their might.Sure enough,Makcik was lying in bed,unconscious.She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital,where she finally came to herself.People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom were very happy.
【分析】高分句型一:Time seemed to stand still,though they were probably there for only two or three minutes.
译文:时间似乎静止不动,尽管他们可能只在那里呆了两三分钟。
分析:这句话使用though引导让步状语从句。
高分句型二:She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital,where she finally came to herself.
译文:她被抬下楼,然后被送往医院,在那里她终于苏醒过来。
分析:这句话使用where引导定语从句修饰the hospital。
【解答】Tom noticed the flame was reaching up.Frozen with fear,he stood rooted to the spot.He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane's hand tightly.Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging.Time seemed to stand still,though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. 【高分句型一】Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head.She kept pounding against the door.Tom burst out crying. (Tom和Jane被困在大火里面)
Luckily,some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind.She told them Ms.Makcik must be still in the room.They forced the door open with all their might.Sure enough,Makcik was lying in bed,unconscious.She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital,where she finally came to herself. 【高分句型二】People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom were very happy.(邻居帮忙救出他们和Ms.Makcik )
【点评】解题方法点拨(1)品读原文.确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索.如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)".
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语.续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数".
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路.同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容.
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后.最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿.拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯.
5.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The most important change in a person's life is the change of his or her attitude. Right attitudes produce right actions. Have you ever met someone who gave you a different view of life?
On a Sunday morning, I saw something very interesting as I went to the greengrocer's. To get there,I had to cross a bridge over railway tracks. The bridge was pretty high. A steep set of steps had to be climbed; then the bridge flattened out(变平),followed by coming down another set of steps. On my way back from the greengrocer's, I saw an elderly gentleman running up the steps. After watching him run up the steps so fast, I thought that he must be in a rush.
Before I knew it, he had crossed the bridge, and then he ran back to where, he started. To my surprise,he did not stop. He turned around, and then went up and down the bridge again. He was not struggling,and seemed to enjoy going up and down the bridge. Being a fitness fanatic(热衷于健美的人) myself,I admired his ability to cross the bridge so quickly. My curiosity got the better of me, and I came up to him to have a chat with him.
"Excuse me, sir. Are you training for an event?" I asked.
He stopped and smiled. "No, not training for an event. Well,I am training for life, " he said with a broad smile on his face as sweat rolled down his cheeks.
I told him that I had been looking for a role model of fitness, and that I hoped to be as strong as he is when I get to his age. He said that everyone has a choice about what they do with their life. "I am not different," he added. With much admiration, I asked,"What drives you to maintain good health?"
Then he told me the accident he met when he was young.
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"I used to be a cyclist. " he said. ﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
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His great determination paid off, and he was able to walk again. ﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
【考点】读后续写.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】Paragraph 1:
"I used to be a cyclist,"he said."Competing in cycling events is what I loved and enjoyed."Then he told me why he stopped cycling. While cycling one day, he was hit by a car. The doctor told him that he might never walk again. He refused to believe that. So he was determined not to let the accident prevented him from walking again. He insisted on walking with a walking stick every day.
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His great determination paid off, and he was able to walk again. He was not satisfied with just walking. He found the bridge to run across it. At first, he could only walked slowly up to the stairs, but he was determined to build up his body. Over time, not only could he walked across the bridge, but also he was able to run across it quickly. In order to maintain his strength, he kept running for 20 years. I was impressed by what he said.
【分析】本文为记叙文。文章介绍作者在去百货商店的路上看见一位老人来回爬山一座高架桥,作者就询问老人这样做的目的。老人给他讲了自己的故事。
高分句型一:While cycling one day, he was hit by a car.
译文:一天骑车时,他被一辆汽车撞了。
分析:这句话使用while引导时间状语从句的省略句。
高分句型二:I was impressed by what he said.
译文:我对他的话印象深刻。
分析:这句话使用what引导宾语从句。
【解答】Paragraph 1:
"I used to be a cyclist,"he said."Competing in cycling events is what I loved and enjoyed."Then he told me why he stopped cycling. While cycling one day, he was hit by a car. 【高分句型一】The doctor told him that he might never walk again. He refused to believe that. So he was determined not to let the accident prevented him from walking again. He insisted on walking with a walking stick every day.(老人原来是自行车骑手,后来出了事故,不能再走路,他坚持练习)
Paragraph 2:
His great determination paid off, and he was able to walk again. He was not satisfied with just walking. He found the bridge to run across it. At first, he could only walked slowly up to the stairs, but he was determined to build up his body. Over time, not only could he walked across the bridge, but also he was able to run across it quickly. In order to maintain his strength, he kept running for 20 years. I was impressed by what he said.【高分句型二】(老人能够再次行走,他坚持每天跑过桥来增强体力,作者对此印象深刻)
【点评】解题方法点拨(1)品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
6.When Dr.Henderson was assigning(指定) project mates for his psychology class,I secretly hoped he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with.Above all,I hoped he wouldn't assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match.As fate(命运) would have it,Dr.Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.
I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself.He looked at me as though I weren't there.I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course.He wasn't mean or abusive.He just gave me the impression that he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.
Needless to say,I didn't look forward to an entire team of being brushed off,but I tried to make the best of it and didn't say anything for fear that I would make things worse.
The project required each team to develop a hypothesis(假说),set up an experiment to test the hypothesis,do the statistical analysis and present the findings.Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students.
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project,I was uneasy.Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single﹣mindedness and good grades—the exact opposite of me.I actually wanted to drop the class at one point,but stopped short because I didn't want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out.I decided to stick to it no matter what.
After long discussions,we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well﹣being of teenagers.I wasn't sure what it meant exactly,but at least we had a topic.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para.1:
We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.
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Para.2:
Then one day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease.
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【考点】读后续写.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.Teammates as we were,he kept engaged in doing researches alone.The more we met,the more I was flooded with awkwardness.At one point,l gathered my courage and asked him why he seemed so serious and kept me at a distance.Without any reply,he was still buried in the statistical analyses.I was regretting what I said when he threw me a pile of paper. "Check again,Line 3!" The cold tone pushed me to focus on the project.With time going on,it's surprising that I managed to make sense of some puzzling psychological questions and he was not so cold to me.
Then one day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease.Like sitting on pins and needles all day,I rushed to the hospital after class.It shocked me that my seemingly arrogant teammate should be so vulnerable.Having promised I wouldn't let him down,I used whatever spare time to work on the project.When the day came,I went all out to present our findings.To my satisfaction,we were awarded an A!Excited but calm,I couldn't wait to inform him of the good news.He nodded in gratitude,tears blurring his eyes.It was true that everyone had his potential to be better,both in academy and personality when fueling passion for them.
【分析】这是一篇记叙文,简述了作者和队友共同完成作业任务,从刚开始的无法配合到最后圆满完成任务的故事。
高分句型一:Teammates as we were,he kept engaged in doing researches alone.
翻译:尽管我们是队友,他还是一个人做研究。
分析:本句使用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装。
高分句型二:He nodded in gratitude,tears blurring his eyes.
翻译:他感激地点点头,泪水模糊了他的眼睛。
分析:本句使用了独立主格结构。
【解答】We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.Teammates as we were,he kept engaged in doing researches alone.【高分句型一】The more we met,the more I was flooded with awkwardness.At one point,l gathered my courage and asked him why he seemed so serious and kept me at a distance.Without any reply,he was still buried in the statistical analyses.I was regretting what I said when he threw me a pile of paper. "Check again,Line 3!" The cold tone pushed me to focus on the project.With time going on,it's surprising that I managed to make sense of some puzzling psychological questions and he was not so cold to me.(作者的思想斗争)
Then one day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease.Like sitting on pins and needles all day,I rushed to the hospital after class.It shocked me that my seemingly arrogant teammate should be so vulnerable.Having promised I wouldn't let him down,I used whatever spare time to work on the project.When the day came,I went all out to present our findings.To my satisfaction,we were awarded an A!Excited but calm,I couldn't wait to inform him of the good news.He nodded in gratitude,tears blurring his eyes.【高分句型二】It was true that everyone had his potential to be better,both in academy and personality when fueling passion for them.(作者的感想)
【点评】解题方法点拨
(1)品读原文,确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速阅读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
7.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Once,when I was a teenager my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus.Finally there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.
This family made a big impression on me.There were eight children,all probably under the age of twelve.You could tell they didn't have a lot of money.Their clothes were not expensive,but they were clean.The children were well﹣behaved,all of them standing in line,two﹣by﹣two behind their parents,holding hands.They were excitedly talking about the clowns,elephants and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice.One could sense they had never been to the circus before.It promised to be a highlight of their young lives.
The father and mother were at the head of the pack,standing proud as they could be.The mother was holding her husband's hand,looking up at him as if to say,"You are my knight in shining armor." He was smiling and responding in pride,looking back at her as if to say "You got that right".The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted.He proudly responded "please let me buy eight children's tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus."
The ticket lady gave the price.The man's wife let go of his hand,lowered her head and her lips began to shake.The father leaned a little closer and asked,"How much did you say?" The ticket lady again told him the price.The man obviously didn't have enough money.
How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn't have enough money to take them to the circus?Actually we were not wealthy in any sense,so I understand how the kids would feel.I felt sorry for them.
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Seeing what was going on,my dad seemed to have an idea. ______
Paragraph 2:
That day my father and I went back to our car._______
【考点】读后续写.
【专题】书面表达.
【答案】Paragraph 1:
Seeing what was going on,my dad seemed to have an idea. He put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a S20 bill and dropped it on the ground. And then he pulled the father's clothes and said,"Sir, it must be your money."The father caught sight of it,a look of surprise and confusion appearing on his face. Wearing a smile, my father picked up the money, put it into the man's hand and smiled at him as if to say,"Take it to buy the tickets." The man bit his lower lip to keep it from trembling, tears filling his eyes, and he opened his mouth as if he wanted to say something but it didn't come out.
Paragraph 2:
That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. On the way home, the scene that the eight children were excitedly watching the clowns, elephants, and other acts kept flashing through my mind. Circus was not so important to me because I wasn't the same person as I came here: something essential changed inside me. Helping others to realize their dreams gave me more pleasure.I looked at my father, who seemed to be a knight in shining armor.
【分析】高分句型一:Wearing a smile, my father picked up the money, put it into the man's hand and smiled at him as if to say,"Take it to buy the tickets."
译文:带着微笑,父亲拿起钱,放在那人手里,对他笑了笑,好像在说:"拿去买票吧."
分析:这句话使用现在分词作状语,as if引导省略的方式状语从句.