【期末专项培优】应用文写作（含解析）2025-2026学年高二上学期英语期末必刷卷人教版（2019）
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末专项培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假定你是学校学生会主席李华。你们计划举办一个"中国年"聚会，欢迎来学校访问的澳大利亚学生。请你给领队Mr.Smith写一封邀请邮件，内容包括：
1.发出邀请；
2.聚会的时间和地点；
3.简要介绍活动内容。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr.Smith，
Welcome to our school and I have some good news to tell you.______
Yours，
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，你校英语报School Daily正在征集有关志愿者工作经历的稿件。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）曾经的志愿者工作经历；
（2）志愿者工作的感受与收获。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
3．假如你是李华，请根据下列表格中的内容提示为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文，介绍你最崇拜的中国科学家。
姓名 梁建英
出生年份 1972年
主要经历 （1）1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作； （2）参与研制时速300千米﹣350千米的高铁； （3）2019年被评为"最美科技工作者"。
对你的影响及启发 ……
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：高铁high﹣speed railway
4．某英文报就近年来我国学生出国留学低龄化的利弊在报上展开讨论，希望广大读者畅所欲言，就此事发表自己的看法．假设你是中学生李华，请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈谈你的看法．既可以赞同，也可以反对，但必须说明理由．
（注意：信的开头已给出，字数不计算在内．）
1．字数100左右，开头已经给出．
2．可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age．
Yours，
Li Hua．
5．假定你是李华，你上周日在学校不小心扭伤了左脚。多亏了外教Peter学过这方面的急救知识，对你进行了急救。请你用英语给Peter写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.当时扭伤的情况；
2.Peter如何对你进行急救（叫救护车、冷敷、包扎）；
3.表达感激之情。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter，
My name is Li Hua，who was assisted by you last Sunday.___________________
Best wishes to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
6．假设你是学生会主席李华，你校拟组织本校的国际生一日游，委托你通知相关事宜并随行，请你写一则书面通知，要点包括：
1.集合时间和地点。
2.目的地：文昌孔庙；孔庙附近的橙园
注意：
1.词数80字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：孔庙the Confucius Temple
Notice
______________________
7．假如你是李华，你的朋友Tom 5月22日来信询问你毕业前的一次旅游经历。请你根据下面提示给他回一封80词左右的电子邮件。
1．由学生会组织。
2．一部分人愿意乘公交车；另一部分人喜欢步行；最后大家被说服骑自行车。
3．美丽的风景让人难以忘怀。
4．感受：这次旅游增进了友谊，提高了关心自然环境的意识。
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
How happy I am to receive your letter.______
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
8．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter来信询问你如何保持健康。请你用英语回复一封电子邮件，内容主要包括：
1.合理饮食；
2.加强锻炼；
3.保证睡眠。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
9．假设你是李华，日前参加了在加拿大举行的为期四周的国际中学生生存训练营活动，并将作为中国学生代表在闭幕式上发言．请你用英语写一篇发言稿，要点包括：
1．遇到的挑战（语言、交往、文化冲击等）；
2．你的收获；
3．感谢组织者．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear friends，
I am honored to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．
That's all．Thank you for listening．
10．假定你是红星外国语学校学生会主席李华。神舟十二号飞行任务取得了圆满成功后，航天英雄聂海胜受邀将来你校作报告。请你根据提示内容写一则通知，请全校同学参加报告会。内容包括：
1.报告的时间，地点；
2.报告内容：此次飞行的主要任务和宇航员的日常活动；
3.可与聂海胜进行现场互动。
注意：词数 80 左右。参考词汇：神舟十二号 Shenzhou XII spacecraft宇航员 astronaut
11．假设你是李华，上周你们班级参加了学校举办的"爱科学"板报展活动。请你为校英语报写一篇短文，介绍参加该活动的情况，内容包括：
1.讨论主题；
2.准备制作；
3.展示体会。
注意：
1.词数100左右；标题已给出，不计入总数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
12．假定你是新华中学学生会主席李华，应学校英文报邀请，写一封倡议书．呼吁大家养成良好卫生习惯，积极做好个人防护．要点如下：
1．倡议原因；
2．健康建议；
3．表达信心．
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
提示词：卫生习惯 hygiene practices
Dear schoolmates，
______________
The Students' Union
13．假定你是李华．你市最近天气变化大，许多市民都因此患了感冒．请你用英语给在你市留学的美国朋友Susan写封信，提醒他采取措施，预防感冒．内容包括：
1．关注天气变化，及时加衣物；
2．适当运动，注意饮食；
3．避免与感冒患者接触．
注意：
1．总词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
14．假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华．你校将于11月26日接待来自美国某中学的学生访问团．你受学校委托，负责安排其在津的一日活动．请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见．
1．上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；
2．中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；
3．下午与我校学生游览海河．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：海河the Haihe River
Dear Mr．Smith．
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
15．上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动．请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：
1．农场情况；
2．采摘过程；
3．个人感受．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．题目已为你写好．
题目：My Weekend
期末专项培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假定你是学校学生会主席李华。你们计划举办一个"中国年"聚会，欢迎来学校访问的澳大利亚学生。请你给领队Mr.Smith写一封邀请邮件，内容包括：
1.发出邀请；
2.聚会的时间和地点；
3.简要介绍活动内容。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr.Smith，
Welcome to our school and I have some good news to tell you.______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mr.Smith，
Welcome to our school and I have some good news to tell you.In order to spend a happy new year with you，we are planning to hold an activity called ''Chinese New Year'' next Sunday in the school hall.We sincerely hope that you can come and join us.
To start with，we will have a performance，which includes some Chinese elements，such as Beijing opera，ethnical costume show and cross talk.Then，we will have a part of cultural exchange，during which we will teach you how to make jiaozi，a symbolic food of Chinese New Year，and you can tell or teach us the tradition and traditional things of your country.If you have some advice or questions please contact with me.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
In order to spend a happy new year with you，we are planning to hold an activity called ''Chinese New Year'' next Sunday in the school hall.
分析：句子里，修饰名词an activity，用过去分词called ''Chinese New Year'' next Sunday in the school hall作定语。
翻译：为了和大家一起过一个快乐的新年，我们计划下星期天在学校礼堂举行一个叫做"中国新年"的活动。
高分句型二
To start with，we will have a performance，which includes some Chinese elements，such as Beijing opera，ethnical costume show and cross talk.
分析：句子里，修饰先行词a performance，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句includes some Chinese elements，such as Beijing opera，ethnical costume show and cross talk.
翻译：首先，我们将有一个表演，其中包括一些中国元素，如京剧，民族服装表演和相声。
【解答】Dear Mr.Smith，
Welcome to our school and I have some good news to tell you.In order to spend a happy new year with you，we are planning to hold an activity called ''Chinese New Year'' next Sunday in the school hall.【高分句型一】（聚会的时间和地点） We sincerely hope that you can come and join us.（发出邀请）
To start with，we will have a performance，which includes some Chinese elements，such as Beijing opera，ethnical costume show and cross talk.【高分句型二】Then，we will have a part of cultural exchange，during which we will teach you how to make jiaozi，a symbolic food of Chinese New Year，and you can tell or teach us the tradition and traditional things of your country.If you have some advice or questions please contact with me.（简要介绍活动内容）
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上。一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次。
2．假定你是李华，你校英语报School Daily正在征集有关志愿者工作经历的稿件。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）曾经的志愿者工作经历；
（2）志愿者工作的感受与收获。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Last Saturday I worked as a volunteer in a Children's Hospital.I worked in the hall for the whole day and gave directions to the patients，telling them the exact way to each department.I also helped comfort kids，sending lovely toys to them.
Though it was a tiring day，I felt really good after helping other people as possible as I could.And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class.Volunteering is of great benefit to those in need.I'd like to try different volunteer work in the future.
【分析】高分句型一：I worked in the hall for the whole day and gave directions to the patients，telling them the exact way to each department.
翻译：我在大厅里工作了一整天，给病人指路，告诉他们去各个科室的确切路线。
分析：本句使用了现在分词telling them the exact way to each department作状语。
高分句型二：And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class.
翻译：从志愿工作中，我学到了许多我在课堂上从未学到的东西。
分析：本句使用了that引导的定语从句。
【解答】Last Saturday I worked as a volunteer in a Children's Hospital.I worked in the hall for the whole day and gave directions to the patients，telling them the exact way to each department.【高分句型一】I also helped comfort kids，sending lovely toys to them.（曾经的志愿者工作经历）
Though it was a tiring day，I felt really good after helping other people as possible as I could.And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class.【高分句型二】Volunteering is of great benefit to those in need.I'd like to try different volunteer work in the future.（志愿者工作的感受与收获）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3．假如你是李华，请根据下列表格中的内容提示为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文，介绍你最崇拜的中国科学家。
姓名 梁建英
出生年份 1972年
主要经历 （1）1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作； （2）参与研制时速300千米﹣350千米的高铁； （3）2019年被评为"最美科技工作者"。
对你的影响及启发 ……
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：高铁high﹣speed railway
【考点】图表作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Liang Jianying，general designer of the China high﹣speed EMU，was born in 1972.Since she graduated in 1995 she has been devoting all her time to researching into the development of the China high﹣speed railway.Afterwards，she participated in the development of high﹣speed railway with speed of 300 m﹣350 km / h ，making it more convenient for us to get around quickly.It is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that China is playing a leading role in high﹣speed railways all over the world.As a consequence，she was awarded as "the most beautiful scientific and technological worker" in 2015.However，she never shows any signs of pride.
Liang Jianying has set a good example to us.From her，I realize that we should keep a trying until we realize our dreams.
【分析】高分句型一
Since she graduated in 1995 she has been devoting all her time to researching into the development of the China high﹣speed railway.
分析：句子里，Since引导时间状语从句she graduated in 1995.
翻译：自1995年毕业以来，她一直致力于研究中国高速铁路的发展。
高分句型二
Afterwards，she participated in the development of high﹣speed railway with speed of 300 km﹣350 km / h ，making it more convenient for us to get around quickly.
分析：句子里，现在分词making it more convenient for us to get around quickly作结果状语。
翻译：后来，她参与了时速300公里至350公里的高速铁路的建设，使我们的出行更加方便快捷。
【解答】Liang Jianying，general designer of the China high﹣speed EMU，was born in 1972.（姓名和出生年份） Since she graduated in 1995 she has been devoting all her time to researching into the development of the China high﹣speed railway.【高分句型一】Afterwards，she participated in the development of high﹣speed railway with speed of 300 km﹣350 km / h ，making it more convenient for us to get around quickly. 【高分句型二】It is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that China is playing a leading role in high﹣speed railways all over the world.As a consequence，she was awarded as "the most beautiful scientific and technological worker" in 2015.However，she never shows any signs of pride.（主要经历）
Liang Jianying has set a good example to us.From her，I realize that we should keep a trying until we realize our dreams.（影响及启发）
【点评】书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上。一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次。
4．某英文报就近年来我国学生出国留学低龄化的利弊在报上展开讨论，希望广大读者畅所欲言，就此事发表自己的看法．假设你是中学生李华，请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈谈你的看法．既可以赞同，也可以反对，但必须说明理由．
（注意：信的开头已给出，字数不计算在内．）
1．字数100左右，开头已经给出．
2．可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age．
I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing，which helps us to know more about foreign countries，but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early．
The education in China and that in foreign countries both have advantages and disadvantages．The most important thing for us Chinese students to do at present is to know our country，people and culture well．Without that，we'll have no root and cannot have a good understanding of other countries，people and cultures．
Besides，going to study in foreign countries at too early an age not only costs a lot of money，it could also bring serious problems．Taking care of themselves is one of them．
In my opinion，as primary or middle school students，we should devote our time to studying harder in our own country and improving ourselves，when the chance to study abroad arrives，we'll grasp it and make the best use of it．
Yours，
Li Hua．
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing，which helps us to know more about foreign countries，but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early．
句子里，that引导宾语从句 Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing；代指主句，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 helps us to know more about foreign countries．
我同意中国学生出国留学是件好事，这有助于我们对外国了解得更多，但我认为我们没有必要这么早就这么做．
2．Besides，going to study in foreign countries at too early an age not only costs a lot of money，it could also bring serious problems．
句子里，动名词going to study in foreign countries at too early an age 做主语．
此外，过早到国外学习不仅花费了大量的金钱，而且还可能带来严重的问题．
【解答】Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age．（点明书信目的）
I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing，which helps us to know more about foreign countries，but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early．【高分句型一】（表明自己的观点）
The education in China and that in foreign countries both have advantages and disadvantages．The most important thing for us Chinese students to do at present is to know our country，people and culture well．Without that，we'll have no root and cannot have a good understanding of other countries，people and cultures．Besides，going to study in foreign countries at too early an age not only costs a lot of money，it could also bring serious problems．【高分句型二】Taking care of themselves is one of them．（说明理由）
In my opinion，as primary or middle school students，we should devote our time to studying harder in our own country and improving ourselves，and when the chance to study abroad arrives，we'll grasp it and make the best use of it．（总结自己的观点）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
5．假定你是李华，你上周日在学校不小心扭伤了左脚。多亏了外教Peter学过这方面的急救知识，对你进行了急救。请你用英语给Peter写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.当时扭伤的情况；
2.Peter如何对你进行急救（叫救护车、冷敷、包扎）；
3.表达感激之情。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter，
My name is Li Hua，who was assisted by you last Sunday.___________________
Best wishes to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Peter，
My name is Li Hua，who was assisted by you last Sunday.I am writing to thank you for helping me out at school.
Last Sunday，unfortunately，my left foot got injured in the class.Luckily，you just learned first aid.First，you dialed 120 immediately and performed first aid before the doctor came.Besides，you put my foot in a comfortable position.Then you rushed to a shop nearby and fetched bags of ice，and carefully applied the ice to the injury.Lastly，you covered the injury with a clean and dry bandage.
Now I have got well again.Thanks again for your help.
Best wishes to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：First，you dialed 120 immediately and performed first aid before the doctor came.
译文：首先，你立即拨打了120，在医生还没来之前给我进行了急救。
分析：这句话使用before引导时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Lastly，you covered the injury with a clean and dry bandage.
译文：最后，你用干净干燥的绷带包扎伤口。
分析：这句话使用cover sth with sth意为"用…覆盖…"。
【解答】Dear Peter，
My name is Li Hua，who was assisted by you last Sunday.I am writing to thank you for helping me out at school.（写信目的）
Last Sunday，unfortunately，my left foot got injured in the class. （扭伤的情况）Luckily，you just learned first aid.First，you dialed 120 immediately and performed first aid before the doctor came. 【高分句型一】Besides，you put my foot in a comfortable position.Then you rushed to a shop nearby and fetched bags of ice，and carefully applied the ice to the injury.Lastly，you covered the injury with a clean and dry bandage.【高分句型二】（Peter如何对你进行急救）
Now I have got well again.Thanks again for your help.（表示感谢）
Best wishes to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
6．假设你是学生会主席李华，你校拟组织本校的国际生一日游，委托你通知相关事宜并随行，请你写一则书面通知，要点包括：
1.集合时间和地点。
2.目的地：文昌孔庙；孔庙附近的橙园
注意：
1.词数80字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：孔庙the Confucius Temple
Notice
______________________
【考点】提纲作文；通知类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Notice
To help you further understand Chinese culture and relax you，our school will organize a one﹣day trip for you.
As scheduled，we will meet at 7：30 a.m.on Jan.10，2021 at the school gate，and then take a bus to the Confucius Temple in Wenchang，where you can have a deeper understanding of Confucius and the traditional Chinese culture.In the afternoon，we arrange a leisure activity for you to pick oranges in a farm/an orange garden nearby.
We hope you will have a good time during the trip.
The Student Union
【分析】高分句型一：
To help you further understand Chinese culture and relax you，our school will organize a one﹣day trip for you.
译文：为了帮助你们进一步了解中国文化，放松身心，我们学校将为你们安排一日游。
分析：句子里，动词不定式To help you further understand Chinese culture and relax you作目的状语。
高分句型二：
As scheduled，we will meet at 7：30 a.m.on Jan.10，2021 at the school gate，and then take a bus to the Confucius Temple in Wenchang，where you can have a deeper understanding of Confucius and the traditional Chinese culture.
译文：按照计划，我们将于2021年1月10日上午7：30在学校门口见面，然后乘车前往文昌孔庙，在那里你们可以更深入地了解孔子和中国传统文化。
分析：句子里，修饰先行词the Confucius Temple in Wenchang，关系词where引导非限制性定语从句you can have a deeper understanding of Confucius and the traditional Chinese culture.
【解答】Notice
To help you further understand Chinese culture and relax you，our school will organize a one﹣day trip for you.【高分句型一】（活动目的）
As scheduled，we will meet at 7：30 a.m.on Jan.10，2021 at the school gate，and then take a bus to the Confucius Temple in Wenchang，where you can have a deeper understanding of Confucius and the traditional Chinese culture. 【高分句型二】In the afternoon，we arrange a leisure activity for you to pick oranges in a farm/an orange garden nearby.（集合时间和地点以及目的地）
We hope you will have a good time during the trip.（表达希望）
The Student Union
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
7．假如你是李华，你的朋友Tom 5月22日来信询问你毕业前的一次旅游经历。请你根据下面提示给他回一封80词左右的电子邮件。
1．由学生会组织。
2．一部分人愿意乘公交车；另一部分人喜欢步行；最后大家被说服骑自行车。
3．美丽的风景让人难以忘怀。
4．感受：这次旅游增进了友谊，提高了关心自然环境的意识。
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
How happy I am to receive your letter.______
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Tom，
How happy I am to receive your letter.Now I will tell you something about the trip organized by our Students' Union.Some of us preferred to take a bus while others were fond of walking，and finally we were persuaded to cycle.
When we got there，we were greatly impressed by its beautiful view.All kinds of butterflies were flying freely in the valley，the entire mountain was covered with beautiful flowers，and the air there was pleasant to breathe；as a result，we couldn't wait to walk into nature.
Though we were tired，it was the trip that improved our friendship and raised our awareness to care about the environment.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：When we got there，we were greatly impressed by its beautiful view.
翻译：当我们到达那里时，美丽的景色给我们留下了深刻的印象。
分析：本句使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Though we were tired，it was the trip that improved our friendship and raised our awareness to care about the environment.
翻译：虽然我们很累，但这次旅行增进了我们的友谊，提高了我们关心环境的意识。
分析：本句使用了though引导的让步状语从句，以及强调句型。
【解答】Dear Tom，
How happy I am to receive your letter.Now I will tell you something about the trip organized by our Students' Union.Some of us preferred to take a bus while others were fond of walking，and finally we were persuaded to cycle.（点明主题）
When we got there，we were greatly impressed by its beautiful view.【高分句型一】All kinds of butterflies were flying freely in the valley，the entire mountain was covered with beautiful flowers，and the air there was pleasant to breathe；as a result，we couldn't wait to walk into nature.（活动的具体过程）
Though we were tired，it was the trip that improved our friendship and raised our awareness to care about the environment.【高分句型二】（个人感受）
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter来信询问你如何保持健康。请你用英语回复一封电子邮件，内容主要包括：
1.合理饮食；
2.加强锻炼；
3.保证睡眠。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jack，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me about how to keep healthy.I'd like to give you some advice.
As you know，we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet.In order to get enough energy and nutrients，we need a variety of food，such as fish and meat，especially fresh vegetablesand fruits.Besides，you should take physical exercise regularly.For example，you can play basketball or take a walk after school. （加强锻炼）What's more，having enough sleep is of great importance.Only in this way can you keep fit.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：As you know，we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet.
译文：如你所知，我们青少年正经历着快速的成长和发展，需要健康均衡的饮食来支持。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，which引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：Only in this way can you keep fit.
译文：只有这样你才能保持健康。
分析：这句话使用了only+介词短语置于句首，后面用部分倒装。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me about how to keep healthy.I'd like to give you some advice.（写信目的）
As you know，we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet.【高分句型一】In order to get enough energy and nutrients，we need a variety of food，such as fish and meat，especially fresh vegetablesand fruits. （合理饮食）Besides，you should take physical exercise regularly.For example，you can play basketball or take a walk after school.What's more，having enough sleep is of great importance.Only in this way can you keep fit.【高分句型二】（保证睡眠）
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
9．假设你是李华，日前参加了在加拿大举行的为期四周的国际中学生生存训练营活动，并将作为中国学生代表在闭幕式上发言．请你用英语写一篇发言稿，要点包括：
1．遇到的挑战（语言、交往、文化冲击等）；
2．你的收获；
3．感谢组织者．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear friends，
I am honored to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．
Before I came to Canada，I had made careful preparations for this camp．However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making myself understood，talking with others from several countries，and dealing with culture shock（高分句型一）．With great patience and kindness，the organizers helped me out．The four weeks in the camp has changed me greatly．Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships（高分句型二）．Most importantly，I became more confident．So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp．
That's all．Thank you for listening．
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1．认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2．依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3．准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making myself understood，talking with others from several countries，and dealing with culture shock
然而，我还是经历了一些意想不到的挑战，比如做自己理解的困难，与一些国家的人谈话，和处理文化冲击．
高分句型二：
Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships．
我不仅提高了我的英语口语，还得到了终身的友谊．
【解答】Dear friends，
I am honoured to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．Before I came to Canada，I had made careful preparations for this camp．However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making myself understood，talking with others from several countries，and dealing with culture shock（高分句型一）．With great patience and kindness，the organizers helped me out．The four weeks in the camp has changed me greatly．Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships（高分句型二）．Most importantly，I became more confident．So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp．
That's all．Thank you for listening．
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
10．假定你是红星外国语学校学生会主席李华。神舟十二号飞行任务取得了圆满成功后，航天英雄聂海胜受邀将来你校作报告。请你根据提示内容写一则通知，请全校同学参加报告会。内容包括：
1.报告的时间，地点；
2.报告内容：此次飞行的主要任务和宇航员的日常活动；
3.可与聂海胜进行现场互动。
注意：词数 80 左右。参考词汇：神舟十二号 Shenzhou XII spacecraft宇航员 astronaut
【考点】提纲作文；通知类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Notice
In order to generate our interest in science and space，our school has invited the Space Hero Nie Haisheng to our school to give us a report at 8 a.m.next Sunday.
The report is scheduled to be given in the school hall，where Mr.Nie will introduce the mission of the Shenzhou XII spacecraft and the daily life of the astronauts.In addition，we can communicate with the hero face to face，learning about their challenging but unforgettable life in space.
Whoever is crazy about the activity is welcome.You are sure to experience something special if taking part in it.
Student Union
【分析】高分句型一：The report is scheduled to be given in the school hall，where Mr.Nie will introduce the mission of the Shenzhou XII spacecraft and the daily life of the astronauts.
翻译：报告计划在我们学校报告厅召开，在这里聂先生将会给我们介绍神舟十二号的任务以及宇航员的日常活动。
分析：本句使用了where引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：In addition，we can communicate with the hero face to face，learning about their challenging but unforgettable life in space.
翻译：而且，我们可以和英雄面对面交流，了解他们面对的挑战和在太空难忘的生活。
分析：本句使用了现在分词learning about their challenging but unforgettable life in space作目的状语。
【解答】Notice
In order to generate our interest in science and space，our school has invited the Space Hero Nie Haisheng to our school to give us a report at 8 a.m.next Sunday. （目的、时间）
The report is scheduled to be given in the school hall，where Mr.Nie will introduce the mission of the Shenzhou XII spacecraft and the daily life of the astronauts.【高分句型一】In addition，we can communicate with the hero face to face，learning about their challenging but unforgettable life in space. 【高分句型二】（活动内容）
Whoever is crazy about the activity is welcome.You are sure to experience something special if taking part in it. （欢迎参加）
Student Union
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
11．假设你是李华，上周你们班级参加了学校举办的"爱科学"板报展活动。请你为校英语报写一篇短文，介绍参加该活动的情况，内容包括：
1.讨论主题；
2.准备制作；
3.展示体会。
注意：
1.词数100左右；标题已给出，不计入总数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Last week，our class participated in the school poster exhibition with the topic "We Love Science".We had a memorable experience working together.
Having been informed of the activity，we put forward ideas as to the contents of the poster.After a brief discussion，we agreed on the subjects of AI（Artificial Intelligence） and 5 G，since they are the hottest topics of the advanced technologies.
No time was wasted in our preparation.We first went to the school library to research the history and development of the two fields.When realizing that the library couldn't provide us with enough information about cutting﹣edge technologies，we turned to our teacher for help，who proved to be a valuable resource and gave us lots of practical advice.With the material collected，we got down to making our poster.Each of us had been assigned different tasks，to which we devoted all our effort.We designed，wrote and painted.I even framed the poster to make it more eye﹣catching.
On the day of the exhibition，our elaborately designed poster attracted much attention.The students gathered in front of our poster，appreciating our work.Filled with pride，we are looking forward to the next activity.
【分析】高分句型一
Having been informed of the activity，we put forward ideas as to the contents of the poster.
分析：这句话使用现在分词的完成被动式Having been informed of the activity作时间状语。
翻译：得知这项活动后，我们对海报的内容提出了意见。
高分句型二
When realizing that the library couldn't provide us with enough information about cutting﹣edge technologies，we turned to our teacher for help，who proved to be a valuable resource and gave us lots of practical advice.
分析：使用who引导定语从句proved to be a valuable resource and gave us lots of practical advice修饰our teacher.
翻译：当我们意识到图书馆不能为我们提供足够的关于尖端技术的信息时，我们求助于我们的老师，他知识丰富，给了我们很多实用的建议。
【解答】Last week，our class participated in the school poster exhibition with the topic "We Love Science".We had a memorable experience working together.（点明主题﹣﹣"爱科学"板报展活动）
Having been informed of the activity，we put forward ideas as to the contents of the poster. 【高分句型一】After a brief discussion，we agreed on the subjects of AI（Artificial Intelligence） and 5 G，since they are the hottest topics of the advanced technologies.（讨论主题）
No time was wasted in our preparation.We first went to the school library to research the history and development of the two fields.When realizing that the library couldn't provide us with enough information about cutting﹣edge technologies，we turned to our teacher for help，who proved to be a valuable resource and gave us lots of practical advice. 【高分句型二】With the material collected，we got down to making our poster.Each of us had been assigned different tasks，to which we devoted all our effort.We designed，wrote and painted.I even framed the poster to make it more eye﹣catching.（准备制作）
On the day of the exhibition，our elaborately designed poster attracted much attention.The students gathered in front of our poster，appreciating our work.Filled with pride，we are looking forward to the next activity.（展示体会）
【点评】提纲类写作是近年高考英语书面表达的热点题型，命题人通常以提纲作文的形式考查书信、报道、通知、日记、发言稿、对某人或某物的介绍、欢迎词等。提纲作文的选材范围很广，内容简单易懂，且多是考生熟悉的话题。这类题型的主要特点是要点明确范围具体。但考生也容易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和词汇上的单调，甚至写出结构不完整的句子。
12．假定你是新华中学学生会主席李华，应学校英文报邀请，写一封倡议书．呼吁大家养成良好卫生习惯，积极做好个人防护．要点如下：
1．倡议原因；
2．健康建议；
3．表达信心．
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
提示词：卫生习惯 hygiene practices
Dear schoolmates，
______________
The Students' Union
【考点】提纲作文；身心健康；倡议书．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一
Faced with the disaster，we should respond actively to the appeal from the government and experts．
分析：句子里，过去分词Faced with the disaster做时间状语，和主语we是被动关系．
翻译：面对灾难，我们应该积极响应政府和专家的呼吁．
高分句型二
Besides，wash hand often as possible，which can reduce the risk of being infected with viruses．
分析：句子里，代指主句wash hand often as possible，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 can reduce the risk of being infected with viruses．
翻译：另外，要经常洗手，这样可以减少感染病毒的风险．
【解答】Dear schoolmates，
Over the past few months，the epidemic situation has a strong impact on our life．Faced with the disaster，we should respond actively to the appeal from the government and experts．【高分句型一】（倡议原因）
First of all，pay much attention to the personal hygiene practices．Do wear masks in public places．Besides，wash hand often as possible，which can reduce the risk of being infected with viruses．【高分句型二】Most importantly，keep a balanced diet and exercise regularly． （健康建议）I'm definitely convinced that with our joint efforts，we can get through the tough time together．（表达信心）
The Students' Union
【点评】我们在写作文的时候，一般应该把亮点句型放在明显的位置，以便于能够吸引阅卷老师的眼球；同时对于高分句型的使用也要慎重，应该用自己有把握的句子，特别是高考时，应该以正确为首要目的．另外，长短句的搭配使用会使文章显得灵活，不死板，是写作的首选．
13．假定你是李华．你市最近天气变化大，许多市民都因此患了感冒．请你用英语给在你市留学的美国朋友Susan写封信，提醒他采取措施，预防感冒．内容包括：
1．关注天气变化，及时加衣物；
2．适当运动，注意饮食；
3．避免与感冒患者接触．
注意：
1．总词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】Moreover，eating healthy food is necessary for you to keep yourself in good condition．（高分句型一）句中eating healthy food 为动名词作主语
此外，吃健康的食物对你保持身体健康是必要的．
Last but not least，you should keep a far distance with the patients who are suffering from cold．（高分句型二）句中who are suffering from cold为限制性定语从句
最后，你应该和患感冒的病人保持一定距离．
【解答】Dear Susan，
I'm writing to inform you the spread of a bad cold in our city as a result of the changeable weather．Lots of people are in hospital because of it．Here are some tips I want to offer you．（写信目的）
First of all，you'd better know about the change of weather and put on more clothes according to the weather．（关注天气变化，及时加衣物） Secondly，exercise is a good way to keep you far away from cold．Moreover，eating healthy food is necessary for you to keep yourself in good condition．（高分句型一）（适当运动，注意饮食） Last but not least，you should keep a far distance with the patients who are suffering from cold．（高分句型二）（避免与感冒患者接触）
I hope my suggestion will be helpful to you．（期望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
14．假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华．你校将于11月26日接待来自美国某中学的学生访问团．你受学校委托，负责安排其在津的一日活动．请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见．
1．上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；
2．中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；
3．下午与我校学生游览海河．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：海河the Haihe River
Dear Mr．Smith．
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School．
I'm honoured to make arrangements for you and your students on behalf of our school．In order to give the students from the two countries a good chance to understand each other better，we'll have a talk about the school life，and the cultural differences in the morning．After that，we'll have lunch together in the school dining hall，where we can enjoy some traditional Chinese foods，such as dumplings，noodles and so on．I hope the students from America will have a better understanding of the Chinese culture．In the afternoon，we'll visit the Haihe River，which is the most beautiful river in our city．
I'm sure you will be deeply struck by the beautiful scenery．I'll be glad to follow it if you have any better advice on the arrangements．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是晨光中学学生会主席李华给美国某中学的学生访问团的领队Smith先生写的一封电子邮件．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般将来时态．内容包括：1．自我介绍，并且说明活动安排；2．欢迎提建议．
高分句型
1．I'm honoured to make arrangements for you and your students on behalf of our school．句子里make arrangements表示"做安排"；on behalf of表示"代表"．
我很荣幸代表我们学校为你和你的学生做活动安排．
2．After that，we'll have lunch together in the school dining hall，where we can enjoy some traditional Chinese foods，such as dumplings，noodles and so on．句子里where 引导非限制性定语从句we can enjoy some traditional Chinese foods，such as dumplings，noodles and so on．
在那以后，我们会一起在学校餐厅吃午饭，午餐包括饺子、面条等传统的中国食物．
【解答】Dear Mr．Smith．
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School．I'm honoured to make arrangements for you and your students on behalf of our school．【高分句型一】In order to give the students from the two countries a good chance to understand each other better，we'll have a talk about the school life，and the cultural differences in the morning．After that，we'll have lunch together in the school dining hall，where we can enjoy some traditional Chinese foods，such as dumplings，noodles and so on．【高分句型二】I hope the students from America will have a better understanding of the Chinese culture．In the afternoon，we'll visit the Haihe River，which is the most beautiful river in our city．（自我介绍，并且说明活动安排）
I'm sure you will be deeply struck by the beautiful scenery．I'll be glad to follow it if you have any better advice on the arrangements．（欢迎提建议）
Thank you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】考查提纲类作文．
书面表达试题一般都由"情景"和"要求"两部分构成．"情景"中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分；而"要求"一般在书面表达的后半部分，以"注意"形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求．因而考生对于题目所提供的说明，应认真分析、反复推敲，搞清提出的内容要求，抓住所要表达的信息点．
15．上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动．请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：
1．农场情况；
2．采摘过程；
3．个人感受．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．题目已为你写好．
题目：My Weekend
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：The farm where we went is located in the west of our city．
译文：我们去的农场位于我们城市的西部．
分析：这句话使用where引导定语从句修饰the farm．
高分句型二：Tired as we were，we felt happy to help the farmers．
译文：虽然我们很累，但帮助农民我们感到很高兴．
分析：这句话使用as引导让步状语从句的倒装句．
【解答】My Weekend
Last weekend，I，together with my classmates took part in picking up fruits． （活动）
The farm where we went is located in the west of our city． 【高分句型一】There are many fruits growing there，ranging from apples to peaches．We went there by bus．（农场情况）
While working there，some of us climbed onto the trees with ladders and picked up the fruits．Others sorted the fruits and put them in the box．Tired as we were，we felt happy to help the farmers． 【高分句型二】（采摘过程）
Through this experience，I learn the importance of labour and determine to invent some useful machines to help the farmers．What a meaningful activity．（个人感受）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
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期末专项培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假定你是学校学生会主席李华。你们计划举办一个"中国年"聚会，欢迎来学校访问的澳大利亚学生。请你给领队Mr.Smith写一封邀请邮件，内容包括：
1.发出邀请；
2.聚会的时间和地点；
3.简要介绍活动内容。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr.Smith，
Welcome to our school and I have some good news to tell you.______
Yours，
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，你校英语报School Daily正在征集有关志愿者工作经历的稿件。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）曾经的志愿者工作经历；
（2）志愿者工作的感受与收获。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
3．假如你是李华，请根据下列表格中的内容提示为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文，介绍你最崇拜的中国科学家。
姓名 梁建英
出生年份 1972年
主要经历 （1）1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作； （2）参与研制时速300千米﹣350千米的高铁； （3）2019年被评为"最美科技工作者"。
对你的影响及启发 ……
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：高铁high﹣speed railway
4．某英文报就近年来我国学生出国留学低龄化的利弊在报上展开讨论，希望广大读者畅所欲言，就此事发表自己的看法．假设你是中学生李华，请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈谈你的看法．既可以赞同，也可以反对，但必须说明理由．
（注意：信的开头已给出，字数不计算在内．）
1．字数100左右，开头已经给出．
2．可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age．
Yours，
Li Hua．
5．假定你是李华，你上周日在学校不小心扭伤了左脚。多亏了外教Peter学过这方面的急救知识，对你进行了急救。请你用英语给Peter写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.当时扭伤的情况；
2.Peter如何对你进行急救（叫救护车、冷敷、包扎）；
3.表达感激之情。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter，
My name is Li Hua，who was assisted by you last Sunday.___________________
Best wishes to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
6．假设你是学生会主席李华，你校拟组织本校的国际生一日游，委托你通知相关事宜并随行，请你写一则书面通知，要点包括：
1.集合时间和地点。
2.目的地：文昌孔庙；孔庙附近的橙园
注意：
1.词数80字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：孔庙the Confucius Temple
Notice
______________________
7．假如你是李华，你的朋友Tom 5月22日来信询问你毕业前的一次旅游经历。请你根据下面提示给他回一封80词左右的电子邮件。
1．由学生会组织。
2．一部分人愿意乘公交车；另一部分人喜欢步行；最后大家被说服骑自行车。
3．美丽的风景让人难以忘怀。
4．感受：这次旅游增进了友谊，提高了关心自然环境的意识。
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
How happy I am to receive your letter.______
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
8．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter来信询问你如何保持健康。请你用英语回复一封电子邮件，内容主要包括：
1.合理饮食；
2.加强锻炼；
3.保证睡眠。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
9．假设你是李华，日前参加了在加拿大举行的为期四周的国际中学生生存训练营活动，并将作为中国学生代表在闭幕式上发言．请你用英语写一篇发言稿，要点包括：
1．遇到的挑战（语言、交往、文化冲击等）；
2．你的收获；
3．感谢组织者．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear friends，
I am honored to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．
That's all．Thank you for listening．
10．假定你是红星外国语学校学生会主席李华。神舟十二号飞行任务取得了圆满成功后，航天英雄聂海胜受邀将来你校作报告。请你根据提示内容写一则通知，请全校同学参加报告会。内容包括：
1.报告的时间，地点；
2.报告内容：此次飞行的主要任务和宇航员的日常活动；
3.可与聂海胜进行现场互动。
注意：词数 80 左右。参考词汇：神舟十二号 Shenzhou XII spacecraft宇航员 astronaut
11．假设你是李华，上周你们班级参加了学校举办的"爱科学"板报展活动。请你为校英语报写一篇短文，介绍参加该活动的情况，内容包括：
1.讨论主题；
2.准备制作；
3.展示体会。
注意：
1.词数100左右；标题已给出，不计入总数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
12．假定你是新华中学学生会主席李华，应学校英文报邀请，写一封倡议书．呼吁大家养成良好卫生习惯，积极做好个人防护．要点如下：
1．倡议原因；
2．健康建议；
3．表达信心．
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
提示词：卫生习惯 hygiene practices
Dear schoolmates，
______________
The Students' Union
13．假定你是李华．你市最近天气变化大，许多市民都因此患了感冒．请你用英语给在你市留学的美国朋友Susan写封信，提醒他采取措施，预防感冒．内容包括：
1．关注天气变化，及时加衣物；
2．适当运动，注意饮食；
3．避免与感冒患者接触．
注意：
1．总词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
14．假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华．你校将于11月26日接待来自美国某中学的学生访问团．你受学校委托，负责安排其在津的一日活动．请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见．
1．上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；
2．中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；
3．下午与我校学生游览海河．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：海河the Haihe River
Dear Mr．Smith．
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
15．上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动．请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：
1．农场情况；
2．采摘过程；
3．个人感受．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．题目已为你写好．
题目：My Weekend
期末专项培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假定你是学校学生会主席李华。你们计划举办一个"中国年"聚会，欢迎来学校访问的澳大利亚学生。请你给领队Mr.Smith写一封邀请邮件，内容包括：
1.发出邀请；
2.聚会的时间和地点；
3.简要介绍活动内容。
注意：
1.词数80左右；开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr.Smith，
Welcome to our school and I have some good news to tell you.______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mr.Smith，
Welcome to our school and I have some good news to tell you.In order to spend a happy new year with you，we are planning to hold an activity called ''Chinese New Year'' next Sunday in the school hall.We sincerely hope that you can come and join us.
To start with，we will have a performance，which includes some Chinese elements，such as Beijing opera，ethnical costume show and cross talk.Then，we will have a part of cultural exchange，during which we will teach you how to make jiaozi，a symbolic food of Chinese New Year，and you can tell or teach us the tradition and traditional things of your country.If you have some advice or questions please contact with me.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
In order to spend a happy new year with you，we are planning to hold an activity called ''Chinese New Year'' next Sunday in the school hall.
分析：句子里，修饰名词an activity，用过去分词called ''Chinese New Year'' next Sunday in the school hall作定语。
翻译：为了和大家一起过一个快乐的新年，我们计划下星期天在学校礼堂举行一个叫做"中国新年"的活动。
高分句型二
To start with，we will have a performance，which includes some Chinese elements，such as Beijing opera，ethnical costume show and cross talk.
分析：句子里，修饰先行词a performance，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句includes some Chinese elements，such as Beijing opera，ethnical costume show and cross talk.
翻译：首先，我们将有一个表演，其中包括一些中国元素，如京剧，民族服装表演和相声。
【解答】Dear Mr.Smith，
Welcome to our school and I have some good news to tell you.In order to spend a happy new year with you，we are planning to hold an activity called ''Chinese New Year'' next Sunday in the school hall.【高分句型一】（聚会的时间和地点） We sincerely hope that you can come and join us.（发出邀请）
To start with，we will have a performance，which includes some Chinese elements，such as Beijing opera，ethnical costume show and cross talk.【高分句型二】Then，we will have a part of cultural exchange，during which we will teach you how to make jiaozi，a symbolic food of Chinese New Year，and you can tell or teach us the tradition and traditional things of your country.If you have some advice or questions please contact with me.（简要介绍活动内容）
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上。一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次。
2．假定你是李华，你校英语报School Daily正在征集有关志愿者工作经历的稿件。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）曾经的志愿者工作经历；
（2）志愿者工作的感受与收获。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Last Saturday I worked as a volunteer in a Children's Hospital.I worked in the hall for the whole day and gave directions to the patients，telling them the exact way to each department.I also helped comfort kids，sending lovely toys to them.
Though it was a tiring day，I felt really good after helping other people as possible as I could.And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class.Volunteering is of great benefit to those in need.I'd like to try different volunteer work in the future.
【分析】高分句型一：I worked in the hall for the whole day and gave directions to the patients，telling them the exact way to each department.
翻译：我在大厅里工作了一整天，给病人指路，告诉他们去各个科室的确切路线。
分析：本句使用了现在分词telling them the exact way to each department作状语。
高分句型二：And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class.
翻译：从志愿工作中，我学到了许多我在课堂上从未学到的东西。
分析：本句使用了that引导的定语从句。
【解答】Last Saturday I worked as a volunteer in a Children's Hospital.I worked in the hall for the whole day and gave directions to the patients，telling them the exact way to each department.【高分句型一】I also helped comfort kids，sending lovely toys to them.（曾经的志愿者工作经历）
Though it was a tiring day，I felt really good after helping other people as possible as I could.And from volunteering I have learned many things that I have never learned in class.【高分句型二】Volunteering is of great benefit to those in need.I'd like to try different volunteer work in the future.（志愿者工作的感受与收获）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3．假如你是李华，请根据下列表格中的内容提示为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文，介绍你最崇拜的中国科学家。
姓名 梁建英
出生年份 1972年
主要经历 （1）1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作； （2）参与研制时速300千米﹣350千米的高铁； （3）2019年被评为"最美科技工作者"。
对你的影响及启发 ……
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：高铁high﹣speed railway
【考点】图表作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Liang Jianying，general designer of the China high﹣speed EMU，was born in 1972.Since she graduated in 1995 she has been devoting all her time to researching into the development of the China high﹣speed railway.Afterwards，she participated in the development of high﹣speed railway with speed of 300 m﹣350 km / h ，making it more convenient for us to get around quickly.It is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that China is playing a leading role in high﹣speed railways all over the world.As a consequence，she was awarded as "the most beautiful scientific and technological worker" in 2015.However，she never shows any signs of pride.
Liang Jianying has set a good example to us.From her，I realize that we should keep a trying until we realize our dreams.
【分析】高分句型一
Since she graduated in 1995 she has been devoting all her time to researching into the development of the China high﹣speed railway.
分析：句子里，Since引导时间状语从句she graduated in 1995.
翻译：自1995年毕业以来，她一直致力于研究中国高速铁路的发展。
高分句型二
Afterwards，she participated in the development of high﹣speed railway with speed of 300 km﹣350 km / h ，making it more convenient for us to get around quickly.
分析：句子里，现在分词making it more convenient for us to get around quickly作结果状语。
翻译：后来，她参与了时速300公里至350公里的高速铁路的建设，使我们的出行更加方便快捷。
【解答】Liang Jianying，general designer of the China high﹣speed EMU，was born in 1972.（姓名和出生年份） Since she graduated in 1995 she has been devoting all her time to researching into the development of the China high﹣speed railway.【高分句型一】Afterwards，she participated in the development of high﹣speed railway with speed of 300 km﹣350 km / h ，making it more convenient for us to get around quickly. 【高分句型二】It is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that China is playing a leading role in high﹣speed railways all over the world.As a consequence，she was awarded as "the most beautiful scientific and technological worker" in 2015.However，she never shows any signs of pride.（主要经历）
Liang Jianying has set a good example to us.From her，I realize that we should keep a trying until we realize our dreams.（影响及启发）
【点评】书面表达不仅反映在表达内容上，也反映在书面形式上。一定要注意单词拼写正确，书写规范，字迹工整，卷面力求整洁，正确使用标点符号，使别人看起来耳目一新，具有整体美感，从而提高自己的得分档次。
4．某英文报就近年来我国学生出国留学低龄化的利弊在报上展开讨论，希望广大读者畅所欲言，就此事发表自己的看法．假设你是中学生李华，请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈谈你的看法．既可以赞同，也可以反对，但必须说明理由．
（注意：信的开头已给出，字数不计算在内．）
1．字数100左右，开头已经给出．
2．可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age．
I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing，which helps us to know more about foreign countries，but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early．
The education in China and that in foreign countries both have advantages and disadvantages．The most important thing for us Chinese students to do at present is to know our country，people and culture well．Without that，we'll have no root and cannot have a good understanding of other countries，people and cultures．
Besides，going to study in foreign countries at too early an age not only costs a lot of money，it could also bring serious problems．Taking care of themselves is one of them．
In my opinion，as primary or middle school students，we should devote our time to studying harder in our own country and improving ourselves，when the chance to study abroad arrives，we'll grasp it and make the best use of it．
Yours，
Li Hua．
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing，which helps us to know more about foreign countries，but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early．
句子里，that引导宾语从句 Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing；代指主句，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 helps us to know more about foreign countries．
我同意中国学生出国留学是件好事，这有助于我们对外国了解得更多，但我认为我们没有必要这么早就这么做．
2．Besides，going to study in foreign countries at too early an age not only costs a lot of money，it could also bring serious problems．
句子里，动名词going to study in foreign countries at too early an age 做主语．
此外，过早到国外学习不仅花费了大量的金钱，而且还可能带来严重的问题．
【解答】Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age．（点明书信目的）
I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing，which helps us to know more about foreign countries，but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early．【高分句型一】（表明自己的观点）
The education in China and that in foreign countries both have advantages and disadvantages．The most important thing for us Chinese students to do at present is to know our country，people and culture well．Without that，we'll have no root and cannot have a good understanding of other countries，people and cultures．Besides，going to study in foreign countries at too early an age not only costs a lot of money，it could also bring serious problems．【高分句型二】Taking care of themselves is one of them．（说明理由）
In my opinion，as primary or middle school students，we should devote our time to studying harder in our own country and improving ourselves，and when the chance to study abroad arrives，we'll grasp it and make the best use of it．（总结自己的观点）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
5．假定你是李华，你上周日在学校不小心扭伤了左脚。多亏了外教Peter学过这方面的急救知识，对你进行了急救。请你用英语给Peter写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.当时扭伤的情况；
2.Peter如何对你进行急救（叫救护车、冷敷、包扎）；
3.表达感激之情。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter，
My name is Li Hua，who was assisted by you last Sunday.___________________
Best wishes to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Peter，
My name is Li Hua，who was assisted by you last Sunday.I am writing to thank you for helping me out at school.
Last Sunday，unfortunately，my left foot got injured in the class.Luckily，you just learned first aid.First，you dialed 120 immediately and performed first aid before the doctor came.Besides，you put my foot in a comfortable position.Then you rushed to a shop nearby and fetched bags of ice，and carefully applied the ice to the injury.Lastly，you covered the injury with a clean and dry bandage.
Now I have got well again.Thanks again for your help.
Best wishes to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：First，you dialed 120 immediately and performed first aid before the doctor came.
译文：首先，你立即拨打了120，在医生还没来之前给我进行了急救。
分析：这句话使用before引导时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Lastly，you covered the injury with a clean and dry bandage.
译文：最后，你用干净干燥的绷带包扎伤口。
分析：这句话使用cover sth with sth意为"用…覆盖…"。
【解答】Dear Peter，
My name is Li Hua，who was assisted by you last Sunday.I am writing to thank you for helping me out at school.（写信目的）
Last Sunday，unfortunately，my left foot got injured in the class. （扭伤的情况）Luckily，you just learned first aid.First，you dialed 120 immediately and performed first aid before the doctor came. 【高分句型一】Besides，you put my foot in a comfortable position.Then you rushed to a shop nearby and fetched bags of ice，and carefully applied the ice to the injury.Lastly，you covered the injury with a clean and dry bandage.【高分句型二】（Peter如何对你进行急救）
Now I have got well again.Thanks again for your help.（表示感谢）
Best wishes to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
6．假设你是学生会主席李华，你校拟组织本校的国际生一日游，委托你通知相关事宜并随行，请你写一则书面通知，要点包括：
1.集合时间和地点。
2.目的地：文昌孔庙；孔庙附近的橙园
注意：
1.词数80字左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：孔庙the Confucius Temple
Notice
______________________
【考点】提纲作文；通知类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Notice
To help you further understand Chinese culture and relax you，our school will organize a one﹣day trip for you.
As scheduled，we will meet at 7：30 a.m.on Jan.10，2021 at the school gate，and then take a bus to the Confucius Temple in Wenchang，where you can have a deeper understanding of Confucius and the traditional Chinese culture.In the afternoon，we arrange a leisure activity for you to pick oranges in a farm/an orange garden nearby.
We hope you will have a good time during the trip.
The Student Union
【分析】高分句型一：
To help you further understand Chinese culture and relax you，our school will organize a one﹣day trip for you.
译文：为了帮助你们进一步了解中国文化，放松身心，我们学校将为你们安排一日游。
分析：句子里，动词不定式To help you further understand Chinese culture and relax you作目的状语。
高分句型二：
As scheduled，we will meet at 7：30 a.m.on Jan.10，2021 at the school gate，and then take a bus to the Confucius Temple in Wenchang，where you can have a deeper understanding of Confucius and the traditional Chinese culture.
译文：按照计划，我们将于2021年1月10日上午7：30在学校门口见面，然后乘车前往文昌孔庙，在那里你们可以更深入地了解孔子和中国传统文化。
分析：句子里，修饰先行词the Confucius Temple in Wenchang，关系词where引导非限制性定语从句you can have a deeper understanding of Confucius and the traditional Chinese culture.
【解答】Notice
To help you further understand Chinese culture and relax you，our school will organize a one﹣day trip for you.【高分句型一】（活动目的）
As scheduled，we will meet at 7：30 a.m.on Jan.10，2021 at the school gate，and then take a bus to the Confucius Temple in Wenchang，where you can have a deeper understanding of Confucius and the traditional Chinese culture. 【高分句型二】In the afternoon，we arrange a leisure activity for you to pick oranges in a farm/an orange garden nearby.（集合时间和地点以及目的地）
We hope you will have a good time during the trip.（表达希望）
The Student Union
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
7．假如你是李华，你的朋友Tom 5月22日来信询问你毕业前的一次旅游经历。请你根据下面提示给他回一封80词左右的电子邮件。
1．由学生会组织。
2．一部分人愿意乘公交车；另一部分人喜欢步行；最后大家被说服骑自行车。
3．美丽的风景让人难以忘怀。
4．感受：这次旅游增进了友谊，提高了关心自然环境的意识。
注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
How happy I am to receive your letter.______
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Tom，
How happy I am to receive your letter.Now I will tell you something about the trip organized by our Students' Union.Some of us preferred to take a bus while others were fond of walking，and finally we were persuaded to cycle.
When we got there，we were greatly impressed by its beautiful view.All kinds of butterflies were flying freely in the valley，the entire mountain was covered with beautiful flowers，and the air there was pleasant to breathe；as a result，we couldn't wait to walk into nature.
Though we were tired，it was the trip that improved our friendship and raised our awareness to care about the environment.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：When we got there，we were greatly impressed by its beautiful view.
翻译：当我们到达那里时，美丽的景色给我们留下了深刻的印象。
分析：本句使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Though we were tired，it was the trip that improved our friendship and raised our awareness to care about the environment.
翻译：虽然我们很累，但这次旅行增进了我们的友谊，提高了我们关心环境的意识。
分析：本句使用了though引导的让步状语从句，以及强调句型。
【解答】Dear Tom，
How happy I am to receive your letter.Now I will tell you something about the trip organized by our Students' Union.Some of us preferred to take a bus while others were fond of walking，and finally we were persuaded to cycle.（点明主题）
When we got there，we were greatly impressed by its beautiful view.【高分句型一】All kinds of butterflies were flying freely in the valley，the entire mountain was covered with beautiful flowers，and the air there was pleasant to breathe；as a result，we couldn't wait to walk into nature.（活动的具体过程）
Though we were tired，it was the trip that improved our friendship and raised our awareness to care about the environment.【高分句型二】（个人感受）
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter来信询问你如何保持健康。请你用英语回复一封电子邮件，内容主要包括：
1.合理饮食；
2.加强锻炼；
3.保证睡眠。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jack，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me about how to keep healthy.I'd like to give you some advice.
As you know，we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet.In order to get enough energy and nutrients，we need a variety of food，such as fish and meat，especially fresh vegetablesand fruits.Besides，you should take physical exercise regularly.For example，you can play basketball or take a walk after school. （加强锻炼）What's more，having enough sleep is of great importance.Only in this way can you keep fit.
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：As you know，we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet.
译文：如你所知，我们青少年正经历着快速的成长和发展，需要健康均衡的饮食来支持。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，which引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：Only in this way can you keep fit.
译文：只有这样你才能保持健康。
分析：这句话使用了only+介词短语置于句首，后面用部分倒装。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I'm so glad to hear from you!In your letter you asked me about how to keep healthy.I'd like to give you some advice.（写信目的）
As you know，we teenagers are going through a rapid growth and development which needs to be supported by a healthy and balanced diet.【高分句型一】In order to get enough energy and nutrients，we need a variety of food，such as fish and meat，especially fresh vegetablesand fruits. （合理饮食）Besides，you should take physical exercise regularly.For example，you can play basketball or take a walk after school.What's more，having enough sleep is of great importance.Only in this way can you keep fit.【高分句型二】（保证睡眠）
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
9．假设你是李华，日前参加了在加拿大举行的为期四周的国际中学生生存训练营活动，并将作为中国学生代表在闭幕式上发言．请你用英语写一篇发言稿，要点包括：
1．遇到的挑战（语言、交往、文化冲击等）；
2．你的收获；
3．感谢组织者．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear friends，
I am honored to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．
Before I came to Canada，I had made careful preparations for this camp．However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making myself understood，talking with others from several countries，and dealing with culture shock（高分句型一）．With great patience and kindness，the organizers helped me out．The four weeks in the camp has changed me greatly．Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships（高分句型二）．Most importantly，I became more confident．So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp．
That's all．Thank you for listening．
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1．认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2．依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3．准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making myself understood，talking with others from several countries，and dealing with culture shock
然而，我还是经历了一些意想不到的挑战，比如做自己理解的困难，与一些国家的人谈话，和处理文化冲击．
高分句型二：
Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships．
我不仅提高了我的英语口语，还得到了终身的友谊．
【解答】Dear friends，
I am honoured to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．Before I came to Canada，I had made careful preparations for this camp．However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making myself understood，talking with others from several countries，and dealing with culture shock（高分句型一）．With great patience and kindness，the organizers helped me out．The four weeks in the camp has changed me greatly．Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships（高分句型二）．Most importantly，I became more confident．So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp．
That's all．Thank you for listening．
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
10．假定你是红星外国语学校学生会主席李华。神舟十二号飞行任务取得了圆满成功后，航天英雄聂海胜受邀将来你校作报告。请你根据提示内容写一则通知，请全校同学参加报告会。内容包括：
1.报告的时间，地点；
2.报告内容：此次飞行的主要任务和宇航员的日常活动；
3.可与聂海胜进行现场互动。
注意：词数 80 左右。参考词汇：神舟十二号 Shenzhou XII spacecraft宇航员 astronaut
【考点】提纲作文；通知类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Notice
In order to generate our interest in science and space，our school has invited the Space Hero Nie Haisheng to our school to give us a report at 8 a.m.next Sunday.
The report is scheduled to be given in the school hall，where Mr.Nie will introduce the mission of the Shenzhou XII spacecraft and the daily life of the astronauts.In addition，we can communicate with the hero face to face，learning about their challenging but unforgettable life in space.
Whoever is crazy about the activity is welcome.You are sure to experience something special if taking part in it.
Student Union
【分析】高分句型一：The report is scheduled to be given in the school hall，where Mr.Nie will introduce the mission of the Shenzhou XII spacecraft and the daily life of the astronauts.
翻译：报告计划在我们学校报告厅召开，在这里聂先生将会给我们介绍神舟十二号的任务以及宇航员的日常活动。
分析：本句使用了where引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：In addition，we can communicate with the hero face to face，learning about their challenging but unforgettable life in space.
翻译：而且，我们可以和英雄面对面交流，了解他们面对的挑战和在太空难忘的生活。
分析：本句使用了现在分词learning about their challenging but unforgettable life in space作目的状语。
【解答】Notice
In order to generate our interest in science and space，our school has invited the Space Hero Nie Haisheng to our school to give us a report at 8 a.m.next Sunday. （目的、时间）
The report is scheduled to be given in the school hall，where Mr.Nie will introduce the mission of the Shenzhou XII spacecraft and the daily life of the astronauts.【高分句型一】In addition，we can communicate with the hero face to face，learning about their challenging but unforgettable life in space. 【高分句型二】（活动内容）
Whoever is crazy about the activity is welcome.You are sure to experience something special if taking part in it. （欢迎参加）
Student Union
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
11．假设你是李华，上周你们班级参加了学校举办的"爱科学"板报展活动。请你为校英语报写一篇短文，介绍参加该活动的情况，内容包括：
1.讨论主题；
2.准备制作；
3.展示体会。
注意：
1.词数100左右；标题已给出，不计入总数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Last week，our class participated in the school poster exhibition with the topic "We Love Science".We had a memorable experience working together.
Having been informed of the activity，we put forward ideas as to the contents of the poster.After a brief discussion，we agreed on the subjects of AI（Artificial Intelligence） and 5 G，since they are the hottest topics of the advanced technologies.
No time was wasted in our preparation.We first went to the school library to research the history and development of the two fields.When realizing that the library couldn't provide us with enough information about cutting﹣edge technologies，we turned to our teacher for help，who proved to be a valuable resource and gave us lots of practical advice.With the material collected，we got down to making our poster.Each of us had been assigned different tasks，to which we devoted all our effort.We designed，wrote and painted.I even framed the poster to make it more eye﹣catching.
On the day of the exhibition，our elaborately designed poster attracted much attention.The students gathered in front of our poster，appreciating our work.Filled with pride，we are looking forward to the next activity.
【分析】高分句型一
Having been informed of the activity，we put forward ideas as to the contents of the poster.
分析：这句话使用现在分词的完成被动式Having been informed of the activity作时间状语。
翻译：得知这项活动后，我们对海报的内容提出了意见。
高分句型二
When realizing that the library couldn't provide us with enough information about cutting﹣edge technologies，we turned to our teacher for help，who proved to be a valuable resource and gave us lots of practical advice.
分析：使用who引导定语从句proved to be a valuable resource and gave us lots of practical advice修饰our teacher.
翻译：当我们意识到图书馆不能为我们提供足够的关于尖端技术的信息时，我们求助于我们的老师，他知识丰富，给了我们很多实用的建议。
【解答】Last week，our class participated in the school poster exhibition with the topic "We Love Science".We had a memorable experience working together.（点明主题﹣﹣"爱科学"板报展活动）
Having been informed of the activity，we put forward ideas as to the contents of the poster. 【高分句型一】After a brief discussion，we agreed on the subjects of AI（Artificial Intelligence） and 5 G，since they are the hottest topics of the advanced technologies.（讨论主题）
No time was wasted in our preparation.We first went to the school library to research the history and development of the two fields.When realizing that the library couldn't provide us with enough information about cutting﹣edge technologies，we turned to our teacher for help，who proved to be a valuable resource and gave us lots of practical advice. 【高分句型二】With the material collected，we got down to making our poster.Each of us had been assigned different tasks，to which we devoted all our effort.We designed，wrote and painted.I even framed the poster to make it more eye﹣catching.（准备制作）
On the day of the exhibition，our elaborately designed poster attracted much attention.The students gathered in front of our poster，appreciating our work.Filled with pride，we are looking forward to the next activity.（展示体会）
【点评】提纲类写作是近年高考英语书面表达的热点题型，命题人通常以提纲作文的形式考查书信、报道、通知、日记、发言稿、对某人或某物的介绍、欢迎词等。提纲作文的选材范围很广，内容简单易懂，且多是考生熟悉的话题。这类题型的主要特点是要点明确范围具体。但考生也容易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和词汇上的单调，甚至写出结构不完整的句子。
12．假定你是新华中学学生会主席李华，应学校英文报邀请，写一封倡议书．呼吁大家养成良好卫生习惯，积极做好个人防护．要点如下：
1．倡议原因；
2．健康建议；
3．表达信心．
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
提示词：卫生习惯 hygiene practices
Dear schoolmates，
______________
The Students' Union
【考点】提纲作文；身心健康；倡议书．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一
Faced with the disaster，we should respond actively to the appeal from the government and experts．
分析：句子里，过去分词Faced with the disaster做时间状语，和主语we是被动关系．
翻译：面对灾难，我们应该积极响应政府和专家的呼吁．
高分句型二
Besides，wash hand often as possible，which can reduce the risk of being infected with viruses．
分析：句子里，代指主句wash hand often as possible，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 can reduce the risk of being infected with viruses．
翻译：另外，要经常洗手，这样可以减少感染病毒的风险．
【解答】Dear schoolmates，
Over the past few months，the epidemic situation has a strong impact on our life．Faced with the disaster，we should respond actively to the appeal from the government and experts．【高分句型一】（倡议原因）
First of all，pay much attention to the personal hygiene practices．Do wear masks in public places．Besides，wash hand often as possible，which can reduce the risk of being infected with viruses．【高分句型二】Most importantly，keep a balanced diet and exercise regularly． （健康建议）I'm definitely convinced that with our joint efforts，we can get through the tough time together．（表达信心）
The Students' Union
【点评】我们在写作文的时候，一般应该把亮点句型放在明显的位置，以便于能够吸引阅卷老师的眼球；同时对于高分句型的使用也要慎重，应该用自己有把握的句子，特别是高考时，应该以正确为首要目的．另外，长短句的搭配使用会使文章显得灵活，不死板，是写作的首选．
13．假定你是李华．你市最近天气变化大，许多市民都因此患了感冒．请你用英语给在你市留学的美国朋友Susan写封信，提醒他采取措施，预防感冒．内容包括：
1．关注天气变化，及时加衣物；
2．适当运动，注意饮食；
3．避免与感冒患者接触．
注意：
1．总词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】Moreover，eating healthy food is necessary for you to keep yourself in good condition．（高分句型一）句中eating healthy food 为动名词作主语
此外，吃健康的食物对你保持身体健康是必要的．
Last but not least，you should keep a far distance with the patients who are suffering from cold．（高分句型二）句中who are suffering from cold为限制性定语从句
最后，你应该和患感冒的病人保持一定距离．
【解答】Dear Susan，
I'm writing to inform you the spread of a bad cold in our city as a result of the changeable weather．Lots of people are in hospital because of it．Here are some tips I want to offer you．（写信目的）
First of all，you'd better know about the change of weather and put on more clothes according to the weather．（关注天气变化，及时加衣物） Secondly，exercise is a good way to keep you far away from cold．Moreover，eating healthy food is necessary for you to keep yourself in good condition．（高分句型一）（适当运动，注意饮食） Last but not least，you should keep a far distance with the patients who are suffering from cold．（高分句型二）（避免与感冒患者接触）
I hope my suggestion will be helpful to you．（期望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
14．假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华．你校将于11月26日接待来自美国某中学的学生访问团．你受学校委托，负责安排其在津的一日活动．请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见．
1．上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；
2．中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；
3．下午与我校学生游览海河．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：海河the Haihe River
Dear Mr．Smith．
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School．
I'm honoured to make arrangements for you and your students on behalf of our school．In order to give the students from the two countries a good chance to understand each other better，we'll have a talk about the school life，and the cultural differences in the morning．After that，we'll have lunch together in the school dining hall，where we can enjoy some traditional Chinese foods，such as dumplings，noodles and so on．I hope the students from America will have a better understanding of the Chinese culture．In the afternoon，we'll visit the Haihe River，which is the most beautiful river in our city．
I'm sure you will be deeply struck by the beautiful scenery．I'll be glad to follow it if you have any better advice on the arrangements．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是晨光中学学生会主席李华给美国某中学的学生访问团的领队Smith先生写的一封电子邮件．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般将来时态．内容包括：1．自我介绍，并且说明活动安排；2．欢迎提建议．
高分句型
1．I'm honoured to make arrangements for you and your students on behalf of our school．句子里make arrangements表示"做安排"；on behalf of表示"代表"．
我很荣幸代表我们学校为你和你的学生做活动安排．
2．After that，we'll have lunch together in the school dining hall，where we can enjoy some traditional Chinese foods，such as dumplings，noodles and so on．句子里where 引导非限制性定语从句we can enjoy some traditional Chinese foods，such as dumplings，noodles and so on．
在那以后，我们会一起在学校餐厅吃午饭，午餐包括饺子、面条等传统的中国食物．
【解答】Dear Mr．Smith．
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School．I'm honoured to make arrangements for you and your students on behalf of our school．【高分句型一】In order to give the students from the two countries a good chance to understand each other better，we'll have a talk about the school life，and the cultural differences in the morning．After that，we'll have lunch together in the school dining hall，where we can enjoy some traditional Chinese foods，such as dumplings，noodles and so on．【高分句型二】I hope the students from America will have a better understanding of the Chinese culture．In the afternoon，we'll visit the Haihe River，which is the most beautiful river in our city．（自我介绍，并且说明活动安排）
I'm sure you will be deeply struck by the beautiful scenery．I'll be glad to follow it if you have any better advice on the arrangements．（欢迎提建议）
Thank you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】考查提纲类作文．
书面表达试题一般都由"情景"和"要求"两部分构成．"情景"中包括所写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分；而"要求"一般在书面表达的后半部分，以"注意"形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求．因而考生对于题目所提供的说明，应认真分析、反复推敲，搞清提出的内容要求，抓住所要表达的信息点．
15．上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动．请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：
1．农场情况；
2．采摘过程；
3．个人感受．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．题目已为你写好．
题目：My Weekend
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：The farm where we went is located in the west of our city．
译文：我们去的农场位于我们城市的西部．
分析：这句话使用where引导定语从句修饰the farm．
高分句型二：Tired as we were，we felt happy to help the farmers．
译文：虽然我们很累，但帮助农民我们感到很高兴．
分析：这句话使用as引导让步状语从句的倒装句．
【解答】My Weekend
Last weekend，I，together with my classmates took part in picking up fruits． （活动）
The farm where we went is located in the west of our city． 【高分句型一】There are many fruits growing there，ranging from apples to peaches．We went there by bus．（农场情况）
While working there，some of us climbed onto the trees with ladders and picked up the fruits．Others sorted the fruits and put them in the box．Tired as we were，we felt happy to help the farmers． 【高分句型二】（采摘过程）
Through this experience，I learn the importance of labour and determine to invent some useful machines to help the farmers．What a meaningful activity．（个人感受）
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