【期末专项培优】应用文写作（含解析）2025-2026学年高一上学期英语期末必刷卷外研版（2019）
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末专项培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．在世界环境日来临之际，你校英文报开展主题为"The Importance of Mother Nature"的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
（1）列举大自然的重要性；
（2）给出你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
2．假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信，信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的关于英语学习方法的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已为你写出。
Dear Li Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that you have met some challenges in learning English.___________
3．假定你是李华，最近你的美国朋友Sean在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题。他心情不佳，来信寻求你的帮助和建议。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信：
1.安慰朋友；
2.提出改善家庭关系的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sean，
__________________
4．假定你是李华，为响应世界自然基金会（WWF）关于保护濒危动物的号召，你和你的同学做了研究北极熊（polar bear）的课题。现在请你用英文写一封信向该组织汇报你们的研究成果。内容主要包括：
（1）北极熊的生存现状（全球温度升高，冰面变小）；
（2）你的建议（至少两点）。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear WWF.
My classmates and I have been doing some research on endangered animals._______
I hope you will support us in our fight to save polar bears.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
5．某英文报纸正就"如何保持友谊"这一话题进行征稿。请你以"How to keep friendship"为题，写一篇英语短文来投稿。内容要点如下：
（1）与朋友保持联系；
（2）互相尊重，诚实以待；
（3）及时帮助朋友。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
6．假定你是李华，本周日你爸爸计划组织一场家庭聚会．请你写封邮件给外教Steven，邀请他来你家一起参加．主要内容如下：
1．聚会时间和地点；
2．聚会人员介绍；
3．其他注意事项．
注意：
1词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Steven，
I'm writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday．
Yours，
Li Hua．
7．假设你是李华，你的好朋友苏珊前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她不适应美国的校园生活，感到孤独．请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件．
1．学好英语，增加交流机会．
2．多交朋友，友情会使人忘记孤独．
3．积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣．
注意：1．词数100左右；开头已经写出，不计入总词数．
可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Susan，
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America，
Yours，
Li Hua．
8．假定你是李华，你与你班的交换生Mike在一年的同窗生活中建立了深厚的友谊，上个月他回国了。请你用英文给他写一封信。内容包括：
1）表达你的想念；
2）回顾你们在一起的美好时光；
3）邀请他再来中国。
注意：
1）词数80左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
9．假定你是高中学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim即将升入高中，对高中学习感到忧虑，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.与老师交流，征求老师意见；
2.上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记；
3.课后积极完成作业，巩固知识；
4.......
注意：1.词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim.
I am glad to hear that you will be a senior student.______
Yours，
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华．你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣．恰好你校今年寒假将为外国学生举办一场汉语冬令营活动（Chinese Winter Camp），请你给他发一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．时间和地点；
2．内容：学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化、参观博物馆等；
3．报名方式和截止时间．
注意：1．词数：120左右．2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
_______
Yours，
Lihua
11．假如你随一个中学生代表团去英国访问，期间你们参观了英国伦敦郊区的一个名叫Camden Town的小镇，请你把参观过程写成一篇日记。内容包括：
1.到达小镇的时间；
2.你对小镇的印象；
3.小镇的建筑物；
4.你们第二天的计划。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
April 14th，Sunday Fine
__________.
12．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你十一假期过的怎样．请根据表格中的信息给他回信， 说明你在十一假期中的活动和理由．
活动 理由
1、休息 学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息
2、看望乡下的祖父母 帮助他们做点家务，并给他们谈了身边的新鲜事
3、和朋友进行短途旅游 欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气
注意：词数100左右．
Dear Tom，
Yours，
Li Hua
13．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris由于父母工作变动，转到另一个城市的学校上学。他在给你的邮件中询问如何尽快融入新的班级中，请你根据以下信息给他写封回件。
要点：
（1）多和同学交流；
（2）多参加学校的活动；
（3）其他……
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
_____________
Yours，
Li Hua
14．假设你是李华，你捡到了你校交换生Mike的书包，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.如何发现书包的；
2.送还书包的时间和地点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
15．假定你是李华，你在网上看到美国高中生Linda正在寻找一位爱好京剧的笔友．请你给她写一封邮件介绍自己的情况，并表达想成为她的笔友的意愿．内容包括：
1．自己以及家人都喜欢京剧；
2．可以帮她了解京剧的更多情况．
注意；1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
期末专项培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．在世界环境日来临之际，你校英文报开展主题为"The Importance of Mother Nature"的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
（1）列举大自然的重要性；
（2）给出你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
【考点】主题式；环境保护．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
The Importance of Mother Nature
Mother Nature brings us many benefits.For example，the Amazon rainforest plays a significant role in maintaining the fine balance of the Earth's ecosystem.They give this area the richest biodiversity on the earth.Many of these irreplaceable species can be used for food and medicine.
However，if we don't treat the environment we depend on for survival well，we will also get the revenge of nature.Earthquakes，tsunamis，typhoons，hurricanes and so on are very destructive natural disasters，which make people homeless or even die every year.
It is our responsibility to develop a sense of safety and environmental protection and to leave a better，cleaner and healthier planet to our future generations and build a community of shared future for mankind.
【分析】高分句型一：However，if we don't treat the environment we depend on for survival well，we will also get the revenge of nature.
译文：然而，如果我们不好好对待我们赖以生存的环境，我们也会遭到大自然的报复。
分析：这句话使用了if引导的条件状语从句，we depend on for survival well是定语从句修饰the environment。
高分句型二：Earthquakes，tsunamis，typhoons，hurricanes and so on are very destructive natural disasters，which make people homeless or even die every year.
译文：地震、海啸、台风、飓风等都是极具破坏性的自然灾害，每年都会使人们无家可归，甚至死亡。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】
The Importance of Mother Nature
Mother Nature brings us many benefits.For example，the Amazon rainforest plays a significant role in maintaining the fine balance of the Earth's ecosystem.They give this area the richest biodiversity on the earth.Many of these irreplaceable species can be used for food and medicine.（列举大自然的重要性）
However，if we don't treat the environment we depend on for survival well，we will also get the revenge of nature.【高分句型一】Earthquakes，tsunamis，typhoons，hurricanes and so on are very destructive natural disasters，which make people homeless or even die every year.【高分句型二】（给出你的理由）
It is our responsibility to develop a sense of safety and environmental protection and to leave a better，cleaner and healthier planet to our future generations and build a community of shared future for mankind.（呼吁）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
2．假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信，信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的关于英语学习方法的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已为你写出。
Dear Li Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that you have met some challenges in learning English.___________
【考点】提纲作文；语言学习；书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Li Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that you have met some challenges in learning English.However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.My suggestions are as follows.
Firstly，you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class.Secondly，the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it.Thirdly，you can speak English with your classmates and teachers，which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.What's more，the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
Yours，
Editor Jim
【分析】高分句型一
However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.
翻译：然而，如果你接受我的建议，情况很容易改变。
分析：运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
高分句型二
Thirdly，you can speak English with your classmates and teachers，which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.
翻译：第三，你可以和你的同学和老师说英语，这可以提高你的听说能力。
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Li Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that you have met some challenges in learning English.However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.【高分句型一】My suggestions are as follows.
Firstly，you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class.Secondly，the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it.Thirdly，you can speak English with your classmates and teachers，which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.【高分句型二】What's more，the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class.（建议）
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.（祝愿）
Yours，
Editor Jim
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3．假定你是李华，最近你的美国朋友Sean在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题。他心情不佳，来信寻求你的帮助和建议。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信：
1.安慰朋友；
2.提出改善家庭关系的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sean，
__________________
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Sean，
Knowing that you are having a problem of poor communication in the process of getting along with your parents，causing that you are in a bad mood，I feel very sorry.But there is no need to be upset，because it is very common for us teenagers.We can do a lot to change the situation.
First，let's put ourselves in their shoes.Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes that seem obvious to them.Besides，when we share our problems with them，we often look for a listening ear and an open heart，not a solution.So，what you need to do is to tell them about this difference and put trust in them.
I hope these suggestions will help you.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
But there is no need to be upset，because it is very common for us teenagers.
翻译：但是没有必要非常沮丧，因为这对我们青少年来说很常见。
分析：句子里，because引导原因状语从句it is very common for us teenagers。
高分句型二
So，what you need to do is to tell them about this difference and put trust in them.
翻译：所以，你需要做的是告诉他们这个差异，并信任他们。
分析：句子里，what引导主语从句you need to do；省略to的动词不定式tell them about this difference and put trust in them作表语。
【解答】Dear Sean，
Knowing that you are having a problem of poor communication in the process of getting along with your parents，causing that you are in a bad mood，I feel very sorry.But there is no need to be upset，because it is very common for us teenagers.【高分句型一】We can do a lot to change the situation.（安慰朋友）
First，let's put ourselves in their shoes.Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes that seem obvious to them.Besides，when we share our problems with them，we often look for a listening ear and an open heart，not a solution.So，what you need to do is to tell them about this difference and put trust in them.【高分句型二】（提出改善家庭关系的建议）
I hope these suggestions will help you.Looking forward to your reply.（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．假定你是李华，为响应世界自然基金会（WWF）关于保护濒危动物的号召，你和你的同学做了研究北极熊（polar bear）的课题。现在请你用英文写一封信向该组织汇报你们的研究成果。内容主要包括：
（1）北极熊的生存现状（全球温度升高，冰面变小）；
（2）你的建议（至少两点）。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear WWF.
My classmates and I have been doing some research on endangered animals._______
I hope you will support us in our fight to save polar bears.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Officer，
My classmates and I have been doing some research on endangered animals.We especially focus on polar bears and find that the habitat of polar bears is disappearing because the global temperature is getting higher and the ice cap at the North Pole is becoming increasingly smaller.I worry that when the ice totally disappears，there will be nowhere for polar bears to live.After discussion，we have some suggestions on saving polar bears.
First，I suggest we should be very careful with the energy we use.We could think about travelling by bus or by train instead of using our cars.These means of transport are more environmentally friendly.Second，we should punish those who do harm to polar bears.Anyone who hunts polar bears must be heavily fined and even be put in prison.Besides，we can raise money to help save the habitat of polar bears so that they can live happily and peacefully.
I hope you will support us in our fight to save polar bears.
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：First，I suggest we should be very careful with the energy we use.
译文：首先，我建议我们应该非常小心使用能量。
分析：这句话使用了we use作为定语从句修饰the energy。
高分句型二：Anyone who hunts polar bears must be heavily fined and even be put in prison.
译文：任何猎杀北极熊的人都必须被处以重罚，甚至被关进监狱。
分析：这句话使用了who引导的定语从句修饰anyone。
【解答】Dear Officer，
My classmates and I have been doing some research on endangered animals.We especially focus on polar bears and find that the habitat of polar bears is disappearing because the global temperature is getting higher and the ice cap at the North Pole is becoming increasingly smaller.I worry that when the ice totally disappears，there will be nowhere for polar bears to live.After discussion，we have some suggestions on saving polar bears.（北极熊的生存现状（全球温度升高，冰面变小））
First，I suggest we should be very careful with the energy we use. 【高分句型一】We could think about travelling by bus or by train instead of using our cars.These means of transport are more environmentally friendly.Second，we should punish those who do harm to polar bears.Anyone who hunts polar bears must be heavily fined and even be put in prison. 【高分句型二】Besides，we can raise money to help save the habitat of polar bears so that they can live happily and peacefully.（你的建议）
I hope you will support us in our fight to save polar bears.（希望）
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
5．某英文报纸正就"如何保持友谊"这一话题进行征稿。请你以"How to keep friendship"为题，写一篇英语短文来投稿。内容要点如下：
（1）与朋友保持联系；
（2）互相尊重，诚实以待；
（3）及时帮助朋友。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】How to keep friendship
As we all know， friendship plays an important role in our life. If we have a close friend， we can share happiness and worries， which can make us enjoy a much happier life.
Since friendship makes a great difference to us， we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship. My tips are as follows： Firstly， we should keep in touch with our friends by sending e﹣mails， writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly， we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition， good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes， "A friend in need is a friend indeed."
In a word， if we want to keep friendship， we'd better treat our friends as we want to be treated.
【分析】高分句型一
If we have a close friend， we can share happiness and worries， which can make us enjoy a much happier life.
分析：句子里，If 引导条件状语从句we have a close friend；代指主句 we can share happiness and worries， 关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 can make us enjoy a much happier life.
翻译：如果我们有一个亲密的朋友，我们可以分享快乐和烦恼，这可以使我们享受更幸福的生活。
高分句型二
Since friendship makes a great difference to us， we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship.
分析：句子里，Since引导原因状语从句 friendship makes a great difference to us.
翻译：因为友谊对我们有很大的影响，我们就要认真对待，努力保持友谊。
【解答】How to keep friendship
As we all know， friendship plays an important role in our life. If we have a close friend， we can share happiness and worries， which can make us enjoy a much happier life.【高分句型一】（朋友的重要性）
Since friendship makes a great difference to us， we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship. 【高分句型二】My tips are as follows： Firstly， we should keep in touch with our friends by sending e﹣mails， writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly， we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition， good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes， "A friend in need is a friend indeed."（关于如何保持友谊的建议）
In a word， if we want to keep friendship， we'd better treat our friends as we want to be treated.（总结自己的观点）
【点评】本文的话题是"如何保持友谊"；可以从与朋友保持友谊的方法：电话，短信，经常聚会等多种方式。与朋友相处时，热情大方，真诚。能为朋友做自己能做的事情。可以从这几个方面着手展开。在你的能力范围之内，要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，选择句式时也要有变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。
6．假定你是李华，本周日你爸爸计划组织一场家庭聚会．请你写封邮件给外教Steven，邀请他来你家一起参加．主要内容如下：
1．聚会时间和地点；
2．聚会人员介绍；
3．其他注意事项．
注意：
1词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Steven，
I'm writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday． The party will begin at 5：00 pm in my home．There will be many people to show up in the party，including my parents and my sister．The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father，and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face．The girl who takes charge of cleaning is my sister．All of them can't wait to see you．
There are other things I want to tell you．Firstly，you should take a No.218 bus to go to my home．Secondly，I hope you can tell me the food you like，and in that case，I can prepare it better．I'm looking forward to your coming．
Yours，
Li Hua．
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，本周日你爸爸计划组织一场家庭聚会．请你写封邮件给外教Steven，邀请他来你家一起参加，写作时注意以下几点：一、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：1．聚会时间和地点；2．聚会人员介绍；3．其他注意事项．二、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．三、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．四．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father，and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face．（高分句型一）句中 who is tall and has thick beard 为定语从句
那个高个子，留着浓密胡须的男人是我的父亲，我母亲留着长发，脸上带着灿烂的笑容．
The girl who takes charge of cleaning is my sister．（高分句型二）句中who takes charge of cleaning为定语从句
负责清洁的那个女孩是我妹妹．
【解答】Dear Steven，
I'm writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday．The party will begin at 5：00 pm in my home．（聚会时间和地点）There will be many people to show up in the party，including my parents and my sister．The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father，and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face．（高分句型一）The girl who takes charge of cleaning is my sister．（高分句型二）All of them can't wait to see you．（聚会人员介绍）
There are other things I want to tell you．Firstly，you should take a No.218 bus to go to my home．Secondly，I hope you can tell me the food you like，and in that case，I can prepare it better．I'm looking forward to your coming．（其他注意事项）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
7．假设你是李华，你的好朋友苏珊前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她不适应美国的校园生活，感到孤独．请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件．
1．学好英语，增加交流机会．
2．多交朋友，友情会使人忘记孤独．
3．积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣．
注意：1．词数100左右；开头已经写出，不计入总词数．
可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Susan，
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America， but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice．
Firstly，you should work hard at English，which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others．（高分句型一）Secondly，why not make some friends？They can help you to know more about America，and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness．Thirdly，it would be a good idea to take an active part in all kinds of activities，which will help to make life more interesting．（高分句型二）By doing this，you will be happier with your new life soon．
I hope you will find these ideas useful．
Yours，
Li Hua．
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李华，你的好朋友苏珊前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她不适应美国的校园生活，感到孤独．请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：学好英语，增加交流机会．多交朋友，友情会使人忘记孤独．积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Firstly首先；communicate with与…交流；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；take an active part in积极参加；
Firstly，you should work hard at English，which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others．（高分句型一）
Thirdly，it would be a good idea to take an active part in all kinds of activities，which will help to make life more interesting．（高分句型二）
【解答】Dear Susan，
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America，but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice．
Firstly，you should work hard at English，which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others．（高分句型一）Secondly，why not make some friends？They can help you to know more about America，and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness．Thirdly，it would be a good idea to take an active part in all kinds of activities，which will help to make life more interesting．（高分句型二）By doing this，you will be happier with your new life soon．
I hope you will find these ideas useful．
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
8．假定你是李华，你与你班的交换生Mike在一年的同窗生活中建立了深厚的友谊，上个月他回国了。请你用英文给他写一封信。内容包括：
1）表达你的想念；
2）回顾你们在一起的美好时光；
3）邀请他再来中国。
注意：
1）词数80左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mike，
Since you returned to your country，I have been missing you .
During your stay in our class，I felt very happy to get along with you.With your kind help，my English has improved a lot.Besides，we visited many interesting places in our city，which is still fresh in my memory.With the approach of Mid﹣Autumn Festival，I really hope you can come to my city again and spend the important Chinese festival with my family.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Besides，we visited many interesting places in our city，which is still fresh in my memory.
分析：句子里，代指主句we visited many interesting places in our city，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句is still fresh in my memory。
翻译：此外，我们参观了我们城市中许多有趣的地方，这在我的记忆中仍然记忆犹新。
高分句型二
With the approach of Mid﹣Autumn Festival，I really hope you can come to my city again and spend the important Chinese festival with my family.
分析：句子里，固定短语With the approach of表示"随着......的临近"。
翻译：随着中秋节的临近，我真的希望你能再次来到我的城市，和我的家人一起度过这个重要的中国节日。
【解答】Dear Mike，
Since you returned to your country，I have been missing you .（表达你的想念）
During your stay in our class，I felt very happy to get along with you.With your kind help，my English has improved a lot.Besides，we visited many interesting places in our city，which is still fresh in my memory.【高分句型一】（回顾你们在一起的美好时光）With the approach of Mid﹣Autumn Festival，I really hope you can come to my city again and spend the important Chinese festival with my family.【高分句型二】（邀请他再来中国）
Looking forward to hearing from you.（期盼）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
9．假定你是高中学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim即将升入高中，对高中学习感到忧虑，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.与老师交流，征求老师意见；
2.上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记；
3.课后积极完成作业，巩固知识；
4.......
注意：1.词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim.
I am glad to hear that you will be a senior student.______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jim，
I am glad to hear that you will be a senior student.Hearing you feel worried about your life in high school，now，I'd like to share my study tips with you.
First，you'd better communicate with your teachers regularly.In this way they may offer some great advice on both your study and life.Second why not involve yourself in each class actively，listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later？Third，it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school，which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.
I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Hearing you feel worried about your life in high school，now，I'd like to share my study tips with you.
翻译：听说你对高中生活感到担忧，现在，我想要给分享给你一些建议。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Hearing you feel worried about your life in high school作状语。
高分句型二：Third，it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school，which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.
翻译：第三，放学后很快就准时做作业是个好主意，这将帮助你实践你所学的东西，并使它在你的头脑中变得鲜活起来。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I am glad to hear that you will be a senior student.Hearing you feel worried about your life in high school，now，I'd like to share my study tips with you.【高分句型一】（点明主题）
First，you'd better communicate with your teachers regularly.In this way they may offer some great advice on both your study and life.Second why not involve yourself in each class actively，listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later？Third，it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school，which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.【高分句型二】（给他一些学习建议）
I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.（表达希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．假定你是李华．你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣．恰好你校今年寒假将为外国学生举办一场汉语冬令营活动（Chinese Winter Camp），请你给他发一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．时间和地点；
2．内容：学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化、参观博物馆等；
3．报名方式和截止时间．
注意：1．词数：120左右．2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
_______
Yours，
Lihua
【考点】提纲作文；兴趣爱好；传统文化．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．Chinese Winter Camp，which is intended for international students，is going to be held in our school this summer vacation．
句子里，代指先行词Chinese Winter Camp，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 is intended for international students．
今年暑假我们学校将举办面向国际学生的中国冬令营．
2．It covers a wide variety of cultural activities，ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture．
句子里，现在分词 ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture做伴随状语．
它涵盖了广泛的文化活动，从学习中国的日常表达，到参加一些关于中国历史和传统文化的讲座．
【解答】Dear Tom，
Here comes a piece of good news．Chinese Winter Camp，which is intended for international students，is going to be held in our school this summer vacation．【高分句型一】Since you are obsessed with Chinese culture，I'd like to invite you to join it．（提出邀请）
The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days，from December 18 to December 28．It covers a wide variety of cultural activities，ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture．【高分句型二】As we all know，language is closely related to culture，so I'm convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from language study．In addition，the Camp provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums，which is the best way to learn about the country．By admiring the historical relics，you will definitely gain a better understanding of the country．（介绍活动的时间和地点以及内容）
If you want to be part of it，please sign up for it before December 2 d at our school website．Looking forward to your early reply．（报名方式和截止时间）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作中，要注意 抓住提示的信息，并注意进行适当发挥．表达中要注意确定句子的时态与语态，注 意句式结构的正确和变化多样，适当运用 短语、并列句、复合句、介词短语和副词 等，以使文章饱满．
11．假如你随一个中学生代表团去英国访问，期间你们参观了英国伦敦郊区的一个名叫Camden Town的小镇，请你把参观过程写成一篇日记。内容包括：
1.到达小镇的时间；
2.你对小镇的印象；
3.小镇的建筑物；
4.你们第二天的计划。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
April 14th，Sunday Fine
__________.
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望；日记．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】April 14th，Sunday Fine
We had a wonderful time today.Camden Town left a deep impression on me.
This morning after we had breakfast，we started to go to Camden Town by bus.It was eight o'clock when we arrived.The town，clean and tidy，was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.The people there were friendly and kind.After a short break，we paid a visit to the town whose architecture is astonishing.There are both high buildings and old﹣style houses.Strangely enough ，they match each other so well that you even feel they make a beautiful picture.
Tomorrow we are to visit a local middle school，where we'll have a party with its students.I think it will be another pleasant day for all of us.
【分析】高分句型一
The town，clean and tidy，was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.
分析：句子里，what引导宾语从句I had seen in other places before.
翻译：这个城镇干净整洁，与我以前在其他地方看到的完全不同。
高分句型二
After a short break，we paid a visit to the town whose architecture is astonishing.
分析：句子里，修饰先行词the town，关系词whose引导定语从句architecture is astonishing.
翻译：短暂休息后，我们参观了这个建筑令人惊叹的城镇。
【解答】April 14th，Sunday Fine
We had a wonderful time today.Camden Town left a deep impression on me.（点明主题）
This morning after we had breakfast，we started to go to Camden Town by bus.It was eight o'clock when we arrived.（到达小镇的时间）The town，clean and tidy，was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.【高分句型一】The people there were friendly and kind.（对小镇的印象）After a short break，we paid a visit to the town whose architecture is astonishing.【高分句型二】There are both high buildings and old﹣style houses.Strangely enough ，they match each other so well that you even feel they make a beautiful picture.（小镇的建筑物）
Tomorrow we are to visit a local middle school，where we'll have a party with its students.I think it will be another pleasant day for all of us.（第二天的计划）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
12．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你十一假期过的怎样．请根据表格中的信息给他回信， 说明你在十一假期中的活动和理由．
活动 理由
1、休息 学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息
2、看望乡下的祖父母 帮助他们做点家务，并给他们谈了身边的新鲜事
3、和朋友进行短途旅游 欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气
注意：词数100左右．
Dear Tom，
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday．
译文：很高兴告诉你我是如何度过国庆假期的．
分析：it是形式主语，不定式为真正的主语，how引导宾语从句．
高分句型二：First， I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise．
译文：首先，我有一个很好的休息，因为最近我经常感到累，因为我沉重的学习负担，以及缺乏睡眠和体育锻炼．
分析：because引导原因状语从句．
【解答】Dear Tom，
I'm very glad to receive your letter． And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday．【高分句型一】（写信目的）
First， I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise．【高分句型二】（学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息） Of course， it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends．（帮助他们做点家务，并给他们谈了身边的新鲜事） What's more， I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air． What did you do in your summer holidays？（欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气） I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来． 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变他化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
13．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris由于父母工作变动，转到另一个城市的学校上学。他在给你的邮件中询问如何尽快融入新的班级中，请你根据以下信息给他写封回件。
要点：
（1）多和同学交流；
（2）多参加学校的活动；
（3）其他……
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
_____________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Chris，
Sorry to hear that you are having difficulty adapting to the new school.Such problems are quite normal.Maybe the following suggestions will be helpful.
First，you need to get along well with your classmates and make friends with them.In this way，you will get to know each other better.Second，try to take part in as many school activities as possible，which are good for developing friendship with other students.Last but not least，you should consider turning to your teachers，who can usually give you some valuable suggestions.
I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Second，try to take part in as many school activities as possible，which are good for developing friendship with other students.
译文：第二，尽可能多地参加学校的活动，这有利于发展与其他学生的友谊。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Last but not least，you should consider turning to your teachers，who can usually give you some valuable suggestions.
译文：最后但同样重要的是，你应该考虑求助于你的老师，他们通常会给你一些有价值的建议。
分析：这句话使用who引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
Sorry to hear that you are having difficulty adapting to the new school.Such problems are quite normal.Maybe the following suggestions will be helpful.（表示遗憾）
First，you need to get along well with your classmates and make friends with them.In this way，you will get to know each other better.（多和同学交流）Second，try to take part in as many school activities as possible，which are good for developing friendship with other students.【高分句型一】（多参加学校的活动）Last but not least，you should consider turning to your teachers，who can usually give you some valuable suggestions. 【高分句型二】（其他）
I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you.（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
14．假设你是李华，你捡到了你校交换生Mike的书包，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.如何发现书包的；
2.送还书包的时间和地点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mike，
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you that I found your lost schoolbag on the playground early in the morning when I was running. To find out who it belonged to， I opened it and found your name and email address.
Can you tell me when it is convenient for you to fetch it？ Is it OK if we make it at six this afternoon？ I have taken it to my classroom， which is on the fifth floor of the green building. Please write to me soon.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：To find out who it belonged to， I opened it and found your name and email address.
译文：为了找出它是谁的，我打开它，找到了你的名字和电子邮件地址。
分析：这句话使用不定式作目的状语，who引导宾语从句。
高分句型二：I have taken it to my classroom， which is on the fifth floor of the green building.
译文：我把它带到了我的教室，在绿色建筑的五楼。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you that I found your lost schoolbag on the playground early in the morning when I was running. To find out who it belonged to， I opened it and found your name and email address. 【高分句型一】（如何发现书包的）
Can you tell me when it is convenient for you to fetch it？ Is it OK if we make it at six this afternoon？ I have taken it to my classroom， which is on the fifth floor of the green building. 【高分句型二】Please write to me soon.（送还书包的时间和地点）
Best wishes.（祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
15．假定你是李华，你在网上看到美国高中生Linda正在寻找一位爱好京剧的笔友．请你给她写一封邮件介绍自己的情况，并表达想成为她的笔友的意愿．内容包括：
1．自己以及家人都喜欢京剧；
2．可以帮她了解京剧的更多情况．
注意；1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Linda，
How nice to see your post on the Internet! It's very interesting that you， an American， show so much love for Beijing Opera!I'd like to be your pen friend， for I'm a senior high school student as you are and I'm crazy about Beijing Opera too. What's more， my dad is working as an actor in one of the Beijing Opera theaters. He is open﹣minded as well as easygoing.I'm sure my dad and I can be helpful.I believe we will have much to share and can get along well with each other.
Please write back as soon as possible so that we can make a plan.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It's very interesting that you， an American， show so much love for Beijing Opera!
译文：很有趣，你，一个美国人，对京剧表现出如此的热爱！
分析：it is+形容词+that引导结果状语从句。
高分句型二：Please write back as soon as possible so that we can make a plan.
译文：请尽快回信以便我们制定计划。
分析：这句话使用so that引导结果状语从句。
【解答】Dear Linda，
How nice to see your post on the Internet! It's very interesting that you， an American， show so much love for Beijing Opera! 【高分句型一】I'd like to be your pen friend， for I'm a senior high school student as you are and I'm crazy about Beijing Opera too. What's more， my dad is working as an actor in one of the Beijing Opera theaters. He is open﹣minded as well as easygoing.（自己以及家人都喜欢京剧）I'm sure my dad and I can be helpful.I believe we will have much to share and can get along well with each other.（可以帮她了解京剧的更多情况）
Please write back as soon as possible so that we can make a plan. 【高分句型二】（希望对方尽快回信）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
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期末专项培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．在世界环境日来临之际，你校英文报开展主题为"The Importance of Mother Nature"的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
（1）列举大自然的重要性；
（2）给出你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
2．假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信，信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的关于英语学习方法的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已为你写出。
Dear Li Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that you have met some challenges in learning English.___________
3．假定你是李华，最近你的美国朋友Sean在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题。他心情不佳，来信寻求你的帮助和建议。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信：
1.安慰朋友；
2.提出改善家庭关系的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sean，
__________________
4．假定你是李华，为响应世界自然基金会（WWF）关于保护濒危动物的号召，你和你的同学做了研究北极熊（polar bear）的课题。现在请你用英文写一封信向该组织汇报你们的研究成果。内容主要包括：
（1）北极熊的生存现状（全球温度升高，冰面变小）；
（2）你的建议（至少两点）。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear WWF.
My classmates and I have been doing some research on endangered animals._______
I hope you will support us in our fight to save polar bears.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
5．某英文报纸正就"如何保持友谊"这一话题进行征稿。请你以"How to keep friendship"为题，写一篇英语短文来投稿。内容要点如下：
（1）与朋友保持联系；
（2）互相尊重，诚实以待；
（3）及时帮助朋友。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
6．假定你是李华，本周日你爸爸计划组织一场家庭聚会．请你写封邮件给外教Steven，邀请他来你家一起参加．主要内容如下：
1．聚会时间和地点；
2．聚会人员介绍；
3．其他注意事项．
注意：
1词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Steven，
I'm writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday．
Yours，
Li Hua．
7．假设你是李华，你的好朋友苏珊前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她不适应美国的校园生活，感到孤独．请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件．
1．学好英语，增加交流机会．
2．多交朋友，友情会使人忘记孤独．
3．积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣．
注意：1．词数100左右；开头已经写出，不计入总词数．
可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Susan，
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America，
Yours，
Li Hua．
8．假定你是李华，你与你班的交换生Mike在一年的同窗生活中建立了深厚的友谊，上个月他回国了。请你用英文给他写一封信。内容包括：
1）表达你的想念；
2）回顾你们在一起的美好时光；
3）邀请他再来中国。
注意：
1）词数80左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
9．假定你是高中学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim即将升入高中，对高中学习感到忧虑，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.与老师交流，征求老师意见；
2.上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记；
3.课后积极完成作业，巩固知识；
4.......
注意：1.词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim.
I am glad to hear that you will be a senior student.______
Yours，
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华．你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣．恰好你校今年寒假将为外国学生举办一场汉语冬令营活动（Chinese Winter Camp），请你给他发一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．时间和地点；
2．内容：学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化、参观博物馆等；
3．报名方式和截止时间．
注意：1．词数：120左右．2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
_______
Yours，
Lihua
11．假如你随一个中学生代表团去英国访问，期间你们参观了英国伦敦郊区的一个名叫Camden Town的小镇，请你把参观过程写成一篇日记。内容包括：
1.到达小镇的时间；
2.你对小镇的印象；
3.小镇的建筑物；
4.你们第二天的计划。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
April 14th，Sunday Fine
__________.
12．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你十一假期过的怎样．请根据表格中的信息给他回信， 说明你在十一假期中的活动和理由．
活动 理由
1、休息 学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息
2、看望乡下的祖父母 帮助他们做点家务，并给他们谈了身边的新鲜事
3、和朋友进行短途旅游 欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气
注意：词数100左右．
Dear Tom，
Yours，
Li Hua
13．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris由于父母工作变动，转到另一个城市的学校上学。他在给你的邮件中询问如何尽快融入新的班级中，请你根据以下信息给他写封回件。
要点：
（1）多和同学交流；
（2）多参加学校的活动；
（3）其他……
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
_____________
Yours，
Li Hua
14．假设你是李华，你捡到了你校交换生Mike的书包，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.如何发现书包的；
2.送还书包的时间和地点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
15．假定你是李华，你在网上看到美国高中生Linda正在寻找一位爱好京剧的笔友．请你给她写一封邮件介绍自己的情况，并表达想成为她的笔友的意愿．内容包括：
1．自己以及家人都喜欢京剧；
2．可以帮她了解京剧的更多情况．
注意；1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
期末专项培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．在世界环境日来临之际，你校英文报开展主题为"The Importance of Mother Nature"的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
（1）列举大自然的重要性；
（2）给出你的理由。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
【考点】主题式；环境保护．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
The Importance of Mother Nature
Mother Nature brings us many benefits.For example，the Amazon rainforest plays a significant role in maintaining the fine balance of the Earth's ecosystem.They give this area the richest biodiversity on the earth.Many of these irreplaceable species can be used for food and medicine.
However，if we don't treat the environment we depend on for survival well，we will also get the revenge of nature.Earthquakes，tsunamis，typhoons，hurricanes and so on are very destructive natural disasters，which make people homeless or even die every year.
It is our responsibility to develop a sense of safety and environmental protection and to leave a better，cleaner and healthier planet to our future generations and build a community of shared future for mankind.
【分析】高分句型一：However，if we don't treat the environment we depend on for survival well，we will also get the revenge of nature.
译文：然而，如果我们不好好对待我们赖以生存的环境，我们也会遭到大自然的报复。
分析：这句话使用了if引导的条件状语从句，we depend on for survival well是定语从句修饰the environment。
高分句型二：Earthquakes，tsunamis，typhoons，hurricanes and so on are very destructive natural disasters，which make people homeless or even die every year.
译文：地震、海啸、台风、飓风等都是极具破坏性的自然灾害，每年都会使人们无家可归，甚至死亡。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】
The Importance of Mother Nature
Mother Nature brings us many benefits.For example，the Amazon rainforest plays a significant role in maintaining the fine balance of the Earth's ecosystem.They give this area the richest biodiversity on the earth.Many of these irreplaceable species can be used for food and medicine.（列举大自然的重要性）
However，if we don't treat the environment we depend on for survival well，we will also get the revenge of nature.【高分句型一】Earthquakes，tsunamis，typhoons，hurricanes and so on are very destructive natural disasters，which make people homeless or even die every year.【高分句型二】（给出你的理由）
It is our responsibility to develop a sense of safety and environmental protection and to leave a better，cleaner and healthier planet to our future generations and build a community of shared future for mankind.（呼吁）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
2．假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信，信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的关于英语学习方法的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已为你写出。
Dear Li Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that you have met some challenges in learning English.___________
【考点】提纲作文；语言学习；书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Li Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that you have met some challenges in learning English.However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.My suggestions are as follows.
Firstly，you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class.Secondly，the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it.Thirdly，you can speak English with your classmates and teachers，which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.What's more，the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
Yours，
Editor Jim
【分析】高分句型一
However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.
翻译：然而，如果你接受我的建议，情况很容易改变。
分析：运用了if引导的条件状语从句。
高分句型二
Thirdly，you can speak English with your classmates and teachers，which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.
翻译：第三，你可以和你的同学和老师说英语，这可以提高你的听说能力。
分析：运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Li Hua，
I'm sorry to hear that you have met some challenges in learning English.However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.【高分句型一】My suggestions are as follows.
Firstly，you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class.Secondly，the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it.Thirdly，you can speak English with your classmates and teachers，which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.【高分句型二】What's more，the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class.（建议）
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.（祝愿）
Yours，
Editor Jim
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3．假定你是李华，最近你的美国朋友Sean在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题。他心情不佳，来信寻求你的帮助和建议。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信：
1.安慰朋友；
2.提出改善家庭关系的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sean，
__________________
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Sean，
Knowing that you are having a problem of poor communication in the process of getting along with your parents，causing that you are in a bad mood，I feel very sorry.But there is no need to be upset，because it is very common for us teenagers.We can do a lot to change the situation.
First，let's put ourselves in their shoes.Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes that seem obvious to them.Besides，when we share our problems with them，we often look for a listening ear and an open heart，not a solution.So，what you need to do is to tell them about this difference and put trust in them.
I hope these suggestions will help you.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
But there is no need to be upset，because it is very common for us teenagers.
翻译：但是没有必要非常沮丧，因为这对我们青少年来说很常见。
分析：句子里，because引导原因状语从句it is very common for us teenagers。
高分句型二
So，what you need to do is to tell them about this difference and put trust in them.
翻译：所以，你需要做的是告诉他们这个差异，并信任他们。
分析：句子里，what引导主语从句you need to do；省略to的动词不定式tell them about this difference and put trust in them作表语。
【解答】Dear Sean，
Knowing that you are having a problem of poor communication in the process of getting along with your parents，causing that you are in a bad mood，I feel very sorry.But there is no need to be upset，because it is very common for us teenagers.【高分句型一】We can do a lot to change the situation.（安慰朋友）
First，let's put ourselves in their shoes.Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes that seem obvious to them.Besides，when we share our problems with them，we often look for a listening ear and an open heart，not a solution.So，what you need to do is to tell them about this difference and put trust in them.【高分句型二】（提出改善家庭关系的建议）
I hope these suggestions will help you.Looking forward to your reply.（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．假定你是李华，为响应世界自然基金会（WWF）关于保护濒危动物的号召，你和你的同学做了研究北极熊（polar bear）的课题。现在请你用英文写一封信向该组织汇报你们的研究成果。内容主要包括：
（1）北极熊的生存现状（全球温度升高，冰面变小）；
（2）你的建议（至少两点）。
注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear WWF.
My classmates and I have been doing some research on endangered animals._______
I hope you will support us in our fight to save polar bears.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Officer，
My classmates and I have been doing some research on endangered animals.We especially focus on polar bears and find that the habitat of polar bears is disappearing because the global temperature is getting higher and the ice cap at the North Pole is becoming increasingly smaller.I worry that when the ice totally disappears，there will be nowhere for polar bears to live.After discussion，we have some suggestions on saving polar bears.
First，I suggest we should be very careful with the energy we use.We could think about travelling by bus or by train instead of using our cars.These means of transport are more environmentally friendly.Second，we should punish those who do harm to polar bears.Anyone who hunts polar bears must be heavily fined and even be put in prison.Besides，we can raise money to help save the habitat of polar bears so that they can live happily and peacefully.
I hope you will support us in our fight to save polar bears.
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：First，I suggest we should be very careful with the energy we use.
译文：首先，我建议我们应该非常小心使用能量。
分析：这句话使用了we use作为定语从句修饰the energy。
高分句型二：Anyone who hunts polar bears must be heavily fined and even be put in prison.
译文：任何猎杀北极熊的人都必须被处以重罚，甚至被关进监狱。
分析：这句话使用了who引导的定语从句修饰anyone。
【解答】Dear Officer，
My classmates and I have been doing some research on endangered animals.We especially focus on polar bears and find that the habitat of polar bears is disappearing because the global temperature is getting higher and the ice cap at the North Pole is becoming increasingly smaller.I worry that when the ice totally disappears，there will be nowhere for polar bears to live.After discussion，we have some suggestions on saving polar bears.（北极熊的生存现状（全球温度升高，冰面变小））
First，I suggest we should be very careful with the energy we use. 【高分句型一】We could think about travelling by bus or by train instead of using our cars.These means of transport are more environmentally friendly.Second，we should punish those who do harm to polar bears.Anyone who hunts polar bears must be heavily fined and even be put in prison. 【高分句型二】Besides，we can raise money to help save the habitat of polar bears so that they can live happily and peacefully.（你的建议）
I hope you will support us in our fight to save polar bears.（希望）
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
5．某英文报纸正就"如何保持友谊"这一话题进行征稿。请你以"How to keep friendship"为题，写一篇英语短文来投稿。内容要点如下：
（1）与朋友保持联系；
（2）互相尊重，诚实以待；
（3）及时帮助朋友。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】How to keep friendship
As we all know， friendship plays an important role in our life. If we have a close friend， we can share happiness and worries， which can make us enjoy a much happier life.
Since friendship makes a great difference to us， we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship. My tips are as follows： Firstly， we should keep in touch with our friends by sending e﹣mails， writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly， we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition， good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes， "A friend in need is a friend indeed."
In a word， if we want to keep friendship， we'd better treat our friends as we want to be treated.
【分析】高分句型一
If we have a close friend， we can share happiness and worries， which can make us enjoy a much happier life.
分析：句子里，If 引导条件状语从句we have a close friend；代指主句 we can share happiness and worries， 关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 can make us enjoy a much happier life.
翻译：如果我们有一个亲密的朋友，我们可以分享快乐和烦恼，这可以使我们享受更幸福的生活。
高分句型二
Since friendship makes a great difference to us， we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship.
分析：句子里，Since引导原因状语从句 friendship makes a great difference to us.
翻译：因为友谊对我们有很大的影响，我们就要认真对待，努力保持友谊。
【解答】How to keep friendship
As we all know， friendship plays an important role in our life. If we have a close friend， we can share happiness and worries， which can make us enjoy a much happier life.【高分句型一】（朋友的重要性）
Since friendship makes a great difference to us， we need to take it seriously and try to keep friendship. 【高分句型二】My tips are as follows： Firstly， we should keep in touch with our friends by sending e﹣mails， writing letters or spending some time together regularly. Secondly， we should respect our friends and be honest with them. In addition， good friends are supposed to help each other when in trouble. Just as the old saying goes， "A friend in need is a friend indeed."（关于如何保持友谊的建议）
In a word， if we want to keep friendship， we'd better treat our friends as we want to be treated.（总结自己的观点）
【点评】本文的话题是"如何保持友谊"；可以从与朋友保持友谊的方法：电话，短信，经常聚会等多种方式。与朋友相处时，热情大方，真诚。能为朋友做自己能做的事情。可以从这几个方面着手展开。在你的能力范围之内，要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，选择句式时也要有变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。
6．假定你是李华，本周日你爸爸计划组织一场家庭聚会．请你写封邮件给外教Steven，邀请他来你家一起参加．主要内容如下：
1．聚会时间和地点；
2．聚会人员介绍；
3．其他注意事项．
注意：
1词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Steven，
I'm writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday． The party will begin at 5：00 pm in my home．There will be many people to show up in the party，including my parents and my sister．The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father，and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face．The girl who takes charge of cleaning is my sister．All of them can't wait to see you．
There are other things I want to tell you．Firstly，you should take a No.218 bus to go to my home．Secondly，I hope you can tell me the food you like，and in that case，I can prepare it better．I'm looking forward to your coming．
Yours，
Li Hua．
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，本周日你爸爸计划组织一场家庭聚会．请你写封邮件给外教Steven，邀请他来你家一起参加，写作时注意以下几点：一、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：1．聚会时间和地点；2．聚会人员介绍；3．其他注意事项．二、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．三、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．四．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father，and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face．（高分句型一）句中 who is tall and has thick beard 为定语从句
那个高个子，留着浓密胡须的男人是我的父亲，我母亲留着长发，脸上带着灿烂的笑容．
The girl who takes charge of cleaning is my sister．（高分句型二）句中who takes charge of cleaning为定语从句
负责清洁的那个女孩是我妹妹．
【解答】Dear Steven，
I'm writing to invite you to join in a family party held this Sunday．The party will begin at 5：00 pm in my home．（聚会时间和地点）There will be many people to show up in the party，including my parents and my sister．The man who is tall and has thick beard is my father，and my mother has long hair with a big smile on her face．（高分句型一）The girl who takes charge of cleaning is my sister．（高分句型二）All of them can't wait to see you．（聚会人员介绍）
There are other things I want to tell you．Firstly，you should take a No.218 bus to go to my home．Secondly，I hope you can tell me the food you like，and in that case，I can prepare it better．I'm looking forward to your coming．（其他注意事项）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
7．假设你是李华，你的好朋友苏珊前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她不适应美国的校园生活，感到孤独．请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件．
1．学好英语，增加交流机会．
2．多交朋友，友情会使人忘记孤独．
3．积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣．
注意：1．词数100左右；开头已经写出，不计入总词数．
可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Susan，
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America， but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice．
Firstly，you should work hard at English，which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others．（高分句型一）Secondly，why not make some friends？They can help you to know more about America，and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness．Thirdly，it would be a good idea to take an active part in all kinds of activities，which will help to make life more interesting．（高分句型二）By doing this，you will be happier with your new life soon．
I hope you will find these ideas useful．
Yours，
Li Hua．
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是李华，你的好朋友苏珊前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她不适应美国的校园生活，感到孤独．请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：学好英语，增加交流机会．多交朋友，友情会使人忘记孤独．积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Firstly首先；communicate with与…交流；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；take an active part in积极参加；
Firstly，you should work hard at English，which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others．（高分句型一）
Thirdly，it would be a good idea to take an active part in all kinds of activities，which will help to make life more interesting．（高分句型二）
【解答】Dear Susan，
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America，but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice．
Firstly，you should work hard at English，which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others．（高分句型一）Secondly，why not make some friends？They can help you to know more about America，and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness．Thirdly，it would be a good idea to take an active part in all kinds of activities，which will help to make life more interesting．（高分句型二）By doing this，you will be happier with your new life soon．
I hope you will find these ideas useful．
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
8．假定你是李华，你与你班的交换生Mike在一年的同窗生活中建立了深厚的友谊，上个月他回国了。请你用英文给他写一封信。内容包括：
1）表达你的想念；
2）回顾你们在一起的美好时光；
3）邀请他再来中国。
注意：
1）词数80左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mike，
Since you returned to your country，I have been missing you .
During your stay in our class，I felt very happy to get along with you.With your kind help，my English has improved a lot.Besides，we visited many interesting places in our city，which is still fresh in my memory.With the approach of Mid﹣Autumn Festival，I really hope you can come to my city again and spend the important Chinese festival with my family.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Besides，we visited many interesting places in our city，which is still fresh in my memory.
分析：句子里，代指主句we visited many interesting places in our city，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句is still fresh in my memory。
翻译：此外，我们参观了我们城市中许多有趣的地方，这在我的记忆中仍然记忆犹新。
高分句型二
With the approach of Mid﹣Autumn Festival，I really hope you can come to my city again and spend the important Chinese festival with my family.
分析：句子里，固定短语With the approach of表示"随着......的临近"。
翻译：随着中秋节的临近，我真的希望你能再次来到我的城市，和我的家人一起度过这个重要的中国节日。
【解答】Dear Mike，
Since you returned to your country，I have been missing you .（表达你的想念）
During your stay in our class，I felt very happy to get along with you.With your kind help，my English has improved a lot.Besides，we visited many interesting places in our city，which is still fresh in my memory.【高分句型一】（回顾你们在一起的美好时光）With the approach of Mid﹣Autumn Festival，I really hope you can come to my city again and spend the important Chinese festival with my family.【高分句型二】（邀请他再来中国）
Looking forward to hearing from you.（期盼）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
9．假定你是高中学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim即将升入高中，对高中学习感到忧虑，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.与老师交流，征求老师意见；
2.上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记；
3.课后积极完成作业，巩固知识；
4.......
注意：1.词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim.
I am glad to hear that you will be a senior student.______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jim，
I am glad to hear that you will be a senior student.Hearing you feel worried about your life in high school，now，I'd like to share my study tips with you.
First，you'd better communicate with your teachers regularly.In this way they may offer some great advice on both your study and life.Second why not involve yourself in each class actively，listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later？Third，it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school，which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.
I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Hearing you feel worried about your life in high school，now，I'd like to share my study tips with you.
翻译：听说你对高中生活感到担忧，现在，我想要给分享给你一些建议。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Hearing you feel worried about your life in high school作状语。
高分句型二：Third，it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school，which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.
翻译：第三，放学后很快就准时做作业是个好主意，这将帮助你实践你所学的东西，并使它在你的头脑中变得鲜活起来。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I am glad to hear that you will be a senior student.Hearing you feel worried about your life in high school，now，I'd like to share my study tips with you.【高分句型一】（点明主题）
First，you'd better communicate with your teachers regularly.In this way they may offer some great advice on both your study and life.Second why not involve yourself in each class actively，listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later？Third，it's a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school，which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.【高分句型二】（给他一些学习建议）
I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.（表达希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．假定你是李华．你的美国笔友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣．恰好你校今年寒假将为外国学生举办一场汉语冬令营活动（Chinese Winter Camp），请你给他发一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．时间和地点；
2．内容：学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化、参观博物馆等；
3．报名方式和截止时间．
注意：1．词数：120左右．2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Tom，
_______
Yours，
Lihua
【考点】提纲作文；兴趣爱好；传统文化．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．Chinese Winter Camp，which is intended for international students，is going to be held in our school this summer vacation．
句子里，代指先行词Chinese Winter Camp，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句 is intended for international students．
今年暑假我们学校将举办面向国际学生的中国冬令营．
2．It covers a wide variety of cultural activities，ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture．
句子里，现在分词 ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture做伴随状语．
它涵盖了广泛的文化活动，从学习中国的日常表达，到参加一些关于中国历史和传统文化的讲座．
【解答】Dear Tom，
Here comes a piece of good news．Chinese Winter Camp，which is intended for international students，is going to be held in our school this summer vacation．【高分句型一】Since you are obsessed with Chinese culture，I'd like to invite you to join it．（提出邀请）
The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days，from December 18 to December 28．It covers a wide variety of cultural activities，ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture．【高分句型二】As we all know，language is closely related to culture，so I'm convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from language study．In addition，the Camp provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums，which is the best way to learn about the country．By admiring the historical relics，you will definitely gain a better understanding of the country．（介绍活动的时间和地点以及内容）
If you want to be part of it，please sign up for it before December 2 d at our school website．Looking forward to your early reply．（报名方式和截止时间）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作中，要注意 抓住提示的信息，并注意进行适当发挥．表达中要注意确定句子的时态与语态，注 意句式结构的正确和变化多样，适当运用 短语、并列句、复合句、介词短语和副词 等，以使文章饱满．
11．假如你随一个中学生代表团去英国访问，期间你们参观了英国伦敦郊区的一个名叫Camden Town的小镇，请你把参观过程写成一篇日记。内容包括：
1.到达小镇的时间；
2.你对小镇的印象；
3.小镇的建筑物；
4.你们第二天的计划。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
April 14th，Sunday Fine
__________.
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望；日记．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】April 14th，Sunday Fine
We had a wonderful time today.Camden Town left a deep impression on me.
This morning after we had breakfast，we started to go to Camden Town by bus.It was eight o'clock when we arrived.The town，clean and tidy，was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.The people there were friendly and kind.After a short break，we paid a visit to the town whose architecture is astonishing.There are both high buildings and old﹣style houses.Strangely enough ，they match each other so well that you even feel they make a beautiful picture.
Tomorrow we are to visit a local middle school，where we'll have a party with its students.I think it will be another pleasant day for all of us.
【分析】高分句型一
The town，clean and tidy，was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.
分析：句子里，what引导宾语从句I had seen in other places before.
翻译：这个城镇干净整洁，与我以前在其他地方看到的完全不同。
高分句型二
After a short break，we paid a visit to the town whose architecture is astonishing.
分析：句子里，修饰先行词the town，关系词whose引导定语从句architecture is astonishing.
翻译：短暂休息后，我们参观了这个建筑令人惊叹的城镇。
【解答】April 14th，Sunday Fine
We had a wonderful time today.Camden Town left a deep impression on me.（点明主题）
This morning after we had breakfast，we started to go to Camden Town by bus.It was eight o'clock when we arrived.（到达小镇的时间）The town，clean and tidy，was quite different from what I had seen in other places before.【高分句型一】The people there were friendly and kind.（对小镇的印象）After a short break，we paid a visit to the town whose architecture is astonishing.【高分句型二】There are both high buildings and old﹣style houses.Strangely enough ，they match each other so well that you even feel they make a beautiful picture.（小镇的建筑物）
Tomorrow we are to visit a local middle school，where we'll have a party with its students.I think it will be another pleasant day for all of us.（第二天的计划）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
12．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你十一假期过的怎样．请根据表格中的信息给他回信， 说明你在十一假期中的活动和理由．
活动 理由
1、休息 学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息
2、看望乡下的祖父母 帮助他们做点家务，并给他们谈了身边的新鲜事
3、和朋友进行短途旅游 欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气
注意：词数100左右．
Dear Tom，
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday．
译文：很高兴告诉你我是如何度过国庆假期的．
分析：it是形式主语，不定式为真正的主语，how引导宾语从句．
高分句型二：First， I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise．
译文：首先，我有一个很好的休息，因为最近我经常感到累，因为我沉重的学习负担，以及缺乏睡眠和体育锻炼．
分析：because引导原因状语从句．
【解答】Dear Tom，
I'm very glad to receive your letter． And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday．【高分句型一】（写信目的）
First， I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise．【高分句型二】（学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息） Of course， it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends．（帮助他们做点家务，并给他们谈了身边的新鲜事） What's more， I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air． What did you do in your summer holidays？（欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气） I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来． 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变他化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
13．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris由于父母工作变动，转到另一个城市的学校上学。他在给你的邮件中询问如何尽快融入新的班级中，请你根据以下信息给他写封回件。
要点：
（1）多和同学交流；
（2）多参加学校的活动；
（3）其他……
注意：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
_____________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Chris，
Sorry to hear that you are having difficulty adapting to the new school.Such problems are quite normal.Maybe the following suggestions will be helpful.
First，you need to get along well with your classmates and make friends with them.In this way，you will get to know each other better.Second，try to take part in as many school activities as possible，which are good for developing friendship with other students.Last but not least，you should consider turning to your teachers，who can usually give you some valuable suggestions.
I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Second，try to take part in as many school activities as possible，which are good for developing friendship with other students.
译文：第二，尽可能多地参加学校的活动，这有利于发展与其他学生的友谊。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：Last but not least，you should consider turning to your teachers，who can usually give you some valuable suggestions.
译文：最后但同样重要的是，你应该考虑求助于你的老师，他们通常会给你一些有价值的建议。
分析：这句话使用who引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
Sorry to hear that you are having difficulty adapting to the new school.Such problems are quite normal.Maybe the following suggestions will be helpful.（表示遗憾）
First，you need to get along well with your classmates and make friends with them.In this way，you will get to know each other better.（多和同学交流）Second，try to take part in as many school activities as possible，which are good for developing friendship with other students.【高分句型一】（多参加学校的活动）Last but not least，you should consider turning to your teachers，who can usually give you some valuable suggestions. 【高分句型二】（其他）
I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you.（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
14．假设你是李华，你捡到了你校交换生Mike的书包，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.如何发现书包的；
2.送还书包的时间和地点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mike，
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you that I found your lost schoolbag on the playground early in the morning when I was running. To find out who it belonged to， I opened it and found your name and email address.
Can you tell me when it is convenient for you to fetch it？ Is it OK if we make it at six this afternoon？ I have taken it to my classroom， which is on the fifth floor of the green building. Please write to me soon.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：To find out who it belonged to， I opened it and found your name and email address.
译文：为了找出它是谁的，我打开它，找到了你的名字和电子邮件地址。
分析：这句话使用不定式作目的状语，who引导宾语从句。
高分句型二：I have taken it to my classroom， which is on the fifth floor of the green building.
译文：我把它带到了我的教室，在绿色建筑的五楼。
分析：这句话使用which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you that I found your lost schoolbag on the playground early in the morning when I was running. To find out who it belonged to， I opened it and found your name and email address. 【高分句型一】（如何发现书包的）
Can you tell me when it is convenient for you to fetch it？ Is it OK if we make it at six this afternoon？ I have taken it to my classroom， which is on the fifth floor of the green building. 【高分句型二】Please write to me soon.（送还书包的时间和地点）
Best wishes.（祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
15．假定你是李华，你在网上看到美国高中生Linda正在寻找一位爱好京剧的笔友．请你给她写一封邮件介绍自己的情况，并表达想成为她的笔友的意愿．内容包括：
1．自己以及家人都喜欢京剧；
2．可以帮她了解京剧的更多情况．
注意；1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Linda，
How nice to see your post on the Internet! It's very interesting that you， an American， show so much love for Beijing Opera!I'd like to be your pen friend， for I'm a senior high school student as you are and I'm crazy about Beijing Opera too. What's more， my dad is working as an actor in one of the Beijing Opera theaters. He is open﹣minded as well as easygoing.I'm sure my dad and I can be helpful.I believe we will have much to share and can get along well with each other.
Please write back as soon as possible so that we can make a plan.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It's very interesting that you， an American， show so much love for Beijing Opera!
译文：很有趣，你，一个美国人，对京剧表现出如此的热爱！
分析：it is+形容词+that引导结果状语从句。
高分句型二：Please write back as soon as possible so that we can make a plan.
译文：请尽快回信以便我们制定计划。
分析：这句话使用so that引导结果状语从句。
【解答】Dear Linda，
How nice to see your post on the Internet! It's very interesting that you， an American， show so much love for Beijing Opera! 【高分句型一】I'd like to be your pen friend， for I'm a senior high school student as you are and I'm crazy about Beijing Opera too. What's more， my dad is working as an actor in one of the Beijing Opera theaters. He is open﹣minded as well as easygoing.（自己以及家人都喜欢京剧）I'm sure my dad and I can be helpful.I believe we will have much to share and can get along well with each other.（可以帮她了解京剧的更多情况）
Please write back as soon as possible so that we can make a plan. 【高分句型二】（希望对方尽快回信）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
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