【期末专项培优】应用文写作（含解析）2025-2026学年高二上学期英语期末必刷卷外研版（2019）
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末专项培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假定你是校英语报记者李华。你校于12月21日举办了以"保护生态环境，建设绿色家园"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你就此事写一篇报道。
内容包括：
（1）比赛目的；
（2）比赛过程；
（3）比赛反响。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：保护生态环境，建设绿色家园 Protecting the Eco﹣environment；Building a Green Homeland
An English Speech Contest
______
2．我国运动健儿在2022年北京冬奥会上取得9金4银2铜的战绩，锁定奖牌榜第三，实现奖牌数历史性突破。假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，请你给校英语报投稿，报道此消息。
内容要点如下：
1.报道此次比赛我国战绩，
2.赞扬运动员们努力拼搏，执着追求，挑战自我的奋斗精神，
3.表达爱国之情，报国之志。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：铜的bronze 奖牌榜 the medal tally 中国代表团 the Chinese delegation
3．假设你正在参加全省中学生演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点．
内容包括：1．认为同学们不必为此烦恼
2．希望能够体谅父母的苦衷
3．建议与父母进行交流沟通
注意：1．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
2．至少100词．
4．假如你是新华中学学生李华，你的英国好友Sansa了解到中国的5 G技术世界领先，她对此很感兴趣，给你发电子邮件，希望你给她介绍一下关于5 G技术的相关信息．现请你回复该邮件，内容应包括：
1.5 G网络在中国刚起步；
2.5 G会催生许多新的机遇和挑战；
3．政府非常支持5 G技术，正促使硬件、软件、通信运营商大力发展．
要求：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）书信格式及开头均已给出（不计入总词数）．
可能用到的生词：5 G网络﹣5 G network；通信运营商 telecom carrier（s）
Dear Sansa，
I'm glad to receive your email，_______
Yours，
Li Hua
5．你们班将举办以"未来的生活"为主题的英语演讲比赛．请根据下列要点和你的想象写一篇演讲稿．
1．工作；2．出行；3．环境．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结束语已为你写好，但不计入总词数．
Good afternoon，boys and girls!
I'd like to share with you my opinion about future life．
That's all．Thank you for your listening．
6．假如你是李华，打算寒假期间参加社区组织的志愿者活动。请给你的留学生朋友Jack写封邮件，邀请他一起参加，内容包括：
1.活动的时间和内容；
2.活动的意义；
3.你的希望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
_____________
Yours，
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你收到外国朋友 Peter 的邮件，他想了解你校在新冠疫情（COVID﹣19 epidemic）期间线上教学的情况．请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1． 课程与时间；
2． 你的学习状态；
3． 你的期待。
注意：
1． 词数 100 左右；
2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
I'm so glad to hear from you and know what you are doing these days． __________________
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua
8．假如你是李华，正在一所美国学校参加暑期夏令营，遇到一些学习或生活上的困难，希望得到学校辅导中心Learning Centre的帮助，根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按照下列要点写一封信：
（1）本人简介
（2）求助内容
（3）预约时间
注意：词数100词左右；开头和结尾已给出。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua，__________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，你的外教老师Mr．Terry即将退休．请用英语给他写一封信，内容包括：
1．向他表示祝贺；
2．感谢他对你的帮助；
3．建议他实现旅行和写书的计划．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Terry，
Congratulations on your retirement!_______
Best wishes．We will miss you very much．
Yours，
Li Hua
10．在我们的成长过程中，我们心中总有特别向往的工作，我们学校将以"My dream job"为题举办演讲比赛．请你根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿，要点如下：
1．你理想的工作；
2．选择的理由．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
11．假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的朋友 Dylan，但你却迟到了 10 分钟，令他很失望．请用英语给他写一封道歉信，要点如下：
1．向他表示道歉；2．表达你对此事的认识；3．请求他的原谅．
注意：1．词数 80 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Dylan，
Yours，
Li Hua
12．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Peter想了解中国近四十年发生的变化以及人们对中国未来发展的期待．请你给他回邮件，内容包括四十年来人们：
1．居住环境的变化；
2．出行方式的变化；
3．对中国未来发展的期待．
注意：1． 词数不少于50；
2． 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
13．假如你是李华，下个月你将去英国学习．请给你的笔友Peter写信，告诉他你想利用周末时间参加社区志愿活动，以便亲身体验生活．要点如下：
1 表达心情； 2 询问信息； 3 表达愿望．
注意：词数80左右；2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
14．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike来信告诉你，他即将来中国生活一年．请你写封回信给他，简要告知他在中国生活需要了解的一些事情，比如中国的美食、旅游、以及购物等．
注意：
1． 词数100左右；
2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
15．假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英语演讲比赛．请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
（1）目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；
（2）骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等．
参考词汇：低碳生活（low﹣carbon life）；节能（energy saving）
注意：（1）词数：120词左右；
（2）演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数．
Good morning，everyone，
I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．
Thank you!
期末专项培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假定你是校英语报记者李华。你校于12月21日举办了以"保护生态环境，建设绿色家园"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你就此事写一篇报道。
内容包括：
（1）比赛目的；
（2）比赛过程；
（3）比赛反响。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：保护生态环境，建设绿色家园 Protecting the Eco﹣environment；Building a Green Homeland
An English Speech Contest
______
【考点】提纲作文；环境保护；报道．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
An English Speech Contest
It was on December 21st that our school held an English speech contest with the theme of "Protecting the Ecological Environment and Building a Green Homeland".The purpose of this contest was to raise awareness among students about environmental protection and promote green living practices.
During the competition，participants delivered passionate speeches on the importance of preserving nature and the impact of climate change.The judges rated them according to the participants' oral skills and content.
The contest received an overwhelming response from students.Many of them expressed their gratitude towards the organizers for providing a platform to discuss environmental issues.The success of this event has encouraged the school to host more competitions aimed at fostering a green consciousness among students.
【分析】高分句型一：It was on December 21st that our school held an English speech contest with the theme of "Protecting the Ecological Environment and Building a Green Homeland"..
翻译：12月21日，我校举办了以"保护生态环境，建设绿色家园"为主题的英语演讲比赛。
分析：本句运用了强调句"It was+被强调部分+that+其他"。
高分句型二：The success of this event has encouraged the school to host more competitions aimed at fostering a green consciousness among students.
翻译：这次活动的成功促使学校举办更多的比赛，旨在培养学生的绿色意识。
分析：本句运用了动词不定式短语to host more competitions作宾补、过去分词短语aimed at fostering a green consciousness among students作后置定语、动名词短语fostering a green consciousness among students作宾语。
【解答】
An English Speech Contest
It was on December 21st that our school held an English speech contest with the theme of "Protecting the Ecological Environment and Building a Green Homeland".【高分句型一】The purpose of this contest was to raise awareness among students about environmental protection and promote green living practices.（比赛目的）
During the competition，participants delivered passionate speeches on the importance of preserving nature and the impact of climate change.The judges rated them according to the participants' oral skills and content.（比赛过程）
The contest received an overwhelming response from students.Many of them expressed their gratitude towards the organizers for providing a platform to discuss environmental issues.The success of this event has encouraged the school to host more competitions aimed at fostering a green consciousness among students.【高分句型二】（比赛反响）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
2．我国运动健儿在2022年北京冬奥会上取得9金4银2铜的战绩，锁定奖牌榜第三，实现奖牌数历史性突破。假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，请你给校英语报投稿，报道此消息。
内容要点如下：
1.报道此次比赛我国战绩，
2.赞扬运动员们努力拼搏，执着追求，挑战自我的奋斗精神，
3.表达爱国之情，报国之志。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：铜的bronze 奖牌榜 the medal tally 中国代表团 the Chinese delegation
【考点】提纲作文；报道．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】The Chinese delegation achieved a historic breakthrough in the number of MEDALS at the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics by winning nine golds，four silvers and two bronzes，securing the third place in the medal tally.
People praise the athletes for their hard work，persistent pursuit and challenging spirit，which are commendable.China's prodigy Gu Ailing claimed the historic gold in the women's free ski big air of the Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games at Big Air Shou gang，whose third jump challenge has never made a super difficult movement successfully，staged a super reversal，miraculously won the title.
The Olympic spirit inspires us to move forward and inspires my patriotism and ambition to serve the country.
【分析】高分句型一：The Chinese delegation achieved a historic breakthrough in the number of MEDALS at the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics by winning nine golds，four silvers and two bronzes，securing the third place in the medal tally.
翻译：中国代表团在2022年北京冬奥会上取得了历史性的奖牌数量突破，获得了9枚金牌、4枚银牌和2枚铜牌，在奖牌榜上名列第三。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语securing the third place in the medal tally作状语。
高分句型二：China's prodigy Gu Ailing claimed the historic gold in the women's free ski big air of the Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games at Big Air Shou gang，whose third jump challenge has never made a super difficult movement successfully，staged a super reversal，miraculously won the title.
翻译：中国神童谷爱凌在北京2022年冬季奥运会女子自由滑雪大空中项目中夺得历史性金牌，第三次跳远挑战从未成功完成过超难度动作，上演了一场超级逆转，奇迹般地夺得冠军。
分析：本句使用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】The Chinese delegation achieved a historic breakthrough in the number of MEDALS at the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics by winning nine golds，four silvers and two bronzes，securing the third place in the medal tally.【高分句型一】（报道此次比赛我国战绩）
People praise the athletes for their hard work，persistent pursuit and challenging spirit，which are commendable.China's prodigy Gu Ailing claimed the historic gold in the women's free ski big air of the Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games at Big Air Shou gang，whose third jump challenge has never made a super difficult movement successfully，staged a super reversal，miraculously won the title.【高分句型二】（赞扬运动员们努力拼搏，执着追求，挑战自我的奋斗精神）
The Olympic spirit inspires us to move forward and inspires my patriotism and ambition to serve the country.（表达爱国之情）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3．假设你正在参加全省中学生演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点．
内容包括：1．认为同学们不必为此烦恼
2．希望能够体谅父母的苦衷
3．建议与父母进行交流沟通
注意：1．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
2．至少100词．
【考点】提纲作文；演讲稿；日记．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．Some of us are having problems with our parents，as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries．
句子里，as 引导原因状语从句they often look into our school bags or read our diaries．
我们中的一些人和父母有问题，因为他们经常看我们的书包或看我们的日记．
2．I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it，but there's no need to feel too sad．
句子里，why 引导宾语从句we are not comfortable about it；固定句式 there's no need to表示"没必要做某事"．
我完全理解为什么我们对此感到不自在，但没必要感到太悲伤．
【解答】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen．
Some of us are having problems with our parents，as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries．【高分句型一】（点明现象） I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it，but there's no need to feel too sad．【高分句型二】（认为同学们不必为此烦恼） Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we're not getting into any trouble．They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same．Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are dong it all wrong． （希望能够体谅父母的苦衷）My suggestion is：Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we'd like to trust them．If you don't think you can talk to them，write them a letter and leave it lying around﹣they are bound to read it．（建议与父母进行交流沟通）
Thank you!
【点评】写作中，要注意 抓住提示的信息，并注意进行适当发挥．表达中要注意确定句子的时态与语态，注 意句式结构的正确和变化多样，适当运用 短语、并列句、复合句、介词短语和副词 等，以使文章饱满．
4．假如你是新华中学学生李华，你的英国好友Sansa了解到中国的5 G技术世界领先，她对此很感兴趣，给你发电子邮件，希望你给她介绍一下关于5 G技术的相关信息．现请你回复该邮件，内容应包括：
1.5 G网络在中国刚起步；
2.5 G会催生许多新的机遇和挑战；
3．政府非常支持5 G技术，正促使硬件、软件、通信运营商大力发展．
要求：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）书信格式及开头均已给出（不计入总词数）．
可能用到的生词：5 G网络﹣5 G network；通信运营商 telecom carrier（s）
Dear Sansa，
I'm glad to receive your email，_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；兴趣爱好；书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Sansa，
I'm glad to receive your email，in which you' ve shown interest in China's 5 G technology．I'm happy to tell you something about it．
Factually，5 G has just really started in China，so cell phone manufacturers and network providers are testing waters to see peoples reaction．To our delight，the government is prioritizing 5 G's development．Policies have been drawn up and preferences given，in the hope that related hardware，software and network construction will develop accordingly to meet 5 G standards．As far as I'm concerned，there are potential opportunities and challenges at the same time．I hope every nation in the world can take advantage of modern science and technology，using it for the benefit of all mankind．
I'd really like to hear 5 G in the UK as well．Please do write me soon．
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm glad to receive your email，in which you' ve shown interest in China's 5 G technology．
译文：很高兴收到你的邮件，你在邮件中对中国的5 G技术表现出了兴趣．
分析：in which引导非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二：I hope every nation in the world can take advantage of modern science and technology，using it for the benefit of all mankind．
译文：我希望世界上每个国家都能利用现代科学技术，利用它造福全人类．
分析：hope后面是宾语从句，
【解答】Dear Sansa，
I'm glad to receive your email，in which you' ve shown interest in China's 5 G technology．【高分句型一】I'm happy to tell you something about it．（写信目的）
Factually，5 G has just really started in China，so cell phone manufacturers and network providers are testing waters to see peoples reaction．（5 G网络在中国刚起步） To our delight，the government is prioritizing 5 G's development．Policies have been drawn up and preferences given，in the hope that related hardware，software and network construction will develop accordingly to meet 5 G standards．（5 G会催生许多新的机遇和挑战） As far as I'm concerned，there are potential opportunities and challenges at the same time．I hope every nation in the world can take advantage of modern science and technology，using it for the benefit of all mankind．【高分句型二】（政府非常支持5 G技术，正促使硬件、软件、通信运营商大力发展）
I'd really like to hear 5 G in the UK as well．Please do write me soon．（请对方回信）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
5．你们班将举办以"未来的生活"为主题的英语演讲比赛．请根据下列要点和你的想象写一篇演讲稿．
1．工作；2．出行；3．环境．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结束语已为你写好，但不计入总词数．
Good afternoon，boys and girls!
I'd like to share with you my opinion about future life．
That's all．Thank you for your listening．
【考点】提纲作文；演讲稿．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型：
1．With the development of science and technology，life will be greatly different in the future．
随着科学和技术的发展，人们的未来生活将会有巨大的不同．
该句中with引导的介词短语With the development of science and technology作状语．
2．Third，our environment will be much better than now，because some effective measures will be taken to protect it．
第三，我们的环境也会比现在更加的改善，因为我们已经采取了一些有效的措施来保护它．
该句中because引导一个原因状语从句．从句中使用被动语态的句子更能传神地表达出句子的意思．
【解答】Good afternoon，boys and girls!
I'd like to share with you my opinion about future life．With the development of science and technology，life will be greatly different in the future．（高分句型一）（提出演讲的话题）
First，people will be able to do almost everything at home．They'll just need to give some simple instructions and robots will complete the tasks．（工作）Second，each family will have a flying machine．They'll be able to travel everywhere，even to the moon or somewhere under the sea．（出行）Third，our environment will be much better than now，because some effective measures will be taken to protect it．（高分句型二）There will be no pollution，no rubbish，etc．The earth will become a big beautiful garden．（环境）
I believe people's lives will be much easier in the future．
That's all．Thank you for your listening．
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
6．假如你是李华，打算寒假期间参加社区组织的志愿者活动。请给你的留学生朋友Jack写封邮件，邀请他一起参加，内容包括：
1.活动的时间和内容；
2.活动的意义；
3.你的希望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
_____________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jack，
I'm writing to invite you to join us in the voluntary activities to be held by our community this winter vacation.
Scheduled from February 5 to 8， the activities include some rewarding events， ranging from taking care of the old people in the nursing home， tutoring children to collecting waste in the parks. There will be more than 30 people working together， which will provide an opportunity for us to promote friendship and teamwork. Also， we'll develop our practical skills and sense of responsibility.
I sincerely hope you will participate in the activities.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Scheduled from February 5 to 8， the activities include some rewarding events， ranging from taking care of the old people in the nursing home， tutoring children to collecting waste in the parks.
分析：句子里，过去分词Scheduled from February 5 to 8作方式状语；现在分词ranging from taking care of the old people in the nursing home， tutoring children to collecting waste in the parks作伴随状语。
翻译：活动安排在2月5日至8日，包括一些有意义的活动，从在养老院照顾老人、辅导孩子到在公园收集垃圾。
高分句型二
There will be more than 30 people working together， which will provide an opportunity for us to promote friendship and teamwork.
分析：句子里，代指主句There will be more than 30 people working together，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句will provide an opportunity for us to promote friendship and teamwork.
翻译：届时将有30多人一起工作，这将为我们增进友谊和团队合作提供机会。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I'm writing to invite you to join us in the voluntary activities to be held by our community this winter vacation.（提出邀请）
Scheduled from February 5 to 8， the activities include some rewarding events， ranging from taking care of the old people in the nursing home， tutoring children to collecting waste in the parks. 【高分句型一】（活动的时间和内容）There will be more than 30 people working together， which will provide an opportunity for us to promote friendship and teamwork.【高分句型二】 Also， we'll develop our practical skills and sense of responsibility.（活动的意义）
I sincerely hope you will participate in the activities.（表达希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
7．假定你是李华，你收到外国朋友 Peter 的邮件，他想了解你校在新冠疫情（COVID﹣19 epidemic）期间线上教学的情况．请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1． 课程与时间；
2． 你的学习状态；
3． 你的期待。
注意：
1． 词数 100 左右；
2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
I'm so glad to hear from you and know what you are doing these days． __________________
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1． Six days a week， we learn the required subjects featuring Chinese， maths， P．E． and so on．
句子里，修饰名词subjects ，现在分词featuring Chinese， maths， P．E． and so on做后置定语．
每周六天，我们学习语文、数学、体育等必修课．
2．However， I still hope to return to campus， where I can enjoy face﹣to﹣face classes with my friends．
句子里，修饰先行词campus， 关系词where引导非限制性定语从句 I can enjoy face﹣to﹣face classes with my friends．
不过，我还是希望回到校园，在那里我可以和朋友们面对面地学习．
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm so glad to hear from you and know what you are doing these days． In your letter， you show concern about our online schooling during the COVID﹣19 epidemic， so I'd like to share with you some related information．（点明书信目的）
The spring semester is postponed， but schooling continues online under our teachers' guidance． Six days a week， we learn the required subjects featuring Chinese， maths， P．E． and so on． 【高分句型一】And each of the daily 6 classes is scheduled to last 40 minutes， with a 15﹣minute break between classes for eye exercises and self﹣relaxation． By getting actively involved in classes， I've adapted to such a unique way of learning and made great progress． In my view， the present situation poses a challenge to us， but it also means an opportunity to help us become autonomous learners．（课程与时间以及自己的学习状态）
However， I still hope to return to campus， where I can enjoy face﹣to﹣face classes with my friends． 【高分句型二】I firmly believe that the day will come soon because of the joint efforts and effective measures to fight the COVID﹣19 epidemic．（自己的期待）
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．
8．假如你是李华，正在一所美国学校参加暑期夏令营，遇到一些学习或生活上的困难，希望得到学校辅导中心Learning Centre的帮助，根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按照下列要点写一封信：
（1）本人简介
（2）求助内容
（3）预约时间
注意：词数100词左右；开头和结尾已给出。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua，__________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the summer camp in your university.Faced with so much difficulty，I'm writing the letter to you to ask you for some help.
I came here last month and found my courses interesting.But I have some difficulties with note taking and I have no idea of how to use the library.I was told the Learning Centre provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you.I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.
Please let me know which day is OK with you.You may email or phone me.Look forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Faced with so much difficulty，I'm writing the letter to you to ask you for some help.
译文：面对这么多困难，我写信给你，请你帮忙。
分析：这句话使用过去分词作状语。
高分句型二：But I have some difficulties with note taking and I have no idea of how to use the library.
译文：但是我记笔记有点困难，我不知道如何使用图书馆。
分析：这句话使用疑问词+不定式作宾语。
【解答】Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the summer camp in your university.Faced with so much difficulty，I'm writing the letter to you to ask you for some help. 【高分句型一】（简介和写信目的）
I came here last month and found my courses interesting.But I have some difficulties with note taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. 【高分句型二】I was told the Learning Centre provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you. （求助内容）I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.（预约时间）
Please let me know which day is OK with you.You may email or phone me.Look forward to your reply.（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
9．假定你是李华，你的外教老师Mr．Terry即将退休．请用英语给他写一封信，内容包括：
1．向他表示祝贺；
2．感谢他对你的帮助；
3．建议他实现旅行和写书的计划．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Terry，
Congratulations on your retirement!_______
Best wishes．We will miss you very much．
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：I can't count the times I have come into your office this year alone to ask for advice．
译文：我不知道我今年一个人来你办公室征求意见的次数．
分析：the times后面是定语从句．
高分句型二：We have appreciated what you did，which were often beyond your normal duties．
译文：我们很感激你的所作所为，这常常超出你的正常职责范围．
分析：what引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句．
【解答】Dear Mr．Terry．
Congratulations on your retirement! （向他表示祝贺）；
We are sad to see you leave．You have been a precious possession to our school．We always knew that we students were in good hands when we were with you because you were patient and sensitive to our needs．I can't count the times I have come into your office this year alone to ask for advice． 【高分句型一】We have appreciated what you did，which were often beyond your normal duties． 【高分句型二】（感谢他对你的帮助）
Retirement will be an adjustment but also an opportunity．I hope you will finally do the traveling you have
been talking about and that you will also write that planned book． （建议他实现旅行和写书的计划）
Best wishes．We will miss you very much．
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
10．在我们的成长过程中，我们心中总有特别向往的工作，我们学校将以"My dream job"为题举办演讲比赛．请你根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿，要点如下：
1．你理想的工作；
2．选择的理由．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【考点】提纲作文；演讲稿．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．．Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice．
句子里，动名词 being a tour guide 做主语．
或许当导游是最好的选择．
2．If I work as a tour guide，I can make a lot of friends all over the world，which may be great．
句子里，If 引导条件状语从句I work as a tour guide；代指主句I can make a lot of friends all over the world，关系词which 引导定语从句 may be great．
如果我是一名导游，我可以结交很多世界各地的朋友，这可能很棒．
【解答】Hi，everyone．Everybody has his dream job．I also have my dream job．My dream is to work for foreign tourists as a tour guide．（理想的工作是什么．）
Why do I want to be a tour guide？First of all，I'm an outgoing girl，and I like doing some exciting things．Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice．【高分句型一】If I become a tour guide，I can travel all around China，and know more about our country．Then I will tell the foreign tourists about our colorful history．Second，I like making friends．If I work as a tour guide，I can make a lot of friends all over the world，which may be great．【高分句型二】What's more，I like singing．Singing English songs is my favorite，which will make their trip excellent．So I believe I will be popular with foreign tourists．（ 选择的理由）
Now，I am still a middle school student．My job now is to work hard in school．Then I'll go to university to learn something about being a tour guide．I'm sure I can be a qualified tour guide in the future．（怎样实现梦想）
【点评】这是一篇命题作文，要求同学们先根据题目列出提纲以及写作要点．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．
11．假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的朋友 Dylan，但你却迟到了 10 分钟，令他很失望．请用英语给他写一封道歉信，要点如下：
1．向他表示道歉；2．表达你对此事的认识；3．请求他的原谅．
注意：1．词数 80 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Dylan，
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．Next time，I'll make sure to leave early enough in order to arrive as scheduled，or even ahead of schedule．
句子里，固定短语make sure 表示"确保"；in order to 表示"为了"；as scheduled表示"如期"；ahead of schedule表示"提前"．
下次，我一定要早点出发，以便如期到达，甚至提前到达．
2．I hope my mistake won't prevent you from seeking my help in the future．
句子里，宾语从句my mistake won't prevent you from seeking my help in the future省略了引导词that．
我希望我的错误不会阻止你将来寻求我的帮助．
【解答】Dear Dylan，
I apologize for not arriving on time to pick you up from the bus station yesterday．I have no excuse for keeping you waiting for so long．（向他表示道歉）Next time，I'll make sure to leave early enough in order to arrive as scheduled，or even ahead of schedule．【高分句型一】（表达你对此事的认识）
I humbly ask your forgiveness．I hope my mistake won't prevent you from seeking my help in the future． 【高分句型二】I'm always happy to be of service．（请求他的原谅）
Yours，
Li Hua
（79 words）
【点评】高考作文的体裁有记叙文、应用文、说明 文和议论文，尤以应用文独占鳌头．今年 的高考书面表达处处体现了新课改对高考 "体现英语教学的交际性、实用性和应用 性，提高考生的综合语言运用能力"的要 求．依然沿袭以往的风格，强调写作的目 的性和实用性．
12．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Peter想了解中国近四十年发生的变化以及人们对中国未来发展的期待．请你给他回邮件，内容包括四十年来人们：
1．居住环境的变化；
2．出行方式的变化；
3．对中国未来发展的期待．
注意：1． 词数不少于50；
2． 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：Let's take living condition and transportation as examples． 40 years ago， most people in China lived in small houses where winter is cold and long．
译文：让我们以生活条件和交通运输为例，40年前，中国大多数人住在寒冷而漫长的小房子里．
分析：where引导定语从句．
高分句型二： I hope you can come and see what China is like in person some day．
译文：我希望有一天你能亲自来看看中国是什么样的．
分析：I hope+宾语从句，what引导宾语从句．
【解答】Dear Peter，
In your last e﹣mail you said you wanted to learn about changes of Chinese people's life in the near 40 years． Since China opened its door to the world， life has become much more convenient． （引出话题）
Let's take living condition and transportation as examples． 40 years ago， most people in China lived in small houses where winter is cold and long．【高分句型一】（居住环境的变化） Now， people live in large houses equipped with heating systems． Bicycles used to be the main transportation． Now private cars have become household items．（出行方式的变化） In the future， Chinese people will keep pace with the latest science and technology development．
I hope you can come and see what China is like in person some day．【高分句型二】（对中国未来发展的期待）
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来． 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
13．假如你是李华，下个月你将去英国学习．请给你的笔友Peter写信，告诉他你想利用周末时间参加社区志愿活动，以便亲身体验生活．要点如下：
1 表达心情； 2 询问信息； 3 表达愿望．
注意：词数80左右；2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：I've heard that I can do some volunteer work as a student there．
译文：我听说作为一名学生我可以在那里做一些志愿者工作．
分析：that引导宾语从句．
高分句型二：Would you kindly tell me what volunteer work I could do in the community close to my school？
译文：你能告诉我在学校附近的社区我能做些什么志愿者工作吗？
分析：使用what引导宾语从句．
【解答】Dear Peter，
How is everything going？ It's great that I'm going to Britain next month and see you finally． I feel excited and look forward to studying in your country．（表达心情）
I've heard that I can do some volunteer work as a student there．【高分句型一】 Would you kindly tell me what volunteer work I could do in the community close to my school？【高分句型二】 Is there any chance for me to do it on weekends？ I believe your valuable guidance can be of great help to me．（ 询问信息）
I'd appreciate your early reply and I can't wait to see you next month．（表达愿望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】本文为提纲类作文，要求写一篇100词左右的英语短文，题目给出很详细的要点和提示词，学生需要在提示词的帮助下，将要点表达清楚，包含：出生；去世；身份；政治理想和影响，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．不能遗漏要点，写作时使用一般过去时，人称是第三人称，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
14．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike来信告诉你，他即将来中国生活一年．请你写封回信给他，简要告知他在中国生活需要了解的一些事情，比如中国的美食、旅游、以及购物等．
注意：
1． 词数100左右；
2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mike，
Knowing that you are coming to China， I am so excited that I can't wait to see you． Here I list a few things you need to know about living in China．
As you know， China boasts one of the world's greatest cuisines， which are things you should try． Besides， rich in tourism resources， China attracts millions of people from every corner of the world． Why not travel far and wide while you are here？ Finally， you will find life here convenient． With highly developed e﹣commerce， you can get just about anything without even leaving your place of residence．
I am sure you will have a good time here． Let me know if you have any more questions．
Looking forward to seeing you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】主题式．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．Knowing that you are coming to China， I am so excited that I can't wait to see you．
句子里，现在分词Knowing that you are coming to China做原因状语；that 有点结果状语从句I can't wait to see you．
知道你要来中国，我激动得等不及要见你了．
2．As you know， China boasts one of the world's greatest cuisines， which are things you should try．
句子里，关系词As 引导非限制性定语从句you know，代指主句 China boasts one of the world's greatest cuisines；代指先行词one of the world's greatest cuisines，关系词 which引导非限制性定语从句 are things you should try．
如你所知，中国是世界上最伟大的美食之一，你应该尝试一下．
【解答】Dear Mike，
Knowing that you are coming to China， I am so excited that I can't wait to see you．【高分句型一】 Here I list a few things you need to know about living in China．（点明书信目的）
As you know， China boasts one of the world's greatest cuisines， which are things you should try．【高分句型二】 Besides， rich in tourism resources， China attracts millions of people from every corner of the world． Why not travel far and wide while you are here？ Finally， you will find life here convenient． With highly developed e﹣commerce， you can get just about anything without even leaving your place of residence．（简要告知他在中国生活需要了解的一些事情）
I am sure you will have a good time here． Let me know if you have any more questions．Looking forward to seeing you soon．（期盼到来）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】高考作文的体裁有记叙文、应用文、说明 文和议论文，尤以应用文独占鳌头．今年 的高考书面表达处处体现了新课改对高考 "体现英语教学的交际性、实用性和应用 性，提高考生的综合语言运用能力"的要 求．依然沿袭以往的风格，强调写作的目 的性和实用性．
15．假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英语演讲比赛．请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
（1）目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；
（2）骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等．
参考词汇：低碳生活（low﹣carbon life）；节能（energy saving）
注意：（1）词数：120词左右；
（2）演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数．
Good morning，everyone，
I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．
As is known to us，air pollution and heavy urban traffic are becoming increasingly severe mainly due to the overuse of cars．Therefore，it's high time we chose another better means of transport，which is cycling．
There are many good reasons to ride bicycles．First of all，compared to cars，bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain，and you don't have all the added costs of fuel，and parking．What's more，bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars，because they hardly make
noises and exhaust．Cycling has become a new trend around the world，a good way of energy saving and low﹣carbon life．Last but not least，cycling is an excellent way to keep fit and live longer．By riding bicycles，you can cut down your risk of heart attacks，high blood pressure and
other illnesses．So I think，riding bicycles actually has great effects on us．Let's ride bicycles from today on!
Thank you!
【考点】提纲作文；身心健康；演讲稿．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文是应用文，根据所给要点写一份演讲稿．写作要点：（1）目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；（2）骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第二和第三人称为主．时态为一般现在时．重要短语：due to…（由于…），It's high time that （该是做…的时候），Compared to…（与…比较），keep fit （保持健康…），cut down…（削减），have great effects on （对…有影响 ）．
【解答】Good morning，everyone，
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．As is known to us，air pollution and heavy urban traffic are becoming increasingly severe mainly due to the overuse of cars．Therefore，it's high time we chose another better means of transport，which is cycling．【高分句型】（汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题）
There are many good reasons to ride bicycles．First of all，compared to cars，bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain，and you don't have all the added costs of fuel，and parking．【高分句型】What's more，bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars，because they hardly make
noises and exhaust．Cycling has become a new trend around the world，a good way of energy saving and low﹣carbon life．Last but not least，cycling is an excellent way to keep fit and live longer．By riding bicycles，you can cut down your risk of heart attacks，high blood pressure and
other illnesses．So I think，riding bicycles actually has great effects on us．Let's ride bicycles from today on!（骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康）
Thank you for listening!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．
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期末专项培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假定你是校英语报记者李华。你校于12月21日举办了以"保护生态环境，建设绿色家园"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你就此事写一篇报道。
内容包括：
（1）比赛目的；
（2）比赛过程；
（3）比赛反响。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：保护生态环境，建设绿色家园 Protecting the Eco﹣environment；Building a Green Homeland
An English Speech Contest
______
2．我国运动健儿在2022年北京冬奥会上取得9金4银2铜的战绩，锁定奖牌榜第三，实现奖牌数历史性突破。假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，请你给校英语报投稿，报道此消息。
内容要点如下：
1.报道此次比赛我国战绩，
2.赞扬运动员们努力拼搏，执着追求，挑战自我的奋斗精神，
3.表达爱国之情，报国之志。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：铜的bronze 奖牌榜 the medal tally 中国代表团 the Chinese delegation
3．假设你正在参加全省中学生演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点．
内容包括：1．认为同学们不必为此烦恼
2．希望能够体谅父母的苦衷
3．建议与父母进行交流沟通
注意：1．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
2．至少100词．
4．假如你是新华中学学生李华，你的英国好友Sansa了解到中国的5 G技术世界领先，她对此很感兴趣，给你发电子邮件，希望你给她介绍一下关于5 G技术的相关信息．现请你回复该邮件，内容应包括：
1.5 G网络在中国刚起步；
2.5 G会催生许多新的机遇和挑战；
3．政府非常支持5 G技术，正促使硬件、软件、通信运营商大力发展．
要求：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）书信格式及开头均已给出（不计入总词数）．
可能用到的生词：5 G网络﹣5 G network；通信运营商 telecom carrier（s）
Dear Sansa，
I'm glad to receive your email，_______
Yours，
Li Hua
5．你们班将举办以"未来的生活"为主题的英语演讲比赛．请根据下列要点和你的想象写一篇演讲稿．
1．工作；2．出行；3．环境．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结束语已为你写好，但不计入总词数．
Good afternoon，boys and girls!
I'd like to share with you my opinion about future life．
That's all．Thank you for your listening．
6．假如你是李华，打算寒假期间参加社区组织的志愿者活动。请给你的留学生朋友Jack写封邮件，邀请他一起参加，内容包括：
1.活动的时间和内容；
2.活动的意义；
3.你的希望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
_____________
Yours，
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你收到外国朋友 Peter 的邮件，他想了解你校在新冠疫情（COVID﹣19 epidemic）期间线上教学的情况．请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1． 课程与时间；
2． 你的学习状态；
3． 你的期待。
注意：
1． 词数 100 左右；
2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
I'm so glad to hear from you and know what you are doing these days． __________________
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua
8．假如你是李华，正在一所美国学校参加暑期夏令营，遇到一些学习或生活上的困难，希望得到学校辅导中心Learning Centre的帮助，根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按照下列要点写一封信：
（1）本人简介
（2）求助内容
（3）预约时间
注意：词数100词左右；开头和结尾已给出。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua，__________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，你的外教老师Mr．Terry即将退休．请用英语给他写一封信，内容包括：
1．向他表示祝贺；
2．感谢他对你的帮助；
3．建议他实现旅行和写书的计划．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Terry，
Congratulations on your retirement!_______
Best wishes．We will miss you very much．
Yours，
Li Hua
10．在我们的成长过程中，我们心中总有特别向往的工作，我们学校将以"My dream job"为题举办演讲比赛．请你根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿，要点如下：
1．你理想的工作；
2．选择的理由．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
11．假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的朋友 Dylan，但你却迟到了 10 分钟，令他很失望．请用英语给他写一封道歉信，要点如下：
1．向他表示道歉；2．表达你对此事的认识；3．请求他的原谅．
注意：1．词数 80 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Dylan，
Yours，
Li Hua
12．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Peter想了解中国近四十年发生的变化以及人们对中国未来发展的期待．请你给他回邮件，内容包括四十年来人们：
1．居住环境的变化；
2．出行方式的变化；
3．对中国未来发展的期待．
注意：1． 词数不少于50；
2． 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
13．假如你是李华，下个月你将去英国学习．请给你的笔友Peter写信，告诉他你想利用周末时间参加社区志愿活动，以便亲身体验生活．要点如下：
1 表达心情； 2 询问信息； 3 表达愿望．
注意：词数80左右；2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
14．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike来信告诉你，他即将来中国生活一年．请你写封回信给他，简要告知他在中国生活需要了解的一些事情，比如中国的美食、旅游、以及购物等．
注意：
1． 词数100左右；
2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
15．假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英语演讲比赛．请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
（1）目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；
（2）骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等．
参考词汇：低碳生活（low﹣carbon life）；节能（energy saving）
注意：（1）词数：120词左右；
（2）演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数．
Good morning，everyone，
I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．
Thank you!
期末专项培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假定你是校英语报记者李华。你校于12月21日举办了以"保护生态环境，建设绿色家园"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你就此事写一篇报道。
内容包括：
（1）比赛目的；
（2）比赛过程；
（3）比赛反响。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：保护生态环境，建设绿色家园 Protecting the Eco﹣environment；Building a Green Homeland
An English Speech Contest
______
【考点】提纲作文；环境保护；报道．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
An English Speech Contest
It was on December 21st that our school held an English speech contest with the theme of "Protecting the Ecological Environment and Building a Green Homeland".The purpose of this contest was to raise awareness among students about environmental protection and promote green living practices.
During the competition，participants delivered passionate speeches on the importance of preserving nature and the impact of climate change.The judges rated them according to the participants' oral skills and content.
The contest received an overwhelming response from students.Many of them expressed their gratitude towards the organizers for providing a platform to discuss environmental issues.The success of this event has encouraged the school to host more competitions aimed at fostering a green consciousness among students.
【分析】高分句型一：It was on December 21st that our school held an English speech contest with the theme of "Protecting the Ecological Environment and Building a Green Homeland"..
翻译：12月21日，我校举办了以"保护生态环境，建设绿色家园"为主题的英语演讲比赛。
分析：本句运用了强调句"It was+被强调部分+that+其他"。
高分句型二：The success of this event has encouraged the school to host more competitions aimed at fostering a green consciousness among students.
翻译：这次活动的成功促使学校举办更多的比赛，旨在培养学生的绿色意识。
分析：本句运用了动词不定式短语to host more competitions作宾补、过去分词短语aimed at fostering a green consciousness among students作后置定语、动名词短语fostering a green consciousness among students作宾语。
【解答】
An English Speech Contest
It was on December 21st that our school held an English speech contest with the theme of "Protecting the Ecological Environment and Building a Green Homeland".【高分句型一】The purpose of this contest was to raise awareness among students about environmental protection and promote green living practices.（比赛目的）
During the competition，participants delivered passionate speeches on the importance of preserving nature and the impact of climate change.The judges rated them according to the participants' oral skills and content.（比赛过程）
The contest received an overwhelming response from students.Many of them expressed their gratitude towards the organizers for providing a platform to discuss environmental issues.The success of this event has encouraged the school to host more competitions aimed at fostering a green consciousness among students.【高分句型二】（比赛反响）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇。
2．我国运动健儿在2022年北京冬奥会上取得9金4银2铜的战绩，锁定奖牌榜第三，实现奖牌数历史性突破。假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，请你给校英语报投稿，报道此消息。
内容要点如下：
1.报道此次比赛我国战绩，
2.赞扬运动员们努力拼搏，执着追求，挑战自我的奋斗精神，
3.表达爱国之情，报国之志。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：铜的bronze 奖牌榜 the medal tally 中国代表团 the Chinese delegation
【考点】提纲作文；报道．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】The Chinese delegation achieved a historic breakthrough in the number of MEDALS at the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics by winning nine golds，four silvers and two bronzes，securing the third place in the medal tally.
People praise the athletes for their hard work，persistent pursuit and challenging spirit，which are commendable.China's prodigy Gu Ailing claimed the historic gold in the women's free ski big air of the Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games at Big Air Shou gang，whose third jump challenge has never made a super difficult movement successfully，staged a super reversal，miraculously won the title.
The Olympic spirit inspires us to move forward and inspires my patriotism and ambition to serve the country.
【分析】高分句型一：The Chinese delegation achieved a historic breakthrough in the number of MEDALS at the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics by winning nine golds，four silvers and two bronzes，securing the third place in the medal tally.
翻译：中国代表团在2022年北京冬奥会上取得了历史性的奖牌数量突破，获得了9枚金牌、4枚银牌和2枚铜牌，在奖牌榜上名列第三。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语securing the third place in the medal tally作状语。
高分句型二：China's prodigy Gu Ailing claimed the historic gold in the women's free ski big air of the Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games at Big Air Shou gang，whose third jump challenge has never made a super difficult movement successfully，staged a super reversal，miraculously won the title.
翻译：中国神童谷爱凌在北京2022年冬季奥运会女子自由滑雪大空中项目中夺得历史性金牌，第三次跳远挑战从未成功完成过超难度动作，上演了一场超级逆转，奇迹般地夺得冠军。
分析：本句使用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】The Chinese delegation achieved a historic breakthrough in the number of MEDALS at the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics by winning nine golds，four silvers and two bronzes，securing the third place in the medal tally.【高分句型一】（报道此次比赛我国战绩）
People praise the athletes for their hard work，persistent pursuit and challenging spirit，which are commendable.China's prodigy Gu Ailing claimed the historic gold in the women's free ski big air of the Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games at Big Air Shou gang，whose third jump challenge has never made a super difficult movement successfully，staged a super reversal，miraculously won the title.【高分句型二】（赞扬运动员们努力拼搏，执着追求，挑战自我的奋斗精神）
The Olympic spirit inspires us to move forward and inspires my patriotism and ambition to serve the country.（表达爱国之情）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3．假设你正在参加全省中学生演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻开孩子的日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点．
内容包括：1．认为同学们不必为此烦恼
2．希望能够体谅父母的苦衷
3．建议与父母进行交流沟通
注意：1．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
2．至少100词．
【考点】提纲作文；演讲稿；日记．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．Some of us are having problems with our parents，as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries．
句子里，as 引导原因状语从句they often look into our school bags or read our diaries．
我们中的一些人和父母有问题，因为他们经常看我们的书包或看我们的日记．
2．I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it，but there's no need to feel too sad．
句子里，why 引导宾语从句we are not comfortable about it；固定句式 there's no need to表示"没必要做某事"．
我完全理解为什么我们对此感到不自在，但没必要感到太悲伤．
【解答】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen．
Some of us are having problems with our parents，as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries．【高分句型一】（点明现象） I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it，but there's no need to feel too sad．【高分句型二】（认为同学们不必为此烦恼） Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we're not getting into any trouble．They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same．Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are dong it all wrong． （希望能够体谅父母的苦衷）My suggestion is：Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we'd like to trust them．If you don't think you can talk to them，write them a letter and leave it lying around﹣they are bound to read it．（建议与父母进行交流沟通）
Thank you!
【点评】写作中，要注意 抓住提示的信息，并注意进行适当发挥．表达中要注意确定句子的时态与语态，注 意句式结构的正确和变化多样，适当运用 短语、并列句、复合句、介词短语和副词 等，以使文章饱满．
4．假如你是新华中学学生李华，你的英国好友Sansa了解到中国的5 G技术世界领先，她对此很感兴趣，给你发电子邮件，希望你给她介绍一下关于5 G技术的相关信息．现请你回复该邮件，内容应包括：
1.5 G网络在中国刚起步；
2.5 G会催生许多新的机遇和挑战；
3．政府非常支持5 G技术，正促使硬件、软件、通信运营商大力发展．
要求：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）书信格式及开头均已给出（不计入总词数）．
可能用到的生词：5 G网络﹣5 G network；通信运营商 telecom carrier（s）
Dear Sansa，
I'm glad to receive your email，_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；兴趣爱好；书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Sansa，
I'm glad to receive your email，in which you' ve shown interest in China's 5 G technology．I'm happy to tell you something about it．
Factually，5 G has just really started in China，so cell phone manufacturers and network providers are testing waters to see peoples reaction．To our delight，the government is prioritizing 5 G's development．Policies have been drawn up and preferences given，in the hope that related hardware，software and network construction will develop accordingly to meet 5 G standards．As far as I'm concerned，there are potential opportunities and challenges at the same time．I hope every nation in the world can take advantage of modern science and technology，using it for the benefit of all mankind．
I'd really like to hear 5 G in the UK as well．Please do write me soon．
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm glad to receive your email，in which you' ve shown interest in China's 5 G technology．
译文：很高兴收到你的邮件，你在邮件中对中国的5 G技术表现出了兴趣．
分析：in which引导非限制性定语从句．
高分句型二：I hope every nation in the world can take advantage of modern science and technology，using it for the benefit of all mankind．
译文：我希望世界上每个国家都能利用现代科学技术，利用它造福全人类．
分析：hope后面是宾语从句，
【解答】Dear Sansa，
I'm glad to receive your email，in which you' ve shown interest in China's 5 G technology．【高分句型一】I'm happy to tell you something about it．（写信目的）
Factually，5 G has just really started in China，so cell phone manufacturers and network providers are testing waters to see peoples reaction．（5 G网络在中国刚起步） To our delight，the government is prioritizing 5 G's development．Policies have been drawn up and preferences given，in the hope that related hardware，software and network construction will develop accordingly to meet 5 G standards．（5 G会催生许多新的机遇和挑战） As far as I'm concerned，there are potential opportunities and challenges at the same time．I hope every nation in the world can take advantage of modern science and technology，using it for the benefit of all mankind．【高分句型二】（政府非常支持5 G技术，正促使硬件、软件、通信运营商大力发展）
I'd really like to hear 5 G in the UK as well．Please do write me soon．（请对方回信）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少．
5．你们班将举办以"未来的生活"为主题的英语演讲比赛．请根据下列要点和你的想象写一篇演讲稿．
1．工作；2．出行；3．环境．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结束语已为你写好，但不计入总词数．
Good afternoon，boys and girls!
I'd like to share with you my opinion about future life．
That's all．Thank you for your listening．
【考点】提纲作文；演讲稿．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型：
1．With the development of science and technology，life will be greatly different in the future．
随着科学和技术的发展，人们的未来生活将会有巨大的不同．
该句中with引导的介词短语With the development of science and technology作状语．
2．Third，our environment will be much better than now，because some effective measures will be taken to protect it．
第三，我们的环境也会比现在更加的改善，因为我们已经采取了一些有效的措施来保护它．
该句中because引导一个原因状语从句．从句中使用被动语态的句子更能传神地表达出句子的意思．
【解答】Good afternoon，boys and girls!
I'd like to share with you my opinion about future life．With the development of science and technology，life will be greatly different in the future．（高分句型一）（提出演讲的话题）
First，people will be able to do almost everything at home．They'll just need to give some simple instructions and robots will complete the tasks．（工作）Second，each family will have a flying machine．They'll be able to travel everywhere，even to the moon or somewhere under the sea．（出行）Third，our environment will be much better than now，because some effective measures will be taken to protect it．（高分句型二）There will be no pollution，no rubbish，etc．The earth will become a big beautiful garden．（环境）
I believe people's lives will be much easier in the future．
That's all．Thank you for your listening．
【点评】英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
6．假如你是李华，打算寒假期间参加社区组织的志愿者活动。请给你的留学生朋友Jack写封邮件，邀请他一起参加，内容包括：
1.活动的时间和内容；
2.活动的意义；
3.你的希望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack，
_____________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jack，
I'm writing to invite you to join us in the voluntary activities to be held by our community this winter vacation.
Scheduled from February 5 to 8， the activities include some rewarding events， ranging from taking care of the old people in the nursing home， tutoring children to collecting waste in the parks. There will be more than 30 people working together， which will provide an opportunity for us to promote friendship and teamwork. Also， we'll develop our practical skills and sense of responsibility.
I sincerely hope you will participate in the activities.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Scheduled from February 5 to 8， the activities include some rewarding events， ranging from taking care of the old people in the nursing home， tutoring children to collecting waste in the parks.
分析：句子里，过去分词Scheduled from February 5 to 8作方式状语；现在分词ranging from taking care of the old people in the nursing home， tutoring children to collecting waste in the parks作伴随状语。
翻译：活动安排在2月5日至8日，包括一些有意义的活动，从在养老院照顾老人、辅导孩子到在公园收集垃圾。
高分句型二
There will be more than 30 people working together， which will provide an opportunity for us to promote friendship and teamwork.
分析：句子里，代指主句There will be more than 30 people working together，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句will provide an opportunity for us to promote friendship and teamwork.
翻译：届时将有30多人一起工作，这将为我们增进友谊和团队合作提供机会。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I'm writing to invite you to join us in the voluntary activities to be held by our community this winter vacation.（提出邀请）
Scheduled from February 5 to 8， the activities include some rewarding events， ranging from taking care of the old people in the nursing home， tutoring children to collecting waste in the parks. 【高分句型一】（活动的时间和内容）There will be more than 30 people working together， which will provide an opportunity for us to promote friendship and teamwork.【高分句型二】 Also， we'll develop our practical skills and sense of responsibility.（活动的意义）
I sincerely hope you will participate in the activities.（表达希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
7．假定你是李华，你收到外国朋友 Peter 的邮件，他想了解你校在新冠疫情（COVID﹣19 epidemic）期间线上教学的情况．请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1． 课程与时间；
2． 你的学习状态；
3． 你的期待。
注意：
1． 词数 100 左右；
2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
I'm so glad to hear from you and know what you are doing these days． __________________
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1． Six days a week， we learn the required subjects featuring Chinese， maths， P．E． and so on．
句子里，修饰名词subjects ，现在分词featuring Chinese， maths， P．E． and so on做后置定语．
每周六天，我们学习语文、数学、体育等必修课．
2．However， I still hope to return to campus， where I can enjoy face﹣to﹣face classes with my friends．
句子里，修饰先行词campus， 关系词where引导非限制性定语从句 I can enjoy face﹣to﹣face classes with my friends．
不过，我还是希望回到校园，在那里我可以和朋友们面对面地学习．
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm so glad to hear from you and know what you are doing these days． In your letter， you show concern about our online schooling during the COVID﹣19 epidemic， so I'd like to share with you some related information．（点明书信目的）
The spring semester is postponed， but schooling continues online under our teachers' guidance． Six days a week， we learn the required subjects featuring Chinese， maths， P．E． and so on． 【高分句型一】And each of the daily 6 classes is scheduled to last 40 minutes， with a 15﹣minute break between classes for eye exercises and self﹣relaxation． By getting actively involved in classes， I've adapted to such a unique way of learning and made great progress． In my view， the present situation poses a challenge to us， but it also means an opportunity to help us become autonomous learners．（课程与时间以及自己的学习状态）
However， I still hope to return to campus， where I can enjoy face﹣to﹣face classes with my friends． 【高分句型二】I firmly believe that the day will come soon because of the joint efforts and effective measures to fight the COVID﹣19 epidemic．（自己的期待）
Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．
8．假如你是李华，正在一所美国学校参加暑期夏令营，遇到一些学习或生活上的困难，希望得到学校辅导中心Learning Centre的帮助，根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按照下列要点写一封信：
（1）本人简介
（2）求助内容
（3）预约时间
注意：词数100词左右；开头和结尾已给出。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua，__________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the summer camp in your university.Faced with so much difficulty，I'm writing the letter to you to ask you for some help.
I came here last month and found my courses interesting.But I have some difficulties with note taking and I have no idea of how to use the library.I was told the Learning Centre provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you.I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.
Please let me know which day is OK with you.You may email or phone me.Look forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Faced with so much difficulty，I'm writing the letter to you to ask you for some help.
译文：面对这么多困难，我写信给你，请你帮忙。
分析：这句话使用过去分词作状语。
高分句型二：But I have some difficulties with note taking and I have no idea of how to use the library.
译文：但是我记笔记有点困难，我不知道如何使用图书馆。
分析：这句话使用疑问词+不定式作宾语。
【解答】Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking the summer camp in your university.Faced with so much difficulty，I'm writing the letter to you to ask you for some help. 【高分句型一】（简介和写信目的）
I came here last month and found my courses interesting.But I have some difficulties with note taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. 【高分句型二】I was told the Learning Centre provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you. （求助内容）I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.（预约时间）
Please let me know which day is OK with you.You may email or phone me.Look forward to your reply.（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
9．假定你是李华，你的外教老师Mr．Terry即将退休．请用英语给他写一封信，内容包括：
1．向他表示祝贺；
2．感谢他对你的帮助；
3．建议他实现旅行和写书的计划．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．Terry，
Congratulations on your retirement!_______
Best wishes．We will miss you very much．
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：I can't count the times I have come into your office this year alone to ask for advice．
译文：我不知道我今年一个人来你办公室征求意见的次数．
分析：the times后面是定语从句．
高分句型二：We have appreciated what you did，which were often beyond your normal duties．
译文：我们很感激你的所作所为，这常常超出你的正常职责范围．
分析：what引导宾语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句．
【解答】Dear Mr．Terry．
Congratulations on your retirement! （向他表示祝贺）；
We are sad to see you leave．You have been a precious possession to our school．We always knew that we students were in good hands when we were with you because you were patient and sensitive to our needs．I can't count the times I have come into your office this year alone to ask for advice． 【高分句型一】We have appreciated what you did，which were often beyond your normal duties． 【高分句型二】（感谢他对你的帮助）
Retirement will be an adjustment but also an opportunity．I hope you will finally do the traveling you have
been talking about and that you will also write that planned book． （建议他实现旅行和写书的计划）
Best wishes．We will miss you very much．
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
10．在我们的成长过程中，我们心中总有特别向往的工作，我们学校将以"My dream job"为题举办演讲比赛．请你根据以下要求写一篇英语演讲稿，要点如下：
1．你理想的工作；
2．选择的理由．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
【考点】提纲作文；演讲稿．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．．Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice．
句子里，动名词 being a tour guide 做主语．
或许当导游是最好的选择．
2．If I work as a tour guide，I can make a lot of friends all over the world，which may be great．
句子里，If 引导条件状语从句I work as a tour guide；代指主句I can make a lot of friends all over the world，关系词which 引导定语从句 may be great．
如果我是一名导游，我可以结交很多世界各地的朋友，这可能很棒．
【解答】Hi，everyone．Everybody has his dream job．I also have my dream job．My dream is to work for foreign tourists as a tour guide．（理想的工作是什么．）
Why do I want to be a tour guide？First of all，I'm an outgoing girl，and I like doing some exciting things．Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice．【高分句型一】If I become a tour guide，I can travel all around China，and know more about our country．Then I will tell the foreign tourists about our colorful history．Second，I like making friends．If I work as a tour guide，I can make a lot of friends all over the world，which may be great．【高分句型二】What's more，I like singing．Singing English songs is my favorite，which will make their trip excellent．So I believe I will be popular with foreign tourists．（ 选择的理由）
Now，I am still a middle school student．My job now is to work hard in school．Then I'll go to university to learn something about being a tour guide．I'm sure I can be a qualified tour guide in the future．（怎样实现梦想）
【点评】这是一篇命题作文，要求同学们先根据题目列出提纲以及写作要点．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．
11．假如你是李华，你约好昨天去公交车站接你的朋友 Dylan，但你却迟到了 10 分钟，令他很失望．请用英语给他写一封道歉信，要点如下：
1．向他表示道歉；2．表达你对此事的认识；3．请求他的原谅．
注意：1．词数 80 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Dylan，
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．Next time，I'll make sure to leave early enough in order to arrive as scheduled，or even ahead of schedule．
句子里，固定短语make sure 表示"确保"；in order to 表示"为了"；as scheduled表示"如期"；ahead of schedule表示"提前"．
下次，我一定要早点出发，以便如期到达，甚至提前到达．
2．I hope my mistake won't prevent you from seeking my help in the future．
句子里，宾语从句my mistake won't prevent you from seeking my help in the future省略了引导词that．
我希望我的错误不会阻止你将来寻求我的帮助．
【解答】Dear Dylan，
I apologize for not arriving on time to pick you up from the bus station yesterday．I have no excuse for keeping you waiting for so long．（向他表示道歉）Next time，I'll make sure to leave early enough in order to arrive as scheduled，or even ahead of schedule．【高分句型一】（表达你对此事的认识）
I humbly ask your forgiveness．I hope my mistake won't prevent you from seeking my help in the future． 【高分句型二】I'm always happy to be of service．（请求他的原谅）
Yours，
Li Hua
（79 words）
【点评】高考作文的体裁有记叙文、应用文、说明 文和议论文，尤以应用文独占鳌头．今年 的高考书面表达处处体现了新课改对高考 "体现英语教学的交际性、实用性和应用 性，提高考生的综合语言运用能力"的要 求．依然沿袭以往的风格，强调写作的目 的性和实用性．
12．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Peter想了解中国近四十年发生的变化以及人们对中国未来发展的期待．请你给他回邮件，内容包括四十年来人们：
1．居住环境的变化；
2．出行方式的变化；
3．对中国未来发展的期待．
注意：1． 词数不少于50；
2． 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：Let's take living condition and transportation as examples． 40 years ago， most people in China lived in small houses where winter is cold and long．
译文：让我们以生活条件和交通运输为例，40年前，中国大多数人住在寒冷而漫长的小房子里．
分析：where引导定语从句．
高分句型二： I hope you can come and see what China is like in person some day．
译文：我希望有一天你能亲自来看看中国是什么样的．
分析：I hope+宾语从句，what引导宾语从句．
【解答】Dear Peter，
In your last e﹣mail you said you wanted to learn about changes of Chinese people's life in the near 40 years． Since China opened its door to the world， life has become much more convenient． （引出话题）
Let's take living condition and transportation as examples． 40 years ago， most people in China lived in small houses where winter is cold and long．【高分句型一】（居住环境的变化） Now， people live in large houses equipped with heating systems． Bicycles used to be the main transportation． Now private cars have become household items．（出行方式的变化） In the future， Chinese people will keep pace with the latest science and technology development．
I hope you can come and see what China is like in person some day．【高分句型二】（对中国未来发展的期待）
Yours
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来． 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
13．假如你是李华，下个月你将去英国学习．请给你的笔友Peter写信，告诉他你想利用周末时间参加社区志愿活动，以便亲身体验生活．要点如下：
1 表达心情； 2 询问信息； 3 表达愿望．
注意：词数80左右；2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型一：I've heard that I can do some volunteer work as a student there．
译文：我听说作为一名学生我可以在那里做一些志愿者工作．
分析：that引导宾语从句．
高分句型二：Would you kindly tell me what volunteer work I could do in the community close to my school？
译文：你能告诉我在学校附近的社区我能做些什么志愿者工作吗？
分析：使用what引导宾语从句．
【解答】Dear Peter，
How is everything going？ It's great that I'm going to Britain next month and see you finally． I feel excited and look forward to studying in your country．（表达心情）
I've heard that I can do some volunteer work as a student there．【高分句型一】 Would you kindly tell me what volunteer work I could do in the community close to my school？【高分句型二】 Is there any chance for me to do it on weekends？ I believe your valuable guidance can be of great help to me．（ 询问信息）
I'd appreciate your early reply and I can't wait to see you next month．（表达愿望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】本文为提纲类作文，要求写一篇100词左右的英语短文，题目给出很详细的要点和提示词，学生需要在提示词的帮助下，将要点表达清楚，包含：出生；去世；身份；政治理想和影响，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．不能遗漏要点，写作时使用一般过去时，人称是第三人称，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
14．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike来信告诉你，他即将来中国生活一年．请你写封回信给他，简要告知他在中国生活需要了解的一些事情，比如中国的美食、旅游、以及购物等．
注意：
1． 词数100左右；
2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Mike，
Knowing that you are coming to China， I am so excited that I can't wait to see you． Here I list a few things you need to know about living in China．
As you know， China boasts one of the world's greatest cuisines， which are things you should try． Besides， rich in tourism resources， China attracts millions of people from every corner of the world． Why not travel far and wide while you are here？ Finally， you will find life here convenient． With highly developed e﹣commerce， you can get just about anything without even leaving your place of residence．
I am sure you will have a good time here． Let me know if you have any more questions．
Looking forward to seeing you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】主题式．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】高分句型
1．Knowing that you are coming to China， I am so excited that I can't wait to see you．
句子里，现在分词Knowing that you are coming to China做原因状语；that 有点结果状语从句I can't wait to see you．
知道你要来中国，我激动得等不及要见你了．
2．As you know， China boasts one of the world's greatest cuisines， which are things you should try．
句子里，关系词As 引导非限制性定语从句you know，代指主句 China boasts one of the world's greatest cuisines；代指先行词one of the world's greatest cuisines，关系词 which引导非限制性定语从句 are things you should try．
如你所知，中国是世界上最伟大的美食之一，你应该尝试一下．
【解答】Dear Mike，
Knowing that you are coming to China， I am so excited that I can't wait to see you．【高分句型一】 Here I list a few things you need to know about living in China．（点明书信目的）
As you know， China boasts one of the world's greatest cuisines， which are things you should try．【高分句型二】 Besides， rich in tourism resources， China attracts millions of people from every corner of the world． Why not travel far and wide while you are here？ Finally， you will find life here convenient． With highly developed e﹣commerce， you can get just about anything without even leaving your place of residence．（简要告知他在中国生活需要了解的一些事情）
I am sure you will have a good time here． Let me know if you have any more questions．Looking forward to seeing you soon．（期盼到来）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】高考作文的体裁有记叙文、应用文、说明 文和议论文，尤以应用文独占鳌头．今年 的高考书面表达处处体现了新课改对高考 "体现英语教学的交际性、实用性和应用 性，提高考生的综合语言运用能力"的要 求．依然沿袭以往的风格，强调写作的目 的性和实用性．
15．假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英语演讲比赛．请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
（1）目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；
（2）骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等．
参考词汇：低碳生活（low﹣carbon life）；节能（energy saving）
注意：（1）词数：120词左右；
（2）演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数．
Good morning，everyone，
I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．
As is known to us，air pollution and heavy urban traffic are becoming increasingly severe mainly due to the overuse of cars．Therefore，it's high time we chose another better means of transport，which is cycling．
There are many good reasons to ride bicycles．First of all，compared to cars，bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain，and you don't have all the added costs of fuel，and parking．What's more，bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars，because they hardly make
noises and exhaust．Cycling has become a new trend around the world，a good way of energy saving and low﹣carbon life．Last but not least，cycling is an excellent way to keep fit and live longer．By riding bicycles，you can cut down your risk of heart attacks，high blood pressure and
other illnesses．So I think，riding bicycles actually has great effects on us．Let's ride bicycles from today on!
Thank you!
【考点】提纲作文；身心健康；演讲稿．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】本文是应用文，根据所给要点写一份演讲稿．写作要点：（1）目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；（2）骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第二和第三人称为主．时态为一般现在时．重要短语：due to…（由于…），It's high time that （该是做…的时候），Compared to…（与…比较），keep fit （保持健康…），cut down…（削减），have great effects on （对…有影响 ）．
【解答】Good morning，everyone，
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．As is known to us，air pollution and heavy urban traffic are becoming increasingly severe mainly due to the overuse of cars．Therefore，it's high time we chose another better means of transport，which is cycling．【高分句型】（汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题）
There are many good reasons to ride bicycles．First of all，compared to cars，bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain，and you don't have all the added costs of fuel，and parking．【高分句型】What's more，bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars，because they hardly make
noises and exhaust．Cycling has become a new trend around the world，a good way of energy saving and low﹣carbon life．Last but not least，cycling is an excellent way to keep fit and live longer．By riding bicycles，you can cut down your risk of heart attacks，high blood pressure and
other illnesses．So I think，riding bicycles actually has great effects on us．Let's ride bicycles from today on!（骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康）
Thank you for listening!
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．
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