【期末专项培优】读后续写（含解析）2025-2026学年高一上学期英语期末必刷卷译林版（2019）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末专项培优 读后续写
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Compean was no stranger to Angeles National Forest.He 'd hiked the park near his home in Southern California many times.But after exploring along a new path last April，the 45﹣year﹣old mechanic was lost.
As the day faded into dusk，following several hours of aimless wandering，his concern turned to fear.The place was remote and rough.With no flashlight，only a liter of water and a power bar in his backpack，and less than ten percent battery remaining on his cell phone，Compean was unprepared for anything more than the two﹣hour hike he 'd pean climbed to a spot，some 7，000 feet above sea level，where he found at least one bar of signal. "SOS.My phone is going to die.I'm lost，" he texted a friend，attaching a photo showing where he was.The picture showed his legs surrounded by an endless landscape of rocks and plants.
All Compean could do then was wait and hope.The temperature was dropping fast，and the wind was blowing violently.Not wearing too much，the hiker was shaking with cold.He hugged himself into a tight ball，using his backpack to protect his legs from the cold wind.But he wouldn't sleep.After spotting two mountain lions and a bear，he spent the night awake，keeping a big stick and some sharp rocks beside him in case an animal came close.
The rescue teams had spent the previous night unsuccessfully looking for Compean，so they posted the photo to the public，hoping someone might know the location.
Ben，a worker in a tech industry，who has an unusual hobby of exploring where photos are ta ken，happened to see the photo.So he immediately pulled up a satellite map on his laptop.Based on the information that Compean's car was parked near Buckhorn Campground，he narrowed his search to the surrounding area.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Fortunately，through his constant efforts，Ben finally identified where Compean was._____________
Days later，knowing Ben helped locate him，Compean decided to thank him in person._____________
2．Last March，Margarito drove to visit his mother who lived in the countryside.When he set off for home，Margarito's mother looked at the dark sky and noticed the sign of a coming storm.Worried about her son's safety，she told him to drive as carefully as possible on his way home and he promised to give her a call upon his arrival.
With his mother's words in mind，Margarito approached the main road carefully.Soon，it started to rain heavily.Eager to get home，Margarito began to drive faster.Two hours later，he came to a bumpy mountain road that had been flooded by a creek（小溪）.Margarito，driving a four﹣wheel drive truck，figured that he would be OK.At that moment，he didn't realize that such a thought would be a big mistake.
It was halfway across the creek that an unfortunate incident took place：The rushing waters grabbed hold of his vehicle，pushing it off the road and sending it down a rocky creek bed.The truck finally stopped some 80 feet away.Margarito's problems only grew from there as the water had somehow positioned the truck into the creek bank at a 45﹣degree angle，making it difficult for him to open the driver's side door.Injured and trapped inside with the muddy water rising quickly，Margarito was certain he was going to die.Shaking with fear，he was at a loss about what to do.
On the road right behind Margarito were a delivery worker named Steve and his nephew Mike，who were on the way to deliver furniture to customers in the countryside.They witnessed the horrible incident，and when Margarito's truck came to rest in the middle of the overflowing creek，Steve quickly began to take action.First，he grabbed a rope from the back of his vehicle and used it to ensure he could safely approach the truck.
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1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Next，he turned to Mike and yelled， "Give me a rock!"______
Margarito was about to thank Steve and Mike when the mobile phone in his jacket pocket rang.______
3．Miguel opened the door to his grandpa's shoe shop.Grandpa was drawing a customer's foot onto a piece of paper.He didn't look up.Miguel sat down.He looked at the cut leather，hammer and other tools.
The tools reminded Miguel of something else he loved.Grandpa always gave him a piece of candy whenever Miguel helped clean up.Miguel knew he wasn't supposed to take candy without asking.But he was hungry then.It looked like Grandpa would be busy for a while. "Maybe I don't need to wait，" Miguel thought.
Miguel reached secretly for the candy box.He hurried and put it in his mouth.Pretty soon the customer left.Grandpa was busy picking up a piece of leather and putting it in some water.Miguel ate the rest of the candy as fast as he could.Then he walked over to Grandpa.
Grandpa looked up from his work. "Hello!" he said with a smile.Miguel hugged Grandpa.He hoped Grandpa couldn't tell he had eaten a piece of candy. "It looks like you're busy today，" Miguel said." Do you need any help？" "Sure!Could you pass me that thread？" Miguel nodded.He pulled it between his hands. "Wow，that's strong，" Miguel said.Grandpa laughed， "It has to be，to last through the wear and tear of life. " Grandpa pulled the thread through the leather.
"You know，we need to be more like this shoe，" Grandpa said.Miguel looked at the leather，"Um.We do？""Yes，indeed.We need to stay strong.That way temptations（诱惑） won't make us fall apart，" Grandpa said with a nod.
Miguel suddenly thought of the candy.He knew he should tell Grandpa about it.Grandpa took an old shoe off the shelf， "See this big hole？" Miguel nodded. "This was once a small hole that could have been fixed easily.But the owner waited，and now it's going to be much harder to fix.Bad habits and bad choices are like that hole.It is best to fix them early."
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Miguel watched while Grandpa was working.______
Miguel told him all about taking the candy.______
4．As a sixth grader，I began noticing how other kids were separating into groups.I wasn't sure where I belonged.I found it hard to fit in.
Our teacher had assigned "secret friends" for the coming week.She wrote each kid's name on a piece of paper and threw them into a glass；then we each closed our eyes and drew the name of a classmate who we were to secretly befriend and support over the next five school days.By the middle of the week，everyone，including me，had turned this assignment into a contest to see whose secret friend could leave the best gift.We left cards，pens and even money.It seemed that everyone was getting cool presents from their friends except me.
On the last morning of our assignment，I walked into my classroom and noticed there was a package.I opened the wrapping paper and inside was a box of powder.The girls sitting near me laughed at the gift I had received.To make matters worse，the powder had already been opened.
I tried to forget about the embarrassing gift，but when I was in the bathroom during the break，the girls who had seen me open the powder started speaking ill of my secret friend of giving it to me.I quickly joined in. "How terrible，" I heard myself saying，"What could my friend be thinking by giving me such a stupid gift？My grandmother wouldn't even want it." The girls laughed at my remarks and rushed out of the bathroom.I stayed to wash my hands and let the water run through my fingers as I thought about what I had just said.It wasn't normal like me to say mean things like that about someone.
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Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth（厕所隔间），tears streaming down her face.________
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Along with my apologies，I explained the reason.___________
5．On a cold windy day，a poor boy tried to pay his way through school by selling goods door to door.Wandering on the street，he was not a successful seller.What's worse，he found that he only had one dime（十分钱）left.His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadn't eaten anything.He had no choice but to beg for a meal at the next house.
Hesitantly he knocked at door，thinking about what to say when it opened.However，he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. "What can I do for you？" asked the young woman.The boy paused for a while "Would you please give me some...a drink of water？" the boy dared not to look directly into her eyes.She looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give him energy so she brought him a glass of milk.His head rising and small hands taking the cup，he drank it up slowly，and then asked，"How much do I owe you？" "You don't owe me anything，" she replied with a warm smile on her face. "My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness." Deeply moved，he said sincerely， "Then I shall thank you from the bottom of my heart." As Howard Kelly left that house，he not only felt stronger physically，but it also increased his faith in God and the whole human race.As a matter of fact，he was about to give up and quit before that point.
Years later the young woman became critically ill.However，the local doctors were unable to give the effective medical treatment.Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city，where specialists can be called in to cure her rare disease.Among those famous specialists，Dr.Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation.When he heard the name of the town she came from，a strange light filled his eyes.Immediately，he rose and went down through the hospital hall into her room.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Dressed in his doctor's gown，he went in to see her.______
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The bill was sent to her room.______
6．An 80﹣year﹣old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45﹣year﹣old highly educated son.Suddenly a crow （乌鸦） perched on the tree near heir window.
The father asked his son，"What is this？" The son replied，"It is a crow."
After a few minutes，the father asked his son the second time"What is this？" The son said，
"Father，I have just now told you.It's a crow."
After a little while，the old father again asked his son the third time，"What is this？"
"It's a crow，a crow，a crow"said the son loudly and impatiently.
A few minutes later，the father again asked his son the fourth time."What is it？"
This time the son shouted at his father， "Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again？IT IS A CROW.Are you not able to understand this？"
A little later the father went to his room and came back with an old diary，which he had kept since his son was born.On pernicious a page，he asked his son to read that pages.When the son read it，the following words were written in the diary：
"Today my little son aged three was siting with me on the sofa when a crow was siting on the window.My son asked me 23 times what it was，and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow.I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question again and again for 23 times.I did not at all feel annoyed；I rather felt love for my innocent child."
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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After reading the diary.
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Feeling ashamed，the son got down on his knees before his father.
7．Once，when I was a teenager，my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus（马戏团）.Finally，there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.
This family made a big impression on me.There were eight children，all probably under the age of twelve.You could tell they didn't have a lot of money.
Their clothes were not expensive，but they were clean.The children were well﹣behaved，all of them standing in line，two﹣by﹣two behind their parents，holding hands.They were excitedly talking about the clowns，elephants，and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice.
One could sense they had never been to the circus before.It should be highlight of their young lives.The father and mother were at the head of the pack，standing proud as could be.The mother was holding her husband's hand，looking up at him as if to say， "You are my knight in shining armor."
He was smiling and responding in pride，looking back at her as if to say， "You got that right." The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted.He proudly responded， "Please let me buy eight children's tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus."
The ticket lady gave the price.The man's wife let go of his hand，her head dropped，and his lips began to shake.The father leaned a little closer and asked， "How much did you say？"
The ticket lady told the price to him again.The man didn't have enough money.
How could he turn and tell his eight children that he didn't have enough money to take them to the circus？
In fact，we were not rich.So I understand how the kids would feel.I felt sorry for them.
注意：
1.续写的词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Seeing what was going on，my dad put his hand in his pocket，pulled out a ﹩20 bill and dropped it on the ground.
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That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.
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8．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents everywhere praise their kids.Jenn Berman，author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids，says， "We've gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict." By giving kids a lot of praise，parents think they're building their children's confidence，when，in fact，it may be just the opposite.Too much praise can backfire and，when given in a way that's insincere，make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them.
Still，don't go too far in the other direction.Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging as giving too much.Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and，as a result，may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
So what is the right amount of praise？Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity.If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome，you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward. "We should especially recognize our children's efforts to push themselves and work hard to achieve a goal，" says Donahue，author of Parenting Without Fear：Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters. "One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters."
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.But if he's out there every day and playing hard，you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses.Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard，cook dinner，or finish a book report.But whatever it is，praise should be given on a case﹣by﹣case basis and be proportionate（相称的） to the amount of effort your child has put into it.
9．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
In 1945，a 12﹣year﹣old boy saw a beautiful brooch（胸针）in a shop window that set his heart racing.But the price﹣five dollars﹣was too high for Reuben Earle.Five dollars would buy almost a week's food for his family.
Reuben couldn't ask his father for the money.Everything his father made through fishing went to his mother，Dora.Slim and beautiful，she was the center of the home，the glue that held it together.The housework was never﹣ending，and she struggled to feed and clothe their five children but she was happy as her family and their well﹣being were all she cared about.
Nevertheless，he opened the shop's door and went inside.Standing proud and straight in his flour﹣sack（面粉袋改做的） shirt and washed﹣out trousers，he told the shopkeeper what he wanted，adding ，"But I don't have the money right now.Can you please hold it for me for some time？"
"I'll try，" the shopkeeper smiled. "People around here don't usually have that kind of money to spend on things.It should keep for a while."
Reuben respectfully touched his worn cap and walked out.
He would raise the money and not tell anybody，for he thought Mum would get surprised when she saw that brooch.On hearing the sound of hammering（捶打）from a side street，Reuben suddenly had an idea that he could raise money by selling the used nail bags.People built their own homes in Bay Roberts，using nails bought in bags from a local factory.Sometimes the used bags were thrown away at the construction site，and Reuben knew he could sell them back to the factory for five cents a piece.That day he sold two nail bags and hid the money in a rusty soda tin.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Every day after school，Reuben started his plan._______.
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Finally，the time came!_______.
10．
A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming.Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last.After the happy family got ready，they set out for the grandparents' eagerly.On the way，the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared.Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa.They arrived at the driveway，at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room，shouting excitedly "Grandpa，we are back!"
Seeing his grandsons，Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain.A helpless expression flashed on his face.Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn't stand up on his own forever.But Grandpa declared stubbornly（倔强地）， "I can! " Certainly，he was stuck in his boyish way.Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time.They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation，went out and wandered into the forest.Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other，while young ones rose straight like soldiers.Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom.He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs.The trees，birds，lizards，lots of bugs...How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn't get up，which made them worried. "We'd think out a way to cheer him up." Jack said. "Grandpa is a bird lover，and we can catch him a bird." Berlin suggested. "But he hates birds being caged!" Jack shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Jack's mind. "Why not make a cane（拐杖）out of a young tree!"
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Berlin thought it was a good idea.______ Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.______
11．This past summer，my family went on our annual vacation in a cottage on a lake.There were various activities to keep everyone busy：swimming，fishing and building sand castle on the beach.In the evenings，we gathered on the beach，having great fun.
However，by the third day of our vacation，I noticed my sister，Jane，spent most of her time watching videos and looking through online shops indoors.She was so addicted to her cell phone!Over dinner，I told Jane we would hike to the top of the mountain across the lake the following morning.I stared at her， "Put your phone away and enjoy the scenery.It's really amazing. "
"Well，" Jane shrugged （耸） her shoulders and answered unwillingly， "there are some bargains tomorrow in several online shops，so I'll not be available."
"Come out to enjoy the fresh air and many views.Hiking is fun!"
"Sounds more like punishment than a vacation，" she didn't look up from her soup and mumbled （嘟囔）， "I cannot walk that far. "
When I said it only took half an hour of steady walking to climb to the top，she nodded， "OK，I'll go."
The next morning was perfect for a hike，with sunny clear skies and gentle winds.I got up early and packed some sandwiches and bottles of water into my backpack along with the camera.Jane came slowly downstairs，and announced in a very unenthusiastic voice， "I'm ready to go，Jim."
Anyway，we stepped out of our cottage and quite a different view unfolded before our eyes.Against the blue skies，a rough path wound to the top of the mountain across the lake with wild flowers and grass on both sides.The sunlight brightened on the glassy surface of the lake.We began from the path. "I'm still wondering if this is a good idea，but if you could do it，I could also do." She complained，frowning.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She followed me，her mind wandering.
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Reaching the top，Jane widened her eyes，shouting， "How awesome!"
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12．Her name was Mrs Thompson.And as she stood in front of the 5th grade class on the very first day she looked at her students and said that she loved them all the same.But that was impossible because there in the front row was a little boy named Teddy Stoddard.Mrs Thompson had watched Teddy the year before and noticed that he didn't play well with the other children，that his clothes were messy and that he constantly needed a bath.She paid no attention to Teddy.
However，when she read his file，she was in surprise.Teddy's first grade teacher wrote， "Teddy is a bright child with a ready laugh.He does his work neatly and has good manners...he is the joy to be around." His second grade teacher wrote， "Teddy is an excellent student，well liked by his classmates.But he is troubled because his mother has a deadly illness and life at home must be a struggle." His third grade teacher wrote， "His mother's death has been hard on him.He tried to do his best but his father doesn't show much interest." Teddy's fourth grade teacher wrote， "Teddy is withdrawn and doesn't show much interest in school.He doesn't have many friends and sometimes seeps in class." By now，Mrs Thompson realized the problem and she was ashamed of herself.She thought that she could make a difference.
She felt even worse when her students brought her Christmas presents，wrapped in beautiful paper and tied with pretty ribbons，except for Teddy's.His present was clumsily wrapped in the heavy，brown paper that he got from a grocery bag.Mrs Thompson opened it in the middle of the other presents.Some of the children started to laugh when she found a stone bracelet （手镯） with some of the stones missing，and a bottle that was one ﹣ quarter full of perfume （香水）.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mrs Thompson，whose voice choked up with tears，thanked her students.for their presents.__________
Ten years later，Teddy invited Mrs Thompson to attend his wedding as his mother.__________________
13．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was at Lens Crafters waiting to pick up my new pair of glasses.A mom as well as her little girl walked in.The mom was probably in her late twenties and the little girl was about five.
Both of their clothes were badly dated to say the least.It was obvious that the family's financial windfall （意外之财） had not yet arrived.I overheard a comment the comment made to the saleslady that she was in between job 1 and job 2 of the day，so she didn't have a lot of time.
The little girl and the mom proceeded around the store looking at these little tiny frames for the girl's face.The saleslady was helping them try on frames and pulling aside her favorites.
You knew how some little kids actually looked ten times cuter in glasses，and so the little girl did.She found these cute little frames with a butterfly on them.She was so happy，smiling from ear to ear while she looked at herself in the mirror.
The saleslady rang the glasses up on the till （收银台）.The mom pulled out a coupon （优惠券），and the saleslady stared blankly at the coupon.She then explained that for some reason this coupon could not be used，pointing out the miniscule （极小的） words printed at the bottom.
Then the mom chatted back and forth for a bit with the saleslady and then finally leaned down to her daughter and explained to her that there would be no glasses that day，maybe next month she said.
The little girl's eyes started to tear up.The mom leaned a little closer and told her it would be OK and that she needed a little more time to save up for them.The little girl responded， "But Mommy，I can't see and I want to be able to see when I start school next week.I want to do well，Mommy!What if I'm in the back？"
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Seeing this，I quietly called the saleslady over.
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The saleslady was so moved.
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14．
The Trouble With Chores （家庭杂务）
The twins，Jenna and Jeff，were good at most things.Their dad was good at most things，too.But there was one thing the twins and Dad were not good at—that was chores.It wasn't that Dad and the twins didn't want to do their chores.It was just that they always seemed to have reasons not to do them.And they had such good excuses.
"You're right，my dear，" said Mum. "The grass does need cutting.But a spider has spun a wonderful web on the lawn mower and I haven't the heart to put all her hard work to waste."
"Mum，" said Jenna， "I know it's my week to put up my cards.It's just that I'm waiting for them to dry.They'll be easier to scoop up that way."
"Mum，" said Jeff， "may I skip setting the table tonight？There's a TV show on the Ice Age，and I have to do a report on the Beast of Baluchistan."
There were also the endless quarrels about who did what and who got the easy job.Mum sighed.If only Dad and the twins were as good at doing their chores as they were at arguing about them，life would be easier.Talking of chores，Mum thought instead of pushing them for chores，it would be a lot easier to do them herself.And that was what she did.She put away all cards and set and cleared the table.She chased the dust bunnies from under the furniture and cleaned up the twins' messy room.
The twins did pick up and put away things occasionally.Dad did cut the grass once in a while.Not surprisingly，things began to slide.Everybody got a little unhappy，especially Mum，who spent much time doing chores.Something had to be done.But what？
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mum decided to host a family meeting.
Living in all that messy build﹣up wasn't much fun.
15．It was one of the hottest days of the dry season.We had not seen rain in almost a month.The crops were dying.Cows had stopped giving milk.The streams were long gone back into the earth.If we didn't see any rain soon we would lose everything.It was on that day that I learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the only miracle I have seen in my life.
I was in the kitchen making lunch for my husband and his brothers when I saw my six﹣year old son，Billy，walking toward the woods.I could only see his back.He wasn't walking in his usual way.He was obviously walking with a great effort，trying to be as still as possible.Minutes after he disappeared into the woods，he came running out again，toward the house.I went back to making sandwiches，thinking that whatever he had been doing was completed.Moments later，however，he was once again walking in that unusual way toward the woods.This activity went on for over an hour：walking cautiously to the woods，then running back to the house.Finally，my curiosity got the best of me.I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.
He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked；being very careful not to spill the water he carried.I followed him secretly as he went into the woods.Branches and thorns（刺） slapped his little face but he did not try to avoid them.He might have a much greater purpose，I thought.As I leaned in to spy on him，I saw the most amazing sight.Several large deer appeared threatening in front of him.But Billy walked right up to them，at the sight of which I almost screamed for him to get away.A huge buck（雄鹿） was dangerously close.But the buck didn't threaten him nor even move as Billy knelt down.And then I saw a baby deer lying on the ground，obviously suffering from thirst and heat，lift its head with great effort to lap （舔）up the water cupped in my beautiful boy's hands.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应的位置作答。
When the water was gone，Billy jumped up to run back to the house.
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Instead of scolding him like his father，I decided to help him.
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期末专项培优 读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Compean was no stranger to Angeles National Forest.He 'd hiked the park near his home in Southern California many times.But after exploring along a new path last April，the 45﹣year﹣old mechanic was lost.
As the day faded into dusk，following several hours of aimless wandering，his concern turned to fear.The place was remote and rough.With no flashlight，only a liter of water and a power bar in his backpack，and less than ten percent battery remaining on his cell phone，Compean was unprepared for anything more than the two﹣hour hike he 'd pean climbed to a spot，some 7，000 feet above sea level，where he found at least one bar of signal. "SOS.My phone is going to die.I'm lost，" he texted a friend，attaching a photo showing where he was.The picture showed his legs surrounded by an endless landscape of rocks and plants.
All Compean could do then was wait and hope.The temperature was dropping fast，and the wind was blowing violently.Not wearing too much，the hiker was shaking with cold.He hugged himself into a tight ball，using his backpack to protect his legs from the cold wind.But he wouldn't sleep.After spotting two mountain lions and a bear，he spent the night awake，keeping a big stick and some sharp rocks beside him in case an animal came close.
The rescue teams had spent the previous night unsuccessfully looking for Compean，so they posted the photo to the public，hoping someone might know the location.
Ben，a worker in a tech industry，who has an unusual hobby of exploring where photos are ta ken，happened to see the photo.So he immediately pulled up a satellite map on his laptop.Based on the information that Compean's car was parked near Buckhorn Campground，he narrowed his search to the surrounding area.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Fortunately，through his constant efforts，Ben finally identified where Compean was._____________
Days later，knowing Ben helped locate him，Compean decided to thank him in person._____________
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Fortunately，through his constant efforts，Kuo finally identified where Compean was.Kuo breathed a sigh of relief and called rescue teams at once，telling them the exact location of the poor man.The instant the research teams got the information，a flood of joy took possession of them and at the same time they immediately made thoughtful arrangements before beginning their search and rescue again.Soon，a helicopter hovered above Compean with the help of Kuo.After spending a long time alone in the wild，Compean was eventually saved.
Days later，knowing Kuo helped locate him，Com pean decided to thank him in person.So he got in touch with Kuo，deciding where they would meet.During their meeting，Compean thanked Kuo in a trembling voice，"Thank you very much.Without you，I wouldn't have survived.I owe my life to you.""It's not a big deal.I just did what I could do.You know I like exploring where photos are taken，" said Kuo with a comforting smile spreading across his face.Warm current of kindness flowing into their hearts，they chatted just like old friends.
【分析】本文为记叙文。45岁的机械师Rene Compean在洛杉矶国家森林公园（ANF）独自徒步时不慎迷路。他趁着手机没电之前，拍下了一张自己所在位置的照片传给朋友，这张照片成为搜救队进行救援的重要线索。喜欢探索照片拍摄地点的Ben Kuo看见搜救队发出的照片后，立刻发挥所长，帮助确定Rene Compean的位置。
高分句型一：Kuo breathed a sigh of relief and called rescue teams at once，telling them the exact location of the poor man.
译文：郭松了一口气，立刻打电话给救援队，告诉他们这个可怜人的确切位置。
分析：这句话使用现在分词短语作状语。
高分句型二：Warm current of kindness flowing into their hearts，they chatted just like old friends.
译文：亲切的暖流涌进他们的心田，他们像老朋友一样聊天。
分析：这句话使用独立主格结构。
【解答】Fortunately，through his constant efforts，Kuo finally identified where Compean was.Kuo breathed a sigh of relief and called rescue teams at once，telling them the exact location of the poor man.【高分句型一】The instant the research teams got the information，a flood of joy took possession of them and at the same time they immediately made thoughtful arrangements before beginning their search and rescue again.Soon，a helicopter hovered above Compean with the help of Kuo.After spending a long time alone in the wild，Compean was eventually saved.（Kuo如何将消息告知救援队，救援队如何及时开展营救来叙述）
Days later，knowing Kuo helped locate him，Com pean decided to thank him in person.So he got in touch with Kuo，deciding where they would meet.During their meeting，Compean thanked Kuo in a trembling voice，"Thank you very much.Without you，I wouldn't have survived.I owe my life to you.""It's not a big deal.I just did what I could do.You know I like exploring where photos are taken，" said Kuo with a comforting smile spreading across his face.Warm current of kindness flowing into their hearts，they chatted just like old friends.【高分句型二】（围绕两个人相约如何见面、以及相见之后Compean对Kuo表示感谢展开描写）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
2．Last March，Margarito drove to visit his mother who lived in the countryside.When he set off for home，Margarito's mother looked at the dark sky and noticed the sign of a coming storm.Worried about her son's safety，she told him to drive as carefully as possible on his way home and he promised to give her a call upon his arrival.
With his mother's words in mind，Margarito approached the main road carefully.Soon，it started to rain heavily.Eager to get home，Margarito began to drive faster.Two hours later，he came to a bumpy mountain road that had been flooded by a creek（小溪）.Margarito，driving a four﹣wheel drive truck，figured that he would be OK.At that moment，he didn't realize that such a thought would be a big mistake.
It was halfway across the creek that an unfortunate incident took place：The rushing waters grabbed hold of his vehicle，pushing it off the road and sending it down a rocky creek bed.The truck finally stopped some 80 feet away.Margarito's problems only grew from there as the water had somehow positioned the truck into the creek bank at a 45﹣degree angle，making it difficult for him to open the driver's side door.Injured and trapped inside with the muddy water rising quickly，Margarito was certain he was going to die.Shaking with fear，he was at a loss about what to do.
On the road right behind Margarito were a delivery worker named Steve and his nephew Mike，who were on the way to deliver furniture to customers in the countryside.They witnessed the horrible incident，and when Margarito's truck came to rest in the middle of the overflowing creek，Steve quickly began to take action.First，he grabbed a rope from the back of his vehicle and used it to ensure he could safely approach the truck.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Next，he turned to Mike and yelled， "Give me a rock!"______
Margarito was about to thank Steve and Mike when the mobile phone in his jacket pocket rang.______
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】见试题解答内容
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，本文以玛格丽托开车去看望住在乡下的母亲为线索展开，讲述了去年3月，玛格丽托去看望住在乡下的母亲，返程途中遭遇到了暴风雨，他的车被卡在山路上的一条小溪中间，他受伤了并被困在里面，这时，送货员史蒂夫和他的侄子迈克目睹了这可怕的一幕，他们把玛格丽托从车里救了出来。玛格丽托对两位营救他的恩人非常感激。
高分句型一：Hanging up the phone，he turned to Steve and Mike and sincerely thanked both of them.
翻译：挂断电话后，他转向史蒂夫和迈克，真诚地感谢他们两人。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Hanging up the phone做状语。
高分句型二：Cold as the rain was，great warmth filled his heart like never before.
翻译：尽管雨很冷，但他心里却充满了前所未有的温暖。
分析：本句使用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装。
【解答】Next，he turned to Mike and yelled， "Give me a rock!" With the rock，he hit the window over and over but had little success.Steve then shouted to Margarito to move away from the window.He balanced himself on the truck，leaned back and threw the rock at the window.Finally，the glass broke and Steve kicked in the remaining pieces of glass.Relieved，Margarito reached out for Steve's hand and was rescued.The two men escaped and returned to safety.（货车司机把玛格丽托营救出来）
Margarito was about to thank Steve and Mike when the mobile phone in his jacket pocket rang.With trembling hands，Margarito took out the phone and pressed it to his ear.His mother's anxious voice came over the phone， "Are you home yet？Everything's good？" Tears welled up in his eyes at the familiar sound of concern.Margarito choked up as he explained the accident to his mom and comforted her.Hanging up the phone，he turned to Steve and Mike and sincerely thanked both of them.【高分句型一】Cold as the rain was，great warmth filled his heart like never before.【高分句型二】（玛格丽托表达了感激之情）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
3．Miguel opened the door to his grandpa's shoe shop.Grandpa was drawing a customer's foot onto a piece of paper.He didn't look up.Miguel sat down.He looked at the cut leather，hammer and other tools.
The tools reminded Miguel of something else he loved.Grandpa always gave him a piece of candy whenever Miguel helped clean up.Miguel knew he wasn't supposed to take candy without asking.But he was hungry then.It looked like Grandpa would be busy for a while. "Maybe I don't need to wait，" Miguel thought.
Miguel reached secretly for the candy box.He hurried and put it in his mouth.Pretty soon the customer left.Grandpa was busy picking up a piece of leather and putting it in some water.Miguel ate the rest of the candy as fast as he could.Then he walked over to Grandpa.
Grandpa looked up from his work. "Hello!" he said with a smile.Miguel hugged Grandpa.He hoped Grandpa couldn't tell he had eaten a piece of candy. "It looks like you're busy today，" Miguel said." Do you need any help？" "Sure!Could you pass me that thread？" Miguel nodded.He pulled it between his hands. "Wow，that's strong，" Miguel said.Grandpa laughed， "It has to be，to last through the wear and tear of life. " Grandpa pulled the thread through the leather.
"You know，we need to be more like this shoe，" Grandpa said.Miguel looked at the leather，"Um.We do？""Yes，indeed.We need to stay strong.That way temptations（诱惑） won't make us fall apart，" Grandpa said with a nod.
Miguel suddenly thought of the candy.He knew he should tell Grandpa about it.Grandpa took an old shoe off the shelf， "See this big hole？" Miguel nodded. "This was once a small hole that could have been fixed easily.But the owner waited，and now it's going to be much harder to fix.Bad habits and bad choices are like that hole.It is best to fix them early."
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Miguel watched while Grandpa was working.______
Miguel told him all about taking the candy.______
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Miguel watched while Grandpa was working.The whole time，Miguel kept thinking about the candy.When Grandpa finished，Miguel helped him clean up.Then Grandpa reached for his box of candy as usual.Miguel's heartbeat a bit faster，worrying that Grandpa might find the missing of a candy.Finally，Miguel couldn't take it anymore. "I took one piece of your candy without asking，" he said and hung his head in shame.Grandpa set down the box in surprise and wondered what had actually happened.
Miguel told him all about taking the candy. "I'm so sorry，Grandpa!I'll never do it again.I promise!" Grandpa hugged Miguel and kissed him lovingly.Miguel felt so much better. "My dear grandson，thank you for being honest.That is more important to me than just anything else.I'm proud of you!" On the way home，Miguel felt just like one of Grandpa's new pairs of shoes，strong and ready for life，determined never to do anything that might ruin the "shoes".
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，以人物为线索展开，讲述了Miguel到了爷爷的鞋店，每当米格尔帮忙打扫卫生时，爷爷总是给他一块糖。Miguel知道他不能未经允许就拿走糖果。但有一次他饿了，他偷偷的吃了糖果，并希望自己的爷爷不会发现。
高分句型一：When Grandpa finished，Miguel helped him clean up.
翻译：爷爷吃完后，米格尔帮他打扫卫生。
分析：本句使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Miguel's heartbeat a bit faster，worrying that Grandpa might find the missing of a candy.
翻译：米格尔的心跳加快了一点，担心爷爷可能会找到丢失的糖果。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语worrying that Grandpa might find the missing of a candy做状语。
【解答】Miguel watched while Grandpa was working.The whole time，Miguel kept thinking about the candy.When Grandpa finished，Miguel helped him clean up.【高分句型一】Then Grandpa reached for his box of candy as usual.Miguel's heartbeat a bit faster，worrying that Grandpa might find the missing of a candy.【高分句型二】Finally，Miguel couldn't take it anymore. "I took one piece of your candy without asking，" he said and hung his head in shame.Grandpa set down the box in surprise and wondered what had actually happened.（Miguel向爷爷坦白自己偷吃了糖果）
Miguel told him all about taking the candy. "I'm so sorry，Grandpa!I'll never do it again.I promise!" Grandpa hugged Miguel and kissed him lovingly.Miguel felt so much better. "My dear grandson，thank you for being honest.That is more important to me than just anything else.I'm proud of you!" On the way home，Miguel felt just like one of Grandpa's new pairs of shoes，strong and ready for life，determined never to do anything that might ruin the "shoes".（爷爷表示理解，原谅了Miguel，并教育他要做一个诚实的人）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
4．As a sixth grader，I began noticing how other kids were separating into groups.I wasn't sure where I belonged.I found it hard to fit in.
Our teacher had assigned "secret friends" for the coming week.She wrote each kid's name on a piece of paper and threw them into a glass；then we each closed our eyes and drew the name of a classmate who we were to secretly befriend and support over the next five school days.By the middle of the week，everyone，including me，had turned this assignment into a contest to see whose secret friend could leave the best gift.We left cards，pens and even money.It seemed that everyone was getting cool presents from their friends except me.
On the last morning of our assignment，I walked into my classroom and noticed there was a package.I opened the wrapping paper and inside was a box of powder.The girls sitting near me laughed at the gift I had received.To make matters worse，the powder had already been opened.
I tried to forget about the embarrassing gift，but when I was in the bathroom during the break，the girls who had seen me open the powder started speaking ill of my secret friend of giving it to me.I quickly joined in. "How terrible，" I heard myself saying，"What could my friend be thinking by giving me such a stupid gift？My grandmother wouldn't even want it." The girls laughed at my remarks and rushed out of the bathroom.I stayed to wash my hands and let the water run through my fingers as I thought about what I had just said.It wasn't normal like me to say mean things like that about someone.
Paragraph 1：
Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth（厕所隔间），tears streaming down her face.________
Paragraph 2：
Along with my apologies，I explained the reason.___________
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Paragraph 1：
Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth（厕所隔间），tears streaming down her face. She shouted at me with anger， "If you don't want my gift you can just leave it instead of laughing at it.This is the best powder from my mum!" Before I could say a word，Janet dashed out，leaving me dumb with deep regret.But soon I clenched my fingers and made up my mind to find Janet and say sorry to her.There she was，sitting in a tree shadow wiping her eyes.
Paragraph 2：
Along with my apologies，I explained the reason. I was not a mean girl by judging people's presents.The reason why I complained in front of the girls was that I wanted to fit in，having a sense of belonging in the group.Hearing my sincere words，Janet calmed herself down after constant sobs and said， "True friendship comes from genuine care and love for each other.I think that's our teacher's intention of this 'secret friend' assignment." That day，I learned to cherish real friendship.
【分析】本文讲述了作者在老师布置的一次活动中收到了"秘密朋友"送的一罐用过的香粉，本来就不适应分组活动的作者感到非常的尴尬，并和同学们一起说了非常刻薄的话，这伤害到了"秘密朋友"珍妮特。珍妮特非常伤心，作者向她道歉并解释，两个人成为了好朋友。
高分句型一：Before I could say a word，Janet dashed out，leaving me dumb with deep regret.
翻译：我还没来得及说一句话，珍妮特就冲了出去，让我后悔的哑口无言。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词leaving me dumb with deep regret作状语。
高分句型二：The reason why I complained in front of the girls was that I wanted to fit in，having a sense of belonging in the group.
翻译：我在女生面前抱怨的原因是我想融入这个群体，在这个群体中有归属感。
分析：这句话使用了why引导的定语从句。
【解答】Paragraph 1：
Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth（厕所隔间），tears streaming down her face. She shouted at me with anger， "If you don't want my gift you can just leave it instead of laughing at it.This is the best powder from my mum!" Before I could say a word，Janet dashed out，leaving me dumb with deep regret.【高分句型一】But soon I clenched my fingers and made up my mind to find Janet and say sorry to her.There she was，sitting in a tree shadow wiping her eyes.（珍妮特非常伤心并质问作者，作者感到无所适从）
Paragraph 2：
Along with my apologies，I explained the reason. I was not a mean girl by judging people's presents.The reason why I complained in front of the girls was that I wanted to fit in，having a sense of belonging in the group.【高分句型二】Hearing my sincere words，Janet calmed herself down after constant sobs and said， "True friendship comes from genuine care and love for each other.I think that's our teacher's intention of this 'secret friend' assignment." That day，I learned to cherish real friendship.（作者向珍妮特道歉，珍妮特原谅了作者）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
5．On a cold windy day，a poor boy tried to pay his way through school by selling goods door to door.Wandering on the street，he was not a successful seller.What's worse，he found that he only had one dime（十分钱）left.His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadn't eaten anything.He had no choice but to beg for a meal at the next house.
Hesitantly he knocked at door，thinking about what to say when it opened.However，he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. "What can I do for you？" asked the young woman.The boy paused for a while "Would you please give me some...a drink of water？" the boy dared not to look directly into her eyes.She looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give him energy so she brought him a glass of milk.His head rising and small hands taking the cup，he drank it up slowly，and then asked，"How much do I owe you？" "You don't owe me anything，" she replied with a warm smile on her face. "My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness." Deeply moved，he said sincerely， "Then I shall thank you from the bottom of my heart." As Howard Kelly left that house，he not only felt stronger physically，but it also increased his faith in God and the whole human race.As a matter of fact，he was about to give up and quit before that point.
Years later the young woman became critically ill.However，the local doctors were unable to give the effective medical treatment.Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city，where specialists can be called in to cure her rare disease.Among those famous specialists，Dr.Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation.When he heard the name of the town she came from，a strange light filled his eyes.Immediately，he rose and went down through the hospital hall into her room.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Dressed in his doctor's gown，he went in to see her.______
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The bill was sent to her room.______
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Paragraph1
Dressed in his doctor's gown，he went in to see her.He saw her lie on the bed and recognized her at once.Her lovely face looked pale.He went back to the consultation room and determined to do his best to save her life.From that day on，he gave special attention to her case.Luckily，after a long struggle the battle was won.Doctor Kelly requested the business office to pass the final bill for approval.He looked at it and then wrote something on the side.
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The bill was sent to her room.Hesitantly she took it.She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off.Finally，she opened the bill，on the other side of which a note caught her attention.She read these words， "Paid in full with a glass of milk." signed Dr.Howard Kelly.Tears of joy flooded her eyes as she prayed silently，"Thank you，God!"
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位小男孩在落难之际受到了一位年轻女孩的帮助并且铭记于心。多年后这位男孩通过自己的医术拯救这位女孩子的且帮助她免去医疗费用的故事。
高分句型一：She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off.
翻译：她不敢打开它，因为她确信要用余生来偿还。
分析：本句使用了because引导的原因状语从句。
高分句型二：Finally，she opened the bill，on the other side of which a note caught her attention.
翻译：最后，她打开账单，账单的另一面有一张纸条引起了她的注意。
分析：本句使用了介词+which引导的定语从句。
【解答】Paragraph1
Dressed in his doctor's gown，he went in to see her.He saw her lie on the bed and recognized her at once.Her lovely face looked pale.He went back to the consultation room and determined to do his best to save her life.From that day on，he gave special attention to her case.Luckily，after a long struggle the battle was won.Doctor Kelly requested the business office to pass the final bill for approval.He looked at it and then wrote something on the side.（在他的治疗下，女孩最后恢复了健康）
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The bill was sent to her room.Hesitantly she took it.She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay it off.【高分句型一】Finally，she opened the bill，on the other side of which a note caught her attention.【高分句型二】She read these words， "Paid in full with a glass of milk." signed Dr.Howard Kelly.Tears of joy flooded her eyes as she prayed silently，"Thank you，God!"（女孩看到账单上的字，想到了多年前的事。并发出了感慨）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
6．An 80﹣year﹣old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45﹣year﹣old highly educated son.Suddenly a crow （乌鸦） perched on the tree near heir window.
The father asked his son，"What is this？" The son replied，"It is a crow."
After a few minutes，the father asked his son the second time"What is this？" The son said，
"Father，I have just now told you.It's a crow."
After a little while，the old father again asked his son the third time，"What is this？"
"It's a crow，a crow，a crow"said the son loudly and impatiently.
A few minutes later，the father again asked his son the fourth time."What is it？"
This time the son shouted at his father， "Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again？IT IS A CROW.Are you not able to understand this？"
A little later the father went to his room and came back with an old diary，which he had kept since his son was born.On pernicious a page，he asked his son to read that pages.When the son read it，the following words were written in the diary：
"Today my little son aged three was siting with me on the sofa when a crow was siting on the window.My son asked me 23 times what it was，and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow.I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question again and again for 23 times.I did not at all feel annoyed；I rather felt love for my innocent child."
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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After reading the diary.
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Feeling ashamed，the son got down on his knees before his father.
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】After reading the diary，the son was filled with tears.He began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times!The son thought to himself：If I attain old age，how will my son look at me？Will he think of me as a burden？Will he shout at me because of my poor sight，poor hearing or poor understanding？
Feeling ashamed，the son got down on his knees before his father.He made an apology to his father，begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior.He said this aloud， "I promise to see you happy forever，Dad.It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child，showering your selfless affection on me.You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university.I will serve you in the best day."
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了儿子对父亲不耐烦，通过观看父亲的日记，儿子明白了自己的错误，并向父亲道歉。
高分句型一：He began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.
翻译：他开始回想过去与父亲坐在一起的日子。
分析：本句使用了when引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child，showering your selfless affection on me.
翻译：是你从我小时候就开始关心我，把你无私的爱洒在我身上。
分析：本句使用了强调句式以及现在分词短语showering your selfless affection on me做状语。
【解答】After reading the diary，the son was filled with tears.He began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father.【高分句型一】His father would patiently answer the same question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times!The son thought to himself：If I attain old age，how will my son look at me？Will he think of me as a burden？Will he shout at me because of my poor sight，poor hearing or poor understanding？（儿子看了父亲的日记后的感想）
Feeling ashamed，the son got down on his knees before his father.He made an apology to his father，begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior.He said this aloud， "I promise to see you happy forever，Dad.It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child，showering your selfless affection on me.【高分句型二】You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university.I will serve you in the best day."（儿子向父亲道歉）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
7．Once，when I was a teenager，my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus（马戏团）.Finally，there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.
This family made a big impression on me.There were eight children，all probably under the age of twelve.You could tell they didn't have a lot of money.
Their clothes were not expensive，but they were clean.The children were well﹣behaved，all of them standing in line，two﹣by﹣two behind their parents，holding hands.They were excitedly talking about the clowns，elephants，and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice.
One could sense they had never been to the circus before.It should be highlight of their young lives.The father and mother were at the head of the pack，standing proud as could be.The mother was holding her husband's hand，looking up at him as if to say， "You are my knight in shining armor."
He was smiling and responding in pride，looking back at her as if to say， "You got that right." The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted.He proudly responded， "Please let me buy eight children's tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus."
The ticket lady gave the price.The man's wife let go of his hand，her head dropped，and his lips began to shake.The father leaned a little closer and asked， "How much did you say？"
The ticket lady told the price to him again.The man didn't have enough money.
How could he turn and tell his eight children that he didn't have enough money to take them to the circus？
In fact，we were not rich.So I understand how the kids would feel.I felt sorry for them.
注意：
1.续写的词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Seeing what was going on，my dad put his hand in his pocket，pulled out a ﹩20 bill and dropped it on the ground.
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That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.
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【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Paragraph 1：
Seeing what was going on，my dad put his hand in his pocket，pulled out a ＄20 bill and dropped it on the ground.Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said，"Excuse me，sir，this fell out of your pocket." The man turned around and saw the money.Knowing what was happening，he looked my father straight in the eye，took his hand in both of his，clutched the ＄20 bill，his lips trembling，tears streaming down his cheeks，and replied， "Thank you，thank you，Sir.This really means a lot to me and my family."
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That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.We didn't go to the circus that night，when I asked dad why he did so，Dad said， "My child，it was a desperate，heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father.Surely he wasn't begging for a handout，but he reminded me of my father，when I was young."He paused for a while，as if wandering in his memory."We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others.We didn't go to the circus tonight，but we didn't go without.Now，who wants an ice cream？"
【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了作者小时候和父亲去看马戏，在排队时他们注意到一个家庭，家里有8个孩子，年龄大概都在12岁以下，看得出家庭条件不是很好，结果那家的父亲却没有足够的钱买票，于是作者的父亲用了一个办法帮助了他们，而没有伤害这位父亲的自尊心。
高分句型一：Surely he wasn't begging for a handout，but he reminded me of my father，when I was young.
翻译：他当然不是在乞求施舍，但他让我想起了我年轻时的父亲。
分析：本句使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：He paused for a while，as if wandering in his memory.
翻译：他停顿了一会儿，仿佛在记忆中徘徊。
分析：本句使用了as if引导的方式状语的省略。
【解答】Paragraph 1：
Seeing what was going on，my dad put his hand in his pocket，pulled out a ＄20 bill and dropped it on the ground.Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said，"Excuse me，sir，this fell out of your pocket." The man turned around and saw the money.Knowing what was happening，he looked my father straight in the eye，took his hand in both of his，clutched the ＄20 bill，his lips trembling，tears streaming down his cheeks，and replied， "Thank you，thank you，Sir.This really means a lot to me and my family."（作者的父亲是如何帮助那个买不起票的父亲的）
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That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.We didn't go to the circus that night，when I asked dad why he did so，Dad said， "My child，it was a desperate，heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father.Surely he wasn't begging for a handout，but he reminded me of my father，when I was young."【高分句型一】He paused for a while，as if wandering in his memory.【高分句型二】"We should appreciate what we have obtained