【期末专项培优】应用文写作（含解析）2025-2026学年高一上学期英语期末必刷卷译林版（2019）
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末专项培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假如你是学生会主席李华，校学生会将举行"唐诗吟诵大赛"（ Tang Poetry Recitation Contest），以此弘扬中国传统文化，特邀学校国外交换生参加，请你根据提示写一则书面通知，主要内容包括：
1.大赛的目的和意义；
2.时间和地点（校礼堂）；
3.欢迎国外交换生报名参加。
注意：
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2．假设你是李华，你们学校正在举办Embrace Chinese Culture（拥抱中华文化）主题活动，其中"汉服展览"活动将于本周进行，请写一封email邀请你们的外教Jim参加。内容包括：
1.简单介绍汉服；
2.展览的时间和地点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
_________
Yours，
Li Hua
3．你校将举行以"善待野生动物，实现和谐共处"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.野生动物的重要性；
2.野生动物的现状及其原因；
3.发出号召。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
4．你校将举行以"善待野生动物，实现和谐共处"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.野生动物的重要性；
2.野生动物的现状及其原因；
3.发出号召。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good afternoon，everyone!
_____________
That's all.Thanks for your listening.
5．在你校网络安全月即将到来之际，校英文报正在征集相关稿件。请你就网络安全话题投稿，具体内容包括：
1.网络安全的重要性；
2.安全上网的具体建议；
3.号召大家重视网络安全。
注意
1.词数80左右；
2.题目已给出，不计入总词数。
Staying Safe on the Internet
________________
6．你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择："长江之行"或者"泰山之旅"。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
7．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter参与策划校园"中国文化节"，来信请你推荐一些活动项目。现请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.活动项目名称；2.推荐理由；3.预祝活动成功。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
8．假定你是李华，你校的英语社正在招募演讲比赛的主持人，你对此很感兴趣。请按要求用英文给英语社社长Tod写封邮件申请该职位。内容应包括：1.自我介绍；2.陈述个人优势；3.表达期望。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
9．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，2021年12月9日你和同学一起观看了神舟十三号航天员太空授课，请你发送一封电子邮件给三位宇航员，内容包括：
（1）感谢宇航员们的精彩授课；
（2）观看太空授课后的收获和感想；
（3）祝愿宇航员凯旋归来。
注意：
（1）词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear astronauts，
I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School
________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，是你们班的班长。你们学校将于下个月举办英语戏剧节（The English Dram a Festival），你班将排演短剧Alice in Wonderland。请你根据以下要点给外教Susan写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）约定时间见面；
（2）请她给予指导；
（3）邀请她扮演一个角色；
（4）表达期待。
注意：
（1）词数 80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Susan，
Yours，
Li Hua
11．你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以值得尊敬和爱戴的一位残疾人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2.你爱戴他（她）的原因。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
A Disabled Person I Respect Most
There are many respectable disabled people in the world.
_______________
12．假定你是李华，你校将举办主题为"How to be a better self"的英语沙龙活动，请你为此准备一份发言稿，谈谈自己的看法。内容包括：
1.对a better self的理解；
2.具体做法。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
13．新学期，你校将继续开展为期三个月的英语名著阅读（classic works reading）活动。假如你是校学生会主席，请你为校英文报写一份倡议书，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.活动要求。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates，
____________________________________________
The Students' Union
14．为了庆祝即将来临的新年，你校在元旦举办了迎新春品美食活动，受到广大师生的好评。你参加了活动并拍摄了vlog。请你以"An Unforgettable Festival"为题，为校刊的英语角写一篇短文，记述整个活动过程。
1.活动策划
2.活动内容
3.师生感受
注意：1.词数120字左右 2.可以适当增加细节
An Unforgettable Festival
_______________
15．为加强学生心理健康建设，你校正在组织以"How to deal with your anxiety"为主题的英语作文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.产生焦虑的原因；
2.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以增加适当细节，以使行文连贯。
期末专项培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假如你是学生会主席李华，校学生会将举行"唐诗吟诵大赛"（ Tang Poetry Recitation Contest），以此弘扬中国传统文化，特邀学校国外交换生参加，请你根据提示写一则书面通知，主要内容包括：
1.大赛的目的和意义；
2.时间和地点（校礼堂）；
3.欢迎国外交换生报名参加。
注意：
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文；传统文化；通知类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Notice
Do you want to have a further knowledge of traditional Chinese culture？Here comes your opportunity一the Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest.Below is some detailed information you need to know.
As scheduled，the contest is to be held next Friday from 8：30﹣11：30 by the students' union.Above all，it is essential that you get fully prepared before the contest.Therefore，you're strongly recommended to read Three Hundred Tang Poems thoroughly and learn to appreciate the beauty of traditional Chinese poetry.Whoever feels interested and has a passion for it can sign up at the school auditorium before this Sunday.Don't miss the chance of being a winner，and some appealing prizes are eagerly waiting for you.
Don't hesitate to take part!Hope you will benefit a lot and make much progress in your Chinese.
The School Students' Union
【分析】高分句型一：Below is some detailed information you need to know.
译文：下面是一些你需要知道的详细信息。
分析：这句话使用倒装句，you need to know是定语从句修饰information。
高分句型二：Whoever feels interested and has a passion for it can sign up at the school auditorium before this Sunday.
译文：任何对它感兴趣并有热情的人可以在本周日之前到学校礼堂报名。
分析：这句话使用whoever引导主语从句。
【解答】Notice
Do you want to have a further knowledge of traditional Chinese culture？Here comes your opportunity一the Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest.Below is some detailed information you need to know. 【高分句型一】（目的和意义）
As scheduled，the contest is to be held next Friday from 8：30﹣11：30 by the students' union.（时间） Above all，it is essential that you get fully prepared before the contest.Therefore，you're strongly recommended to read Three Hundred Tang Poems thoroughly and learn to appreciate the beauty of traditional Chinese poetry. （范围）Whoever feels interested and has a passion for it can sign up at the school auditorium before this Sunday. 【高分句型二】（地点）Don't miss the chance of being a winner，and some appealing prizes are eagerly waiting for you. （邀请参加）
Don't hesitate to take part!Hope you will benefit a lot and make much progress in your Chinese.（希望）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2．假设你是李华，你们学校正在举办Embrace Chinese Culture（拥抱中华文化）主题活动，其中"汉服展览"活动将于本周进行，请写一封email邀请你们的外教Jim参加。内容包括：
1.简单介绍汉服；
2.展览的时间和地点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
_________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jim，
I have good news for you.A Hanfu Exhibition is to be held this Friday.I know you are pretty interested in Chinese culture，especially traditional clothes.Hanfu，which literally means "Han clothing"，has been around in China for 3，000 years，and now is increasingly popular.It is believed to be a symbol of Chinese culture.
If it is convenient，don't miss this great chance.The School Reception Hall will provide a feast for the eye，where you can enjoy a variety of Hanfu from 3 p.m.to 5 p.m.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Hanfu，which literally means "Han clothing"，has been around in China for 3，000 years，and now is increasingly popular.
翻译：汉服，字面意思是"汉朝的服装"，在中国已经有3000年的历史，现在越来越流行。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：The School Reception Hall will provide a feast for the eye，where you can enjoy a variety of Hanfu from 3 p.m.to 5 p.m.
翻译：学校接待厅将为您提供一场赏心悦目的盛宴，下午3点至5点，您可以在这里欣赏各种汉服。
分析：本句使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I have good news for you.A Hanfu Exhibition is to be held this Friday.（写信目的）I know you are pretty interested in Chinese culture，especially traditional clothes.Hanfu，which literally means "Han clothing"，has been around in China for 3，000 years，and now is increasingly popular.【高分句型一】It is believed to be a symbol of Chinese culture.（简单介绍汉服）
If it is convenient，don't miss this great chance.The School Reception Hall will provide a feast for the eye，where you can enjoy a variety of Hanfu from 3 p.m.to 5 p.m.【高分句型二】（汉服展览的时间和地点）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3．你校将举行以"善待野生动物，实现和谐共处"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.野生动物的重要性；
2.野生动物的现状及其原因；
3.发出号召。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Good afternoon，everyone!
What is known to all is that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.Unfortunately，many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction.The reasons are various.On the one hand，the environment that they are living in has been greatly destroyed.On the other hand，they are being over hunted.
So we must take measures to protect them.We should raise our awareness of animal protection.Besides，let's make every effort to protect animals' living environment.
I hope we can live in harmony with animals.Let's take action.
That's all.Thanks for your listening.
【分析】高分句型一：What is known to all is that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.
翻译：众所周知，所有的动物都在保持自然的平衡中发挥着作用。
分析：句中运用了what引导主语从句，that引导表语从句。
高分句型二：On one hand，the environment that they are living in has been greatly destroyed.
翻译：一方面，他们生活的环境遭到了极大的破坏。
分析：句中运用了that引导定语从句。
【解答】Good afternoon，everyone!
What is known to all is that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.【高分句型一】（野生动物的重要性）Unfortunately，many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction.The reasons are various.On the one hand，the environment that they are living in has been greatly destroyed.【高分句型二】On the other hand，they are being over hunted.（野生动物的现状及其原因）
So we must take measures to protect them.We should raise our awareness of animal protection.Besides，let's make every effort to protect animals' living environment.
I hope we can live in harmony with animals.Let's take action.（发出号召）
That's all.Thanks for your listening.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．你校将举行以"善待野生动物，实现和谐共处"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.野生动物的重要性；
2.野生动物的现状及其原因；
3.发出号召。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good afternoon，everyone!
_____________
That's all.Thanks for your listening.
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Good afternoon，everyone!
It is known to all that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.Unfortunately，many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction.The reasons are various.On one hand，the environment that they are living in has been greatly destroyed.On the other hand，they are being over hunted.
So we must take measures to protect them.We should raise our awareness of animal protection.Besides，let's make every effort to protect animals' living environment.
I hope we can live in harmony with animals.Let's take action.
That's all.Thanks for your listening.
【分析】高分句型一
It is known to all that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.
分析：句子里，It作形式主语，代指that引导的主语从句all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature。
翻译：众所周知，所有的动物都在保持自然平衡中发挥作用。
高分句型二
On one hand，the environment that they are living in has been greatly destroyed.
分析：句子里，代指先行词the environment，关系词that引导定语从句they are living。
翻译：一方面，他们生活的环境遭到了极大的破坏。
【解答】Good afternoon，everyone!
It is known to all that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.【高分句型一】（野生动物的重要性）Unfortunately，many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction.The reasons are various.On one hand，the environment that they are living in has been greatly destroyed.【高分句型二】On the other hand，they are being over hunted.（野生动物的现状及其原因）
So we must take measures to protect them.We should raise our awareness of animal protection.Besides，let's make every effort to protect animals' living environment.（发出号召）
I hope we can live in harmony with animals.Let's take action.（表达希望）
That's all.Thanks for your listening.（结束语）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
5．在你校网络安全月即将到来之际，校英文报正在征集相关稿件。请你就网络安全话题投稿，具体内容包括：
1.网络安全的重要性；
2.安全上网的具体建议；
3.号召大家重视网络安全。
注意
1.词数80左右；
2.题目已给出，不计入总词数。
Staying Safe on the Internet
________________
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
Staying Safe on the Internet
With the internet around us，we can get in touch with each other much easier.However，it has brought to us dangers as well.So it is very important to stay safe on the internet.Here are some tips I'd like to share.
First，make sure you have privacy setting fully enabled，which will guard against your personal information from being stolen.Then，avoid questionable websites.In this way you can keep away from information that makes you uncomfortable.
Online safety has become a matter of great concern.Let's think before click.
【分析】高分句型一：First，make sure you have privacy setting fully enabled，which will guard against your personal information from being stolen.
翻译：首先，确保您完全启用了隐私设置，这将防止您的个人信息被盗。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：In this way you can keep away from information that makes you uncomfortable.
翻译：这样你就可以远离那些让你不舒服的信息。
分析：本句使用了that引导的定语从句。
【解答】
Staying Safe on the Internet
With the internet around us，we can get in touch with each other much easier.However，it has brought to us dangers as well.So it is very important to stay safe on the internet.Here are some tips I'd like to share.（点明主题）
First，make sure you have privacy setting fully enabled，which will guard against your personal information from being stolen.【高分句型一】Then，avoid questionable websites.In this way you can keep away from information that makes you uncomfortable.【高分句型二】（具体建议）
Online safety has become a matter of great concern.Let's think before click.（呼吁）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择："长江之行"或者"泰山之旅"。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jim，
I'm happy receive to your letter and know you're coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai，both are highly recommended.Personally，I prefer the your along the Yangtze，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover，the scenery along the river is amazing，with many well﹣known sightseeing spots.That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you'll have a good time in China.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Personally，I prefer the your along the Yangtze，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.
翻译：就我个人而言，我更喜欢长江这条最长的河流，也是中华文明的母亲河之一。
分析：本句使用了名词短语the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization作the Yangtze的同位语。
高分句型二：That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
翻译：这就是为什么我认为沿着长江之行将是一个更好的选择。
分析：本句使用了why引导的定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm happy receive to your letter and know you're coming to China.（表达欣喜）
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai，both are highly recommended.Personally，I prefer the your along the Yangtze，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.【高分句型一】（个人建议的线路）You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.（个人建议理由一）Moreover，the scenery along the river is amazing，with many well﹣known sightseeing spots.That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.【高分句型二】（个人建议理由二）
Hope you'll have a good time in China.（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
7．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter参与策划校园"中国文化节"，来信请你推荐一些活动项目。现请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.活动项目名称；2.推荐理由；3.预祝活动成功。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jack，
Knowing that you are a member of designers of your school's Chinese Culture Festivals，I am more than glad to give you some tips on the performances.
First，it will be very attractive to prepare some special dishes of China，so your friends will know better about the culture of Chinese food.Besides，students and teachers dressed in their traditional costumes may also be a wonderful sight.What's the most important is that you'd better spare some areas for our Intangible Cultural Heritage，such as paper﹣cutting，flying kites，which must be amazing to all people present.
Hope everything goes well!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Knowing that you are a member of designers of your school's Chinese Culture Festivals，I am more than glad to give you some tips on the performances.
译文：知道你们是贵校中国文化节的设计师之一，我非常高兴能给你们一些关于表演的建议。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语Knowing that you are a member of designers of your school's Chinese Culture Festivals作状语。
高分句型二：What's the most important is that you'd better spare some areas for our Intangible Cultural Heritage，such as paper﹣cutting，flying kites，which must be amazing to all people present.
译文：最重要的是，你最好为我们的非物质文化遗产腾出一些地方，比如剪纸、放风筝，这对所有在场的人来说一定很神奇。
分析：这句话使用了what引导主语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jack，
Knowing that you are a member of designers of your school's Chinese Culture Festivals，I am more than glad to give you some tips on the performances.【高分句型一】（活动项目名称）
First，it will be very attractive to prepare some special dishes of China，so your friends will know better about the culture of Chinese food.Besides，students and teachers dressed in their traditional costumes may also be a wonderful sight.What's the most important is that you'd better spare some areas for our Intangible Cultural Heritage，such as paper﹣cutting，flying kites，which must be amazing to all people present.【高分句型二】（推荐理由）
Hope everything goes well!（预祝活动成功）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．假定你是李华，你校的英语社正在招募演讲比赛的主持人，你对此很感兴趣。请按要求用英文给英语社社长Tod写封邮件申请该职位。内容应包括：1.自我介绍；2.陈述个人优势；3.表达期望。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文；兴趣爱好．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Tod，
I'm Li Hua.Learning that you are recruiting a host for the speech contest，I'm writing to apply for it.I'm confident that I'm qualified for it.Firstly，I'm so keen on taking part in school activities.Besides，English is my strong point，and I once won the first prize of the English Host Competition in our school.
Furthermore，I do well in communicating with others.Given the opportunity to be the host，I will dig my potential to the fullest.
I hope you can take me into consideration.Look forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Learning that you are recruiting a host for the speech contest，I'm writing to apply for it.
翻译：得知你们正在招聘演讲比赛的主持人，我写信申请。
分析：learning现在分词作状语，recruit：招募。
高分句型二：Given the opportunity to be the host，I will dig my potential to the fullest.
翻译：如果有机会担任东道主，我会充分挖掘自己的潜力。
分析：运用非谓语动词作状语。
【解答】Dear Tod，
I'm Li Hua.Learning that you are recruiting a host for the speech contest，I'm writing to apply for it.【高分句型一】I'm confident that I'm qualified for it.（自我介绍）Firstly，I'm so keen on taking part in school activities.Besides，English is my strong point，and I once won the first prize of the English Host Competition in our school.
Furthermore，I do well in communicating with others.Given the opportunity to be the host，I will dig my potential to the fullest.【高分句型二】（个人优势）
I hope you can take me into consideration.Look forward to your early reply.（表达期望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，2021年12月9日你和同学一起观看了神舟十三号航天员太空授课，请你发送一封电子邮件给三位宇航员，内容包括：
（1）感谢宇航员们的精彩授课；
（2）观看太空授课后的收获和感想；
（3）祝愿宇航员凯旋归来。
注意：
（1）词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear astronauts，
I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School
________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear astronauts，
I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School.I'm writing to express my gratitude to you for your marvelous science lecture inside the space station on December 9，2021.
After watching the hour﹣long televised demonstrations，I have a better knowledge of space science.What's more，I'm more enthusiastic about our country's space exploration program.I'm so proud of our country's advances in science that I'm determined to be engaged in space industry and make contributions to our motherland.
Wish you a triumphant return.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：What's more，I'm more enthusiastic about our country's space exploration program.
翻译：更重要的是，我对我们国家的太空探索计划更有热情。
分析：运用了what's more的语篇衔接词。
高分句型二：I'm so proud of our country's advances in science that I'm determined to be engaged in space industry and make contributions to our motherland.
翻译：我为我们国家的科学进步感到骄傲，我决心从事航天事业，为祖国做出贡献。
分析：运用了so...that...的结果状语从句，意思是"如此……以至于……"。
【解答】Dear astronauts，
I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School.I'm writing to express my gratitude to you for your marvelous science lecture inside the space station on December 9，2021.（表达感谢）
After watching the hour﹣long televised demonstrations，I have a better knowledge of space science.What's more，I'm more enthusiastic about our country's space exploration program.【高分句型一】I'm so proud of our country's advances in science that I'm determined to be engaged in space industry and make contributions to our motherland.【高分句型二】（表达收获和感想）
Wish you a triumphant return.（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．假定你是李华，是你们班的班长。你们学校将于下个月举办英语戏剧节（The English Dram a Festival），你班将排演短剧Alice in Wonderland。请你根据以下要点给外教Susan写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）约定时间见面；
（2）请她给予指导；
（3）邀请她扮演一个角色；
（4）表达期待。
注意：
（1）词数 80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Susan，
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Susan，
I'm Li Hua.The English Drama Festival will be held in our school next month and I'm writing to ask a favor of you.
As you know，my classmates and I plan to put on a play named "Alice in Wonderland".We are wondering whether you could give us some advice to better our play.Could we meet up to talk about it this Friday afternoon if you are available？If possible，we'd like to invite you to play a role in it.With you taking part，our performance will be definitely more impressive.
I would highly appreciate it if you could offer your kind help .We can hardly wait to hear from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：We are wondering whether you could give us some advice to better our play.
翻译：我们想知道你能否给我们一些建议，让我们的演出更好。
分析：本句使用了whether引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：If possible，we'd like to invite you to play a role in it.
翻译：如果可能的话，我们想邀请你参与其中。
分析：本句使用了if引导的条件状语从句的省略。
【解答】Dear Susan，
I'm Li Hua.The English Drama Festival will be held in our school next month and I'm writing to ask a favor of you.（点明主题）
As you know，my classmates and I plan to put on a play named "Alice in Wonderland".We are wondering whether you could give us some advice to better our play.【高分句型一】（请她给予指导）Could we meet up to talk about it this Friday afternoon if you are available？（约定时间见面）If possible，we'd like to invite you to play a role in it.【高分句型二】With you taking part，our performance will be definitely more impressive.（邀请她扮演一个角色）
I would highly appreciate it if you could offer your kind help .We can hardly wait to hear from you.（表达期待）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
11．你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以值得尊敬和爱戴的一位残疾人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2.你爱戴他（她）的原因。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
A Disabled Person I Respect Most
There are many respectable disabled people in the world.
_______________
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
A Disabled Person I Respect Most
There are many respectable disabled people in the world.Among them I respect Stephen Hawking most.
As a physicist，he was famous for his groundbreaking work on black holes and relativity.He was also the author of the best﹣seller A Brief History of Time.However，he was in poor health condition，wheel﹣chair bound and speechless.Only when he turned to the computer was it possible for him to speak，read and write.It was his courage and persistence that inspired people across the world.
In my opinion，no one could match him in the contributions to science.He was a great scientist and a legend and his work and legacy will exert a powerful/profound influence on the world for a long time.
【分析】高分句型一
Only when he turned to the computer was it possible for him to speak，read and write.
翻译：只有当他求助于电脑时，他才可能说、读、写。
分析：句子里，Only位于句首，主句was it possible for him to speak，read and write用部分倒装。
高分句型二
It was his courage and persistence that inspired people across the world.
翻译：正是他的勇气和毅力鼓舞了全世界的人们。
分析：句子里，强调句式It was ....that强调主语his courage and persistence。
【解答】
A Disabled Person I Respect Most
There are many respectable disabled people in the world.Among them I respect Stephen Hawking most.（点明主题）
As a physicist，he was famous for his groundbreaking work on black holes and relativity.He was also the author of the best﹣seller A Brief History of Time.However，he was in poor health condition，wheel﹣chair bound and speechless.Only when he turned to the computer was it possible for him to speak，read and write.【高分句型一】It was his courage and persistence that inspired people across the world.【高分句型二】（人物简介）
In my opinion，no one could match him in the contributions to science.He was a great scientist and a legend and his work and legacy will exert a powerful/profound influence on the world for a long time.（爱戴他的原因）
【点评】写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全。通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲。
12．假定你是李华，你校将举办主题为"How to be a better self"的英语沙龙活动，请你为此准备一份发言稿，谈谈自己的看法。内容包括：
1.对a better self的理解；
2.具体做法。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Good morning，everyone!I feel delighted to share some of my views here.Being a better self，I think，means more than being excellent in study but being an all﹣round person.
To be a better self，we should recognize ourselves correctly by knowing our strengths and weaknesses.Then，based on self recognition，we need to take actions to enhance what we are good at and gain experience from our failures.It is also essential to improve our ability to communicate properly and address difficulties.
I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let's make changes from now on.Thank you!
【分析】高分句型一
Being a better self，I think，means more than being excellent in study but being an all﹣round person.
翻译：做一个更好的自己，我认为，不仅仅意味着学习优秀，而是成为一个全面的人。
分析：运用了动名词Being a better self做主语。
高分句型二
It is also essential to improve our ability to communicate properly and address difficulties.
翻译：提高我们的沟通能力和解决困难的能力也是必不可少的。
分析：运用了it做形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式to improve our ability。
【解答】Good morning，everyone!I feel delighted to share some of my views here.Being a better self，I think，means more than being excellent in study but being an all﹣round person.【高分句型一】（对a better self的理解）
To be a better self，we should recognize ourselves correctly by knowing our strengths and weaknesses.Then，based on self recognition，we need to take actions to enhance what we are good at and gain experience from our failures.It is also essential to improve our ability to communicate properly and address difficulties.【高分句型二】（具体做法）
I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let's make changes from now on.Thank you!（个人观点）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
13．新学期，你校将继续开展为期三个月的英语名著阅读（classic works reading）活动。假如你是校学生会主席，请你为校英文报写一份倡议书，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.活动要求。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates，
____________________________________________
The Students' Union
【考点】提纲作文；倡议书．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear schoolmates，
Our school is to organize the classic reading activity next term in order to improve our English and get more students interested in English.I'm writing to call on all of you to participate in it actively.
During the activity lasting for about three months，each participant should choose one classic from the list which has been post on our school website.After your reading，please analyze the characters and plots and then write something about what you will have learned from it.Besides，we will hold a meeting to exchange our thoughts afterwards.
I sincerely hope it will benefit all of you.I would appreciate it if you will join in the activity.
The Students' Union
【分析】高分句型一
During the activity lasting for about three months，each participant should choose one classic from the list which has been post on our school website.
翻译：在为期约三个月的活动中，每个参与者都要从学校网站上公布的经典作品列表中选择一个。
分析：句子里，现在分词短语lasting for about three months作the activity的定语；关系词which引导定语从句has been post on our school website。
高分句型二
After your reading，please analyze the characters and plots and then write something about what you will have learned from it.
翻译：阅读后，请分析人物和情节，然后写一些你从中学到的东西。
分析：句子里，After引导时间状语从句your reading；关系词what引导宾语从句you will have learned from it。
【解答】Dear schoolmates，
Our school is to organize the classic reading activity next term in order to improve our English and get more students interested in English.I'm writing to call on all of you to participate in it actively.（活动目的）
During the activity lasting for about three months，each participant should choose one classic from the list which has been post on our school website.【高分句型一】After your reading，please analyze the characters and plots and then write something about what you will have learned from it.【高分句型二】Besides，we will hold a meeting to exchange our thoughts afterwards.（活动内容和要求）
I sincerely hope it will benefit all of you.I would appreciate it if you will join in the activity.（再次邀请）
The Students' Union
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
14．为了庆祝即将来临的新年，你校在元旦举办了迎新春品美食活动，受到广大师生的好评。你参加了活动并拍摄了vlog。请你以"An Unforgettable Festival"为题，为校刊的英语角写一篇短文，记述整个活动过程。
1.活动策划
2.活动内容
3.师生感受
注意：1.词数120字左右 2.可以适当增加细节
An Unforgettable Festival
_______________
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】An Unforgettable Festival
In order to celebrate the upcoming new year，our school had a food festival last Friday.
We students took an active part in the festival.First of all，each class worked as a team to prepare a wide range of food，such as Indian curries，Chinese fried rice，Japanese sushi and so on.Then，they set their stands on the playground to sell their food.Most of the guests are our classmates parents and teachers.All of them enjoyed the delicious food.After the festival，we posted a vlog on Weibo about this meaningful activity which was well﹣received on the Internet.
Not only did the guests enjoy the delicious food but the students also learned how hard it was to make money.What an unforgettable festival!
【分析】高分句型一：After the festival，we posted a vlog on Weibo about this meaningful activity which was well﹣received on the Internet.
译文：节日结束后，我们在微博上发布了一条关于这项有意义活动的视频博客，在互联网上广受欢迎。
分析：这句话使用which引导定语从句。
高分句型二：Not only did the guests enjoy the delicious food but the students also learned how hard it was to make money.
译文：客人们不仅享受了美味的食物，而且学生们也学会了挣钱有多难。
分析：这句话使用not only置于句首，后面用部分倒装。
【解答】An Unforgettable Festival
In order to celebrate the upcoming new year，our school had a food festival last Friday.（活动策划）We students took an active part in the festival.First of all，each class worked as a team to prepare a wide range of food，such as Indian curries，Chinese fried rice，Japanese sushi and so on.Then，they set their stands on the playground to sell their food.Most of the guests are our classmates parents and teachers.All of them enjoyed the delicious food.After the festival，we posted a vlog on Weibo about this meaningful activity which was well﹣received on the Internet.【高分句型一】（活动内容）Not only did the guests enjoy the delicious food but the students also learned how hard it was to make money.【高分句型二】What an unforgettable festival!（师生感受）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
15．为加强学生心理健康建设，你校正在组织以"How to deal with your anxiety"为主题的英语作文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.产生焦虑的原因；
2.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以增加适当细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文；身心健康．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear teachers and students，
Today I'm going to give you a speech about how to deal with your anxiety.
It is well known that when we are confused about something，we may feel anxious.Although we often feel anxious，we should find suitable ways to deal with anxiety.We should achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.Try to plan your spare time well.Don't lose heart at any time.You will make great progress through hard work.
It's a good idea to use different kinds of music to change moods.If you worry a lot，you can listen to classical music.You will feel relaxed.When having problems，we can ask people around us for help.It's not wise to keep our anxiety to ourselves.
【分析】高分句型一：Although we often feel anxious，we should find suitable ways to deal with anxiety.
译文：虽然我们经常感到焦虑，但我们应该找到适当的方法来应对焦虑。
分析：although引导让步状语从句。
高分句型二：If you worry a lot，you can listen to classical music.
译文：如果你很担心，你可以听古典音乐。
分析：这句话使用if引导条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear teachers and students，
Today I'm going to give you a speech about how to deal with your anxiety.（主题）
It is well known that when we are confused about something，we may feel anxious.Although we often feel anxious，we should find suitable ways to deal with anxiety. 【高分句型一】We should achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.Try to plan your spare time well.Don't lose heart at any time.You will make great progress through hard work.（产生焦虑的原因）
It's a good idea to use different kinds of music to change moods.If you worry a lot，you can listen to classical music.【高分句型二】You will feel relaxed.When having problems，we can ask people around us for help.It's not wise to keep our anxiety to ourselves.（你的建议）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
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一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假如你是学生会主席李华，校学生会将举行"唐诗吟诵大赛"（ Tang Poetry Recitation Contest），以此弘扬中国传统文化，特邀学校国外交换生参加，请你根据提示写一则书面通知，主要内容包括：
1.大赛的目的和意义；
2.时间和地点（校礼堂）；
3.欢迎国外交换生报名参加。
注意：
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2．假设你是李华，你们学校正在举办Embrace Chinese Culture（拥抱中华文化）主题活动，其中"汉服展览"活动将于本周进行，请写一封email邀请你们的外教Jim参加。内容包括：
1.简单介绍汉服；
2.展览的时间和地点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
_________
Yours，
Li Hua
3．你校将举行以"善待野生动物，实现和谐共处"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.野生动物的重要性；
2.野生动物的现状及其原因；
3.发出号召。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
4．你校将举行以"善待野生动物，实现和谐共处"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.野生动物的重要性；
2.野生动物的现状及其原因；
3.发出号召。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good afternoon，everyone!
_____________
That's all.Thanks for your listening.
5．在你校网络安全月即将到来之际，校英文报正在征集相关稿件。请你就网络安全话题投稿，具体内容包括：
1.网络安全的重要性；
2.安全上网的具体建议；
3.号召大家重视网络安全。
注意
1.词数80左右；
2.题目已给出，不计入总词数。
Staying Safe on the Internet
________________
6．你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择："长江之行"或者"泰山之旅"。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
7．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter参与策划校园"中国文化节"，来信请你推荐一些活动项目。现请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.活动项目名称；2.推荐理由；3.预祝活动成功。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
8．假定你是李华，你校的英语社正在招募演讲比赛的主持人，你对此很感兴趣。请按要求用英文给英语社社长Tod写封邮件申请该职位。内容应包括：1.自我介绍；2.陈述个人优势；3.表达期望。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
9．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，2021年12月9日你和同学一起观看了神舟十三号航天员太空授课，请你发送一封电子邮件给三位宇航员，内容包括：
（1）感谢宇航员们的精彩授课；
（2）观看太空授课后的收获和感想；
（3）祝愿宇航员凯旋归来。
注意：
（1）词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear astronauts，
I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School
________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，是你们班的班长。你们学校将于下个月举办英语戏剧节（The English Dram a Festival），你班将排演短剧Alice in Wonderland。请你根据以下要点给外教Susan写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）约定时间见面；
（2）请她给予指导；
（3）邀请她扮演一个角色；
（4）表达期待。
注意：
（1）词数 80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Susan，
Yours，
Li Hua
11．你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以值得尊敬和爱戴的一位残疾人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2.你爱戴他（她）的原因。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
A Disabled Person I Respect Most
There are many respectable disabled people in the world.
_______________
12．假定你是李华，你校将举办主题为"How to be a better self"的英语沙龙活动，请你为此准备一份发言稿，谈谈自己的看法。内容包括：
1.对a better self的理解；
2.具体做法。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
13．新学期，你校将继续开展为期三个月的英语名著阅读（classic works reading）活动。假如你是校学生会主席，请你为校英文报写一份倡议书，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.活动要求。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates，
____________________________________________
The Students' Union
14．为了庆祝即将来临的新年，你校在元旦举办了迎新春品美食活动，受到广大师生的好评。你参加了活动并拍摄了vlog。请你以"An Unforgettable Festival"为题，为校刊的英语角写一篇短文，记述整个活动过程。
1.活动策划
2.活动内容
3.师生感受
注意：1.词数120字左右 2.可以适当增加细节
An Unforgettable Festival
_______________
15．为加强学生心理健康建设，你校正在组织以"How to deal with your anxiety"为主题的英语作文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.产生焦虑的原因；
2.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以增加适当细节，以使行文连贯。
期末专项培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假如你是学生会主席李华，校学生会将举行"唐诗吟诵大赛"（ Tang Poetry Recitation Contest），以此弘扬中国传统文化，特邀学校国外交换生参加，请你根据提示写一则书面通知，主要内容包括：
1.大赛的目的和意义；
2.时间和地点（校礼堂）；
3.欢迎国外交换生报名参加。
注意：
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文；传统文化；通知类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Notice
Do you want to have a further knowledge of traditional Chinese culture？Here comes your opportunity一the Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest.Below is some detailed information you need to know.
As scheduled，the contest is to be held next Friday from 8：30﹣11：30 by the students' union.Above all，it is essential that you get fully prepared before the contest.Therefore，you're strongly recommended to read Three Hundred Tang Poems thoroughly and learn to appreciate the beauty of traditional Chinese poetry.Whoever feels interested and has a passion for it can sign up at the school auditorium before this Sunday.Don't miss the chance of being a winner，and some appealing prizes are eagerly waiting for you.
Don't hesitate to take part!Hope you will benefit a lot and make much progress in your Chinese.
The School Students' Union
【分析】高分句型一：Below is some detailed information you need to know.
译文：下面是一些你需要知道的详细信息。
分析：这句话使用倒装句，you need to know是定语从句修饰information。
高分句型二：Whoever feels interested and has a passion for it can sign up at the school auditorium before this Sunday.
译文：任何对它感兴趣并有热情的人可以在本周日之前到学校礼堂报名。
分析：这句话使用whoever引导主语从句。
【解答】Notice
Do you want to have a further knowledge of traditional Chinese culture？Here comes your opportunity一the Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest.Below is some detailed information you need to know. 【高分句型一】（目的和意义）
As scheduled，the contest is to be held next Friday from 8：30﹣11：30 by the students' union.（时间） Above all，it is essential that you get fully prepared before the contest.Therefore，you're strongly recommended to read Three Hundred Tang Poems thoroughly and learn to appreciate the beauty of traditional Chinese poetry. （范围）Whoever feels interested and has a passion for it can sign up at the school auditorium before this Sunday. 【高分句型二】（地点）Don't miss the chance of being a winner，and some appealing prizes are eagerly waiting for you. （邀请参加）
Don't hesitate to take part!Hope you will benefit a lot and make much progress in your Chinese.（希望）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
2．假设你是李华，你们学校正在举办Embrace Chinese Culture（拥抱中华文化）主题活动，其中"汉服展览"活动将于本周进行，请写一封email邀请你们的外教Jim参加。内容包括：
1.简单介绍汉服；
2.展览的时间和地点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
_________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jim，
I have good news for you.A Hanfu Exhibition is to be held this Friday.I know you are pretty interested in Chinese culture，especially traditional clothes.Hanfu，which literally means "Han clothing"，has been around in China for 3，000 years，and now is increasingly popular.It is believed to be a symbol of Chinese culture.
If it is convenient，don't miss this great chance.The School Reception Hall will provide a feast for the eye，where you can enjoy a variety of Hanfu from 3 p.m.to 5 p.m.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Hanfu，which literally means "Han clothing"，has been around in China for 3，000 years，and now is increasingly popular.
翻译：汉服，字面意思是"汉朝的服装"，在中国已经有3000年的历史，现在越来越流行。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：The School Reception Hall will provide a feast for the eye，where you can enjoy a variety of Hanfu from 3 p.m.to 5 p.m.
翻译：学校接待厅将为您提供一场赏心悦目的盛宴，下午3点至5点，您可以在这里欣赏各种汉服。
分析：本句使用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I have good news for you.A Hanfu Exhibition is to be held this Friday.（写信目的）I know you are pretty interested in Chinese culture，especially traditional clothes.Hanfu，which literally means "Han clothing"，has been around in China for 3，000 years，and now is increasingly popular.【高分句型一】It is believed to be a symbol of Chinese culture.（简单介绍汉服）
If it is convenient，don't miss this great chance.The School Reception Hall will provide a feast for the eye，where you can enjoy a variety of Hanfu from 3 p.m.to 5 p.m.【高分句型二】（汉服展览的时间和地点）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
3．你校将举行以"善待野生动物，实现和谐共处"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.野生动物的重要性；
2.野生动物的现状及其原因；
3.发出号召。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Good afternoon，everyone!
What is known to all is that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.Unfortunately，many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction.The reasons are various.On the one hand，the environment that they are living in has been greatly destroyed.On the other hand，they are being over hunted.
So we must take measures to protect them.We should raise our awareness of animal protection.Besides，let's make every effort to protect animals' living environment.
I hope we can live in harmony with animals.Let's take action.
That's all.Thanks for your listening.
【分析】高分句型一：What is known to all is that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.
翻译：众所周知，所有的动物都在保持自然的平衡中发挥着作用。
分析：句中运用了what引导主语从句，that引导表语从句。
高分句型二：On one hand，the environment that they are living in has been greatly destroyed.
翻译：一方面，他们生活的环境遭到了极大的破坏。
分析：句中运用了that引导定语从句。
【解答】Good afternoon，everyone!
What is known to all is that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.【高分句型一】（野生动物的重要性）Unfortunately，many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction.The reasons are various.On the one hand，the environment that they are living in has been greatly destroyed.【高分句型二】On the other hand，they are being over hunted.（野生动物的现状及其原因）
So we must take measures to protect them.We should raise our awareness of animal protection.Besides，let's make every effort to protect animals' living environment.
I hope we can live in harmony with animals.Let's take action.（发出号召）
That's all.Thanks for your listening.
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．你校将举行以"善待野生动物，实现和谐共处"为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.野生动物的重要性；
2.野生动物的现状及其原因；
3.发出号召。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good afternoon，everyone!
_____________
That's all.Thanks for your listening.
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Good afternoon，everyone!
It is known to all that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.Unfortunately，many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction.The reasons are various.On one hand，the environment that they are living in has been greatly destroyed.On the other hand，they are being over hunted.
So we must take measures to protect them.We should raise our awareness of animal protection.Besides，let's make every effort to protect animals' living environment.
I hope we can live in harmony with animals.Let's take action.
That's all.Thanks for your listening.
【分析】高分句型一
It is known to all that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.
分析：句子里，It作形式主语，代指that引导的主语从句all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature。
翻译：众所周知，所有的动物都在保持自然平衡中发挥作用。
高分句型二
On one hand，the environment that they are living in has been greatly destroyed.
分析：句子里，代指先行词the environment，关系词that引导定语从句they are living。
翻译：一方面，他们生活的环境遭到了极大的破坏。
【解答】Good afternoon，everyone!
It is known to all that all the animals play a part in keeping the balance of nature.【高分句型一】（野生动物的重要性）Unfortunately，many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction.The reasons are various.On one hand，the environment that they are living in has been greatly destroyed.【高分句型二】On the other hand，they are being over hunted.（野生动物的现状及其原因）
So we must take measures to protect them.We should raise our awareness of animal protection.Besides，let's make every effort to protect animals' living environment.（发出号召）
I hope we can live in harmony with animals.Let's take action.（表达希望）
That's all.Thanks for your listening.（结束语）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
5．在你校网络安全月即将到来之际，校英文报正在征集相关稿件。请你就网络安全话题投稿，具体内容包括：
1.网络安全的重要性；
2.安全上网的具体建议；
3.号召大家重视网络安全。
注意
1.词数80左右；
2.题目已给出，不计入总词数。
Staying Safe on the Internet
________________
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
Staying Safe on the Internet
With the internet around us，we can get in touch with each other much easier.However，it has brought to us dangers as well.So it is very important to stay safe on the internet.Here are some tips I'd like to share.
First，make sure you have privacy setting fully enabled，which will guard against your personal information from being stolen.Then，avoid questionable websites.In this way you can keep away from information that makes you uncomfortable.
Online safety has become a matter of great concern.Let's think before click.
【分析】高分句型一：First，make sure you have privacy setting fully enabled，which will guard against your personal information from being stolen.
翻译：首先，确保您完全启用了隐私设置，这将防止您的个人信息被盗。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：In this way you can keep away from information that makes you uncomfortable.
翻译：这样你就可以远离那些让你不舒服的信息。
分析：本句使用了that引导的定语从句。
【解答】
Staying Safe on the Internet
With the internet around us，we can get in touch with each other much easier.However，it has brought to us dangers as well.So it is very important to stay safe on the internet.Here are some tips I'd like to share.（点明主题）
First，make sure you have privacy setting fully enabled，which will guard against your personal information from being stolen.【高分句型一】Then，avoid questionable websites.In this way you can keep away from information that makes you uncomfortable.【高分句型二】（具体建议）
Online safety has become a matter of great concern.Let's think before click.（呼吁）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择："长江之行"或者"泰山之旅"。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路；
2.你的理由；
3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jim，
I'm happy receive to your letter and know you're coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai，both are highly recommended.Personally，I prefer the your along the Yangtze，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover，the scenery along the river is amazing，with many well﹣known sightseeing spots.That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you'll have a good time in China.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Personally，I prefer the your along the Yangtze，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.
翻译：就我个人而言，我更喜欢长江这条最长的河流，也是中华文明的母亲河之一。
分析：本句使用了名词短语the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization作the Yangtze的同位语。
高分句型二：That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
翻译：这就是为什么我认为沿着长江之行将是一个更好的选择。
分析：本句使用了why引导的定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm happy receive to your letter and know you're coming to China.（表达欣喜）
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai，both are highly recommended.Personally，I prefer the your along the Yangtze，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.【高分句型一】（个人建议的线路）You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.（个人建议理由一）Moreover，the scenery along the river is amazing，with many well﹣known sightseeing spots.That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.【高分句型二】（个人建议理由二）
Hope you'll have a good time in China.（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
7．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter参与策划校园"中国文化节"，来信请你推荐一些活动项目。现请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.活动项目名称；2.推荐理由；3.预祝活动成功。
注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jack，
Knowing that you are a member of designers of your school's Chinese Culture Festivals，I am more than glad to give you some tips on the performances.
First，it will be very attractive to prepare some special dishes of China，so your friends will know better about the culture of Chinese food.Besides，students and teachers dressed in their traditional costumes may also be a wonderful sight.What's the most important is that you'd better spare some areas for our Intangible Cultural Heritage，such as paper﹣cutting，flying kites，which must be amazing to all people present.
Hope everything goes well!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Knowing that you are a member of designers of your school's Chinese Culture Festivals，I am more than glad to give you some tips on the performances.
译文：知道你们是贵校中国文化节的设计师之一，我非常高兴能给你们一些关于表演的建议。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语Knowing that you are a member of designers of your school's Chinese Culture Festivals作状语。
高分句型二：What's the most important is that you'd better spare some areas for our Intangible Cultural Heritage，such as paper﹣cutting，flying kites，which must be amazing to all people present.
译文：最重要的是，你最好为我们的非物质文化遗产腾出一些地方，比如剪纸、放风筝，这对所有在场的人来说一定很神奇。
分析：这句话使用了what引导主语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Jack，
Knowing that you are a member of designers of your school's Chinese Culture Festivals，I am more than glad to give you some tips on the performances.【高分句型一】（活动项目名称）
First，it will be very attractive to prepare some special dishes of China，so your friends will know better about the culture of Chinese food.Besides，students and teachers dressed in their traditional costumes may also be a wonderful sight.What's the most important is that you'd better spare some areas for our Intangible Cultural Heritage，such as paper﹣cutting，flying kites，which must be amazing to all people present.【高分句型二】（推荐理由）
Hope everything goes well!（预祝活动成功）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
8．假定你是李华，你校的英语社正在招募演讲比赛的主持人，你对此很感兴趣。请按要求用英文给英语社社长Tod写封邮件申请该职位。内容应包括：1.自我介绍；2.陈述个人优势；3.表达期望。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文；兴趣爱好．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Tod，
I'm Li Hua.Learning that you are recruiting a host for the speech contest，I'm writing to apply for it.I'm confident that I'm qualified for it.Firstly，I'm so keen on taking part in school activities.Besides，English is my strong point，and I once won the first prize of the English Host Competition in our school.
Furthermore，I do well in communicating with others.Given the opportunity to be the host，I will dig my potential to the fullest.
I hope you can take me into consideration.Look forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Learning that you are recruiting a host for the speech contest，I'm writing to apply for it.
翻译：得知你们正在招聘演讲比赛的主持人，我写信申请。
分析：learning现在分词作状语，recruit：招募。
高分句型二：Given the opportunity to be the host，I will dig my potential to the fullest.
翻译：如果有机会担任东道主，我会充分挖掘自己的潜力。
分析：运用非谓语动词作状语。
【解答】Dear Tod，
I'm Li Hua.Learning that you are recruiting a host for the speech contest，I'm writing to apply for it.【高分句型一】I'm confident that I'm qualified for it.（自我介绍）Firstly，I'm so keen on taking part in school activities.Besides，English is my strong point，and I once won the first prize of the English Host Competition in our school.
Furthermore，I do well in communicating with others.Given the opportunity to be the host，I will dig my potential to the fullest.【高分句型二】（个人优势）
I hope you can take me into consideration.Look forward to your early reply.（表达期望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，2021年12月9日你和同学一起观看了神舟十三号航天员太空授课，请你发送一封电子邮件给三位宇航员，内容包括：
（1）感谢宇航员们的精彩授课；
（2）观看太空授课后的收获和感想；
（3）祝愿宇航员凯旋归来。
注意：
（1）词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear astronauts，
I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School
________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear astronauts，
I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School.I'm writing to express my gratitude to you for your marvelous science lecture inside the space station on December 9，2021.
After watching the hour﹣long televised demonstrations，I have a better knowledge of space science.What's more，I'm more enthusiastic about our country's space exploration program.I'm so proud of our country's advances in science that I'm determined to be engaged in space industry and make contributions to our motherland.
Wish you a triumphant return.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：What's more，I'm more enthusiastic about our country's space exploration program.
翻译：更重要的是，我对我们国家的太空探索计划更有热情。
分析：运用了what's more的语篇衔接词。
高分句型二：I'm so proud of our country's advances in science that I'm determined to be engaged in space industry and make contributions to our motherland.
翻译：我为我们国家的科学进步感到骄傲，我决心从事航天事业，为祖国做出贡献。
分析：运用了so...that...的结果状语从句，意思是"如此……以至于……"。
【解答】Dear astronauts，
I'm Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School.I'm writing to express my gratitude to you for your marvelous science lecture inside the space station on December 9，2021.（表达感谢）
After watching the hour﹣long televised demonstrations，I have a better knowledge of space science.What's more，I'm more enthusiastic about our country's space exploration program.【高分句型一】I'm so proud of our country's advances in science that I'm determined to be engaged in space industry and make contributions to our motherland.【高分句型二】（表达收获和感想）
Wish you a triumphant return.（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．假定你是李华，是你们班的班长。你们学校将于下个月举办英语戏剧节（The English Dram a Festival），你班将排演短剧Alice in Wonderland。请你根据以下要点给外教Susan写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
（1）约定时间见面；
（2）请她给予指导；
（3）邀请她扮演一个角色；
（4）表达期待。
注意：
（1）词数 80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Susan，
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Susan，
I'm Li Hua.The English Drama Festival will be held in our school next month and I'm writing to ask a favor of you.
As you know，my classmates and I plan to put on a play named "Alice in Wonderland".We are wondering whether you could give us some advice to better our play.Could we meet up to talk about it this Friday afternoon if you are available？If possible，we'd like to invite you to play a role in it.With you taking part，our performance will be definitely more impressive.
I would highly appreciate it if you could offer your kind help .We can hardly wait to hear from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：We are wondering whether you could give us some advice to better our play.
翻译：我们想知道你能否给我们一些建议，让我们的演出更好。
分析：本句使用了whether引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：If possible，we'd like to invite you to play a role in it.
翻译：如果可能的话，我们想邀请你参与其中。
分析：本句使用了if引导的条件状语从句的省略。
【解答】Dear Susan，
I'm Li Hua.The English Drama Festival will be held in our school next month and I'm writing to ask a favor of you.（点明主题）
As you know，my classmates and I plan to put on a play named "Alice in Wonderland".We are wondering whether you could give us some advice to better our play.【高分句型一】（请她给予指导）Could we meet up to talk about it this Friday afternoon if you are available？（约定时间见面）If possible，we'd like to invite you to play a role in it.【高分句型二】With you taking part，our performance will be definitely more impressive.（邀请她扮演一个角色）
I would highly appreciate it if you could offer your kind help .We can hardly wait to hear from you.（表达期待）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
11．你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以值得尊敬和爱戴的一位残疾人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2.你爱戴他（她）的原因。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
A Disabled Person I Respect Most
There are many respectable disabled people in the world.
_______________
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】
A Disabled Person I Respect Most
There are many respectable disabled people in the world.Among them I respect Stephen Hawking most.
As a physicist，he was famous for his groundbreaking work on black holes and relativity.He was also the author of the best﹣seller A Brief History of Time.However，he was in poor health condition，wheel﹣chair bound and speechless.Only when he turned to the computer was it possible for him to speak，read and write.It was his courage and persistence that inspired people across the world.
In my opinion，no one could match him in the contributions to science.He was a great scientist and a legend and his work and legacy will exert a powerful/profound influence on the world for a long time.
【分析】高分句型一
Only when he turned to the computer was it possible for him to speak，read and write.
翻译：只有当他求助于电脑时，他才可能说、读、写。
分析：句子里，Only位于句首，主句was it possible for him to speak，read and write用部分倒装。
高分句型二
It was his courage and persistence that inspired people across the world.
翻译：正是他的勇气和毅力鼓舞了全世界的人们。
分析：句子里，强调句式It was ....that强调主语his courage and persistence。
【解答】
A Disabled Person I Respect Most
There are many respectable disabled people in the world.Among them I respect Stephen Hawking most.（点明主题）
As a physicist，he was famous for his groundbreaking work on black holes and relativity.He was also the author of the best﹣seller A Brief History of Time.However，he was in poor health condition，wheel﹣chair bound and speechless.Only when he turned to the computer was it possible for him to speak，read and write.【高分句型一】It was his courage and persistence that inspired people across the world.【高分句型二】（人物简介）
In my opinion，no one could match him in the contributions to science.He was a great scientist and a legend and his work and legacy will exert a powerful/profound influence on the world for a long time.（爱戴他的原因）
【点评】写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。不要任意发挥，画蛇添足，也不要丢三落四，要点不全。通过对众多提示或图画、图表的观察和分析，获取与写作内容有关的主要信息，并按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲。
12．假定你是李华，你校将举办主题为"How to be a better self"的英语沙龙活动，请你为此准备一份发言稿，谈谈自己的看法。内容包括：
1.对a better self的理解；
2.具体做法。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Good morning，everyone!I feel delighted to share some of my views here.Being a better self，I think，means more than being excellent in study but being an all﹣round person.
To be a better self，we should recognize ourselves correctly by knowing our strengths and weaknesses.Then，based on self recognition，we need to take actions to enhance what we are good at and gain experience from our failures.It is also essential to improve our ability to communicate properly and address difficulties.
I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let's make changes from now on.Thank you!
【分析】高分句型一
Being a better self，I think，means more than being excellent in study but being an all﹣round person.
翻译：做一个更好的自己，我认为，不仅仅意味着学习优秀，而是成为一个全面的人。
分析：运用了动名词Being a better self做主语。
高分句型二
It is also essential to improve our ability to communicate properly and address difficulties.
翻译：提高我们的沟通能力和解决困难的能力也是必不可少的。
分析：运用了it做形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式to improve our ability。
【解答】Good morning，everyone!I feel delighted to share some of my views here.Being a better self，I think，means more than being excellent in study but being an all﹣round person.【高分句型一】（对a better self的理解）
To be a better self，we should recognize ourselves correctly by knowing our strengths and weaknesses.Then，based on self recognition，we need to take actions to enhance what we are good at and gain experience from our failures.It is also essential to improve our ability to communicate properly and address difficulties.【高分句型二】（具体做法）
I strongly believe that a better self can definitely lead us to a better future and let's make changes from now on.Thank you!（个人观点）
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
13．新学期，你校将继续开展为期三个月的英语名著阅读（classic works reading）活动。假如你是校学生会主席，请你为校英文报写一份倡议书，内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.活动要求。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates，
____________________________________________
The Students' Union
【考点】提纲作文；倡议书．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear schoolmates，
Our school is to organize the classic reading activity next term in order to improve our English and get more students interested in English.I'm writing to call on all of you to participate in it actively.
During the activity lasting for about three months，each participant should choose one classic from the list which has been post on our school website.After your reading，please analyze the characters and plots and then write something about what you will have learned from it.Besides，we will hold a meeting to exchange our thoughts afterwards.
I sincerely hope it will benefit all of you.I would appreciate it if you will join in the activity.
The Students' Union
【分析】高分句型一
During the activity lasting for about three months，each participant should choose one classic from the list which has been post on our school website.
翻译：在为期约三个月的活动中，每个参与者都要从学校网站上公布的经典作品列表中选择一个。
分析：句子里，现在分词短语lasting for about three months作the activity的定语；关系词which引导定语从句has been post on our school website。
高分句型二
After your reading，please analyze the characters and plots and then write something about what you will have learned from it.
翻译：阅读后，请分析人物和情节，然后写一些你从中学到的东西。
分析：句子里，After引导时间状语从句your reading；关系词what引导宾语从句you will have learned from it。
【解答】Dear schoolmates，
Our school is to organize the classic reading activity next term in order to improve our English and get more students interested in English.I'm writing to call on all of you to participate in it actively.（活动目的）
During the activity lasting for about three months，each participant should choose one classic from the list which has been post on our school website.【高分句型一】After your reading，please analyze the characters and plots and then write something about what you will have learned from it.【高分句型二】Besides，we will hold a meeting to exchange our thoughts afterwards.（活动内容和要求）
I sincerely hope it will benefit all of you.I would appreciate it if you will join in the activity.（再次邀请）
The Students' Union
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
14．为了庆祝即将来临的新年，你校在元旦举办了迎新春品美食活动，受到广大师生的好评。你参加了活动并拍摄了vlog。请你以"An Unforgettable Festival"为题，为校刊的英语角写一篇短文，记述整个活动过程。
1.活动策划
2.活动内容
3.师生感受
注意：1.词数120字左右 2.可以适当增加细节
An Unforgettable Festival
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【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】An Unforgettable Festival
In order to celebrate the upcoming new year，our school had a food festival last Friday.
We students took an active part in the festival.First of all，each class worked as a team to prepare a wide range of food，such as Indian curries，Chinese fried rice，Japanese sushi and so on.Then，they set their stands on the playground to sell their food.Most of the guests are our classmates parents and teachers.All of them enjoyed the delicious food.After the festival，we posted a vlog on Weibo about this meaningful activity which was well﹣received on the Internet.
Not only did the guests enjoy the delicious food but the students also learned how hard it was to make money.What an unforgettable festival!
【分析】高分句型一：After the festival，we posted a vlog on Weibo about this meaningful activity which was well﹣received on the Internet.
译文：节日结束后，我们在微博上发布了一条关于这项有意义活动的视频博客，在互联网上广受欢迎。
分析：这句话使用which引导定语从句。
高分句型二：Not only did the guests enjoy the delicious food but the students also learned how hard it was to make money.
译文：客人们不仅享受了美味的食物，而且学生们也学会了挣钱有多难。
分析：这句话使用not only置于句首，后面用部分倒装。
【解答】An Unforgettable Festival
In order to celebrate the upcoming new year，our school had a food festival last Friday.（活动策划）We students took an active part in the festival.First of all，each class worked as a team to prepare a wide range of food，such as Indian curries，Chinese fried rice，Japanese sushi and so on.Then，they set their stands on the playground to sell their food.Most of the guests are our classmates parents and teachers.All of them enjoyed the delicious food.After the festival，we posted a vlog on Weibo about this meaningful activity which was well﹣received on the Internet.【高分句型一】（活动内容）Not only did the guests enjoy the delicious food but the students also learned how hard it was to make money.【高分句型二】What an unforgettable festival!（师生感受）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
15．为加强学生心理健康建设，你校正在组织以"How to deal with your anxiety"为主题的英语作文比赛。请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.产生焦虑的原因；
2.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以增加适当细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文；身心健康．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear teachers and students，
Today I'm going to give you a speech about how to deal with your anxiety.
It is well known that when we are confused about something，we may feel anxious.Although we often feel anxious，we should find suitable ways to deal with anxiety.We should achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.Try to plan your spare time well.Don't lose heart at any time.You will make great progress through hard work.
It's a good idea to use different kinds of music to change moods.If you worry a lot，you can listen to classical music.You will feel relaxed.When having problems，we can ask people around us for help.It's not wise to keep our anxiety to ourselves.
【分析】高分句型一：Although we often feel anxious，we should find suitable ways to deal with anxiety.
译文：虽然我们经常感到焦虑，但我们应该找到适当的方法来应对焦虑。
分析：although引导让步状语从句。
高分句型二：If you worry a lot，you can listen to classical music.
译文：如果你很担心，你可以听古典音乐。
分析：这句话使用if引导条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear teachers and students，
Today I'm going to give you a speech about how to deal with your anxiety.（主题）
It is well known that when we are confused about something，we may feel anxious.Although we often feel anxious，we should find suitable ways to deal with anxiety. 【高分句型一】We should achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.Try to plan your spare time well.Don't lose heart at any time.You will make great progress through hard work.（产生焦虑的原因）
It's a good idea to use different kinds of music to change moods.If you worry a lot，you can listen to classical music.【高分句型二】You will feel relaxed.When having problems，we can ask people around us for help.It's not wise to keep our anxiety to ourselves.（你的建议）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
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