【期末专项培优】应用文写作（含解析）2025-2026学年高二上学期英语期末必刷卷译林版（2019）
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末专项培优 应用文写作
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假如你是李华，打算在一个英语论坛发布帖子介绍你最喜欢的一位明星，内容包括：
1.人物介绍
2.喜欢他/她的原因
3.对人物的评价
要求：1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
可以借助下列句型成文：
1.When it comes to my favourite star，............comes to my mind.
2.It is generally believed that......
3.What impress me most is his/her......
4.In my opinion，......
My favourite star is
2．假定你是李华，正在加拿大渥太华学习。你计划暑假期间在当地旅行，请写一封e﹣mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。要点如下：
1.旅行信息（如景点等）；
2.当地特色（如食品等）；
3.注意事项。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in Ottawa.I'm writing to _________
Yours，
Li Hua
3． 世界科幻文学的国际最高奖项之一"2023年雨果奖"于21日晚揭晓，中国作家海漄凭借《时空画师》获得最佳短中篇小说奖。海漄擅长创作历史性科幻，代表作有《血灾》《龙骸》《走蛟》《尽化塔》《江之怒》等，此次获奖的《时空画师》采用推理小说的写法，据了解，海漄将最近几年很热的"在故宫修文物"的话题与中国传统文化、历史、推理、科幻相结合，讲述了一个精彩的故事。
据报道，《时空画师》描写的主要是北宋名画"千里江山图"创作的前因后果，也包括绘制这幅恢宏巨制的神秘少年画家背后的故事，最初的灵感来自南宋另一幅名画"骷髅幻戏图"。
假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom对这位天才少年十分好奇，希望你写一封信对他进行简单的介绍，内容包括：
（1）个人介绍；
（2）杰出贡献（例如：获得奖项）；
（3）对他的评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom，
______
Sincerely，
Lihua
4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Rebecca即将结束在中国的交换生学习回国。她喜欢中国传统文化，你在她临走前打算送一幅中国画作为礼物。请你写一封信向她告别。
要点如下：
（1）与她道别；
（2）介绍礼物（如绘画内容、意义等）；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Rebecca，
Yours.
Li Hua
5．假定你是高一学生李华，下周六晚6点至8点你校将在礼堂举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会。你的外籍老师Richard很喜欢音乐，请你写一封信邀请他参加此次活动。内容包括以下要点：
（1）发出邀请；（2）活动时间和地点；（3）活动内容和意义。
注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Richard，
I hope this letter finds you well.___________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
6．音乐在我们的生活中起着重要的作用，生活中不能缺少音乐。音乐可以帮助我们调节情绪：紧张的时候音乐可以使我们轻松，忧伤的时候音乐可以使我们快乐。请根据以上提示用英语写一篇主题为"the power of music"的演讲稿，谈谈音乐的重要性，可适当增加细节。
注意：1.词数80左右。
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning!My name is Lihua.
________
7．假设你是李华，三峡博物馆将在下月举办故宫文物展，你的朋友Andy非常热爱中国传统文化，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他一起参观。信的内容包括：
1.展览的时间、地点；
2.参观的注意事项。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：三峡博物馆the Three Gorges Museum；文物cultural relics：故宫the Forbidden City
Dear Andy，
_______.
Yours，
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter打算来中国旅游，希望你给他推荐一个去处。恰好你的家乡最近几年在大力发展乡村旅游，请你给他回一封电子邮件，向他推荐你的家乡。主要内容包括：
1.推荐理由；
2.特色简介；
3.交通情况。
注意：1.词数：100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
I'm so glad that you will come to China for a visit.
_______
Yours truly，
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，想邀请你校交换生Allen一同参观正在市艺术中心举办的以 My People，My Country 为主题的书法绘画展（calligraphy and painting exhibition）。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.参观目的；
2.参观内容；
3.约定时间。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
10．假如你是李华，正在美国参加一个交换项目，期间你加入了当地的musical society。这个社团正在网上分享最喜欢的音乐。请你发帖参与分享，描述你最喜欢的歌曲、乐曲或音乐形式，内容包括：
（1）该音乐的简介；
（2）听时你的感觉；
（3）对你的影响。
注意：
（1）词数80左右：
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Pete：Hey，everybody.What's your favorite piece of music？
Li Hua：
11．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来中国旅游，发来邮件请你推荐两个目的地城市。请你给他回复邮件，内包括：
1．推荐城市及理由；
2．其他建议。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
12．假定你是李华，下周你将去英国交换学习两个月，并打算在此期间游览英国风景名胜。请给你的英国网友Jack写封信，请他推荐一处景点，内容包括：
（1）表达问候；
（2）写信目的；
（3）期待回复。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
13．假定你是李华，是校音乐俱乐部的主席。你校交换生Peter申请该俱乐部的鼓手一职，请你代表俱乐部给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.申请没有通过；
2.解释原因。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
________________
Yours，
Li Hua
14．假定你是李华，你在美国纽约旅游期间受到了Mrs Smith的接待。请你写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：
1.告知安全返回；
2.感谢她的帮助；
3.表达美好愿望。
注意：词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs.Smith，
_______________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
15．假定你是李华，你打算元旦期间去上海旅游．请你给来自新西兰的交换生Terry 发邮件邀请他与你同游，内容包括；
1.邀请Terry 与你同游；
2.你的旅游计划（不少于2个景点）；
3.邀请理由。
Oriental Pearl Tower 东方明珠Yu Garden 豫园Nanjing Road 南京路
Shanghai Grand theatre 上海大剧院 Shanghai Museum 上海博物馆 Jing'an Temple 静安寺
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
Dear Terry，
__________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
期末专项培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假如你是李华，打算在一个英语论坛发布帖子介绍你最喜欢的一位明星，内容包括：
1.人物介绍
2.喜欢他/她的原因
3.对人物的评价
要求：1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
可以借助下列句型成文：
1.When it comes to my favourite star，............comes to my mind.
2.It is generally believed that......
3.What impress me most is his/her......
4.In my opinion，......
My favourite star is
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】My Favorite Star
My favorite star is Michael Jordan.
When it comes to my favourite star，Michael Jordan comes to my mind.He is a famous American professional basketball player.Born in 1963，Michael Jordan joined the NBA's Chicago Bull in 1984.He performed so well that he won numerous awards and honours during his professional career.It is generally believed that Michael Jordan has been regarded as the greatest basketball player of all time and named as one of the best athletes in the 20th century.
What impress me most is not only his excellent basketball skills but also his great sports spirits.In face of repeated failures，Michael Jordan never gave up.Instead，he worked harder until he achieved great success in the end.In my opinion，it is his positive attitudes，struggling spirit and determination that have always been inspiring us.
【分析】高分句型一
What impress me most is not only his excellent basketball skills but also his great sports spirits.
分析：本句使用了What引导的主语从句impress me most。
翻译：给我印象最深的不仅是他出色的篮球技术，还有他伟大的运动精神。
高分句型二
In my opinion，it is his positive attitudes，struggling spirit and determination that have always been inspiring us.
分析：句子里，强调句式it is...that强调句子的主语 his positive attitudes，struggling spirit and determination。
翻译：在我看来，正是他的积极态度、奋斗精神和决心一直激励着我们。
【解答】My Favorite Star
My favorite star is Michael Jordan.（点明自己喜欢的明星）
When it comes to my favourite star，Michael Jordan comes to my mind.He is a famous American professional basketball player.Born in 1963，Michael Jordan joined the NBA's Chicago Bull in 1984.He performed so well that he won numerous awards and honours during his professional career.（人物介绍）It is generally believed that Michael Jordan has been regarded as the greatest basketball player of all time and named as one of the best athletes in the 20th century.（喜欢他的原因）
What impress me most is not only his excellent basketball skills but also his great sports spirits.【高分句型一】In face of repeated failures，Michael Jordan never gave up.Instead，he worked harder until he achieved great success in the end.In my opinion，it is his positive attitudes，struggling spirit and determination that have always been inspiring us.【高分句型二】（对人物的评价）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
2．假定你是李华，正在加拿大渥太华学习。你计划暑假期间在当地旅行，请写一封e﹣mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。要点如下：
1.旅行信息（如景点等）；
2.当地特色（如食品等）；
3.注意事项。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in Ottawa.I'm writing to _________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通；书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in Ottawa.I'm writing to ask for information about your agency's Ottawa's travel for the winter vacation.
My friend and I plan to travel in the country.Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes？As we know，Ottawa is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these.What's more，I am also interested in the local food there.How much do I have to pay for the travel？At last，are there other things I should be aware of？
I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in Ottawa.
译文：我是李华，一名在渥太华学习的中国学生。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语作定语修饰a Chinese student。
高分句型二：As we know，Ottawa is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these.
译文：正如我们所知，渥太华以其美丽的风景和名胜古迹而闻名，我想知道更多关于这些的细节。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in Ottawa.【高分句型一】I'm writing to ask for information about your agency's Ottawa's travel for the winter vacation.（写信目的）
My friend and I plan to travel in the country.Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes？（旅行信息）As we know，Ottawa is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these.【高分句型二】（当地特色）What's more，I am also interested in the local food there.How much do I have to pay for the travel？At last，are there other things I should be aware of？（注意事项）
I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.（感谢）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
3． 世界科幻文学的国际最高奖项之一"2023年雨果奖"于21日晚揭晓，中国作家海漄凭借《时空画师》获得最佳短中篇小说奖。海漄擅长创作历史性科幻，代表作有《血灾》《龙骸》《走蛟》《尽化塔》《江之怒》等，此次获奖的《时空画师》采用推理小说的写法，据了解，海漄将最近几年很热的"在故宫修文物"的话题与中国传统文化、历史、推理、科幻相结合，讲述了一个精彩的故事。
据报道，《时空画师》描写的主要是北宋名画"千里江山图"创作的前因后果，也包括绘制这幅恢宏巨制的神秘少年画家背后的故事，最初的灵感来自南宋另一幅名画"骷髅幻戏图"。
假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom对这位天才少年十分好奇，希望你写一封信对他进行简单的介绍，内容包括：
（1）个人介绍；
（2）杰出贡献（例如：获得奖项）；
（3）对他的评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom，
______
Sincerely，
Lihua
【考点】提纲作文；传统文化；书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Tom，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for some information about the talented young writer Haiya.
Haiya is a Chinese writer who has won several awards in world science fiction literature，including the Hugo Award and the Nebula Award.He is good at writing historical science fiction.Some of his best﹣known works are The Flood，Dragon's Bones，The Flying Dragon and so on.His latest work， "Time and Space Painter"，which was awarded the Hugo Prize this year，is a combination of traditional Chinese culture，history，crime fiction and science fiction.It tells a wonderful story based on the creation of the famous painting "The Great Wall" during the Northern Song Dynasty.
In my opinion，Haiya is a talented writer who has made great contributions to the development of Chinese science fiction literature.I believe you will enjoy reading his books.
Sincerely，
Lihua
【分析】高分句型一：Haiya is a Chinese writer who has won several awards in world science fiction literature，including the Hugo Award and the Nebula Award.
翻译：海漄是一位中国作家，他在世界科幻文学中获得了多项奖项，包括雨果奖和星云奖。
分析：本句使用了who引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：His latest work， "Time and Space Painter"，which was awarded the Hugo Prize this year，is a combination of traditional Chinese culture，history，crime fiction and science fiction.
翻译：他的最新作品《时空画师》获得了今年的雨果奖，它融合了中国传统文化、历史、犯罪小说和科幻小说。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Tom，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for some information about the talented young writer Haiya.
Haiya is a Chinese writer who has won several awards in world science fiction literature，including the Hugo Award and the Nebula Award.【高分句型一】He is good at writing historical science fiction.（个人介绍）Some of his best﹣known works are The Flood，Dragon's Bones，The Flying Dragon and so on.His latest work， "Time and Space Painter"，which was awarded the Hugo Prize this year，is a combination of traditional Chinese culture，history，crime fiction and science fiction.【高分句型二】It tells a wonderful story based on the creation of the famous painting "The Great Wall" during the Northern Song Dynasty.（杰出贡献）
In my opinion，Haiya is a talented writer who has made great contributions to the development of Chinese science fiction literature.I believe you will enjoy reading his books.（对他的评价）
Sincerely，
Lihua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Rebecca即将结束在中国的交换生学习回国。她喜欢中国传统文化，你在她临走前打算送一幅中国画作为礼物。请你写一封信向她告别。
要点如下：
（1）与她道别；
（2）介绍礼物（如绘画内容、意义等）；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Rebecca，
Yours.
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；人际关系；书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Rebecca，
Knowing that you are heading back to Britain very soon，I hate to say that parting is truly hard.But I am delighted that you have enjoyed yourself here and grown attached to Chinese culture.
As a small token of appreciation，I picked a Chinese painting for you，on which is a pair of chopsticks.Spanning thousands of years，chopsticks are not only a kind of tableware with distinct national features，but also an important component that fully reflects the intelligence of Chinese people.They always come in a pair and look identical.As an ancient Chinese saying goes，good things come in pairs.Chopsticks embody the beauty of symmetry and harmony of relationships.
Hope you will like the little gift.Wish you a pleasant journey home.Keep in touch.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Knowing that you are heading back to Britain very soon，I hate to say that parting is truly hard.
翻译：知道你很快就要回英国了，我不得不说，离别真的很难。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语Knowing that you are heading back to Britain very soon作状语和that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：As a small token of appreciation，I picked a Chinese painting for you，on which is a pair of chopsticks.
翻译：作为小小的感谢，我挑了一幅中国画送给你，画上有一双筷子。
分析：本句运用了"介词+which"引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Rebecca，
Knowing that you are heading back to Britain very soon，I hate to say that parting is truly hard.【高分句型一】But I am delighted that you have enjoyed yourself here and grown attached to Chinese culture.（与她道别）
As a small token of appreciation，I picked a Chinese painting for you，on which is a pair of chopsticks.【高分句型二】Spanning thousands of years，chopsticks are not only a kind of tableware with distinct national features，but also an important component that fully reflects the intelligence of Chinese people.They always come in a pair and look identical.As an ancient Chinese saying goes，good things come in pairs.Chopsticks embody the beauty of symmetry and harmony of relationships.（介绍礼物）
Hope you will like the little gift.Wish you a pleasant journey home.Keep in touch.（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
5．假定你是高一学生李华，下周六晚6点至8点你校将在礼堂举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会。你的外籍老师Richard很喜欢音乐，请你写一封信邀请他参加此次活动。内容包括以下要点：
（1）发出邀请；（2）活动时间和地点；（3）活动内容和意义。
注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Richard，
I hope this letter finds you well.___________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Richard，
I hope this letter finds you well.Our school will hold a musical concert next Saturday.Knowing that you have great interest in music，I'm writing this letter to invite you to attend it.
The concert will be scheduled in our school hall from 6 p.m.to 8 p.m.next Saturday，lasting 2 hours.During this concert，not only can we appreciate classical folk songs of China and western countries，but we can also have a chance to listen to the music originally composed by gifted students as well.It is guaranteed that you will be deeply impressed by the combination of Chinese folk music with western musical instruments.
I am sure you will enjoy yourself and have fun.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Knowing that you have great interest in music，I'm writing this letter to invite you to attend it.
翻译：知道你对音乐很感兴趣，我写这封信邀请你参加。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Knowing that you have great interest in music作状语以及that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：It is guaranteed that you will be deeply impressed by the combination of Chinese folk music with western musical instruments.
翻译：中国民间音乐与西方乐器的结合一定会给你留下深刻的印象。
分析：句子中it作形式主语，真正的主语为that引导的主语从句。
【解答】Dear Richard，
I hope this letter finds you well.Our school will hold a musical concert next Saturday.Knowing that you have great interest in music，I'm writing this letter to invite you to attend it.【高分句型一】（发出邀请）
The concert will be scheduled in our school hall from 6 p.m.to 8 p.m.next Saturday，lasting 2 hours.（活动时间和地点）During this concert，not only can we appreciate classical folk songs of China and western countries，but we can also have a chance to listen to the music originally composed by gifted students as well.It is guaranteed that you will be deeply impressed by the combination of Chinese folk music with western musical instruments.【高分句型二】（活动内容和意义）
I am sure you will enjoy yourself and have fun.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．音乐在我们的生活中起着重要的作用，生活中不能缺少音乐。音乐可以帮助我们调节情绪：紧张的时候音乐可以使我们轻松，忧伤的时候音乐可以使我们快乐。请根据以上提示用英语写一篇主题为"the power of music"的演讲稿，谈谈音乐的重要性，可适当增加细节。
注意：1.词数80左右。
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning!My name is Lihua.
________
【考点】开放作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Good morning!My name is Li Hua.Today，I'd like to talk about the power of music.
Music is playing an important part in our life.Most of us are fond of music and listen to music regularly.In my opinion，music is very important.To start with，when I feel sad，music can comfort me then I can feel more confident about life and my problems.Also，when I have too much pressure with my schoolwork，music can make me feel relaxed.In addition，when I have some difficulty with sleep，some soft music can help me fall asleep easily.Finally，when I am in a state of worry，music can calm me down.
All in all，music is so important that life is a jourmey through a desert if there is no music in our life.
【分析】高分句型一：Also，when I have too much pressure with my schoolwork，music can make me feel relaxed.
译文：此外，当我的课业压力太大时，音乐会让我感到放松。
分析：这句话使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：All in all，music is so important that life is a journey through a desert if there is no music in our life.
译文：总之，音乐是如此重要，如果我们的生活中没有音乐，生活就是一场沙漠之旅。
分析：这句话使用了so+形容词+that引导的结果状语从句。
【解答】Good morning!My name is Li Hua.Today，I'd like to talk about the power of music.（话题）
Music is playing an important part in our life.Most of us are fond of music and listen to music regularly.In my opinion，music is very important.To start with，when I feel sad，music can comfort me then I can feel more confident about life and my problems.Also，when I have too much pressure with my schoolwork，music can make me feel relaxed. 【高分句型一】In addition，when I have some difficulty with sleep，some soft music can help me fall asleep easily.Finally，when I am in a state of worry，music can calm me down.（音乐的重要性）
All in all，music is so important that life is a jourmey through a desert if there is no music in our life.【高分句型二】（总结）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
7．假设你是李华，三峡博物馆将在下月举办故宫文物展，你的朋友Andy非常热爱中国传统文化，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他一起参观。信的内容包括：
1.展览的时间、地点；
2.参观的注意事项。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：三峡博物馆the Three Gorges Museum；文物cultural relics：故宫the Forbidden City
Dear Andy，
_______.
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；传统文化．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Andy，
Knowing you are enthusiastic about Chinese traditional culture，I am writing to invite you to attend an exhibition of cultural relics from the Forbidden City，which is scheduled next month in the Three Gorges Museum.
Many cultural relics，including ancient calligraphy works，paintings，books and porcelain vases will be on display，which are bound to cast light on Chinese ancient﹣culture.To show respect for our national treasure，food and drinks are not allowed while touring the museum.Moreover，flashes are prohibited when you are taking photos.
I am sure it will satisfy your insatiable desire for oriental beauty.Your earliest reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Knowing you are enthusiastic about Chinese traditional culture，I am writing to invite you to attend an exhibition of cultural relics from the Forbidden City，which is scheduled next month in the Three Gorges Museum.
分析：句子里，现在分词Knowing you are enthusiastic about Chinese traditional culture作原因状语；代指先行词 an exhibition of cultural relics from the Forbidden City，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句is scheduled next month in the Three Gorges Museum。
翻译：我知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣，所以写信邀请你参加下个月在三峡博物馆举行的故宫文物展。
高分句型二
To show respect for our national treasure，food and drinks are not allowed while touring the museum.
分析：句子里，动词不定式To show respect for our national treasure作目的状语。
翻译：为了表示对国宝的尊重，参观博物馆时不允许吃东西和喝饮料。
【解答】Dear Andy，
Knowing you are enthusiastic about Chinese traditional culture，I am writing to invite you to attend an exhibition of cultural relics from the Forbidden City，which is scheduled next month in the Three Gorges Museum. 【高分句型一】（展览的时间和地点）
Many cultural relics，including ancient calligraphy works，paintings，books and porcelain vases will be on display，which are bound to cast light on Chinese ancient﹣culture.To show respect for our national treasure，food and drinks are not allowed while touring the museum.【高分句型二】Moreover，flashes are prohibited when you are taking photos.（参观的注意事项）
I am sure it will satisfy your insatiable desire for oriental beauty.Your earliest reply will be highly appreciated.（期盼回复）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】先读提示，要点与格式要弄清；时态语态要当心，前后呼应要一致，结构搭配莫违背；文章写好细检查，点滴小错别忽视。学生在明确目的和掌握要领后，要严格按照规定的时间去完成作文训练任务。最后要检查（1）要点是否齐全，有无遗漏。（2）内容是否连贯，有无缺词。（3）语法是否正确，人称、时态、语态、名词单复数等有无错误。（4）用词是否得当，有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误。这里是考生熟悉的书信格式。
8．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter打算来中国旅游，希望你给他推荐一个去处。恰好你的家乡最近几年在大力发展乡村旅游，请你给他回一封电子邮件，向他推荐你的家乡。主要内容包括：
1.推荐理由；
2.特色简介；
3.交通情况。
注意：1.词数：100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
I'm so glad that you will come to China for a visit.
_______
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Peter，
I'm so glad that you will come to China for a visit.As you know，China is a large country abundant in tourism resources，many of which exist in the countryside.Here I'd like to advise you to pay a visit to my hometown.
My hometown is a beautiful village，where you can feast your eyes on its fascinating scenery.You can also go fishing，harvest fruits，and learn to make our traditional dishes.Moreover，you can experience some folk activities here，like Chinese paper cutting which helps you learn some Chinese culture.As for the transportation，far away from the city as our hometown is，it is situated close to the expressway.Therefore，the transportation is quite convenient.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：As you know，China is a large country abundant in tourism resources，many of which exist in the countryside.
翻译：如你所知，中国是一个旅游资源丰富的大国，许多旅游资源存在于农村。
分析：本句使用了many of which引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：As for the transportation，far away from the city as our hometown is，it is situated close to the expressway.
翻译：就交通而言，虽然我们的家乡远离城市，但它靠近高速公路。
分析：本句使用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm so glad that you will come to China for a visit.As you know，China is a large country abundant in tourism resources，many of which exist in the countryside.【高分句型一】Here I'd like to advise you to pay a visit to my hometown.（推荐理由）
My hometown is a beautiful village，where you can feast your eyes on its fascinating scenery.You can also go fishing，harvest fruits，and learn to make our traditional dishes.Moreover，you can experience some folk activities here，like Chinese paper cutting which helps you learn some Chinese culture.（特色简介） As for the transportation，far away from the city as our hometown is，it is situated close to the expressway.【高分句型二】Therefore，the transportation is quite convenient.（交通情况）
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．假定你是李华，想邀请你校交换生Allen一同参观正在市艺术中心举办的以 My People，My Country 为主题的书法绘画展（calligraphy and painting exhibition）。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.参观目的；
2.参观内容；
3.约定时间。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Allen，
Hearing that you are interested in Chinese culture，I'm writing to invite you to attend the calligraphy and painting exhibition being held in the Arts Centre of our city.
The show，whose theme is "My People，My Country"，displays a variety of classic paintings about the diligent Chinese people and their happy life，from which you can also learn about the big change and the rapid development of the country in recent years.Besides，some great calligraphy works from some well﹣known artists are included.I'm sure you will be very interested in them.
Will you be available on Saturday morning？I would like to pick you up at 8：30 a.m.at the school gate.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Hearing that you are interested in Chinese culture，I'm writing to invite you to attend the calligraphy and painting exhibition being held in the Arts Centre of our city.
翻译：听说你对中国文化感兴趣，我写信邀请你参加在我市艺术中心举办的书画展。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Hearing that you are interested in Chinese culture作原因状语。
高分句型二：The show，whose theme is "My People，My Country"，displays a variety of classic paintings about the diligent Chinese people and their happy life，from which you can also learn about the big change and the rapid development of the country in recent years.
翻译：这次展览的主题是"我的人民，我的国家"，展示了各种关于勤劳的中国人民和他们幸福生活的经典画作，从中你也可以了解到中国近年来的巨大变化和快速发展。
分析：本句使用了whose引导的定语从句以及介词from+which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Allen，
Hearing that you are interested in Chinese culture，I'm writing to invite you to attend the calligraphy and painting exhibition being held in the Arts Centre of our city.【高分句型一】（写信目的）
The show，whose theme is "My People，My Country"，displays a variety of classic paintings about the diligent Chinese people and their happy life，from which you can also learn about the big change and the rapid development of the country in recent years.【高分句型二】Besides，some great calligraphy works from some well﹣known artists are included.I'm sure you will be very interested in them.（参观内容）
Will you be available on Saturday morning？I would like to pick you up at 8：30 a.m.at the school gate.Looking forward to your early reply.（约定时间）
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．假如你是李华，正在美国参加一个交换项目，期间你加入了当地的musical society。这个社团正在网上分享最喜欢的音乐。请你发帖参与分享，描述你最喜欢的歌曲、乐曲或音乐形式，内容包括：
（1）该音乐的简介；
（2）听时你的感觉；
（3）对你的影响。
注意：
（1）词数80左右：
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Pete：Hey，everybody.What's your favorite piece of music？
Li Hua：
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Pete：Hey，everybody.What's your favorite piece of music？
Li Hua：My favorite piece of music is Chunjianghuayueye，or A Moonlit Night on the Spring River.It's a piece of traditional Chinese music played with Pipa，a traditional Chinese musical instrument looking a bit like a guitar.Every time I listen to the music，it feels as if a picture of a river is spreading before me.I can see the bright moon rising and shining，and the river water shining too.I can also feel the breeze blowing softly across my face.The classic piece has a comforting effect on me and I feel very proud of the traditional Chinese music.
【分析】高分句型一：It's a piece of traditional Chinese music played with Pipa，a traditional Chinese musical instrument looking a bit like a guitar.
译文：这是一首用琵琶演奏的中国传统音乐，琵琶是一种看起来有点像吉他的中国传统乐器。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语played with Pipa作定语，现在分词短语looking a bit like a guitar作定语。
高分句型二：Every time I listen to the music，it feels as if a picture of a river is spreading before me.
译文：每次我听音乐时，感觉就像一幅河流的图画在我面前展开。
分析：这句话使用了every time引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】Pete：Hey，everybody.What's your favorite piece of music？
Li Hua：My favorite piece of music is Chunjianghuayueye，or A Moonlit Night on the Spring River.It's a piece of traditional Chinese music played with Pipa，a traditional Chinese musical instrument looking a bit like a guitar. 【高分句型一】（该音乐的简介）Every time I listen to the music，it feels as if a picture of a river is spreading before me.【高分句型二】I can see the bright moon rising and shining，and the river water shining too.I can also feel the breeze blowing softly across my face. （听时你的感觉）The classic piece has a comforting effect on me and I feel very proud of the traditional Chinese music.（对你的影响）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
11．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来中国旅游，发来邮件请你推荐两个目的地城市。请你给他回复邮件，内包括：
1．推荐城市及理由；
2．其他建议。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jim，
Glad to know that you're coming to visit China this summer vacation.It's my pleasure to offer my recommendation.
You may begin from Beijing，our capital city，an ideal place to witness China's glorious past and ever changing present.It has the richest tourist resources with numerous historical sites and modern complexes.The second destination is Chengdu，a southwestern pearl，home to the cute giant pandas.It has ranked among the most livable cities in China for years，owing to its pleasant environment and leisure lifestyle.
There are various transportation and accommodation services available in both cities so you'd better check online and find the ones that suit you best.
Looking forward to your arrival and wish you a wonderful trip then.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It's my pleasure to offer my recommendation.
译文：很高兴向你推荐。
分析：这句话使用it作为形式主语，不定式内容是真正的主语。
高分句型二：There are various transportation and accommodation services available in both cities so you'd better check online and find the ones that suit you best.
译文：这两个城市都有各种交通和住宿服务，所以你最好上网查询，找到最适合你的。
分析：这句话使用so引导结果状语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
Glad to know that you're coming to visit China this summer vacation.It's my pleasure to offer my recommendation.【高分句型一】（写信目的）
You may begin from Beijing，our capital city，an ideal place to witness China's glorious past and ever changing present.It has the richest tourist resources with numerous historical sites and modern complexes.The second destination is Chengdu，a southwestern pearl，home to the cute giant pandas.It has ranked among the most livable cities in China for years，owing to its pleasant environment and leisure lifestyle.（推荐城市及理由）
There are various transportation and accommodation services available in both cities so you'd better check online and find the ones that suit you best.【高分句型二】（其它建议）
Looking forward to your arrival and wish you a wonderful trip then.（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
12．假定你是李华，下周你将去英国交换学习两个月，并打算在此期间游览英国风景名胜。请给你的英国网友Jack写封信，请他推荐一处景点，内容包括：
（1）表达问候；
（2）写信目的；
（3）期待回复。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jack，
It's a long time since we last emailed each other.Hope everything goes well with you.I will be living in England for two months as an exchange student，during which I plan to travel around.I'm writing to ask for your advice on the choice of tourist attractions in England.
As a developed country，England has much to offer tourists from around the world.I am particularly interested in mountain climbing.I know there are many mountains in your country，but I don't know which one is worth visiting.I wish you could recommend one to me.
I'd appreciate it if you could reply soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
I will be living in England for two months as an exchange student，during which I plan to travel around.
分析：句子里，介词during后的关系词which引导非限制性定语从句I plan to travel around。
翻译：我将作为交换生在英国生活两个月，期间我计划四处旅行。
高分句型二
I know there are many mountains in your country，but I don't know which one is worth visiting.
分析：句子里，宾语从句there are many mountains in your country省略了引导词that；which引导定语从句one is worth visiting。
翻译：我知道你们国家有很多山，但我不知道哪座山值得一游。
【解答】Dear Jack，
It's a long time since we last emailed each other.Hope everything goes well with you.（表达问候）I will be living in England for two months as an exchange student，during which I plan to travel around.【高分句型一】I'm writing to ask for your advice on the choice of tourist attractions in England.（写信目的）
As a developed country，England has much to offer tourists from around the world.I am particularly interested in mountain climbing.I know there are many mountains in your country，but I don't know which one is worth visiting.【高分句型二】I wish you could recommend one to me.（自己的问题）
I'd appreciate it if you could reply soon.（期待回复）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
13．假定你是李华，是校音乐俱乐部的主席。你校交换生Peter申请该俱乐部的鼓手一职，请你代表俱乐部给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.申请没有通过；
2.解释原因。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Peter，
Thank you for your interest in joining the Music Club.Unfortunately ，I regret to inform you that your application has been turned down because the club has already recruited enough drummers.
Considering that you are extremely expert in playing drum ，I highly recommend to you the School Drum Team，which also enjoys great popularity and is now recruiting new members.Hopefully，not only will the team provide an opportunity for you to work out regularly，but it will also offer you a glimpse of the development of our school.I'm sue you'll have great fun here.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Unfortunately ，I regret to inform you that your application has been turned down because the club has already recruited enough drummers.
翻译：不幸的是，我很遗憾地通知你，你的申请被拒绝了，因为俱乐部已经招募了足够多的鼓手。
分析：句子里，that引导宾语从句your application has been turned down；because引导原因状语从句the club has already recruited enough drummers。
高分句型二
Hopefully，not only will the team provide an opportunity for you to work out regularly，but it will also offer you a glimpse of the development of our school.
翻译：希望这个团队不仅能为你提供一个定期锻炼的机会，还能让你了解我们学校的发展。
分析：句子里，否定词not only位于句首，句子will the team provide an opportunity for you to work out regularly用部分倒装。
【解答】Dear Peter，
Thank you for your interest in joining the Music Club.Unfortunately ，I regret to inform you that your application has been turned down because the club has already recruited enough drummers. 【高分句型一】（申请没有通过并且解释原因）
Considering that you are extremely expert in playing drum ，I highly recommend to you the School Drum Team，which also enjoys great popularity and is now recruiting new members.Hopefully，not only will the team provide an opportunity for you to work out regularly，but it will also offer you a glimpse of the development of our school. 【高分句型二】I'm sue you'll have great fun here.（推荐去鼓乐队）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
14．假定你是李华，你在美国纽约旅游期间受到了Mrs Smith的接待。请你写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：
1.告知安全返回；
2.感谢她的帮助；
3.表达美好愿望。
注意：词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs.Smith，
_______________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mrs.Smith，
I've already returned to China safe and sound.Looking back to the wonderful time I spent in New York，USA，I just can't help thinking of you.I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you.
It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay such a happy and wonderful experience.When I was in a mess，you always offered me timely help，which turned every awkward moment into laughter.Thank you for all you've done for me.
I will cherish the merry memories for the rest of my life and I do wish you all the best and hope to return your kindness someday.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Looking back to the wonderful time I spent in New York，USA，I just can't help thinking of you.
翻译：回顾我在美国纽约度过的美好时光，我不禁想起了你。
分析：句子里，现在分词短语Looking back to the wonderful time I spent in New York，USA作时间状语。
高分句型二
When I was in a mess，you always offered me timely help，which turned every awkward moment into laughter.
翻译：当我陷入困境时，你总是给我及时的帮助，这让每一个尴尬的时刻都变成了笑声。
分析：句子里，When引导时间状语从句I was in a mess；which引导非限制性定语从句turned every awkward moment into laughter。
【解答】Dear Mrs.Smith，
I've already returned to China safe and sound.Looking back to the wonderful time I spent in New York，USA，I just can't help thinking of you.【高分句型一】I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you.（告知安全返回）
It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay such a happy and wonderful experience.When I was in a mess，you always offered me timely help，which turned every awkward moment into laughter.【高分句型二】Thank you for all you've done for me.（感谢她的帮助）
I will cherish the merry memories for the rest of my life and I do wish you all the best and hope to return your kindness someday.（表达美好愿望）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
15．假定你是李华，你打算元旦期间去上海旅游．请你给来自新西兰的交换生Terry 发邮件邀请他与你同游，内容包括；
1.邀请Terry 与你同游；
2.你的旅游计划（不少于2个景点）；
3.邀请理由。
Oriental Pearl Tower 东方明珠Yu Garden 豫园Nanjing Road 南京路
Shanghai Grand theatre 上海大剧院 Shanghai Museum 上海博物馆 Jing'an Temple 静安寺
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
Dear Terry，
__________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Terry，
How are you？I am writing to invite you to travel with me to Shanghai on the New Year's Day.
I plan to stay in Shanghai for one day.Apart from getting a bird's﹣eye view of the whole city from the Oriental Pearl Tower，I will visit the Nanjing Road where we can do some souvenir shopping and sample the local cuisine，which is good for both of us because you can appreciate the Chinese culture while I can practice spoken English.
Please think over my invitation and let me know your decision as soon as possible.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I am writing to invite you to travel with me to Shanghai on the New Year's Day.
翻译：我写信邀请你元旦和我一起去上海。
分析：本句使用了to do不定式to invite you to travel with me to Shanghai on the New Year's Day作目的状语。
高分句型二：Apart from getting a bird's﹣eye view of the whole city from the Oriental Pearl Tower，I will visit the Nanjing Road where we can do some souvenir shopping and sample the local cuisine，which is good for both of us because you can appreciate the Chinese culture while I can practice spoken English.
翻译：除了从东方明珠塔鸟瞰整个城市，我还将参观南京路，在那里我们可以做一些纪念品购物，品尝当地美食，这对我们双方都有好处，因为你可以欣赏中国文化，而我可以练习英语口语。
分析：本句使用了where引导的限制性定语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Terry，
How are you？I am writing to invite you to travel with me to Shanghai on the New Year's Day.【高分句型一】（邀请Terry同游）
I plan to stay in Shanghai for one day.Apart from getting a bird's﹣eye view of the whole city from the Oriental Pearl Tower，I will visit the Nanjing Road where we can do some souvenir shopping and sample the local cuisine，which is good for both of us because you can appreciate the Chinese culture while I can practice spoken English.【高分句型二】（个人旅游计划及邀请理由）
Please think over my invitation and let me know your decision as soon as possible.（期待回复）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假如你是李华，打算在一个英语论坛发布帖子介绍你最喜欢的一位明星，内容包括：
1.人物介绍
2.喜欢他/她的原因
3.对人物的评价
要求：1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
可以借助下列句型成文：
1.When it comes to my favourite star，............comes to my mind.
2.It is generally believed that......
3.What impress me most is his/her......
4.In my opinion，......
My favourite star is
2．假定你是李华，正在加拿大渥太华学习。你计划暑假期间在当地旅行，请写一封e﹣mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。要点如下：
1.旅行信息（如景点等）；
2.当地特色（如食品等）；
3.注意事项。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in Ottawa.I'm writing to _________
Yours，
Li Hua
3． 世界科幻文学的国际最高奖项之一"2023年雨果奖"于21日晚揭晓，中国作家海漄凭借《时空画师》获得最佳短中篇小说奖。海漄擅长创作历史性科幻，代表作有《血灾》《龙骸》《走蛟》《尽化塔》《江之怒》等，此次获奖的《时空画师》采用推理小说的写法，据了解，海漄将最近几年很热的"在故宫修文物"的话题与中国传统文化、历史、推理、科幻相结合，讲述了一个精彩的故事。
据报道，《时空画师》描写的主要是北宋名画"千里江山图"创作的前因后果，也包括绘制这幅恢宏巨制的神秘少年画家背后的故事，最初的灵感来自南宋另一幅名画"骷髅幻戏图"。
假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom对这位天才少年十分好奇，希望你写一封信对他进行简单的介绍，内容包括：
（1）个人介绍；
（2）杰出贡献（例如：获得奖项）；
（3）对他的评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom，
______
Sincerely，
Lihua
4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Rebecca即将结束在中国的交换生学习回国。她喜欢中国传统文化，你在她临走前打算送一幅中国画作为礼物。请你写一封信向她告别。
要点如下：
（1）与她道别；
（2）介绍礼物（如绘画内容、意义等）；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Rebecca，
Yours.
Li Hua
5．假定你是高一学生李华，下周六晚6点至8点你校将在礼堂举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会。你的外籍老师Richard很喜欢音乐，请你写一封信邀请他参加此次活动。内容包括以下要点：
（1）发出邀请；（2）活动时间和地点；（3）活动内容和意义。
注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Richard，
I hope this letter finds you well.___________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
6．音乐在我们的生活中起着重要的作用，生活中不能缺少音乐。音乐可以帮助我们调节情绪：紧张的时候音乐可以使我们轻松，忧伤的时候音乐可以使我们快乐。请根据以上提示用英语写一篇主题为"the power of music"的演讲稿，谈谈音乐的重要性，可适当增加细节。
注意：1.词数80左右。
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning!My name is Lihua.
________
7．假设你是李华，三峡博物馆将在下月举办故宫文物展，你的朋友Andy非常热爱中国传统文化，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他一起参观。信的内容包括：
1.展览的时间、地点；
2.参观的注意事项。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：三峡博物馆the Three Gorges Museum；文物cultural relics：故宫the Forbidden City
Dear Andy，
_______.
Yours，
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter打算来中国旅游，希望你给他推荐一个去处。恰好你的家乡最近几年在大力发展乡村旅游，请你给他回一封电子邮件，向他推荐你的家乡。主要内容包括：
1.推荐理由；
2.特色简介；
3.交通情况。
注意：1.词数：100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
I'm so glad that you will come to China for a visit.
_______
Yours truly，
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，想邀请你校交换生Allen一同参观正在市艺术中心举办的以 My People，My Country 为主题的书法绘画展（calligraphy and painting exhibition）。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.参观目的；
2.参观内容；
3.约定时间。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
10．假如你是李华，正在美国参加一个交换项目，期间你加入了当地的musical society。这个社团正在网上分享最喜欢的音乐。请你发帖参与分享，描述你最喜欢的歌曲、乐曲或音乐形式，内容包括：
（1）该音乐的简介；
（2）听时你的感觉；
（3）对你的影响。
注意：
（1）词数80左右：
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Pete：Hey，everybody.What's your favorite piece of music？
Li Hua：
11．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来中国旅游，发来邮件请你推荐两个目的地城市。请你给他回复邮件，内包括：
1．推荐城市及理由；
2．其他建议。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
12．假定你是李华，下周你将去英国交换学习两个月，并打算在此期间游览英国风景名胜。请给你的英国网友Jack写封信，请他推荐一处景点，内容包括：
（1）表达问候；
（2）写信目的；
（3）期待回复。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
13．假定你是李华，是校音乐俱乐部的主席。你校交换生Peter申请该俱乐部的鼓手一职，请你代表俱乐部给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.申请没有通过；
2.解释原因。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
________________
Yours，
Li Hua
14．假定你是李华，你在美国纽约旅游期间受到了Mrs Smith的接待。请你写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：
1.告知安全返回；
2.感谢她的帮助；
3.表达美好愿望。
注意：词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs.Smith，
_______________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
15．假定你是李华，你打算元旦期间去上海旅游．请你给来自新西兰的交换生Terry 发邮件邀请他与你同游，内容包括；
1.邀请Terry 与你同游；
2.你的旅游计划（不少于2个景点）；
3.邀请理由。
Oriental Pearl Tower 东方明珠Yu Garden 豫园Nanjing Road 南京路
Shanghai Grand theatre 上海大剧院 Shanghai Museum 上海博物馆 Jing'an Temple 静安寺
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
Dear Terry，
__________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
期末专项培优 应用文写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．假如你是李华，打算在一个英语论坛发布帖子介绍你最喜欢的一位明星，内容包括：
1.人物介绍
2.喜欢他/她的原因
3.对人物的评价
要求：1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
可以借助下列句型成文：
1.When it comes to my favourite star，............comes to my mind.
2.It is generally believed that......
3.What impress me most is his/her......
4.In my opinion，......
My favourite star is
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】My Favorite Star
My favorite star is Michael Jordan.
When it comes to my favourite star，Michael Jordan comes to my mind.He is a famous American professional basketball player.Born in 1963，Michael Jordan joined the NBA's Chicago Bull in 1984.He performed so well that he won numerous awards and honours during his professional career.It is generally believed that Michael Jordan has been regarded as the greatest basketball player of all time and named as one of the best athletes in the 20th century.
What impress me most is not only his excellent basketball skills but also his great sports spirits.In face of repeated failures，Michael Jordan never gave up.Instead，he worked harder until he achieved great success in the end.In my opinion，it is his positive attitudes，struggling spirit and determination that have always been inspiring us.
【分析】高分句型一
What impress me most is not only his excellent basketball skills but also his great sports spirits.
分析：本句使用了What引导的主语从句impress me most。
翻译：给我印象最深的不仅是他出色的篮球技术，还有他伟大的运动精神。
高分句型二
In my opinion，it is his positive attitudes，struggling spirit and determination that have always been inspiring us.
分析：句子里，强调句式it is...that强调句子的主语 his positive attitudes，struggling spirit and determination。
翻译：在我看来，正是他的积极态度、奋斗精神和决心一直激励着我们。
【解答】My Favorite Star
My favorite star is Michael Jordan.（点明自己喜欢的明星）
When it comes to my favourite star，Michael Jordan comes to my mind.He is a famous American professional basketball player.Born in 1963，Michael Jordan joined the NBA's Chicago Bull in 1984.He performed so well that he won numerous awards and honours during his professional career.（人物介绍）It is generally believed that Michael Jordan has been regarded as the greatest basketball player of all time and named as one of the best athletes in the 20th century.（喜欢他的原因）
What impress me most is not only his excellent basketball skills but also his great sports spirits.【高分句型一】In face of repeated failures，Michael Jordan never gave up.Instead，he worked harder until he achieved great success in the end.In my opinion，it is his positive attitudes，struggling spirit and determination that have always been inspiring us.【高分句型二】（对人物的评价）
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
2．假定你是李华，正在加拿大渥太华学习。你计划暑假期间在当地旅行，请写一封e﹣mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。要点如下：
1.旅行信息（如景点等）；
2.当地特色（如食品等）；
3.注意事项。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in Ottawa.I'm writing to _________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通；书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in Ottawa.I'm writing to ask for information about your agency's Ottawa's travel for the winter vacation.
My friend and I plan to travel in the country.Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes？As we know，Ottawa is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these.What's more，I am also interested in the local food there.How much do I have to pay for the travel？At last，are there other things I should be aware of？
I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in Ottawa.
译文：我是李华，一名在渥太华学习的中国学生。
分析：这句话使用了现在分词短语作定语修饰a Chinese student。
高分句型二：As we know，Ottawa is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these.
译文：正如我们所知，渥太华以其美丽的风景和名胜古迹而闻名，我想知道更多关于这些的细节。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in Ottawa.【高分句型一】I'm writing to ask for information about your agency's Ottawa's travel for the winter vacation.（写信目的）
My friend and I plan to travel in the country.Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes？（旅行信息）As we know，Ottawa is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these.【高分句型二】（当地特色）What's more，I am also interested in the local food there.How much do I have to pay for the travel？At last，are there other things I should be aware of？（注意事项）
I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.（感谢）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
3． 世界科幻文学的国际最高奖项之一"2023年雨果奖"于21日晚揭晓，中国作家海漄凭借《时空画师》获得最佳短中篇小说奖。海漄擅长创作历史性科幻，代表作有《血灾》《龙骸》《走蛟》《尽化塔》《江之怒》等，此次获奖的《时空画师》采用推理小说的写法，据了解，海漄将最近几年很热的"在故宫修文物"的话题与中国传统文化、历史、推理、科幻相结合，讲述了一个精彩的故事。
据报道，《时空画师》描写的主要是北宋名画"千里江山图"创作的前因后果，也包括绘制这幅恢宏巨制的神秘少年画家背后的故事，最初的灵感来自南宋另一幅名画"骷髅幻戏图"。
假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Tom对这位天才少年十分好奇，希望你写一封信对他进行简单的介绍，内容包括：
（1）个人介绍；
（2）杰出贡献（例如：获得奖项）；
（3）对他的评价。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom，
______
Sincerely，
Lihua
【考点】提纲作文；传统文化；书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Tom，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for some information about the talented young writer Haiya.
Haiya is a Chinese writer who has won several awards in world science fiction literature，including the Hugo Award and the Nebula Award.He is good at writing historical science fiction.Some of his best﹣known works are The Flood，Dragon's Bones，The Flying Dragon and so on.His latest work， "Time and Space Painter"，which was awarded the Hugo Prize this year，is a combination of traditional Chinese culture，history，crime fiction and science fiction.It tells a wonderful story based on the creation of the famous painting "The Great Wall" during the Northern Song Dynasty.
In my opinion，Haiya is a talented writer who has made great contributions to the development of Chinese science fiction literature.I believe you will enjoy reading his books.
Sincerely，
Lihua
【分析】高分句型一：Haiya is a Chinese writer who has won several awards in world science fiction literature，including the Hugo Award and the Nebula Award.
翻译：海漄是一位中国作家，他在世界科幻文学中获得了多项奖项，包括雨果奖和星云奖。
分析：本句使用了who引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：His latest work， "Time and Space Painter"，which was awarded the Hugo Prize this year，is a combination of traditional Chinese culture，history，crime fiction and science fiction.
翻译：他的最新作品《时空画师》获得了今年的雨果奖，它融合了中国传统文化、历史、犯罪小说和科幻小说。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Tom，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for some information about the talented young writer Haiya.
Haiya is a Chinese writer who has won several awards in world science fiction literature，including the Hugo Award and the Nebula Award.【高分句型一】He is good at writing historical science fiction.（个人介绍）Some of his best﹣known works are The Flood，Dragon's Bones，The Flying Dragon and so on.His latest work， "Time and Space Painter"，which was awarded the Hugo Prize this year，is a combination of traditional Chinese culture，history，crime fiction and science fiction.【高分句型二】It tells a wonderful story based on the creation of the famous painting "The Great Wall" during the Northern Song Dynasty.（杰出贡献）
In my opinion，Haiya is a talented writer who has made great contributions to the development of Chinese science fiction literature.I believe you will enjoy reading his books.（对他的评价）
Sincerely，
Lihua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Rebecca即将结束在中国的交换生学习回国。她喜欢中国传统文化，你在她临走前打算送一幅中国画作为礼物。请你写一封信向她告别。
要点如下：
（1）与她道别；
（2）介绍礼物（如绘画内容、意义等）；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Rebecca，
Yours.
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；人际关系；书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Rebecca，
Knowing that you are heading back to Britain very soon，I hate to say that parting is truly hard.But I am delighted that you have enjoyed yourself here and grown attached to Chinese culture.
As a small token of appreciation，I picked a Chinese painting for you，on which is a pair of chopsticks.Spanning thousands of years，chopsticks are not only a kind of tableware with distinct national features，but also an important component that fully reflects the intelligence of Chinese people.They always come in a pair and look identical.As an ancient Chinese saying goes，good things come in pairs.Chopsticks embody the beauty of symmetry and harmony of relationships.
Hope you will like the little gift.Wish you a pleasant journey home.Keep in touch.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Knowing that you are heading back to Britain very soon，I hate to say that parting is truly hard.
翻译：知道你很快就要回英国了，我不得不说，离别真的很难。
分析：本句运用了现在分词短语Knowing that you are heading back to Britain very soon作状语和that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：As a small token of appreciation，I picked a Chinese painting for you，on which is a pair of chopsticks.
翻译：作为小小的感谢，我挑了一幅中国画送给你，画上有一双筷子。
分析：本句运用了"介词+which"引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Rebecca，
Knowing that you are heading back to Britain very soon，I hate to say that parting is truly hard.【高分句型一】But I am delighted that you have enjoyed yourself here and grown attached to Chinese culture.（与她道别）
As a small token of appreciation，I picked a Chinese painting for you，on which is a pair of chopsticks.【高分句型二】Spanning thousands of years，chopsticks are not only a kind of tableware with distinct national features，but also an important component that fully reflects the intelligence of Chinese people.They always come in a pair and look identical.As an ancient Chinese saying goes，good things come in pairs.Chopsticks embody the beauty of symmetry and harmony of relationships.（介绍礼物）
Hope you will like the little gift.Wish you a pleasant journey home.Keep in touch.（表达祝愿）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作步骤：
第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达。
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾。
第三步：遣词造句，套用句型，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）。
5．假定你是高一学生李华，下周六晚6点至8点你校将在礼堂举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会。你的外籍老师Richard很喜欢音乐，请你写一封信邀请他参加此次活动。内容包括以下要点：
（1）发出邀请；（2）活动时间和地点；（3）活动内容和意义。
注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Richard，
I hope this letter finds you well.___________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；书信类．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Richard，
I hope this letter finds you well.Our school will hold a musical concert next Saturday.Knowing that you have great interest in music，I'm writing this letter to invite you to attend it.
The concert will be scheduled in our school hall from 6 p.m.to 8 p.m.next Saturday，lasting 2 hours.During this concert，not only can we appreciate classical folk songs of China and western countries，but we can also have a chance to listen to the music originally composed by gifted students as well.It is guaranteed that you will be deeply impressed by the combination of Chinese folk music with western musical instruments.
I am sure you will enjoy yourself and have fun.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Knowing that you have great interest in music，I'm writing this letter to invite you to attend it.
翻译：知道你对音乐很感兴趣，我写这封信邀请你参加。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Knowing that you have great interest in music作状语以及that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：It is guaranteed that you will be deeply impressed by the combination of Chinese folk music with western musical instruments.
翻译：中国民间音乐与西方乐器的结合一定会给你留下深刻的印象。
分析：句子中it作形式主语，真正的主语为that引导的主语从句。
【解答】Dear Richard，
I hope this letter finds you well.Our school will hold a musical concert next Saturday.Knowing that you have great interest in music，I'm writing this letter to invite you to attend it.【高分句型一】（发出邀请）
The concert will be scheduled in our school hall from 6 p.m.to 8 p.m.next Saturday，lasting 2 hours.（活动时间和地点）During this concert，not only can we appreciate classical folk songs of China and western countries，but we can also have a chance to listen to the music originally composed by gifted students as well.It is guaranteed that you will be deeply impressed by the combination of Chinese folk music with western musical instruments.【高分句型二】（活动内容和意义）
I am sure you will enjoy yourself and have fun.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
6．音乐在我们的生活中起着重要的作用，生活中不能缺少音乐。音乐可以帮助我们调节情绪：紧张的时候音乐可以使我们轻松，忧伤的时候音乐可以使我们快乐。请根据以上提示用英语写一篇主题为"the power of music"的演讲稿，谈谈音乐的重要性，可适当增加细节。
注意：1.词数80左右。
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning!My name is Lihua.
________
【考点】开放作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Good morning!My name is Li Hua.Today，I'd like to talk about the power of music.
Music is playing an important part in our life.Most of us are fond of music and listen to music regularly.In my opinion，music is very important.To start with，when I feel sad，music can comfort me then I can feel more confident about life and my problems.Also，when I have too much pressure with my schoolwork，music can make me feel relaxed.In addition，when I have some difficulty with sleep，some soft music can help me fall asleep easily.Finally，when I am in a state of worry，music can calm me down.
All in all，music is so important that life is a jourmey through a desert if there is no music in our life.
【分析】高分句型一：Also，when I have too much pressure with my schoolwork，music can make me feel relaxed.
译文：此外，当我的课业压力太大时，音乐会让我感到放松。
分析：这句话使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：All in all，music is so important that life is a journey through a desert if there is no music in our life.
译文：总之，音乐是如此重要，如果我们的生活中没有音乐，生活就是一场沙漠之旅。
分析：这句话使用了so+形容词+that引导的结果状语从句。
【解答】Good morning!My name is Li Hua.Today，I'd like to talk about the power of music.（话题）
Music is playing an important part in our life.Most of us are fond of music and listen to music regularly.In my opinion，music is very important.To start with，when I feel sad，music can comfort me then I can feel more confident about life and my problems.Also，when I have too much pressure with my schoolwork，music can make me feel relaxed. 【高分句型一】In addition，when I have some difficulty with sleep，some soft music can help me fall asleep easily.Finally，when I am in a state of worry，music can calm me down.（音乐的重要性）
All in all，music is so important that life is a jourmey through a desert if there is no music in our life.【高分句型二】（总结）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
7．假设你是李华，三峡博物馆将在下月举办故宫文物展，你的朋友Andy非常热爱中国传统文化，请给他写一封邮件，邀请他一起参观。信的内容包括：
1.展览的时间、地点；
2.参观的注意事项。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：三峡博物馆the Three Gorges Museum；文物cultural relics：故宫the Forbidden City
Dear Andy，
_______.
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；传统文化．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Andy，
Knowing you are enthusiastic about Chinese traditional culture，I am writing to invite you to attend an exhibition of cultural relics from the Forbidden City，which is scheduled next month in the Three Gorges Museum.
Many cultural relics，including ancient calligraphy works，paintings，books and porcelain vases will be on display，which are bound to cast light on Chinese ancient﹣culture.To show respect for our national treasure，food and drinks are not allowed while touring the museum.Moreover，flashes are prohibited when you are taking photos.
I am sure it will satisfy your insatiable desire for oriental beauty.Your earliest reply will be highly appreciated.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Knowing you are enthusiastic about Chinese traditional culture，I am writing to invite you to attend an exhibition of cultural relics from the Forbidden City，which is scheduled next month in the Three Gorges Museum.
分析：句子里，现在分词Knowing you are enthusiastic about Chinese traditional culture作原因状语；代指先行词 an exhibition of cultural relics from the Forbidden City，关系词which引导非限制性定语从句is scheduled next month in the Three Gorges Museum。
翻译：我知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣，所以写信邀请你参加下个月在三峡博物馆举行的故宫文物展。
高分句型二
To show respect for our national treasure，food and drinks are not allowed while touring the museum.
分析：句子里，动词不定式To show respect for our national treasure作目的状语。
翻译：为了表示对国宝的尊重，参观博物馆时不允许吃东西和喝饮料。
【解答】Dear Andy，
Knowing you are enthusiastic about Chinese traditional culture，I am writing to invite you to attend an exhibition of cultural relics from the Forbidden City，which is scheduled next month in the Three Gorges Museum. 【高分句型一】（展览的时间和地点）
Many cultural relics，including ancient calligraphy works，paintings，books and porcelain vases will be on display，which are bound to cast light on Chinese ancient﹣culture.To show respect for our national treasure，food and drinks are not allowed while touring the museum.【高分句型二】Moreover，flashes are prohibited when you are taking photos.（参观的注意事项）
I am sure it will satisfy your insatiable desire for oriental beauty.Your earliest reply will be highly appreciated.（期盼回复）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】先读提示，要点与格式要弄清；时态语态要当心，前后呼应要一致，结构搭配莫违背；文章写好细检查，点滴小错别忽视。学生在明确目的和掌握要领后，要严格按照规定的时间去完成作文训练任务。最后要检查（1）要点是否齐全，有无遗漏。（2）内容是否连贯，有无缺词。（3）语法是否正确，人称、时态、语态、名词单复数等有无错误。（4）用词是否得当，有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误。这里是考生熟悉的书信格式。
8．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter打算来中国旅游，希望你给他推荐一个去处。恰好你的家乡最近几年在大力发展乡村旅游，请你给他回一封电子邮件，向他推荐你的家乡。主要内容包括：
1.推荐理由；
2.特色简介；
3.交通情况。
注意：1.词数：100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter，
I'm so glad that you will come to China for a visit.
_______
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Peter，
I'm so glad that you will come to China for a visit.As you know，China is a large country abundant in tourism resources，many of which exist in the countryside.Here I'd like to advise you to pay a visit to my hometown.
My hometown is a beautiful village，where you can feast your eyes on its fascinating scenery.You can also go fishing，harvest fruits，and learn to make our traditional dishes.Moreover，you can experience some folk activities here，like Chinese paper cutting which helps you learn some Chinese culture.As for the transportation，far away from the city as our hometown is，it is situated close to the expressway.Therefore，the transportation is quite convenient.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：As you know，China is a large country abundant in tourism resources，many of which exist in the countryside.
翻译：如你所知，中国是一个旅游资源丰富的大国，许多旅游资源存在于农村。
分析：本句使用了many of which引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：As for the transportation，far away from the city as our hometown is，it is situated close to the expressway.
翻译：就交通而言，虽然我们的家乡远离城市，但它靠近高速公路。
分析：本句使用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm so glad that you will come to China for a visit.As you know，China is a large country abundant in tourism resources，many of which exist in the countryside.【高分句型一】Here I'd like to advise you to pay a visit to my hometown.（推荐理由）
My hometown is a beautiful village，where you can feast your eyes on its fascinating scenery.You can also go fishing，harvest fruits，and learn to make our traditional dishes.Moreover，you can experience some folk activities here，like Chinese paper cutting which helps you learn some Chinese culture.（特色简介） As for the transportation，far away from the city as our hometown is，it is situated close to the expressway.【高分句型二】Therefore，the transportation is quite convenient.（交通情况）
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
9．假定你是李华，想邀请你校交换生Allen一同参观正在市艺术中心举办的以 My People，My Country 为主题的书法绘画展（calligraphy and painting exhibition）。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.参观目的；
2.参观内容；
3.约定时间。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Allen，
Hearing that you are interested in Chinese culture，I'm writing to invite you to attend the calligraphy and painting exhibition being held in the Arts Centre of our city.
The show，whose theme is "My People，My Country"，displays a variety of classic paintings about the diligent Chinese people and their happy life，from which you can also learn about the big change and the rapid development of the country in recent years.Besides，some great calligraphy works from some well﹣known artists are included.I'm sure you will be very interested in them.
Will you be available on Saturday morning？I would like to pick you up at 8：30 a.m.at the school gate.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Hearing that you are interested in Chinese culture，I'm writing to invite you to attend the calligraphy and painting exhibition being held in the Arts Centre of our city.
翻译：听说你对中国文化感兴趣，我写信邀请你参加在我市艺术中心举办的书画展。
分析：本句使用了现在分词短语Hearing that you are interested in Chinese culture作原因状语。
高分句型二：The show，whose theme is "My People，My Country"，displays a variety of classic paintings about the diligent Chinese people and their happy life，from which you can also learn about the big change and the rapid development of the country in recent years.
翻译：这次展览的主题是"我的人民，我的国家"，展示了各种关于勤劳的中国人民和他们幸福生活的经典画作，从中你也可以了解到中国近年来的巨大变化和快速发展。
分析：本句使用了whose引导的定语从句以及介词from+which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Allen，
Hearing that you are interested in Chinese culture，I'm writing to invite you to attend the calligraphy and painting exhibition being held in the Arts Centre of our city.【高分句型一】（写信目的）
The show，whose theme is "My People，My Country"，displays a variety of classic paintings about the diligent Chinese people and their happy life，from which you can also learn about the big change and the rapid development of the country in recent years.【高分句型二】Besides，some great calligraphy works from some well﹣known artists are included.I'm sure you will be very interested in them.（参观内容）
Will you be available on Saturday morning？I would like to pick you up at 8：30 a.m.at the school gate.Looking forward to your early reply.（约定时间）
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
10．假如你是李华，正在美国参加一个交换项目，期间你加入了当地的musical society。这个社团正在网上分享最喜欢的音乐。请你发帖参与分享，描述你最喜欢的歌曲、乐曲或音乐形式，内容包括：
（1）该音乐的简介；
（2）听时你的感觉；
（3）对你的影响。
注意：
（1）词数80左右：
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Pete：Hey，everybody.What's your favorite piece of music？
Li Hua：
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Pete：Hey，everybody.What's your favorite piece of music？
Li Hua：My favorite piece of music is Chunjianghuayueye，or A Moonlit Night on the Spring River.It's a piece of traditional Chinese music played with Pipa，a traditional Chinese musical instrument looking a bit like a guitar.Every time I listen to the music，it feels as if a picture of a river is spreading before me.I can see the bright moon rising and shining，and the river water shining too.I can also feel the breeze blowing softly across my face.The classic piece has a comforting effect on me and I feel very proud of the traditional Chinese music.
【分析】高分句型一：It's a piece of traditional Chinese music played with Pipa，a traditional Chinese musical instrument looking a bit like a guitar.
译文：这是一首用琵琶演奏的中国传统音乐，琵琶是一种看起来有点像吉他的中国传统乐器。
分析：这句话使用了过去分词短语played with Pipa作定语，现在分词短语looking a bit like a guitar作定语。
高分句型二：Every time I listen to the music，it feels as if a picture of a river is spreading before me.
译文：每次我听音乐时，感觉就像一幅河流的图画在我面前展开。
分析：这句话使用了every time引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】Pete：Hey，everybody.What's your favorite piece of music？
Li Hua：My favorite piece of music is Chunjianghuayueye，or A Moonlit Night on the Spring River.It's a piece of traditional Chinese music played with Pipa，a traditional Chinese musical instrument looking a bit like a guitar. 【高分句型一】（该音乐的简介）Every time I listen to the music，it feels as if a picture of a river is spreading before me.【高分句型二】I can see the bright moon rising and shining，and the river water shining too.I can also feel the breeze blowing softly across my face. （听时你的感觉）The classic piece has a comforting effect on me and I feel very proud of the traditional Chinese music.（对你的影响）
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
11．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来中国旅游，发来邮件请你推荐两个目的地城市。请你给他回复邮件，内包括：
1．推荐城市及理由；
2．其他建议。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jim，
Glad to know that you're coming to visit China this summer vacation.It's my pleasure to offer my recommendation.
You may begin from Beijing，our capital city，an ideal place to witness China's glorious past and ever changing present.It has the richest tourist resources with numerous historical sites and modern complexes.The second destination is Chengdu，a southwestern pearl，home to the cute giant pandas.It has ranked among the most livable cities in China for years，owing to its pleasant environment and leisure lifestyle.
There are various transportation and accommodation services available in both cities so you'd better check online and find the ones that suit you best.
Looking forward to your arrival and wish you a wonderful trip then.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It's my pleasure to offer my recommendation.
译文：很高兴向你推荐。
分析：这句话使用it作为形式主语，不定式内容是真正的主语。
高分句型二：There are various transportation and accommodation services available in both cities so you'd better check online and find the ones that suit you best.
译文：这两个城市都有各种交通和住宿服务，所以你最好上网查询，找到最适合你的。
分析：这句话使用so引导结果状语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
Glad to know that you're coming to visit China this summer vacation.It's my pleasure to offer my recommendation.【高分句型一】（写信目的）
You may begin from Beijing，our capital city，an ideal place to witness China's glorious past and ever changing present.It has the richest tourist resources with numerous historical sites and modern complexes.The second destination is Chengdu，a southwestern pearl，home to the cute giant pandas.It has ranked among the most livable cities in China for years，owing to its pleasant environment and leisure lifestyle.（推荐城市及理由）
There are various transportation and accommodation services available in both cities so you'd better check online and find the ones that suit you best.【高分句型二】（其它建议）
Looking forward to your arrival and wish you a wonderful trip then.（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
12．假定你是李华，下周你将去英国交换学习两个月，并打算在此期间游览英国风景名胜。请给你的英国网友Jack写封信，请他推荐一处景点，内容包括：
（1）表达问候；
（2）写信目的；
（3）期待回复。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Jack，
It's a long time since we last emailed each other.Hope everything goes well with you.I will be living in England for two months as an exchange student，during which I plan to travel around.I'm writing to ask for your advice on the choice of tourist attractions in England.
As a developed country，England has much to offer tourists from around the world.I am particularly interested in mountain climbing.I know there are many mountains in your country，but I don't know which one is worth visiting.I wish you could recommend one to me.
I'd appreciate it if you could reply soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
I will be living in England for two months as an exchange student，during which I plan to travel around.
分析：句子里，介词during后的关系词which引导非限制性定语从句I plan to travel around。
翻译：我将作为交换生在英国生活两个月，期间我计划四处旅行。
高分句型二
I know there are many mountains in your country，but I don't know which one is worth visiting.
分析：句子里，宾语从句there are many mountains in your country省略了引导词that；which引导定语从句one is worth visiting。
翻译：我知道你们国家有很多山，但我不知道哪座山值得一游。
【解答】Dear Jack，
It's a long time since we last emailed each other.Hope everything goes well with you.（表达问候）I will be living in England for two months as an exchange student，during which I plan to travel around.【高分句型一】I'm writing to ask for your advice on the choice of tourist attractions in England.（写信目的）
As a developed country，England has much to offer tourists from around the world.I am particularly interested in mountain climbing.I know there are many mountains in your country，but I don't know which one is worth visiting.【高分句型二】I wish you could recommend one to me.（自己的问题）
I'd appreciate it if you could reply soon.（期待回复）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
13．假定你是李华，是校音乐俱乐部的主席。你校交换生Peter申请该俱乐部的鼓手一职，请你代表俱乐部给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.申请没有通过；
2.解释原因。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter，
________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Peter，
Thank you for your interest in joining the Music Club.Unfortunately ，I regret to inform you that your application has been turned down because the club has already recruited enough drummers.
Considering that you are extremely expert in playing drum ，I highly recommend to you the School Drum Team，which also enjoys great popularity and is now recruiting new members.Hopefully，not only will the team provide an opportunity for you to work out regularly，but it will also offer you a glimpse of the development of our school.I'm sue you'll have great fun here.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Unfortunately ，I regret to inform you that your application has been turned down because the club has already recruited enough drummers.
翻译：不幸的是，我很遗憾地通知你，你的申请被拒绝了，因为俱乐部已经招募了足够多的鼓手。
分析：句子里，that引导宾语从句your application has been turned down；because引导原因状语从句the club has already recruited enough drummers。
高分句型二
Hopefully，not only will the team provide an opportunity for you to work out regularly，but it will also offer you a glimpse of the development of our school.
翻译：希望这个团队不仅能为你提供一个定期锻炼的机会，还能让你了解我们学校的发展。
分析：句子里，否定词not only位于句首，句子will the team provide an opportunity for you to work out regularly用部分倒装。
【解答】Dear Peter，
Thank you for your interest in joining the Music Club.Unfortunately ，I regret to inform you that your application has been turned down because the club has already recruited enough drummers. 【高分句型一】（申请没有通过并且解释原因）
Considering that you are extremely expert in playing drum ，I highly recommend to you the School Drum Team，which also enjoys great popularity and is now recruiting new members.Hopefully，not only will the team provide an opportunity for you to work out regularly，but it will also offer you a glimpse of the development of our school. 【高分句型二】I'm sue you'll have great fun here.（推荐去鼓乐队）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
14．假定你是李华，你在美国纽约旅游期间受到了Mrs Smith的接待。请你写一封感谢信，内容要点如下：
1.告知安全返回；
2.感谢她的帮助；
3.表达美好愿望。
注意：词数80左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mrs.Smith，
_______________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Mrs.Smith，
I've already returned to China safe and sound.Looking back to the wonderful time I spent in New York，USA，I just can't help thinking of you.I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you.
It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay such a happy and wonderful experience.When I was in a mess，you always offered me timely help，which turned every awkward moment into laughter.Thank you for all you've done for me.
I will cherish the merry memories for the rest of my life and I do wish you all the best and hope to return your kindness someday.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一
Looking back to the wonderful time I spent in New York，USA，I just can't help thinking of you.
翻译：回顾我在美国纽约度过的美好时光，我不禁想起了你。
分析：句子里，现在分词短语Looking back to the wonderful time I spent in New York，USA作时间状语。
高分句型二
When I was in a mess，you always offered me timely help，which turned every awkward moment into laughter.
翻译：当我陷入困境时，你总是给我及时的帮助，这让每一个尴尬的时刻都变成了笑声。
分析：句子里，When引导时间状语从句I was in a mess；which引导非限制性定语从句turned every awkward moment into laughter。
【解答】Dear Mrs.Smith，
I've already returned to China safe and sound.Looking back to the wonderful time I spent in New York，USA，I just can't help thinking of you.【高分句型一】I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude to you.（告知安全返回）
It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay such a happy and wonderful experience.When I was in a mess，you always offered me timely help，which turned every awkward moment into laughter.【高分句型二】Thank you for all you've done for me.（感谢她的帮助）
I will cherish the merry memories for the rest of my life and I do wish you all the best and hope to return your kindness someday.（表达美好愿望）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】写作时，考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数。写作是一个厚积薄发的过程，是一项将积累释放于一时的过程。积累越深厚，释放就越精彩；积累越科学，释放就越有效。
15．假定你是李华，你打算元旦期间去上海旅游．请你给来自新西兰的交换生Terry 发邮件邀请他与你同游，内容包括；
1.邀请Terry 与你同游；
2.你的旅游计划（不少于2个景点）；
3.邀请理由。
Oriental Pearl Tower 东方明珠Yu Garden 豫园Nanjing Road 南京路
Shanghai Grand theatre 上海大剧院 Shanghai Museum 上海博物馆 Jing'an Temple 静安寺
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
Dear Terry，
__________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文；计划愿望；旅游与交通．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Dear Terry，
How are you？I am writing to invite you to travel with me to Shanghai on the New Year's Day.
I plan to stay in Shanghai for one day.Apart from getting a bird's﹣eye view of the whole city from the Oriental Pearl Tower，I will visit the Nanjing Road where we can do some souvenir shopping and sample the local cuisine，which is good for both of us because you can appreciate the Chinese culture while I can practice spoken English.
Please think over my invitation and let me know your decision as soon as possible.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I am writing to invite you to travel with me to Shanghai on the New Year's Day.
翻译：我写信邀请你元旦和我一起去上海。
分析：本句使用了to do不定式to invite you to travel with me to Shanghai on the New Year's Day作目的状语。
高分句型二：Apart from getting a bird's﹣eye view of the whole city from the Oriental Pearl Tower，I will visit the Nanjing Road where we can do some souvenir shopping and sample the local cuisine，which is good for both of us because you can appreciate the Chinese culture while I can practice spoken English.
翻译：除了从东方明珠塔鸟瞰整个城市，我还将参观南京路，在那里我们可以做一些纪念品购物，品尝当地美食，这对我们双方都有好处，因为你可以欣赏中国文化，而我可以练习英语口语。
分析：本句使用了where引导的限制性定语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Terry，
How are you？I am writing to invite you to travel with me to Shanghai on the New Year's Day.【高分句型一】（邀请Terry同游）
I plan to stay in Shanghai for one day.Apart from getting a bird's﹣eye view of the whole city from the Oriental Pearl Tower，I will visit the Nanjing Road where we can do some souvenir shopping and sample the local cuisine，which is good for both of us because you can appreciate the Chinese culture while I can practice spoken English.【高分句型二】（个人旅游计划及邀请理由）
Please think over my invitation and let me know your decision as soon as possible.（期待回复）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型。
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