【期末专项培优】读后续写（含解析）2025-2026学年高二上学期英语期末必刷卷译林版（2019）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
期末专项培优 读后续写
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Emily White was born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body.Some of her organs，bones and muscles were out of shape.No one expected her to survive.She did make it but with her strange body figure，everyone could recognize her，even from a distance.
In Emily White's hometown，there was a yearly outdoor performance in the school auditorium（礼堂）.It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the town's people.Many people tried out each year for it but so many were turned away.It could only include the most excellent people in the field.
Emily had a beautiful singing voice.Last year she went to Mrs Owens—her music teacher to ask to join in the performance.Without letting her sing，Mrs Owens took a look at Emily's body and said，"Child，you just don't fit.Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable.It would make them uncomfortable，too."
Without singing a single note，Emily was sent back through the door of the choral（合唱）room.Hurt and upset，she decided never to try out again.But Mrs Owens then retired.
This year，there came a new music teacher，Butler.He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.
Emily didn't want to be rejected again，so she hesitated a little about it.As Emily struggled，the door was pushed open and Mr Butler called，"Emily，you're next." Although kind of nervous，Emily did as Mr Butler told her to do.Mr Butler sat by the piano to accompany Emily.When Emily finished her testing performance，she thanked Mr Butler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.
Emily couldn't sleep that night.She was suffering from the feelings that she didn't fit and the great need to be accepted.By the next morning，her stomach was even in pain because of stress.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
The next day，Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room._________.
Finally，the day of performance came._________.
2．Mary waited anxiously for her turn in the empty dressing room.Never had she been so nervous before.This competition was of vital importance to her comeback."If I can win today，" she said to herself，"I can dance on the national stage next month." Three months ago，her left arm was seriously injured in a car accident.After the medical treatment，she began to recover slowly.She practiced over and over again in order to regain her dancing skills.
"Hi，Mary，" in rushed her friend Jessica."How is your arm？Is it going to influence your performance？"
"I guess it can be tolerated for I am to win the match." said Mary with a determined look.
"Admirable!But I hear that a girl called Linda is really gifted and strong.She can be your real well﹣matched e on！"
After Jessica left，Mary decided to practice her most difficult spin."If I don't try harder，I won't grasp this chance." She thought.But her arm began to hurt，making her worried."Mary，what makes you think you have a chance tonight？" she said to herself.After the pain was gone，she continued to warm up.
A slim girl hurried in and put down an equipment bag on the chair.Then，she took out her dance dress quickly and put it on skillfully.Seeing Mary，she smiled politely and said "Hi，I'm Linda.I am the next one！" Mary nodded in reply but felt uncomfortable. "This is just my competitor.Because of her，I may lose the game tonight." Her mind was wandering when Linda let out a scream，"Oh，I can't find my music tape！" Linda searched her bag but in vain. "It may be missing on the way." With these words，she then rushed out.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Suddenly，Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag._______________
Hearing her name called，Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster._____________
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Simple Thank
I have been in the teaching profession more than thirty years，and one of the best teachers I have ever known was Mr.Rowe.I was lucky enough to co﹣teach fourth grade with him.
Mr.Rowe had infinite patience and understanding and I learned so much from watching him.He could perform miracles，like the one her performed with Steven，one of the unhappiest kids I ever saw.Steven couldn't stand school.He didn't like being picked last for kickball.He didn't like the kids who raised their hands and knew all the answers，and most importantly，he didn't like himself.
The first day he walked into Mr.Rowe's classroom，he ignored the other students，looking angry and annoyed，and slid into his chair，knocking a couple of textbook onto the floor.
Mr.Rowe walked over to him and touched Steven's shoulder，but Steven pulled away.Nevertheless，Mr.Rowe welcomed him： "Hi，Steven.I'm happy you are in my class.We are gonna have a great year." Steven looked around the room as if Mr.Rowe must be mistaken.No teacher in his right mind would want Steven to be part of his classroom.
So，while Mr.Rowe seemed cheerful and relaxed that day of school，it seemed like Steven was angry and confused.
That day after classes，Mr.Rowe chose Steven to pitch the kickball during the break. "Hey，Steven，" Mr.Rowe commented， "You are good at pitching.Let me show you my secret trick." Mr.Rowe taught Steven one of the tricks that not a single kid could perform.Steven learned fast and did quite well!Everyone cheered for him!
After the kickball，Steven sat as closer to Mr.Rowe in classes as he could.When a question was asked，Steven lit up；he knew the answer!He raised his hands.When he answered the question，his voice shook.However，he got the answer right!He said，with Mr.Rowe，his days of the fourth grade promised wonderful.
That is not to say that every day went smoothly，but it was evident that Steven grew to love Mr.Rowe more and more with each passing day.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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Time passed quickly that year，and before we all knew it，it was the last day of school._______
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Many years later，Mr.Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom，dressed in the Marine Corps （海军） uniform._______
4．I love to play the piano and I greatly enjoy performing my songs，so when the annual winter recital was canceled，I was disappointed.I had looked forward to it for a long time and had already prepared two of my best songs.
My mom had a wonderful idea，however，to turn this disappointing letdown into something worthwhile. "You can perform your songs at Carriage House Senior Living，" my mom suggested brightly. "I'm sure the seniors there who do not have families visit them that often，would really appreciate the music and you could play more than just two songs."
I immediately thought this was a great idea.One of the things I did not like about the recitals was that I was limited to playing just a couple of songs.Playing the piano at Carriage House seemed like a win﹣win situation because not only would I get to play more songs，but I would also have the chance to cheer up the residents there with some lively tunes.
My mom called Carriage House and made arrangements for me to perform.In the coming days，I worked especially hard to polish up fifteen pieces that I thought the crowd would enjoy，including many old classics.
When the much﹣anticipated day finally arrived，my family and I drove to Carriage House.Walking through the enormous double doors，we stepped into an entryway that overlooked the spacious grand dining room.Right at the entrance to the dining room stood the piano as if it were just waiting to make some music to liven the place up a bit.At nearly every table several gray﹣haired women or men were seated enjoying their dinner and the company that the crowded room provided.Despite the conversations going on at various tables though，isolation hung like a dark cloud in the room.
Almost immediately，we were greeted by an old woman with a walker who introduced herself as Phyllis in charge of Carriage House.She welcomed me and led me to the stage.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As I sat down on the bench，I pressed a key on the piano and was surprised to hear no sound._________
Nervousness melted away and I started to enjoy the performance with the old.______________
5．You never know the difference you might make if you take the time to encourage someone.I gave up the idea of being a writer the summer before I started college.I'd been writing since I was five years old.My little friends wanted toys at that time，but I just wanted paper.Childhood passed and a box of short stories gave way to my middle school days.I wrote for a magazine and by the time I was in my eighth grade，half of the annual publications were written by me.Sometimes I'd dream about being a novelist，writing books that everyone might read.My dad was always sure that it would happen.When he read my poems or stories，his eyes welled up. "That's beautiful，honey，" he always told me. "One day，the entire world will know what a gift you have." Those words encouraged me through high school to keep believing that writing was my calling.
But somewhere along the months of my senior year I became disappointed.The crazy injustice in this world﹣﹣bad guys getting back out on the street and doing harm again and again，changed my mind. "I'm going to be a lawyer in the future，" I told my parents.My dad's face fell，but he kept his smile."Whatever you do，you'll be brilliant at it，" he said to me.
One of my first classes at college was Journalism 100.One day，the professor，Bob Scheibel，assigned us a story about an apartment fire.He gave us the facts and we had a few days to write a news story.
I was sure that I had gotten the facts right when I wrote the story.I didn't expect much feedback.But a few days later，Bob Scheibel asked me to talk to him after class.Questions raced through my mind.What had I done wrong？Had I gotten the facts mixed up？Did I miss anything critical in the details？Five minutes after the class，I found myself in front of the professor.His eyes met mine with great seriousness.
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The professor asked whether I have read an article about this event on the newspapers._________
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Since then，I begin to devote myself to writing and later in the school and city writing competitions，I get numerous awards and honours.__________
6．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
"I'm going to miss you so much，Poppy，"said the tall，thin teenager.He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye.He stood up，hugged his parents，and smiled，trying not to let his emotions get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control.They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying.It was time to say goodbye for now at least The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder，and flashed a bright smile."I guess this is it，"he said."I' ll see you back home in a month，okay？"His parents nodded，and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents.The boy's mother turned to the dog，"Okay，Poppy，time to go back home."
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there.All that week，Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner，her favorite toy，or even in her daily walk Her owners were sad too，but they knew their son would be back to visit.Poppy didn't.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats.They even let her sit on the sofa，but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self.Her owners started to get worried."What should we do to cheer Poppy up？"asked Dad."We've tried everything."
"I have an idea，but it might be a little crazy，" smiled Mom."Without anybody left in the house but us，this place could use a bit of fun.Let's get a little dog for Poppy."
It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box.Poppy welcomed them home as usual，but when she saw the box，she stopped She put her nose on it.Her tail began wagging（摆动） ever so slowly，then faster as she caught the smell.
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Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.______
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A few weeks later，the boy arrived home from university._____
7．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写 两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline，some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of the families were struggling to make ends meet.People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems，and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time，she would bring food and medicine to them.
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed，his wife，who took care of him and could not go out to work，and their little boy.The little boy﹣his name was Bernard﹣had interested her very much.
"I wish you could see him，"she said to her own children，John，Harry，and Clara."He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money，but I don't see what he can do."
After their mother left the room，the children sat thinking about Bernard."I wish we could help him to earn money，"said Clara."His family is suffering so much."
"So do I，"said Harry."We really should do something to assist them."
For some moments，John said nothing，but，suddenly，he sprang to his feet and cried，"I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish（完成）."
The other children also jumped up all attention When John had an idea，it was sure to be a good one.I tell you what we can do，"said John."You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us？Well，we can make popcorn（爆米花），and put it into paper bags，and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it."
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When Mrs.Meredith heard of John's idea，she thought it was a good one，too.______
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With everything ready，Bernard started out on his new business.________
8．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I took a trip to visit New York with my dad after graduating from high school.One of the places on his list for us to visit was a "rare violin shop" since I played the violin all four years and participated in the honor orchestra as well.We made our way down the crowded streets and eventually stopped in front of a tall building.
This building was not what I pictured when I heard "rare violin shop".I'd been imagining a street﹣level shop，open to the public，with some interesting and old violins on display，maybe with a luthier （制琴师） in the back.As we walked inside，took the elevator to the sixth floor，and stood in front of an apartment，I knew something felt off.I voiced my concern to my dad as he rang the doorbell but was ignored.My dad had never been great at interpreting social standards.
We were greeted by a receptionist who asked if we had an appointment，since they were by appointment only.I wanted the ground to swallow me whole and I was instantly aware of the sweaty，summer tourist clothes we had on.My dad eagerly told them that no，we didn't but， "my daughter plays the violin with her high school orchestra and isn't that great？And we would love to just go inside and browse!Don't mind us!"
The receptionist gave him a strange look but took it in stride （泰然处之） and excused herself to talk to someone behind a door.She came back with the owner，a well﹣dressed man，who told us that since he had no other appointments right now，he would love to give us a tour!
The starting price for a violin here，we found out，was very high.He showed us around a very private﹣feeling and swanky （时髦且豪华的）﹣looking apartment，pointed out a room where he casually mentioned he would chat with Joshua Bell when he came by，and opened the most interesting two﹣person safe I've ever seen to show me several multi﹣million﹣dollar violins.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He asked me questions about my orchestra and what pieces I liked to play as well._______
I don't remember his name at this point，but I am very grateful to him._________
9．读后续写
Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today，there are times when I remember his face clearly，especially his eyes.As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty.He would have been a stray（流浪） dog，until he came to me.
I was seven years old.My dad had just got a new job in Nasik.We had moved into a rented house.It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.
It was a cold dark night.We had our meal and went to sleep.Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door.I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.
There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door.It was wet and trembling.At first it was difficult to see the little one.It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.
It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat.Was it sick or injured？
I felt pity for the poor soul.I went in and came out with an old towel.I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry.I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow.He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.
The next morning，everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. "Shall we keep him with us？" I questioned my mom.
Like any other parents would，my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.
Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.
Paragraph 1：One day，Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg.______________________
Paragraph 2：Almost a year later，one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly.__________________
10．Jenny is a fifth ﹣ grader.She is one of the most popular girls in her class because she is among the brightest in her class .She can do the most cartwheels （侧手翻） in a row ，but most of all ，she has the talent to dance well .
Last year，she entered the school's dance competition and won first place.Since that day，she has been the class attraction.This year，the school is holding another dance competition，but there has been a change.The competition has to be done in pairs.
Jenny's class was expecting her to win again this year.But Jenny was unsure.She wanted to enter the competition，but she had never danced with a partner before.She decided to ask some of the boys in her class to enter with her.They all said no because they did not know how to dance .
She finally decided to turn to one of her closest friends，Carl.Carl was unwilling to join at first because he also didn't know how to dance.But Jenny insisted and he finally agreed.However，she was still worried because she knew it was going to be more of a challenge because Carl was not a good dancer.The competition was in two months ，and only time could tell whether they would win or not.
Jenny and Carl spent the first two weeks memorizing the steps of their dance with the help of their teacher.Carl was pretty clumsy at first .Jenny had to devote some time to helping Carl improve his skill.Fortunately，he finally got the hang of it.They spent the rest of the time perfecting their moves.The day of the competition was near .Jenny and Carl were beginning to get nervous.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
The day of the competition arrived________
They came to a perfect start.______________
11．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文．续写的词数应为150左右．
Deep in the forest， my husband and I had climbing over and crawling under the downed trees that blocked the dirt path before us． It was May， yet we walked up a snow﹣covered hill． When we noticed our jeans were wet up to our knees， it did not dampen our spirits． Not once did we say， "let's turn around．" This was our vacation， and we were on an adventure． Little did we know this was the beginning of many more surprises．
The trail was marked as an easy one﹣kilometer hike， yet we were already walking a long distance． Our lightheartedness stopped when we came out into a clearing and saw a parking lot without our rental car in it． As my eyes scanned the surroundings， nothing looked familiar． My heart raced． I realized we were lost in a notional park that did not officially open for another week．
Usually， I am the calm one in the relationship， but my husband surprised me with his calmness． This did not comfort me； In fact， it heightened my fear． As we walked， I asked my husband to call for help， but there was no cell﹣phone signal in this isolated（偏僻的）area．
It was awfully quiet except for our footsteps hitting the road， and my heavy breathing． My husband suggested we conserve energy and walk slower． With each step on the road， my feet and thighs hurt while my mind raced with thoughts about people who got lost in the Canadian woods for days．
My vision sharpened． I noticed everything around me： the trees， rocks and snow． I thought we could eat the snow on the ground in case we needed water． For the first time in my life， I was ready and willing to get a ride， but we did not meet with a single car on the road． Silently， I prayed multiple times． We focused on each other， made joint decisions and connected through gratitude． We managed to stay on the main road and walked straight on．
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My husband suddenly spotted a small building on a hill in the distance．__________
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Just then， a friendly woman appeared， saying， "Hello．"___________
12．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The icy wind howled across the empty street and it was an unusually quiet day in the emergency room on December twenty﹣fifth.Quiet，that is，except for the nurses who were standing around the nurses' station complaining about having to work on Christmas Day，for people were supposed to be spending time with their families，exchanging gifts and wishes.
I was guiding nurse that day and had just done the cleanup in the waiting room.Since there were no patients waiting to be seen at the time，I returned to the nurses' station for a cup of hot coffee that someone had brought in for Christmas.Just then，a colleague came back and told me I had five patients waiting to be evaluated.
I was surprised，"Five，how did I get five；I was just out there and no one was in the waiting room."
"Well，there are five signed in."
So I went straight out and called the first name.Five bodies showed up at my guiding desk，a pale short woman and four small children in untidy clothing.
"Are you all sick？" I asked suspiciously.
"Yes，" she said weakly and lowered her head.
"Okay，" I replied，unconvinced，"Who's first？" One by one they sat down，and I asked the usual beginning questions.When it came to the descriptions of their symptoms，things got a little vague.Two of the children had headaches，but the headaches weren't accompanied by the normal body language of holding the head or trying to keep it still.Two children had earaches，but only one could tell me which ear was affected.The mother complained of a cough，but seemed to work to produce it.
Something was wrong with the picture.Our hospital policy，however，was not to turn away any patient，so we would see them.When I explained to the mother that it might be a little while before a doctor saw her because，there were several more critical patients，she responded，"Take your time；it's warm in here and there is a Christmas tree."
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then the mother turned and，with a smile，settled her kids in the waiting room.________
The nurses，complaining about working Christmas，turned to sympathy for the homeless family._________
13．When I was 15，I followed Roy to the deep mountain in search of astragalus root （黄芪），which is a rare and valuable plant.
We searched the plant for a whole day，but without luck.We found nothing.As it got dark，I asked Roy to go back，but he refused and said， "I would rather sleep on the mountain tonight and continue to search tomorrow!"
I desired to go home but I lacked the courage to go back alone，so I chose to stay and help Roy put up a simple tent under a tree.It was freezing cold on the mountain and there were scores of mosquitoes，which made it impossible for us to have a good sleep.What's worse，we heard a wolf howling nearby!I was so scared.
"I heard that wolves bully （欺负） the weak and fear the strong，" Roy told me. "Let's strike the shovel （铲子） and shout to scare it away!" He found a stone and started to strike the shovel.And then he shouted as he struck the shovel.Inspired，I followed him to shout loudly.
Half an hour later，I felt cold all over the body.And the cold air on the mountain made that worse.My stomach began to ache.I lay in the tent，shivering，sweating and then falling unconscious.Roy was shocked with panic.He called my name screamingly，but I just made no response.He tried to put me on his back to carry me home but without success.At last，he went out and found some tree branches and blocked up the entrance to our tent with them.Then，he ran to the direction of our village as fast as he could.
Not knowing how much time went by，I heard some sounds approaching near.I thought it was Roy but I didn't hear him saying anything.In a shock，I sat up with a rush.At that moment，my eyes had adjusted to the darkness.Through a hole of our tent，I saw two animals like dogs removing the tree branches with their mouths and claws.They were wolves!
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Their sudden appearance shocked me and a cold sweat broke out all over my body.
Strangely，I saw the two wolves turn around and run away in a flash.
14．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Run to Remember
Thirteen can be a challenging age．Not only did I have to adapt to my changing body．I also had to deal with my parents' bitter divorce，a new family and the upsetting move from my country home to a crowded suburb．
When we moved，my beloved companion，a small brown pony（小马），had to be sold．Feeling helpless and alone，I couldn't cat or sleep，and I cried all of the time．I missed my family，my home and my pony．Finally，my father，realizing how much I missed my pony，purchased an old red horse for me at a local market．
My horse，Cowboy，was without a doubt the ugliest horse in the world．He was pigeon﹣toed and knock﹣kneed．But I didn't care about his faults．I loved him beyond all reasons．
I joined a riding club and faced rude comments and mean snickers about Cowboy's looks．I never let on how I felt，but deep down inside，my heart was breaking．The other members rode beautiful registered horses．
When Cowboy and I entered the events where the horse is judged on appearance，we were quickly out of the game．I finally realized that my only chance to compete would be in the timed﹣speed events．I chose barrel racing（绕桶赛），an event in which a horse and its rider attempt to complete a triangular pattern around three barrels in the fastest time．
One girl named Becky rode a big brown horse in the race events．She always won the blue ribbons．Needless to say，she didn't feel threatened when I competed against her at the next show．She didn't need to．I came in next to last．
The bitter memory of Becky's smirks（得意的笑）made me determined to beat her．For the whole next month，I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena（运动场地）．We practiced for hours in the hot sun and then I would walk Cowboy home．On the way home I would be so tired；those five miles seemed twice as long．
All of our hard work didn't make me feel confident by the time the show came．I sat at the gate and sweated it out while I watched Becky and her horse charge through the pattern of barrels，finishing the course with case．
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My turn finally came．————————
No cheers filled the air when I finished my show．————————
15．阅读下面材料，根据内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The moon was hanging low in the South Carolina sky as Misha finished loading her truck.Then she led Gandalf to his cage in the back.It was 3 a.m.on Tuesday March 20.Misha's husband，Chuck，came out to see her off. "Don't expect to go up there and find that lost boy in the woods，because it's just not going to happen，" Chuck said.As a retired firefighter he had seen more incredible things than a kid surviving three cold nights in the mountains，but he didn't want his wife to be disappointed in herself or her dog.
Three days earlier，12﹣year﹣old Michael disappeared suddenly from his troop's campsite in Doughton Park in the Blue Ridge Mountains.A massive search party had been sent out to find the boy that had been missing in the woods for three days，but there was barely a trace of the boy.They were about to lose hope when one dog.named Gandalf，stepped in.
Misha and Gandalf her two﹣year﹣old dog，had trained for a year with the South Carolina Search and Rescue Dog Association.But this was their first real job.Doughton Park was located in a bowl on the side of a mountain.It was covered with heavy forest，where slippery moss（苔藓）and waterfall spray threatened footings and thundering streams could drown out a child's cry for help.
Misha and her teammates arrived at the staging area around 7 a.m.on Tuesday，day four.The wind was coming toward them now around the shoulder of a cliff（悬崖）.Gandalf was about 30 yards ahead，working the bank of the stream where it turned beneath a wall of rock.Misha saw him quickly lift his head again.Was that the sign she'd been waiting for？Gandalf ran to the left，out of sight behind the cliff face.Misha tried to climb up the track behind him.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
All of a sudden came the barking of Gandalf.______________
As it turned out，Michael's experience was tough._______________
期末专项培优 读后续写
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Emily White was born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body.Some of her organs，bones and muscles were out of shape.No one expected her to survive.She did make it but with her strange body figure，everyone could recognize her，even from a distance.
In Emily White's hometown，there was a yearly outdoor performance in the school auditorium（礼堂）.It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the town's people.Many people tried out each year for it but so many were turned away.It could only include the most excellent people in the field.
Emily had a beautiful singing voice.Last year she went to Mrs Owens—her music teacher to ask to join in the performance.Without letting her sing，Mrs Owens took a look at Emily's body and said，"Child，you just don't fit.Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable.It would make them uncomfortable，too."
Without singing a single note，Emily was sent back through the door of the choral（合唱）room.Hurt and upset，she decided never to try out again.But Mrs Owens then retired.
This year，there came a new music teacher，Butler.He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.
Emily didn't want to be rejected again，so she hesitated a little about it.As Emily struggled，the door was pushed open and Mr Butler called，"Emily，you're next." Although kind of nervous，Emily did as Mr Butler told her to do.Mr Butler sat by the piano to accompany Emily.When Emily finished her testing performance，she thanked Mr Butler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.
Emily couldn't sleep that night.She was suffering from the feelings that she didn't fit and the great need to be accepted.By the next morning，her stomach was even in pain because of stress.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
The next day，Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room._________.
Finally，the day of performance came._________.
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】The next day，Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.She was not rejected this time.Her name was posted at the top of the list.She，Emily White，was chosen to be the leading singer!She would sing alone in the performance.Emily couldn't believe her eyes.There must be some mistake.But Mr Butler said to her with determined eyes，"Emily，I choose you because you should perform the part — your voice is unusual.Believe in yourself." Greatly encouraged，Emily practiced really hard.
Finally，the day of performance came.Standing in front of the line，Emily felt her throat tight and her palms sweating.When the curtain opened up，the eyes of the whole audience fell upon Emily."Emily White!"，someone whispered.Then，along with the first note of music，Emily began to sing her heart out.Her voice was like a nightingale ringing in the auditorium.Applause!Emily felt so happy and comfortable.She was shining on the stage.Emily White，with so many birth problems in her body，was an angel.
【分析】文章介绍了出生就有很多先天问题的艾米丽为了演唱而做出的各种努力。
高分句型一：She，Emily White，was chosen to be the leading singer!
译文：她，艾米丽 怀特，被选为主唱!
分析：被动语态的使用。
高分句型二：There must be some mistake.
译文：一定是弄错了
分析：There be固定句型的使用。
【解答】The next day，Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.She was not rejected this time.Her name was posted at the top of the list.She，Emily White，was chosen to be the leading singer!【高分句型一】She would sing alone in the performance.Emily couldn't believe her eyes.There must be some mistake.【高分句型二】But Mr Butler said to her with determined eyes，"Emily，I choose you because you should perform the part — your voice is unusual.Believe in yourself." Greatly encouraged，Emily practiced really hard.（艾米丽的演唱前的心里状态）
Finally，the day of performance came.Standing in front of the line，Emily felt her throat tight and her palms sweating.When the curtain opened up，the eyes of the whole audience fell upon Emily."Emily White!"，someone whispered.Then，along with the first note of music，Emily began to sing her heart out.Her voice was like a nightingale ringing in the auditorium.Applause!Emily felt so happy and comfortable.She was shining on the stage.Emily White，with so many birth problems in her body，was an angel.（ 艾米丽愉快的完成了任务。）
【点评】续写的语言尽可能与原文的语言保持风格一致，使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，同时要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。
2．Mary waited anxiously for her turn in the empty dressing room.Never had she been so nervous before.This competition was of vital importance to her comeback."If I can win today，" she said to herself，"I can dance on the national stage next month." Three months ago，her left arm was seriously injured in a car accident.After the medical treatment，she began to recover slowly.She practiced over and over again in order to regain her dancing skills.
"Hi，Mary，" in rushed her friend Jessica."How is your arm？Is it going to influence your performance？"
"I guess it can be tolerated for I am to win the match." said Mary with a determined look.
"Admirable!But I hear that a girl called Linda is really gifted and strong.She can be your real well﹣matched e on！"
After Jessica left，Mary decided to practice her most difficult spin."If I don't try harder，I won't grasp this chance." She thought.But her arm began to hurt，making her worried."Mary，what makes you think you have a chance tonight？" she said to herself.After the pain was gone，she continued to warm up.
A slim girl hurried in and put down an equipment bag on the chair.Then，she took out her dance dress quickly and put it on skillfully.Seeing Mary，she smiled politely and said "Hi，I'm Linda.I am the next one！" Mary nodded in reply but felt uncomfortable. "This is just my competitor.Because of her，I may lose the game tonight." Her mind was wandering when Linda let out a scream，"Oh，I can't find my music tape！" Linda searched her bag but in vain. "It may be missing on the way." With these words，she then rushed out.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Suddenly，Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag._______________
Hearing her name called，Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster._____________
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Suddenly，Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag.She went over and then opened the box，spotting Linda's very tape inside.She whispered to herself， "this might be my chance to defeat her，but…" Faced with such a dilemma，she felt the struggle and confusion going on in her heart.However，she didn't let that selfish idea get the upper hand of her.On a second thought，she rushed out to find Linda who was just about to come in. "Here is your tape.Break a leg!" Mary said in an encouraging tone，patting Linda on the shoulder.Linda，too grateful to utter a word，held Mary tightly in turn.Then she stepped onto the stage，finishing her performance calmly and skillfully.Mary watched，bitterly proud and extremely nervous as she waited her turn.
Hearing her name called，Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster.She did everything in her power to make the performance impressive.However，the severe pain in her arm visited her again when she was performing the most challenging spin，which resulted in her falling down on the stage.Off the stage went Mary，low﹣spirited，but she felt unusually peaceful inside.With the final results announced，Linda ran toward Mary and said emotionally， "I owe you a great deal.But for your help，I wouldn't have had the chance to be on the stage，let alone win the championship.The honor belongs to both of us." Hearing that，Mary couldn't refrain from smiling through tears.Defeated as Mary was，she believed she had won everything.
【分析】本文讲述了舞蹈表演参赛者Mary在赛前发生的故事，正在她紧张地准备参赛的时候，竞争对手却找不到音乐磁带。
高分句型一：On a second thought，she rushed out to find Linda who was just about to come in.
翻译：经过再三考虑，她冲出去寻找正要进来的琳达。
分析：本句使用了who引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：Defeated as Mary was，she believed she had won everything.
翻译：Mary虽然失败了，但她相信她赢得了一切。
分析：本句使用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装。
【解答】Suddenly，Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag.She went over and then opened the box，spotting Linda's very tape inside.She whispered to herself， "this might be my chance to defeat her，but…" Faced with such a dilemma，she felt the struggle and confusion going on in her heart.However，she didn't let that selfish idea get the upper hand of her.On a second thought，she rushed out to find Linda who was just about to come in.【高分句型一】 "Here is your tape.Break a leg!" Mary said in an encouraging tone，patting Linda on the shoulder.Linda，too grateful to utter a word，held Mary tightly in turn.Then she stepped onto the stage，finishing her performance calmly and skillfully.Mary watched，bitterly proud and extremely nervous as she waited her turn.（Mary发现磁带后交给Linda）
Hearing her name called，Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster.She did everything in her power to make the performance impressive.However，the severe pain in her arm visited her again when she was performing the most challenging spin，which resulted in her falling down on the stage.Off the stage went Mary，low﹣spirited，but she felt unusually peaceful inside.With the final results announced，Linda ran toward Mary and said emotionally， "I owe you a great deal.But for your help，I wouldn't have had the chance to be on the stage，let alone win the championship.The honor belongs to both of us." Hearing that，Mary couldn't refrain from smiling through tears.Defeated as Mary was，she believed she had won everything.【高分句型二】（Mary虽然比赛失利，但是她觉得她赢得了一切）
【点评】考查读后续写。做题时要注意以下几个方面：
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A Simple Thank
I have been in the teaching profession more than thirty years，and one of the best teachers I have ever known was Mr.Rowe.I was lucky enough to co﹣teach fourth grade with him.
Mr.Rowe had infinite patience and understanding and I learned so much from watching him.He could perform miracles，like the one her performed with Steven，one of the unhappiest kids I ever saw.Steven couldn't stand school.He didn't like being picked last for kickball.He didn't like the kids who raised their hands and knew all the answers，and most importantly，he didn't like himself.
The first day he walked into Mr.Rowe's classroom，he ignored the other students，looking angry and annoyed，and slid into his chair，knocking a couple of textbook onto the floor.
Mr.Rowe walked over to him and touched Steven's shoulder，but Steven pulled away.Nevertheless，Mr.Rowe welcomed him： "Hi，Steven.I'm happy you are in my class.We are gonna have a great year." Steven looked around the room as if Mr.Rowe must be mistaken.No teacher in his right mind would want Steven to be part of his classroom.
So，while Mr.Rowe seemed cheerful and relaxed that day of school，it seemed like Steven was angry and confused.
That day after classes，Mr.Rowe chose Steven to pitch the kickball during the break. "Hey，Steven，" Mr.Rowe commented， "You are good at pitching.Let me show you my secret trick." Mr.Rowe taught Steven one of the tricks that not a single kid could perform.Steven learned fast and did quite well!Everyone cheered for him!
After the kickball，Steven sat as closer to Mr.Rowe in classes as he could.When a question was asked，Steven lit up；he knew the answer!He raised his hands.When he answered the question，his voice shook.However，he got the answer right!He said，with Mr.Rowe，his days of the fourth grade promised wonderful.
That is not to say that every day went smoothly，but it was evident that Steven grew to love Mr.Rowe more and more with each passing day.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1：
Time passed quickly that year，and before we all knew it，it was the last day of school._______
Paragraph 2：
Many years later，Mr.Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom，dressed in the Marine Corps （海军） uniform._______
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Paragraph 1：
Time passed quickly that year，and before we all knew it，it was the last day of school.Our school had a very special tradition on the last day.All the teachers filled the sidewalk，waving goodbye to the kids as the bus pilled out with their horns honking.But on that particular day，Steven walked slowly to the bus，his head down，tears in his eyes.He boarded the bus reluctantly，hesitated，and then ran back off the bus to hug Mr.Rowe. "I don't want to leave you." He sobbed.With red﹣rimmed eyes，Mr.Rowe comforted him， "I will miss you，too."
Paragraph 2：
Many years later，Mr.Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom，dressed in the Marine Corps uniform.The young man stood tall and proud.It was Steven!Mr.Rowe and I couldn't believe our eyes.He saluted and hugged Mr.Rowe tightly! "I have come back to school today just to say thanks to you!" It is my hope that every teacher is blessed with such a wonderful experience of a former student coming back to say，simply to say a very simple THANKS.
【分析】本文为记叙文，讲述了Mr.Rowe老师对学困生Steven的关心。刚开始Steven表示不接受，但是Mr.Rowe老师耐心地教育他，最后Steven学习进步，并在多年后回校感谢Mr.Rowe老师的故事。
高分句型一：All the teachers filled the sidewalk，waving goodbye to the kids as the bus pilled out with their horns honking.
译文：所有的老师都挤满了人行道，向孩子们挥手道别，这时汽车开始隆隆地响着喇叭。
分析：这句话使用现在分词作状语。
高分句型二：It is my hope that every teacher is blessed with such a wonderful experience of a former student coming back to say，simply to say a very simple THANKS.
译文：我希望每一位老师都能有这样一个美好的经历，一个以前的学生回来说，只是说一句非常简单的感谢。
分析：这句话使用that引导同位语从句说明hope的内容。
【解答】Paragraph 1：
Time passed quickly that year，and before we all knew it，it was the last day of school.Our school had a very special tradition on the last day.All the teachers filled the sidewalk，waving goodbye to the kids as the bus pilled out with their horns honking. 【高分句型一】But on that particular day，Steven walked slowly to the bus，his head down，tears in his eyes.He boarded the bus reluctantly，hesitated，and then ran back off the bus to hug Mr.Rowe. "I don't want to leave you." He sobbed.With red﹣rimmed eyes，Mr.Rowe comforted him， "I will miss you，too."（Steven不舍得离开Mr.Rowe，Mr.Rowe安慰他）
Paragraph 2：
Many years later，Mr.Rowe and I were surprised when a handsome young man walked into our classroom，dressed in the Marine Corps uniform.The young man stood tall and proud.It was Steven!Mr.Rowe and I couldn't believe our eyes.He saluted and hugged Mr.Rowe tightly! "I have come back to school today just to say thanks to you!" It is my hope that every teacher is blessed with such a wonderful experience of a former student coming back to say，simply to say a very simple THANKS. 【高分句型二】（Steven来到学校对Mr.Rowe表示感谢）
【点评】考查读后续写。做题时要注意以下几方面：
（1）品读原文。确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
4．I love to play the piano and I greatly enjoy performing my songs，so when the annual winter recital was canceled，I was disappointed.I had looked forward to it for a long time and had already prepared two of my best songs.
My mom had a wonderful idea，however，to turn this disappointing letdown into something worthwhile. "You can perform your songs at Carriage House Senior Living，" my mom suggested brightly. "I'm sure the seniors there who do not have families visit them that often，would really appreciate the music and you could play more than just two songs."
I immediately thought this was a great idea.One of the things I did not like about the recitals was that I was limited to playing just a couple of songs.Playing the piano at Carriage House seemed like a win﹣win situation because not only would I get to play more songs，but I would also have the chance to cheer up the residents there with some lively tunes.
My mom called Carriage House and made arrangements for me to perform.In the coming days，I worked especially hard to polish up fifteen pieces that I thought the crowd would enjoy，including many old classics.
When the much﹣anticipated day finally arrived，my family and I drove to Carriage House.Walking through the enormous double doors，we stepped into an entryway that overlooked the spacious grand dining room.Right at the entrance to the dining room stood the piano as if it were just waiting to make some music to liven the place up a bit.At nearly every table several gray﹣haired women or men were seated enjoying their dinner and the company that the crowded room provided.Despite the conversations going on at various tables though，isolation hung like a dark cloud in the room.
Almost immediately，we were greeted by an old woman with a walker who introduced herself as Phyllis in charge of Carriage House.She welcomed me and led me to the stage.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As I sat down on the bench，I pressed a key on the piano and was surprised to hear no sound._________
Nervousness melted away and I started to enjoy the performance with the old.______________
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】One Possible Version As I sat down on the bench，I pressed a key on the piano and was surprised to hear no sound .Feeling as if the whole world was watching me，I was struck dead with embarrassment.How could I perform the song without the piano？I was on pins and needles when Phyllis slowly made her way to the front of the crowd of dinners and announced in a comforting tone. "This girl has come to sing for us but the piano seems to be a little nervous." Almost immediately，there was scattered applause and several people stepped forward to help me plug in the piano and set the microphone.With everything ready，I took a deep breath and commenced my performance
Nervousness melted away and I started to enjoy the performance with the old .One woman got up and began to animatedly dance about the room.Some of the people swayed in their chairs to the beat of the music while others tapped theirs toes.The performance ended up with a storm of applause from the crowd.I realized that it was far better than a piano recital because almost everyone seemed to truly appreciate my music and I' m proud that I have the power to spread kindness to them.It ended up being a blessing in disguise that the recital was canceled，leading to me sharing the gift of music with those who needed it most.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者喜欢弹单钢琴，也非常喜欢表演自己的歌曲，所以当年度冬季独秦会被取消时，作者很失望。然而，妈妈提议去Carriage House为老年人表演时，作者欣然同意并为之积极的做准备。
高分句型一 I was on pins and needles when Phyllis slowly made her way to the front of the crowd of dinners and announced in a comforting tone.
翻译：菲利斯慢慢地走到晚餐人群的前面，用一种安慰的语气宣布这一消息时，我如坐针毡。
分析：句中使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二 I realized that it was far better than a piano recital because almost everyone seemed to truly appreciate my music and I' m proud that I have the power to spread kindness to them.
翻译：我意识到这比钢琴独奏会要好得多，因为几乎每个人似乎都真正欣赏我的音乐，我很自豪我有能力向他们传播善意。
分析：句中使用了由连词that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】One Possible Version ：
As I sat down on the bench，I pressed a key on the piano and was surprised to hear no sound .Feeling as if the whole world was watching me，I was struck dead with embarrassment.How could I perform the song without the piano？I was on pins and needles when Phyllis slowly made her way to the front of the crowd of dinners and announced in a comforting tone.【高分句型一】 "This girl has come to sing for us but the piano seems to be a little nervous." Almost immediately，there was scattered applause and several people stepped forward to help me plug in the piano and set the microphone.With everything ready，I took a deep breath and commenced my performance.（作者表演时发现钢琴没有声音的内心的紧张以及问题解决后大家对作者的鼓励。）
Nervousness melted away and I started to enjoy the performance with the old .One woman got up and began to animatedly dance about the room.Some of the people swayed in their chairs to the beat of the music while others tapped theirs toes.The performance ended up with a storm of applause from the crowd.I realized that it was far better than a piano recital because almost everyone seemed to truly appreciate my music and I' m proud that I have the power to spread kindness to them.【高分句型二】It ended up being a blessing in disguise that the recital was canceled，leading to me sharing the gift of music with those who needed it most.（作者的演奏给老人带来的快乐和作者的感受）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜（结尾）"。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。
5．You never know the difference you might make if you take the time to encourage someone.I gave up the idea of being a writer the summer before I started college.I'd been writing since I was five years old.My little friends wanted toys at that time，but I just wanted paper.Childhood passed and a box of short stories gave way to my middle school days.I wrote for a magazine and by the time I was in my eighth grade，half of the annual publications were written by me.Sometimes I'd dream about being a novelist，writing books that everyone might read.My dad was always sure that it would happen.When he read my poems or stories，his eyes welled up. "That's beautiful，honey，" he always told me. "One day，the entire world will know what a gift you have." Those words encouraged me through high school to keep believing that writing was my calling.
But somewhere along the months of my senior year I became disappointed.The crazy injustice in this world﹣﹣bad guys getting back out on the street and doing harm again and again，changed my mind. "I'm going to be a lawyer in the future，" I told my parents.My dad's face fell，but he kept his smile."Whatever you do，you'll be brilliant at it，" he said to me.
One of my first classes at college was Journalism 100.One day，the professor，Bob Scheibel，assigned us a story about an apartment fire.He gave us the facts and we had a few days to write a news story.
I was sure that I had gotten the facts right when I wrote the story.I didn't expect much feedback.But a few days later，Bob Scheibel asked me to talk to him after class.Questions raced through my mind.What had I done wrong？Had I gotten the facts mixed up？Did I miss anything critical in the details？Five minutes after the class，I found myself in front of the professor.His eyes met mine with great seriousness.
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The professor asked whether I have read an article about this event on the newspapers._________
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Since then，I begin to devote myself to writing and later in the school and city writing competitions，I get numerous awards and honours.__________
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】Paragraph 1：
The professor asked whether I have read an article about this event on the newspapers." You should never，ever stop writing， " he said． " Believe in yourself and never change our mind．You are bound to be an excellent writer． " His words were as warm as the sunlight ouring in．That day，I seemed to be a different person．My back felt a little straighter and my steps became a little quicker．I would be a good writer．Professor Bob Scheibel had told that to me．From then on，I followed his advice and was determined to impress the whole world with my gift．
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Since then，I begin to devote myself to writing and later in the school and city writing competitions，I get numerous awards and honours.Two years ago，my first bestseller came out．I went to visit my old professor and he immediately recognized who I was．He congratulated me on my writing success，and I told him that I wouldn ' t have become a writer if he hadn ' t encouraged me．Professor Scheibel was very glad and felt moved after hearing that．The words Professor Bob Scheibel said to me that day really made a difference to my life．
【分析】作者从小喜欢写作，梦想成为小说家。但因为后来看到世界的阴暗面，长大后又希望成为一名律师。后来大学时期的一门课，作者的写作作业得到了老师的极大赞扬，作者又开始重拾写作梦。
高分句型一：I went to visit my old professor and he immediately recognized who I was．
译文：我去拜访我的老教授，他立刻认出了我。
分析：这句话使用who引导宾语从句。
高分句型二：The words Professor Bob Scheibel said to me that day really made a difference to my life．
译文：鲍勃 谢贝尔教授那天对我说的话真的改变了我的生活。
分析：Professor Bob Scheibel said to me that day 是定语从句修饰the words。
【解答】Paragraph 1：
The professor asked whether I have read an article about this event on the newspapers." You should never，ever stop writing， " he said． " Believe in yourself and never change our mind．You are bound to be an excellent writer． " His words were as warm as the sunlight ouring in．That day，I seemed to be a different person．My back felt a little straighter and my steps became a little quicker．I would be a good writer．Professor Bob Scheibel had told that to me．From then on，I followed his advice and was determined to impress the whole world with my gift．（作者在教授的指导下，坚持写作）
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Since then，I begin to devote myself to writing and later in the school and city writing competitions，I get numerous awards and honours.Two years ago，my first bestseller came out．I went to visit my old professor and he immediately recognized who I was．【高分句型一】He congratulated me on my writing success，and I told him that I wouldn ' t have become a writer if he hadn ' t encouraged me．Professor Scheibel was very glad and felt moved after hearing that．The words Professor Bob Scheibel said to me that day really made a difference to my life． 【高分句型二】（作者的书出版后，去拜访教授，感谢他的鼓励）
【点评】读后续写的解题思路
1．通读全文，读懂原文
通读全文首先要解决好五个 W 和一个 H 的问题，即理清人物 who、地点 where、时间 when、事件 what、原因 why 及怎样发展 how.在通读全文时，考生应将影响语义理解的词句进行仔细揣摩，结合上下文推测出它的准确含义。
2．构思情节，谋篇布局
按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性，构思好情节发展，这个发展须符合情节内在的逻辑。因为这不是写科幻小说，不是写神话，因此应该符合现实发生的真实性。所以这个环节的主要任务是谋篇布局。布局谋篇最关键应利用好续写部分所给的两段落的首句。
3．理清逻辑，优化语言
这一部分侧重点为语言逻辑，写作不必追求高大上的词汇，相反，朴实自然、地道、贴切的词语便是好的词语，不同的写作对象应采用不同的语言风格，必须采用适当的描写侧重点（比如侧重动作描写或是侧重心理描写），续写要抓住续这一核心，按照情节的发展进行延续，写作手法上必须以叙为主，描写上以动作描写为重心，情节的发展合乎逻辑地推进。
6．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
"I'm going to miss you so much，Poppy，"said the tall，thin teenager.He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye.He stood up，hugged his parents，and smiled，trying not to let his emotions get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control.They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying.It was time to say goodbye for now at least The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder，and flashed a bright smile."I guess this is it，"he said."I' ll see you back home in a month，okay？"His parents nodded，and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents.The boy's mother turned to the dog，"Okay，Poppy，time to go back home."
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there.All that week，Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner，her favorite toy，or even in her daily walk Her owners were sad too，but they knew their son would be back to visit.Poppy didn't.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats.They even let her sit on the sofa，but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self.Her owners started to get worried."What should we do to cheer Poppy up？"asked Dad."We've tried everything."
"I have an idea，but it might be a little crazy，" smiled Mom."Without anybody left in the house but us，this place could use a bit of fun.Let's get a little dog for Poppy."
It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box.Poppy welcomed them home as usual，but when she saw the box，she stopped She put her nose on it.Her tail began wagging（摆动） ever so slowly，then faster as she caught the smell.
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Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.______
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A few weeks later，the boy arrived home from university._____
【考点】读后续写．
【专题】书面表达．
【答案】paragraph1：
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog.She lowered her head to watch it curiously.Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer.With the box tipping over，out came the little one，who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy.It didn't take long before the two played around the house，cheerfully running after each other.
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A few weeks later，the boy arrived home from the university.He had been missing his parents and Poppy since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time.When the boy caught sight of Poppy，he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug.Suddenly，the boy noticed the little dog. "Wow!Who is this？" His parents smiled at the look of surprise on his face." Its Poppy's new companion，" side mom.
【分析】文章讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗Poppy道别。而没有了男孩在家里，Poppy也非常想念小男孩，于是男孩父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴。
高分句型一：With the box tipping over，out came the little one，who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy.
分析：这句话使用了with的复合结构，倒装句和who引导的定语从句。
翻译：盒子翻了个底朝天，小家伙又出来了，它一点也不害羞，立刻就熟悉了波比。
高分句型二：When the boy caught sight of Poppy，he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug.
分析：本句使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
翻译：当男孩看到波比时，他冲向那只狗，弯下腰给了它一个大大的拥抱。
【解答】paragraph1：
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog.She lowered her head to watch it curiously.Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer.With the box tipping over，out came the little one，who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy.【高分句型一】It didn't take long before the two played around the house，cheerfully running after each other.（ Poppy和小狗很快成为朋友）
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A few weeks later，the boy arrived home from the university.He had been missing his parents and Poppy since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time.When the boy caught sight of Poppy，he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug.【高分句型二】Suddenly，the boy noticed the little dog. "Wow!Who is this？" His parents smiled at the look of surprise on his face." Its Poppy's new companion，" side mom.（男孩从学校回来，看见小狗）
【点评】解题方法点拨
（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线