【单元考点培优】Unit 2 We're Family! 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优人教版（2024）（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优人教版（2024）Unit 2 We're Family!
专题16 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李欣，你需要给你的美国笔友Lucy回一封信，简单的介绍一下你自己、你的家庭及你的学校生活情况。请根据以下内容提示完成信件。
内容提示：
How many people are there in your family and who are they
What do you like doing with your family
Is there anything interesting about your new school life
注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和校名；词数不少于60。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your letter. I’m Li Xin.
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That’s all. Thank you.
Yours,
Li Xin
2．下周，学校将举行“和谐家庭”主题演讲活动。假如你是李佳乐，请你根据下面的提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你自己和你的家人。
My Family My name, age (12岁)...
My family members and their jobs
Our likes or activities
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参考词汇：farmer 农民；office worker办公室职员
写作要求：
1）文中须包含所给的所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
2）短文通顺连贯，语言表达准确，书写规范整洁；
3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
4）词数70左右。
My Family
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3．假如你是刘琳，你的英语老师布置了一个创意作业。她让同学们画一幅“我的家谱”（My family tree），并在图画下方用英语介绍自己的家庭。下图是你创作的家谱，请写一篇英语短文介绍它吧。
内容提示：
1. 介绍家庭成员的年龄和职业；
2. 介绍家庭成员的兴趣和爱好。
要求：
1. 条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，书写工整；
2. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现学生的真实姓名和校名；
4. 语句连贯，词数 70 左右。作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
There are five people in my family.
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4．在跳水界，全红婵这个名字早已家喻户晓。这个年仅17岁的女孩以其无与伦比的天赋和刻苦训练，连续夺得奥运会金牌，成为中国跳水队的传奇人物。请根据下面有关于全红婵的思维导图写一篇文章向喜欢她的外国朋友介绍一下这位体育明星。
要求：
（1）你的文章必须包括思维导图中所有的要点信息，顺序不限；
（2）文中不得出现你个人真实姓名和校名；
（3）词数50词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Quan Hongchan is a great diving player.
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5．同学们，家人是我们在这个社会上最亲爱、最重要的人。你了解你的家人吗？请参考下面的提示，写一写你的家人们，你可以写你的爷爷、奶奶，外公、外婆，爸爸、妈妈，哥哥、姐姐等。你可以选择写他们中的任何一个，也可以选择写他们中的几个。当然，你也可以写一写你自己，但要注意书写要规范，语句要通顺哦，词数最好不少于60个词，还有文中不要出现你的任何真实信息，包括你的姓名、校名等，好了，现在可以开始写啦。
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6．假如你是Daming，写一篇短文介绍你自己。
要求：
1. 适当使用and，but，because等连词使得短文更加连贯。
2. 请根据提示适当增加内容，词数60左右。
3. 语法正确，书写工整，卷面整洁。
年龄 12
外貌 高，短发，戴眼镜
家人 爸爸，妈妈，妹妹
喜欢或不喜欢的食物 原因自拟
喜欢或不喜欢的运动 原因自拟
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7．假如你是李鑫，你班上有一名来自英国的交换生Jack，他要挑选寄宿家庭，你想邀请他住在你家里。请根据图片提示内容写一封信，向他介绍一下你和你的家人。
提示内容：1. How many people are there in the photo
2. Who are they and what do they look like
3. What are their hobbies
4. …
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等) ；
4. 词数：不少于50词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) 。
Dear Jack,
I am Li Xin. I am happy to introduce my family to you. Here is my family photo.
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Yours,
Li Xin
8．家人是生命中最温暖的存在，家庭是永远的心灵港湾。英语周报将举办以“My Happy Family”为主题的征文比赛。假设你是李辉，请你根据图片提示，用英语写一篇短文，向英语周报投稿，介绍你的家庭成员，并表达对家人的爱。
参考信息：
要求：
1.根据图片提示，至少介绍2-3个家人的详细信息，要有适当的结尾；
2.卷面整洁，书写工整，标点符号使用正确；
3.文章中不能出现真实姓名、学校等个人信息；
4. 字数60词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! My name’s Li Hui. I live in a happy family. Here is a photo of my family. I’m the little boy with short hair, and I like reading books. My grandma is on the left. She is
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9．假如你是李华，你所在班级的外教老师Mr Brown组织了一场最美家庭（The Most Beautiful Family）”的评选活动。请根据以下提示内容，向Mr Brown提交一篇不少于70词的推荐信，推荐你的家庭。
1.文章须包含图中的主要信息，可适当发挥；
2.不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Brown,
I would like to recommend my family for “The Most Beautiful Family” in our class this year.
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I believe my family deserves this recommendation.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．你校社团计划举办以“I Love My Family”为题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的家庭情况，词数80词左右。
提示：
1. How many people are there in your family Who are they
2. How old are they
3. What do they like
I Love My Family
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11．根据要求完成短文写作。
从上面一篇文章里，我们知道了Emei Kung Fu Girls，其中作为代表受访的马赵凌云是她们的大师姐，她是一个怎样的人呢？请根据以下图片和表格中的要点写一篇英文短文给大家介绍一下这位峨眉派传人吧！要点提示：
姓名：马赵凌云 年龄：26 外貌：big eyes , tall…（可根据图片添加细节） 性格：kind , outgoing… 爱好：峨眉功夫，acting（演艺）… 最爱食物：Mapo tofu 居住地：四川雅安 家庭情况：四口人，爷爷热爱功夫和网球，爸爸姓马，喜欢花大部分时间钓鱼，妈妈姓赵，喜欢下棋……
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12．假如你是李明，你远在英国的笔友Mike下个月要来重庆交流学习并住在你家。请根据下面的图片，写一封e-mail，介绍一下自己的情况，字数60-80词。
提示：1. 介绍一下你的个人情况，包含名字、年龄、喜好等；
2. 简单介绍一下家庭成员，包含父亲和母亲的职业；
3. 用There be句型介绍你房间里至少三样物品的位置。
提示：under (在……下), wall (墙), bed (床)
Dear Mike,
I’m happy that you’ll live with us in Chongqing soon. Now let me tell you something about myself and my family first.
My name is
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Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
13．家，是我们生命的起点，心灵的归宿，也是我们与亲人共同编织美好生活的港湾。在家中，我们感受到温暖安全，因为那里有家人的关爱和陪伴。假如你是Ella，请以“My family”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍你的家庭。
写作内容：(1) 年龄；(2) 外貌；(3) 性格；(4) 爱好；(5) ……
写作要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
(2) 内容必须包含所给信息，并适当发挥。
(3) 词数60左右 (作文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
(4) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
My family
My name is Ella. I have a happy family.
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14．假如你是李晨，请根据下列的思维导图提示介绍一下你的家庭。
注意：
(1)介绍必须包括上述要求提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息；
(3)词数：不少于60词。开头已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数。
Hi, my name’s Li Chen.
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15．假如你是刘琳，你的英语老师布置了一个创意作业。她让同学们画一幅“我的家谱”(My Family Tree)，并在图画下方用英语介绍自己的家庭。下图是你创作的家谱，请写一篇70词左右英语短文介绍它吧。
内容提示：1.介绍家庭成员的年龄和职业；
2.介绍家庭成员的兴趣和爱好并说明理由。
要求：1.条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，
2.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
3.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和校名：
My family Tree
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16．假设你是Zhang San，你想和 Tom成为笔友。请你根据提供的信息，写一封信给Tom。
要求：1.不少于5句话：2.书写工整；3.语法正确。
可选用的部分句型: I am... I live in... There are... I like... I want to...
Name Age City Families hobbies
Zhang San 12 years old Chengdu, beautiful... grandpa, grandma, father, mother, little sister and me collecting stamps, sing English songs…
Dear Tom,
I am
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Yours,
Zhang San
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your letter. I’m Li Xin. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my younger brother and me. I like going for a picnic with my family on weekends. We enjoy the beautiful scenery and delicious food together.
My new school life is very interesting. We have many clubs at school. I joined the Art Club because I love drawing. My classmates are friendly and the teachers are kind. We often have group activities and it helps us learn better.
That’s all. Thank you.
Yours,
Li Xin
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文属于应用文，是给笔友的书信。
②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述日常情况。
③提示：按照要求向美国笔友Lucy介绍自己、家庭及学校生活。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头感谢笔友来信并表明自己身份。
第二步，中间先介绍家庭人数和成员，以及周末和家人一起野餐的活动；接着介绍有趣的学校生活，涵盖学校俱乐部、自己加入的艺术俱乐部，还有同学和老师的情况。
第三步，结尾简单收尾，结束书信内容。
[亮点词汇]
①go for a picnic去野餐
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family.（there be句型）
②I joined the art club because I love drawing.（because引导原因状语从句）
2．例文
My Family
Hello, my name is Li Jiale, I’m twelve years old. I’m a student in Grade Seven. Let me tell you about my family.
There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is a worker, and my mother is a doctor. My sister is a student in Grade Eight. We’re in the same school. My family like sports. We often do sports at night, such as running and walking. Sometimes we play games at home.
I love my family. That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息并引出主题；
第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，介绍家庭成员的相关信息；
第三步，表达热爱自己的家人，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②at home在家
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family.（there be句型）
②My father is a worker, and my mother is a doctor.（and连接并列句）
3．例文：
There are five people in my family. My grandfather is 61 years old. He is a farmer and enjoys playing chess in his free time. My grandmother is 59 years old. She is also a farmer but loves drawing pictures of flowers and landscapes.
My father is 39 years old and works as a doctor. He likes to go fishing on weekends. My mother is 38 years old and she is a teacher. She loves reading books, especially those about history.
I’m Liu Lin, 13 years old, and I’m a student. My hobby is playing the guitar. I enjoy making music and sharing it with my family. We all love each other and spend a lot of time together.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，用于介绍个人家庭情况；
②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”来描述家庭成员的现状；
③提示：写作要点已明确，包括家庭成员的年龄、职业以及兴趣和爱好。考生需根据提供的家谱信息，条理清晰地介绍每个家庭成员，并可以适当发挥，增加文章的丰富性和连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。文章开头已给出：“There are five people in my family.”，直接点明了文章的主题——介绍家庭成员；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。
首先，按照家谱的顺序，从祖父开始介绍，接着介绍祖母，然后介绍父亲，接下来是母亲，最后介绍自己；
第三步，书写结语，表达对未来生活的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy playing chess喜欢下棋
②drawing pictures of画画
③go fishing去钓鱼
④making music制作音乐
⑤spend a lot of time together花很多时间在一起
[高分句型]
①My grandmother is 59 years old and loves drawing pictures of flowers and landscapes. (并列句，描述祖母的年龄和爱好)
②My father is 39 years old and works as a doctor. (“be+年龄”和“work as”结构的结合，描述父亲的年龄和职业)
③I enjoy making music and sharing it with my family. (动词-ing形式作宾语，以及sharing sth with sb结构的运用，表达享受制作音乐并与家人分享的乐趣)
4．例文：
Quan Hongchan is a great diving player. She was born on March 28th. Her hobby is dancing and her favorite subject is math. She studies at Zhanjiang Sports School. In her family, there are her grandmother, grandfather, mother, father, two sisters and two brothers.
She has achieved great success in diving and is well-known all over the world.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据图片所列出的要点提示介绍全红婵，注意避免语法错误，确保行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明全红婵是一名优秀的跳水运动员；
第二步：根据图片要点提示，具体介绍全红婵的生日、爱好、家人信息等；
第三步：介绍全红婵的成就和知名度。
[亮点词汇]
①be born出生
②be well-known著名
③all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
①Her hobby is dancing and her favorite subject is math.（and连接的并列句）
②In her family, there are her grandmother, grandfather, mother, father, two sisters and two brothers. （there be句型）
5．例文
There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and I.
My father is 40 years old. His name is Jack. He likes playing basketball with me on weekends. He is kind and often tells funny stories. My mother is Mary. She is 38 years old. She loves reading books. She is friendly and often helps others.
My parents love me very much and I love them, too.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。介绍家庭成员的组成，引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述。介绍你的家人，比如介绍爸爸、妈妈，包括他们的姓名、年龄、爱好、性格等。
第三步，书写结语。表达你对家人的爱。
[亮点词汇]
① like doing sth. 喜欢做某事
② play basketball 打篮球
③ on weekends 在周末
[高分句型]
① There are three people in my family. (there be句型)
② He is kind and often tells funny stories. (and并列结构)
6．例文
My name is Daming. I’m 12 years old. I’m tall and I have short hair. I wear a pair of glasses. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my younger sister and I. I like bananas best because they’re delicious, but I don’t like fried chips because it’s not healthy. I like basketball and I often play basketball with my friends. But I don’t like swimming because it’s difficult for me.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意写作内容要按照表格中所给的信息描写，喜欢或不喜欢的原因可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的名字、年龄、外貌特征和家庭信息。
第二步，介绍自己喜欢和不喜欢的食物，并阐明原因。
第三步，介绍自己喜欢和不喜欢的运动，并阐明原因。
[亮点词汇]
①a happy family一个快乐的家庭
②like...best最喜欢……
③be difficult for对……很难
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family.（There be句型）
②I like bananas best because they’re delicious, but I don’t like fried chips because it’s not healthy.（because引导的原因状语从句）
7．例文
Dear Jack,
I am Li Xin. I am happy to introduce my family to you. Here is my family photo.
There are six people in the photo. They are my grandparents, my parents, my sister, and me. My grandfather has white hair and wears glasses. He likes reading books. My grandmother has short gray hair and she enjoys cooking. My father is tall and has short black hair. He likes playing tennis. My mother has long brown hair. She loves gardening. My sister and I both have black hair. We enjoy playing football together.
We all get along well and love spending time together. I hope you will come and stay with us. You will feel at home here.
Yours,
Li Xin
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，根据图片和提示内容介绍自己和家人；
第三步，介绍家庭氛围并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②play football踢足球
③get along well相处融洽
④at home在家
[高分句型]
There are six people in the photo. (There be句型)
8．例文
Hello, everyone! My name’s Li Hui. I live in a happy family. Here is a photo of my family. I’m the little boy with short hair, and I like reading books. My grandma is on the left. She is 60 years old and has short hair. She can play the erhu well. My grandpa is on the right. He is 62 years old. He likes playing weiqi and he has short hair, too. In the middle of the photo, you can see my parents. They are both 38 years old. My dad is tall, and he likes fishing. My mom is slim, and she likes planting flowers. My family are very kind and friendly. We have a cute cat, too. Its name is Mimi. We are a happy family.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章开头，介绍家庭照；
第二步，根据题干图片和思维导图中的要点，详细介绍家人的相关信息；
第三步，点评家人，书写结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①on the right在右边
②in the middle of在……的中间
[高分句型]
①He likes playing weiqi and he has short hair, too.（and表并列）
9．例文
Dear Mr Brown,
I would like to recommend my family for “The Most Beautiful Family” in our class this year.
There are three people in my family. My father is tall and strong. He is very kind and has a good sense of humor. He likes reading books in his free time. My mother is beautiful with long hair. She is kind and loves cooking delicious meals for us. I am an active student who enjoys playing sports. We often go for a walk in the park together on weekends. We also enjoy watching movies, sharing laughter and tears. I love my family. We always support and care about each other.
I believe my family deserves this recommendation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信的意图；
第二步，根据题干中的要点，介绍家庭成员的基本信息以及家庭活动，说明家庭团结有爱；
第三步，表达自己的期待，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s free time在某人空闲时间
②go for a walk去散步
[高分句型]
①There are three people in my family.（there be句型）
②We always support and care about each other.（and连接并列句）
10．例文：
I Love My Family
Hi, I’m Li Hua. I have a nice family. There are three people in it: my dad, my mom, and me.
My dad is 45. He’s an engineer. He builds bridges and roads. In his free time, he likes reading and traveling. My mom is 43. She’s a teacher. She teaches English at school. She loves cooking and playing sports. When she is free, she often does some running. I’m 15. I’m a student. I like science and math. I also love playing basketball and spending time with my family. We watch movies and go hiking together on weekends.
I’m happy to have such a great family. I love them very much!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。介绍你家有几口人以及分别是谁，引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述。介绍家庭成员的年龄、爱好等信息。
第三步，书写结语。表达你对家人的爱。
[亮点词汇]
① in one’s free time 在某人的空闲时间
② spend time with sb. 和某人共度时光
③ on weekends 在周末
[高分句型]
① There are three people in it: my dad, my mom, and me. (there be句型)
② She loves cooking and playing sports. (and并列结构)
11．例文：
Her name is Ma Zhao Lingyun. She is a 26-year-old girl who lives in Ya ’an, Sichuan Province. She is tall and she has two big eyes. She is kind and outgoing, so her friends like her very much. She is good at Emei Kung Fu. She likes to perform it in public and her acting is very popular among young people. Her favorite food is Mapo tofu because it is delicious.
There are four people in her family. They are her grandfather, her parents and her. Her grandfather loves kung fu and tennis. Her father’s family name is Ma and he likes to spend most of my time fishing. Her mother’s family name is Zhao and she likes playing chess. What a wonderful family!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“介绍马赵凌云”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“年龄、外貌、性格、爱好、家庭情况”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①kind善良的
②outgoing外向的
③spend time (in) doing sth花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①She is a 26-year-old girl who lives in Ya ’an, Sichuan Province.（who引导的限制性定语从句）
②Her favorite food is Mapo tofu because it is delicious.（because引导的原因状语从句）
12．例文：
Dear Mike,
I’m happy that you’ll live with us in Chongqing soon. Now let me tell you something about myself and my family first.
My name is Li Ming. My first name is Ming, and my last name is Li. I am 13 years old. I have a happy family. Look, this is my family photo. This is my mother, Mary. That is my father, Bob. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. I have two sisters. They are Cindy and Helen. My room is big. There is a schoolbag on the bed. There is a basketball under the desk. There are books on the desk. I love my family and my room.
Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍个人的基本信息，包含名字、年龄、喜好等；
第二步，介绍自己的家庭成员，包含父亲和母亲的职业；
第三步，介绍自己的房间，注意使用There be句型。
[亮点词汇]
①a happy family一个幸福的家庭
②on the bed在床上
[高分句型]
①My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher.（and连接并列成分）
②There is a basketball under the desk.（There be句型）
13．例文
My family
My name is Ella. I have a happy family.
My father is an English teacher. His name is Jacky. He is thirty-eight. He is tall and handsome. And he likes playing basketball. My mother is a nurse. She is thirty-seven. She has a round face and a warm smile. She is kind-hearted and caring. She likes cooking. On weekends, I often go to the library and play the piano. Sometimes, we watch TV and listen to music at home.
I love my family and I’m very happy to live with my parents together!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的家庭，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，我有一个幸福的家庭；
第二步，介绍家人的情况，包括年龄、外貌、性格及爱好等内容；
第三步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball打篮球
②kind-hearted善良的
③on weekends在周末
[高分句型]
I love my family and I’m very happy to live with my parents together! (and连接的并列句)
14．例文1
Hi, my name’s Li Chen. There are four members in my family. They’re my parents, my brother and me. My dad is a teacher and my mom is a nurse. My brother and I are middle school students. We study in different schools. We usually enjoy spending time together on weekends. We sometimes go for walks, play sports or watch movies. I love my family because they make me happy.
例文2
Hi, my name’s Li Chen. My family is a lovely group of four. My dad is a middle school teacher who is deeply loved by his students, because he always helps them work out their problems patiently. My mom is a kind nurse with a big heart. My brother and I are both students. We go to the same school, but we are in different grades. On weekends, we have the best time going for walks, playing sports and watching movies. For me, my family is my sunshine, keeping me warm and making my life super fun!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家庭成员以及各自的职业；
第二步，介绍至少三个家庭活动；
第三步，表达自己对这个家的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
②on weekends在周末
③help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
④work out problems解决问题
[高分句型]
①There are four members in my family. (there be句型)
②My dad is a middle school teacher who is deeply loved by his students, because he always helps them work out their problems patiently. (who引导的定语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
15．例文
In my family tree, there are my grandparents, parents, uncle, aunt, sister, brother, cousins and me.
My grandfather is 70 and he is a retired teacher. He likes reading because it enriches his mind. My grandmother, 68, is a housewife. She loves gardening as it makes our home beautiful. My father, 45, is a doctor. He enjoys playing golf for relaxation. My mother, 43, is a nurse. She is fond of cooking delicious food for us. My uncle, 40, is a policeman. He likes watching action movies. My aunt, 38, is a teacher. She is interested in painting. My sister, 8, is an elementary school student. She loves singing as it makes her happy. My brother, 2, is a little baby. My cousins are students. I am 13 and I like drawing. It allows me to express my feelings.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，是一篇看图作文。
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章围绕家谱展开，逐一介绍家庭成员的年龄、职业、兴趣爱好及理由，内容完整，条理清晰，符合题目要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明要介绍家谱中的家庭成员。
第二步，具体阐述。分别描述祖父、祖母、父亲、母亲、叔叔、阿姨、妹妹、弟弟、表兄、表妹和自己的年龄、职业、兴趣爱好及原因，如祖父喜欢阅读是因为能丰富思想，祖母喜欢园艺是因为能美化家庭等。
[亮点词汇]
①retired teacher退休教师
②housewife家庭主妇
③enrich one’s mind丰富某人的思想
④gardening园艺
⑤for relaxation为了放松
⑥be fond of喜欢
⑦action movies动作电影
⑧be interested in对……感兴趣
⑨express one’s feelings表达某人的感情
[高分句型]
He likes reading because it enriches his mind. (because引导的原因状语从句)
16．例文
Dear Tom,
I am Zhang San. I’m 12 years old. I live in a beautiful city, Chengdu. There are 6 people in my family. They’re my parents, grandparents, my little sister and me. I have lots of hobbies like collecting stamps and singing English songs. I want to become your pen friend very much.
Yours,
Zhang San
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：提供了写信人Zhang San的基本信息，包括姓名、年龄、所在城市、家庭成员以及爱好，并要求在信中至少包含5句话。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头介绍自己，包括姓名和年龄，表达想要与对方成为笔友的愿望；
第二步，描述自己所在的城市和家庭情况，展示自己的生活环境；
第三步，分享自己的爱好，并再次强调想要成为对方笔友的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①beautiful 漂亮的
②pen friend 笔友
③like 像
[高分句型]
①There are 6 people in my family.（There be句型）
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