中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
书面表达 议论篇练习
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学习建议
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1.(2024 常州)六年级正在举行"优秀毕业生"评选活动,你认为Alice同学可以当选。请根据提示,写一段推荐词。
提示:可围绕Alice 同学的 good habits,hobbies,dreams等方面展开合理想象,撰写推荐词。
要求:意思连贯,语句通顺,表达准确,书写规范。不少于8句话。
Hello,everyone.I would like to recommend(推荐)Alice for the outstanding Graduate(优秀毕业生).Alice is a good student.
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情绪调整
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2.(2024 滁州期末)写作。
周末小明在家因为想玩手机,和他妈妈发生了激烈的争吵,双方都不愉快。你有过类似的经历吗?假如你是小明你能描述下自己当时的心情吗?你有什么建议给他?
要求:(1)条理清楚,意思连贯,标点正确,书写清晰、规范。
不少于50个单词。
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生活习惯
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3.(2024 盐都区期中)每个人都有自己一些好的习惯,请根据自己的实际情况,以My good habits为题,向大家介绍一下自己在生活、饮食、学习、交通等方面的好的习惯.
要求:
1.不得出现自己的姓名等信息.
2.语句通顺,书写清晰、规范.不少于5句话.
My good habits
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城市建设
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4.(2024 沈阳)To make our city a better place,at home we should clean the table,pick up rubbish,keep our rooms clean,read the newspaper to old people.At school we should put rubbish in the bin,keep quiet in the library.Outside,we should help the blind cross the street,help tourists find their way and give seats to old people.
We should try our best to make our city a better place.
Better city,better life To make our city a better place,what should we do? At home: ●We should clean the(1) . ●We should pick up the(2) . ●We should keep our rooms(3) . ●We should read the(4) to old people. At school: ●We should put the rubbish in the(5) . ●We should(6) (7) in the library. Outside: ●We should help(8) cross the street. ●We should help(9) find their way. ●We should give(10) old people. Try our best to make our city a better place!
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保护环境
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5.(2024 马鞍山)保护环境,人人有责。如何让我们的校园保持干净、美丽呢?请以"Keep Our School Clean"为题,写一篇短文。(要求:至少写5句话,注意语句通顺,前后连贯,条理清晰,其中书写规范占1分。)
Keep Our School Clean
Our school is clean and beautiful.We should
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健康常识
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6.(2024 海安市)杨玲有许多好习惯。请结合思维导图,以"Keep healthy"为题,描述其做法。
要求:(1)包含图中要点,适当发挥想象;
(2)写5句话以上,45词左右,首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Keep healthy
Yang Ling has good habits.
书面表达 议论篇练习
参考答案与试题解析
一.书面表达(共6小题)
1.(2024 常州)六年级正在举行"优秀毕业生"评选活动,你认为Alice同学可以当选。请根据提示,写一段推荐词。
提示:可围绕Alice 同学的 good habits,hobbies,dreams等方面展开合理想象,撰写推荐词。
要求:意思连贯,语句通顺,表达准确,书写规范。不少于8句话。
Hello,everyone.I would like to recommend(推荐)Alice for the outstanding Graduate(优秀毕业生).Alice is a good student. She has many good habits.She likes reading books.She knows a lot of things.She likes to help others.She always pays attention to her lessons.She also likes to dance.She dances very well.She wants to be a dancer.
【分析】写作要求:请写写Alice 同学的好习惯,爱好,梦想等。
重点词汇:konw知道,listen to听,dancer舞蹈家
重点句型:
She wants to be a dancer.
她想成为一名舞蹈家。
Sb. want/wants to do sth.表示某人想要做某事。
【解答】Hello,everyone.I would like to recommend(推荐)Alice for the outstanding Graduate(优秀毕业生).Alice is a good student.She has many good habits.She likes reading books.She knows a lot of things.She likes to help others.She always listens to her teacher well.She also likes to dance.She dances very well.She wants to be a dancer.
大家好。我想推荐爱丽丝作为优秀毕业生。爱丽丝是一名好学生。她有很多好习惯。她喜欢看书。她知道很多东西。她喜欢帮助别人。她总是认真上课。她还喜欢跳舞。她跳得很好。她想成为一名舞蹈家。
2.(2024 滁州期末)写作。
周末小明在家因为想玩手机,和他妈妈发生了激烈的争吵,双方都不愉快。你有过类似的经历吗?假如你是小明你能描述下自己当时的心情吗?你有什么建议给他?
要求:(1)条理清楚,意思连贯,标点正确,书写清晰、规范。
(2)不少于50个单词。
【分析】写作思路:要求就题干所给的材料写一写发生在自己身上的同样的事情,并对小明的遭遇给出建议。
重点词汇:argument争吵,relax放松,strict严格的,angry生气的,surprise惊讶,work out解决。
重点句型:
1.Yesterday I had an argument with my mum because she didn't let me play computer games.
翻译:昨天我和妈妈吵了一架,因为她不让我玩电脑游戏。
分析:because引导原因状语从句,时态为一般过去时。
2.But she said that I should work hard at my study.
翻译:但是她说我应该努力学习。
分析:宾语从句,时态为一般过去时。
【解答】Yesterday I had an argument with my mum because she didn't let me play computer games.I wanted to relax after a busy day of work.But she said that I should work hard at my study.I thought she was too strict and said some bad words to her.I was so angry and sad.Why couldn't she understand me?But to my surprise,she made an apology to me later and said that she shouldn't be so strict.I also told her I was wrong.If we have a fight,we need calm down first and then take a deep breath.We should realize our problems and try to work it out.It's wrong to have a fight with your parents.
昨天我和妈妈吵了一架,因为她不让我玩电脑游戏。忙碌了一天后,我想放松一下。但是她说我应该努力学习。我认为她太严格了,对她说了一些不好的话。我既生气又伤心。为什么她不能理解我?但令我惊讶的是,她后来向我道歉,说她不应该这么严格。我还告诉她我错了。如果我们吵架,我们需要先冷静下来,然后深呼吸。我们应该意识到我们的问题,并努力解决它。和父母吵架是不对的。
3.(2024 盐都区期中)每个人都有自己一些好的习惯,请根据自己的实际情况,以My good habits为题,向大家介绍一下自己在生活、饮食、学习、交通等方面的好的习惯.
要求:
1.不得出现自己的姓名等信息.
2.语句通顺,书写清晰、规范.不少于5句话.
My good habits
For everybody,good habits are helpful.As for me,I have some good habits too.I always get up early in the morning.I exercise three or four times a week.It is very important to keep good eating habits for us.I eat three meals a day.I always follow the traffic rules on my way to school.I read books every day because I want to learn more about the world.As students,we should take up some good habits.They are good for both our health and our study.
【分析】写作思路:认真审题,确定题目中的关键词,写作时条理一定要清晰.时态用一般现在时,根据提示内容可适当发挥,利用自己熟悉的单词句式.当整篇作文写完时,一定要注意仔细检查.
重点词汇:
get up起床,three or four times三四次,important重要的,on my way to school在上学的路上.
重点句型:
1.For everybody,good habits are helpful.对每个人来说,好习惯很有帮助.
2.They are good for both our health and our study.它们对我们的健康和学习都有好处.
【解答】
My good habits
For everybody,good habits are helpful.As for me,I have some good habits too.I always get up early in the morning.I exercise three or four times a week.It is very important to keep good eating habits for us.I eat three meals a day.I always follow the traffic rules on my way to school.I read books every day because I want to learn more about the world.As students,we should take up some good habits.They are good for both our health and our study.
我的好习惯
对每个人来说,好习惯很有帮助.至于我,我也有一些好习惯.我总是早起,一周锻炼三四次.保持良好的饮食习惯对我们来说很重要.我一天吃三顿.我在上学的路上总是遵守交通规则.我每天都读书,因为我想更多地了解这个世界.作为学生,我们应该养成一些好习惯.它们对我们的健康和学习都有好处.
4.(2024 沈阳)To make our city a better place,at home we should clean the table,pick up rubbish,keep our rooms clean,read the newspaper to old people.At school we should put rubbish in the bin,keep quiet in the library.Outside,we should help the blind cross the street,help tourists find their way and give seats to old people.
We should try our best to make our city a better place.
Better city,better life To make our city a better place,what should we do? At home: ●We should clean the(1) table . ●We should pick up the(2) rubbish . ●We should keep our rooms(3) clean . ●We should read the(4) newspaper to old people. At school: ●We should put the rubbish in the(5) bin . ●We should(6) keep (7) quiet in the library. Outside: ●We should help(8) the blind cross the street. ●We should help(9) tourists find their way. ●We should give(10) seats to old people. Try our best to make our city a better place!
【分析】写作思路:根据短文信息将作文补充完整。
重点词汇:
rubbish垃圾,newspaper报纸,quiet安静的,blind盲人,tourists游客。
重点句型:
We should clean the table.
翻译:我们应该擦桌子。
分析:should后跟动词原形,表示应该做什么。
【解答】Better city,better life
To make our city a better place,what should we do?
At home:
●We should clean the(1)table.
●We should pick up the(2)rubbish.
●We should keep our rooms(3)clean.
●We should read the(4)newspaper to old people.
At school:
●We should put the rubbish in the(5)bin.
●We should(6)keep(7)quiet in the library.
Outside:
●We should help(8)the blind cross the street.
●We should help(9)tourists find their way.
●We should give(10)seats to old people.
Try our best to make our city a better place!
城市,让生活更美好
为了让我们的城市变得更好,我们应该做什么
在家:
●我们应该擦桌子。
●我们应该捡垃圾。
●我们应该保持房间干净。
●我们应该把报纸读给老人听。
在学校:
●我们应该把垃圾放在垃圾桶里。
●我们应该保持图书馆的安静。
外部:
●我们应该帮助盲人过马路。
●我们应该帮助游客和他们的方式。
●我们应该给老人让座。
尽我们最大的努力让我们的城市变得更好!
5.(2024 马鞍山)保护环境,人人有责。如何让我们的校园保持干净、美丽呢?请以"Keep Our School Clean"为题,写一篇短文。(要求:至少写5句话,注意语句通顺,前后连贯,条理清晰,其中书写规范占1分。)
Keep Our School Clean
Our school is clean and beautiful.We should clean our classroom evrey day.We mustn't draw pictures on the walls.And we can't throw rubbish on the ground.And we shouldn't spit everywhere.We should do something to protect our environment.We should plant more flowers and trees.It will make our school more beautiful.
【分析】写作思路:根据要求,利用自己熟悉的单词和句型,提出保持学校干净、美丽的建议。当整篇文章写完时,要注意从头检查。
重点词汇:
on the walls在墙上,everywhere到处,environment环境,more更多的。
重点句型:
1.We mustn't draw pictures on the walls.我们不能在墙上画画。
2.We should plant more flowers and trees.我们应该种更多的花和树。
【解答】
Keep Our School Clean
Our school is clean and beautiful.We should clean our classroom every day.We mustn't draw pictures on the walls.And we can't throw rubbish on the ground.And we shouldn't spit everywhere.We should do something to protect our environment.We should plant more flowers and trees.It will make our school more beautiful.
保持学校干净
我们的学校既干净又美丽。我们应该每天打扫教室。我们不能在墙上画画。我们不能把垃圾扔在地上。我们不应该随地吐痰。我们应该做些什么来保护我们的环境。我们应该种更多的花和树。这将使我们的学校更美丽。
6.(2024 海安市)杨玲有许多好习惯。请结合思维导图,以"Keep healthy"为题,描述其做法。
要求:(1)包含图中要点,适当发挥想象;
(2)写5句话以上,45词左右,首句已给出,不计入总词数。
Keep healthy
Yang Ling has good habits. She goes to bed early and gets up early every day.She likes dancing and running.She often goes swimming on weekends.And she has a healthy diet.She eats a lot of vegetables and fruit.She drinks much water and milk.
【分析】写作思路:
要求结合思维导图,以"Keep healthy"为题,描述杨玲保持健康的做法。写5句话以上,45词左右。
重点词汇及短语:
go to bed early早睡;get up起床;go swimming去游泳;diet饮食。
重点句型:
She likes dancing and running.
翻译:她喜欢跳舞和跑步。
分析:like doing sth.喜欢做某事。
【解答】
Keep healthy
Yang Ling has many good habits.She goes to bed early and gets up early every day.She likes dancing and running.She often goes swimming on weekends.And she has a healthy diet.She eats a lot of vegetables and fruit.She drinks much water and milk.
保持健康
杨玲有很多好习惯。她每天睡得早,起得早。她喜欢跳舞和跑步。她经常在周末去游泳。她的饮食也很健康。她吃很多蔬菜和水果。她喝很多水和牛奶。
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