【单元考点培优】Unit 1 A new start 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版（2024）（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版（2024）Unit 1 A new start
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．七年级臻创团队计划开展优秀班集体评选活动。假如你是七年级五班的班长，根据图片提示，向年级陈述你班入选的理由。
clean the classroom say hello to teachers listen carefully in class
注意：
1.包含所有提示内容并适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3.词数：70个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
I think Class 5 is one of the best classes in Grade 7.
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2．设计开学第一课内容，并用画笔记录其中精彩的片段。
My first lesson on the first day of school
Introduce the school My school is…There is…There are…
Meet the classmates My partner is…My best friend is…Chen Jie is from…Mike is…years old.
Give gifts Flowers. Cards. Wishes…
Play games Choose the card. Pass the word…
Do team activities
Get timetables
Safety (安全) Drowning prevention. Traffic safety. Bullying prevention…
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3．同学们进入初中快一个月了，相信大家初中的学校生活一定丰富多彩。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Lily来信询问你在学校第一周的生活情况。请根据下面的思维导图，给她回复一封电子邮件。
要求：
1. 70词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2. 注意分段及行文逻辑；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实信息。
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4．假如你是刚升入七年级的新生李华，你的美国笔友Jack想了解你的初中生活。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，简单介绍你的学校生活。内容包括：
1. 校园生活（上下学时间、课程……）；
2. 课余生活（周末生活、爱好……）；
3. 表达感受。
注意：
1. 词数为70左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack，
Today is my third day in junior high.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你是Peter，你在福州一所初中学习，你的学校正举办文化交流活动，外国留学生们初到学校，想要了解你的校园生活。请你根据以下提示，向留学生们介绍自己的学校生活。
Class time 8:00 a.m.—6:10 p.m.
Subjects Chinese, math, English...
After-class activities Play sports Join Robot club, Paper-cutting club…
Your feelings about your school life fun, colorful ...
参考词汇: have fun doing sth.做某事很开心
注意事项：
1）必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名；
4）词数60左右。
I’m Peter and
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6．阳光中学的“英语周”开始了，其中有一个“Show My School Life”英文视频制作大赛。假如你是Daniel，准备参加这个比赛。请根据下面的导图提示，完成一段视频文字稿。
注意：
1. 必须回答导图中的所有问题，other部分请自由发挥一点；
2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。
My School Life
Hello, everyone! I’m Daniel. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I’d like to tell you about my school life.
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I think my school life is wonderful.
7．假如你是李华，你正在申请中英交换生项目。项目组要求你写一封邮件，介绍自己的基本情况，具体内容如下：
注意：
（1）词数60左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Madam/Sir,
I’m Li Hua, and I’m very happy to tell you something about myself.
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Thanks for your reading, and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假如你是李华，你想参加学校正在举行的英语征文活动，活动主题为“我的校园生活”。征文内容要求积极向上，展示丰富多彩的校园活动。请根据以下提示，完成一篇征文。
★What subjects do you study ★What club(s) are you in ★What are your teachers and classmates like ★What is your school field trip like ★…
要求：
1.按照征文要求进行描述，可适当发挥；
2.文章不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My School Life
My name is Li Hua. I am from Class 1, Grade 7.
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9．亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。请结合要点提示，以“My Wonderful School Life”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。
My Wonderful School Life
美丽校园 1. 我的学校看起来漂亮又现代。 2. 有3栋教学楼，40 间教室，每个教室既干净又明亮。 3. ……
友善师生 1. 我有很多乐于助人的同学和友善的老师。 2. 他们都对我很好，而且很关心我们。同学互帮互助。 3. ……
学科 1. 我最喜欢的学科是生物课。 2. 我们研究许多生物，了解大自然。 3. ……
活动 1. 我们学校有各种各样的社团。 2. 课后活动使我非常快乐。 3. ……
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：90词左右 (征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
My Wonderful School Life
I am Mike, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
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10．亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。请结合图片和要点提示，以“My wonderful school life”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。
注意：
1．所写内容必须包括图中所有信息，并作适当发挥；
2．词数60左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My wonderful school life
I’m Mike, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
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11．假如你是李华，阳光中学的一名新生，经过半学期的学习，你已经非常熟悉你的学校及初一生活了。现在请你根据以下要求写一封电子邮件给你的网友Tommy，来介绍你的初中生活。电子邮件的主题为“My School Life”。
My School Life What’s in your school library, green spaces, …
What subject do you like best And why English, …
What are your after-school activities clubs, field trips
How do you learn at school learn by…, learn… from it
要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3. 词数在100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Tommy,
I am a new student in Sunshine Middle School.
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What’s your school life like Hope to hear from you soon.
Best Wishes
Li Hua
12．假如你是中国七年级学生Teng Fei。你的英国笔友Peter对你的新学校、在校好友以及校园趣闻等情况特别感兴趣。请你根据以下内容提示，给他写一封邮件，介绍你的校园生活和感受。
内容提示：
What’s your new school like And what’s your favorite place
Do you have a new friend at school What do you know about him/her
What is fun in your school
Something more about your school.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数 80 左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you these days I’d like to tell you about my school.
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Yours,
Teng Fei
13．假如你是李华，你在英国的笔友Andy想了解你上初中以来的校园生活。请你根据要点提示，用英语给他写一封邮件介绍你的学习、生活情况。
要点：
1. 你最喜欢的学科以及喜欢它的原因；
2. 你参加的社团以及它带给你的好处；
3. 介绍一位你在学校的好朋友以及你们经常一起做的事；
4. 你对初中校园生活的感受。
注意：
1. 邮件须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
2. 词数80词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 邮件中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Andy,
I am very glad to tell you something about my junior school life.
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How about your study and life I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
14．新学期开始啦，同学们也从小学升入了中学，即将在这里结交新的朋友并开启全新的学习生活。在学习过程中，我们都难免会遇到困难。假如你是John，当你遇到难题的时候，通常会怎么做呢？请你给父母写一封信介绍自己的初中生活 (信的开头和结尾已给出)。
要求：
1. 意思完整，表达流畅；
2. 词数：60左右。
参考词汇：carefully 认真地；poor差的；few很少；others 其他人
Dear Dad and Mum,
Thanks for your letter.
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Yours,
John
15．新学期开始了，同学们也从小学升入了初中，即将在这里结交新的朋友并开启全新的学习生活。在学习过程中，我们都难免会遇到困难。假如你是John，当你遇到难题的时候，通常会怎么做呢？请你给父母写一封信介绍自己的初中生活（信的开头已给出）。
要求：
1. 意思完整，表达流畅。
2. 词数70左右。
参考词汇：carefully认真地 poor差的 few很少 others其他人
【写作指导】
1. 人称：第一人称为主。
2. 时态：回顾过去时，应用一般过去时；表达现在的情况及个人感受时，应用一般现在时。
3. 构思：
开篇点题：Life...is different from...
I have to...
I need to...
说明问题：Like..., I also have...
My English...and I have...
解决问题：So I...
Now I am interested in...
And I found...
表达感受：My school life is...
Dear Dad and Mum,
Thanks for your letter.
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Yours,
John
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
I think Class 5 is one of the best classes in Grade 7. Our class is like a family. All the members work together to make our class a great place to live and study in. We clean the classroom three times a day to keep it clean and tidy. We are polite to our teachers and say hello to them when we see them. As students, we listen carefully in class and work hard. We try our best to help each other to get better grades. Everyone in my class takes part in classroom activities actively. We get along well with each other.
All in all, I think our class should be honored with Excellent Class.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据图片内容进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍打扫教室、问候老师以及上课认真听讲等方面的具体详情；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①three times a day每天三次
②say hello to问候……
③work hard努力学习
④try one’s best尽最大努力
[高分句型]
All in all, I think our class should be honored with Excellent Class. (宾语从句)
2．例文
My first lesson on the first day of school
My school is Sunshine Middle School. There is a library in the school. There are many teaching buildings in our school. My partner is Chen Jie. My best friend is Mike. Chen Jie is from Beijing. Mike is thirteen years old.
On the first day of school, my classmates and I gave each other gifts, including flowers, cards and wishes. We played many interesting games in class. The teacher asked us to choose a card and pass it on. We carried out some team activities. And we also got the timetable. Finally, our teacher stressed some safety problems, such as drowning prevention, traffic safety, bullying prevention and so on.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的学校和同学；
第二步，描述第一节课的内容；
第三步，强调安全的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①each other彼此
②aske sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事
③such as例如
[高分句型]
There are many teaching buildings in our school. (There be句型)
3．例文
Dear Lily,
How do you do I knew you are interested in my new school life. Let me tell you some details. My teachers are friendly but strict with us in our studies. I am interested in all subjects, especially English. There are lots of activities in my school. I take part in a drawing competition. But I’m facing some problems right now. For example, there is more homework than before. I need to manage my time better.
All in all, well begun is half done. I’m sure I will have a wonderful time in junior high school!
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候并引出话题。
第二步，具体介绍在初中遇到的老师、学习和活动情况以及遇到的问题；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with sb. 对某人严格
②be interested in 对……感兴趣
③lots of 许多
④take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①There are lots of activities in my school. (There be句型)
②I’m sure I will have a wonderful time in junior high school! (省略that的宾语从句)
4．例文
Dear Jack,
Today is my third day in junior high. I am very busy every day. My lessons start at 8:30 am, and end at 5:00 pm. I like geography very much because I am interested in different places in the world. I also make many friends in my class and we often talk with each other.
After school, I like playing football with my classmates and I often read books on weekends.
I’m happy to be a junior high school student. My life is busy but full and colourful. I like my life now.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明主题，介绍初中生活；
第二步，细述校园生活，包括课程安排和喜欢的学科；
第三步，说明课外活动以及个人爱好；
第四步，表达对新生活的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends交朋友
②be happy to do sth.开心做某事
[高分句型]
I like geography very much because I am interested in different places in the world. (because引导原因状语从句)
5．例文
I’m Peter and I’m a happy boy. Let me tell you something about my school life. Our class time is from 8:00 a.m. to 6:10 p.m. We have many subjects, such as math, English, Chinese, biology and so on. Of all the subjects, I like math best. I think it’s very easy and interesting. After school we often do outdoor activities. I often play sports and I join Robot club and Paper-cutting club. These activities are not only fun but also make my school life colorful and exciting. I have lots of fun doing these things and really enjoy my time at school!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“让我告诉你一些关于我的学校生活的事情”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——上课时间、科目、课后活动、感受等阐述。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②do outdoor activities做户外活动
③have fun doing sth.做某事很开心
[高分句型]
①I think it’s very easy and interesting. (宾语从句）
②These activities are not only fun but also make my school life colorful and exciting. (not only...but also...连接并列句)
6．例文
My school life
Hello, everyone! I’m Daniel. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I’d like to tell you about my school life.
Our school is big and modern. There are three classroom buildings, a playground and a library. I like the library best and often read different books there. My favourite subject is English because it is very interesting and I am good at it. I also like to help my classmates with their English problems. There are many clubs in our school. In the Art Club, I learn to paint beautiful pictures. Besides, I often play ping-pong with my friends in the Sports Club. My teachers are nice to me and my classmates are quite friendly. I am happy to be a student here.
I think my school life is wonderful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的学校生活，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据思维导图的内容详细介绍自己的学校生活；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
③be nice to sb.对某人友好
[高分句型]
①My favourite subject is English because it is very interesting and I am good at it. (原因状语从句)
②I think my school life is wonderful. (宾语从句)
7．例文：
Dear Madam/ Sir,
I’m Li Hua, and I’m very happy to tell you something about myself.
I’m 13 years old now, and my birthday is on July 6th. There are three people in my family—my father, my mother and me. I like playing football with my classmates after school. Walking with my parents in the park is one of my hobbies. My favourite subject is maths. I like my maths teacher very much, because she is very kind and she always helps me learn maths.
Thanks for your reading, and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍自己的个人信息，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的基本信息，如年龄、生日、家庭信息等；
第二步，具体介绍自己的兴趣爱好和课程学习；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①There are three people in my family—my father, my mother and me. (there be句型)
②Walking with my parents in the park is one of my hobbies.(动名词作主语)
③I like my maths teacher very much, because she is very kind and she always helps me learn maths.(原因状语从句)
8．
例文
My School Life My name is Li Hua. I am from Class 1, Grade 7. Now I would like to share my school life with you.
We have subjects like English, Chinese, Maths, History and so on. Among all these subjects, my favorite one is English. We also have different activities to choose from. Some students like to play sports, while others prefer to join clubs. I enjoy reading, so I join in the Reading Club. I can have the chance to read more books with classmates. People in my school are very friendly. Our teachers are very strict but also very nice. They usually take care of us and they work very hard to help us master the knowledge. Our classmates are very kind. We help each other when we are in trouble.
I think my school life is very wonderful. I love it very much.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，注意不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，介绍自己所学的学科；加入的社团；评价自己的老师和同学等等；
第三步，介绍自己对学校生活的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.与某人分享某事
②join in 加入，参加
③take care of照顾
④each other互相
⑤be in trouble处于困难之中
[高分句型]
①Some students like to play sports, while others prefer to join clubs.（while表示前后对比）
②They usually take care of us and they work very hard to help us master the knowledge.（to do 作目的状语）
9．例文：.
I am Mike, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
My school looks nice and modern. There are three classroom buildings and 40 classrooms. Each classroom is clean and bright. We also have a computer room, a music room, an art room and so on. I have many helpful friends and kind teachers. They are all very kind to me, and they care a lot about us. When I have problems, they are always ready to help us. My favorite subject is Biology. We study many living things and learn about nature. It is really interesting. I also like English. It’s great fun. There are all kinds of clubs in our school. Doing activities after class makes me very happy. I often join the basketball club, because I want to be a basketball player like Yao Ming in the future.
My school life is wonderful. I always have a good time here.
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明自己是新学生，引出要讲述在学校的生活。
第二步，具体阐述。分别介绍学校的设施、师生关系、喜欢的科目、社团活动等方面，详细阐述对生物学科的喜爱及原因，以及参加篮球俱乐部的原因。
第三步，书写结语。总结学校生活很棒，自己在此过得愉快。
［亮点词汇］
①look nice and modern看起来漂亮且现代化
②classroom building教学楼
③all kinds of 各种各样的
④helpful friends乐于助人的朋友
⑤care about关心
⑥join the club参加俱乐部
⑦in the future在未来
［高分句型］
When I have problems, they are always ready to help us. （时间状语从句）
10．例文
My wonderful school life
I’m Mike, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
My school is big and beautiful with many tall buildings and green trees. There are twenty-four classes in our school and each class has about forty students. The students here are very helpful and all the teachers are kind to us. They try their best to make their lessons interesting. Among all my subjects, I like Geography best because I love travelling and I’d like to learn more about different places and cultures.
After school, we do lots of after-school activities. I’m a member of the Reading Club, and I go there twice a week. I also play sport in the playground. It’s great fun to play ball games with friends. At weekends, I often go swimming with my best friend Amy.
My school life is really wonderful, and I always have a great time here.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍校园和友好的老师同学们及最喜欢的科目；
第二步，介绍不同的俱乐部、各种各样的运动及周末活动；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的学校生活的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①helpful乐于助人的
②culture文化
③have a great time玩的开心
[高分句型]
①There are twenty-four classes in our school and each class has about forty students. (there be句型；并列句)
②Among all my subjects, I like Geography best because I love travelling and I’d like to learn more about different places and cultures. (原因状语从句)
11．例文
Dear Tommy,
I am a new student in Sunshine Middle School. Our school is big. We have two classroom buildings. We also have a library on the ground floor and a lot of green spaces.
I like English best. Reading English books helps me learn a lot about the world. After-school activities are great fun too! I like playing football with my friends after class. I am a member of the Football Club. In the club, we often watch football games. It makes me happy. We have a field trip each term. We will go to Sunny Farm to pick apples each term.
At school, I can learn by the field trip. From it, I can learn about teamwork and learn how to grow apples. It is fun.
What’s your school life like Hope to hear from you soon.
Best Wishes
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出“我”的校园生活；
第二步，简单介绍学校状况；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的科目，以及课后活动
第四步，谈谈自己在学校如何学习。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of很多
②a member of……的一员
③learn about了解
[高分句型]
①Reading English books helps me learn a lot about the world. (动名词作主语)
②From it, I can learn about teamwork and learn how to grow apples. (疑问词+动词不定式)
12．例文
Dear Peter,
How are you these days I’d like to tell you about my school.
My new school is large and beautiful, with modern facilities and green spaces. My favorite place is the library, where I enjoy reading and doing homework. I have a new friend, Lily, who is friendly and an excellent student. We often study together. School life is fun with various clubs like the science and drama clubs. I joined the basketball team, which helps me stay fit and meet new people. Once, during a science experiment, we made a volcano eruption, which was messy but hilarious.
My school life is very wonderful and I really enjoy my school life!
Yours,
Teng Fei
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息“内容提示”的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍新学校的基本设施以及最喜欢的地方是什么；
第二步，介绍自己的新朋友；
第三步，介绍学校俱乐部及活动；
第四步，总结你对学校生活的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①My favorite place is the library, where I enjoy reading and doing homework. (where引导非限制性定语从句)
②I joined the basketball team, which helps me stay fit and meet new people. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
13．例文
Dear Andy,
I am very glad to tell you something about my junior school life.
My favorite subject is English. I like it because it can help me learn about different cultures and communicate with people from all over the world. I joined the reading club. Reading in the club makes me more knowledgeable and helps me make more friends. I have a good friend named Tom. We often play basketball together after school. It is not only a good way to keep healthy, but it also enhances our friendship.
I really enjoy my junior high school life. It is full of challenges and joys, which makes me grow up.
How about your study and life I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头文章已给出；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的学科及原因、参加的社团及好处和介绍一位好朋友及常做的事；
第三步，最后表达对初中生活的感受；
第四步，结尾文章已给出。
[亮点词汇]
①all over the world全世界
②not only...but...不但……而且……
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①I like it because it can help me learn about different cultures and communicate with people from all over the world.（原因状语从句）
②It is full of challenges and joys, which makes me grow up.（定语从句）
14．例文：
Dear Dad and Mum,
Thanks for your letter. Life in junior high school is different from that of primary school.
I have to learn more subjects. I need to get ready for my lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. Like other students, I also have some problems. My English is poor and I have few friends here. So I asked my teachers and classmates for help. Now I’m interested in English. And I found that talking with my classmates can help me make friends.
My school life is busy but interesting.
Yours,
John
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己进入初中的感受；
第二步，描述你遇到的难题以及当你遇到难题的时候，通常会怎么做；
第三步，书写结语，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from与……不同
②get ready for为……做准备
③ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
[高分句型]
①My English is poor and I have few friends here. (含有and的并列句)
②And I found that talking with my classmates can help me make friends. (that引导的宾语从句)
15．例文
Dear Dad and Mum,
Thanks for your letter. Life in junior high school is different from that of primary school.
I have to learn more subjects. I need to get ready for my lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. Like other students, I also have some problems. My English is poor and I have few friends here. So I asked my teachers and classmates for help. Now I’m interested in English. And I found that talking with others can help me make friends.
My school life is busy but interesting.
Yours,
John
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，无单词拼写及语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表达初中的生活与小学不同；
第二步，介绍自己在初中遇到的问题及解决办法；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①get ready for为……做准备
②ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①My English is poor and I have few friends here. (and连接的并列句)
②And I found that talking with others can help me make friends. (that引导的宾语从句)
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