【单元考点培优】Unit 2 More than fun 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版（2024）（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版（2024）Unit 2 More than fun
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假设你是705班的班长Li Hua，下学期你的英国笔友Helen将作为交换生来你校学习。她想了解一些情况，请阅读她的电子邮件并回复。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m very happy to study in your school next term. Can you tell me something about your school What’s your school like What’s your favorite subject and why Are there any clubs in your school What club do you join Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Helen
注意:
1.回复的内容必须包含Helen在邮件中询问的信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数70左右；邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Helen,
I’m so happy to know you will come to study in my school.
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Welcome to our school. Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假如你是某初中学校七年级的李明，近期你要参加“This is me!”的英语演讲比赛，请根据思维导图和自身情况，完成演讲稿。
自我介绍： 我最喜爱的科目和原因 我的社团活动 我的未来职业…… This is me! 我的学校： 三栋教学楼，一个图书馆，一个新的运动场 我的老师 我的同学互帮互助 我的感受……
要求：1. 短文须包括提示中的全部信息，可适当发挥；
2. 不得使用个人真实的校名和人名；
3. 词数60左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello! I’m Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I’m happy to tell you something about me. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
3．假如你是阳光中学七年级的学生李华，你看到英语校刊Sunshine Weekly发布的一则俱乐部招新启事，请根据启事的内容与要求，用英语写一封电子邮件申请加入其中一个俱乐部。
JOIN A CLUB!Do you want to make friends, learn something new or have fun Here are three clubs for you—music club, English club and sports club. Which one do you want to join Write an email to tell us: —Your name, age, looks, after-school activities —The club you want to join —Why you want to join it Please send your email to sunshineweekly@ by next Friday. We hope you enjoy yourself in our clubs.
要求：
1.必须包含所有要点信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名；
3.词数不少于60词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．同学们，在2024年初中新版英语教材中，相信你们已经认识了许多新朋友。请从以下两个信息卡中，任选一个朋友，用英文将ta介绍给你的同学。
Information Card Information Card
Name Teng Fei Name Emma
Age 13 Age 12
Birthday December 20th Birthday May 15th
Country China Country America
Appearance short hair, tall Appearance curly hair, beautiful
Class 1 Class 2
Favourite Subject Chinese Favourite Subject History
Hobby play basketball Hobby play the violin
提示：
1. 行文中须包含所选信息表中全部要点，也可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数50词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I have a new friend.
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5．假设你是李华，将去加拿大参加国际中学生冬令营。在冬令营的欢迎会上，为帮助各国学生增进了解，每位学生需用英文介绍自己。请根据以下导图提示写一篇短文进行自我介绍：
要求：
1. 70词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括导图中所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：eating habit (饮食习惯) healthy (健康的)
Dear friends,
I’m happy to join this winter camp. Nice to meet you! Now, let me introduce myself to you all!
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Let’s know each other better and have a good time! Thank you!
6．假如你是李华，你所在的学校设置了众多的特色社团，请你根据所给提示，以 “My School Clubs” 为题写一篇短文，向你的朋友 James 介绍2-3个你们学校的社团，以及你参加后的收获感想。
提示：
要求：1. 语言通顺， 意思连贯，条理清楚，提示供参考。
2. 词数90左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。
Dear James,
There are so many colourful clubs in my school. I would like to tell you something about them.
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What about your school I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Lihua
7．假如你是李华，美国学生 Peter 作为交换生(exchange student)即将来你校进行短暂的交流学习。他给你发了一封电子邮件，想要了解你们学校的情况。请根据邮件内容和你校的实际情况用英语回复。
Dear Li Hua, I am an exchange student from America. Next month, I will go to your school for study. I want to know about your school life. What subjects do you have at school What’s your favorite subject Are there any interesting clubs at your school Which club are you in How do you feel about your school life Write soon. Yours, Peter
要求：
1.内容包括所有要点并适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名。
3.词数80左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Peter,
Glad to get your email.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
8．时光匆匆，仿佛还是昨日刚踏入初中校园的我们已完成了第一学期的学业。学期末，阳光中学组织了“最美新生”评选活动。七（1）班的李娟想要参与评选，请你以李娟的身份完成一篇演讲稿。
外貌 又高又苗条，黑色的长发，戴眼镜；
喜好 擅长……
最喜爱的学科 最喜欢生物，因为可以更多地了解大自然；
健康的生活方式 认为保持健康很重要；经常…… (自由发挥1点)
最喜欢的中国节日及原因 …… (自由发挥1 点)
计划 准备用自己的零花钱…… (自由发挥1点)
要求：
1.包含所有要点；
2.注意用第一人称表达；不得出现真实信息；
3.语法正确，书写认真，词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Good afternoon, teachers and friends! Glad to be here to take part in this activity. Let me tell you something about myself.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
9．为增进校园文化交流，育英中学将与结对的英国学校开展一次“云访学校”的线上活动。假如你是该校学生代表Teng Fei，请根据下面导图和问题，向他们介绍你们的学校生活。
Our School Life What is our school like (beautiful ...) What do we do at school (do exercises ...)
What subjects do we learn (Chinese …) What’s our favorite subject Why (useful ...)
What clubs do we have (the nature club …) What can we do in the clubs (watch birds …)
要求：
（1）可适当增加内容，以使行文流畅；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数60词左右，开始语和结束语已给出，不计入总词数。
Our School Life
Hello, everyone! I’m Teng Fei. I am happy to introduce our school life.
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We love our school, and we enjoy our colorful school life!
10．你校英语社团正在开展以“Making Friends Through my Hobby”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下要求写一篇英语短文，向社团投稿。
要求：
1.词数80左右；
2.文中须包含所有要点。所给词汇仅供参考选择使用。
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要 点 参考词汇
What is your hobby reading .../ collecting.../ mountain-climbing/...
How does it help you become friends share...with .../ talk about.../ do...together / have...in common /...
What can you learn from your hobby get knowledge about.../ know a lot.../ understand.../...
Everyone has hobbies. For me,
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11．学校音乐俱乐部正在招募新成员。请你根据下面表格中的提示信息，用英语给该俱乐部的负责人Mrs. Brown写一封电子邮件，向她介绍自己并申请加入该俱乐部。
Name Chen Jiaxuan
Age 13
Class Class 4, Grade 7
Why I love music Exciting. My parents are both music lovers.
What I can do Sing. Play the violin. Play the guitar.
Telephone number 1850633299
Dear Mrs. Brown,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Chen Jiaxuan
12．假如你是李明，你校英语读书社团正在招募新成员，你想加入该社团。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封申请信，可根据自己的实际情况补充相关信息。
提示：
(1)介绍你的基本信息；
(2)介绍你的兴趣爱好；
(3)说明你想加入该社团的理由。
要求：
(1)表达清楚，但不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校；
(2)必须包括提示中所有要点内容，可适当发挥；
(3)词数：70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Best wishes,
Li Ming
13．假定你是李华，最近收到美国笔友Peter的电子邮件，要来你的学校做交换生。请你阅读后回复。词数70左右。
Dear Li Hua, I’m going to visit your school next term for an exchange visit. I’m really excited about it. I’m writing to you because I have something I’d like to know. First, can you tell me how you spend your school day It’s important for me to plan my daily routine. Second, I’m interested indifferent clubs in your school. Tell me which club I can join after school and why I hope to hear from you soon. All the best. Peter
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺、行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to hear that you will visit our school next term.
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Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
14．临近学期末，七年级1班组织学习小组内互评推选出五位学生成为 “Star of Our Class” 假如你是小组长 Sandy，请根据下面表格提示，写一封推荐信给李老师，推荐你的组员 Millie成为 “Star of Our Class”.
基本信息 Millie, 15岁, 长头发, 高且苗条
品质 善良，有礼貌，安静且腼腆
爱好及擅长 1.对历史感兴趣，爱好阅读 2.擅长运动，棒球俱乐部一员 3.经常穿棉质连衣裙，因为…… 4.喜欢传统节日，例如春节 (举例两个庆祝活动)
你的评价 享受校园生活；健康生活方式；明智管理零花钱 (每点适当展开)
注意：
1.词数80左右，开头已为你写好，不计入总数。
2.文章必须包括所有的要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺。
3.文章中不得出现真实姓名、地点、校名等相关信息。
Dear Miss Li,
All the members in our group think Millie can be the “Star of Our Class”.
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Yours,
15．假如你是李平，你们学校的烹饪、读书、自然俱乐部正在招募新成员，请结合自己的实际情况，根据下面的表格给俱乐部负责人Mike写一封电子邮件，申请加入其中的一个俱乐部。
What club are you interested in cooking club, book club or nature club
Why do you want to join the club love... learn more about... ...
What’s your abilities and interests I can... I am really interested in... ...
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
2. 根据要求和表格中的信息，完成邮件；
3. 字迹工整，表达通顺，意思连贯；
4. 至少60词。
Dear Mike,
I want to join your club.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ping
16．假如你是李雷，在网上看到了英国中学生Eric的个人简介以及寻找中国笔友的信息，对此你很感兴趣。请你根据以下内容，给他写一封电子邮件，向他介绍自己，并表达想要成为他笔友的愿望。
学校及年龄 兴华小学；12岁
擅长的活动 打篮球；弹吉他 ……
喜欢的学科 美术 ……
参考词汇：primary school (n.小学)
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 字数60词左右。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Lei
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Helen,
I’m so happy to know you will come to study in my school. Our school is modern with beautiful gardens and excellent facilities. My favorite subject is English because I enjoy communicating with people from different cultures. We have various clubs like Debate, Music and Robotics. I joined the Photography Club where we learn creative skills and organize exhibitions.
Welcome to our school. Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的学校及学校的基础设施；
第二步，介绍最喜爱的科目及原因；
第三步，介绍学校的俱乐部。
[亮点词汇]
①excellent facilities完善的基础设施
②communicate with sb和某人交流
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject is English because I enjoy communicating with people from different cultures. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I joined the Photography Club where we learn creative skills and organize exhibitions. (where引导的定语从句)
2．例文
Hello! I’m Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I am happy to tell you something about me.
First, my school is modern and beautiful. There are 3 teaching buildings, a library and a new sports field. It’s a good place to learn and play.
Second, the teachers are kind and they always help me with my study. And my classmates are nice and I make many good friends, we help each other and learn from each other.
Third, my favorite subject is math. We learn how to work out math problems in class. I think math feels like a magic and is really fun. And I join the science club. I want to be a scientist in the future.
As you see, my school life is great and colourful. And I’m friendly and outgoing. Would you like to make friends with me
Thanks for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，详细介绍自己的校园以及学校生活；
第三步，介绍自己最喜爱的科目、社团活动等方面后，总结自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
②make friends交朋友
③learn from each other彼此学习
[高分句型]
①There are 3 teaching buildings, a library and a new sports field.（There be句型）
②I think math feels like a magic and is really fun.（宾语从句）
3．例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. I am 13 years old, and I have a strong interest in English. In my free time, I enjoy reading English books and watching English movies.
I would like to join the English club because I want to improve my English speaking and writing skills. I believe that by joining the club, I will have more opportunities to practice English with my classmates and learn from experienced teachers. Also, I hope to make new friends who share the same interest in English.
I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，写一封电子邮件。
② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主。
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，需注意不要遗漏信息提示中的要求，适当添加细节，使内容更具体、生动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信目的。在开头介绍自己，包括姓名、年龄、兴趣爱好等，并说明写信的目的是申请加入某个俱乐部。
第二步，详细说明写作内容。根据提示内容，写明自己想加入的俱乐部，并说明加入该俱乐部的原因。例如，可以从兴趣、个人提升、结交朋友等方面展开，使文章更有说服力。
第三步，书写结语。表达对加入俱乐部的期待，并感谢对方的阅读和考虑。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
② improve my skills提高我的技能
③have more opportunities to有更多机会去……
④make new friends结交新朋友
[高分句型]
Joining the English club will give me more chances to practice my English and make new friends. (动名词作主语)
4．参考范文1：
I have a new friend. His name is Teng Fei. He is 13 years old. His birthday is on December 20th. He is from China. He has short hair. He is tall. He is in Class 1. His favourite subject is Chinese. He likes playing basketball after school.
参考范文2：
I have a new friend. Her name is Emma. She is 12 years old. Her birthday is on May 15th. She is from America. She has curly hair. She is beautiful. She is in Class 2. Her favourite subject is history. She likes playing the violin at weekends.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据信息卡内容介绍自己的一位新朋友，不得遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。介绍自己有一位新朋友。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍新朋友的信息，包括：年龄、国籍、外貌、爱好等。
[亮点词汇]
①be from来自
②after school放学后
[高分句型]
He likes playing basketball after school.（动名词作宾语）
5．例文
Dear friends,
I’m happy to join this winter camp. Nice to meet you! Now, let me introduce myself to you all!
I’m Li Hua from China. I’m twelve years old. My birthday is on March 10th. To keep healthy, I have good habits. I like healthy food. I get up and go to bed early every day. I am good at playing sports. After class, I usually play basketball with my friends. I also like playing the guitar and I can play very well. My favorite subject is biology, because my biology teacher is so excellent. She makes everyone in her class feel special.
Let’s know each other better and have a good time! Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括导图中所有要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明自己很高兴参加冬令营，引出自我介绍的主题；
第二步，从多个方面进行自我介绍；
第三步，书写结尾，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy 保持健康
②be good at 擅长
[高分句型]
①I also like playing the guitar and I can play very well. (含and的并列复合句)
②My favorite subject is biology, because my biology teacher is so excellent. (because引导原因状语从句)
6．例文：
Dear James,
There are so many colourful clubs in my school. I would like to tell you something about them.
Culture Club is a popular club. Here students can learn a lot about different Chinese festivals and activities. For example, we always put up paper-cuts on windows in the spring festival. We’re so proud of our Chinese culture.
If you're interested in how to keep healthy, it’s good to join the Health Club. You can learn how to have a healthy diet and lifestyle here. And I’m a member of the Fashion Club. I can design clothes with different styles by myself. Now I have the courage to show my idea and try to enjoy the beauty of the world.
General speaking, colourful clubs are of great help to us and we really enjoy our school life.
What about your school I hope to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Lihua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“My School Clubs”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）；
第二步，具体介绍“文化俱乐部”和“健康俱乐部”，并谈谈自己参加了什么俱乐部；
第三步，讲述自己的收获和感想，并结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①learn a lot about学习很多关于……的内容
②for example比如
③put up张贴
④be proud of为……感到自豪
⑤be good to对……有益
[高分句型]
①If you're interested in how to keep healthy, it’s good to join the Health Club.（if引导的条件状语从句）
7．范文：
Dear Peter,
Glad to get your email. Welcome to our school! I’m happy to tell you about my school life. We have many subjects, such as Chinese, Math, English, History, and Science. My favorite subject is English because it helps me understand different cultures.
There are many interesting clubs in our school, like the Basketball Club, the Dance Club, and the Science Club. I’m a member of the Science Club. We do lots of exciting experiments and learn new things.
I feel very happy with my school life. The teachers are kind and my classmates are friendly. You’ll enjoy your time here for sure.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏邮件中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己有哪些科目以及自己最喜欢的科目；
第二步，介绍自己学校的俱乐部以及自己在什么俱乐部；
第三步，最后对于学校生活的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① such as比如
② lots of大量的
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because it helps me understand different cultures.（because引导的原因状语从句）
8．例文
Good afternoon, teachers and friends! Glad to be here to take part in this activity. Let me tell you something about myself.
My name is Li Juan. I am in Class 1, Grade 7. I’m very tall and slim with long black hair and I wear glasses.
I am good at singing and drawing. My favourite subject is Biology because I want to know more about the nature. I believe it is important to keep healthy, so I eat fruits and vegetables regularly. Meanwhile, I usually walk to school everyday. I like the Spring Festival best because our family can get together to have a big party.
I plan to use my pocket money to buy basketballs for children in poor areas. Of course, I also want to join the Helping Hands Club to help more people next year.
Thanks for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的要求，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己的姓名，外貌等基本信息。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。介绍喜好及最喜爱的学科和原因。
第三步：介绍自己健康的生活方式及最喜欢的中国节日及原因。最后介绍自己的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②regularly有规律地
③keep healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①I believe it is important to keep healthy, so I eat fruits and vegetables regularly. (宾语从句）
②I’m very tall and slim with long black hair and I wear glasses. (and表并列)
9．例文：
Our School Life
Hello, everyone, I’m Teng Fei. I am happy to introduce our school life.
My school is beautiful and great. There are many modern buildings. We spend most of our time having classes in the classroom building. We do exercises and raise the flag on the sports field. In the dining hall, we can have all kinds of delicious food. It’s my favorite place. For subjects, we have Chinese, maths, English, history, biology, geography, IT, PE and so on. My favorite subject is English, because it’s important and useful. For clubs, we have many different fun clubs. I join the nature club. In the club we can watch the birds and collect plants and insects. It’s fun.
We love our school, and we enjoy our colorful school life!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点围绕学校环境、在校活动、学习科目、最喜欢的科目及原因、学校社团及社团活动展开，考生需涵盖这些要点，可适当增添内容让文章更丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步：使用给定的开头引出主题；
第二步：先描述学校的样子，接着列举在校做的事，然后介绍学习的科目，再说明最喜欢的科目及原因，最后介绍社团及社团活动；
第三步：用给定的句子结尾，表达对学校生活的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth. 花费时间做某事
②do exercises 做锻炼
③all kinds of 各种各样的
[高分句型]
①There are many modern buildings. （there be句型）
②My favorite subject is English, because it’s important and useful. （because引导原因状语从句）
10．例文
Everyone has hobbies. For me, I like playing basketball. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. By playing basketball, I have made many friends who have the same hobby as me. We often share something about basketball with each other. At the same time, by playing basketball, I not only exercise my physique, I also learn the spirit of cooperation.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍自己的爱好是什么；
第二步，介绍这个爱好如何帮助你们成为朋友；
第三步，阐述你从该爱好中学到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing喜欢做……
②make friends交朋友
③at the same time同时
[高分句型]
①If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. (if引导条件状语从句）
②By playing basketball, I have made many friends who have the same hobby as me. (who引导定语从句)
11．例文：
Dear Mrs Brown,
I’m writing this email to you because I want to join the school music club. My name is Chen Jiaxuan. I’m a 13-year- old girl. I’m in Class 4, Grade 7. I love music very much because it’s exciting and my parents are both music lovers. I can sing a lot of songs. I can play the violin very well. And I am very good at playing the guitar. If I can join the school music club, I’ll be very happy.
My telephone number is 18506332999. Please call me. Many thanks to you.
Yours,
Chen Jiaxuan
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己写电子邮件的目的；
第二步，介绍自己的个人信息；
第三步，描述自己爱音乐的原因以及可以做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
① want to do sth. 想要做某事
② be good at...擅长……
[高分句型]
①I love music very much because it’s exciting and my parents are both music lover.（原因状语从句）
②If I can join the school music club, I’ll be very happy.（条件状语从句）
12．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Ming. I’m thirteen years old. I am writing to express my interest in joining the English Reading Club. I have many hobbies. Such as running, drawing and so on. I am very interested in reading English as well, so I am eager to join this club. For one thing, reading challenging English books will help improve my English level. For another, I can make more friends and share my ideas with them. I would be grateful if you could consider my application.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己的信息并表明写信目的；
第二步，表明自己想加入社团的原因；
第三步，表示期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be eager to do sth渴望做某事
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①For one thing, reading challenging English books will help improve my English level. (动名词作主语)
②I would be grateful if you could consider my application. (if引导的条件状语从句)
13．One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad to hear that you will visit our school next term. We start school at 8 a. m. in the morning and have classes until lunchtime. After lunch, we have 4 classes and then school finishes at 5:30 p. m.. Then we can study in the classroom or go to a club.
There are many clubs at our school. You can join the Art Club if you like drawing. They meet after school and make beautiful pictures. Or, if you like playing sports, the Sports Club is a good choice. It’s fun and exciting. You can take exercise and make new friends, too. Also, you can learn something about teamwork and learn to have a healthy lifestyle. I hope you have a great time here!
Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给的开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据Peter询问的课程安排进行详细介绍；
第三步，介绍学校的社团并给出自己的建议，书写结语，期待对方的来访。
[亮点词汇]
①until lunchtime 直到午餐时间
②a good choice 一个好的选择
③take exercise 做锻炼
[高分句型]
①You can join the Art Club if you like drawing. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I hope you have a great time here! (省略that的宾语从句)
14．例文：
Dear Miss Li,
All the members in our group think Millie can be the “Star of Our Class”.
Millie, a 15-year-old girl with long hair, stands tall and slim among us. She is kind-hearted and polite, always displaying a quiet and shy demeanor. Her love for history makes her a keen reader, diving into books during her free time. Besides, she excels in sports and is an active member of our baseball club. Millie often wears cotton dresses, choosing comfort over fashion. She adores traditional festivals, especially celebrating Spring Festival with family gatherings and fireworks, and Mid-Autumn Festival by enjoying mooncakes together.
Millie truly enjoys her school life, participating actively in various activities. She leads a healthy lifestyle, balancing studies with sports. Moreover, she wisely manages her pocket money, saving for what she truly values.
Yours,
Sandy
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为推荐信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，用于描述Millie的现状和品质；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括Millie的基本信息、品质、爱好及擅长、以及你的评价，考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节，以突出Millie为何能成为“Star of Our Class”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍被推荐人。在开头已经给出“All the members in our group think Millie can be the ‘Star of Our Class’.”的基础上，可以进一步简述Millie的基本信息，如年龄、外貌等，为后文的详细介绍做铺垫；
第二步，具体阐述推荐理由。从Millie的品质、爱好及擅长、以及你的评价三个方面进行详细介绍：品质方面，强调她的善良、有礼貌以及安静腼腆的性格；爱好及擅长方面，详细阐述她对历史的兴趣、阅读习惯、运动才能以及她对传统节日的喜爱和庆祝方式；你的评价方面，展开描述她享受校园生活、拥有健康生活方式以及明智管理零花钱的能力；
第三步，书写结语。可以表达对Millie的肯定，并再次强调推荐她成为“Star of Our Class”的意愿。
[亮点词汇]
①with long hair长发
②kind-hearted善良的
③displaying a quiet and shy demeanor表现出安静害羞的举止
④excel in擅长
⑤participate in参加
⑥balance with平衡
⑦manage pocket money管理零花钱
[高分句型]
①Millie, a 15-year-old girl with long hair, stands tall and slim among us. (with的复合结构作定语)
②Her love for history makes her a keen reader, diving into books during her free time. (现在分词短语作状语，表示伴随)
③She leads a healthy lifestyle, balancing studies with sports. (现在分词短语作状语，表示方式)
15．例文
Dear Mike,
I want to join your book club. I love reading books and I want to learn more about different cultures and stories. I can read English books very well and I have already read many books in my free time. I am really interested in discussing books with others and sharing my thoughts. Joining the book club will help me improve my reading and communication skills. I believe I will enjoy and learn a lot.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己对什么俱乐部感兴趣；
第二步，描述自己为什么想要加入这个俱乐部；
第三步，描述自己的能力和兴趣。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③help sb do sth.帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
I believe I will enjoy and learn a lot. (省略that的宾语从句)
16．例文
Dear Eric,
　　I am Li Lei, a 12-year-old student from Xinghua Primary School in China. I am very interested in becoming your pen friend. I am good at playing basketball and I often play it with my friends after school. I like playing the guitar in my spare time as well. My favorite subject is art because it allows me to express my creativity. I look forward to hearing from you and learning more about you!
Yours,
Li Lei
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我想成为你的笔友”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学校、年龄、擅长的活动和喜欢的学科”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in my spare time在我的业余时间
②express my creativity表达我的创造力
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is art because it allows me to express my creativity. (原因状语从句)。
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