【单元考点培优】Unit 3 Family ties 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版（2024）（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版（2024）Unit 3 Family ties
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假设你是王华，请按下面表格要求写一封信，向你的新笔友Mike介绍一下你自己，你的家人，你的学校和你最喜欢的科目及原因。
要求：
(1)60词左右(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名，班级和学校；
(3)短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
写作要点 具体内容
1. Yourself ●age: …… ●hobby: ……
2. Your family ……
3. Your school ● small/ big…… ●There is/ are……
4. Your favourite subject and reasons. ●My favourite subject is…… Because……
Dear Mike,
I am so happy to write to you.
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Looking forward to your reply (期待你的答复).
Yours,
Wang Hua
2．家是温馨的港湾，为我们遮风挡雨；家是快乐生活的源泉，滋润着我们的心灵。育才中学即将举办一场主题为“A Happy Family”的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请根据图文信息写一篇不少于50词的演讲稿，介绍你的一家。
写作要求：
1. 包含图文信息的全部内容，可适当拓展；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
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3．下周，学校将举行“和谐家庭”主题演讲活动。假如你是李佳乐，请你根据下面的提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你自己和你的家人。
My Family My name, age (12岁)...
My family members and their jobs
Our likes or activities
...
参考词汇：farmer 农民；office worker办公室职员
写作要求：
1）文中须包含所给的所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
2）短文通顺连贯，语言表达准确，书写规范整洁；
3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
4）词数70左右。
My Family
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4．假如你是李华（Li Hua），请给你在美国的网友David写一封电子邮件，介绍一下你的家庭生活（重点围绕 a family moment这个主题）。
要求如下：
1. 邮件内容健康。
2. 内容至少包括：
1）表达关心问候；
2）你的家庭成员；
3）你的家庭生活片段（family moment）；
4）你的家庭生活感受；
3. 不能出现你的学校名称和你的真实姓名。
4. 词数不少于80。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．学校举办了一期以“介绍我的家庭”为主题的国际生交流活动。请你从下方表格左栏中选取至少两个要点，写一篇英语文章，描述你的家庭和家庭生活，在交流活动中作介绍。
写作要点 参考内容
Family members Who are they What are their jobs …
Family activities What do you like to do together …
A family moment Who is there What are you doing How do you feel …
Useful expressions:
◆There are four people ... They are... ... years old. ... is a doctor.
◆We like to … We often …
◆This photo shows ... You can see ... I feel ...
要求：（1）文章内容需要包括表格左边栏的至少两个要点，表格右边栏的内容供你参考，表格下方的Useful expressions供你选择使用。
（2）自己可适当发挥，词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
（3）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
Hello, every one. I’m very happy to introduce my family to you.
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6．假如你是王平，请阅读英国笔友Eric给你发的邮件，并根据邮件内容给他回一封信。
To: Wangping@ Subject: You and Your Family Hi Wang Ping, Next Saturday I’ll be with you in Jinhua. I really want to know something about you and your family. How many people are there in your family What do your parents do What do they like Please tell me as much as you can. I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Eric
注意：
(1)回信须包含Eric邮件中的要点问题，可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息；
(3)词数：80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
Glad to know you will come. Let me tell you something about
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Hope to see you soon!
Wang Ping
7．同学们，进入初中以来，你们是不是结交了许多好朋友呢？假如下面表格里是你好朋友的个人信息，请以“My Best Friend” 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最好的朋友。
姓名 Ann 年龄 12 生日 October 21st 班级 七(5)班
家庭 爸爸，妈妈和妹妹
运动 爱好网球，加入了体育俱乐部，不喜欢篮球
学科 最喜欢数学
要求：
1. 要点齐全，可适当拓展细节，以使行文连贯。
2. 60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
My Best Friend
I’m very happy to make some new friends this term.
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8．临近寒假，你们学校七年级英语社团将组织一次有关“精彩时刻剪影”的英语征文活动。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇征文稿，描述你在工作日、周末和假期的快乐时光。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 字数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文章必须包含所给提示，可适当发挥；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
My Happy Time
I always have a happy time with my friends and my family.
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9．亲爱的同学们：
这个学期即将结束，相信你们更加适应忙碌又充实的初中生活了，在学校，你最喜欢哪一天呢？现在，学校英语报社正在开展以“My Favourite Day at School”为主题的征文活动，请你根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇英语短文向报社投稿，介绍你在学校最喜欢的一天。
写作要点 参考句型
1. What’s your favourite day at school On my favourite day, I have... My favourite activity is... I like this day because...
2. What subjects and activities do you have on that day
3. Why do you like that day
要求：
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数60词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite Day at School
Everyone has a favourite day at school. As for me, my favourite day is
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10．谁言寸草心，报得三春晖。母亲节即将到来，你准备做些什么来表达你对你母亲的爱和感激之情呢？
提示问题：请根据以下提示问题写一篇英语短文。
1. How old is your mother
2. What does your mother do
3. What does your mother like
4. What do you want to do to show your love for your mother
写作要求：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 词数60左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
提示词：watch TV, factory, buy flowers, cook
Mother’s Day is coming. I want to do something for my mother.
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11．请根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
某英文网站正在开展以“This is My Home”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你家里几间房，都有什么房间，你和家人在家里一般都做什么，以及你对家的感受。
提示词语：living room, watch TV, cook food, warm
提示问题：
● How many rooms are there in your home and what are they
●What do you often do with your family at home
●How do you feel about your home
I’m Li Hua and I’d like to introduce my home to you.
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12．假如你是李鑫，你班上有一名来自英国的交换生Jack，他要挑选寄宿家庭，你想邀请他住在你家里。请根据图片提示内容写一封信，向他介绍一下你和你的家人。
提示内容：1. How many people are there in the photo
2. Who are they and what do they look like
3. What are their hobbies
4. …
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等) ；
4. 词数：不少于50词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数) 。
Dear Jack,
I am Li Xin. I am happy to introduce my family to you. Here is my family photo.
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Yours,
Li Xin
13．家人是生命中最温暖的存在，家庭是永远的心灵港湾。英语周报将举办以“My Happy Family”为主题的征文比赛。假设你是李辉，请你根据图片提示，用英语写一篇短文，向英语周报投稿，介绍你的家庭成员，并表达对家人的爱。
参考信息：
要求：
1.根据图片提示，至少介绍2-3个家人的详细信息，要有适当的结尾；
2.卷面整洁，书写工整，标点符号使用正确；
3.文章中不能出现真实姓名、学校等个人信息；
4. 字数60词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! My name’s Li Hui. I live in a happy family. Here is a photo of my family. I’m the little boy with short hair, and I like reading books. My grandma is on the left. She is
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14．假设你是李梅，你们学校要举办英语写作比赛，主题是“家人”，请根据以下提示写一篇短文。
提示：
（1）你的姐姐叫李敏，她十五岁，上九年级。
（2）你们俩关系很好，经常一起读书，享受在一起的时光。
（3）你们经常参加比赛，相互帮助和鼓励。
（4）有时你们没有赢得比赛，但很开心。
（5）你觉得……
要求：
（1）词数：60至70词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）要点齐全，可适当发挥，不必逐字翻译。
（3）文中不能出现自己的真实姓名。
参考词汇：鼓励：encourage
I am Li Mei. I have a sister.
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15．学校要举办以“我参与，我快乐，Everyone is NO.1”为主题的英语活动，要求学生们通过介绍自己，找到和自己兴趣爱好相同的人。假如你是其中一员，请根据下列提示写一篇英语短文做自我介绍。
Name Li Han
Age (年龄) …
Birthday …
Family members father, mother...
Hobbies sports, sing songs…
Eating habits (饮食习惯) healthy food…
Favourite subject(s)/why English...
Character (性格) nice, kind..
注意：
1. 词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，书写要规范。
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Good morning, everyone! I’m very glad to introduce (介绍) myself here.
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That’s all. Thank you.
16．春节马上就要到来了，对于中国人来说，节日通常意味着放下工作，享受家庭团聚的欢乐时光。但是我的妈妈仍然在节日时坚守自己的工作岗位。请根据以下提示写一篇短文。
1. 我的妈妈是一名急诊科的医生，在节日期间，她经常更加忙碌。
2. 有时候她必须在没有休息的情况下工作20个小时。
3. 她的职责意味着她在节日期间很少有时间陪家人。
4. 但是她从未后悔选择成为一名急诊医生。
5. 我爱我的妈妈，并且我将会支持我的妈妈，因为她的努力工作比欢庆的烟花更加璀璨。
要求：
1. 词数不少于60词；
2. 可以适当的增加内容，以使行文连贯。
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17．假如你是某中学七年级的新生李明。在英语课上，老师让你介绍你的基本信息，爱好和你的家庭情况。请根据下列表格内容写一份发言稿。
Name Li Ming
Character(性格) quiet/ kind/ friendly/ warm ...
Hobby swimming/ reading/ running/ playing basketball...
Family activity have a picnic(野餐)/ climb mountains/ watch films...
注意：1. 包括所有加粗要点，信息仅供参考，可适当拓展；
2. 写作词数应为80-100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3. 条理清晰、意思连贯、语句通顺、语法正确。
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Ming. I’m happy to stand here to introduce my hobby and my family to you.
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18．假如你是李华，你校将开展以“My Daily Life”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文参加此次活动。
提示：
1.时间安排：六点起床；六点半吃早饭；八点上课；
2.主要活动：上午4节课，下午3节课；帮助同学学习；打篮球；晚上……
3.你的感受:……
参考词汇: get up, breakfast, lesson, help, play basketball, do my homework, …
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于50词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。
My Daily Life
I’m Li Hua. I want to tell you about my daily life.
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19．家，是我们生命的起点，心灵的归宿，也是我们与亲人共同编织美好生活的港湾。在家中，我们感受到温暖安全，因为那里有家人的关爱和陪伴。假如你是Ella，请以“My family”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍你的家庭。
写作内容：(1) 年龄；(2) 外貌；(3) 性格；(4) 爱好；(5) ……
写作要求：(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
(2) 内容必须包含所给信息，并适当发挥。
(3) 词数60左右 (作文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
(4) 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
My family
My name is Ella. I have a happy family.
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20．假设你是彭超，你的叔叔有一个农场。请根据下面所给要点，写一篇短文，介绍一下这个农场。
要点：
1. 农场很大，有许多花和树；
2. 农场里有一所房子 (house)，里面有20头猪 (pig) 和30只鸡 (chicken)；
3. 农场的中间是一个大湖 (lake)，湖面有40只鸭子 (duck)。
提示：
1. My name is...
2. My uncle has a big farm with...
3. There is...on the farm...
4. There are...pigs and…chickens...
5. In the middle of...is...
6. There are…ducks on the lake.
要求：
1. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确；
2. 50～60词。
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
Dear Mike,
I am so happy to write to you. My name is Wang Hua. I’m 12 now. I like reading and music. I live with my parents and younger sister. We have a small but cozy home. I study at a local school which is famous for its friendly environment. It’s very big and there are many buildings. My favorite subject is English because it’s fascinating to learn about different cultures and communicate with people from around the world.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己和家庭；
第二步，简单介绍自己的学校；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的科目和理由。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②learn about了解
③communicate with和……交流
[高分句型]
①I study at a local school which is famous for its friendly environment.(which引导定语从句)
②My favorite subject is English because it’s fascinating to learn about different cultures and communicate with people from around the world.(because引导原因状语从句)
2．例文
A Happy Family
My name is Li Hua. Now let me introduce my family. There are three people in my family. They are my dear parents and me. My father is a doctor. He likes eating beef noodles. He plays football every day to keep fit. My mother is a teacher. She likes to eat Mapo tofu. She likes hiking. I’m 13 years old. I like reading books because I want to learn more knowledge. Oscar is a little dog. It’s very cute. It likes eating meat.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍家里有几口人，他们是谁；
第二步，具体介绍家庭成员的职业、喜欢吃的食物以及做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①play football 踢足球
②keep fit 保持健康
③like doing sth. 喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①There are three people in my family. (there be句型)
②I like reading books because I want to learn more knowledge. (because引导的原因状语从句)
3．例文
My Family
Hello, my name is Li Jiale, I’m twelve years old. I’m a student in Grade Seven. Let me tell you about my family.
There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is a worker, and my mother is a doctor. My sister is a student in Grade Eight. We’re in the same school. My family like sports. We often do sports at night, such as running and walking. Sometimes we play games at home.
I love my family. That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息并引出主题；
第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，介绍家庭成员的相关信息；
第三步，表达热爱自己的家人，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②at home在家
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family.（there be句型）
②My father is a worker, and my mother is a doctor.（and连接并列句）
4．例文
Dear David,
How is it going I am so happy to talk with you again. Let me tell something about my family life. There are 4 people in my family. They are my father, mother, sister and I. We all love sports. My father likes playing table tennis. I love playing football. My mother is good at playing tennis and my sister is a good swimmer. Every weekend we go out to do sports in the morning. We often talk about something interesting about sports at lunch time or dinner time. From Monday to Friday, we often share something fun in study or work. We enjoy every family moment every day. I love my family and the nice family moment. I am very happy to be with my family.
David, can you tell me something about your family moment
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候对方；
第二步，介绍自己的家庭成员以及家庭生活片段；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth.喜欢做某事
②be good at擅长
③talk about谈论
[高分句型]
①There are 4 people in my family.（there be句型）
②My mother is good at playing tennis and my sister is a good swimmer.（and连接并列成分）
5．Possible version 1.
Hello, every one. I’m very happy to introduce my family to you. There are four people in my family. They are my father and mother, my sister and me.
My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. They are very busy. But on weekends, they often take my sister and me out. We like to play games in the park. And we often watch movies together. There is so much fun. We are so happy. I love my family!
Thank you!Possible version 2.
Hello, every one. I’m very happy to introduce my family to you. There are four people in my family, my father and mother, my sister and me.
My parents are very busy. But they try their best to company my sister and me. On weekends, they often take us out. We like to play games in the park. And we often watch movies together. Look at this photo. My parents are getting ready for a big dinner. We children are learning to cook. We are so happy. I love my family!
Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文。
②时态：一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，寒暄并引出写作目的，介绍家庭成员。
第二步，详细介绍家庭成员的职业及家庭活动。
第三步，书写结语，对大家的聆听表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①take sb. out带某人外出
②play games玩游戏
③watch movies看电影
[高分句型]
①There are four people in my family. (there be句型)
②My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. (and表并列)
6．Dear Eric,
Glad to know you will come. Let me tell you something about my happy family.
There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and me. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. We all love each other very much. My father likes playing basketball. He is very busy with his work, but he always finds time to spend with us. He often takes us to the park or to the movies. My mother likes singing and cooking, and she always makes delicious food for us. I really enjoy painting and have many nice works. We have a lot of fun together as a family. It is a great fortune for me to have such a loving family.
Hope to see you soon!
Wang Ping
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的家庭；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍家庭成员的工作和喜好；
第三步，书写结语。对对方即将到来表示期待。
[亮点词汇]
①each other彼此
②be busy with忙于
③a lot of很多
[高分句型]
①There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and me. (There be句型)
②It is a great fortune for me to have such a loving family. (it作形式主语)
7．例文
My Best Friend
I’m very happy to make some new friends this term. Ann is my best friend. She is 12 years old, and her birthday is on October 21st. She is in Class Five, Grade Seven. There are four people in her family: her father, mother, and younger sister. Ann loves playing tennis and has joined the sports club, but she doesn’t like basketball. Her favorite subject is math. I like Ann because she is always kind and helpful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍最好的朋友是Ann；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，具体介绍Ann的个人基本信息及家庭成员；
第三步，进一步描写Ann的运动爱好及喜欢的学科，并附简短评价。
[亮点词汇]
①there be有
②love doing喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①There are four people in her family: her father, mother, and younger sister. (there be句型)
②I like Ann because she is always kind and helpful. (because引导原因状语从句)
8．One possible version:
My Happy Time
I always have a happy time with my friends and my family.
On weekdays, I have seven classes every day. I listen to the teachers carefully and I like to answer questions in class. After class, my friends and I do sports together. On weekends, I often do chores at home such as setting the table and cleaning the room. We also have meals together and share our stories. During the holidays, I often have a picnic with my family in the park. We have lots of fun.
I really enjoy the time with my friends and my family.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先描述你工作日的日常活动，例如上课、进行体育锻炼等；
第二步，再描述周末的日常活动，例如做家务、家庭聚餐和外出野餐等；
第三步，书写结束语，表达和家人朋友一起度过的时光很开心。
[亮点词汇]
①on weekdays 在工作日
②listen to 听
③on weekends 在周末
④such as 例如
⑤set the table 摆餐桌
⑥clean the room 打扫房间
⑦have fun 玩得开心
[高分句型]
I listen to the teachers carefully and I like to answer questions in class.（and连接两个并列句）
9．例文
My Favourite Day at School
Everyone has a favourite day at school. As for me, my favourite day is Friday.
At 7:30, I have a Chinese class. Then I have maths. Each lesson is 45 minutes long and there is a break between lessons. At 9:10, I do eye exercises. After that, I have English. At 10:30, I have history. It’s my favourite subject. Lunch time is from 12:00 to 1:00 p. m. In the afternoon, my lessons begin at 1:30 and finish at 5:00. I usually get home around 5:30. After dinner, it’s time to read with my parents. I really enjoy reading with them.
I’m busy but happy on Friday, because I can enjoy a good weekend the next day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢是哪一天；
第二步，介绍自己在那一天有什么学科以及活动；
第三步，介绍为什么喜欢那一天。
[亮点词汇]
①do eye exercises做眼保健操
②from…to从……到……
③get home回家
[高分句型]
①Each lesson is 45 minutes long and there is a break between lessons.（there be句型）
10．例文
Mother’s Day is coming. I want to do something for my mother.
She is 40 years old now. She is a very friendly woman. She likes watching TV. She works in a factory. She is very busy every day, but she still looks after the family well. I love her very much.
I want to buy some beautiful flowers for her on Mother’s Day. And I also want to cook a big dinner for her. She must be very happy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，另起一段；
第二步，详细介绍自己的妈妈，包括年龄、性格、职业等；
第三步，介绍用买花和给妈妈做丰盛的晚餐的方式来表达对妈妈的爱。
[亮点词汇]
①looks after照顾
②cook a big dinner做丰盛的晚餐
③must be一定……
[高分句型]
She is very busy every day, but she still looks after the family well. (but连接两个简单句，表转折关系)
11．例文
I’m Li Hua and I’d like to introduce my home to you. There are five rooms in my home: a living room, two bedrooms, a kitchen, and a bathroom. In the living room, my family and I often watch TV together and share interesting stories. My parents like to cook food in the kitchen, and I sometimes help them. My home is warm and full of love. I feel happy and safe there. It is the best place in the world for me.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家里的房间，包括数量和类型；
第二步，详细描述自己与家人在家中通常进行的活动；
第三步，表达对家的感受，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①there be有
②full of充满
[高分句型]
①There are five rooms in my home: a living room, two bedrooms, a kitchen, and a bathroom.（there be句型）
②My parents like to cook food in the kitchen, and I sometimes help them.（and表并列）
12．例文
Dear Jack,
I am Li Xin. I am happy to introduce my family to you. Here is my family photo.
There are six people in the photo. They are my grandparents, my parents, my sister, and me. My grandfather has white hair and wears glasses. He likes reading books. My grandmother has short gray hair and she enjoys cooking. My father is tall and has short black hair. He likes playing tennis. My mother has long brown hair. She loves gardening. My sister and I both have black hair. We enjoy playing football together.
We all get along well and love spending time together. I hope you will come and stay with us. You will feel at home here.
Yours,
Li Xin
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，根据图片和提示内容介绍自己和家人；
第三步，介绍家庭氛围并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②play football踢足球
③get along well相处融洽
④at home在家
[高分句型]
There are six people in the photo. (There be句型)
13．例文
Hello, everyone! My name’s Li Hui. I live in a happy family. Here is a photo of my family. I’m the little boy with short hair, and I like reading books. My grandma is on the left. She is 60 years old and has short hair. She can play the erhu well. My grandpa is on the right. He is 62 years old. He likes playing weiqi and he has short hair, too. In the middle of the photo, you can see my parents. They are both 38 years old. My dad is tall, and he likes fishing. My mom is slim, and she likes planting flowers. My family are very kind and friendly. We have a cute cat, too. Its name is Mimi. We are a happy family.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章开头，介绍家庭照；
第二步，根据题干图片和思维导图中的要点，详细介绍家人的相关信息；
第三步，点评家人，书写结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①on the right在右边
②in the middle of在……的中间
[高分句型]
①He likes playing weiqi and he has short hair, too.（and表并列）
14．例文
I am Li Mei. I have a sister.
Her name is Li Min. She is fifteen years old and in Grade 9. We have a very good relationship and often read books together. We enjoy spending time with each other.
We also take part in many competitions, helping and encouraging each other. Sometimes we don’t win, but we never feel disappointed because we learn a lot. I think she is not only my sister but also my best friend.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的姐姐；
第二步，具体讲述自己与姐姐之间的亲密关系；
第三步，表达对姐姐的情感。
[亮点词汇]
①relationship关系
②take part in参加
③disappointed失望的
④not only...but also不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Sometimes we don’t win, but we never feel disappointed because we learn a lot. (并列句和because引导原因状语从句)
②I think she is not only my sister but also my best friend. (宾语从句)
15．例文
Good morning, everyone! I’m very glad to introduce myself here.
My name is Li Han. I’m 12 years old, and my birthday is in October. I have a wonderful family with my dad, mom, and myself. I really enjoy playing sports. Running, basketball, and football are my favorites. They keep me strong and healthy. I also love singing songs. It makes me feel super happy! I eat a lot of healthy food, like vegetables, fruits, and whole grains. I try to avoid eating junk food because it’s not good for me.
At school, my favorite subject is English. It’s fun and helpful. I enjoy learning new words and practicing talking in English. I’m a nice and kind person. I like helping others and making new friends. I believe we can all be the best at what we do. If you like sports, singing, or talking about English, come and say hello to me! I would love to meet friends who share the same interests as me!
That’s all. Thank you.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点提示，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山：介绍自己的基本信息；
第二步，依据表格要点提示，逐一介绍自己的情况，适当拓展；
第三步，书写总结，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①make new friends 交新朋友
②enjoy playing sports 喜欢运动
[高分句型]
①I try to avoid eating junk food because it’s not good for me. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I would love to meet friends who share the same interests as me! (who引导限制性定语从句)
16．例文
My mother is a doctor in the emergency room. She is often much busier during festivals. Sometimes she has to work without any breaks for 20 hours. Her duty means she has little time to be with her family at festivals. But she never regrets her decision to be an ER doctor. I love my mother and I will support her, because her hard work shines brighter than festive fireworks.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我的母亲是急诊室的医生。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——妈妈的职业、日常工作情况、妈妈的职业品质及我对妈妈的爱等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我爱我的妈妈”的美好情感。
[亮点词汇]
①have to不得不
②regret her decision后悔她的决定
[高分句型]
①Her duty means she has little time to be with her family at festivals. (宾语从句）
②I love my mother and I will support her, because her hard work shines brighter than festive fireworks. (Because引导的原因状语从句)
17．例文
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Ming. I’m happy to stand here to introduce my hobby and my family to you.
I am a quiet and kind person, and I enjoy swimming in my free time. My favorite subject is maths because I love solving problems and it helps me think logically. I am very excited about my new school life and eager to face new challenges. I hope to improve my English and make more friends in junior high. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and me. I usually spend time with my family on weekends. We sometimes have a picnic in the park. Sometimes we climb mountains. Staying with my family makes me happy.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的性格、爱好、喜欢的科目及原因；
第二步，介绍自己对学校生活的感受及对初中的希望；
第三步，介绍自己的家庭信息和家庭活动。
[亮点词汇]
① be excited about对……感到兴奋
② eager to do渴望去做
③ make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is maths because I love solving problems and it helps me think logically.（because引导的原因状语从句）
18．范文：
My Daily Life
I’m Li Hua. I want to tell you about my daily life. I usually get up at 6:00 in the morning. After that, I have breakfast at 6:30. I go to school at 7:00. Classes start at 8:00. We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. I often help my classmates with their study. I like playing basketball, so I often play it with my friends after school. In the evening, I do my homework at home. I go to bed at 9:30. I am living a happy life at school. I enjoy my school life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我的日常生活”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间安排、主要活动、个人感受”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do sth想要做某事
②get up起床
③help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I like playing basketball, so I often play it with my friends after school.（so引导的并列复合句）
19．例文
My family
My name is Ella. I have a happy family.
My father is an English teacher. His name is Jacky. He is thirty-eight. He is tall and handsome. And he likes playing basketball. My mother is a nurse. She is thirty-seven. She has a round face and a warm smile. She is kind-hearted and caring. She likes cooking. On weekends, I often go to the library and play the piano. Sometimes, we watch TV and listen to music at home.
I love my family and I’m very happy to live with my parents together!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的家庭，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，我有一个幸福的家庭；
第二步，介绍家人的情况，包括年龄、外貌、性格及爱好等内容；
第三步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball打篮球
②kind-hearted善良的
③on weekends在周末
[高分句型]
I love my family and I’m very happy to live with my parents together! (and连接的并列句)
20．例文
My name is Peng Chao. My uncle has a big farm with many flowers and trees. There is a house on the farm. There are 20 pigs and 30 chickens in the house. In the middle of the farm is a big lake. There are 40 ducks on the lake. I love my uncle’s farm very much.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容书写，可适当发挥，注意语义连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，整体上介绍农场；
第二步，详细介绍农场里的动物；
第三步，表达对农场的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
in the middle of在……的中间
[高分句型]
There are 20 pigs and 30 chickens in the house. (运用了there be句型)
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