【单元考点培优】Unit 2 School life 专题14 书面表达-2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版（2024）（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版（2024）Unit 2 School life
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是某初中学校七年级的李明，近期你要参加“This is me!”的英语演讲比赛，请根据思维导图和自身情况，完成演讲稿。
自我介绍： 我最喜爱的科目和原因 我的社团活动 我的未来职业…… This is me! 我的学校： 三栋教学楼，一个图书馆，一个新的运动场 我的老师 我的同学互帮互助 我的感受……
要求：1. 短文须包括提示中的全部信息，可适当发挥；
2. 不得使用个人真实的校名和人名；
3. 词数60左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello! I’m Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I’m happy to tell you something about me. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening!
2．假设你是王华，请按下面表格要求写一封信，向你的新笔友Mike介绍一下你自己，你的家人，你的学校和你最喜欢的科目及原因。
要求：
(1)60词左右(开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名，班级和学校；
(3)短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
写作要点 具体内容
1. Yourself ●age: …… ●hobby: ……
2. Your family ……
3. Your school ● small/ big…… ●There is/ are……
4. Your favourite subject and reasons. ●My favourite subject is…… Because……
Dear Mike,
I am so happy to write to you.
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Looking forward to your reply (期待你的答复).
Yours,
Wang Hua
3．阅读表格，请根据表格内容以“My friend’s busy day”为题，介绍你朋友一天的忙碌生活。
Name Tom Age 13
Time His activity
7:00 get up; listen to the music
7:20 have breakfast; eat noodles, drink milk
7:50 go to school on foot; about 15 minutes
In the morning four lessons; a break
12:00 have lunch; have a rest
In the afternoon one lesson; basketball club
After dinner finish homework; read with parents, play computers
21:00 go to bed
要求：1、有适当的开头和结尾；2、要点齐全，语言通顺。3.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
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4．同学们进入初中已经一个学期了，相信大家的校园生活一定丰富多彩！假如你是滕飞，请根据以下导图提示，总结一下你的校园生活吧。
写作要求：
1.围绕以上提示展开作文并适当发挥补充，使文章内容充实；
2.语意通顺，表达准确，条理清晰，书写规范；
3.词数不少于 60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现个人真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Hi, I’m Teng Fei. I’m now a middle school student. I love my school very much. I’d like to tell you something about my school life.
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5．假设你是第一中学七年级一班的一名学生，请你以“My School Day”为题，介绍你学校及在学校的学习和生活：
要点：
1. 非常喜爱学校，因为它看起来很现代化；
2. 有许多新朋友，每天都很开心；
3. 学校周一到周五早上八点半开始上课，放学后进行各种课外活动；
4. 喜欢做早操，因为早操有益；
5. ……
注意：
1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数60 左右（开头部分已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
My School Day
I study at No. 1 Middle School. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7.
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6．假如你是李华，回顾进入七年级这半年以来多姿多彩的初中生活。请以“My New Life in the Middle School”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍你的初中新生活，参加学校英语俱乐部的征文比赛。 1. 要点提示：
（1）校园大而整洁，老师和同学都很友善；（2）有七门课程，最喜欢英语；
（3）每天做运动，对身体好； （4）学校的食物很美味，爱吃蔬菜和水果；
（5）适当补充一两点相关信息或想法…… 2. 要求：
（1）语法正确，条理清晰，内容连贯；
（2）包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
（3）文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
（4）词数：60—80词，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My New Life in the Middle School
Hello! I’m Li Hua. I’d like to tell you something about my new life in the middle school.
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7．假如你是李辉，Alice是你的笔友。请你阅读以下邮件，并根据Alice提出的问题，给她写一封邮件。
Hi there, Li Hui! I know you love your school life. Now I want to know something about your favourite subject. What subject do you like best Why do you like it What do you do to learn it well Hope to hear from you soon.
要求:
1. 包含所给信息，可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范;
3. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Alice,
I’m happy to share my favourite subject with you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
8．假如你是李明，你在某网站上看到了Jack发布的贴子，请你根据贴子内容给他回帖。 （skill n.技能）
By Jack Clark on 31/12 19:30 PM #1▼
This term will be over soon. I’m very happy and busy this term. I learn a lot from different subjects. One of my favorite is music. My music teacher is excellent. She teaches us to play a Chinese instrument, ruan. I like it very much. After school, I always play it for my parents. I am going to learn more about it in the winter holiday. What subject do you like best What new skills do you learn from this subject Who teaches you How long do you spend on it Who do you usually do it with What will you do to make it better
写作要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2．回帖内容完整，充实，行文连贯。
3．字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4．至少70 词。
By Li Ming on 31/12 21:30 PM #2▼ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．时间过得真快，不知不觉一学期快要结束了，你已成为一名中学生好几个月了，你的中学生活一定丰富多彩，请结合你的校园、学习科目、课外活动、学校生活等以“My School Life”为题，介绍一下你的校园生活，并谈谈你的真实感受。
要求：
1）语言流畅、书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于60个。
2）文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用姓名，请用Mike, Mary等名字，校名统一使用Xinhua Middle School。
3）书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
4）抄袭试卷中相关材料的，抄袭部分不给分。
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10．校园生活丰富多彩，不仅有课上的书声朗朗，还有课下的欢声笑语。假如你是七年级二班的学生高桥，你们年级近期要举办以“My Favorite School Day”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据提示问题，写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示：
1. What school day do you like best
2. What’s your favorite subject Why
3. What do you do after school
要求：
1. 内容应包括提示中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 作文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名：
3. 不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone! I’m Gao Qiao from Class 2, Grade 7. My school life is colorful.
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11．One of My School Days 提示：新学期，你成为了一名中学生，体验了不一样的学校生活。请以“One of My School Days”为题目，写一篇英语作文，介绍你上学的一天。
要求：
1.紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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12．假如你是腾飞，你收到了一封来自英国笔友Bill的电子邮件，请你根据邮件内容用英文给Bill回一封电子邮件。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；
2. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；内容可适当扩充；
3. 在答题卡上填写To，From后面的信息以及称呼，落名并按四个要点来回复；
4. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
5. 将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
To: Tengfei@student com From: Bill@happymail com
Dear Fei, How are you these days I know you study in a Chinese middle school. What’s your favorite subject What club do you join What do you like to do after school The Chinese New Year is coming. How do you celebrate it every year Write soon! Yours, Bill
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13．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom很关心你在学校的情况，请参考如下信息给他回复一封电子邮件，介绍你进入中学以后的生活。
要求：
1. 文中应包含思维导图中至少3个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 80词左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my new life in middle school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．假如你是Teng Fei。你的朋友Peter发邮件来询问你的初中校园生活，请你根据图示给他回复一封邮件。
注意：
1.包含题干和图片所示所有内容；
2.语句通顺、语意连贯、书写规范、卷面干净整洁；
3. 字数：80词左右。
To Peter@ From TengFei@ Subject My School Life Dear Peter, Thanks for your email. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ How about your school life Please write to me soon. Yours, Teng Fei
15．假如你是李明，住在石家庄，想和美国的Sam成为笔友，请你根据下表提供的内容，写一封电子邮件给Sam，做一下自我介绍。
Name Li Ming
Family members father, mother, brother…
Favorite subject English, math…
Hobbies music, reading books…
Sports play basketball, go swimming…
注意：
(1) 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(2) 参考表格内容，可以适当发挥。
(3) 词数60个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Sam,
I want to be your pen pal. My name is Li Ming. I live in Shijiazhuang.
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Yours,
Li Ming
16．2024年12月4日，“春节”被正式列入人类非物质文化遗产代表作名录。这一消息迅速刷屏，成为全世界热议的焦点。你在国外的笔友Baker看到这则新闻后，想到中国学习的心情更加迫切。因此，请你向他写一封信，介绍一下你的初中生活，帮助他为交换生做准备。
内容包括：
1. What is your favorite subject Why
2. What do you usually do after class
3. What do you think of your school life
作文要求：
1.包含所给信息，可适当发挥，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。60词左右，开头和结尾不计入总词数。
Dear Baker,
I am happy to tell you something about myself
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What about you I’m looking forward to your letter.
Your friend,
Oscar
17．假设你是李宁，最近收到美国笔友Tom发来的电子邮件，请你仔细阅读邮件并回复。
Dear Li Ning, How’s it going I want to know something about your school and school life. Here are some questions. What is your school like What buildings are there in your school What is your favourite subject Why do you like it What club do you want to join What can you learn from this club How many classes do you have a day What time do your classes begin and finish What fun things do you do at school Can you share something about it with me Yours, Tom
要求：
1. 包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数60左右。语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Tom,
I am happy to get your e-mail.
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Yours,
Li Ning.
18．亲爱的同学们：
这个学期即将结束，相信你们更加适应忙碌又充实的初中生活了，在学校，你最喜欢哪一天呢？现在，学校英语报社正在开展以“My Favourite Day at School”为主题的征文活动，请你根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇英语短文向报社投稿，介绍你在学校最喜欢的一天。
写作要点 参考句型
1. What’s your favourite day at school On my favourite day, I have... My favourite activity is... I like this day because...
2. What subjects and activities do you have on that day
3. Why do you like that day
要求：
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数60词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite Day at School
Everyone has a favourite day at school. As for me, my favourite day is
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19．假如你是学校外联部主席李华，美国学生Sam即将来你校进行短暂的交流学习。他给你发了一封电子邮件，想要了解你们丰富多彩的初中生活。
请根据邮件内容和实际情况用英语回复，词数60—80词左右。
Dear Li Hua, I am an exchange student from the US. Next month, I will go to your school for study. I want to know about your school life. What subject do you like best Why What do you often do after class How do you feel about your school life Drop a few lines if you have time. Best wishes, Sam
Dear Sam,
I’m glad to get your email. Let me tell you about my school life
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Yours,
Li Hua
20．假如你是李华，收到了笔友 David的来信，请你阅读来信，根据他的来信内容给他回信。
Dear Li Hua, Thanks for your letter. I’m glad to be your pen friend. I really want to know your school day. What time does school begin How many lessons are there What is your favorite subjects Why I’d like to know more about your daily routine. Bye for now. Yours, David
要求：
（1）词数：不少于60词；
（2）文章开头结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear David,
I’m glad to get a letter from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Hello! I’m Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I am happy to tell you something about me.
First, my school is modern and beautiful. There are 3 teaching buildings, a library and a new sports field. It’s a good place to learn and play.
Second, the teachers are kind and they always help me with my study. And my classmates are nice and I make many good friends, we help each other and learn from each other.
Third, my favorite subject is math. We learn how to work out math problems in class. I think math feels like a magic and is really fun. And I join the science club. I want to be a scientist in the future.
As you see, my school life is great and colourful. And I’m friendly and outgoing. Would you like to make friends with me
Thanks for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，详细介绍自己的校园以及学校生活；
第三步，介绍自己最喜爱的科目、社团活动等方面后，总结自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
②make friends交朋友
③learn from each other彼此学习
[高分句型]
①There are 3 teaching buildings, a library and a new sports field.（There be句型）
②I think math feels like a magic and is really fun.（宾语从句）
2．例文：
Dear Mike,
I am so happy to write to you. My name is Wang Hua. I’m 12 now. I like reading and music. I live with my parents and younger sister. We have a small but cozy home. I study at a local school which is famous for its friendly environment. It’s very big and there are many buildings. My favorite subject is English because it’s fascinating to learn about different cultures and communicate with people from around the world.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己和家庭；
第二步，简单介绍自己的学校；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的科目和理由。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②learn about了解
③communicate with和……交流
[高分句型]
①I study at a local school which is famous for its friendly environment.(which引导定语从句)
②My favorite subject is English because it’s fascinating to learn about different cultures and communicate with people from around the world.(because引导原因状语从句)
3．例文
Hello, everyone! This my friend Tom. He is 13 years old.
Every day, he usually gets up at 7:00. He likes to listen to the music. At 7:30, he has breakfast. He likes eating noodles and drinking milk. He goes to school on foot at 7:50. It’s about 15 minutes’ walk.
At school, there are four lessons in the morning. There is a break between lessons. He has lunch at 12:00. Then He has a rest. In the afternoon, there is only one lesson. Then he goes to his basketball club.
After dinner, he always finishes his homework first. Then he usually reads with his parents or plays computers. At 21:00, he goes to bed on time.
His day is busy, but he feels happy!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格中的提示内容介绍Tom的日常安排，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，打招呼，引出要介绍的主人公——Tom；
第二步，根据表格详细介绍Tom的日常活动；
第三步，书写结语，给出评价。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②listen to the music听音乐
③have a rest休息
③on time按时
[高分句型]
His day is busy, but he feels happy! (but连接的并列句)
4．例文
Hi, I’m Teng Fei. I’m now a middle school student. I love my school very much. I’d like to tell you something about my school life.
My school is big and beautiful with a big playground and a library. We have many subjects like Chinese, Math and English. English is my favorite because it’s interesting. I join the art club. I can draw pictures with my club members after school.
On school days, I get up early, then go to school. I have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. After school, I do my homework and sometimes play basketball. My school life is busy but enjoyable.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍学校的环境、学习的科目和加入的俱乐部；
第二步，介绍上学日常，并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get up early 早起
②do one’s homework 做作业
③enjoyable adj. 令人愉快的
[高分句型]
English is my favorite because it’s interesting. (because引导的原因状语从句)
5．例文
My School Day
I study at No. 1 Middle School. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. I like my school very much because it looks modern and it is beautiful with lots of flowers and trees. I have many new friends and I am happy every day. School starts at 8:30 a.m. from Monday to Friday. After school, we have different activities. I like doing morning exercises because they are good for us.
I love my school day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出的开头，结合要点，介绍自己的学校、在校的学习和生活；
第二步，总结，表达对学校的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
① lots of 很多，大量
② from...to... 从……到……
③ be good for 有益于……
[高分句型]
I like my school very much because it looks modern and it is beautiful with lots of flowers and trees. (because引导原因状语从句)
6．例文
My New Life in the Middle School
Hello! I’m Li Ming. I’d like to tell you something about my new life in the middle school. My school is big and tidy. I love it very much. Our teachers and classmates are very nice. We have seven subjects at school. And my favourite subject is English. I play sports every day. I think it’s good for my health. We have breakfast, lunch and dinner at school. The food is delicious. I like fruit and vegetables best. We also have many kinds of activities. For example, we have School Day, Sports Day and New Year’s Party. In my free time, I like reading and telling stories with my classmates. All in all, I love my school very much.
I enjoy my new school life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用形容词简单概括新的初中校园环境和师生特点，再表达出整体感受；
第二步，按照要点内容，继续介绍自己对课程的喜好以及日常活动等信息，注意行文的条理和连贯以及语法的正确；
第三步，结尾总结，补充自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②in my free time 在我的空闲时间
③for example例如
[高分句型]
①I think it’s good for my health.（宾语从句）
②In my free time, I like reading and telling stories with my classmates.（and连接并列成分）
7．例文：
Dear Alice,
I’m happy to share my favourite subject with you. My favourite subject is history. I like it because it’s interesting to learn about the past. What’s more, I can always learn something important from history stories.
I have history every Monday and Thursday. My history teacher is great fun and knowledgeable. He always makes his class interesting. I’m really interested in history, so I spend a lot of time learning it. In my free time, I not only read many books about history but also visit the history museum often. For me, it’s never boring to learn history.
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：仔细阅读邮件后得出写作要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍写此邮件的目的 (已经给出)；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的科目是历史，以及原因；
第三步，介绍为学习历史所做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①what’s more而且
②something important重要的东西
③be interested in感兴趣
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
I like it because it’s interesting to learn about the past. (because引导原因状语从句)
8．例文
By Li Ming on 31/12 21:30 PM #2▼
I’m Li Ming. I’m truly glad to read your post. Among all the subjects, P.E. is my favorite. Mr. Wang, our P.E. teacher, is really cool. He’s full of energy and always makes the classes interesting. He patiently teaches us how to play basketball. I’ve learned useful skills like dribbling and shooting. Every day after school, I usually play basketball with my classmates for about an hour. It’s not only a sport but also a great way to relax. During the winter holiday, I plan to practice more frequently. Maybe I’ll attend a basketball-training class to improve my skills and become a better player.
Best regards,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据原贴介绍自己最喜欢的科目、科目的老师以及自己将如何做使其变得更好等内容；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示问候；
第二步，介绍喜欢的科目是什么，以及该科目的老师；
第三步，介绍自己在这上面花了多少时间、通常和谁一起做，以及自己将如何做使其变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of 充满
②make sth. adj. 使某物……
③play basketball 打篮球
[高分句型]
①He patiently teaches us how to play basketball. (疑问词+不定式)
②It’s not only a sport but also a great way to relax. (not only ... but also 不仅……而且……)
9．例文
My School Life
I would like to tell you something about the life in my school. It has been one year since I came to the school.
My school is beautiful and there are many beautiful flowers and trees. The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework. My classmates are all very friendly to each other. We always help each other. I have learned a lot from them and made a lot of friends. In school, I study English, mathematics, Chinese, physical education, biology, geography, and so on. In study, I am good at Chinese and English, while math is my weakness. Mr. Li is my math teacher. He often helped me with my studies very patiently. With his help, I made great progress in math and caught up with my classmates. I like music room. Because I love dancing. Dancing is relaxing.
I like my school life.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，短文必须包含写作要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的校园；
第二步，介绍自己的老师和同学；
第三步，介绍自己的学习科目。
[亮点词汇]
①each other互相
②learn from sb.向某人学习
③and so on等等
[高分句型]
①It has been one year since I came to the school. （since引导的时间状语从句）
②The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework.（though引导的让步状语从句）
10．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Gao Qiao from Class 2, Grade 7. My school life is colorful. My favorite school day is Tuesday. In the morning, we have four classes, Chinese, math, English and history. My favorite subject is Chinese. Our Chinese teacher is very kind. She often tells us interesting stories. Her class is lively and fun.
In the afternoon, there is a music class. We learn different kinds of music. We often sing happily. After school, I usually go to the school library. There are so many books there. I like reading books about science and history. Sometimes, I also play basketball with my classmates on the playground. It’s fun to play with my friends.
Tuesday is my favorite school day because I can learn my favorite subject and have a great time after school. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点；
[写作步骤]
第一步， 承接开头，介绍最喜欢的上学日是哪一天；
第二步，介绍喜欢的科目并说明原因；
第三步，介绍自己课后通常做什么；
第四步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 不同种类的
②play basketball 打篮球
③have a great time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
①There are so many books there. (there be句型)
②Tuesday is my favorite school day because I can learn my favorite subject and have a great time after school. (because引导的原因状语从句)
11．例文
One of My School Days
I have just started my new school year as a middle school student. Let me share one of my school days with you.
I usually get up at 6:30 a.m. After having breakfast, I go to school by bike. My classes start at 8:00. In the morning, we have four lessons including Chinese, Maths, English, and History. My favorite subject is English because I like learning new languages.
In the afternoon, we have three more lessons. After school, I often go to the library to read books or finish my homework. I go back home at around 5:30 p.m. I feel a bit tired but very happy because I have learned a lot of new things.
I enjoy my school life very much.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍上学的上午日常时间安排；
第二步，接着介绍下午的日常活动；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②in the morning早上
③go back home回家
④a lot of很多
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because I like learning new languages. (because引导的原因状语从句)
12．例文
Dear Bill,
I’m doing well these days. It’s great to hear from you! My favorite subject at school is maths because I love solving problems and working with numbers. I join the art club where I enjoy painting and crafting with my friends. It’s a wonderful way to relax and express myself. After school, I usually like to play basketball with my classmates. It’s both fun and a good exercise.
As for the Chinese New Year, my family and I celebrate by having a big dinner together. We exchange red envelopes and visit relatives. The streets are decorated with lanterns, and there are often fireworks. It’s a joyous time filled with traditions and happiness.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Tengfei
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，回答自己最近如何；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的科目、加入了什么俱乐部以及课后做的事情；
第三步，最后介绍自己如何庆祝新年。
[亮点词汇]
① love doing sth喜欢做某事
② as for至于
③ filled with充满
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject at school is maths because I love solving problems and working with numbers（原因状语从句）
②I join the art club where I enjoy painting and crafting with my friends（定语从句）
13．例文
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my new life in middle school.
Now I’m a student in No.1 Middle School. I’m very busy. I have many subjects. My favorite subject is English. Because my English teacher Mr Li is great and I think English is interesting. But I don’t like math because it’s difficult for me. Lucy is my good friend. She likes math very much because she thinks math is easy and fun. And she says she can help me. We get on well with each other. I have lunch at school. Our lunch is nice. I have breakfast and dinner at home. I like doing sports, so I often play basketball with my friends after school.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的学校以及所学的科目情况；
第二步，介绍自己的老师或朋友以及三餐情况；
第三步，最后描述运动情况。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with sb和某人相处得好
②like doing sth喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①Because my English teacher Mr Li is great and I think English is interesting. （宾语从句）
②She likes math very much because she thinks math is easy and fun.（because引导的原因状语从句）
14．例文
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your email.
This term, I have subjects like Math, English, History, and Science. My favorite subject is Science because it is full of interesting experiments. My favorite teacher is Mr. Wang who teaches Math; he is patient and always helps us solve difficult problems. I enjoy participating in the Robotics Club because it enhances my problem-solving skills. In the future, I aspire to be an engineer as I love creating innovative solutions.
How about your school life Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Teng Fei
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，感谢收到对方来信（已给出）；
第二步，具体介绍中学科目，最喜爱的学科和老师以及相应的原因，以及介绍自己的愿望并解释原因；
第三步，书写结语（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②participate in参加
③aspire to do sth渴望做某事
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is Science because it is full of interesting experiments. (because引导的原因状语从句)
15．例文
Dear Sam,
I want to be your pen pal. My name is Li Ming. I live in Shijiazhuang. I have a warm family. There are four people. They are my father, mother and brother. My favorite subjects are English and math. I often help my classmates with their English. I enjoy listening to music and reading books in my free time. I also love sports that are good for my health, especially playing basketball and going swimming. Would you like to become my pen pal
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“姓名、家庭成员、爱好、运动”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，询问对方是否愿意做自己的笔友。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
③listen to music听音乐
[高分句型]
I also love sports that are good for my health, especially playing basketball and going swimming. (that引导的定语从句)
16．例文
Dear Baker,
I am happy to tell you something about myself.
My favorite subject is Chinese. I love reading Chinese classics and learning about our history and culture. After class, I usually play basketball with my friends. It’s a great way to relax and stay healthy. I think my school life is interesting and colorful. I can join different kinds of clubs and we have many activities. I hope you can come to China as soon as possible.
What about you I’m looking forward to your letter.
Your friend,
Oscar
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的初中生活，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，从最喜欢的科目及课后活动等方面介绍自己的初中生活；
第三步，表达自己的感受及希望对方尽快来到中国。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②different kinds of不同种类的
③as soon as possible尽快
[高分句型]
①I think my school life is interesting and colorful. (宾语从句)
②I can join different kinds of clubs and we have many activities. (and连接的并列句)
17．例文
Dear Tom,
I am happy to get your e-mail. I’m glad to tell you something about my school and school life.
My school is not big, but it is very beautiful.There are three teaching buildings, a library and a playground in my school. My favorite subject is English, because I think it’s very useful. In my school, there are many clubs. I like playing basketball so I want to join the basketball club. I can improve my basketball skills and make many friends here. I have seven classes every day. We start our class at 8 o’clock in the morning and finish at 4 o’clock in the afternoon. Every day my favorite thing is to have PE class because I can play basketball, running and so on. I love my school very much.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Ning
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：在写作时首先要根据英文提示描述要介绍的信息，可以适当发挥但是要注意保证条理清晰，语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍写这封电子邮件的目的；
第二步，具体介绍自己的学校设施和学校生活；
第三步，表达希望收到对方来信的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth.喜欢做某事
②want to do sth.想要做某事
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
Every day my favorite thing is to have PE class because I can play basketball, running and so on. (because引导的原因状语从句)
18．例文
My Favourite Day at School
Everyone has a favourite day at school. As for me, my favourite day is Friday.
At 7:30, I have a Chinese class. Then I have maths. Each lesson is 45 minutes long and there is a break between lessons. At 9:10, I do eye exercises. After that, I have English. At 10:30, I have history. It’s my favourite subject. Lunch time is from 12:00 to 1:00 p. m. In the afternoon, my lessons begin at 1:30 and finish at 5:00. I usually get home around 5:30. After dinner, it’s time to read with my parents. I really enjoy reading with them.
I’m busy but happy on Friday, because I can enjoy a good weekend the next day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢是哪一天；
第二步，介绍自己在那一天有什么学科以及活动；
第三步，介绍为什么喜欢那一天。
[亮点词汇]
①do eye exercises做眼保健操
②from…to从……到……
③get home回家
[高分句型]
①Each lesson is 45 minutes long and there is a break between lessons.（there be句型）
19．例文
Dear Sam,
I’m glad to get your email. Let me tell you about my school life.
My favorite subject is science because it explains how the world works, and I find that wonderful. After class, I often play basketball with friends and sometimes join art clubs. I feel my school life is exciting and fulfilling, because I learn many new things and make great friends.
Looking forward to meeting you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的科目和原因；
第二步，描述自己课后做的事情和对学校生活的感受；
第三步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① fulfilling充实的
② make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
I feel my school life is exciting and fulfilling, because I learn many new things and make great friends.（原因状语从句）
20．例文：
Dear David,
I’m glad to get a letter from you. Let me tell you about my school day.
School begins at 8 o’clock in the morning. We have six lessons every day. My favorite subject is English because it is interesting and useful. I can communicate with people from different countries in English. In the morning, we usually have four lessons. After lunch, we have two more lessons. Sometimes we have PE or Music, which are very relaxing. After school, I often play basketball with my friends. It’s a great way to keep fit and have fun.
I hope you like my school day. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作句式已给出，考生应注意介绍学校生活时要符合逻辑顺序。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。用“让我告诉你我的学校生活。”引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“上学时间、课程、最喜欢的学科以及原因”几个方面具体介绍每天的日程。
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望你喜欢我的学校生活，期待你的回信”进行情感升华。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with 与……沟通
②a great way 一种好的方式
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject is English because it is interesting and useful.（because引导的原因状语从句）
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