2026届高考英语二轮复习：2025年新高考英语1卷&II卷英语作文真题讲评 课件(共116张PPT)
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(共116张PPT)
深度解析
2025高考英语
全国一、二卷 书面表达
讲解人：
李凤臣
深度解析
2025高考英语
全国一、二卷 书面表达
一线教师
一线教师
一线学生
写作 总评
全国一卷
全国一卷
全国一卷
全国二卷
一线教师
一线学生
写作 总评
全国一卷
全国一卷
全国一卷
全国二卷
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
写作 总评
（2025·济南·三模）
相似
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
写作 总评
（2025·深圳·一模）
相似
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
写作 总评
（2025·深圳·一模）
1
（2025·全国一卷·读后续写）
（2025 温州二模 读后续写）
原谅
兄弟情深
兄弟情深
相似
1
2
4
3
2
温州二模
1
2
4
3
2
温州二模
01
应用文 解读
目录
CONTENT
02
读后续写 解读
应用文解读
01
1
是什么？
2
写什么？
3
怎么做？
01
应用文 “灵魂三问”
（2025·江苏南京·二模）
假定你是李华，外教Mr. Chuck发现你的作文完全由AI生成，判为不及格。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1) 承认错误；
(2) 做出许诺；
(3) 补救措施。
01
（2025·浙江绍兴·二模）
近期，你将参加学校组织的英语主题征文活动。请结合自身经历，就“技术支撑下的个性化学习”的主题写一篇短文，内容包括：
(1) 陈述观点；
(2) 分享体验。
02
（2025·山东烟台·一模）
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“AI in My Life”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. AI在你生活中的应用；
2. 你的感受和期待。
03
1
是什么？
1
大热话题
【2022新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是校广播站英语节目 “Talk and Talk” 的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
01
【2023新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
02
（2024新课标I/II卷真题）
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 你完成的作品；
2. 你的感想。
03
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
体裁：书信/邮件
邀请信
体裁：书信/邮件
告知 / 分享信
体裁：书信/邮件
建议信
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
02
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
体裁：书信/邮件
建议信
体裁：书信/邮件
问询&告知信
会！
【2022新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是校广播站英语节目 “Talk and Talk” 的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
01
【2023新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
02
（2024新课标I/II卷真题）
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 你完成的作品；
2. 你的感想。
03
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
特征一
1.贴近学生的学习和生活
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
02
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
1.贴近学生的学习和生活
特征一
是什么？
1
优秀模拟题
（2025·湖丽衢一模）
假定你是李华，你校将举办英语节“戏剧之夜”(Drama Night)活动，并且进行网络直播(live-stream)，请你给英国好友David写一封电子邮件，邀请他观看，内容如下：
1.活动介绍；
2.观看时间和方式。
特征一
高考味十足
【2022新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是校广播站英语节目 “Talk and Talk” 的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
01
【2023新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
02
（2024新课标I/II卷真题）
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 你完成的作品；
2. 你的感想。
03
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
特征二
2.要点追求开放性
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
02
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
2.要点追求开放性
特征二
【2020新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了 5 公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 参加人员；
2. 跑步路线：从校门
口到南山脚下；
3. 活动反响。
01
【2021新课标I/II卷真题】
你校英文报 Youth 正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；
2. 喜爱的栏目；
3. 期望和祝福。
02
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
变化趋势
要点数量减少
特征二
3个
2个
【2022新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是校广播站英语节目 “Talk and Talk” 的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
01
【2023新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
02
（2024新课标I/II卷真题）
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 你完成的作品；
2. 你的感想。
03
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
特征二
2.要点追求开放性
2个
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
02
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
2.要点追求开放性
特征二
2个
【2023新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
01
（2024新课标I/II卷真题）
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 你完成的作品；
2. 你的感想。
02
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
特征三
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
特征三
3.给开头，减少写套话的机会
少点套路，多点思考
Hello，I am Li Hua.
全国一卷 应用文
01
Go Go Go
一起来完成写作任务吧！
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
礼貌得体
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
“校园里的乐趣”
“猜猜我是谁”
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
外教Jenny享有最终决定权
Hope my suggestion could be considered.
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
写个性，而非共性
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
第一段： 你的选择 2句
第二段： 说明理由 3个理由
第三段： 希望被采纳 2句
Step2 构思框架
写什么？
2
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
第一段
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
Step3 动笔开写
写什么？
2
1
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
第一段
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. Between the two options, I prefer the first one,“Fun at my school”. The reasons are as follows.
Step3 动笔开写
写什么？
2
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
第二段
First, the column offers a platform where we can share the moments full of joy in our school life, ranging from funny classroom episodes to exciting club events, which can definitely help us relieve our academic pressure. Plus, as a source of positive energy, the column brightens our days and creates a ripple effect of laughter and warmth. More importantly, It not only serves as a digital time capsule, transforming transient moments into lasting treasures but also as a way to build a bridge between each other, allowing optimistic spirit to be passed down.
Step3 动笔开写
写什么？
2
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
第三段
I truly hope my suggestion could be considered and I am looking forward to seeing the new column come to life!
Step3 动笔开写
写什么？
2
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. Between the two options, I prefer the first one,“Fun at my school”. The reasons are as follows.
First, the column offers a platform where we can share the moments full of joy in our school life, ranging from funny classroom episodes to exciting club events, which can definitely help us relieve our academic pressure. Plus, as a source of positive energy, the column brightens our days and creates a ripple effect of laughter and warmth. More importantly, It not only serves as a digital time capsule, transforming transient moments into lasting treasures but also as a way to build a bridge between each other, allowing optimistic spirit to be passed down.
I truly hope my suggestion could be considered and I am looking forward to seeing the new column come to life!
写什么？
2
合聚成篇
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. Between the two options, I prefer the second one, “Guess who I am”. The reasons are as follows.
First, this column would create more interaction among students, as it requires us to read clues and guess the identity of a classmate, teacher, or even a film character. Thus, it not only makes reading appealing but also improves our logical thinking skills. Plus, the column encourages us to observe people in detail and appreciate their qualities, which can bridge the gap and strengthen bonds between each other. More importantly, by adding an element of mystery and fun, the column can help our newspaper attract a wider readership.
I truly hope my suggestion could be considered and I am looking forward to seeing the new column come to life!
写什么？
2
合聚成篇
全国二卷 应用文
01
Go Go Go
一起来完成写作任务吧！
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
难
非常考验情商
弱化“催”的感觉
催稿信？
强化询问与期待
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
难
非常考验情商
必要性
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
难
非常考验情商
If you need some information, don’t hesitate to tell me.
If you have any questions regarding length or format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
难
非常考验情商
3/4句话
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited—the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to ensure its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you need any assistance or have questions regarding format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
合聚成篇
写作目的
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited—the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to ensure its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you need any assistance or have questions regarding format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
合聚成篇
两个要点
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited—the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to ensure its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you need any assistance or have questions regarding format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
合聚成篇
文章的重大意义
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited—the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to guarantee its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you have questions regarding length or format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
合聚成篇
转移矛盾
不是“催”，胜似“催”
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited—the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to guarantee its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you have any questions regarding length or format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
合聚成篇
关心
感谢
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited—the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to guarantee its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you have any questions regarding length or format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
合聚成篇
全国一、二卷 真题启示
01
练习
怎么做？
3
（2023新课标I/II卷真题)
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
真题启示
练习
怎么做？
3
思考
&
分析
【2023新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
（2025新课标II卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
真题启示
真题启示
（2025·济宁一模）
假定你是李华，,你在 Global Forum 上看到了Jason的求助帖。请给他回帖,内容如下:
(1)你的看法;
(2)你的建议
怎么做？
3
【2025湖丽衢二模】
假定你是李华，你校有些学生把老师的照片制作成表情包(meme)并在社交媒体上传播，针对这一现象，请给校英语报Letters专栏投稿，内容包括：
1. 陈述观点；
2. 提出建议
（2025深圳二模）
口语课上，外教组织同学们讨论：“假如你可以带一件现代物品穿越到古代，你会带什么？”请你准备一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 简介物品；
2. 你的理由
读后续写 解读
02
1
雕琢成器
2
构思破局
3
推陈出新
01
读后续写 “三部曲”
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
受出题人喜爱的
来源有哪些？
出题人如何理顺
故事框架？
出题人如何营造
矛盾冲突点？
源自于哪？
删、换、补
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
受出题人喜爱的题源有哪些？
源自于哪？
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
年份 话题类型 情境内容 文章来源
2021 家庭温情类 孩子为母亲制作母亲节早餐 教育网站Assignment Point
https://www./other/mothers-day-celebration-with-twin-child-an-open-speech.html
2022 社会关怀类 鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2023 成长突破类 老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣 杂志的网站https://www./story/lighting-the-candle-a-wild-ride
2024 人性善意类 陌生人之间的互相信任 旅行者网站https://budgettraveller.org/meet-gunter-the-best-taxi-driver-in-vienna-austria/
2025 （一） 情感修复类 兄弟因宠物狗产生隔阂？ 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2025 （二） 文化交流类 留学生融入新环境并传播中国文化 ？
2022
2025（一）
受出题人喜爱的题源有哪些？
源自于哪？
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
年份 话题类型 情境内容 文章来源
2021 家庭温情类 孩子为母亲制作母亲节早餐 教育网站Assignment Point
https://www./other/mothers-day-celebration-with-twin-child-an-open-speech.html
2022 社会关怀类 鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2023 成长突破类 老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣 杂志的网站https://www./story/lighting-the-candle-a-wild-ride
2024 人性善意类 陌生人之间的互相信任 旅行者网站https://budgettraveller.org/meet-gunter-the-best-taxi-driver-in-vienna-austria/
2025 （一） 情感修复类 兄弟因宠物狗产生隔阂？ 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2025 （二） 文化交流类 留学生融入新环境并传播中国文化 ？
1. 记叙文
受出题人喜爱的题源有哪些？
源自于哪？
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
年份 话题类型 情境内容 文章来源
2021 家庭温情类 孩子为母亲制作母亲节早餐 教育网站Assignment Point
https://www./other/mothers-day-celebration-with-twin-child-an-open-speech.html
2022 社会关怀类 鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2023 成长突破类 老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣 杂志的网站https://www./story/lighting-the-candle-a-wild-ride
2024 人性善意类 陌生人之间的互相信任 旅行者网站https://budgettraveller.org/meet-gunter-the-best-taxi-driver-in-vienna-austria/
2025 （一） 情感修复类 兄弟因宠物狗产生隔阂？ 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2025 （二） 文化交流类 留学生融入新环境并传播中国文化 ？
1. 记叙文
2. 贴近学生生活
受出题人喜爱的题源有哪些？
源自于哪？
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
年份 话题类型 情境内容 文章来源
2021 家庭温情类 孩子为母亲制作母亲节早餐 教育网站Assignment Point
https://www./other/mothers-day-celebration-with-twin-child-an-open-speech.html
2022 社会关怀类 鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2023 成长突破类 老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣 杂志的网站https://www./story/lighting-the-candle-a-wild-ride
2024 人性善意类 陌生人之间的互相信任 旅行者网站https://budgettraveller.org/meet-gunter-the-best-taxi-driver-in-vienna-austria/
2025 （一） 情感修复类 兄弟因宠物狗产生隔阂？ 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2025 （二） 文化交流类 留学生融入新环境并传播中国文化 ？
1. 记叙文
3. 教育意义
2. 贴近学生生活
受出题人喜爱的来源有哪些？
出题人如何理顺故事框架？
出题人如何营造矛盾冲突点？
源自于哪？
删、换、补
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
出题人如何理顺故事框架？
删、换、补
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
2024
原文字数：1393词
2023
原文字数：688词
2021
原文字数：498词
2022
原文字数：1193词
删
2025（一）
2025
续写首句之前
原文字数：641词
删减后：316词
1
雕琢成器
出题人如何理顺故事框架？
删、换、补
续写真题的诞生
325词
删
1
雕琢成器
续写真题的诞生
题源 第一段
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks and delectables, while my job was to have the backyard in order. That meant lawn mowed, play structure cleared of cobwebs, and patio furniture cleaned.
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
生词
删
真题 第一段
无关紧要的信息
1
雕琢成器
续写真题的诞生
题源 第二段
There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his unruly Irish Setter, Max. I knew from past encounters that Max was friendly enough, but like many two-year-olds, he was full of energy and quite rambunctious. Weighing in at just over fifty pounds, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys, never mind my six-month-old granddaughter.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
难以管束的爱尔兰
雪达犬
换
真题 第二段
Max Toby
1
雕琢成器
续写真题的诞生
续写 第二段 段首句
I swallowed my pride. I knew my brother’s daily routine and reasoned I could catch him at home around lunchtime. So, I picked up a pizza and headed over to his house unannounced. His car was in the driveway, so unless he was out for a walk, he was bound to be at home.
换
题源 第十三段
原因何在？
1
雕琢成器
续写真题的诞生
续写 第二段 段首句
I swallowed my pride. I knew my brother’s daily routine and reasoned I could catch him at home around lunchtime. So, I picked up a pizza and headed over to his house unannounced. His car was in the driveway, so unless he was out for a walk, he was bound to be at home.
换
题源 第十三段
原因何在？
So, I picked up a pizza and headed over to my brother’s house.
1
雕琢成器
续写真题的诞生
真题 第六段
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
原文没有
补
轻易不“补”
受出题人喜爱的来源有哪些？
出题人如何理顺故事框架？
出题人如何营造矛盾冲突点？
源自于哪？
删、换、补
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
2
续写真题的诞生
切入
高潮部分
如何做？
全国一卷 读后续写
01
Go Go Go
一起来完成写作任务吧！
构思破局
1. 理清脉络
2. 分析首句
3.确定主题
4. 衔接关键
5. 填充中间
2
2
构思破局
（1）理清脉络
矛盾冲突点
别让生活耗尽了你的耐心和向往，你还有诗和远方。别让生活耗尽了你的耐心和向往，你还有诗和远方。别让生活耗尽了你的耐心和向往，你还有诗和远方。
单击输入标题
2
构思破局
（1）理清脉络
1. My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early
summer.
2. My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire.
3. I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
4. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
5. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with
a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
6. Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted.
7. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed
away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
主干
别让生活耗尽了你的耐心和向往，你还有诗和远方。别让生活耗尽了你的耐心和向往，你还有诗和远方。别让生活耗尽了你的耐心和向往，你还有诗和远方。
单击输入标题
2
构思破局
（1）理清脉络
1. My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early
summer.
2. My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire.
3. I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
4. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
5. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with
a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
6. Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted.
7. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed
away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
主干
2
构思破局
（2）分析首句
我意识到错在于我。
带着妻子做的饼干，我来到了兄弟家门前。
2
构思破局
（3）确定主题
内心挣扎
采取行动
主人公的成长变化轨迹
关系修复
1
雕琢成器
续写真题的诞生
真题 第六段
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
补
内心挣扎
采取行动
主人公的成长变化轨迹
关系修复
理解体谅
兄弟情
2
构思破局
第一段的第一句
第二段的第一句
第一段的最后一句
结尾
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
关键衔接+中间填充
第一段的第一句
错在哪了？
兄弟面临的客观情况
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long.
What I did was unfair to my brother
第一段的最后一句
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long.
What I did was unfair to my brother
段落肚子的填充
第一段的最后一句
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits.
What I did was unfair to my brother
第一段的最后一句
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits.
What I did was unfair to my brother
第一段的最后一句
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
What I did was unfair to my brother
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
What I did was unfair to my brother
第二段的第一句
到门口后会发生什么？
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
What I did was unfair to my brother
As I rang the bell, Toby began barking inside.
狗狗需要出现吗？
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
What I did was unfair to my brother
As I rang the bell, Toby began barking inside.
段落肚子的填充
结尾
动作+情感
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
What I did was unfair to my brother
As I rang the bell, Toby began barking inside. Then my brother opened it ,with surprise and a hint of warmth in his eyes. Before he could speak, I held up the tin. “For you,” I said, “And for Toby.” His gaze dropped to the biscuits, and I saw his throat tense. Meanwhile, Toby wagged his tail excitedly as if to forgive me. As my brother took the biscuits bin, I saw a smile cross his lips.
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
What I did was unfair to my brother
As I rang the bell, Toby began barking inside. Then my brother opened it ,with surprise and a hint of warmth in his eyes. Before he could speak, I held up the tin. “For you,” I said, “And forToby.” His gaze dropped to the biscuits, and I saw his throat tense. Meanwhile, Toby wagged his tail excitedly as if to forgive me. As my brother took the biscuits bin, I saw a smile cross his lips.
结尾
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
What I did was unfair to my brother especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
When I rang the bell, Toby began barking inside. Then my brother opened it with surprise. Before he could speak, I held up the tin. “For you,” I said, “And for Toby.” His gaze dropped to the biscuits, and I saw his throat tense. Meanwhile, Toby wagged his tail excitedly as if to urge my brother to forgive me. As my brother took the biscuits bin, I saw a smile cross his lips. A short get-together finally turned into a one-hour visit. Thanks to putting myself in my brother's shoes, it felt good to reconnect.
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
理解体谅
兄弟情
2
构思破局
What I did was unfair to my brother especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
When I rang the bell, Toby began barking inside. Then my brother opened it with surprise. Before he could speak, I held up the tin. “For you,” I said, “And for Toby.” His gaze dropped to the biscuits, and I saw his throat tense. Meanwhile, Toby wagged his tail excitedly as if to urge my brother to forgive me. As my brother took the biscuits bins, I saw a smile cross his lips. A short get-together finally turned into a one-hour visit. Thanks to putting myself in my brother's shoes, it felt good to reconnect.
大功告成
全国二卷 读后续写
01
构思破局
1. 理清脉络
2. 分析首句
3.确定主题
4. 衔接关键
5. 填充中间
全国二卷
难点解析
全国二卷
难点解析
全国二卷
难点解析
1. 解释秋雨的含义
2. 确定写作主题
全国二卷
难点解析
1. 解释秋雨的含义
1. 她出生在秋天，那天刚好下雨。
2. 秋天的雨在中国文化里有一种美的意境。
3. ... ...
解释：清晰+有趣
穿插：情绪变化+动作描写
聚焦：勿节外生枝
难点解析
1. 解释秋雨的含义
In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. At first, I hesitated, but then I took a deep breath and stood up.“In Chinese, 'Qiu' means autumn, and 'Yu' means rain.”I explained. With my voice growing steadier, I continued, “I was born on a rainy autumn day. My parents always said the autumn rain is a symbol of beauty and romance. ”I smiled, recalling and sharing how my grandmother used to call the autumn rain“nature’s poetry”. Fascinated, the class leaned towards me. After I finished, a warm applause filled the room.
解释：清晰+有趣
穿插：情绪变化+动作描写
聚焦：勿节外生枝
注意情绪状态的变化
难点解析
2. 确定写作主题
个人层面
困境的摆脱
国家文化层面
传播与交流
文化自信
难点解析
2. 确定写作主题
Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class. “So your name is like a story!” one exclaimed. Another even asked, “Can you help me choose a Chinese name ” Observing their enthusiastic expressions, I felt a warmth spread through me. Later, many including the professor tried to pronounce “Qiuyu” more accurately, asking for tips and repeating it with determination.
结尾
难点解析
2. 确定写作主题
Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class. “So your name is like a story!” one exclaimed. Another even asked, “Can you help me choose a Chinese name ” Observing their enthusiastic expressions, I felt a warmth spread through me. Later, many including the professor tried to pronounce “Qiuyu” more accurately, asking for tips and repeating it with determination. I realized that my name was not a burden—it was a bridge. And that simple explanation had opened a window into my culture, helping others see through it.
国家文化层面
传播与交流
文化自信
个人层面
困境的摆脱
2
构思破局
大功告成
In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. At first, I hesitated, but then I took a deep breath and stood up.“In Chinese, 'Qiu' means autumn, and 'Yu' means rain.”I explained. With my voice growing steadier, I continued, “I was born on a rainy autumn day. My parents always said the autumn rain is a symbol of beauty and romance. ”I smiled, recalling and sharing how my grandmother used to call the autumn rain“nature’s poetry”. Fascinated, the class leaned towards me. After I finished, a warm applause filled the room.
Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class. “So your name is like a story!” one exclaimed. Another even asked, “Can you help me choose a Chinese name ” Observing their enthusiastic expressions, I felt a warmth spread through me. Later, many including the professor tried to pronounce “Qiuyu” more accurately, asking for tips and repeating it with determination. I realized that my name was not a burden—it was a bridge. And that simple explanation had opened a window into my culture, helping others see through it.
全国一、二卷 读后续写
02
简化续写解题
3
推陈出新
5W1H法
Who（人物） ________________
What（事件） ________________
When（时间） ________________ Where（地点） ________________
Why（原因） ________________
How（情感/动作）________________
简单点，解题的方式简单点
构思破局
1. 理清脉络
2. 分析首句
3.确定主题
4. 衔接关键
5. 填充中间
个人化语料库
3
推陈出新
个人化语料库
3
推陈出新
3
推陈出新
个人化语料库
简化续写解题
WE HAVE MADE GREAT ACHIEVEMENTS
谢谢您的聆听
深度解析
2025高考英语
全国一、二卷 书面表达
讲解人：
李凤臣
深度解析
2025高考英语
全国一、二卷 书面表达
一线教师
一线教师
一线学生
写作 总评
全国一卷
全国一卷
全国一卷
全国二卷
一线教师
一线学生
写作 总评
全国一卷
全国一卷
全国一卷
全国二卷
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
写作 总评
（2025·济南·三模）
相似
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
写作 总评
（2025·深圳·一模）
相似
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
写作 总评
（2025·深圳·一模）
1
（2025·全国一卷·读后续写）
（2025 温州二模 读后续写）
原谅
兄弟情深
兄弟情深
相似
1
2
4
3
2
温州二模
1
2
4
3
2
温州二模
01
应用文 解读
目录
CONTENT
02
读后续写 解读
应用文解读
01
1
是什么？
2
写什么？
3
怎么做？
01
应用文 “灵魂三问”
（2025·江苏南京·二模）
假定你是李华，外教Mr. Chuck发现你的作文完全由AI生成，判为不及格。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1) 承认错误；
(2) 做出许诺；
(3) 补救措施。
01
（2025·浙江绍兴·二模）
近期，你将参加学校组织的英语主题征文活动。请结合自身经历，就“技术支撑下的个性化学习”的主题写一篇短文，内容包括：
(1) 陈述观点；
(2) 分享体验。
02
（2025·山东烟台·一模）
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办以“AI in My Life”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. AI在你生活中的应用；
2. 你的感受和期待。
03
1
是什么？
1
大热话题
【2022新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是校广播站英语节目 “Talk and Talk” 的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
01
【2023新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
02
（2024新课标I/II卷真题）
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 你完成的作品；
2. 你的感想。
03
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
体裁：书信/邮件
邀请信
体裁：书信/邮件
告知 / 分享信
体裁：书信/邮件
建议信
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
02
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
体裁：书信/邮件
建议信
体裁：书信/邮件
问询&告知信
会！
【2022新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是校广播站英语节目 “Talk and Talk” 的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
01
【2023新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
02
（2024新课标I/II卷真题）
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 你完成的作品；
2. 你的感想。
03
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
特征一
1.贴近学生的学习和生活
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
02
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
1.贴近学生的学习和生活
特征一
是什么？
1
优秀模拟题
（2025·湖丽衢一模）
假定你是李华，你校将举办英语节“戏剧之夜”(Drama Night)活动，并且进行网络直播(live-stream)，请你给英国好友David写一封电子邮件，邀请他观看，内容如下：
1.活动介绍；
2.观看时间和方式。
特征一
高考味十足
【2022新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是校广播站英语节目 “Talk and Talk” 的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
01
【2023新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
02
（2024新课标I/II卷真题）
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 你完成的作品；
2. 你的感想。
03
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
特征二
2.要点追求开放性
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
02
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
2.要点追求开放性
特征二
【2020新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了 5 公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 参加人员；
2. 跑步路线：从校门
口到南山脚下；
3. 活动反响。
01
【2021新课标I/II卷真题】
你校英文报 Youth 正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 读报的经历；
2. 喜爱的栏目；
3. 期望和祝福。
02
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
变化趋势
要点数量减少
特征二
3个
2个
【2022新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是校广播站英语节目 “Talk and Talk” 的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
01
【2023新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
02
（2024新课标I/II卷真题）
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 你完成的作品；
2. 你的感想。
03
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
特征二
2.要点追求开放性
2个
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
01
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
02
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
2.要点追求开放性
特征二
2个
【2023新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
01
（2024新课标I/II卷真题）
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
1. 你完成的作品；
2. 你的感想。
02
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
特征三
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
是什么？
1
真题再现
特征三
3.给开头，减少写套话的机会
少点套路，多点思考
Hello，I am Li Hua.
全国一卷 应用文
01
Go Go Go
一起来完成写作任务吧！
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
礼貌得体
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
“校园里的乐趣”
“猜猜我是谁”
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
外教Jenny享有最终决定权
Hope my suggestion could be considered.
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
写个性，而非共性
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
第一段： 你的选择 2句
第二段： 说明理由 3个理由
第三段： 希望被采纳 2句
Step2 构思框架
写什么？
2
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
第一段
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
Step3 动笔开写
写什么？
2
1
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
第一段
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. Between the two options, I prefer the first one,“Fun at my school”. The reasons are as follows.
Step3 动笔开写
写什么？
2
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
第二段
First, the column offers a platform where we can share the moments full of joy in our school life, ranging from funny classroom episodes to exciting club events, which can definitely help us relieve our academic pressure. Plus, as a source of positive energy, the column brightens our days and creates a ripple effect of laughter and warmth. More importantly, It not only serves as a digital time capsule, transforming transient moments into lasting treasures but also as a way to build a bridge between each other, allowing optimistic spirit to be passed down.
Step3 动笔开写
写什么？
2
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
第三段
I truly hope my suggestion could be considered and I am looking forward to seeing the new column come to life!
Step3 动笔开写
写什么？
2
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. Between the two options, I prefer the first one,“Fun at my school”. The reasons are as follows.
First, the column offers a platform where we can share the moments full of joy in our school life, ranging from funny classroom episodes to exciting club events, which can definitely help us relieve our academic pressure. Plus, as a source of positive energy, the column brightens our days and creates a ripple effect of laughter and warmth. More importantly, It not only serves as a digital time capsule, transforming transient moments into lasting treasures but also as a way to build a bridge between each other, allowing optimistic spirit to be passed down.
I truly hope my suggestion could be considered and I am looking forward to seeing the new column come to life!
写什么？
2
合聚成篇
（2025全国一卷真题）
假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给 Jenny 写一封邮件,内容包括
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
1
真题再现
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. Between the two options, I prefer the second one, “Guess who I am”. The reasons are as follows.
First, this column would create more interaction among students, as it requires us to read clues and guess the identity of a classmate, teacher, or even a film character. Thus, it not only makes reading appealing but also improves our logical thinking skills. Plus, the column encourages us to observe people in detail and appreciate their qualities, which can bridge the gap and strengthen bonds between each other. More importantly, by adding an element of mystery and fun, the column can help our newspaper attract a wider readership.
I truly hope my suggestion could be considered and I am looking forward to seeing the new column come to life!
写什么？
2
合聚成篇
全国二卷 应用文
01
Go Go Go
一起来完成写作任务吧！
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
难
非常考验情商
弱化“催”的感觉
催稿信？
强化询问与期待
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
难
非常考验情商
必要性
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
难
非常考验情商
If you need some information, don’t hesitate to tell me.
If you have any questions regarding length or format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step1 细致读题
难
非常考验情商
3/4句话
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited—the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to ensure its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you need any assistance or have questions regarding format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
合聚成篇
写作目的
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited—the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to ensure its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you need any assistance or have questions regarding format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
合聚成篇
两个要点
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited—the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to ensure its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you need any assistance or have questions regarding format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
合聚成篇
文章的重大意义
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited—the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to guarantee its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you have questions regarding length or format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
合聚成篇
转移矛盾
不是“催”，胜似“催”
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited—the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to guarantee its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you have any questions regarding length or format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
合聚成篇
关心
感谢
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
1
写什么？
2
完成写作任务
Step3 动笔开写
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to follow up on the article about sports in Canada that you kindly agreed to contribute to our school magazine.
I was wondering how the writing process is coming along. Your insights into Canadian sports will no doubt offer our readers a fascinating glimpse into the highlight of Canadian culture, especially for those who have a passion for ice and snow sports. After hearing you are writing on this topic, many students get excited—the article is truly anticipated! Just as a gentle reminder, the final draft is due next Tuesday, June 25th, to guarantee its timely inclusion in the upcoming edition. If you have any questions regarding length or format, please don’t hesitate to inform us.
We would appreciate it if you could send the article at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you again for your support!
Best regards,
Li Hua
合聚成篇
全国一、二卷 真题启示
01
练习
怎么做？
3
（2023新课标I/II卷真题)
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
（2025全国二卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
真题启示
练习
怎么做？
3
思考
&
分析
【2023新课标I/II卷真题】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
（2025新课标II卷真题）
假定你是校英文报编辑李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给 Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）询问进展；
（2）提醒交稿时间。
真题启示
真题启示
（2025·济宁一模）
假定你是李华，,你在 Global Forum 上看到了Jason的求助帖。请给他回帖,内容如下:
(1)你的看法;
(2)你的建议
怎么做？
3
【2025湖丽衢二模】
假定你是李华，你校有些学生把老师的照片制作成表情包(meme)并在社交媒体上传播，针对这一现象，请给校英语报Letters专栏投稿，内容包括：
1. 陈述观点；
2. 提出建议
（2025深圳二模）
口语课上，外教组织同学们讨论：“假如你可以带一件现代物品穿越到古代，你会带什么？”请你准备一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 简介物品；
2. 你的理由
读后续写 解读
02
1
雕琢成器
2
构思破局
3
推陈出新
01
读后续写 “三部曲”
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
受出题人喜爱的
来源有哪些？
出题人如何理顺
故事框架？
出题人如何营造
矛盾冲突点？
源自于哪？
删、换、补
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
受出题人喜爱的题源有哪些？
源自于哪？
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
年份 话题类型 情境内容 文章来源
2021 家庭温情类 孩子为母亲制作母亲节早餐 教育网站Assignment Point
https://www./other/mothers-day-celebration-with-twin-child-an-open-speech.html
2022 社会关怀类 鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2023 成长突破类 老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣 杂志的网站https://www./story/lighting-the-candle-a-wild-ride
2024 人性善意类 陌生人之间的互相信任 旅行者网站https://budgettraveller.org/meet-gunter-the-best-taxi-driver-in-vienna-austria/
2025 （一） 情感修复类 兄弟因宠物狗产生隔阂？ 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2025 （二） 文化交流类 留学生融入新环境并传播中国文化 ？
2022
2025（一）
受出题人喜爱的题源有哪些？
源自于哪？
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
年份 话题类型 情境内容 文章来源
2021 家庭温情类 孩子为母亲制作母亲节早餐 教育网站Assignment Point
https://www./other/mothers-day-celebration-with-twin-child-an-open-speech.html
2022 社会关怀类 鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2023 成长突破类 老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣 杂志的网站https://www./story/lighting-the-candle-a-wild-ride
2024 人性善意类 陌生人之间的互相信任 旅行者网站https://budgettraveller.org/meet-gunter-the-best-taxi-driver-in-vienna-austria/
2025 （一） 情感修复类 兄弟因宠物狗产生隔阂？ 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2025 （二） 文化交流类 留学生融入新环境并传播中国文化 ？
1. 记叙文
受出题人喜爱的题源有哪些？
源自于哪？
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
年份 话题类型 情境内容 文章来源
2021 家庭温情类 孩子为母亲制作母亲节早餐 教育网站Assignment Point
https://www./other/mothers-day-celebration-with-twin-child-an-open-speech.html
2022 社会关怀类 鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2023 成长突破类 老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣 杂志的网站https://www./story/lighting-the-candle-a-wild-ride
2024 人性善意类 陌生人之间的互相信任 旅行者网站https://budgettraveller.org/meet-gunter-the-best-taxi-driver-in-vienna-austria/
2025 （一） 情感修复类 兄弟因宠物狗产生隔阂？ 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2025 （二） 文化交流类 留学生融入新环境并传播中国文化 ？
1. 记叙文
2. 贴近学生生活
受出题人喜爱的题源有哪些？
源自于哪？
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
年份 话题类型 情境内容 文章来源
2021 家庭温情类 孩子为母亲制作母亲节早餐 教育网站Assignment Point
https://www./other/mothers-day-celebration-with-twin-child-an-open-speech.html
2022 社会关怀类 鼓励残疾学生参加越野赛跑 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2023 成长突破类 老师帮助作者培养写作兴趣 杂志的网站https://www./story/lighting-the-candle-a-wild-ride
2024 人性善意类 陌生人之间的互相信任 旅行者网站https://budgettraveller.org/meet-gunter-the-best-taxi-driver-in-vienna-austria/
2025 （一） 情感修复类 兄弟因宠物狗产生隔阂？ 杂志《心灵鸡汤》
2025 （二） 文化交流类 留学生融入新环境并传播中国文化 ？
1. 记叙文
3. 教育意义
2. 贴近学生生活
受出题人喜爱的来源有哪些？
出题人如何理顺故事框架？
出题人如何营造矛盾冲突点？
源自于哪？
删、换、补
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
出题人如何理顺故事框架？
删、换、补
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
2024
原文字数：1393词
2023
原文字数：688词
2021
原文字数：498词
2022
原文字数：1193词
删
2025（一）
2025
续写首句之前
原文字数：641词
删减后：316词
1
雕琢成器
出题人如何理顺故事框架？
删、换、补
续写真题的诞生
325词
删
1
雕琢成器
续写真题的诞生
题源 第一段
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks and delectables, while my job was to have the backyard in order. That meant lawn mowed, play structure cleared of cobwebs, and patio furniture cleaned.
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
生词
删
真题 第一段
无关紧要的信息
1
雕琢成器
续写真题的诞生
题源 第二段
There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his unruly Irish Setter, Max. I knew from past encounters that Max was friendly enough, but like many two-year-olds, he was full of energy and quite rambunctious. Weighing in at just over fifty pounds, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys, never mind my six-month-old granddaughter.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
难以管束的爱尔兰
雪达犬
换
真题 第二段
Max Toby
1
雕琢成器
续写真题的诞生
续写 第二段 段首句
I swallowed my pride. I knew my brother’s daily routine and reasoned I could catch him at home around lunchtime. So, I picked up a pizza and headed over to his house unannounced. His car was in the driveway, so unless he was out for a walk, he was bound to be at home.
换
题源 第十三段
原因何在？
1
雕琢成器
续写真题的诞生
续写 第二段 段首句
I swallowed my pride. I knew my brother’s daily routine and reasoned I could catch him at home around lunchtime. So, I picked up a pizza and headed over to his house unannounced. His car was in the driveway, so unless he was out for a walk, he was bound to be at home.
换
题源 第十三段
原因何在？
So, I picked up a pizza and headed over to my brother’s house.
1
雕琢成器
续写真题的诞生
真题 第六段
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
原文没有
补
轻易不“补”
受出题人喜爱的来源有哪些？
出题人如何理顺故事框架？
出题人如何营造矛盾冲突点？
源自于哪？
删、换、补
首句的切入
续写真题的诞生
1
雕琢成器
2
续写真题的诞生
切入
高潮部分
如何做？
全国一卷 读后续写
01
Go Go Go
一起来完成写作任务吧！
构思破局
1. 理清脉络
2. 分析首句
3.确定主题
4. 衔接关键
5. 填充中间
2
2
构思破局
（1）理清脉络
矛盾冲突点
别让生活耗尽了你的耐心和向往，你还有诗和远方。别让生活耗尽了你的耐心和向往，你还有诗和远方。别让生活耗尽了你的耐心和向往，你还有诗和远方。
单击输入标题
2
构思破局
（1）理清脉络
1. My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early
summer.
2. My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire.
3. I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
4. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
5. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with
a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
6. Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted.
7. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed
away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
主干
别让生活耗尽了你的耐心和向往，你还有诗和远方。别让生活耗尽了你的耐心和向往，你还有诗和远方。别让生活耗尽了你的耐心和向往，你还有诗和远方。
单击输入标题
2
构思破局
（1）理清脉络
1. My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early
summer.
2. My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire.
3. I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
4. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
5. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with
a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
6. Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted.
7. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed
away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
主干
2
构思破局
（2）分析首句
我意识到错在于我。
带着妻子做的饼干，我来到了兄弟家门前。
2
构思破局
（3）确定主题
内心挣扎
采取行动
主人公的成长变化轨迹
关系修复
1
雕琢成器
续写真题的诞生
真题 第六段
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
补
内心挣扎
采取行动
主人公的成长变化轨迹
关系修复
理解体谅
兄弟情
2
构思破局
第一段的第一句
第二段的第一句
第一段的最后一句
结尾
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
关键衔接+中间填充
第一段的第一句
错在哪了？
兄弟面临的客观情况
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long.
What I did was unfair to my brother
第一段的最后一句
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long.
What I did was unfair to my brother
段落肚子的填充
第一段的最后一句
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits.
What I did was unfair to my brother
第一段的最后一句
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits.
What I did was unfair to my brother
第一段的最后一句
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
What I did was unfair to my brother
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
What I did was unfair to my brother
第二段的第一句
到门口后会发生什么？
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
What I did was unfair to my brother
As I rang the bell, Toby began barking inside.
狗狗需要出现吗？
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
What I did was unfair to my brother
As I rang the bell, Toby began barking inside.
段落肚子的填充
结尾
动作+情感
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
What I did was unfair to my brother
As I rang the bell, Toby began barking inside. Then my brother opened it ,with surprise and a hint of warmth in his eyes. Before he could speak, I held up the tin. “For you,” I said, “And for Toby.” His gaze dropped to the biscuits, and I saw his throat tense. Meanwhile, Toby wagged his tail excitedly as if to forgive me. As my brother took the biscuits bin, I saw a smile cross his lips.
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
What I did was unfair to my brother
As I rang the bell, Toby began barking inside. Then my brother opened it ,with surprise and a hint of warmth in his eyes. Before he could speak, I held up the tin. “For you,” I said, “And forToby.” His gaze dropped to the biscuits, and I saw his throat tense. Meanwhile, Toby wagged his tail excitedly as if to forgive me. As my brother took the biscuits bin, I saw a smile cross his lips.
结尾
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
2
构思破局
What I did was unfair to my brother especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
When I rang the bell, Toby began barking inside. Then my brother opened it with surprise. Before he could speak, I held up the tin. “For you,” I said, “And for Toby.” His gaze dropped to the biscuits, and I saw his throat tense. Meanwhile, Toby wagged his tail excitedly as if to urge my brother to forgive me. As my brother took the biscuits bin, I saw a smile cross his lips. A short get-together finally turned into a one-hour visit. Thanks to putting myself in my brother's shoes, it felt good to reconnect.
（4）衔接关键+填充中间
理解体谅
兄弟情
2
构思破局
What I did was unfair to my brother especially during a tough time in his life. For my brother, Toby was more a comfort and support than just a pet. I should have been understanding instead of making him choose between family and his dog. At the thought of it, I felt guilty for letting my pride keep us apart for so long. Then, I decided to act. Knowing my resolve, my wife offered to bake a tin of biscuits. Now it was time for me to reach out and make things right.
When I rang the bell, Toby began barking inside. Then my brother opened it with surprise. Before he could speak, I held up the tin. “For you,” I said, “And for Toby.” His gaze dropped to the biscuits, and I saw his throat tense. Meanwhile, Toby wagged his tail excitedly as if to urge my brother to forgive me. As my brother took the biscuits bins, I saw a smile cross his lips. A short get-together finally turned into a one-hour visit. Thanks to putting myself in my brother's shoes, it felt good to reconnect.
大功告成
全国二卷 读后续写
01
构思破局
1. 理清脉络
2. 分析首句
3.确定主题
4. 衔接关键
5. 填充中间
全国二卷
难点解析
全国二卷
难点解析
全国二卷
难点解析
1. 解释秋雨的含义
2. 确定写作主题
全国二卷
难点解析
1. 解释秋雨的含义
1. 她出生在秋天，那天刚好下雨。
2. 秋天的雨在中国文化里有一种美的意境。
3. ... ...
解释：清晰+有趣
穿插：情绪变化+动作描写
聚焦：勿节外生枝
难点解析
1. 解释秋雨的含义
In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. At first, I hesitated, but then I took a deep breath and stood up.“In Chinese, 'Qiu' means autumn, and 'Yu' means rain.”I explained. With my voice growing steadier, I continued, “I was born on a rainy autumn day. My parents always said the autumn rain is a symbol of beauty and romance. ”I smiled, recalling and sharing how my grandmother used to call the autumn rain“nature’s poetry”. Fascinated, the class leaned towards me. After I finished, a warm applause filled the room.
解释：清晰+有趣
穿插：情绪变化+动作描写
聚焦：勿节外生枝
注意情绪状态的变化
难点解析
2. 确定写作主题
个人层面
困境的摆脱
国家文化层面
传播与交流
文化自信
难点解析
2. 确定写作主题
Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class. “So your name is like a story!” one exclaimed. Another even asked, “Can you help me choose a Chinese name ” Observing their enthusiastic expressions, I felt a warmth spread through me. Later, many including the professor tried to pronounce “Qiuyu” more accurately, asking for tips and repeating it with determination.
结尾
难点解析
2. 确定写作主题
Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class. “So your name is like a story!” one exclaimed. Another even asked, “Can you help me choose a Chinese name ” Observing their enthusiastic expressions, I felt a warmth spread through me. Later, many including the professor tried to pronounce “Qiuyu” more accurately, asking for tips and repeating it with determination. I realized that my name was not a burden—it was a bridge. And that simple explanation had opened a window into my culture, helping others see through it.
国家文化层面
传播与交流
文化自信
个人层面
困境的摆脱
2
构思破局
大功告成
In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. At first, I hesitated, but then I took a deep breath and stood up.“In Chinese, 'Qiu' means autumn, and 'Yu' means rain.”I explained. With my voice growing steadier, I continued, “I was born on a rainy autumn day. My parents always said the autumn rain is a symbol of beauty and romance. ”I smiled, recalling and sharing how my grandmother used to call the autumn rain“nature’s poetry”. Fascinated, the class leaned towards me. After I finished, a warm applause filled the room.
Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class. “So your name is like a story!” one exclaimed. Another even asked, “Can you help me choose a Chinese name ” Observing their enthusiastic expressions, I felt a warmth spread through me. Later, many including the professor tried to pronounce “Qiuyu” more accurately, asking for tips and repeating it with determination. I realized that my name was not a burden—it was a bridge. And that simple explanation had opened a window into my culture, helping others see through it.
全国一、二卷 读后续写
02
简化续写解题
3
推陈出新
5W1H法
Who（人物） ________________
What（事件） ________________
When（时间） ________________ Where（地点） ________________
Why（原因） ________________
How（情感/动作）________________
简单点，解题的方式简单点
构思破局
1. 理清脉络
2. 分析首句
3.确定主题
4. 衔接关键
5. 填充中间
个人化语料库
3
推陈出新
个人化语料库
3
推陈出新
3
推陈出新
个人化语料库
简化续写解题
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