2026届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写写作技巧指导 课件(共16张PPT)
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(共16张PPT)
读后续写
写作技巧指导
句型多样
长短结合，简繁交错
What an adorable pony（可爱的小马）! Its slender（苗条的） body, its silky mane（鬃毛）, its leisurely pace（悠闲的步伐）, and its shiny saddle（闪亮的鞍）, all kept me so spellbound that I couldn’t avert my gaze（转移我的视线） from it. (From A CHRISTMAS PONY)
After what seemed like a century, the longing for boots finally gave way to the desire to buy a turkey. (From CHRISTMAS BOOTS OR DECORATIONS)
Scene after scene, where Mum worked day in and day out and the whole family struggled to make ends meet（量入为出）, came flooding in my mind. (From CHRISTMAS BOOTS OR DECORATIONS)
Out of the dark forest came a man in uniform. It was the forester（护林人）! (From FISHING ADVENTURE)
Slowly, she turned around, and, mustering（聚集） all her remaining strength, staggered（蹒跚，摇晃） towards the darkness, her back hunched（耸） and body slightly trembling. (From MY ONE-EYED MOTHER)
感叹句；名词短语；so… that句型
定语从句
倒装句
独立主格结构
名词性从句
Sensing a note of sincerity in my voice（感受到真诚的语气）, he, after a momentary hesitation, nodded and walked to his favorite cake. “May I have this one ” he enquired sheepishly（害羞）. (From THE SAMPLER)
With his head drooping（垂头）, John reluctantly turned around, and slowly inched his way to his room. (From CHRISTMAS WITHOUT AN ORANGE)
Through tearful（含泪的） eyes, I visualized（想象） my feeble（虚弱的） mother writing the last letter for me with her quivering hand in the dim light. (From MY ONE-EYED MOTHER)
Eyes lingering（停留，盯着） on the figurine（小雕像）, the man’s face softened, and, much to the boy’s astonishment, it creased（皱纹） into a faint smile. (From THE DOG FIGURINE)
When led out of the forest, Steve and I repeatedly stammered（结结巴巴） our heartfelt thanks to him.
非谓语动词
With复合结构
状语从句中的省略
介词短语
动作描写
心中有“画” ，笔下有“话”
动作描写：①给动作“化功大法”
He thanked the man, took over the reins（绳子） and led the pony in my direction. (From THE CHRISTMAS PONY)
Seeing this, Mr. Rowe came up to him, crouched down（蹲下） and asked in a tone of tender concern（关心）, “What’s up ” (From MR. ROWE)
With a pang of nervousness seizing his heart tightly, he stood in front of the door, wondering about the old man’s reaction to being disturbed a second time. Ultimately, he summoned up(召唤） all his courage and knocked at the door. (From THE DOG FIGURINE)
写一写
情景1：碰到难题，苦思冥想。
What a complicated and difficult math problem! One second, Little John rested his chin（用手托下巴） in his hand and fiddled（虚度光阴）） with the pencil. The next, he fidgeted（烦躁） in his seat and scratched（挠） his head over and over again, not having the faintest idea how to work it out.
写一写
情景2：成功爬上山顶。
The magnificent（壮丽的） landscape unfolding in front of me, a sense of refreshment spread through me. Involuntarily（无心，不自觉）, I stretched out my arms, tilted my head（倾斜） and exclaimed（呼喊，大声说） in delight at the top of my voice, feeling the crisp breeze（微风） on my face.
动作描写：②给动作“涂脂抹粉”
With his head drooping, John reluctantly turned around, and slowly inched his way to his room. (From CHRISTMAS WITHOUT AN ORANGE)
In a sobbing voice, he admitted and regretted having cheated in the test. (From CHEATING IN A TEST)
Without a momentary（片刻的） hesitation, I elbowed （肘，推挤）my way through the crowd in the direction of Lego section and all the way kept calling my brother’s name, a note of uneasiness in my voice. (From LEGO TOYS)
写一写
情景3：发现一只受伤的小鸟。
On the grass ahead lay a swallow with an outstretched wing that was obviously broken. Seeing this, Little Betty walked swiftly beside the poor little creature, stooped/bent down（弯腰）, and lifted it in her cupped hands gently and carefully as if holding a precious and fragile treasure(宝贵的，易碎的）.
He cupped his hands around his mouth and called out for his friends at the top of his voice.
动作描写：③给动作“配上声音”
④给动作“加上表情”
Taking a deep breath, he summoned up all his remaining courage and gently knocked at the door. With a flicker （闪过）of anger in his eyes, the old man opened the door and snapped（断裂） in a cold voice, “Why come again !” Timidly, the boy stretched out his hands and stuffed his dog figurine into the old man’s palm. “For me ” asked the man, confusion registering on his face. The boy nodded, “I hope you’ll like it.” Eyes lingering on the figurine, the man’s face softened, and, much to the boy’s astonishment, it creased into a faint smile. “Thank you,” uttered the old man, his eyes red-rimmed（眼眶红了） with tears. (From THE DOG FIGURINE)
写一写
情景4：久别之后回到家。
The familiar sight came into view. Involuntarily, he clutched the handle（紧握手把） of the luggage more firmly and quickened his pace towards his home, his mind drifting to the surprised and delighted expression on his mother’s face. Reaching the doorstep, he paused to compose himself, pushed open the door and exclaimed in delight, “Mum, I’m home,” with his eyes sparkling with anticipation（期待）.
动作描写：⑤给动作“融入心理”
But I, consumed with intense anger at her sudden appearance in my doorway, just cast her an indifferent glance, ignored her pleading look and uttered no word. (From MY ONE-EYED MOTHER)
Torn between the overwhelming yearning （渴望，向往）for the delicate boots and the melancholy （令人悲伤的）for our depressing Christmas, I came to a halt halfway to the shoe store. (From CHRISTMAS BOOTS OR DECORATIONS)
写一写
情景5：憧憬假期。
With his chin in his cupped hand, he sat there motionlessly
（静止）, all his mind on where to spend the long-anticipated holiday. Actually, all these days he had been racking his brains（磨炼脑袋） to figure out a plan. Then all of a sudden, he had an idea — how about going to the beach for relaxation “Yes, that’s it!” he whispered to himself, his lips curving into a beaming smile.
动作描写：⑥给动作“添上环境”
Anxiously straining（紧张） my eyes, I scanned the toy store, but he was nowhere to be found. Outside, thunder and lightning continued; inside, chaotic （混乱的）noise rang in my ears. Deep anxiety dominating me, I was on the verge of tears and stood rooted in blackness, hopeless and helpless. (From LEGO TOYS)
Worse still, when the fire died down, the whole wilderness was enveloped in darkness, with no one in sight. What kept us company was the chill wind that ruthlessly 无情地whipped（鞭） my face, gradually devouring the last bit of the remaining hope in my heart. (From FISHING ADVENTURE)
写一写
情景6：得知被心仪的大学录取。
The Admission Letter clutched （抓）tightly in my hand, I jumped up and down with undisguised（不伪装的，真心的） excitement. Tired, I lay down on the grass and hummed my little tune（哼着曲） along with the birds’ twittering. The breeze, though a bit cool, blew into my heart, dispelling the anxiety（驱散焦虑） that had haunted（萦绕心头） me for a long time.
读后续写
写作技巧指导
句型多样
长短结合，简繁交错
What an adorable pony（可爱的小马）! Its slender（苗条的） body, its silky mane（鬃毛）, its leisurely pace（悠闲的步伐）, and its shiny saddle（闪亮的鞍）, all kept me so spellbound that I couldn’t avert my gaze（转移我的视线） from it. (From A CHRISTMAS PONY)
After what seemed like a century, the longing for boots finally gave way to the desire to buy a turkey. (From CHRISTMAS BOOTS OR DECORATIONS)
Scene after scene, where Mum worked day in and day out and the whole family struggled to make ends meet（量入为出）, came flooding in my mind. (From CHRISTMAS BOOTS OR DECORATIONS)
Out of the dark forest came a man in uniform. It was the forester（护林人）! (From FISHING ADVENTURE)
Slowly, she turned around, and, mustering（聚集） all her remaining strength, staggered（蹒跚，摇晃） towards the darkness, her back hunched（耸） and body slightly trembling. (From MY ONE-EYED MOTHER)
感叹句；名词短语；so… that句型
定语从句
倒装句
独立主格结构
名词性从句
Sensing a note of sincerity in my voice（感受到真诚的语气）, he, after a momentary hesitation, nodded and walked to his favorite cake. “May I have this one ” he enquired sheepishly（害羞）. (From THE SAMPLER)
With his head drooping（垂头）, John reluctantly turned around, and slowly inched his way to his room. (From CHRISTMAS WITHOUT AN ORANGE)
Through tearful（含泪的） eyes, I visualized（想象） my feeble（虚弱的） mother writing the last letter for me with her quivering hand in the dim light. (From MY ONE-EYED MOTHER)
Eyes lingering（停留，盯着） on the figurine（小雕像）, the man’s face softened, and, much to the boy’s astonishment, it creased（皱纹） into a faint smile. (From THE DOG FIGURINE)
When led out of the forest, Steve and I repeatedly stammered（结结巴巴） our heartfelt thanks to him.
非谓语动词
With复合结构
状语从句中的省略
介词短语
动作描写
心中有“画” ，笔下有“话”
动作描写：①给动作“化功大法”
He thanked the man, took over the reins（绳子） and led the pony in my direction. (From THE CHRISTMAS PONY)
Seeing this, Mr. Rowe came up to him, crouched down（蹲下） and asked in a tone of tender concern（关心）, “What’s up ” (From MR. ROWE)
With a pang of nervousness seizing his heart tightly, he stood in front of the door, wondering about the old man’s reaction to being disturbed a second time. Ultimately, he summoned up(召唤） all his courage and knocked at the door. (From THE DOG FIGURINE)
写一写
情景1：碰到难题，苦思冥想。
What a complicated and difficult math problem! One second, Little John rested his chin（用手托下巴） in his hand and fiddled（虚度光阴）） with the pencil. The next, he fidgeted（烦躁） in his seat and scratched（挠） his head over and over again, not having the faintest idea how to work it out.
写一写
情景2：成功爬上山顶。
The magnificent（壮丽的） landscape unfolding in front of me, a sense of refreshment spread through me. Involuntarily（无心，不自觉）, I stretched out my arms, tilted my head（倾斜） and exclaimed（呼喊，大声说） in delight at the top of my voice, feeling the crisp breeze（微风） on my face.
动作描写：②给动作“涂脂抹粉”
With his head drooping, John reluctantly turned around, and slowly inched his way to his room. (From CHRISTMAS WITHOUT AN ORANGE)
In a sobbing voice, he admitted and regretted having cheated in the test. (From CHEATING IN A TEST)
Without a momentary（片刻的） hesitation, I elbowed （肘，推挤）my way through the crowd in the direction of Lego section and all the way kept calling my brother’s name, a note of uneasiness in my voice. (From LEGO TOYS)
写一写
情景3：发现一只受伤的小鸟。
On the grass ahead lay a swallow with an outstretched wing that was obviously broken. Seeing this, Little Betty walked swiftly beside the poor little creature, stooped/bent down（弯腰）, and lifted it in her cupped hands gently and carefully as if holding a precious and fragile treasure(宝贵的，易碎的）.
He cupped his hands around his mouth and called out for his friends at the top of his voice.
动作描写：③给动作“配上声音”
④给动作“加上表情”
Taking a deep breath, he summoned up all his remaining courage and gently knocked at the door. With a flicker （闪过）of anger in his eyes, the old man opened the door and snapped（断裂） in a cold voice, “Why come again !” Timidly, the boy stretched out his hands and stuffed his dog figurine into the old man’s palm. “For me ” asked the man, confusion registering on his face. The boy nodded, “I hope you’ll like it.” Eyes lingering on the figurine, the man’s face softened, and, much to the boy’s astonishment, it creased into a faint smile. “Thank you,” uttered the old man, his eyes red-rimmed（眼眶红了） with tears. (From THE DOG FIGURINE)
写一写
情景4：久别之后回到家。
The familiar sight came into view. Involuntarily, he clutched the handle（紧握手把） of the luggage more firmly and quickened his pace towards his home, his mind drifting to the surprised and delighted expression on his mother’s face. Reaching the doorstep, he paused to compose himself, pushed open the door and exclaimed in delight, “Mum, I’m home,” with his eyes sparkling with anticipation（期待）.
动作描写：⑤给动作“融入心理”
But I, consumed with intense anger at her sudden appearance in my doorway, just cast her an indifferent glance, ignored her pleading look and uttered no word. (From MY ONE-EYED MOTHER)
Torn between the overwhelming yearning （渴望，向往）for the delicate boots and the melancholy （令人悲伤的）for our depressing Christmas, I came to a halt halfway to the shoe store. (From CHRISTMAS BOOTS OR DECORATIONS)
写一写
情景5：憧憬假期。
With his chin in his cupped hand, he sat there motionlessly
（静止）, all his mind on where to spend the long-anticipated holiday. Actually, all these days he had been racking his brains（磨炼脑袋） to figure out a plan. Then all of a sudden, he had an idea — how about going to the beach for relaxation “Yes, that’s it!” he whispered to himself, his lips curving into a beaming smile.
动作描写：⑥给动作“添上环境”
Anxiously straining（紧张） my eyes, I scanned the toy store, but he was nowhere to be found. Outside, thunder and lightning continued; inside, chaotic （混乱的）noise rang in my ears. Deep anxiety dominating me, I was on the verge of tears and stood rooted in blackness, hopeless and helpless. (From LEGO TOYS)
Worse still, when the fire died down, the whole wilderness was enveloped in darkness, with no one in sight. What kept us company was the chill wind that ruthlessly 无情地whipped（鞭） my face, gradually devouring the last bit of the remaining hope in my heart. (From FISHING ADVENTURE)
写一写
情景6：得知被心仪的大学录取。
The Admission Letter clutched （抓）tightly in my hand, I jumped up and down with undisguised（不伪装的，真心的） excitement. Tired, I lay down on the grass and hummed my little tune（哼着曲） along with the birds’ twittering. The breeze, though a bit cool, blew into my heart, dispelling the anxiety（驱散焦虑） that had haunted（萦绕心头） me for a long time.