2026届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写连贯性 课件(共29张PPT)
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(共29张PPT)
Coherence
in continuation writing
读后续写之呼应连贯
Criteria 评分标准
第五档（21-25分）
第四档（16-20分）
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
● 与所给短文融合度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理；
● 内容丰富，故事发展合理、逻辑性强，续写完整，符合写作目的与情境；
● 所使用语法结构和词汇多样、准确和恰当，可能有个别错误，但完全不影响意义表达；
● 有效地使用了语句间的连接手段，结构清晰，意义连贯。
达到了预期的写作目的。
与所给短文融合度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理；
内容比较丰富，故事发展比较合理、有逻辑性，续写比较完整，比较符合写作目的与情境；
所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达；
比较有效地使用了语句间的连接手段，结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯
Read and analyze
Elements
when
where
who
what
why
how
at 6am.on Mother’s Day
planned to make French toast and chicken porridge
the twins, father,mother
kitchen, parens’bedroom
by making breakfast with the help of father
to give mother a surprise on Mother’s Day
Plot development
Para.1:
Background/setting
the twins planned to make breakfastto give mother a surprise on Mother’s Day
Para.2:
Rising action
the process of the twins’makinge French toast and chicken porridge by themselves
Para.3:
Climax(conflict)
the porridge boiled over and put out the fire;the stove was a mess;Jeff’s hand got burnt, the piece of bread turned black.
Para.4:
Falling action
...their father appeared....
Para.5:
Resolution
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
Emotioal changes
A surprise for mother
panicked,disappointed
Theme
excited,confident
family love
father
mother
The twins
Given sentences
Prediction
Para1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.
Para2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
逆向推理
问答策略
Q1:What was Father’s first reaction when faced with the mess
Q2:How did the twins explain their plan to their father
Q3:What did the father do
Q1:What was Mother’s first reaction when the twins woke her up
Q2:How did the twins express their love and best wishes to Mother
Q3:How did Mother feel How can you make the ending more appealing and meaningful
Plot and think
How do you make the continuation writing coherent
捕捉原文伏笔--前后呼应，形成亮点
人物性格的前后一致
段首句关联方式--主位推进，语义连贯
前后呼应
形成亮点
捕捉原文伏笔 -- 前后呼应 形成亮点
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
①... They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
②... Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sinkand put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down.the fire so it cooked nicely.
③Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
前后呼应
形成亮点
捕捉原文伏笔 -- 前后呼应 形成亮点
冲突和悬念 Conflict & Suspense Suspense 悬念 Conflict 冲突
There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. (Para.1) Everything was going smoothly (Para.2) the porridge boiled over and put out the fire；
the stove was a mess now；
touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain；
caught the smell of burning；
The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well (Para.3)
1 ④ After he learned what all was about, his annoyance gave way to relief and delight. Immediately, he joined them and they started all over again. Soon the French toast and chicken porridge were ready, the kitchen filled with the scent of breakfast and sweetness of a family.(Para.4)
前后呼应
形成亮点
捕捉原文伏笔 -- 前后呼应 形成亮点
冲突和悬念 Conflict & Suspense Suspense 悬念 Conflict 冲突
There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. (Para.1) Everything was going smoothly (Para.2) the porridge boiled over and put out the fire；
the stove was a mess now；
touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain；
caught the smell of burning；
The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well (Para.3)
2 ④ From the black bread and the spilled porridge, he suddenly figured out their secret. A smile of understanding flashed across his face. He realized their intention. He joined them in preparing the Mother's Day surprise immediately. They started all over again. Everything went smoothly.(Para.4)
前后呼应
形成亮点
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
①The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. (Para.1)
1 ⑤“Happy Mother's Day!” The twins congratulated. “We made breakfast for you as you do that for us. Mom, we love you!” Though still in her pajamas, Mother took abite of the toast and sipped the hot porridge. Lost in the delicious breakfast and pure love from her twins, she sobbed, with delightful tears streaming down her face. Lovingly, she pressed two gentle kisses on their foreheads, proudly enjoying their best wishes. (Para.5)
捕捉原文伏笔 -- 前后呼应 形成亮点
前后呼应
形成亮点
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
①The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. (Para.1)
2 ⑤ ...but the cheerful“Happy Mother’s Day” from the two sweeties brought her back to reality. The breakfast with love made by her twins really struck her heartstrings. Mother kissed them and gave them each a bear hug, saying “Oh dear, thank you my sweeties. What a big surprise!” The next moment,she woke up father,eager to share the blessing and the inviting breakfast seasoned with love. (Para.5)
捕捉原文伏笔 -- 前后呼应 形成亮点
前后呼应
形成亮点
人物性格的前后一致
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
① The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the suprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. ... They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
人物特点
The twins:
smart, caring, confident, considerate, loving their mother very much...
“Happy Mother’s Day！” The twins congratulated.“We made breakfast for you as you do that for us. Mom， we love you！” …
主位推进
语义连贯
段首句关联方式--主位推进，语义连贯
As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared. Faced with the mess the twins had made of the kitchen,Father felt annoyed but tried to contain himself.Jenna ran up to him, whispering“We…We just want to make breakfast for Mom as Mother's Day gift.”.... After signaling them to keep it a secret, Father slipped into the bedroom, pretending to know nothing about it.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Still a little sleepy,Mother failed to figure out what they were up to.“Happy Mother’s Day！” The twins congratulated.“We made breakfast for you as you do that for us. Mom， we love you！” …
主位推进
语义连贯
段首句关联方式--主位推进，语义连贯
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the mess, Father froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. From the black bread and the spilled porridge, he suddenly figured out their secret. A smile of understanding flashed across his face. He realized their intention. He joined them in preparing the Mother’s Day surprise immediately...Despite the oil stains on the twins’ aprons, nothing seemed imperfect, and all was in place except the most important one.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Still a little sleepy, mother failed to figure out what they were up to, but the cheerful“Happy Mother’s Day”from the two sweeties brought her back to reality. The breakfast with love made by her twins really struck her heartstrings. Mother kissed them and gave them each a bear hug, saying “Oh dear, thank you my sweeties. What a big surprise！”
月考试卷作文分析
Plot development
Para.1:
Background/setting
Para.2:
Rising action
Para.3/4:
Climax(conflict)
Para. 5/6:
Falling action
Para. 7:
Resolution
Theme
A lesson learned in the process of growing up ---- Sometimes a small task can turn into a significant one.
Characters
Emotional change
responsible, kind, quiet
Rita
expectant，eager
Rita
disappointed
dedicated，patient
Classmates
excited，eager
dissatisfied，feeling sorry
The teacher
kind, wise
Given sentences
Prediction
Para.1 All the students looked at the doctor with curiosity.
Para.2 Hearing the good news, the whole class was filled with joy and celebration.
逆向推理
问答策略
Plot and think
How do you make the continuation writing coherent
捕捉原文伏笔--前后呼应，形成亮点
人物性格的前后一致
段首句关联方式--主位推进，语义连贯
第二节 （满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The day when the jobs were handed out was one of the most exciting moments for all the children in the class. It took place during the first week of the term. Every kid was given a job for which they would be responsible during the rest of that school year.
Some jobs were more interesting than others,and the children were eager to be given one of the best ones. When giving them out, the teacher took into account which pupils had been most responsible during the previous years. Rita, a kind and quiet girl, had carried out the teacher's instrutions perfertly. All the children thought Rita would be given the best job.
But there was a big supprise. Each child received a normal job like preparing the computer for lessons, cleaning the blackboard, or looking after one of the pets. But Rita's job was very different. She was given a little box containing some sand and one ant. Though the teacher insisted that this ant was very special, Rita couldn't help feeling disappointed. With tears welling up in her eyes, she stood up and asked why she was given such an insignificant task. The teacher hugged her, kissed her on her forehead and said,“If you can take good care of the ant,you are sure to win a reward. After all,you have to do what are apparently the smallest tasks before being given the most important ones. I believe you can make it.”Most of her classmates felt sorry for her. They said it was unfair for her.
However,Rita preferred to show the teacher her error by doing something special with that job of little interest.“I will turn this little task into something great,”Rita said to herself... So, Rita started investigating
everything about her little ant, modified the little box to make it perfect for the ant and gave the antthe best food, and it ended up growing quite a bit bigger than anyone had expected.
One day in spiring, the classroom door opened and in came a man,who looked very important. The teachor goterrupted the class with great joy, and said, “This is Doctor Martinez, an entomologist（昆虫学家）from Florida Natural Reserve. He has something special to announce.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
All the students looked at the doctor with curiosity. _______________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hearing the good news, the whole class was filled with joy and celebration.____________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the students looked at the doctor with curiosity. The doctor greeted the class with a satisfied look and announced, "Congratulations! Your class has been chosen to go along with me, this summer, on a journey to the tropical rainforest, where we will be investigating all kinds of insects." At the sight of the puzzled students, he explained,"Among all the schools of this region, your class has best cared for the little ant given to you. You've won the competition!"Wonderful news, indeed!
Hearing the good news,the whole class was filled with joy and celebration.Everyone understood why the teacher had insisted that the ant was a special one. They thanked the teacher for thinking of entering them in the competition, and thanked Rita for having been so patient and responsible. And they also learnt that to be given the most important tasks you have to know how to be responsible even in what are apparently the smallest tasks. And without doubt,it was Rita who was most pleased with this, having said to herself many times that she would turn the little job into something really great.
Thank You!
Coherence
in continuation writing
读后续写之呼应连贯
Criteria 评分标准
第五档（21-25分）
第四档（16-20分）
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
● 与所给短文融合度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理；
● 内容丰富，故事发展合理、逻辑性强，续写完整，符合写作目的与情境；
● 所使用语法结构和词汇多样、准确和恰当，可能有个别错误，但完全不影响意义表达；
● 有效地使用了语句间的连接手段，结构清晰，意义连贯。
达到了预期的写作目的。
与所给短文融合度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理；
内容比较丰富，故事发展比较合理、有逻辑性，续写比较完整，比较符合写作目的与情境；
所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达；
比较有效地使用了语句间的连接手段，结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯
Read and analyze
Elements
when
where
who
what
why
how
at 6am.on Mother’s Day
planned to make French toast and chicken porridge
the twins, father,mother
kitchen, parens’bedroom
by making breakfast with the help of father
to give mother a surprise on Mother’s Day
Plot development
Para.1:
Background/setting
the twins planned to make breakfastto give mother a surprise on Mother’s Day
Para.2:
Rising action
the process of the twins’makinge French toast and chicken porridge by themselves
Para.3:
Climax(conflict)
the porridge boiled over and put out the fire;the stove was a mess;Jeff’s hand got burnt, the piece of bread turned black.
Para.4:
Falling action
...their father appeared....
Para.5:
Resolution
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
Emotioal changes
A surprise for mother
panicked,disappointed
Theme
excited,confident
family love
father
mother
The twins
Given sentences
Prediction
Para1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.
Para2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
逆向推理
问答策略
Q1:What was Father’s first reaction when faced with the mess
Q2:How did the twins explain their plan to their father
Q3:What did the father do
Q1:What was Mother’s first reaction when the twins woke her up
Q2:How did the twins express their love and best wishes to Mother
Q3:How did Mother feel How can you make the ending more appealing and meaningful
Plot and think
How do you make the continuation writing coherent
捕捉原文伏笔--前后呼应，形成亮点
人物性格的前后一致
段首句关联方式--主位推进，语义连贯
前后呼应
形成亮点
捕捉原文伏笔 -- 前后呼应 形成亮点
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
①... They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
②... Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sinkand put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down.the fire so it cooked nicely.
③Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
前后呼应
形成亮点
捕捉原文伏笔 -- 前后呼应 形成亮点
冲突和悬念 Conflict & Suspense Suspense 悬念 Conflict 冲突
There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. (Para.1) Everything was going smoothly (Para.2) the porridge boiled over and put out the fire；
the stove was a mess now；
touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain；
caught the smell of burning；
The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well (Para.3)
1 ④ After he learned what all was about, his annoyance gave way to relief and delight. Immediately, he joined them and they started all over again. Soon the French toast and chicken porridge were ready, the kitchen filled with the scent of breakfast and sweetness of a family.(Para.4)
前后呼应
形成亮点
捕捉原文伏笔 -- 前后呼应 形成亮点
冲突和悬念 Conflict & Suspense Suspense 悬念 Conflict 冲突
There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. (Para.1) Everything was going smoothly (Para.2) the porridge boiled over and put out the fire；
the stove was a mess now；
touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain；
caught the smell of burning；
The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well (Para.3)
2 ④ From the black bread and the spilled porridge, he suddenly figured out their secret. A smile of understanding flashed across his face. He realized their intention. He joined them in preparing the Mother's Day surprise immediately. They started all over again. Everything went smoothly.(Para.4)
前后呼应
形成亮点
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
①The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. (Para.1)
1 ⑤“Happy Mother's Day!” The twins congratulated. “We made breakfast for you as you do that for us. Mom, we love you!” Though still in her pajamas, Mother took abite of the toast and sipped the hot porridge. Lost in the delicious breakfast and pure love from her twins, she sobbed, with delightful tears streaming down her face. Lovingly, she pressed two gentle kisses on their foreheads, proudly enjoying their best wishes. (Para.5)
捕捉原文伏笔 -- 前后呼应 形成亮点
前后呼应
形成亮点
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
①The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. (Para.1)
2 ⑤ ...but the cheerful“Happy Mother’s Day” from the two sweeties brought her back to reality. The breakfast with love made by her twins really struck her heartstrings. Mother kissed them and gave them each a bear hug, saying “Oh dear, thank you my sweeties. What a big surprise!” The next moment,she woke up father,eager to share the blessing and the inviting breakfast seasoned with love. (Para.5)
捕捉原文伏笔 -- 前后呼应 形成亮点
前后呼应
形成亮点
人物性格的前后一致
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
① The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the suprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. ... They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
人物特点
The twins:
smart, caring, confident, considerate, loving their mother very much...
“Happy Mother’s Day！” The twins congratulated.“We made breakfast for you as you do that for us. Mom， we love you！” …
主位推进
语义连贯
段首句关联方式--主位推进，语义连贯
As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared. Faced with the mess the twins had made of the kitchen,Father felt annoyed but tried to contain himself.Jenna ran up to him, whispering“We…We just want to make breakfast for Mom as Mother's Day gift.”.... After signaling them to keep it a secret, Father slipped into the bedroom, pretending to know nothing about it.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Still a little sleepy,Mother failed to figure out what they were up to.“Happy Mother’s Day！” The twins congratulated.“We made breakfast for you as you do that for us. Mom， we love you！” …
主位推进
语义连贯
段首句关联方式--主位推进，语义连贯
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the mess, Father froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. From the black bread and the spilled porridge, he suddenly figured out their secret. A smile of understanding flashed across his face. He realized their intention. He joined them in preparing the Mother’s Day surprise immediately...Despite the oil stains on the twins’ aprons, nothing seemed imperfect, and all was in place except the most important one.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Still a little sleepy, mother failed to figure out what they were up to, but the cheerful“Happy Mother’s Day”from the two sweeties brought her back to reality. The breakfast with love made by her twins really struck her heartstrings. Mother kissed them and gave them each a bear hug, saying “Oh dear, thank you my sweeties. What a big surprise！”
月考试卷作文分析
Plot development
Para.1:
Background/setting
Para.2:
Rising action
Para.3/4:
Climax(conflict)
Para. 5/6:
Falling action
Para. 7:
Resolution
Theme
A lesson learned in the process of growing up ---- Sometimes a small task can turn into a significant one.
Characters
Emotional change
responsible, kind, quiet
Rita
expectant，eager
Rita
disappointed
dedicated，patient
Classmates
excited，eager
dissatisfied，feeling sorry
The teacher
kind, wise
Given sentences
Prediction
Para.1 All the students looked at the doctor with curiosity.
Para.2 Hearing the good news, the whole class was filled with joy and celebration.
逆向推理
问答策略
Plot and think
How do you make the continuation writing coherent
捕捉原文伏笔--前后呼应，形成亮点
人物性格的前后一致
段首句关联方式--主位推进，语义连贯
第二节 （满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The day when the jobs were handed out was one of the most exciting moments for all the children in the class. It took place during the first week of the term. Every kid was given a job for which they would be responsible during the rest of that school year.
Some jobs were more interesting than others,and the children were eager to be given one of the best ones. When giving them out, the teacher took into account which pupils had been most responsible during the previous years. Rita, a kind and quiet girl, had carried out the teacher's instrutions perfertly. All the children thought Rita would be given the best job.
But there was a big supprise. Each child received a normal job like preparing the computer for lessons, cleaning the blackboard, or looking after one of the pets. But Rita's job was very different. She was given a little box containing some sand and one ant. Though the teacher insisted that this ant was very special, Rita couldn't help feeling disappointed. With tears welling up in her eyes, she stood up and asked why she was given such an insignificant task. The teacher hugged her, kissed her on her forehead and said,“If you can take good care of the ant,you are sure to win a reward. After all,you have to do what are apparently the smallest tasks before being given the most important ones. I believe you can make it.”Most of her classmates felt sorry for her. They said it was unfair for her.
However,Rita preferred to show the teacher her error by doing something special with that job of little interest.“I will turn this little task into something great,”Rita said to herself... So, Rita started investigating
everything about her little ant, modified the little box to make it perfect for the ant and gave the antthe best food, and it ended up growing quite a bit bigger than anyone had expected.
One day in spiring, the classroom door opened and in came a man,who looked very important. The teachor goterrupted the class with great joy, and said, “This is Doctor Martinez, an entomologist（昆虫学家）from Florida Natural Reserve. He has something special to announce.”
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
All the students looked at the doctor with curiosity. _______________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hearing the good news, the whole class was filled with joy and celebration.____________________
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All the students looked at the doctor with curiosity. The doctor greeted the class with a satisfied look and announced, "Congratulations! Your class has been chosen to go along with me, this summer, on a journey to the tropical rainforest, where we will be investigating all kinds of insects." At the sight of the puzzled students, he explained,"Among all the schools of this region, your class has best cared for the little ant given to you. You've won the competition!"Wonderful news, indeed!
Hearing the good news,the whole class was filled with joy and celebration.Everyone understood why the teacher had insisted that the ant was a special one. They thanked the teacher for thinking of entering them in the competition, and thanked Rita for having been so patient and responsible. And they also learnt that to be given the most important tasks you have to know how to be responsible even in what are apparently the smallest tasks. And without doubt,it was Rita who was most pleased with this, having said to herself many times that she would turn the little job into something really great.
Thank You!