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高三月考
推荐乒乓球教练 + 以貌取人+ 保护动物
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八省统考 - 推荐乒乓球教练
假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友 Beth 想学打乒乓球,发邮件向你求教。请给她回封邮件,内容包括:
(1) 表示支持;
(2) 推荐教练。
推荐信 “三维度” 结构
情感层:表达支持(如“Thrilled to hear you’re diving into table tennis!”)
事实层:教练资质(经验/教学风格/成果)
行动层:具体帮助(预约试课/协调时间)
推荐理由 “STAR 法则”
要素 示例内容 作用
Situation(背景) 10 years of coaching beginners 突出专业性
Task(任务) Build solid foundations for new learners 明确教学目标
Action(行动) Patiently correct postures and offer instant feedback 展现教学细节
Result(结果) 80% of his students win regional junior competitions 用数据增强说服力
考点强化
场景 基础表达 高分表达
推荐理由 He is good at teaching. His talent lies in tailoring lessons to each student’s personality——patient with nervous beginners and challenging advanced learners.
成果证明 Many students like him. Over 50 students have won medals under his guidance, including three national champions.
试课安排 We can have a trial class. Let’s schedule a 60-minute trial this weekend——he’ll assess your basics and design a personalized plan on the spot.
八省统考 - 推荐乒乓球教练
Glad to know that you want to learn to play table tennis. I sincerely support your decision.
Playing table tennis not only benefits us physically and mentally, but also is a wonderful way to make friends.To help you get started, I'd like to recommend Coach Zhang, a professional table tennis coach with over 10 years' experience. He's patient, skilled, and excellent at teaching beginners, which are essential for building a strong foundation.
If you're interested, I can help you get in touch with him. Let me know, and we can arrange a trial class!
八省统考 - 推荐乒乓球教练
很高兴知道你想学习打乒乓球。我真诚地支持你的决定。
打乒乓球不仅有益于我们的身心健康,也是一个绝佳方式去交朋友。为了帮助你入门,我想推荐张教练,他是一位专业乒乓球教练拥有超过 10 年经验。他耐心、技巧娴熟,在教导初学者方面表现出色,这对于建立牢固的基础至关重要。
如果你感兴趣,我可以帮你联系他。告诉我,我们可以安排一次试课!
语言亮点积累
支持表态:
“What a fantastic choice! Table tennis is not only a sport but a gateway to Chinese culture.”
“I’m thrilled that you’re embracing this sport——it’s sure to bring you joy and fitness.”
资质描述:
“Coach Zhang’s secret lies in his ‘step-by-step’ approach: he starts with basic footwork before moving to advanced techniques.”
“Unlike rigid coaches, he makes lessons fun——think drills disguised as games for beginners.”
语言亮点积累
行动邀请:
“Shall I send you his schedule today, or would you prefer a quick phone call to meet him first ”
“I’ve already shared your interest with him, so he’s expecting your message!”
实战训练(高考真题改编)
你的美国朋友 Mike 想学习中国书法,请求你推荐一位老师。请写一封邮件,内容包括:
表达支持(书法对理解中国文化的意义);
推荐王老师(20 年教学经验,擅长从甲骨文讲起,课堂融合诗词与绘画);
提议参观王老师的书法展作为入门体验。
读后续写翻译练习
Tuesday, June 03, 2025
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情节反转 “铺垫 - 转折” 模型
阶段 关键动作 细节伏笔 情感变化
铺垫期 主角害怕摩托党 描写他们的外形(皮夹克 / 纹身)、环境(昏暗影院) 恐惧(颤抖 / 手心汗)
转折点 摩托党主动打招呼 前文 “街头偶遇时点头” 的小细节呼应 疑惑(心跳加速→放松)
高潮期 揭示身份为动物救援者 影院播放救援电影、人物谈论 “遗弃狗” 惊讶→温暖
升华期 主角加入团体,领悟道理 摩托党递来收养中心名片、展示救助前后对比照片 尊重→价值观转变
读后续写 - 以貌取人 + 保护动物
我急忙冲进电影院,却发现里面还有更多的摩托车手。我非常害怕,身体颤抖,手心冒汗,这引起了里面所有摩托车手的注意。被所有摩托车手注视着,我只感到心跳加速。我不确定过了多长时间,只看到街上遇到的每一个从外面进来的摩托车手都向我打招呼...... 过了一会儿,电影院的灯光熄灭,大幕拉开,影院里的人们安静下来,这意味着电影开始了。
读后续写 - 以貌取人 + 保护动物
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. I was extremely frightened, with my body shaking and my hands sweating, which made the bikers inside all noticed me. Being watched by all the bikers, I felt nothing but my heart pounding. I was not sure how much time had passed, but only greeted by each of the biker coming in from the outside who I had encountered in the street.....After a while, the lights in the theater closed, the curtain opened, and the people in the theater became quiet, which meant that the movie had begun.
读后续写 - 以貌取人+ 保护动物
当电影开始时,我意识到这些骑自行车的人是一个动物救援团体。这部电影讲述了他们如何救助动物。我坐在一位看起来很强硬的骑自行车的人旁边。和他简短交谈后,我表达了想要拯救被遗弃的狗的愿望。听到这个消息,他热情地欢迎我加入动物救援团体。然后,在电影结束时,他向我介绍了所有成员。看到周围有这么多动物爱好者,我确实相信我们这些小小的善意行为可以带来巨大的改变。同时,我对他们产生了新的尊重,并意识到永远不要以封面来判断一本书。
读后续写 - 以貌取人+ 保护动物
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. This film is about how they rescue animals. I sat next to a tough-look biker. After a short conversation with him, I expressed my wish to save abandoned dogs. Hearing this, he enthusiastically welcomed me to join the animal rescue group. Then, with the film ending, he introduced me to all the members. Seeing so many animal lovers around, I did believe that our small act of kindness could make a big difference. At the same time, I developed a new respect for them and realized that never judge a book by its cover.
【以貌取人】
与此同时,我对他们产生了新的敬意(刮目相看),并意识到永远不要仅凭封面来评判一本书(以貌取人)。
At the same time, I developed a new respect for them and realized that never judge a book by its cover.
读后续写续写任务
开头句:
“As the biker handed me a flyer for the animal shelter, I noticed a scar on his palm——the same shape as the one on my rescue cat’s ear.”
要求:
描写疤痕的关联故事(如他曾救助这只猫);
用 “雨天共撑一把伞” 的场景展现关系破冰;
以 “偏见消除,友谊建立” 结尾,呼应 “不要以貌取人” 主题。