Period 6 写作(Writing)
如何写日(周)记
校园生活日(周)记是用来记述自己在校园的一天(周)中或上学(放学)的路上做过的、看到的或听到的有意义的事情,或用来抒发自己当天对某些事情的感受,以及自己将来的打算。体裁可以是记叙文、应用文、说明文、议论文等各种文体。与写汉语日记一样,写日记时要先写日期、星期(可以省略)和天气情况。
一、基本框架
开头:引出事件;
主体:详细描述事情经过;
结尾:发表感想。
二、常用表达
1.开篇常用句型
①It's one week since I came to this new school.
自从我来到这所新学校已经一周了。
②Today was the first day of my new school life.
今天是我新学校生活的第一天。
③I can't believe the first week is coming to an end.
我真不能相信第一周就要结束了。
2.主体段落常用句型
①The moment I entered the campus,I was attracted by its beautiful scenery.
我一进入校园,就被它美丽的风景所吸引。
②When I entered the classroom,my English teacher,a young and friendly man,was busy handing out new textbooks.
当我走进教室时,我的英语老师,一位年轻而友好的男士,正忙着分发新课本。
③I felt both nervous and excited on my first day of senior high.But the kind teachers and friendly classmates made me feel at home soon.
高中的第一天,我感到既紧张又兴奋。但是善良的老师和友好的同学让我很快就有了家的感觉。
3.结尾常用句型
①My first day at senior high really made a deep impression on me.
高中的第一天真的给我留下了深刻的印象。
②All in all,it's a wonderful day today.
总之,今天是美好的一天。
③I like my new school very much.I think I can make great progress in this school.
我非常喜欢我的新学校。我想我能在这所学校取得很大的进步。
假定你是李华,你正在英国某高中参加你们学校的“交换生项目”,请你用英语写一篇周记,叙述你在新学校第一周的学习生活。内容包括:
1.学校印象;
2.同学印象;
3.个人感受。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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[审题构思]
[遣词造句]
1.我作为交换生来到这所学校已有一周了。
One week has passed ________________________________.
2.这所校园很大,建筑物都是鲜明的英国风格。
________________ and has a strong British style.
3.我的同学们和老师都很友善。
My classmates and teachers are ________________________.
4.我的同学们和老师让我不那么想家了。
My classmates and teachers ________________________.
5.虽然我和他们交流仍然很困难,但他们总是尽力让我理解他们。
Although I still ________________________ with them,they always try their best to ________________________.
6.我想我在这里会很快乐地度过这段学习时期,而且在这里我能受益良多。
I think I'll ________________________ and I can surely ________________ my stay here.
[句式升级]
7.用“It is/has been+时间段+since...”升级句1
________________________ I came to this school as an exchange student.
8.用“so...that”句型合并句3和句4
My classmates and teachers are ________________________ they make me less homesick.
[连句成篇]
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假如今天是10月27日,星期五,天气晴。你是高一学生李华,今天你们学校举办了一次运动会,请你根据以下提示写一篇英语日记记录一下运动会的情况。内容包括:
1.举办的时间和地点;
2.开展的体育项目;
3.你所参加的项目及获得的成绩。
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情 感 描 写 ①frightened adj.受惊的,害怕的 ②eager adj.渴望的→eagerness n.渴望 ③butterflies in one's stomach情绪紧张,心里发慌 ④panic n.惊恐,惊慌 ⑤calm adj.镇静的,沉着的
人 物 描 写 ①confident adj.有信心的,自信的 ②curious adj.好奇的 ③sharp adj.敏锐的,聪明的
第一步:完成句子雏形现
1.我的头被巨大的南瓜卡住了。
My head _____________the huge pumpkin.
2.我非常害怕,喉咙发紧,膝盖发软。
I ____________,my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
3.我心里发慌,深深地吸了一口气。
________________________,I took a deep breath.
4.如果我没有那么好奇,我就不会陷入如此尴尬的困境。
If I hadn't been ____________,I wouldn't have been caught in such an awkward dilemma.
5.我无法掩饰自己被拉出去的渴望,最终是我父亲帮我摆脱了困境。
I couldn't ________________ to be pulled out and my dad finally helped me out.
6.我母亲记录了我的尴尬处境,并将视频上传到了互联网上。
My mother recorded my awkward situation and ________________ on the Internet.
第二步:句式升级造亮点
7.用so...that升级句2
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8.用强调句型升级句5
I couldn't hide my eagerness to be pulled out and ________________________________.
第三步:过渡衔接成语篇(注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
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Period 6
单元写作
典例详析
遣词造句
1.since I came to this school as an exchange student 2.The campus is so big 3.very kind and friendly 4.make me less homesick 5.havemuchdifficultycommunicating;make
themselves understood 6.spend this period of studying here happily;benefit much from
句式升级
7.It is/has been one week since 8.so kind and friendly that
连句成篇
【参考范文】
Monday September 2nd
It is/has been one week since I came to this school as an exchange student.
The campus is so big and has a strong British style.My classmates and teachers are so kind and friendly that they make me less homesick.Although I still have much difficulty communicating with them,they always try their best to make themselves understood.
I think I'll spend this period of studying here happily and I can surely benefit much from my stay here.
即时训练
【参考范文】
Friday October 27thSunny
Today,our school held a sports meeting,which is the most exciting event for all students in the whole school year.The sports meeting started at 8:00 a.m.in our new gym.
There were a lot of sports events.In the morning,the sports meeting began with the 100meter race,and later,the 200meter race.My classmate Tom came in second place in the 200meter race.The highjump,longjump and basketball game took place in the afternoon.Being quite good at playing basketball,I took part in the basketball game.Our team won,which made us very happy.
The sports meeting ended at 6:00 p.m.All of us had a good time and we look forward to the next sports meeting in our school.
读后续写
语料运用
第一步:
1.was stuck in 2.was frightened 3.With butterflies in my stomach 4.so curious 5.hide my eagerness 6.posted the video
第二步:
7.I was so frightened that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. 8.it was my dad who finally helped me out
第三步:
My head was stuck in the huge pumpkin.I was so frightened that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.With butterflies in my stomach,I took a deep breath.If I hadn't been so curious,I wouldn't have been caught in such an awkward dilemma.I couldn't hide my eagerness to be pulled out and it was my dad who finally helped me out.However,my mother recorded my awkward situation and posted the video on the Internet.
1/1(共73张PPT)
复习任务群一
现代文阅读Ⅰ
把握共性之“新” 打通应考之“脉”
Unit 1
A new start
Period 6 课时学案 写作(Writing)
主题语境 人与自我——学校生活
如何写日(周)记
校园生活日(周)记是用来记述自己在校园的一天(周)中或上学(放学)的路上做过的、看到的或听到的有意义的事情,或用来抒发自己当天对某些事情的感受,以及自己将来的打算。体裁可以是记叙文、应用文、说明文、议论文等各种文体。与写汉语日记一样,写日记时要先写日期、星期(可以省略)和天气情况。
一、基本框架
开头:引出事件;
主体:详细描述事情经过;
结尾:发表感想。
二、常用表达
1.开篇常用句型
①It's one week since I came to this new school.
自从我来到这所新学校已经一周了。
②Today was the first day of my new school life.
今天是我新学校生活的第一天。
③I can't believe the first week is coming to an end.
我真不能相信第一周就要结束了。
2.主体段落常用句型
①The moment I entered the campus,I was attracted by its beautiful scenery.
我一进入校园,就被它美丽的风景所吸引。
②When I entered the classroom,my English teacher,a young and friendly man,was busy handing out new textbooks.
当我走进教室时,我的英语老师,一位年轻而友好的男士,正忙着分发新课本。
③I felt both nervous and excited on my first day of senior high.But the kind teachers and friendly classmates made me feel at home soon.
高中的第一天,我感到既紧张又兴奋。但是善良的老师和友好的同学让我很快就有了家的感觉。
3.结尾常用句型
①My first day at senior high really made a deep impression on me.
高中的第一天真的给我留下了深刻的印象。
②All in all,it's a wonderful day today.
总之,今天是美好的一天。
③I like my new school very much.I think I can make great progress in this school.
我非常喜欢我的新学校。我想我能在这所学校取得很大的进步。
假定你是李华,你正在英国某高中参加你们学校的“交换生项目”,请你用英语写一篇周记,叙述你在新学校第一周的学习生活。内容包括:
1.学校印象;
2.同学印象;
3.个人感受。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
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[审题构思]
[遣词造句]
1.我作为交换生来到这所学校已有一周了。
One week has passed _________________________________________.
2.这所校园很大,建筑物都是鲜明的英国风格。
________________________ and has a strong British style.
3.我的同学们和老师都很友善。
My classmates and teachers are _________________________.
since I came to this school as an exchange student
The campus is so big
very kind and friendly
4.我的同学们和老师让我不那么想家了。
My classmates and teachers ________________________.
5.虽然我和他们交流仍然很困难,但他们总是尽力让我理解他们。
Although I still _____________________________________ with them,they always try their best to ____________________________.
6.我想我在这里会很快乐地度过这段学习时期,而且在这里我能受益良多。
I think I'll ____________________________________ and I can surely ___________________ my stay here.
make me less homesick
have much difficulty communicating
make themselves understood
spend this period of studying here happily
benefit much from
[句式升级]
7.用“It is/has been+时间段+since...”升级句1
___________________________________ I came to this school as an exchange student.
8.用“so...that”句型合并句3和句4
My classmates and teachers are _____________________________ they make me less homesick.
It is/has been one week since
so kind and friendly that
[连句成篇]
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【参考范文】
Monday September 2nd
It is/has been one week since I came to this school as an exchange student.
The campus is so big and has a strong British style.My classmates and teachers are so kind and friendly that they make me less homesick.Although I still have much difficulty communicating with them,they always try their best to make themselves understood.
I think I'll spend this period of studying here happily and I can surely benefit much from my stay here.
假如今天是10月27日,星期五,天气晴。你是高一学生李华,今天你们学校举办了一次运动会,请你根据以下提示写一篇英语日记记录一下运动会的情况。内容包括:
1.举办的时间和地点;
2.开展的体育项目;
3.你所参加的项目及获得的成绩。
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【参考范文】
Friday October 27th Sunny
Today,our school held a sports meeting,which is the most exciting event for all students in the whole school year.The sports meeting started at 8:00 a.m.in our new gym.
There were a lot of sports events.In the morning,the sports meeting began with the 100-meter race,and later,the 200-meter race.My classmate Tom came in second place in the 200-meter race.The high-jump,long-jump and basketball game took place in the afternoon.Being quite good at playing basketball,I took part in the basketball game.Our team won,which made us very happy.
The sports meeting ended at 6:00 p.m.All of us had a good time and we look forward to the next sports meeting in our school.
情感 描写 ①frightened adj.受惊的,害怕的
②eager adj.渴望的→eagerness n.渴望
③butterflies in one's stomach情绪紧张,心里发慌
④panic n.惊恐,惊慌
⑤calm adj.镇静的,沉着的
人物 描写 ①confident adj.有信心的,自信的
②curious adj.好奇的
③sharp adj.敏锐的,聪明的
第一步:完成句子雏形现
1.我的头被巨大的南瓜卡住了。
My head ______________ the huge pumpkin.
2.我非常害怕,喉咙发紧,膝盖发软。
I _______________,my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
3.我心里发慌,深深地吸了一口气。
__________________________________,I took a deep breath.
was stuck in
was frightened
With butterflies in my stomach
4.如果我没有那么好奇,我就不会陷入如此尴尬的困境。
If I hadn't been ___________,I wouldn't have been caught in such an awkward dilemma.
5.我无法掩饰自己被拉出去的渴望,最终是我父亲帮我摆脱了困境。
I couldn't ___________________ to be pulled out and my dad finally helped me out.
so curious
hide my eagerness
6.我母亲记录了我的尴尬处境,并将视频上传到了互联网上。
My mother recorded my awkward situation and __________________ on the Internet.
posted the video
第二步:句式升级造亮点
7.用so...that升级句2
___________________________________________________________
8.用强调句型升级句5
I couldn't hide my eagerness to be pulled out and __________________
___________________________.
I was so frightened that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
it was my dad who
finally helped me out
第三步:过渡衔接成语篇(注意使用适当的衔接过渡词语)
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【参考答案】
My head was stuck in the huge pumpkin.I was so frightened that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.With butterflies in my stomach,I took a deep breath.If I hadn't been so curious,I wouldn't have been caught in such an awkward dilemma.I couldn't hide my eagerness to be pulled out and it was my dad who finally helped me out.However,my mother recorded my awkward situation and posted the video on the Internet.
课时提升作业(三) (Unit 1 Developing ideas & Writing)
(建议用时:45分钟 总分:108.5分)
Ⅰ.品句填词(共5小题;每小题1.5分,满分7.5分)
1.We caught _____ (看见) of a car in the distance.
2.The police officer took down all the ___________ (细节) of the burglary.
sight
particulars
3.You may _____ (查阅) to your notes if you want.
4.Being liked creates _____________ (机会) for learning and for new kinds of life experiences that help somebody gain an advantage.
5.I _______ (认为) that if I took the night train,I could arrive in Beijing in the morning.
refer
opportunities
figured
Ⅱ.词性转换(共5小题;每小题1.5分,满分7.5分)
1.The past scenes are still in the old red-army soldier's ________ (memorise) and always make him excited.
2.After __________ (graduate),she worked to help her sisters and brothers pay for their schooling.
3.It was a really ___________ (frighten) experience.Afterwards everybody was very shocked.
memory
graduation
frightening
4.A team of researchers trained three Rhesus monkeys to associate 26 symbols consisting of numbers and _________ (select) letters with 0~25 drops of water or juice as a reward.
5.The company awarded Mary a prize for her excellent ___________ (perform) in her work.
selective
performance
Ⅲ.短语填空(共5小题;每小题1.5分,满分7.5分)
around the corner,go all out,look forward to,at the sight of,for sure
1.__________________ the picture I thought of my childhood.
2.Your dream will come true _________ as long as you do your best.
3.The final exam is just ___________________,so I have to study hard.
At the sight of
for sure
around the corner
4.We all _________________ the day when the scientists can discover more secrets of the universe.
5.After the earthquake,the rescuers ______________ to save the victims,provide psychological counseling and donate money and materials.
look forward to
went all out
Ⅳ.完成句子(共5小题;每小题2分,满分10分)
1.我知道你曾经参加过机器人大赛,并且获了奖,因此你肯定积累(accumulate)了大量的经验。
I know you once participated in a robotic competition and won the award,so you ____________________ a large quantity of experience.
2.看她的表现就像根本没有发生过什么大事似的。
She behaved for all the world ___________________________________.
must have accumulated
as if/though nothing unusual had happened
3.在参观完实验室之后,我们被带到了一个大厅里。
________________________________,we were led into a big hall.
4.他交了很多网友,因此不能把全部时间用在学业上。
He has made ____________________________ he can't spend all his time on his studies.
5.她让我明白我们的路已经走到了尽头。
She made me understand that our journey ______________________.
Having been shown around the lab
so many net friends that
had come to an end
Ⅴ.补全短文(共8小题;每小题2分,满分16分)
1.____________________ (人们认为) better use of our potential 2._______________________________ (通常被认为是) the key to success.When we 3.____________________________ (努力开发) our potential,we tend to 4.____________________________ (害怕失败).But how do we reach our potential 5.____________ (在我看来),we should make good use of the resources of our school first.We should 6._____________________ (与……交流思想) our teachers and classmates more and take an active part in school activities.Then,
People figure that
is often referred to as
are struggling to develop
be frightened of failures
In my view
exchange ideas with
we should form good study habits,setting clear goals 7.___________ (特别).Third,learn useful skills,which are very important for us,such as communication and problem solving,which can not only help us solve difficulties,but also 8._______________________________ (提高我们的学习成绩).
in particular
improve our academic performance
Ⅰ.阅读理解(共8小题;每小题2.5分,满分20分)
A
The first week of September was a week that I had been expecting(期待) all summer.I didn't want summer to end,but I was excited about going to high school for my first week.
When I got to school in the morning on the first day,I realized how large the school was,and how many students went there.I ended up in the wrong classroom because of the size of the school.Luckily,a kind senior showed up and guided me to my homeroom before I was late.I was happy to see that in a class of unfamiliar(不熟悉的) faces,the only open seat was next to my good friend Casey.My science teacher seemed like a good teacher.She was exciting and fun.
After finishing four classes without too much of a challenge,I didn't feel too bad about ninth grade.However,the fifth class changed everything.I didn't feel ready after all.My teacher's name is Mr Valassidis,but he told us to call him Mr V.Mr V told us that we would have to write 40 essays(文章) and read AP-level books such as The Odyssey this year.I love reading and writing.But come on.40 ESSAYS AP-level books Now I was afraid.
The courses in high school seem like they're going to get much harder,but they haven't yet.Even though my classes look hard,they look really exciting too.
The first week passed quickly.Although a lot of things were overwhelming(令人不知所措的): the size of the campus,the crowds(人群) and the seniors,having a totally different experience than I had ever had before was really exciting.Now,I'm really happy about high school.I have lots of friends in my classes,I really like my teachers and I'm meeting new people.
【语篇解读】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要描述了作者进入高中第一周的经历和感受,包括对校园大小、学生人数、课程难度等方面的描述,以及个人对高中生活的期待、兴奋、紧张和适应的过程。
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1.How did the author feel when his high school life was about to start
A.Happy. B.Nervous.
C.Relaxed. D.Helpless.
A [推理判断题。根据文章第一段中“I didn't want summer to end,but I was excited about going to high school for my first week.”可知,虽然作者不想夏天结束,但即将开始的高中生活仍然让他感到兴奋。说明当他的高中生活即将开始时,作者是高兴的。]
2.What happened to the author on his first day of high school
A.He was late for class.
B.He was praised by Mr V.
C.He got lost on the campus.
D.He met Casey for the first time.
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C [推理判断题。根据文章第二段中“When I got to school in the morning on the first day,I realized how large the school was,and how many students went there.I ended up in the wrong classroom because of the size of the school.”可知,作者因为学校太大而最终走错了教室,即他在校园里迷路了。]
3.What made the author afraid
A.The strict rules in classes.
B.How his science teacher behaved.
C.What he was expected to do with his studies.
D.The reading homework on the first day of high school.
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C [细节理解题。根据文章第三段中“Mr V told us that we would have to write 40 essays and read AP-level books such as The Odyssey this year.I love reading and writing.But come on.40 ESSAYS AP-level books Now I was afraid.”可知,作者对于今年需要写40篇作文和阅读AP级别的书籍感到害怕,这些是学习上的期待和要求。因此,他对于学习上的期待感到害怕。]
4.Which of the following can best describe the author's first week of high school
A.Hard and unexpected.
B.Busy but eye-opening.
C.Tiring but meaningful.
D.Different and exciting.
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D [细节理解题。根据文章最后一段可知,作者高中第一周的经历是充满新奇的、与之前完全不同的,同时也是令人兴奋的。]
B
Unlike most Chinese high school students,seniors in Canada can choose the courses they would like to take by themselves.However sometimes they cannot take the course they want to take due to different reasons like schedule conflicts.
Take me for example.At the end of last semester(学期),my adviser told me the two classes I had chosen for this semester took place during the same period,which meant that I had to give up one of them.
She recommended that I take the course called life management.I had never heard of that kind of course in China so I just followed her advice.
On the first day of school,I found out that life management is an open class and every student is able to take the course.The teacher of the class told us honestly that this is an easy course that can increase our average score.It was really different from what I had expected.So I planned to drop the class.Then came the question: Could I change the class In fact,students are able to change classes within the first month of the semester.During that month,there's often a long queue at the office door and a lot of students want to switch courses.
After the first week,I looked through courses that were available for me.I had two choices: biology and chemistry.Chemistry is for college students who would like a collection of degrees in one specific area after high school.After having discussions and making choices,I switched my class from life management to grade 11 university-level biology.Although biology is quite difficult for me because of the many difficult words I have to use and understand,I will still try my best.
To be honest,quite a lot of students want to change classes because they want easier courses.But I think challenging myself is always the best choice.I would rather get a lower mark in a course I can really learn from than get high scores in an easy open class.
【语篇解读】 本文是一篇说明文。文章作者以自己的经历为例,讲述了加拿大学生对课程的选择可能很困难。
5.According to the text,what can one easily get from the life management course
A.High marks.
B.What one is most interested in.
C.A better life.
D.What makes one different from others.
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A [细节理解题。根据第三段中的“On the first day of school,I found out that life management is an open class and every student is able to take the course.The teacher of the class told us honestly that this is an easy course that can increase our average score.”可知,生活管理这门课程是一门简单的课程,可以提高平均分,由此可知,如果一个人上生活管理这门课程,他能得到高分数。故选A项。]
6.What do we know from the passage about the first month of the semester
A.Few students follow their advisers.
B.Students are free to switch courses if they wish.
C.Teachers refuse students to change their courses.
D.Teachers want to choose talented students for their courses.
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B [细节理解题。根据第三段中的“In fact,students are able to change classes within the first month of the semester.During that month,there's often a long queue at the office door and a lot of students want to switch courses.”可知,在学期的第一个月内,如果学生愿意,可以自由换课。故选B项。]
7.Why did the writer finally choose biology
A.Because his teacher advised him to.
B.Because he wanted to challenge himself.
C.Because he wanted to do as other students did.
D.Because it was easy for him to get a high score.
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B [推理判断题。根据倒数第二段中的“Although biology is quite difficult for me because of the many difficult words I have to use and understand,I will still try my best.”以及尾段中的“But I think challenging myself is always the best choice.”可知,虽然生物对作者来说很难,但是作者认为挑战自己是最好的选择,由此可知,作者最后选择生物课程是想要挑战自己。故选B项。]
8.What is the best title for the text
A.Studying Hard Abroad
B.Choosing Can Be Tough
C.Courses in Canadian Schools Are Difficult
D.Courses in China High Schools Are Easier
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B [标题归纳题。作者在面对选择困难时选择了对自己有挑战性的课程,这反映了选择的艰难性,本文讲述的是学生对课程的选择可能很难,所以题目“选择可能很难”可以概括本文的主题,适合作为最佳标题。故选B项。]
Ⅱ.应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华,你的弟弟李涛刚升入高一,想要了解如何健康生活以更好地适应高中生活,请你给他写一份建议信,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.健康生活的方法;
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.写作词数80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Li Tao,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Li Tao,
You have asked me for advice concerning healthy lifestyle to better adapt to high school life,and I am writing this letter,hoping to offer you some practical suggestions.
First of all,we should form the good habit of keeping early hours.As the saying goes,early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy,wealthy and wise.In addition,we're supposed to take meals slowly and regularly,contributing to good digestion and health.Last but not least,it's strongly recommended that we should spare as much time as possible to work out.Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life and make our study more productive.
I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅲ.读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Most of you have probably felt this before—you wait a long time for something,but when it gets close,you're afraid of what's coming.That's exactly how I felt before my first day of senior high school.I worked hard to pass the tests and had an interview with the headmaster to get into this famous school.When it was finally time to start,I couldn't sleep the night before because I was so nervous about how I would look in front of everyone.
It was Monday morning.I was too excited to sleep the night before,so I arrived at school half an hour early.I walked nervously through the hallway.After about 15 minutes,the hallway was packed with students.The teachers seemed too busy to notice me.I knew which room I needed to go to and had already checked that it was open,but I was hesitant(犹豫不决的) to go in and stood alone.The students moved around me as if I wasn't there,and I felt disappointed and lonely.
Suddenly,a well-dressed boy got close to me.He introduced himself as Thompson and asked if I was lost and if he could help me with anything.I realized how kind he was,and he was exactly who I had wished for a minute before,but I was too nervous to be friendly.Instead of accepting his help and making friends with him,I told him to mind his own business and that I was old enough to find my class without anyone's help.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Luckily,the boy smiled at me and went away without getting angry._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Unexpectedly,Thompson walked into the same classroom._____
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Luckily,the boy smiled at me and went away without getting angry.I felt a wave of shame wash over me.I realized my response had been uncalled for,especially from someone who was trying to help.As I stood there,I wished I could take my words back.The bell rang,signaling the start of the first period,and I reluctantly walked into my classroom,still feeling embarrassed about my earlier reaction.
Unexpectedly,Thompson walked into the same classroom.My heart sank,and I hoped he wouldn't recognize me as the rude boy from the hallway.But to my surprise,he walked over and sat down next to me,flashing a friendly smile.I took a deep breath and decided to change my approach.“Hey,I'm sorry about earlier.I was really nervous,” I said,trying to sound sincere.“No worries! It's a big day for all of us.I was nervous too,” he replied.As the class progressed,I felt the weight of my earlier anxiety lifted.Thompson ended up being a great friend,and that first day,which had started so painfully,turned into a memorable experience filled with laughter and new beginnings.
谢 谢!