【单元考点培优】Unit 1 How can we become good learners？专题14 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优人教新目标版（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优人教新目标Unit 1 How can we become good learners？
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你的同学Mark在学习英语方面遇到了困难，请你给他提出一些建议。请以“How to learn English”为题写一篇短文，70词左右，标题、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to learn English
How can you learn English well Here are my suggestions.
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I hope these suggestions can help you.
2．技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华，参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息，谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由，并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。
Traditional learning in the classroom ·fixed timetable a plan made by a school ·face to face communication ·colorful class activities ·team spirit
Modern learning on the Internet ·flexible (灵活的) timetable a plan made by oneself ·online communication ·rich learning resources ·any place with the Internet
1.对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由，并提出你认为的不足；
2.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假如你是来自英国的Peter，你的中国笔友赵明写信向你请教如何解决英语学习中遇到的困难。请你根据表格中赵明的实际情况，给他写一封建议信。
要求：
1.字迹工整，语法正确；
2.写出5条建议，不少于40词；
3.建议信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Zhao Ming’s Problems
1. He can’t get the pronunciation of some words right.
2. He has no chance to talk with others in English, so he doesn’t understand spoken English.
3. He often forgets some new words.
4. He doesn’t know how to write good articles in English.
5. He can’t use English grammar correctly.
Dear Zhao Ming,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to solve the problems in learning English. Here are a few suggestions for you.
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I do hope you’ll find these methods(方法) useful. I’m looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Peter
4．本单元的话题是“学会如何学习”，所涉及的写作内容通常是介绍学习方法或根据他人学习中遇到的困难给出合理的建议。写作时可参考本单元所提到的学习方法。
假设你是李华，三年的初中生活即将过去，你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上曾帮助过你。在即将毕业之际，请你在给Sam的毕业纪念册上用英语写一段100词左右的留言，要求包括以下内容要点：
1.你在学习上曾遇到的困难；
2.Sam对你的帮助、建议及措施：
(1) 多听多读；
(2) 多看英语电影，多唱英文歌曲；
(3) ……(自由发挥；不少于一项内容)
3．你的收获及对Sam的感谢和祝福。
Dear Sam,
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5．假设你是李华，英语学习成绩优异。昨天你的笔友刘强给你发来电子邮件，向你咨询如何才能学好英语。请你结合下面的要点提示，给他回一封电子邮件。
要点提示：
1. 通过课堂做笔记和大声朗读；
2. 多说英语；
3. 多听英文歌曲；
4. 多看英语电影；
5. 多交一些来自于说英语的国家的朋友。
要求：
1. 词数80左右，电子邮件的格式，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Liu Qiang,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here’s some advice about English learning for you.
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I hope my advice will help you learn English well.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
6．亲爱的同学，随着“双减”政策的落地，面对轻松的学业负担和课余生活，如何成为一个好的学习者至关重要。请根据以下信息，谈谈你的建议吧！词数80左右。
develop good habits How to Be a Good Learner？ finish homework efficiently
make full use of the time …
注意事项：
1.必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总数。
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
How to Be a Good Learner
As we know, the policy of “double-lightening the burden” has been carried out.
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7．假如你叫张娜，在光明中学读书，在学习英语的过程中你遇到了一些问题，想得到王老师的帮助并想给英语老师提一些建议，以帮助自己学好英语。下面表格中只给了简单的提示，请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下：
学习英语时遇到的问题 向英语老师提出的建议
1. 生词多，记忆有难度； 2. 课文长，难弄懂； 3. …… 1. 介绍一些学习英语的好方法； 2. 教课文时读慢一些； 3. ……
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：不少于80词，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
My name is Zhang Na. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help.
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Yours,
Zhang Na
8．亲爱的初三同学，经过两年多的初中学习，你一定在英语学习方面有很大收获和成长，请你结合以下提示，以“How to Learn English”为题写一篇英文短文，把你的英语学习经验介绍给初一初二的同学们。
提示：
(1) Why should you learn English
(2) What is your advice to them
要求：
(1)短文须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥。
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
(3)词数80词左右。（题目和开头已给出，不计入词数）。
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9．在我们的生活中，有些事情看起来很难完成，但是通过我们个人的努力或别人的帮助等，我们做到了。请以“I made it”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 你做到了什么事情；
2. 你是如何做到的；
3. 做完后你的感受或收获。
要求：
1. 短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。
I made it
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10．在我们的学习和生活中，能够全身心地投入到一件事情中去，享受做事情的过程，是一种幸福！但求耕耘，不问收获！某英文网站正在以”全身心投入（Devotion)”为主题的征文活动。假如你是慧洁，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，包含下列问题：
1. What did you devote yourself to 2. How did you do it 3. What have you learnt from the experience ...
注意：1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
2. 词数100词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Devotion
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11．“研学旅行”是以组织中小学生集体旅行的方式走出校园，以各种不同的形式亲近社会与自然而开展的研究性学习与旅行体验相结合的教育活动。每个学期学校都会组织类似活动，大部分学生会参加，他们认为通过研学活动可以增加不一样的体验，也有小部分学生不参加，他们认为学习时间过于紧张，不如在学校自习。对此，你的看法是什么？请根据以下要点提示为校刊写一篇英语短文。
1、要点提示：①介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受；
②表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由(至少2点)。
2、注意事项：①短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
②80词左右；
③文中不得出现个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：研学旅行 study trip； 乘骑设施 ride
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
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12．目前很多学生整体部忙于学习，成却不理想。请根据表格内容，结合自身实际，写一篇关于“怎样提高学习效率”的短文。
学习方法 1.listen to the teacher 2.takes notes 3.review in time 4.correct mistakes ...
体育锻炼 1.exercise ...
其他方面 1.make good use of time 2.ask sb. for help ...
要求：
(1)短文应条理清楚，行文连，段落分明，100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数：
(2)短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。
(3)短文应括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。
How to Improve Our Study Efficiency
A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their studies. How can we solve the problem Here are some suggestions.
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If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
13．假如你是李明，你的朋友李华向你请教学习英语的好方法，你准备给出一些建议。请根据以下中文提示，给李华发一封邮件，要求80词左右，邮件开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点如下：
1. 读英文报纸，培养良好语感；
2. 看英文电影，了解西方文化；
3. 结交一个外国网友，并与之交流；
4. 坚持写英文日记，学好语法；
5. 补充一两点个人想法。
参考词汇：develop v. 培养 sense n. 感觉 e-pal n. 网友
Dear Li Hua,
I know that you have some problems learning English. Don’t worry. I’ll give you some advice. ________
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I hope it will help you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
14．假如班上组织交流学习英语的感受，请你按照表格中的提示写一篇题为“Find Your Own Ways to Learn English”的文章向你的同学们介绍学习英语的经验，以及以前存在的困难。
以前存在的困难 现在的学习方法
1、不能拼写单词 1、记单词词汇表(vocabulary list)
2、听力差 2、多听磁带
3、语法错误 3、多做语法练习
4、…… 4、……
要求：词数80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Find Your Own Ways to Learn English.
There are many ways to learn English but everyone should have his or her own ways.
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15．目前很多学生整天都忙于学习，成绩却不理想。请你根据表格内容，结合自身实际，写篇关于如何提高学习效率的文章。
Study Methods 1.listen to the teacher 2.take notes 3.review in time 4.correct mistakes
The Way to Relax Exercise ...
Others 1.make good use of time 2.ask for help
要求：
(1)短文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名；
(3)词数：80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
How to Improve Our Study Effectively
A great number of students can’t finish their task so that it leads to a had result and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem Here are some
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16．你的好朋友李华在班里学习成绩一直都不错，所有科目都很优秀，唯一就是英语学不好，特别是听力丢分较多，导致英语成绩一直上不去，因此他感到非常苦恼，有时甚至想放弃英语学习，请你根据以下几方面内容提示，给你的好朋友李华一些建议，帮助他提高英语听力考试技巧。
考试前 放松，不要过于紧张
考试时 及时读题，了解试题大致内容。听时再次阅读试题和选项，注意听。 记录重点信息。 听最后一遍再次核对答案。
考试后 听力考试结束，不要随意改动答案。
注意：1）短文要包含所给的提示信息，可适当发挥。
2）短文字数70词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
3）文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
Here is my advice on how to improve your listening.
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17．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mark因想学汉语来到了北京，但在学汉语的过程中遇到了困难，向你写信求助。请根据以下要点提示给他写一封回信，告诉他如何学习汉语。
提示：1. 多听中文歌、看中文电影；
2. 学会查字典；
3. 向老师求助；
4. ……（至少两点）
要求：1. 用上所给要点，并适当发挥； 2. 行文流畅、正确、书写规范；
3. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Mark,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.
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Yours,
Li Hua
18．假如你是李华，你的表弟钱勇（Qian Yong）在新学期开学之际，给你发了一封邮件，向你倾诉自己在学习英语时遇到的烦恼并请教学习英语的好方法。他想在九年级最后一学年里把英语学好。为此，请你根据以下提示和要求，用英语给他回一封邮件。
提示：
1. 对待英语的态度；
2. 如何学习英语；
3. ……
要求：
1. 语言表达要准确, 短文连贯通顺；
2. 词数100左右（邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Qian Yong,
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．根据已学知识，结合自己的实际情况，谈谈自己常用的学英语的方法，不少于五种，并与你的同学交流、分享。80个词左右。
题型分析：
由题目要求可知，本次写作是使用第一人称来表述自己学习英语的五种方法。
行文思路：
此次写作可以从听、说、读、写、练五个方面来分享自己是如何学习英语的。
高分点拨：
可以使用“ I often do… to improve.”及“…is a good way to do .”等结构以避免句子结构的单一。
How to learn English well
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20．假设你是李华，你是一名学习习惯好，各科成绩都很优异的学霸。期末考试前，学校想邀请你给同学们分享一下你复习的好方法，请你以 How to Study for Tests为题，写一篇演讲稿，分享你认为有效的考前复习方法（至少 3 条），并一一展开说明。演讲稿的开头和结尾已经给出。
注意事项：1. 必须包含所有的内容要点；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear classmates and friends,
It’s my honor to be here to share my study habits with all of you.
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Hope you all can enjoy learning and get good grades in the final exam. Thank you!
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
How to learn English
How can you learn English well Here are my suggestions.
First, you can learn it by listening to English songs and watching English films. You can learn some new words. Second, you can speak it as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. You can also learn from these mistakes. Third, read more English magazines and newspapers. It can improve your reading skills. Last but not least, remember some good sentences in English. They are really useful for writing.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍学习英语的方法；
第三步，希望建议能有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①as much as possible尽可能多
②be afraid of doing sth害怕做某事
③make mistakes犯错误
[高分句型]
①Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.（祈使句否定形式）
2．One possible version(1):
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I still prefer the traditional learning in the classroom.
First, there is a fixed timetable. A clear plan is often made by a school, so I don’t need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects. Second, we can have facetoface communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colorful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knowledge happily. What’s more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others.
However, when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can’t follow my teacher. And learning in the classroom can’t provide enough resources for me to choose from.
One possible version(2):
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I like the modern learning on the Internet better.
First, I have a flexible timetable. I can make a plan by myself. In this way, I can have more free time to arrange my life. Second, I can have online communication with people from all over the world. They may share something interesting about their lives with me. Besides, online learning also provides me with rich learning resources. With the Internet, I can learn at any place. That’s really wonderful!
However, I think learning online for a long time is bad for my eyes. Also, sometimes I can’t control myself and I will do something like chatting with my friends or playing computer games. That will have a bad influence on my study.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，主要讨论了现代技术发展对学习方式的影响，表达了作者对传统课堂学习方式的偏好；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：文章中提到了作者对传统课堂学习方式的偏好及其原因，同时也提到了这种方式的不足之处。写作的要点提示已给出，考生应围绕要点来展开写作，注意用词，避免出现单词拼写和语法方面的错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍现代技术对学习方式的影响，并表达自己对传统课堂学习方式的偏好。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。说明作者为什么喜欢传统课堂学习方式，包括有固定时间表、面对面交流、丰富多彩的课堂活动以及培养团队精神等。
第三步，书写总结。指出传统课堂学习方式的不足，如有时跟不上老师的节奏和资源选择有限。
[亮点词汇]
① what’s more还有……
② get along with与……友好相处
[高分句型]
when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can’t follow my teacher.(when引导的时间状语从句)
3．例文：
Dear Zhao Ming,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to solve the problems in learning English. Here are a few suggestions for you.
First, you should often read after the teacher in class and pronounce the words as much as you can. Second, you can try to talk with your classmates and friends in English. In this way, you can have more confidence and want to speak more. Third, forgetting some new words is very common. Don’t worry about it. Just review them when you are free. Fourth, you may start to write some simple sentences and then learn how to write good articles. Finally, when you learn grammar, you should know how to use it. If you have difficulty in using it, you can ask your teacher for help.
I do hope you’ll find these methods(方法) useful. I’m looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Peter
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，针对赵明的五个问题提出建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己乐意给他提出几点建议；
第二步，具体阐述针对他的问题所提出的具体建议；
第三步，最后是叙述自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
① as much as you can尽你所能
② try to do尽力做
③ start to do开始做
[高分句型]
① Third, forgetting some new words is very common.（动名词作主语）
② Finally, when you learn grammar, you should know how to use it. （when引导的时间状语从句）
4．例文
Dear Sam,
How time flies! It’s time for us to say goodbye.
During the past three years, you have given me so much help in English that I can’t thank you too much.
I still remember three years ago, I had difficulty in learning English. It was difficult for me to memorize so many words and understand what people were saying. My spoken English and written English were poor, too. However, I’m lucky that I met you, a kind hearted, smart and patient boy. Firstly, you taught me to listen and read more. And they really helped me a lot. Besides, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classical English songs. In addition, you told me to form the habit of reading aloud in the morning and reading novels before going to bed. As a result, I finally made great progress.
Thank you for all your help and best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本题是一篇便条作文；
② 时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合；
③ 提示：描述自己是如何学会学习的，需要遵照所给要求，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，陈述自己在初中三年里学习上遇到了困难，为后文做铺垫；
第二步，具体描述自己遇到的困难，以及是如何解决的，注意涵盖所有材料要点，适当发挥；
第三步，总结致谢。
[亮点词汇]
① too much 太多
② in addition 此外
③ the habit of ……的习惯
[高分句型]
① you have given me so much help in English that I can’t thank you too much.（结果状语从句）
② Besides, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classical English songs. （宾语从句）
5．例文
Dear Liu Qiang,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here’s some advice about English learning for you.
First, you can take notes in class so that you can review them after class. Second, you can also speak loudly to improve your spoken English. You can speak English as often as possible. Third, you can listen to English songs and watch English movies to improve your listening skills. Last but not least, you can make some friends from speaking-English countries. I think your English will improve rapidly by doing so.
I hope my advice will help you learn English well.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文的主题；
第二步，根据提示材料介绍学习英语的方法；
第三步，希望建议有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from 收到……来信
②take notes 记笔记
③as often as possible 尽可能经常地
[高分句型]
①First, you can take notes in class so that you can review them after class. （so that引导目的状语从句）
②Second, you can also speak loudly to improve your spoken English（动词不定式作目的状语）
6．例文
How to Be a Good Learner
As we know, the policy of “double-lightening the burden” has been carried out. Being a good learner has become even more important. But how to be a good learner Here are some suggestions.
We are supposed to develop some good habits of learning. For example, we should preview the lesson before class and review what we have learnt after class. We’d better make full use of the time at school. We ought to concentrate on our lessons in class and solve all the problems just in time. In this way, we will be able to finish our homework more efficiently. To be a good learner, studying in groups and helping each other are also good for us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用提出问题的方式引出本文的主题；
第二步，根据提示材料分别提出相应的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out 实施
②be supposed to do sth 应该做某事
③make full use of 充分利用
④in time 及时
[高分句型]
①To be a good learner, studying in groups and helping each other are also good for us.（动词不定式作目的状语）
7．例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
My name is Zhang Na. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met many difficulties in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to understand. What’s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn. Because of so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would like to give us some good advice to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily And I hope you teach the text more slowly so that I can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar. I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.
Yours,
Zhang Na
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为求助信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”的“学习英语时遇到的问题”和“向英语老师提出的建议”，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍自己学习英语时遇到的问题，围绕“单词、课文和语法”等方面展开；
第二步，向英语老师寻求帮助并提出建议；
第三步，书写结语。表达“在老师帮助下能在英语学习上取得进步”的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①(be) full of充满
②too...to太……而不能
③What’s more除此之外还
④ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
⑤so that以便
[高分句型]
①First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember.（that引导的定语从句）
②Would like to give us some good advice to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily （so that引导状语从句）
③I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.（that引导宾语从句）
8．例文：
How to Learn English
As we all know, English is used very widely in the world. So it will be helpful for us to master it. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to English songs and watch English movies. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we will make. Third, we should read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should keep a diary in English.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明英语的重要性；
第二步，介绍如何学好英语。
[亮点词汇]
①widely广泛地
②master掌握
③be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we will make.（“the+比较级..., the 比较级”结构）
②In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.（“as long as”引导条件状语从句）
9．例文：
I made it
Since I went to the middle school, my English grades have gone down rapidly. I felt very disappointed. And I didn’t know the way to improve my English grades.
“Never give up,” my father said to me. “Look for the methods which belong to you.” After hearing these, I decided to make a studying plan about improving my English. With my father’s help, I made a plan. The plan included doing some English reading, watching English news and so on. Since I made up the plan, I have followed the details of the plan. The following exam was coming. That time I became self-confident. I got nearly full marks. This made me very happy because I defeated myself. My parents congratulated me on this. And they said that they were proud of me.
From then on, I have become more and more confident, and I am determined to continue to try my best to study English as well as other subjects.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，讲述自己做到的一件事情；
② 时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，仔细介绍自己所做的事情的前后对比，以及从中感悟到的道理等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己遇到的困难；
第二步，具体介绍自己是如何改变的，如何做成这件事情的；
第三步，最后介绍自己从此事中取得的收获。
[亮点词汇]
① give up 放弃
② be proud of 以……而骄傲
③ be determined to 下决心做……
[高分句型]
① Since I went to the middle school, my English grades have gone down rapidly.（since引导的时间状语从句）
② This made me very happy, because I defeated myself.（because引导的原因状语从句）
10．范文：
Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which turned out to be one of the most important experiences in my life.
One day, I saw some of my schoolmates painting in the art room. The colorful pictures caught my attention immediately. I was so drawn to the beauty in front of me that I joined the Painting Club. After that, no matter whatever happened, I still was on time to each art lesson and finished each painting carefully.
By doing this, I developed my ability and decided that I wanted to completely devote myself to painting. Not only did I win countless awards but also my painting journey helped me grow into a better person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要注意不要遗漏信息提示，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。表明自己全心投入到画画中去的观点。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述自己是如何爱上绘画的以及自己的做法是怎样的。
第三步，书写结语。简单地阐述自己在这次经历中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①devote oneself to全身致力于
②in front of在……之前
③on time按时
④not only…but also… 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which turned out to be one of the most important experiences in my life. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Not only did I win countless awards but also my painting journey helped me grow into a better person.（倒装句）
11．例文：
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Last year, we went to the USA. We had a good time there. We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. We studied English with them. I think a study trip is a good way for students to study.
When we have a study trip, we can visit many places of natural beauty. During the study trip, we can learn many things that we can’t learn at school. We can be served with different new food and know more things about different customs.
In my opinion, we should hold more activities like this. If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries.
I hope study trips are becoming more and more popular.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”关于研学旅行的写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出，点名主题，“研学旅行”现在很受学生欢迎；
第二步，介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受；
第三步，表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由；
第四步，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②have a good time玩得高兴
③be served with向……提供
④in one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. (who引导的定语从句)
②If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries. (If引导的条件状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句)
12．例文：
A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their studies. How can we solve the problem Here are some suggestions.
First, we are supposed to have good study methods, such as previewing new lessons before class, listening to the teacher carefully in class, taking notes in time and so on. We should review in time and do homework on time. Don’t forget to correct mistakes at any time. Then, it’s helpful for study to have good health. So we should spend at least an hour exercising our body every day. Besides, we’d better make good use of time. Don’t put off what we can do today till tomorrow. We should ask the teacher or classmates for help if we have some questions.
If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。点明“怎样提高学习效率”的主题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从学习方法、体育锻炼以及其他方面提出建议。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a great number of 大量的
②in time及时
③such as例如
④at least至少
⑤put off推迟
[高分句型]
①Then, it’s helpful for study to have good health. （it作形式主语）
②Don’t put off what we can do today till tomorrow.（祈使句）
13．例文：
Dear Li Hua,
I know that you have some problems learning English. Don’t worry. I’ll give you some advice.
First, you can read English newspapers. It can help you develop a good sense of language. Although it may be difficult at the beginning, don’t give up, and you will get good results. Second, if you are free at weekends, you can watch English movies that you are interested in and learn about western culture. Third, you can make a foreign friend, and you can communicate with him in English. I think it can help you improve your speaking skills. Fourth, keep an English diary. You may make some mistakes, but don’t worry. You can ask your classmates or teachers for help. Because writing can help you learn grammar well. Last but not least, you can improve your listening skills by listening to tapes or English songs.
If you accept my advice, I believe you’ll make great progress in your English study. I hope my advice will help you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇给材料的书信作文，属于电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，写作包含要点中的所有提示以及自己的观点等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体指出要提出一些建议；
第二步，具体从不同的方面提出建议，包括要点提示的所有内容；
第三步，最后总结希望自己的建议对朋友有用。
[亮点词汇]
① give up放弃
② be interested in对……感兴趣
③ communicate with和……交流
[高分句型]
① If you accept my advice, I believe you’ll make great progress in your English study.（if引导的条件状语从句）
② you can watch English movies that you are interested in（that引导的定语从句）
14．例文
There are many ways to learn English but everyone should have his or her own ways.
At first, I had many difficulties in learning English. For example, I couldn’t spell some English words, and couldn’t understand what people said when they were talking fast. I often made mistakes in grammar.
Now I have found some ways to improve my English. I copy down the vocabulary lists for each unit and keep them in my mind. I listen to English tapes every day and I can understand mostly what people talk about. I often do some grammar exercises and ask the teachers for help.
In my opinion, the key to learning English well is to devote our hearts and souls to English learning and have our own ways.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据表格提示，介绍自己学习英语的经验以及存在的困难，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍以前存在的困难；
第二步，具体阐述现在的学习方法；
第三步，最后表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①For example比如
②make mistakes犯错误
③In my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①I couldn’t spell some English words, and couldn’t understand what people said when they were talking fast（what引导的宾语从句）
②In my opinion, the key to learning English well is to devote our hearts and souls to English learning and have our own ways.（动词不定式作表语）
15．例文
How to Improve Our Study Effectively
A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem Here are some suggestions.
First, we are supposed to have good study methods, such as, previewing the lessons before class, listening to the teacher carefully in class, taking notes in time, reviewing in time, doing homework on time, correcting mistakes at any time.
Then, it’s helpful for students to have good health. So we should spend at least an hour exercising every day. We can play basketball, climb the mountains or swim. We also need to watch movies or listen to music to relax ourselves.
Besides, We’d better make good use of time. Don’t put off what we can do today till tomorrow. We should ask the teacher or classmates for help if we have some questions.
If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给表格提示，介绍如何提高学习效率，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题：给出建议；
第二步，具体阐述提高学习效率的建议；
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to应该
②at any time在任何时候
③spend time doing sth花时间做某事
④make good use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①Don’t put off what we can do today till tomorrow.（what引导宾语从句）
②We should ask the teacher or classmates for help if we have some questions.（if引导的条件状语从句）
16．范文：
Here is my advice on how to improve your listening.
Before the exam, you should relax and don’t be nervous. After getting the test paper, you should read it carefully to know the contents. When you’re listening, you should read the paper and options again. You should pay much attention to the listening, and write down the important messages. You should check your answers again at the last time. When the listening test is over, don’t change your answers at will.
Practice makes perfect. Hope it works for you, and I believe you will make it!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，要求根据提纲写一篇关于提高英语听力技巧的建议类作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的信息，按照考试前、中、后的顺序分别写出建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接所给开头，第二段开始叙述考试前、考试时和考试后的听力考试技巧。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，每个部分应包含对应的提纲内容，适当使用连词、副词、时间状语、提建议的句型等；
第三步，书写结语，表达“希望建议能对李华有所帮助”的愿望并鼓励李华。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②write down写下
③at will随意
④make it做到，成功
[高分句型]
①When the listening test is over, don’t change your answers at will. （when引导的时间状语从句）
②Practice makes perfect. （习语）
17．范文：
Dear Mark,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked me about how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.
First, you can listen to Chinese songs in your spare time. It’s also a good way to watch Chinese movies with friends on weekends. Second, you’d better learn to look up words in a dictionary. Third, when you have difficulty in learning Chinese, you can ask your teachers for help. Besides, you should read as much as possible. Last but not least, you should listen to the teachers carefully in class and practice more after class.
Hope you can learn Chinese well!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时；
③提示：需要包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步， 开门见山，提出建议；
第二步，具体阐述学习汉语的建议；
第三步，表达美好祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①look up words查阅单词
②in your spare time在空闲时间
③last but not least最后但并非最不重要的
[高分句型]
①when you have difficulty in learning Chinese, you can ask your teachers for help.（时间状语从句）
②It’s also a good way to watch Chinese movies with friends on weekends.（it is adj. to do do sth）
③Second, you’d better learn to look up words in a dictionary.（had better do sth）
18．例文：
Dear Qian Yong,
From your letter, I have known that you have problems in learning English. English is very important now. You should work hard and learn it well. Now I’ll give you some advice on how to learn English.
Firstly, increase your vocabulary. It’s a good habit to do some reading every day and remember some good sentences. Secondly, doing enough exercises can help you with grammar. You can also watch some English movies. At last, ask your teacher for help if it is necessary.
I hope my advice will help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学好英语的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述学习英语的方法；
第三步，最后表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
① have problems in在……方面有问题
② how to do如何做
③ do some reading阅读
[高分句型]
① It’s a good habit to do some reading every day and remember some good sentences.（动词不定式作主语，and连接并列的动词短语）
② At last, ask your teacher for help if it is necessary.（if引导的条件状语从句）
19．例文
How to learn English well
Do you have any good ways of learning English I’d like to share some of my learning methods with you.
1. I often read English aloud in the morning.
2. Listening to English songs is a good way to improve listening ability.
3. I usually watch English movies to practice my spoken English.
4. I often keep a diary in English to improve my writing ability.
5. Doing more practice is a good way to study English grammar.
I think these ways are helpful to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求结合自身的学习经历，与同学分享不少于5种学习英语的方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，采用问问题的方式引出主题；
第二步，具体阐述学习英语的具体方法；
[亮点词汇]
①would like to想要
②share...with...与……分享……
③keep a diary写日记
[高分句型]
Listening to English songs is a good way to improve listening ability.（动名词作主语；不定式作后置定语）
20．One possible version:
Dear classmates and friends,
It’s my honor to be here to share my study habits with all of you.
First, make a plan carefully. We have many subjects to learn, so it’s important for us to have a plan. For example, you can remember English words in the morning. Second, ask your teacher or classmates for help. If you have any question, it’s a good way to ask others for help. You can also discuss with them. At last, you should find a way to relax. Doing sports is a good way. It can not only build your body but also make your brain quick.
Hope you all can enjoy learning and get good grades in the final exam. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目要求分享一下自己考试复习前的好方法，至少3条，写作时注意适当扩展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍演讲的目的（开头已给出）；
第二步，根据自己的经历，介绍至少3种复习方法；
第三步，表达祝愿（结尾已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①for example比如
②ask sb. to do sth.让某人做某事
③at last最后
[高分句型]
①We have many subjects to learn.（不定式作后置定语）
②If you have any question, it’s a good way to ask others for help.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③It can not only build your body but also make your brain quick.（not only...but also...的使用）
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