写作组合练(1)
Ⅰ.应用文写作
(2024·湖南长郡中学三模)
你校将于下月举办以“团结就是力量(Unity Is Strength)”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇发言稿参赛。内容包括:
1.团结的重要性;
2.提出建议;
3.发出倡议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Unity Is Strength
Ⅱ.读后续写
(2024·山东聊城一模)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Never in my wildest imagination did I picture myself standing on the back of a running horse.I'm not a cowgirl and don't even ride horses for pleasure.
But I was doing a television fitness show,and someone in the group had the bright idea that we should go to the rodeo (牛仔竞技比赛) grounds and ask the trick rider if they could teach me a stunt (特技表演) to do on camera.We could use this short video as the new opening to the show.I agreed the stunt would be eye catching and prove how flexible a fit person can be.
That was how I ended up at the rodeo grounds with a camera group,watching the remarkable performances of three talented young cowgirls.Once their show was over,we approached them,detailing our ideas for the television show.
The cowgirls asked me which particular stunt I was interested in learning.I especially liked one stunt—one of the girls led a horse to continuously and slowly run around the grounds while one of the other girls ran across the grounds toward a small trampoline (蹦床).It was timed perfectly so that she jumped onto the trampoline,up into the air,and then onto the horse's back.As she landed on its back,she stood up and stretched her arms outward as the horse continued slowly running.It looked impressive.
They talked me through the necessary moves,stressing the timing since I would need to be in the air at the correct time when the horse ran past.I alone would judge the speed of the horse and my own speed to jump onto the horse on time.
It was clearly difficult.I was a little hesitant,afraid of being unable to do that well and slowing down the filming.But I knew the most important thing for me was to concentrate on the task at hand.
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
The first time out,I hit the horse's back part and fell to the ground.
At 6:00 pm,we completed the stunt filming,with my knee injured.
1/1第一讲 八种常见书信类文体
文体1 告知信
1.告知信是指一方告诉另一方某一信息的信件。
2.常考的话题有告知上课计划、活动安排、比赛信息、讲座信息、招聘信息、报名事宜等。
3.时态为一般现在时或一般将来时。文章通常以第一、第二人称为主。
4.告知信中的活动介绍是写作重点,需要针对活动的时间、地点、目的、过程、影响、感受及意义等多角度展开。
Ⅰ.开头句——点明写信目的
1.I am writing to inform you of some relevant information about...
我写信告知你关于……的一些相关信息。
2.Here is the detailed information that you desire to know.
这是你想知道的详细信息。
Ⅱ.篇中句——告知具体事项
3.Inspired by the fantastic scenery,I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond,surrounded by blooming flowers.
受这美妙景色的启发,我决定创作一幅水彩画,画的是公园池塘上的小桥,周围是盛开的鲜花。
4.It was a refreshing experience to create art surrounded by nature’s beauty.
在大自然的美景中创作艺术是一种令人耳目一新的体验。
5.Over the October holiday,my parents and I are planning to go to Xi’an to see the Terracotta Warriors.
十月假期,我和父母计划去西安看兵马俑。
Ⅲ.结尾句——意义/期望
6.Not only does the activity arouse students’interest in Chinese knots,but it also cultivates their love of traditional Chinese culture.
这次活动不仅激发了学生们对中国结的兴趣,而且培养了他们对中国传统文化的热爱。
7.I guess that’s all for now! I’ll write again soon and send photos! Do you have any plans for the coming holiday Hope to hear from you soon.
我想大概就这些!我很快会再次写信并发送照片!你对即将到来的假期有什么计划吗?希望很快收到你的来信。
Dear ,
I’m writing to share (写信的目的).
You can’t imagine how meaningful and interesting! We were tasked to , I decided to (具体活动).The activity not only (活动的意义).Overall, (感想、感受).
(问询对方相关信息) I would love to hear about them.Take care and write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
(2024·新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)
假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课,请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1.你完成的作品;
2.你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
【考场作文】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was! We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most.①I was inspired by the breathtaking scenery and decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond,surrounded by blooming flowers.Being close to nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life.②Overall,it was a memorable and enjoyable art session.It allowed me to connect with both my surroundings and my artistic expression.
How have your classes been lately I would love to hear about them.Take care and write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
1.用分词短语作状语升级①:Inspired by the breathtaking scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
2.用定语从句升级②:Overall, it was a memorable and enjoyable art session,which allowed me to connect with both my surroundings and my artistic expression.
(2024·山东济南一模)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Frank发来邮件,询问你校 “阳光大课间” 活动的开展情况。请写封回信,内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2.你的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Frank,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Frank,
I’m glad to share with you the details of our school’s “Sunshine Break” activity.
This initiative encourages students to participate in various sports and exercises during the break,aiming to enhance our physical health and promote a more active lifestyle.
Personally,I find it extremely beneficial as it not only improves our fitness level but also helps us to de-stress and refresh our minds.The positive energy it brings to the school atmosphere is truly uplifting.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体2 建议信
建议信是生活中常用的一种应用文文体,一般结合某一问题进行反馈再提出看法、建议或忠告。
Ⅰ.开头句——开篇表意
1.I know from your letter that you have trouble in learning English.I am writing to offer you some advice.
从你的来信中得知你在学习英语方面遇到了困难。我写信给你提供一些建议。
2.I’m more than pleased to have received your e-mail.Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。
Ⅱ.篇中句——具体建议
3.What’s more,you may as well join in a summer camp,which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.
另外,你不妨参加一个夏令营,这不仅开拓你的视野而且有助于你培养团队精神。
4.By the way,you may take Bus No.322,which will take you directly to the club.
顺便说一下,你可以乘坐322路公交车,它会直接把你带到那个俱乐部。
5.As to how to get along well with your classmates,you should keep in mind that kindness really matters.
至于如何与同学相处好,你应该记住:友善很重要。
Ⅲ.结尾句——表达希望
6.I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.Remember:The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:一个决心要获胜的人从来不会说“不可能”。
7.I hope that my suggestions are helpful to you anyway.I would be more than happy to see your improvement.
无论如何,我希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到你的进步。
Dear ,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestions.Above all,it is important to (建议一).In that way, (采取建议一的好处).You can also (建议二,根据要求用不同的句式提出建议).This would allow you to have the opportunity to (建议二所带来的好的结果).In addition, (其他的建议).I’m sure (预测可能的结果,给对方以信心和决心).
I hope you will find my suggestions useful and I’m looking forward to (表达愿望).
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2024·北京卷改编)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友 Jim 准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年中华人民共和国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.建议投稿内容;
2.就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【考场作文】
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear that you’re planning to ①write an article to the Asia Today column for your school newspaper.
Regarding your focus on China’s 75th anniversary,I recommend highlighting China’s remarkable economic growth.Over the past decades,China has witnessed unprecedented development.Secondly,②I suggest discussing China’s technological advancements.China takes the lead in areas like 5G technology,artificial intelligence,and renewable energy.Lastly,you might as well mention China’s cultural prosperity.③With a rich history and diverse cultures,China continues to promote cultural exchanges and cooperation with other countries,and foster mutual understanding and friendship.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful.If you need more information,feel free to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
1.用高级词汇替换①:contribute to
2.改变②的句式,避免表达句式单一:it is a good choice to discuss China’s technological advancements
3.用分词作状语升级 ③:With a rich history and diverse cultures, China continues to promote cultural exchanges and cooperation with other countries, fostering mutual understanding and friendship.
(2024·山东枣庄二模)
假定你是李华, 你校英文报《新校园》(New Campus)计划增加新栏目,向学生征集建议。请你用英语给编辑写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.建议增加的栏目;
2.说明理由。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua from Senior 3.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua from Senior 3.I am writing to offer a suggestion for the upcoming new column in our school’s English newspaper,New Campus.
I propose the addition of a column titled “Cultural Spotlight”, which focuses on introducing diverse cultures from around the world.Not only will this column enhance our understanding of global cultures but foster cross-cultural awareness and appreciation among students.Through feature articles,interviews,and cultural snapshots,we can explore the traditions,festivals,and unique aspects of various cultures,thus broadening our horizons and enriching our school life.I believe this new column will be a valuable addition to New Campus and contribute to a more inclusive and culturally diverse learning environment.
Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to our school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体3 邀请信
邀请信是邀请亲朋好友或重要人士等参加某项活动时所发的邀请性书信。特点是简短,热情,给人以真诚、亲切的感觉。邀请信写作需要运用与身份相符的语气和得体的语言措辞,拓展具体信息要清晰明确。
Ⅰ.开头句——发出邀请
1.A Chinese Classics Reciting Contest will be held in my school.Knowing that you are really into Chinese culture,I’m writing to invite you to participate in it.
我校将要举办“中华经典文学诵读比赛”。知道你对中国文化很感兴趣,我写信邀请你参加。
2.I’m writing to share with you the news about the charity party to be held by our Students’Union next Wednesday.On behalf of the Union,I sincerely invite you to come.
我写信是想和你分享下周三我们学生会举行慈善聚会的消息。我代表学生会诚挚地邀请你参加。
Ⅱ.篇中句——活动目的、时间、安排及活动形式
3.Our music festival will cover a wide range of activities,including short musical plays,musical instrument performances,as well as a singing contest.
我们的音乐节上会有各种各样的活动,包括音乐短剧、乐器演奏以及一场歌唱比赛。
4.The exhibition will take place in our school art gallery on April 26th,aimed at encouraging students to respect knowledge and advocate science.
展览将于4月26日在我们学校美术馆举行,目的是鼓励学生尊重知识,崇尚科学。
5.It will begin at ...(时间) and last about 2 hours,during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
它将在……开始,持续约2小时,在此期间15名准备充分的参赛者将发表演讲。
Ⅲ.结尾句——期待接受邀请,早日回复
6.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
如果你能接受我的邀请,我将不胜感激。
7.I sincerely hope you can come and have a good time.Looking forward to your reply.
我真诚地希望你能来度过一段愉快的时光。期待你的答复。
Dear ,
Knowing that you’re interested in/fond of/keen on (感兴趣或喜欢的事物),I’m writing/I’d like to invite you to join in (活动).
As scheduled,it will be held (具体地点、时间),when there will be .Furthermore/In addition, (进一步的安排),after which we will (另一个安排).I’m sure/convinced you can not only (活动益处之一)but also (活动益处之二) through the activity.(介绍活动内容和活动益处)
I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.Hopefully,you’ll accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.(表达希望对方接受邀请的愿望,并表示感谢)
Yours,
Li Hua
(2022·新课标Ⅰ卷)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
【考场作文】
Dear Caroline,
I am Li Hua,head of “Talk and Talk”, an English program from the Campus Broadcasting Station and I am writing to invite you as an interviewee about how to improve oral English.
①The program aims to promote students’English level and has enjoyed popularity on campus,owing to its casual and easy style.Every interviewed teacher will talk freely to share interesting English stories with us.I anticipate we can gain a lot through the coming interview.
②If it is convenient for you next Monday,I expect to have a wonderful talk with you from 5 pm to 6 pm.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
1.分词作状语升级①:Aiming to promote students’English level, the program has enjoyed popularity on campus, owing to its casual and easy style.
2.用状语从句的省略简化 ②:If convenient for you next Monday, I expect to have a wonderful talk with you from 5 pm to 6 pm.
(2024·湖北4月调研)
假定你是学生会主席李华,你校高三师生下周将举行篮球“师生友谊赛”,请你给外教Mr.Smith写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.活动方案;
2.邀请加入。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union.I am delighted to invite you to participate in the upcoming teacher-student friendship basketball game at our school.
The game is scheduled to kick off at 14:00 pm next Friday afternoon at the school gymnasium.After a brief opening ceremony,the students and teachers will engage in a friendly competition.Additionally,a special half-time show featuring performances by the school’s dance club and music band will entertain the audience.The game will not only be an opportunity for interaction and exchange between teachers and students but also a platform for everyone to relax and have some fun.
Looking forward to the game and hope to see you there.Thank you for considering our invitation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体4 咨询信
咨询信是针对某项活动或相关情况,希望了解详细信息的信件,表明写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣。咨询信,问句较多,写时要避免句式单调,语气要委婉礼貌,要充分表达获取信息的急切心情以及相应的感激之情。咨询的问题应简洁、清晰、明确,避免歧义和误解,确保所提问题与题目要求的主题相关。
Ⅰ.开头句——点明写信目的
1.I’m writing to inquire if it is possible for you to provide me with some information,concerning...
我写信来咨询一下您能否可以提供一些关于……的信息。
2.I’m writing to ask you some relevant information about the basketball match to be held next week.
我写信是想问您一些有关下周将要举行的篮球赛的相关信息。
Ⅱ.篇中句——咨询具体信息
3.To begin with/To start with/In the first place,I would appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for the applicants.
首先,如果你能告诉我申请人的要求,我会很感激。
4.Regarding the competition,I would like to know details,such as the exact dates and the schedule to help me plan my trip accordingly.In addition,I would like to know more about the competition’s format and procedures.
关于比赛,我希望你能告诉我具体的日期和日程安排,以帮助我相应地计划我的行程。此外,我想了解更多关于比赛的形式和程序的信息。
5.I’d be grateful if you could let me know whether there are any special requirements for...
如果你能告诉我对……是否有特殊要求,我将不胜感激。
6.Another point I am uncertain/unclear about is...
我还不确定的另外一点是……
Ⅲ.结尾句——表示感谢,期盼回复
7.Thank you for your kindness,and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢您的善意,对于您对这封信的及时关注我将不胜感激。
8.I’m looking forward to/eager for a favourable reply at your earliest convenience.
我盼望您方便时尽早回复好消息。
Dear ,
I am (自我介绍).Having read (信息来源),I feel interested and want to join in (活动).I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with some specific information regarding (要询问的内容).
To begin with,could you be so kind as to tell me (第一个问题) Besides,I would also like to know (第二个问题).In addition,I wonder
(第三个问题).What’s more,what deserves my special attention is
(最重要的一个问题).
Thank you for your kindness,and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2021·全国甲卷改编)
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表示感谢。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【考场作文】
Dear Chris,
How’s everything going Our school is going to hold a class meeting with the theme of introducing traditional Chinese culture.It will be posted on an English website.Now I am writing to obtain your detailed advice on it.
As is known to all,China has abundant and unique traditional cultures with a rich history,such as tea culture,Peking Opera,Chinese calligraphy,the Chinese knot and so on.What’s more,there are many historical places of interest,like the Great Wall,the West Lake,etc.Would you be so kind as to tell me which attracts you most In this way,our meeting can be a great success.
Please reply to me at your earliest convenience.I will take your advice into consideration and really appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
找出画线部分内容的不足并改写:写信人就“中国文化传统”进行咨询,名胜古迹的提及偏离主题,改写如下:All of them are so fascinating that we don’t know what appeals to foreigners most. Considering that you are keen on traditional Chinese culture,your suggestions will be greatly helpful to us.
(2024·广东七校联合体联考)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tim邀请你参加他们学校暑假组织的“科技夏令营”。你想参加,现就此事写一封信向他咨询夏令营的相关事宜,要点包括:
1.具体日程安排;
2.住宿和费用等。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tim,
Many thanks for inviting me to your school’s Summer Science Camp.I am looking forward to it and would like to enquire about further details.
First of all,could you keep me informed of the specific schedule of the summer camp so that I can make preparations in advance Secondly,I wonder if there is a student dormitory available,otherwise I will have to book a hotel ahead of time.And would you be kind enough to tell me about the costs associated with the summer camp activities as well as the accommodation fees
Looking forward to your early reply.I really can’t wait for the summer camp to come soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
文体5 求助信
求助信是写信人碰到难题向对方求助的信件。求助信要用正式的语言提出礼貌的请求,清楚地说明你写这封电子邮件/信件的原因,清楚地提出必要的问题,充分体现写信人诚挚的态度。
Ⅰ.开头句——开篇表意
1.Hearing you have much experience in ...,I am writing to ask you for help.
听说您在……方面很有经验,在此我写信向您求助。
2.I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to lend me a hand for my English study.
我写信希望您能帮助我学习英语。
Ⅱ.篇中句——求助原因
3.Would you like to do me a favour to have my draft polished
你愿意帮我润色草稿吗?
4.I have finished the first draft and I am wondering if you can help me polish the language and correct the mistakes in my pronunciation as well.
我已经完成了初稿,我想知道您是否能帮助我润色一下语言,也帮助我改正一下发音的错误。
5.I find it challenging to be qualified for the job.I also have trouble in expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary.
我觉得胜任这份工作很有挑战性。由于词汇量有限,我也很难准确地表达我的想法。
6.I am encountering three problems which bother me a lot.To begin with...What’s worse,...What troubles me most is...All of these upset me because...
我遇到了三个很困扰我的问题。首先……更糟糕的是……最让我苦恼的是……所有这些都让我很不高兴,因为……
7.Faced with/Confronted with/In the face of such tricky and challenging problems,I am eager for your timely assistance and proposals.
面对如此棘手和富有挑战的问题,我急需你及时的帮助和提议。
Ⅲ.结尾句——期待答复,表示感谢
8.I would be grateful if you could lend me a helping hand.
如果您能帮我一把,我将不胜感激。
9.Your professional advice would be of great help to me.Looking forward to your early reply.
您的专业建议对我会有很大的帮助。期待您的早日答复。
Dear ,
I am .I’m writing to ask whether you could do me a favour.(说明自己身份,点明写信目的)
I have much difficulty/trouble in (陈述自己面临的困难).Besides,I’m very upset that (提出令自己苦恼的问题).What’s more,I don’t know (进一步说明自己的困境).I’m wondering if you could be so kind as to so that (请求对方帮助).Meanwhile,I beg you to so that (再次请求对方的帮助).
I’d appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.I’m looking forward to your early reply.(表达对对方帮助的感激,并希望对方早日回复)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(全国Ⅰ卷改编)
假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms.Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
【考场作文】
Dear Ms. Jenkins,
I’m Li Hua from your English class last year.I’m writing to ask whether you could ①help me.
To apply for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the coming summer vacation,I’ve already completed my application letter and resume.However,I’m not sure of the words and format ②I have used in them.I’m wondering if you could be so kind as to give me some professional advice.The relevant materials are attached to my mail.③I would thank you if you could help me figure out the mistakes in terms of words and format.If convenient,could you help me polish them
Thanks for your consideration and help.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
1.用短语升级①:do me a favour/lend me a hand
2.用分词作定语升级②:used in them
3.用it作形式宾语升级③:I would appreciate it if you could help me figure out the mistakes in terms of words and format.
(2024·厦门高三期中检测改编)
假定你是李华,当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师Smith写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1.说明写信原因;
2.描述遇到的具体问题,至少两个;
3.表达感谢或期待。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr.Smith,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to ask you for help,for I’m having trouble in learning English now.
At present,I am faced with two main problems.First of all,I find it quite hard to remember words and put them into use.In addition,I feel so nervous in front of my classmates that I can’t say a word in English.Therefore,I hope you can offer me some advice on how to remember the words and how to overcome my fear of speaking English.
I believe that I can improve my English with your help.I would appreciate it if you could help me.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体6 感谢信
感谢信是向提供关心、帮助或支持过自己的集体或个人表达感谢的信件。信件需要写明感谢他人的理由,内容要感情真挚、措辞得体。感谢信用语要求精练简洁,详略得当,层次分明。遣词造句要把握好度,不可过分雕饰。
Ⅰ.开头句——表达感谢之情,并说明原因
1.On behalf of the students’union of our school,I am writing to convey our heartfelt thanks for your wonderful speech on AI.
代表我们学校学生会,我写信对您有关人工智能的精彩报告表达我们衷心的感谢。
2.I would like to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
我想对你给予我们的及时帮助和支持表示衷心的感谢。
3.I am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help.
我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。
Ⅱ.篇中句——具体帮助
4.Additionally,the wonderful songs and movies which you recommended to me really made me fall in love with English.
另外,您所推荐的精彩歌曲和影片确实让我爱上了英语。
5.Without your help/But for your help (If it were not for your help),I would not have made so much progress in my English.
要是没有你的帮助,我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
6.I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing.
我仍然记得为了帮助我提高我的英语口语和写作你所付出的帮助。
7.There’s no denying that it is difficult for me to...without your help.
不可否认,对我来说,没有你的帮助,……是非常困难的。
Ⅲ.结尾句——再次致谢
8.Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I sincerely invite you to my hometown.
再次感谢您的盛情款待,并诚挚邀请您到我的家乡来。
9.Words fail to express my thankfulness to you.
我无法用语言来表达我对你的谢意。
10.I deeply appreciate your help and I hope to have the opportunity to reward your kindness.
我非常感谢你的帮助,并且我希望有机会报答你的好意。
Dear (感谢对象),
I would like to express/convey/extend in this letter my heartfelt/sincere/earnest thanks/gratitude to you for (感谢的原因).
If it had not been for your assistance in (对方的具体帮助),I fear that I would have been (没有对方的帮助可能产生的后果).Everyone agrees that it was you who (给出细节).
Again,I would like to express my sincere thanks to you.
Yours sincerely,
(写信人)
(浙江卷)
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件, 内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3.临别祝愿。
注意: 1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【考场作文】
Dear Alex,
Hearing that you’re leaving China soon,I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your generous help with my English.
①Under your professional guidance,I have made remarkable progress in English,especially speaking.Thanks to your help,my English improved so rapidly that last month I even won in a speech contest.Whenever I encountered difficulties,②you always cheered me up,which restored my confidence and stimulated my enthusiasm for English.
No words are strong enough to ③tell how grateful I am.Wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
1.用强调句型升级①:It is under your professional guidance that I have made remarkable progress in English, especially speaking.
2.进行时态增加感激之情②:you were always cheering me up
3.用高级表达替代③:convey/extend
(2024·山东日照一模改编)
假定你是李华,最近在校英文报开设的“英文诗歌创作”专栏中获得写作一等奖。外教Andy提供了很大的支持和帮助。请你给他写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1.表达感谢;
2.回顾所提供的帮助。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Andy,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Andy,
I am writing to inform you that I won the first prize in the “English poetry writing” column started by the English newspaper.I am grateful for what you have done for me.Without your patient guidance and continuous encouragement,I could not have made it.
It was kind of you to set aside half an hour every day from your busy schedule to teach me how to write a poem.Besides,after I wrote the poem,you revised my poem and gave me some advice.
Thanks again for your generous help.
Yours,
Li Hua
文体7 申请信
申请信是指写信人想申请某个职位或某个项目而向收信人提出请求的信件。一般常考的内容有申请成为志愿者、申请某个岗位、加入俱乐部或参加夏令营、留学项目等。申请信是非常正式的信件,所用语言也应该正式、简洁和准确,语气要客气礼貌。
Ⅰ.开头句——提出申请
1.I’m writing in the hope that I can obtain an opportunity to further my study in Computer Science in your university.
我写信是希望能获得在贵校计算机科学专业深造的机会。
2.Having heard that you are recruiting volunteers to teach in the countryside,I am writing to apply for a chance to become a volunteer.
听说你们在招募下乡支教的志愿者,我写信是想申请做一名志愿者。
Ⅱ.篇中句——个人优势
3.Not only am I qualified for the job,but I have the right personality for it.
我不仅具备做这项工作的资格,而且我的性格也符合招募条件。
4.What is important is that my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others.
重要的是,我良好的交际能力使我能与他人维持良好的关系。
5.To start with,I have a good command of English,enabling me to communicate well with others.
首先,我精通英语,使我可以与他人顺利沟通。
6.Having been learning English for many years,I have a good command of English,especially spoken English.
已经学了很多年的英语,我精通英语,尤其是英语口语。
Ⅲ.结尾句——表达感谢、希望或决心
7.I would appreciate it if you could give me an opportunity and I am sure I can perfectly live up to your expectations.Looking forward to your early reply.
如果您能给我一个机会,我将感激不尽,并且肯定完全不辜负您的期望。期待您的早日答复。
8.Should you favour me with the position,I am convinced that I would live up to your expectations.
如果你选择我任职,我坚信我一定不会辜负你的期望。
Dear ,
I’m from (介绍自己).I’m writing to apply (职务) (说明信息及来源).I believe the job would be a great opportunity for me to contribute and learn.
I find this position quite appealing to me.I can be equal to it by (具体参与活动).Of course,I possess qualifications accordingly.I think (优势一).Additionally,I (优势二).And I think it (应聘目的).
I do hope my (资质与能力) will win me a favourable consideration from your side.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2023·天津6月卷改编)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画,拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:
1.申请参加本次活动;
2.阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;
3.结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因。
参考词汇:中国工坊 Chinese Workshop;中华美食 Chinese cuisine;手工艺 handicraft;书法calligraphy
注意:1.词数不少于80个;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【考场作文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin,an exchange student from China.①I know that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school and I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.
The theme of the activity involves Chinese food,traditional Chinese handicrafts,Chinese calligraphy and painting.So I think this activity is very significant,which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and ②encouraging cultural exchanges between China and Britain.As a Chinese,I ③like making Chinese cuisine,for example dumplings.④I not only can teach participants how to make dumplings,but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event.Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【打造亮点】
1.用分词作状语升级①:Knowing that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school, I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.
2.用高级表达替代②:promoting
3.用高级短语替代③:have a passion for/am fond of/am crazy about
4.用倒装句升级④: Not only can I teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
(2024·安徽合肥一模)
假定你是李华,你从网上得知联合国教科文组织(UNESCO)将在你的家乡举办“一带一路”(the Belt and Road Initiative)茶文化交流活动。请你写一封英文信申请做志愿者。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.对活动的认识;
3.个人优势。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply as a volunteer for “the Belt and Road Initiative” Tea Culture Exchange event to be organized by UNESCO in my hometown.
As for me,this event presents a unique opportunity to promote cultural exchange and understanding.It will serve as a platform for showcasing the rich and diverse tea cultures of different countries,fostering mutual respect and appreciation among participants.I have a good understanding of the importance of tea culture and its significance in the history and traditions of our region.It has been several years since I was fascinated by the art of tea making and brewing.Moreover,my excellent communication skills and ability to work well with others will make me a valuable addition to the volunteer team.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体8 推荐信
推荐信主要是向组织或机构推荐某人,或向朋友推荐某物,希望对方能接受推荐。推荐信的内容要肯定、乐观,并对被推荐人、事、物给予正面评价。同时,语言要简洁明确、理由充足,具有合理性和说服力且内容要真实可信。
Ⅰ.开头句——开篇表意
1.Learning that you are coming to Beijing for vacation,I’m writing this letter to offer my recommendation.
得知你即将来北京度假,我写这封信给出我的推荐。
2.I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese.I’d like to recommend a website to you,one for non-Chinese speakers learning Chinese,especially for beginners.
得知你在学中文,我非常高兴。我想向你推荐一个供母语是非中文的人学习中文的网站,尤其适合初学者。
Ⅱ.篇中句——推荐理由
3.The website possesses a number of advantages.Firstly,it provides you with a variety of online courses.
这个网站有很多好处。首先,它为你提供各种在线课程。
4.I am convinced that the program will help you gain a better understanding of Chinese culture.
我相信这个节目会帮助你更好地了解中国文化。
5.Joining this club can give you a taste of traditional Chinese art forms and even have a hands-on experience.
参加这个俱乐部可以让你感受一下中国传统艺术形式,甚至可以亲身体验。
6.Therefore,when I heard the news of founding the photography community,it crossed my mind that it’s a good chance you can’t miss.
因此,当我听到建立摄影社团的消息时,我突然想到,这是个你不能错过的绝佳的机会。
7.In addition,I’ll recommend a reasonable tour route to you so that you can save a lot of time.
此外,我会给你们推荐一个合理的观光路线,这样你们就可以节省许多时间。
Ⅲ.结尾句——表达希望
8.In a word,he would be a good choice.I would be grateful if you would like to take my recommendations into consideration.
总之,他是个不错的选择。如果您愿意考虑我的推荐,我将不胜感激。
9.Don’t miss the golden opportunity to...
不要错过这次宝贵的……机会。
10.Based on the above facts,I strongly recommend the book to you.
基于以上事实, 我向你强烈推荐这本书。
Dear ,
I’m very pleased to learn that you are going to (活动事项).I’m writing to offer my suggestions.Concerning your demands,I shall recommend (推荐对象)to you.
The reasons why I recommend to you are as follows.First of all, .(推荐理由一)Besides, .(推荐理由二) Last but not least, .(推荐理由三)
Your taking my recommendations into consideration will be highly appreciated.I do hope that you can find them beneficial.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
(2021·上海卷改编)
你的外国朋友Bill想学中文,有两种课程可以选择:一个是听说,另一个是读写。请你比较两个课程,推荐一个并写出推荐的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
【考场作文】
Dear Bill,
It’s so great to learn from your last letter that you want to learn Chinese language.Don’t worry about which course to choose,listening and speaking or reading and writing.I am glad to give you a hand.
From my perspective,I’d like to recommend listening and speaking course.①For one thing,you can keep practicing Chinese only by listening and speaking and you can master it as quickly as possible only by putting what you have learnt into use.For another,good listening and speaking ability will ②be very helpful for you to adapt yourself in class so that you can understand the teachers’words and instructions.
I am confident that you will surely benefit a lot from my advice.Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
1.用倒装句升级①:For one thing, only by listening and speaking can you keep practicing Chinese and only by putting what you have learnt into use can you master it as quickly as possible.
2.用高级表达替代 ②:be of great help
(2024·河南南阳一模)
假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友James将和家人来中国旅游,想让你为他推荐一条旅游路线。请你给James回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.行程线路(包含2~3个城市);
2.景点;
3.交通方式。
注意:1.写作词数为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear James,
I am delighted to hear that you and your family are coming to China for a visit.Based on careful consideration,I want to recommend a route for your visit to China.
Since you will arrive in Beijing first,you can visit the Palace Museum and the Great Wall,both of which are famous for their long history and grand scenery.Then you can take the high-speed train to Xi’an,which is well-known for the Terracotta Warriors.You also can enjoy a lot of delicious food there.For the last leg of your trip,I suggest you fly to Guilin in Guangxi,which has impressed tourists from all over the world with its most beautiful natural scenes.
All the best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作组合练(1)
Ⅰ.应用文写作
(2024·湖南长郡中学三模)
你校将于下月举办以“团结就是力量(Unity Is Strength)”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇发言稿参赛。内容包括:
1.团结的重要性;
2.提出建议;
3.发出倡议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Unity Is Strength
【导语】本篇写作要求考生以“团结就是力量”为主题写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】
1.词汇激活:
成就:accomplishment→ achievement
因此:therefore→ thus
贡献:contribution→ devotion
完成:complete→ accomplish
2.句式拓展(简单句变复合句):
原句:United,we can overcome any difficult problems and achieve remarkable accomplishments.
拓展句:When we are united,we can overcome any difficult problems and achieve remarkable accomplishments.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Therefore,it’s important for us to be united.(运用了It+is+adj.+for sb.to do sth.结构)
[高分句型2]First,be cooperative in your work and life and make contributions to the common goal,as no project can be completed by a single person.(运用了祈使句和as引导的状语从句)
【参考范文】
Unity Is Strength
As the saying goes,“Many hands make light work.” When we are united,we can overcome any difficult problems and achieve remarkable achievements.Thus,it’s important for us to be united.Then how to do it
First,be cooperative in your work and life and make devotion to the common goal,as no project can be accomplished by a single person.Second,communicate more to have a better understanding of others and lend them a hand when necessary.Third,learn to be tolerant and live in harmony with others.
Let’s be united and fight for a better tomorrow!
Ⅱ.读后续写
(2024·山东聊城一模)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Never in my wildest imagination did I picture myself standing on the back of a running horse.I’m not a cowgirl and don’t even ride horses for pleasure.
But I was doing a television fitness show,and someone in the group had the bright idea that we should go to the rodeo (牛仔竞技比赛) grounds and ask the trick rider if they could teach me a stunt (特技表演) to do on camera.We could use this short video as the new opening to the show.I agreed the stunt would be eye-catching and prove how flexible a fit person can be.
That was how I ended up at the rodeo grounds with a camera group,watching the remarkable performances of three talented young cowgirls.Once their show was over,we approached them,detailing our ideas for the television show.
The cowgirls asked me which particular stunt I was interested in learning.I especially liked one stunt—one of the girls led a horse to continuously and slowly run around the grounds while one of the other girls ran across the grounds toward a small trampoline (蹦床).It was timed perfectly so that she jumped onto the trampoline,up into the air,and then onto the horse’s back.As she landed on its back,she stood up and stretched her arms outward as the horse continued slowly running.It looked impressive.
They talked me through the necessary moves,stressing the timing since I would need to be in the air at the correct time when the horse ran past.I alone would judge the speed of the horse and my own speed to jump onto the horse on time.
It was clearly difficult.I was a little hesitant,afraid of being unable to do that well and slowing down the filming.But I knew the most important thing for me was to concentrate on the task at hand.
注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
The first time out,I hit the horse’s back part and fell to the ground.
At 6:00 pm,we completed the stunt filming,with my knee injured.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。作者从来没有想象过自己站在奔跑的马背上,作者正在做一个电视健身节目,被建议去牛仔竞技场学特技,作者特别喜欢一个特技,它看起来令人印象深刻,这就成了作者的拍摄任务。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“第一次出去时,我撞到了马的背部,摔倒在地。”可知,第一段可描写作者失败后的心理活动、接下来的动作以及作者最后成功了。
②由第二段首句内容“下午6点,我们完成了特技拍摄,我的膝盖受伤了。”可知,第二段可描写作者完成拍摄任务后的感悟。
2.续写线索:
摔倒在地——一次次尝试——做到——完成任务——不后悔——感悟
3.词汇激活:
行为类:①增强信心:increase one’s confidence/enhance one’s confidence ②站起来:pick oneself up/get on one’s feet ③理解,弄明白:figure out/make out
情绪类: ①兴奋的:excited/exalted ②不后悔:have no regrets/be not regretful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Then another challenge came—I needed to stand on the back of the horse with my arms stretched as the horse continued its run.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]Though the doctor later reported I must stay in bed for a while because of my knee injury,I had no regrets.(运用了though引导的让步状语从句和省略that引导的宾语从句)
【参考范文】
The first time out, I hit the horse’s back part and fell to the ground.“I can do this,” repeating to myself to increase my confidence,I picked myself up and walked back to the starting point.After trying again and again I figured out the timing and could successfully land on the horse back.Then another challenge came—I needed to stand on the back of the horse with my arms stretched as the horse continued its run.Many attempts were made and finally I did it.
At 6:00 pm, we completed the stunt filming, with my knee injured.I was so excited despite the pain.Though the doctor later reported I must stay in bed for a while because of my knee injury,I had no regrets.I’m not a trick rider,but belief in myself made me one.For me,it was like doing the impossible.And when the viewers watched it,I wanted them to understand that getting into good physical shape meant they could also do the impossible.
34/34第一讲 八种常见书信类文体
文体1 告知信
1.告知信是指一方告诉另一方某一信息的信件。
2.常考的话题有告知上课计划、活动安排、比赛信息、讲座信息、招聘信息、报名事宜等。
3.时态为一般现在时或一般将来时。文章通常以第一、第二人称为主。
4.告知信中的活动介绍是写作重点,需要针对活动的时间、地点、目的、过程、影响、感受及意义等多角度展开。
Ⅰ.开头句——点明写信目的
1.I am writing to inform you of some relevant information about...
我写信告知你关于……的一些相关信息。
2.Here is the detailed information that you desire to know.
这是你想知道的详细信息。
Ⅱ.篇中句——告知具体事项
3.Inspired by the fantastic scenery,I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond,surrounded by blooming flowers.
受这美妙景色的启发,我决定创作一幅水彩画,画的是公园池塘上的小桥,周围是盛开的鲜花。
4.It was a refreshing experience to create art surrounded by nature's beauty.
在大自然的美景中创作艺术是一种令人耳目一新的体验。
5.Over the October holiday,my parents and I are planning to go to Xi'an to see the Terracotta Warriors.
十月假期,我和父母计划去西安看兵马俑。
Ⅲ.结尾句——意义/期望
6.Not only does the activity arouse students' interest in Chinese knots,but it also cultivates their love of traditional Chinese culture.
这次活动不仅激发了学生们对中国结的兴趣,而且培养了他们对中国传统文化的热爱。
7.I guess that's all for now! I'll write again soon and send photos! Do you have any plans for the coming holiday Hope to hear from you soon.
我想大概就这些!我很快会再次写信并发送照片!你对即将到来的假期有什么计划吗?希望很快收到你的来信。
Dear_________,
I'm writing to share__________________(写信的目的).
You can't imagine how meaningful and interesting! We were tasked to________________,I decided to__________________(具体活动).The activity not only__________________(活动的意义).Overall,________________(感想、感受).
_________________(问询对方相关信息) I would love to hear about them.Take care and write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
(2024·新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)
假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课,请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1.你完成的作品;
2.你的感想。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
【考场作文】
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was! We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most.①I was inspired by the breathtaking scenery and decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers. Being close to nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life.②Overall, it was a memorable and enjoyable art session. It allowed me to connect with both my surroundings and my artistic expression.
How have your classes been lately I would love to hear about them.Take care and write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
1.用分词短语作状语升级①:___________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
2.用定语从句升级②:_________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
(2024·山东济南一模)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Frank发来邮件,询问你校 “阳光大课间” 活动的开展情况。请写封回信,内容包括:
1.活动内容;
2.你的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Frank,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体2 建议信
建议信是生活中常用的一种应用文文体,一般结合某一问题进行反馈再提出看法、建议或忠告。
Ⅰ.开头句——开篇表意
1.I know from your letter that you have trouble in learning English.I am writing to offer you some advice.
从你的来信中得知你在学习英语方面遇到了困难。我写信给你提供一些建议。
2.I'm more than pleased to have received your e-mail.Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。
Ⅱ.篇中句——具体建议
3.What's more,you may as well join in a summer camp,which not only broadens your horizons but also helps you develop the spirit of teamwork.
另外,你不妨参加一个夏令营,这不仅开拓你的视野而且有助于你培养团队精神。
4.By the way,you may take Bus No.322,which will take you directly to the club.
顺便说一下,你可以乘坐322路公交车,它会直接把你带到那个俱乐部。
5.As to how to get along well with your classmates,you should keep in mind that kindness really matters.
至于如何与同学相处好,你应该记住:友善很重要。
Ⅲ.结尾句——表达希望
6.I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:一个决心要获胜的人从来不会说“不可能”。
7.I hope that my suggestions are helpful to you anyway.I would be more than happy to see your improvement.
无论如何,我希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到你的进步。
Dear_________,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to__________________(引出建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestions.Above all,it is important to__________________(建议一).In that way,_________________(采取建议一的好处).You can also__________________(建议二,根据要求用不同的句式提出建议).This would allow you to have the opportunity to__________________(建议二所带来的好的结果).In addition,____________________(其他的建议).I'm sure__________________(预测可能的结果,给对方以信心和决心).
I hope you will find my suggestions useful and I'm looking forward to__________________(表达愿望).
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2024·北京卷改编)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友 Jim 准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.建议投稿内容;
2.就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【考场作文】
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear that you're planning to ①write an article to the Asia Today column for your school newspaper.
Regarding your focus on China's 75th anniversary,I recommend highlighting China's remarkable economic growth.Over the past decades,China has witnessed unprecedented development.Secondly,②I suggest discussing China's technological advancements.China takes the lead in areas like 5G technology,artificial intelligence,and renewable energy.Lastly,you might as well mention China's cultural prosperity.③With a rich history and diverse cultures, China continues to promote cultural exchanges and cooperation with other countries, and foster mutual understanding and friendship.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful.If you need more information,feel free to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
1.用高级词汇替换①:______________________________________________
2.改变②的句式,避免表达句式单一:_________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
3.用分词作状语升级 ③:_____________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
(2024·山东枣庄二模)
假定你是李华,你校英文报《新校园》(New Campus)计划增加新栏目,向学生征集建议。请你用英语给编辑写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.建议增加的栏目;
2.说明理由。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Editor,
I'm Li Hua from Senior 3.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体3 邀请信
邀请信是邀请亲朋好友或重要人士等参加某项活动时所发的邀请性书信。特点是简短,热情,给人以真诚、亲切的感觉。邀请信写作需要运用与身份相符的语气和得体的语言措辞,拓展具体信息要清晰明确。
Ⅰ.开头句——发出邀请
1.A Chinese Classics Reciting Contest will be held in my school.Knowing that you are really into Chinese culture,I'm writing to invite you to participate in it.
我校将要举办“中华经典文学诵读比赛”。知道你对中国文化很感兴趣,我写信邀请你参加。
2.I'm writing to share with you the news about the charity party to be held by our Students' Union next Wednesday.On behalf of the Union,I sincerely invite you to come.
我写信是想和你分享下周三我们学生会举行慈善聚会的消息。我代表学生会诚挚地邀请你参加。
Ⅱ.篇中句——活动目的、时间、安排及活动形式
3.Our music festival will cover a wide range of activities,including short musical plays,musical instrument performances,as well as a singing contest.
我们的音乐节上会有各种各样的活动,包括音乐短剧、乐器演奏以及一场歌唱比赛。
4.The exhibition will take place in our school art gallery on April 26th,aimed at encouraging students to respect knowledge and advocate science.
展览将于4月26日在我们学校美术馆举行,目的是鼓励学生尊重知识,崇尚科学。
5.It will begin at ...(时间) and last about 2 hours,during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
它将在……开始,持续约2小时,在此期间15名准备充分的参赛者将发表演讲。
Ⅲ.结尾句——期待接受邀请,早日回复
6.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
如果你能接受我的邀请,我将不胜感激。
7.I sincerely hope you can come and have a good time.Looking forward to your reply.
我真诚地希望你能来度过一段愉快的时光。期待你的答复。
Dear_________,
Knowing that you're interested in/fond of/keen on__________(感兴趣或喜欢的事物),I'm writing/I'd like to invite you to join in__________(活动).
As scheduled,it will be held__________(具体地点、时间),when there will be_________.Furthermore/In addition,________(进一步的安排),after which we will__________________(另一个安排).I'm sure/convinced you can not only____________________ (活动益处之一)but also__________________(活动益处之二) through the activity.(介绍活动内容和活动益处)
I'd appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.Hopefully,you'll accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.(表达希望对方接受邀请的愿望,并表示感谢)
Yours,
Li Hua
(2022·新课标Ⅰ卷)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
【考场作文】
Dear Caroline,
I am Li Hua,head of “Talk and Talk”,an English program from the Campus Broadcasting Station and I am writing to invite you as an interviewee about how to improve oral English.
①The program aims to promote students' English level and has enjoyed popularity on campus, owing to its casual and easy style. Every interviewed teacher will talk freely to share interesting English stories with us.I anticipate we can gain a lot through the coming interview.
②If it is convenient for you next Monday, I expect to have a wonderful talk with you from 5 pm to 6 pm. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
1.分词作状语升级①:________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
2.用状语从句的省略简化 ②:__________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
(2024·湖北4月调研)
假定你是学生会主席李华,你校高三师生下周将举行篮球“师生友谊赛”,请你给外教Mr.Smith写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.活动方案;
2.邀请加入。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体4 咨询信
咨询信是针对某项活动或相关情况,希望了解详细信息的信件,表明写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣。咨询信,问句较多,写时要避免句式单调,语气要委婉礼貌,要充分表达获取信息的急切心情以及相应的感激之情。咨询的问题应简洁、清晰、明确,避免歧义和误解,确保所提问题与题目要求的主题相关。
Ⅰ.开头句——点明写信目的
1.I'm writing to inquire if it is possible for you to provide me with some information,concerning...
我写信来咨询一下您能否可以提供一些关于……的信息。
2.I'm writing to ask you some relevant information about the basketball match to be held next week.
我写信是想问您一些有关下周将要举行的篮球赛的相关信息。
Ⅱ.篇中句——咨询具体信息
3.To begin with/To start with/In the first place,I would appreciate it if you could tell me the requirements for the applicants.
首先,如果你能告诉我申请人的要求,我会很感激。
4.Regarding the competition,I would like to know details,such as the exact dates and the schedule to help me plan my trip accordingly.In addition,I would like to know more about the competition's format and procedures.
关于比赛,我希望你能告诉我具体的日期和日程安排,以帮助我相应地计划我的行程。此外,我想了解更多关于比赛的形式和程序的信息。
5.I'd be grateful if you could let me know whether there are any special requirements for...
如果你能告诉我对……是否有特殊要求,我将不胜感激。
6.Another point I am uncertain/unclear about is...
我还不确定的另外一点是……
Ⅲ.结尾句——表示感谢,期盼回复
7.Thank you for your kindness,and your timely attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢您的善意,对于您对这封信的及时关注我将不胜感激。
8.I'm looking forward to/eager for a favourable reply at your earliest convenience.
我盼望您方便时尽早回复好消息。
Dear_________,
I am_________(自我介绍).Having read_________(信息来源),I feel interested and want to join in_________(活动).I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with some specific information regarding_________(要询问的内容).
To begin with,could you be so kind as to tell me_________(第一个问题) Besides,I would also like to know_________(第二个问题).In addition,I wonder_________(第三个问题).What's more,what deserves my special attention is_________(最重要的一个问题).
Thank you for your kindness,and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2021·全国甲卷改编)
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表示感谢。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【考场作文】
Dear Chris,
How's everything going Our school is going to hold a class meeting with the theme of introducing traditional Chinese culture.It will be posted on an English website.Now I am writing to obtain your detailed advice on it.
As is known to all,China has abundant and unique traditional cultures with a rich history,such as tea culture,Peking Opera,Chinese calligraphy,the Chinese knot and so on.What's more, there are many historical places of interest, like the Great Wall, the West Lake, etc. Would you be so kind as to tell me which attracts you most In this way, our meeting can be a great success.
Please reply to me at your earliest convenience.I will take your advice into consideration and really appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
找出画线部分内容的不足并改写:_______________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
(2024·广东七校联合体联考)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tim邀请你参加他们学校暑假组织的“科技夏令营”。你想参加,现就此事写一封信向他咨询夏令营的相关事宜,要点包括:
1.具体日程安排;
2.住宿和费用等。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tim,
Yours,
Li Hua
文体5 求助信
求助信是写信人碰到难题向对方求助的信件。求助信要用正式的语言提出礼貌的请求,清楚地说明你写这封电子邮件/信件的原因,清楚地提出必要的问题,充分体现写信人诚挚的态度。
Ⅰ.开头句——开篇表意
1.Hearing you have much experience in ...,I am writing to ask you for help.
听说您在……方面很有经验,在此我写信向您求助。
2.I'm writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to lend me a hand for my English study.
我写信希望您能帮助我学习英语。
Ⅱ.篇中句——求助原因
3.Would you like to do me a favour to have my draft polished
你愿意帮我润色草稿吗?
4.I have finished the first draft and I am wondering if you can help me polish the language and correct the mistakes in my pronunciation as well.
我已经完成了初稿,我想知道您是否能帮助我润色一下语言,也帮助我改正一下发音的错误。
5.I find it challenging to be qualified for the job.I also have trouble in expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary.
我觉得胜任这份工作很有挑战性。由于词汇量有限,我也很难准确地表达我的想法。
6.I am encountering three problems which bother me a lot.To begin with...What's worse,...What troubles me most is...All of these upset me because...
我遇到了三个很困扰我的问题。首先……更糟糕的是……最让我苦恼的是……所有这些都让我很不高兴,因为……
7.Faced with/Confronted with/In the face of such tricky and challenging problems,I am eager for your timely assistance and proposals.
面对如此棘手和富有挑战的问题,我急需你及时的帮助和提议。
Ⅲ.结尾句——期待答复,表示感谢
8.I would be grateful if you could lend me a helping hand.
如果您能帮我一把,我将不胜感激。
9.Your professional advice would be of great help to me.Looking forward to your early reply.
您的专业建议对我会有很大的帮助。期待您的早日答复。
Dear_________,
I am_________.I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favour.(说明自己身份,点明写信目的)
I have much difficulty/trouble in__________(陈述自己面临的困难).Besides,I'm very upset that__________(提出令自己苦恼的问题).What's more,I don't know__________________(进一步说明自己的困境).I'm wondering if you could be so kind as to__________so that__________(请求对方帮助).Meanwhile,I beg you to__________________so that__________________(再次请求对方的帮助).
I'd appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.I'm looking forward to your early reply.(表达对对方帮助的感激,并希望对方早日回复)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(全国Ⅰ卷改编)
假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms.Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
【考场作文】
Dear Ms.Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua from your English class last year.I'm writing to ask whether you could ①help me.
To apply for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the coming summer vacation,I've already completed my application letter and resume.However,I'm not sure of the words and format ②I have used in them.I'm wondering if you could be so kind as to give me some professional advice.The relevant materials are attached to my mail.③I would thank you if you could help me figure out the mistakes in terms of words and format. If convenient,could you help me polish them
Thanks for your consideration and help.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
1.用短语升级①:____________________________________________________
2.用分词作定语升级②:______________________________________________
3.用it作形式宾语升级③:____________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
(2024·厦门高三期中检测改编)
假定你是李华,当前你在英语学习方面遇到了一些问题。于是你向你校的外籍老师Smith写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:
1.说明写信原因;
2.描述遇到的具体问题,至少两个;
3.表达感谢或期待。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr.Smith,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体6 感谢信
感谢信是向提供关心、帮助或支持过自己的集体或个人表达感谢的信件。信件需要写明感谢他人的理由,内容要感情真挚、措辞得体。感谢信用语要求精练简洁,详略得当,层次分明。遣词造句要把握好度,不可过分雕饰。
Ⅰ.开头句——表达感谢之情,并说明原因
1.On behalf of the students' union of our school,I am writing to convey our heartfelt thanks for your wonderful speech on AI.
代表我们学校学生会,我写信对您有关人工智能的精彩报告表达我们衷心的感谢。
2.I would like to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance.
我想对你给予我们的及时帮助和支持表示衷心的感谢。
3.I am writing to express/show/convey my sincere thanks to you for your help.
我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。
Ⅱ.篇中句——具体帮助
4.Additionally,the wonderful songs and movies which you recommended to me really made me fall in love with English.
另外,您所推荐的精彩歌曲和影片确实让我爱上了英语。
5.Without your help/But for your help (If it were not for your help),I would not have made so much progress in my English.
要是没有你的帮助,我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
6.I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing.
我仍然记得为了帮助我提高我的英语口语和写作你所付出的帮助。
7.There's no denying that it is difficult for me to...without your help.
不可否认,对我来说,没有你的帮助,……是非常困难的。
Ⅲ.结尾句——再次致谢
8.Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I sincerely invite you to my hometown.
再次感谢您的盛情款待,并诚挚邀请您到我的家乡来。
9.Words fail to express my thankfulness to you.
我无法用语言来表达我对你的谢意。
10.I deeply appreciate your help and I hope to have the opportunity to reward your kindness.
我非常感谢你的帮助,并且我希望有机会报答你的好意。
Dear_________(感谢对象),
I would like to express/convey/extend in this letter my heartfelt/sincere/earnest thanks/gratitude to you for_________(感谢的原因).
If it had not been for your assistance in_________(对方的具体帮助),I fear that I would have been_________(没有对方的帮助可能产生的后果).Everyone agrees that it was you who_________(给出细节).
Again,I would like to express my sincere thanks to you.
Yours sincerely,
(写信人)
(浙江卷)
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3.临别祝愿。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【考场作文】
Dear Alex,
Hearing that you're leaving China soon,I'm writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your generous help with my English.
①Under your professional guidance, I have made remarkable progress in English, especially speaking. Thanks to your help,my English improved so rapidly that last month I even won in a speech contest.Whenever I encountered difficulties,②you always cheered me up, which restored my confidence and stimulated my enthusiasm for English.
No words are strong enough to ③tell how grateful I am.Wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
1.用强调句型升级①:________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
2.进行时态增加感激之情②:_____________________________________________________________________
3.用高级表达替代③:__________
(2024·山东日照一模改编)
假定你是李华,最近在校英文报开设的“英文诗歌创作”专栏中获得写作一等奖。外教Andy提供了很大的支持和帮助。请你给他写一封感谢信,内容包括:
1.表达感谢;
2.回顾所提供的帮助。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Andy,
Yours,
Li Hua
文体7 申请信
申请信是指写信人想申请某个职位或某个项目而向收信人提出请求的信件。一般常考的内容有申请成为志愿者、申请某个岗位、加入俱乐部或参加夏令营、留学项目等。申请信是非常正式的信件,所用语言也应该正式、简洁和准确,语气要客气礼貌。
Ⅰ.开头句——提出申请
1.I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain an opportunity to further my study in Computer Science in your university.
我写信是希望能获得在贵校计算机科学专业深造的机会。
2.Having heard that you are recruiting volunteers to teach in the countryside,I am writing to apply for a chance to become a volunteer.
听说你们在招募下乡支教的志愿者,我写信是想申请做一名志愿者。
Ⅱ.篇中句——个人优势
3.Not only am I qualified for the job,but I have the right personality for it.
我不仅具备做这项工作的资格,而且我的性格也符合招募条件。
4.What is important is that my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others.
重要的是,我良好的交际能力使我能与他人维持良好的关系。
5.To start with,I have a good command of English,enabling me to communicate well with others.
首先,我精通英语,使我可以与他人顺利沟通。
6.Having been learning English for many years,I have a good command of English,especially spoken English.
已经学了很多年的英语,我精通英语,尤其是英语口语。
Ⅲ.结尾句——表达感谢、希望或决心
7.I would appreciate it if you could give me an opportunity and I am sure I can perfectly live up to your expectations.Looking forward to your early reply.
如果您能给我一个机会,我将感激不尽,并且肯定完全不辜负您的期望。期待您的早日答复。
8.Should you favour me with the position,I am convinced that I would live up to your expectations.
如果你选择我任职,我坚信我一定不会辜负你的期望。
Dear_________,
I'm__________from__________(介绍自己).I'm writing to apply___________________(职务)__________________(说明信息及来源).I believe the job would be a great opportunity for me to contribute and learn.
I find this position quite appealing to me.I can be equal to it by__________(具体参与活动).Of course,I possess qualifications accordingly.I think__________(优势一).Additionally,I__________________(优势二).And I think it__________________(应聘目的).
I do hope my__________________(资质与能力) will win me a favourable consideration from your side.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2023·天津6月卷改编)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画,拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:
1.申请参加本次活动;
2.阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;
3.结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因。
参考词汇:中国工坊 Chinese Workshop;中华美食 Chinese cuisine;手工艺 handicraft;书法calligraphy
注意:1.词数不少于80个;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【考场作文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin,an exchange student from China.①I know that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school and I am writing to apply for taking part in the activity.
The theme of the activity involves Chinese food,traditional Chinese handicrafts,Chinese calligraphy and painting.So I think this activity is very significant,which is conducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and ②encouraging cultural exchanges between China and Britain.As a Chinese,I ③like making Chinese cuisine,for example dumplings.④I not only can teach participants how to make dumplings, but also let them fall in love with Chinese cuisine.
I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the event.Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【打造亮点】
1.用分词作状语升级①:______________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
2.用高级表达替代②:________________________________________________
3.用高级短语替代③:________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
4.用倒装句升级④:____________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
(2024·安徽合肥一模)
假定你是李华,你从网上得知联合国教科文组织(UNESCO)将在你的家乡举办“一带一路”(the Belt and Road Initiative)茶文化交流活动。请你写一封英文信申请做志愿者。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.对活动的认识;
3.个人优势。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
文体8 推荐信
推荐信主要是向组织或机构推荐某人,或向朋友推荐某物,希望对方能接受推荐。推荐信的内容要肯定、乐观,并对被推荐人、事、物给予正面评价。同时,语言要简洁明确、理由充足,具有合理性和说服力且内容要真实可信。
Ⅰ.开头句——开篇表意
1.Learning that you are coming to Beijing for vacation,I'm writing this letter to offer my recommendation.
得知你即将来北京度假,我写这封信给出我的推荐。
2.I'm more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese.I'd like to recommend a website to you,one for non-Chinese speakers learning Chinese,especially for beginners.
得知你在学中文,我非常高兴。我想向你推荐一个供母语是非中文的人学习中文的网站,尤其适合初学者。
Ⅱ.篇中句——推荐理由
3.The website possesses a number of advantages.Firstly,it provides you with a variety of online courses.
这个网站有很多好处。首先,它为你提供各种在线课程。
4.I am convinced that the program will help you gain a better understanding of Chinese culture.
我相信这个节目会帮助你更好地了解中国文化。
5.Joining this club can give you a taste of traditional Chinese art forms and even have a hands-on experience.
参加这个俱乐部可以让你感受一下中国传统艺术形式,甚至可以亲身体验。
6.Therefore,when I heard the news of founding the photography community,it crossed my mind that it's a good chance you can't miss.
因此,当我听到建立摄影社团的消息时,我突然想到,这是个你不能错过的绝佳的机会。
7.In addition,I'll recommend a reasonable tour route to you so that you can save a lot of time.
此外,我会给你们推荐一个合理的观光路线,这样你们就可以节省许多时间。
Ⅲ.结尾句——表达希望
8.In a word,he would be a good choice.I would be grateful if you would like to take my recommendations into consideration.
总之,他是个不错的选择。如果您愿意考虑我的推荐,我将不胜感激。
9.Don't miss the golden opportunity to...
不要错过这次宝贵的……机会。
10.Based on the above facts,I strongly recommend the book to you.
基于以上事实,我向你强烈推荐这本书。
Dear__________,
I'm very pleased to learn that you are going to_________(活动事项).I'm writing to offer my suggestions.Concerning your demands,I shall recommend__________(推荐对象)to you.
The reasons why I recommend__________to you are as follows.First of all,________.(推荐理由一)Besides,________.(推荐理由二) Last but not least,________.(推荐理由三)
Your taking my recommendations into consideration will be highly appreciated.I do hope that you can find them beneficial.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
________
(2021·上海卷改编)
你的外国朋友Bill想学中文,有两种课程可以选择:一个是听说,另一个是读写。请你比较两个课程,推荐一个并写出推荐的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
【考场作文】
Dear Bill,
It's so great to learn from your last letter that you want to learn Chinese language.Don't worry about which course to choose,listening and speaking or reading and writing.I am glad to give you a hand.
From my perspective,I'd like to recommend listening and speaking course.①For one thing, you can keep practicing Chinese only by listening and speaking and you can master it as quickly as possible only by putting what you have learnt into use. For another,good listening and speaking ability will ②be very helpful for you to adapt yourself in class so that you can understand the teachers' words and instructions.
I am confident that you will surely benefit a lot from my advice.Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【打造亮点】
1.用倒装句升级①:___________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
2.用高级表达替代 ②:_______________________________________________
(2024·河南南阳一模)
假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友James将和家人来中国旅游,想让你为他推荐一条旅游路线。请你给James回一封邮件,内容包括:
1.行程线路(包含2~3个城市);
2.景点;
3.交通方式。
注意:1.写作词数为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
Yours,
Li Hua
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