【单元考点培优】Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious！专题14 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优人教新目标

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2025-2026学年九年级全册英语单元复习考点培优人教新目标Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious！
专题14 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．你的美国朋友Ben想了解中国的传统节日。请选择一个你最喜欢的节日并写信告诉他。开头部分已写好，请根据问题完成剩余部分，写一篇70—80词的短文。
（1）When is the festival
（2）What do you usually do at the festival
（3）What special food do you eat
（4）Why do you like it best
Dear Ben,
I am happy to know you are interested in traditional festivals in China.
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Yours,
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2．最近，某英文报刊正在举办征文活动，主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语文章，为本次活动投稿。内容应包括以下提示：
1．简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日： 名称及时间等；
2．介绍该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式： 食物及活动等；
3．说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
My Favorite Chinese Festival _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日。请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。
The Spring Festival☆Meaning：The biggest day of a year; a new start. ☆Time：January or February ☆Activities：get together; visit relatives.
要求：
1. 词数90左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇：make New Year’s resolutions 制定新年计划；put up couplets 贴对联；the Spring Festival Gala 春节联欢晚会
Ladies and gentlemen,
There is a famous saying in China, “A year’s plan starts with spring.” It tells us that the most important time of a year is spring.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
4．假如你叫梁浩，你远在美国的笔友Paul想了解中国春节的情况。请你根据下表信息给他回一封电子邮件。
Time January or February
Activities 1. On the eve of the Spring Festival, family members get together and have a big dinner; 2. After dinner, watch Spring Festival Gala (春晚); 3. Set off fireworks; 4. Get lucky money;
Meaning The most important day in China
要求：1) 包含全部要点，可适当发挥；
2) 不能出现真实的校名及姓名；
3) 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
4) 词数不少于 80。
Dear Paul,
Thank you very much for your e–mail.
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Yours,
Liang Hao
5．假设Michael是你的美国朋友，他想了解中国的传统节日——中秋节。请根据内容要点给他写一封邮件。
内容：
1.重要性；
2.传统活动及食物；
3.意义。
要求：
1.内容完整，字迹工整，表达通顺；
2.词数不少于80，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Michael,
I heard that you want to know about the Mid-Autumn Festival.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下提示给他回信。80词左右。
提示：
1. 中国的传统节日之一，已有2000多年的历史；
2. 为了纪念著名诗人屈原 (honor the great poet)；
3. 中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗；
4. 家人团聚吃粽子和其他美食；
5. 有三天假期，可以外出旅游。
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7．在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国春节，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。
the Spring Festival·Time: in January or February ·Activities: welcome the new year, visit relatives, get together… ·Meaning: the biggest day of the year, a new start…
注意：
1. 发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥；
2. 词数80~100（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
8．为弘扬中国传统文化，请围绕端午节这一节日写一篇小短文，内容包括：
1.中国的传统节日之一，已有2000多年的历史。2.为了纪念著名诗人屈原。3.活动有吃粽子，赛龙舟，和家人团聚吃饭。4.有三天小长假，可以出去旅游。
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9．你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步，比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握。良好习惯的养成。请选取其中一个方面，结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的，以及毕业前你下一步的打算。请以My progress为题写一篇短文。
要求：（1）观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅；
（2）文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）卷面整洁，书写工整，词数80词左右。
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10．假设你是李华，今天正逢端午节，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下内容提示，给他写一封回信。
1.中国的传统节日之一，已有2000多年的历史（the Dragon Boat Festival; one of the Chinese traditional festivals; two thousand years of history）；
2.为了纪念著名诗人屈原（honor the great poet Qu Yuan）；
3.中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗（Dragon Boat races）；
4.家人团聚听懂粽子和其他美食（eat Zongzi and other delicious food）；
5.有三天假期，可以外出旅游（a 3-day holiday）。
要求：1.80词左右，书信格式；
2.内容合理，要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。
注意：不得出现学校，姓名等个人信息（除所给身份外）。
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11．在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日，请你从所给的卡片中任选一张，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。
the Spring FestivalTime: in January or February Activities: welcome the new year, visit relatives, get together, ... Meaning: the biggest day of the year, a new start, ...
the Mid-Autumn FestivalTime: in September or October Activities: express wishes and hopes, have mooncakes, enjoy the moon, ... Meaning: the symbol of being together, miss family members far away, ...
注意：
1.发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数80-100；
4.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
12．假如你是李华，本周五下午你校将举办Teenagers' Day的活动。请你根据以下提示和要求，写一篇发言稿，向你的同学们告知此次活动的安排。
提示:(1)The date of this activity.
(2) The specific activities.
(3) Your expectation.
要求:(1)发言稿中须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
(2)发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone!
I'm very happy to tell you that
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Thanks for your attention.
13．5月12日母亲节那天，你们班同学用不同的方式为妈妈庆祝了节日。请根据以下信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你认为哪一种方式最好，并简单说明理由。
●有人花很多零花钱为妈妈买礼物
●有人自制礼物或贺卡给妈妈
●有人帮妈妈做家务
●你的看法和理由
注意：1.不少于80词；
2.文中不要提及自己的姓名、学校等相关信息；
3.无需写标题，内容可适当发挥。
参考词汇：pocket money零花钱
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14．假如你是李言，学校来了几名外国友人参加中外文化交流活动，校长请你写一封邀请函，邀请他们参加下个月在当地举行的端午节活动。
内容包含以下几点：
2.Activities during the festival;
3. Your invitation to them.
要求：1.词数不少于80；
2.词句通顺，意思连贯。
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15．向你的笔友Mike介绍中国的春节，并邀请他来过春节。内容如下：
1. 春节是中国最重要的节日， 它有时在一月份到来,有时在二月份到来。
2. 今年的春节将在１０天以后到来，我们全家将会团聚。
3. 我们现在正忙着为它做准备。我每天打扫房子，和妈妈一起购物 ，帮妈妈做一些传统食　　物，例如：元宵（riceballs）,年糕(ricecakes)，豆腐（toufu)。
4. 在除夕夜，我祖父母，我叔叔一家将来我们家吃饭。我们将熬夜迎接新年。我和堂兄弟们将燃放鞭炮(play firecrackers)，看电视。
5 .我希望你能来和我们一起过春节，体会中国的传统文化。
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16．写作
你校英语俱乐部即将举办一次主题为“My favorite Chinese festival”的征文活动。假如你最喜欢的节日是中秋，请你写一篇80词左右英语短文参加此次活动。
提示词及要点：
1.one of the most important…；Chinese traditional festival
2.Get together; have a big deal
3.admire the full moon; delicious mooncakes; enjoy the bright full moon
4.Carry people’s wishes to the families they love.
要求:
1.内容完整，书写清楚，字迹工整，表达顺畅。
2.尽可能用到提示词及要点，可适当发挥。
My favorite Chinese festival
Lunar August15th of a year is the Mid-Autumn Festival._________________________________
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17．书面表达
76．玛丽(Mary)对中国的传统文化很感兴趣，你能给她介绍一下你最喜欢的中国传统节日吗？
提示：1.内容要点：你最喜欢的节日的名称、时间、有什么传统活动及你喜欢的理由等；
2．语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
3．词数不少于80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary，
How are you I'm really glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals
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Yours，
Chen Zhong
18．在学校“探寻中华传统文化”英语综合实践活动中，你班对“元宵节”“端午节”和“中秋节”三个中国传统节日开展了小课题研究，经过探究与实践，你们收集了一些信息与资料(见下表)
假设你是李华，请选择其中一个节日，用英语写一篇短文，在英语拓展课上代表小组就你们的研究成果进行交流。
Project: Exploring the Chinese Culture and Customs
Research Subject the Lantern Festival the Dragon Boat Festival the Mid- Autumn Festival
Information (What we’ve learned) History ·about 2,000 years ·about 2,000 years centuries
Time · the 15th day of the first lunar month the 5th day of the fifth lunar month May the fifth in Chinese lunar calendar
Celebrations · riddle (谜语) games ·… · boat races ·… · Admire the moon
Food Tangyuan/yuanxiao ·zongzi mooncakes
… … …
注意：
(1)短文必须包含表中你所选节日的所有信息，并适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数：80~100，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates,
I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Ben,
I am happy to know you are interested in traditional festivals in China. I will tell you how I spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with you.
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the 8th month of the Chinese lunar calendar. On this day, I spend time with my family at home. As always, my mom and I make mooncakes together. I like to make mooncakes of different shapes, such as round and fish-shaped. At night, after my dad sets the table in the yard, my whole family enjoy the mooncakes and admire the full moon. My grandma usually tells us the story of Chang’e. It is really a wonderful day.
I like the Mid-Autumn Festival best because it is a time for family members to get together and everyone has great fun on this day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己最喜欢的节日，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达很高兴分享自己是如何度过中秋节的；
第二步，具体介绍自己是如何度过中秋节的，包括时间、活动、食物及感受；
第三步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①as always一如既往
②such as例如
③get together团聚
[高分句型]
①At night, after my dad sets the table in the yard, my whole family enjoy the mooncakes and admire the full moon. (after引导时间状语从句)
②I like the Mid-Autumn Festival best because it is a time for family members to get together and everyone has great fun on this day. (because引导的原因状语从句)
2．例文
My Favorite Chinese Festival
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best.
It comes in January or February. It is a time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival gala and stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year.
The Spring Festival is important for Chinese. It makes us feel love and happiness. That’s why I like it.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你对这个节日的感受，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明你最喜欢哪个传统节日；
第二步，介绍该节日的时间和主要庆祝方式；
第三步，说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional传统的
②get together团聚
③stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
①As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China.（as引导的非限制性定语从句）
②That’s why I like it.（why引导的表语从句）
3．例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
There is a famous saying in China, “A year’s plan starts with spring.” It tells us that the most important time of a year is spring. The Chinese Spring Festival is celebrated in January or February. It is the biggest day of a year and it is also a new start for everything. At this time, people make up New Year’s resolutions and plans for the whole year.
When the Spring Festival comes, no matter where people work, they’ll come back home and get together with their family. Before the festival, people are usually busy cleaning up their houses and putting up couplets on the doors. On the eve of the festival, people always have a big dinner with their family, and then watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. As for children, they enjoy letting off fireworks and getting red packets. In the next few days, people visit their relatives and friends. I like the Spring Festival best, because I can visit my relatives and get many red packets.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态： 时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意避免“信息遗漏”，分别介绍春节的意义、时间和活动等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。认真阅读文章的首句，引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍春节的意义、时间和活动等；
第三步，书写结语。感谢大家的聆听。
[亮点词汇]
① make up resolutions 下决心
② clean up 打扫
③ relative 亲戚
④ get many red packets 得到很多红包
[高分句型]
① When the Spring Festival comes, no matter where people work, they’ll come back home and get together with their family. (when引导的时间状语从句）
② I like the Spring Festival best, because I can visit my relatives and get many red packets. (because引导原因状语从句）
4．例文
Dear Paul,
Thank you very much for your e-mail. Let me tell you something about our Spring Festival. It is the most important festival in China. It is always in January or February. On the eve of the Spring Festival, family members get together and then have a big dinner. After dinner, people like to watch TV. There is a great Spring Festival Gala on TV every year. We like to set off fireworks at night. They are really wonderful. During the Spring Festival, we get lucky money from our grandparents, parents, aunts and uncles.
We always have a good time in the Spring Festival. Welcome to our country.
Yours,
Liang Hao
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍春节的时间及意义；
第二步，介绍春节的相关活动；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①on the eve of…在……的前夕
②get together聚在一起
③set off fireworks放烟花
④have a good time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
There is a great Spring Festival Gala on TV every year. (there be句型)
5．例文
Dear Michael,
I heard that you want to know about the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on lunar August 15th of a year. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. On this day, people often get together to have a big dinner with their families. At night, people often enjoy admiring the moon and eat all kinds of delicious mooncakes in the open air. Mooncakes carry people’s wishes to the families they love. Some people don’t come back home until midnight.
This is the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. I hope you’ll like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】1. 题干解读：本题是写一封邮件，根据要点提示介绍中国的传统节日——中秋节。
2. 写作指导：本文时态用一般现在时，人称主要用第三人称；短文可分为三段式，首先开篇点题；然后具体介绍中秋节的重要性、传统活动和食物，以及意义；最后总结和表达希望。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法使用错误。
6．例文
Dear Jack,
How’s it going I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the Chinese traditional festivals which has over two thousand years of history. The festival is celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat zongzi and other delicious food. In the southern parts of China, people often have Dragon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. So we can have a short journey to relax ourselves. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is! I like it very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据题干要求，向英国笔友Jack介绍下中国的传统节日——端午节。
2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称为主；时态采用一般现在时为主。注意按照提示的五句话进行写作。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。
7．例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals—the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival falls in January or February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of the year. So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner. Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start.
During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year. Children can often get lucky money from the elders. Do you think it is interesting
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，以发言稿的形式，在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，代表学校介绍中国春节。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述发言稿内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；首先要致欢迎词，引出今天要讲的话题；其次是具体介绍中国的春节；第三是介绍春节期间人们的活动；最后是致谢。
8．例文：
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in our country which has about 2000 years of history.It’s celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day,people often get together with family to eat zongzi and other delicious food. People in southern parts of China usually have the Dragon Boat races. It’s very exciting. Besides,we also have 3-day holiday during the festival. So we can have a short trip to relax ourselves.
How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is and I like it a lot.
【解析】1.题干解读：为弘扬传统文化，本文要求围绕端午节这一节日写一篇小短文。内容必须包含所提示的四个要点。写作中，为表达连贯，可适当增加些连接词等。
2.写作指导：本文是以介绍和说明为主，时态上以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。写作时，应围绕提示的四点内容进行书写，行文中可适当增加些连贯词，使上下文更通顺。
9．例文
My progress
I used to be poor at English, especially in reading and writing which I consider very difficult.
The biggest problem was that after reading a passage, I couldn’t fully understand it, which makes me feel very depressed and upset. But I kept on reading difficult English articles instead of just giving up. And I also practiced English writing whenever I had a chance. Little by little, I made much progress in English and gained a lot of confidence through my constant effort. As you can imagine, nothing makes me prouder than feeling my progress in English.
I realize that as long as I bravely face my weaknesses and take effective ways to overcome them, I believe I will be successful in the future. I will fight for my dream in the following months!
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。要求从生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成等三个方面，来选择其中的一个，以“My progress”为题写一篇作文，谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的，以及毕业前你下一步的打算。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来书写；时态采用一般过去时为主；首先要选择写什么内容，引出话题；然后根据你的话题来详细的陈述是如何取得进步的；最后要介绍毕业前的打算。书写要工整，语言要简练，句子前后要连贯、通顺、符合逻辑。
10．例文：
Dear Jack,
How’s it going I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the Chinese traditional festivals which has about two thousand years of history. The festival is celebrated to honor the great poet Qu Yuan.
On that day, people often get together with their family to eat Zongzi and other delicious food. In southern parts of China, people often have the Dagon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. So we can have a short journey to relax ourselves. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is and I like it very much.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】1. 题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。主要以“介绍中国传统节日——端午节”为主题展开描写。本文要写的内容题目中已经给出提示，主要是要向朋友介绍端午节要举行的一些活动，人们是如何庆祝的。写作时要运用正确的英语把想要表达内容表达出来，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2.写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称展开详细介绍。文章可分三段描写。第一段总体指出端午节是传统节日，是为了纪念诗人屈原；第二段介绍在那一天人们要做的一些事情，是如何来庆祝这个节日的；第三段送上祝福。写作时要注意文章描写要具体，思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，意思通俗易懂。
11．例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour.Now allow me to introduce one of the traditional Chinese festivals—the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival falls in January or February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of the year. So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner. Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start.
During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year. Children can often gethongbaofrom their elders. Do you think it is interesting
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日，要求从所给的卡片中任选一张，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作。时态采用一般现在时。文章要紧扣题目要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
12．Hello, everyone!
I'm very happy to tell you that we will hold some activities for Teenagers' Day this Friday afternoon.The first activity will begin in the meeting room at 13: 00 and end at 14: 30.A speech competition named “Follow Our Dreams” will be held there.I hope all of you can join in this speech competition because it is a challenge for you.After that, the basketball match will take place on the playground from 14: 40 to 16: 00.It's good for you to develop the team spirit .Finally, hope you can get a good result together.
Thanks for your attention.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作。文中按照所给的提示内容，一一展开描述。先介绍活动的时间，再分别介绍每个活动的开始时间，层次分明。
2.例文点评：例文采用第三人称，时态采用的是一般现在时和一般将来时。在描述活动的细节时用的是一般将来时。语言符合英语习惯，准确运用时态。并保持主谓一致，逻辑性强，句子通顺。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be happy to do sth；join in；take place。
句子：I'm very happy to tell you that we will hold some activities for Teenagers' Day this Friday afternoon句中that引导的是宾语从句。It's good for you to develop the team spirit句中采用的是it’s+形容词+for sb to do sth 对某人来说做某事是……。
13．例文
May 12th was Mother’s Day. My classmates celebrated this special day in different ways. Some of them spent lots of pocket money buying expensive gifts for their mothers, or made cards and gifts by themselves. Some students did as much housework as possible to help their mothers.
All the ways above are OK. Whatever we do, thanksgiving is the most important. Our mothers have given us so much love and care, so we should give them more in return. What’s more, working hard and being good kids are also good ways to make our mothers happy. Let’s take action to express our love to our mothers faithfully.
【解析】1.题干解读：这是一篇表格作文，内容谈谈为妈妈庆祝节日的不同方式以及自己的看法．时态主要为一般过去时，人称主要为第三人称。
2.写作思路：这是一篇所给材料比较详细的表格类作文，我们要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，可有适当发挥．在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性，做到上下文联系紧密、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in different ways 以不同的方式；spend 金钱+doing 花费金钱做某事；as …as possible 尽可能的；in return 作为回报；What's more 更有甚者；take action to do sth 采取行动做某事。句型：Some of them spent lots of pocket money buying expensive gifts for their mothers, or made cards and gifts by themselves.；Whatever we do, thanksgiving is the most important. ；working hard and being good kids are also good ways to make our mothers happy.
14．Dear friends,
Welcome to our school. Next month will be one of the most traditional Chinese festivals—the Dragon Boat Festival. It falls on the lunar calendar of May 5th. This festival is to show our respect to a famous poet, Qu Yuan. We will have dragon boat races and dragon dance that day. We will also eat a kind of traditional food called zongzi.
I hope all of you can come and join us that day. We will be very glad to meet you there. We are looking forward to your coming.Yours,
Li Yan
【解析】本题是一篇书信作文，也是话题作文。话题是谈论端午节活动。注意书信格式要正确。本文给出了写作提示要点。根据提示要点列出本文的写作提纲。本文人称主要第一和三人称，时态主要是一般现在时和一般将来时。短文必须包含提示中的所有内容，并做适当发挥。字数应在80-100词。应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：
亲爱的朋友们，
欢迎来到我们学校。下个月将是中国最传统的节日之一——端午节。它在农历5月5日。这个节日是为了表达我们对著名诗人屈原的敬意。那天我们将举行龙舟比赛和龙舞。我们还将吃一种叫粽子的传统食物。
我希望你们那天能来和我们在一起。我们很高兴在那儿见到你们。我们期待着您的到来。
你的，
李艳
【点睛】书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，应用文注意格式正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用，本文运用了重要句型和短语有We will also eat a kind of traditional food called zongzi./ We are looking forward to your coming.等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。 （5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
15．Dear Mike,
I would like to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China. It is our most important festival. Sometimes it comes in January, and sometimes in February. The Spring Festival this year will come in ten days. Our family will get together. Now we are busy preparing for it. I clean the house and go shopping with my mum every day. Also I will help my mom do some traditional food, such as riceballs, ricecakes, tofu and so on. On New Year’s Eve, my grandparents and my uncle’s family will have dinner with us. We will stay up late to welcome the New Year. My cousins and I will set off fireworks and watch TV.
I hope you can come to China and spend the Spring Festival with us and experience the traditional Chinese culture.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们给Mike写一封信，向他介绍中国的春节，并邀请他来中国一起过春节。题目中有非常清楚的提示，我们可以依据这些提示的内容，用正确的英语表达，可以根据需要适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实。写作前，应仔细阅读题目中的提示，理清文章的主要结构和主体，确定文章应使用的时态、人称等。通过分析可知，这篇作文应使用一般现在时态和一般将来时，第一人称来叙述，注意正确使用谓语动词的形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不要逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子，选择恰当的词汇、短语和句型。句式结构以简单句为主，使叙述清晰、明了。穿插使用并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使上下文意连贯，表达流畅。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求向好友Mike介绍了中国的春节。春节是学生们非常熟悉的节日，因此文章中可能用到的词汇和句型都是学生们比较熟悉的，在写作时，学生们会感觉比较得心应手。这篇短文对这个节日的介绍总体非常的完整，内容也很充实，包含了题目中要求的所有要点。短文中使用了一般现在时和一般将来时，谓语动词形式准确，句式结构简单，叙述清楚，符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范，语言得体，正确使用了名词单复数、形容词和副词以及介词。短文中还使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如would like to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China.、Now we are busy preparing for it.、Also I will help my mom do some traditional food, such as riceballs, ricecakes, tofu and so on.、We will stay up late to welcome the New Year、I hope you can come to China and spend the Spring Festival with us and experience the traditional Chinese culture.等等。
16．My favorite Chinese festival
Lunar August15th of a year is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It is one of the most important festivals in China. It is also a Chinese traditional festival. On this day, people often get together to have a big dinner with their family. At night, people often enjoy the bright full moon and eat all kinds of delicious mooncakes in the open air. The mooncakes are round like the moon. They carry people’s wishes to the families they love. Some people don’t come back home until mid-night. How happy they are on this day!This is the Mid-autumn Festival in China. I hope you’ll like it.
【解析】这是一篇有关中国的传统节日的文章。要求根据提示词，以“My favorite Chinese festival”为主题，介绍自己最喜欢的节日中秋节。内容要点包括：节日简介、节日准备、节日活动等。本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一人称，辅以第三人称，注意主谓一致问题。先介绍中秋节在中国节日中的地位。比如：是中国最重要的节日之一，也是中国的传统节日（most important）；再介绍人们在中秋节做什么，比如：吃团圆饭，赏月，吃各种月饼；介绍月饼，比如：月饼是圆的，像月亮一样，它们寄托人们对所爱家人的祝愿。（round like the moon）写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用，注意叙述顺序符合逻辑关系，注意运用题干中所提示的所有单词和短语。
17．Dear Harry,
How are you I'm really glad that you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals. I'd like to talk about two main festivals. One is Spring Festival, the other is Mid-Autumn Festival. They are both the time for family members to get together.
Spring Festival is the most important to us of all the festivals. It comes on lunar January 1st. People get together to have a big dinner, give best wishes to each other and play firecrackers. Children receive lucky money from parents. How happy we are!
Mid-Autumn Festival is on lunar August 15th. All family members sit together to eat mooncakes and enjoy the beautiful moonlight at night.
As for me, Mother's Day is my favorite. It's the best time for me to show my thanks to my mother. On that day, I send her beautiful gifts made by myself and help her with housework.
What's your favorite festival
Best wishes!
Yours,
Chen Zhong
【解析】这是一篇书信作文。要求向Mary介绍中国的传统文化，并给她介绍一下你最喜欢的中国传统节日，包括节日的名称、时间、有什么传统活动及你喜欢的理由等。首先要注意书信的格式，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称和第三人称。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。文章结尾要询问对方情况，并致以美好的祝福。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
18．例文
Dear classmates,
I’m very happy to share our research with you. The subject we’ve chosen is the Lantern Festival. We’ve collected much information about the festival by doing some reading in the library and watching a lantern show.
The Lantern Festival has a history of about 2,000 years. It’s celebrated on the 15th day of the first lunar month. People get together to enjoy colourful lanterns and play riddle games. Small gifts are usually offered when they get right answers. It’s a tradition to eat tang yuan on this special day.
As for the next step, we will focus on designing lanterns and making English riddles. This will help us understand the meaning of the festival better.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从“元宵节”，“端午节”以及“中秋节”中选择一个节日叙述；
第二步，根据表格提示具体阐述你们的研究成果。
第三步，介绍下阶段计划。
[亮点词汇]
①get together团聚
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
Small gifts are usually offered when they get right answers. （when引导的时间状语从句）
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