【单元考点培优】Module 1 Wonders of the world 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版
Module 1 Wonders of the world
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如《21世纪报》正在举行以“最难忘的旅行经历” 为主题的征文活动，请你根据下面表格中的信息，用英语给该报写一篇征文，介绍你的雁荡之旅。
Activities ◆climb the Yandang Mountain ◆enjoy the local dishes ◆…
Special experience ◆get wet in the rain ◆catch a cold
Traveling advice …
要求:
（1）短文必须包含表格所有信息, 并可适当扩展;
（2）文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
（3）词数110左右。
An Unforgettable Travel Experience
I have traveled a lot, but the trip to Yandang Mountain is one of the most unforgettable. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．假如你是李华，最近收到英国好友William的邮件，请根据邮件的内容给William回复。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m going on a holiday to Jining next month with my family. What’s the weather like at that time I’m just planning what I need to take. What clothes do you think I need to pack And I’m interested in traditional Chinese art, such as paper-cutting, Chinese clay art and so on. Could you please introduce one kind to me
Thank you for your help.
William
注意：
(1) 邮件必须包含所提问题的回复，可适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得透露任何与考生有关的信息；
(3) 100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi William,
Glad to hear you and your family will come to Jining for a vacation.
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Looking forward to your coming next month and enjoying Chinese new year’s enthusiasm atmosphere and delicious food.
Li Hua
3．读万卷书，行万里路。近年来，参观博物馆、看工厂、访农村等形式多样的研学活动，极大地丰富了中学生的课余生活。请你根据以下要点及要求，描述自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。
要点：
（1）研学地点、时间、交通工具、研学过程；
（2）研学旅行的收获和感受；
（3）研学旅行的重要性。
要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
（2）词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Study tour is more and more popular these days. Now, let me tell you one of my study tours.
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4．假如你是李华，去年暑假参观了三星堆博物馆。请你用英语给笔友大卫写一封邮件，向他讲述你的所见所闻。
（1）你和父母一起去了三星堆博物馆。
（2）博物馆位于四川，你们乘飞机到达。
（3）博物馆8: 30开馆，当天有许多的参观者。
（4）你看到了不同种类的展品，最喜欢的是青铜雕像。
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：Sanxingdui Museum三星堆博物馆 bronze figure statue 青铜雕像
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you my travelling experience.
Last summer holiday,
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Do you have anything to share Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
5．董宇辉曾说我们低估了四川，低估了它隐藏在熊猫、火锅、麻将之下的魅力，云海之上的峨眉金顶，冠绝蜀地的贡嘎雪山……四川在48.6万平方公里间，为我们埋藏点点惊喜。假设你是李华，你的美国朋友 Maria正在收集有关中国著名景点的素材，刚好国庆假期你去了四川峨眉山（Mount Emei），请给她写一封信介绍有关信息。
提示：
1. 位于四川西南部；
2. 每年前来参观的游客络绎不绝；
3. 是中国四大佛教名山（the Four Sacred Buddhist Mountains）之一；
4. 以自然美景和历史文化而闻名；
5. 有郁郁葱葱的森林，多样化的野生动物和古老的寺庙（temple）……
要求：
1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含上述全部要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、班级和学校名称；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。
Dear Maria,
How’s it going You know, I went to Mount Emei during the National Holiday. I’d like to share it with you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．古人云：读万卷书不如行万里路。旅游可以帮助我们开拓视野、结交朋友、了解不同的文化，从而丰富自己的人生阅历。假如你是李亮，你校英文报正在组织以“Travelling”为题的征文活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文参赛。
要点提示：介绍旅游的好处；
分享一次旅游经历（时间、地点、人物、出行方式、经过和感受）；
谈谈这次旅游的收获或感想。
参考词汇: enjoy, make friends, learn, last summer/ winter/..., Beijing/Xi’an/Hangzhou/..., father/ mother/..., by plane/ train/..., visited, took photos, excited, knowledge...
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Travelling
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Liang. Today my topic is “Travelling”.
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7．假如你是李军，你打算和父母去北京旅游，红星旅行社将为你们提供全程服务。请你根据以下提示给红星旅行社的主管张先生( Mr.Zhang) 写一封电子邮件，咨询一下有关情况。
提示：
1.旅行车上游客的数量；
2.宾馆是否有带大窗户的三人间；
3.宾馆附近是否有游泳池；
4.饭菜是否可口、种类多样。
要求：词数90-100词 (电子邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
As a visitor, I’d like to ask you some questions
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Yours,
Li Jun
8．今年十一，钟祥凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务，吸引了各地的游客前来莫愁村、明显陵“打卡”。在校园英语文化周，你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。清根据以下要点提示，结合你的旅游或出行经历，写一篇英语演讲稿。
1．要点提示；
(1)简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
(2)详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
(3)根据你的旅行感受，为钟祥的旅游发展提出一条合理的建议或希望。
2．注意事项：
(1)词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
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That’s all. Thank you!
9．城市漫游(City Walk)这种在城市里随意漫步，深度体验城市人文历史、自然景观等的微旅游方式，越来越受到人们的青睐。作为太原人，闲暇时光，漫游龙城，尽享城市魅力，是一种美妙的体验。请和大家分享你的一次经历吧。
内容包括：
●Where did you have a city walk in Taiyuan
●How do you feel about this kind of travel
要求：1．词数不少于80词;
2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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10．研学旅行作为一种学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动，深受学生的喜爱。为此，请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍学校开展过的某一次研学活动并发表看法。
要点包括：
1. 体验生活：学习采茶、手工制作
2. 了解文化：参观名胜古迹、博物馆
3. 感受变化：观看有意义的影视
4. ……
注意：
1. 文中必须包括以上内容，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息；
3. 词数80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and it is popular with students. I’m glad to share my experience of a study tour.
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11．各地旅游市场欣欣向荣，生机勃勃或美食美景或真诚有爱的人总是会让你的旅程流连忘返，给你留下深刻难忘的回忆，请根据下面提示，以“My Traveling Experience”为题，写一篇短文介绍你的一次旅游经历及这次旅行带给你的收获。
提示：
1. Where did you go
2. How did you go there
3. What can you learn from the traveling
要求：
1. 短文须包含提示中所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：80—100词。
My Traveling Experience
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12．假如你是李华，你的朋友 Tom将来鄂尔多斯旅游。到鄂尔多斯后，你计划带他去参观鄂尔多斯博物馆。请你根据一下提示给Tom写一封电子邮件告知其相关信息。
1. 简介：建于2006年，位于康巴什新区。馆藏丰富，可以品味当地文化与传统艺术。
2. 开放时间：周二—周日 9: 00—17: 30（周一全天闭馆）。
3. 入场：免费。
4. 注意事项：
参考词汇：Kangbashi New District 康巴什新区，Ordos Museum 鄂尔多斯博物馆
要求：
①语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意，书写工整；
②词数在 100 左右。
③文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
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13．假如你是李华，寒假打算和父母去北京度假。请你给笔友杨林写一封电子邮件，礼貌地询问关于北京的名胜（places of interest）、交通、饮食、天气等方面的信息。
要求：1. 语义连贯，层次清晰，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名；
3. 开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Yang Lin,
How is it going
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I’d like to thank you for helping me so much! I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lin Hua
14．“你可曾读过永州八记几首，你可曾记得独钓江雪的小舟……走，去永州，永州有你去的万种理由，走，去永州，永州有你恋恋的乡愁”。近段时间，《走，去永州》这首歌风靡全网。假设你是李华，请根据下列提示，用英文向你的美国好友Mike写一封信，简单介绍一下你美丽的家乡永州，并邀请他来永州游玩。
提示：1. 基本情况：位于(lie) 湖南省南部，是湘江和潇水交汇之处 (the intersection of Xiangjiang River and Xiaoshui River)；面积 (area)约为22400平方千米 (square kilometers)；
人口 (population) 约514万左右；气候冬冷夏热。
2.著名景点：柳子庙 ( Liuzi Temple)、九嶷山 (Jiuyi Mountain)、阳明山 (Yangming Mountain)、浯溪碑林 (Wuxi forest of steles)
3.美食：东安鸡 (Dongan Chicken)、血鸭 (blood duck )
要求：1. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名和班名等)；
2.可适当拓展。词数：不少于 80 词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Dear Mike,
I am glad to introduce my hometown to you.
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Welcome to my hometown!
Yours,
Li Hua
15．假设你是李梅，你计划在本周六和家人一起去大陈的“水上星光肆”游玩。你们决定邀请班上的交流学生Carla一起前往。请你根据以下表格信息写一封电子邮件，向她介绍活动内容并发出邀请。
Weekend Relaxation
Place in the north of Yiwu Activities
Time 6 p.m.—8 p.m. 1. taste delicious food; 2. enjoy water games 3. make coffee...
要求：
1) 文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称，词数100-120词；
2) 包含提示里的信息，可以适当增加内容；
3) 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
Dear Carla,
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Yours,
Li Mei
16．试卷阅读A篇中提到了有趣的Marbles Kids Museum。这个暑假你游历了哪些地方？请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，开学后向你班级的老师和同学分享下你的旅游经历和感受。
写作要点 参考词汇句型
1. Where have you been recently be famous for, places of interest
2. What do you know about the place …is a good place to…
3. What did you do there One great thing about…is…
4. How did you feel …
要求：
1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名；
3. 词数 80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to share my travel experiences with you.
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17．旅行不仅可以拓宽我们的视野，还可以放松我们的心情。假如你是八年级学生李华，你班将要举行一次有关旅行的英文演讲比赛。请你根据下列提示内容，以“A Special Trip”为题写一篇短文，向大家介绍你的一次旅行。
提示：
1. Where did you go on a trip
2. What did you do there
3. How did you feel about this trip
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
A Special Trip
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I will share my trip with you.
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18．假设你是李辉。英语周报“旅游”栏目正在征集稿件，请你根据以下提示，以“One of My Travel Experiences”为题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示：
1. 旅游方式、时间和地点；
2. 旅游经历；
3. 你的感受。
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
One of My Travel Experiences
Travelling is usually a happy experience for everyone.
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19．假如你是在上海留学的Mike，去年暑假你去了四川旅游，请根据以下要点，以“A Trip to Sichuan”为题写一篇英语游记，简要介绍你游览过的地方。
写作要点：
1.成都：感受西部现代化大都市的魅力，品成都小吃；
2.阆中古城：游古城，品三国文化；
3.巴中光雾山：欣赏云淡风轻，山清水秀的自然风光。
参考词汇：Ancient city walls；Three Kingdoms；landscape（自然风光）
写作要求：
1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名；
3.词数80词左右。可根据要点适当发挥。
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20．某英文报社正在举办以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文介绍一次难忘的旅游经历，向该报社投稿。
提示：
1. Where and when did you go
2. How did you go there
3. What did you see and do there
4. What do you think of the trip
参考词汇： scenery (风景), local food, take photos, happy and relaxed, …
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。
An Unforgettable Trip
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
An Unforgettable Travel Experience
I have traveled a lot, but the trip to Yandang Mountain is one of the most unforgettable.
First, I climbed the Yandang Mountain, tired but happy. Then I enjoyed the local famous dishes. It is worth to have a try. What delicious food! Because of the various weather, I got wet in the heavy rain. What is worse, I suddenly caught a cold and felt bad.
Last but not least, I think we should have enough preparation when we travel. First of all, it is important for us to know the weather forecast. Second, we should plan for a travel route in advance. What is more, we should keep our phones on outside all the time.
It is an unforgettable travel experience that I always think of and I learn a lot from it.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出自己在雁荡山的一次难忘的旅行经历。
第二步，具体介绍旅行中的体验及旅行中的经验教训。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① catch a cold感冒
②weather forecast天气预报
③First of all首先
[高分句型]
①Last but not least, I think we should have enough preparation when we travel. (省略that的宾语从句)
②It is an unforgettable travel experience that I always think of and I learn a lot from it. (定语从句)
2．例文
Hi William,
Glad to hear you and your family will come to Jining for a vacation. Next month is our lunar new year time. The weather will be fine but it may be very cold. You can take some warm clothes here.
I know you are interested in paper-cutting; I can introduce something about it as what I know.
Paper cutting has a long history in China. It appeared in Eastern Han Dynasty, China. Chinese people believe that the red paper-cuts on the door can bring good luck and happiness to the whole family. So this art forms can reflect various aspects of life such as prosperity, health or harvest. Next month you will see many paper-cuts on the street. Is that amazing
Looking forward to your coming next month and enjoying Chinese new year’s enthusiasm atmosphere and delicious food.
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏电子邮件中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，欢迎William来到济宁；
第二步，具体阐述济宁的天气及介绍中国传统艺术剪纸；
第三步，书写结语，期待对方的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②various aspects of多方面
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①Chinese people believe that the red paper-cuts on the door can bring good luck and happiness to the whole family. (that引导的宾语从句)
3．例文
Study tour is more and more popular these days. Now, let me tell you one of my study tours.
A school tour is a good way to put what you have learnt into practice. We went to Zhengzhou Science and Technology Museum last Sunday first. We got there by bus. We saw many fantastic inventions and did some scientific experiments. Then we went to the Wildlife Park. We got close contact with different kinds of wild animals and birds and learned a lot about their living habits. It took us a day to take part in this activities.
We were tired but happy. This activity not only made us relaxed, but also made us learn something new and meaningful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，介绍自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历；
第二步，具体阐述研学的地点、时间、交通工具、研学过程以及收获和感受；
第三步，书写结语，总结研学的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①fantastic极好的
②take part in参加
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
①A school tour is a good way to put what you have learnt into practice.（what引导的宾语从句）
②It took us a day to take part in this activities.（it固定句式）
4．例文：
Dear David,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you my travelling experience.
Last summer holiday, I visited the Sanxingdui Museum with my parents. It is located in Sichuan, and we took a plane to get there. The museum opens at 8:30 in the morning, and there were many visitors that day. We saw different kinds of exhibits. My favorite was the bronze statues which were really amazing and made me feel like I was in ancient times.
I think the Sanxingdui Museum is a great place to learn about Chinese history and culture. I hope you can visit it one day too.
Do you have anything to share Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己参观三星堆博物馆的经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍自己参观三星堆博物馆的经历；
第三步，介绍自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①be located in坐落于
②different kinds of不同种类的
③learn about了解
[高分句型]
①My favorite was the bronze statues which were really amazing and made me feel like I was in ancient times. (定语从句)
②I think the Sanxingdui Museum is a great place to learn about Chinese history and culture. (宾语从句)
5．例文
Dear Maria,
How’s it going You know, I went to Mount Emei during the National Holiday. I’d like to share it with you.
Mount Emei is located in the southwest of Sichuan Province. Because Mount Emei is one of the Four Sacred Buddhist Mountains in China, many tourists come here to travel every year. Mount Emei is famous for its natural beauty and historical culture. There are thick forests, kinds of wildlife and lots of ancient temples here. I like the monkeys on Mount Emei the most because they are lively and cute.
If you have a chance to come to China, please make sure to visit Mount Emei.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“峨眉山的概况，景物以及出名的原因”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“近况如何？你知道吗，国庆节期间我去了峨眉山。我想和你分享一下。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“峨眉山概况，景物以及出名原因”重点介绍峨眉山；
第三步，书写结语。表达“如果你有机会来中国，一定要去峨眉山。”
[亮点词汇]
① be located in位于
② be famous for因……而出名
[高分句型]
① Because Mount Emei is one of the Four Sacred Buddhist Mountains in China, many tourists come here to travel every year. (because引导的原因状语从句)
② If you have a chance to come to China, please make sure to visit Mount Emei. (if引导的条件状语从句)
6．例文：
Travelling
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Liang. Today my topic is “Travelling”.
Travelling is a very good activity. We can not only enjoy the beauty of nature, but also make friends with the local people and learn about different cultures by travelling.
I still remember the trip to Beijing last summer. My parents and I visited the Palace Museum. There we followed the guide and learned more about Chinese history. What’s more, we climbed the Great Wall. Tired but excited, we reached the top of it. The sights were so beautiful that I couldn’t stop taking photos. At the same time, I met a lot of foreigners and talked with them happily.
As an old saying goes, “It’s better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.” From this trip, I have learned much knowledge that I can’t learn in the textbooks. I won’t forget it.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“要点提示”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“旅行是一项非常好的活动”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——喜欢旅行的原因、旅行经历、收获和心情等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我不会忘记这次旅行”的难忘感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends with与某人交朋友
②What’s more而且
③At the same time同时
[高分句型]
①We can not only enjoy the beauty of nature, but also make friends with the local people and learn about different cultures by travelling. (not only...but also...)
②From this trip, I have learned much knowledge that I can’t learn in the textbooks. (定语从句)
7．例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
As a visitor, I’d like to ask you some questions. Could you please tell me how many visitors there will be on the bus Will it be crowded Then I wonder if we can stay in a room with a big window for three people. We can enjoy the scenery through the window. And is there a swimming pool near the hotel where we can swim to keep cool Finally, could you please tell me if the hotel will serve many kinds of delicious food I would like to thank you for telling me. Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Jun
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“作为一个访客，我想问你一些问题。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——游客数量、宾馆情况及周边、饭菜等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“请尽快给我回信。”的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①keep cool保持凉爽
②would like to do sth.想要做某事
③thank you for doing sth.谢谢你做某事
[高分句型]
①And is there a swimming pool near the hotel where we can swim to keep cool (定语从句）
②Could you please tell me how many visitors there will be on the bus (宾语从句)
8．例文
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Zhongxiang. Zhongxiang is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we played in Mochou Village. During play, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the afternoon, we went to the Obvious Mausoleum. It was a great day.
I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据内容提示，介绍自己的旅游经历和感受，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
第二步，详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
第三步，提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②at the same time同时
③places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Zhongxiang is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.（非限制性定语从句）
②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.（宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
9．One possible version:
Recently, city walk has become a popular way among people, especially the young, to get to know more about their own city in their free time.
Last weekend, I went on a city walk along the Bell Tower Street with my family after dinner. The street lies in Yingze District and is famous for its long history in Taiyuan. We started our walk from the east. There we saw many ancient buildings and got to know some historical and cultural stories about them. I also came into an old post office and bought some stamps. Our city walk ended up at ten o’clock and we really enjoyed ourselves in this way.
All in all, as a new way of travelling, city walk can provide us with a great chance to better experience the culture in our city. That is why city walk is so popular.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述城市漫游越来越受人欢迎；
第二步，具体介绍自己在太原进行的一次城市漫游；
第三步，表达个人的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for 因……而著名
②enjoy oneself 玩得开心
③all in all 总而言之
[高分句型]
①Our city walk ended up at ten o’clock and we really enjoyed ourselves in this way.（and连接的并列句）
②That is why city walk is so popular.（why引导的表语从句）
10．例文：
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and it is popular with students. I’m glad to share my experience of a study tour.
Last summer vacation, I went to Hangzhou with my schoolmates. There we learned to pick tea and make tea by hand. Looking at green and lively tea plants and drinking tea which was made by myself was really enjoyable. We also visited a lot of places of interest like West Lake, Leifeng Tower, Lingyin Temple and so on. The museums there are worth visiting. We learned much knowledge about the history and culture of Hangzhou in those museums. And we watched meaningful films to feel the great changes of Hangzhou.
I think that the study trip is useful for us students. It can open up our eyes and make us experience different life.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏需要自主补充的内容，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出介绍自己的一次研学经历；
第二步，具体阐述研学的经历；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受和观点。
[亮点词汇]
① by hand手工
② a lot of许多
③places of interest名胜
④be worth doing值得做
[高分句型]
①Looking at green and lively tea plants and drinking tea which was made by myself was really enjoyable. (which引导定语从句)
②I think that the study trip is useful for us students. (that引导宾语从句)
11．例文
My Traveling Experience
I went to Singapore this summer vacation.
In July, my mother and I took a plane to Singapore together. It is a beautiful and clean country. We visited the Asian Museum there and saw many interesting and meaningful cultural treasures. We tasted local cuisine at a food court in Singapore. Every night, we can see many runners at Kela Pier. I realize that it’s important to exercise every day. Because we need to speak English in Singapore, I know we should learn English better.
Through this trip, I have learned a lot and opened my eyes.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇“材料作文”；
② 时态：过去发生的事情时态为“一般过去时”，客观事实时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我去哪里旅行，怎样去的以及我的感受”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“今年暑假我去了新加坡。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“去新加坡所乘坐的交通工具以及旅行时的所见”重点介绍我去新加坡旅行的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“通过这次旅行，我学到了很多，也开阔了眼界。”
[亮点词汇]
① summer vacation暑假
② take a plane坐飞机
[高分句型]
① I realize that it’s important to exercise every day.（that引导的宾语从句，it的特殊句式“It’s+adj+to do sth”表示“做某事是……的”）
② Because we need to speak English in Singapore, I know we should learn English better.（because引导的原因状语从句）
12．例文
Dear Tom,
I am happy to know that you are coming to Ordos! I’d like to take you to visit Ordos Museum. It was built in 2006. It is located in Kangbashi New District. There are many kinds of exhibitions on display, so it’s a good place to enjoy the local culture and traditional art. We can go there from Tuesday to Sunday. It is open from 9 a.m. to 5: 30 p.m., but it is closed all day on Monday. One great thing is that it is free to visit the museum! While visiting the museum, we must follow some rules, such as being quiet, no smoking and no pets. Besides, we are not allowed to take photos in order to protect the exhibitions. If you want to get more information, please visit Ordos Museum@.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏。可适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对朋友的到来表示欢迎；
第二步，详细介绍鄂尔多斯博物馆的成立时间，所在地，馆藏情况，开放时间，门票及注意事项；
第三步，告知朋友，如有疑问，请发邮件咨询。
[亮点词汇]
① be kinds of各种各样的
② be free to visit免费参观
③ be not allowed to do sth.不允许做某事
[高分句型]
①While visiting the museum, we must follow some rules, such as being quiet, no smoking and no pets. (while引导时间状语从句)
②If you want to get more information, please visit Ordos Museum@. (if引导条件状语从句)
13．One possible version:
Dear Yang Lin,
How is it going I’m going to Beijing during the winter vacation with my parents. So could you please tell me something about Beijing
First, I’d like to know something about the places of interest there. Could you please tell me what they are famous for Second, I wonder if I can take the subway to all the places of interest. Third, I know there is lots of delicious food there. Would you like to tell me the names and addresses of the restaurants At last, I want to know if it is very cold in January or February.
I’d like to thank you for helping me so much! I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lin Hu
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作内容已给出，要求向对方询问关于北京的名胜、交通、饮食、天气等方面的信息，可适当发挥，注意语义连贯，层次清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，直接说明写邮件的目的是询问关于北京的一些信息；
第二步，具体从名胜、交通、饮食及天气等方面礼貌地询问对方；
第三步，书写结语，感谢对方并期待对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而著名
②take the subway乘地铁
③places of interest名胜
[高分句型]
①Could you please tell me what they are famous for （what引导宾语从句）
②I want to know if it is very cold in January or February.（if引导宾语从句）
14．例文：
Dear Mike,
I am glad to introduce my hometown to you.
Yongzhou is located in the south of Hunan Province, where the intersection of Xiangjiang River and Xiaoshui River. It has an area of about22, 400 square kilometers. Its population is about 5.14 million. The climate here is cold in winter and hot in summer. There are many famous attractions here, such as Liuzi Temple, Jiuyi Mountain, Yangming Mountain, Wuxi forest of steles and so on. There are also many delicious food here, such as Dongan Chicken, blood duck and so on.
If you come here, you will love it. I am looking forward to your arrival. Welcome to my hometown!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图是介绍自己的家乡——永州；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“基本情况、人口、著名景点以及美食”等方面阐述。
第三步，表达期待，欢迎美国好友Mike来玩。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of在……的南部
②such as例如
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
① Yongzhou is located in the south of Hunan Province, where the intersection of Xiangjiang River and Xiaoshui River. (where引导的定语从句)
②If you come here, you will love it. (if引导的条件状语从句)
15．例文：
Dear Carla,
I’m writing to tell you that my parents and I are going to a famous water market in the north of Yiwu to enjoy our weekend. Learning that you are a fan of camping, we do hope you can join us!
On Saturday, we will leave at 6 o’clock in the afternoon and come back at about 8 o’clock. On arriving the water market, we will gather in some big group and various interesting water games will be held there. In this way, we can have a better experience for the leisure time. Then, with the guidance of notices, we will have chances to taste delicious food, from both Yiwu and outside, such as Donghe meat pie, Thai food and so on. Later that afternoon, we can join in another popular activity. All of us can choose to DIY our favourite food and drink. Making coffee would be your best time there.
I believe you will have a good time there. If you are willing to go with us, please let me know soon so that I can have a proper arrangement. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Mei
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图是为了邀请对方和自己去游玩；
第二步，具体介绍活动内容并发出邀请；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①come back回来
②have chances to do sth.有机会做某事
③be willing to do sth.愿意做某事
[高分句型]
①I believe you will have a good time there. (宾语从句)
②If you are willing to go with us, please let me know soon so that I can have a proper arrangement. (if引导的条件状语从句)
16．例文
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to share my travel experiences with you.
I went to Hangzhou with my parents this summer vacation, which is famous for places of interest. We went to Hangzhou by plane. Hangzhou is a beautiful tourist city. The West Lake is famous all over the country. Hangzhou’s silk is well-known around the world. There are all kinds of delicious food in Hangzhou. So it is a good place to live. When we got there, we were attracted by the beautiful scenery of Hangzhou. We visited the West Lake. One great thing about this trip was that we boated in the lake. My mother also bought many silk clothes. I had a great time.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己暑假的旅游经历；
第二步，具体介绍自己和父母一起去杭州游玩的经历；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①around the world全世界
②all kinds of各种各样的
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I went to Hangzhou with my parents this summer vacation, which is famous for places of interest.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②One great thing about this trip was that we boated in the lake.（that引导的表语从句）
17．例文
A Special Trip
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I will share my trip with you.
I visited Hong Kong last summer holiday. It’s a beautiful city and I had a wonderful time there. I went there by plane and stayed there for seven days. On the first day, I visited Disneyland and played different kinds of games. They were very interesting and I had a good time. On the evening of the second day, I visited the Victoria Harbor. It was also wonderful. The other days, I visited other places, like Hong Kong Avenue of Stars. I also ate delicious food and it was very different from ours.
Although I felt a little tired, I was happy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己旅行的目的地以及进行的活动等；
第三步，介绍自己的感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①wonderful使人愉快的
②different kinds of不同种类的
③have a good time玩得很开心
④different from不同于
[高分句型]
Although I felt a little tired, I was happy.(although引导让步状语从句)
18．例文
One of My Travel Experiences
Travelling is usually a happy experience for everyone. Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my parents. We travelled there by plane.
After getting off the plane, we took a taxi to the hotel. During the following days, we visited many places of interest. The Great Wall made a deep impression on me. It is an ancient wall with a long history. We walked along the Great Wall and enjoyed the view. Though I was tired, I was happy. I think travelling is relaxing and educational. I can not only enjoy myself, but also learn a lot. It makes me realize China is really great.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍去北京的旅游经历。
[亮点词汇]
①get off下车
②places of interest名胜古迹
③make a deep impression on sb给某人留下了深刻的印象
[高分句型]
①Though I was tired, I was happy.（though引导让步状语从句）
②I think travelling is relaxing and educational.（宾语从句）
19．例文
A Trip to Sichuan
Last summer holiday, I took a trip to Sichuan. I enjoyed myself there.
First, I went to Chengdu. It is a modern city. I felt the charm of the modern western metropolis and tasted local food. Then, I visited Langzhong ancient city. It is surrounded by mountain and water, and has magnificent scenes which seem to be made by God. I also experienced the Three Kingdoms culture. Last, I went to Bazhong Guangwu Mountain. I enjoyed the landscape of light clouds, light wind and beautiful mountains.
I am impressed by the beautiful scenery. I hope I can go there again.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，根据提示材料介绍自己的旅游经历；
第三步，表达自己的感悟并期待自己再次去旅游。
[亮点词汇]
①take a trip去旅行
②enjoy oneself玩得愉快
③seem to do sth似乎做某事
[高分句型]
①It is surrounded by mountain and water, and has magnificent scenes which seem to be made by God.（定语从句）
②I am impressed by the beautiful scenery.（被动语态）
20．例文
An Unforgettable Trip
I have been to many places and among them, Hainan is my favourite place.
Last summer holiday, my father and I went there. We went there by plane. The sea there was wonderful. The sky was blue and the sea was blue, too. First, we went to swim in the sea. Then, we lay on the beach and enjoyed the sun. Next, we tried some seafood. It was delicious. We also took lots of photos there. It was a nice trip. I felt very relaxed. I will never forget this experience.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考查注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，明确旅行的地点。
第二步，介绍旅行的时间、和谁去的、怎么去的、看了什么和做了什么。
第三步，谈谈自己对这次旅行的感受，和题目呼应。
[亮点词汇]
①have been to 曾经去过某地
②by plane 坐飞机
③take photos 拍照
[高分句型]
The sky was blue and the sea was blue, too.（and连接并列句）
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