【单元考点培优】Module 2 Public holidays 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优外研版
Module 2 Public holidays
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是张平，你的美国好友Alice 将来中国游玩，她对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣。请你根据以下相关信息，写一封邮件，向她推荐一个你觉得有特别意义的中国节日。
Alice: I like Chinese traditional culture, especially the spirit behind it. By the way, I also like Chinese food.
Spring Festival ·on the first day of lunar year ·a lot of celebrations ·dumplings Lantern Festival ·on the fifteenth day of lunar year ·lantern show ·tangyuan
注意：
1.邮件需包含节日的相关信息，可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
3.字数80词左右。
Dear Alice,
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2．假如你是李华，学业考试后要参加“21世纪杯”中学生英语演讲大赛，题目为“A/An ______ Winter Holiday”，请你根据所给信息完成一篇英文演讲稿，讲述刚过去的那段寒假经历，并谈谈它对你今后的影响。
A/An ______ Winter Holiday
Activities you did Something you learned Influences on your future
◆study at home ◆help with housework ◆… ◆learn by myself ◆… ◆… ◆be more self-controlled ◆… ◆…
注意：
(1) 将演讲稿标题补充完整；
(2) 演讲稿必须包含所有要点，并适当拓展；
(3) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(4) 词数100左右；首尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
A/An ______Winter Holiday
Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your time.
3．假如你是李华，寒假即将到来，你的笔友来信想要了解你的寒假计划。请你根据以下问题用英语给Mike回信。
What are you going to do in the winter vacation
Why do you plan to do those things
What goal will you achieve
注意：
1. 根据问题及上图所给提示，适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’d like to share my winter vacation plan with you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．寒假即将开始，请写一篇演讲稿， 给你的同学们讲一讲应该如何过一个有意义的寒假。
1. 仔细地计划好每天的生活，将所有的作业列一个清单， 从而……（至少两点）。
2. 完成作业之后，多看书，通过书本更多地了解这个世界。
3. 听听音乐，了解不同的音乐类型。我最喜欢的作曲家是谭盾（Tan Dun）……（至少一点）。
4. 如果整日待在家中，感到烦躁的话，看看自己喜欢的电影。
要求:
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we have a meaningful winter holiday I have some good ideas to share with you.
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Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
5．寒假将至，欢乐来袭! 假如你是李华，你在寒假会和家人一起做很多有趣的事，如看春晚 (Spring Festival Gala) 玩游戏等，请你写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Alex，分享你和家人的假期活动，并谈谈喜爱的原因与感受。
内容提示：
What activities do you often do with your family during winter holiday
Why do you like these activities
How do you feel when doing them
Is there anything special about it
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
I’m glad winter holiday is coming!
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．寒假即将来临，如何过一个有意义的寒假呢？请你以“How to have a meaningful winter holiday”为题写一篇演讲稿，向你的同学介绍一下你的计划。
学习 仔细计划每天，按时完成作业
运动 每天多运动，如……
兴趣 听音乐，练习吉他；多读书，常读侦探故事，因为……
活动 陪父母看场电影，喜欢陈思诚导演的电影《唐探 1900》（Detective Chinatown 1900），热爱破案，想要找出凶手
注意：
1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. To make it meaningful, I have some good ideas to share with you.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
7．寒假即将来临，如何过一个快乐而有意义的假期呢？假定你是李华，请你根据以下图表提示，用英语给新西兰交换生Jenny写一封电子邮件，和她分享你的寒假计划。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Jenny,
The winter vacation is coming. How excited I am!
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Best Wishes!
Yours.
Li Hua
8．为了让学生们的寒假生活有意义，你校英语报将举办“How to Spend Your Winter Holiday”的征文活动。你将向英语报投稿，征稿内容如下：
1. What activities will you do during the winter holiday Why (like learning a kind of instrument, watching a film, playing sports...) 2. During Chinese New Year, how will you pay a New Year call to your relatives By visiting them or shooting short videos Why 提示词：拜年 pay a New Year call；拍短视频 shoot short videos
要求：
1. 所写内容必须围绕上述问题进行表达，需适当发挥；
2. 词数：90词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
How to Spend Your Winter Holiday
Winter holiday is truly a wonderful time for relaxation and self-development. During the coming holiday,
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9．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
假设你是李枫，你们学校计划寒假开展主题为“感受春节”(Feeling the atmosphere of the Spring Festival)的项目，现向学生征求一个小队活动设想。请给负责人Miss Zhang写一封邮件。邮件需包含以下内容：
(1)你对此项目的看法；
(2)小队活动内容简介及设计意图。
以下活动内容供参考：
包饺子(making jiaozi) 贴窗花(sticking paper-cut)
写春联(writing Spring Festival couplets) 扫尘 (sweeping the dust)
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10．寒假即将到来，你校英语报刊正在开展以“A meaningful winter holiday”为主题的征文活动。请谈谈你的寒假计划，并写成一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 健康生活 (如作息……)；
2. 规划学习 (如复习……)；
3. 发展兴趣 (……)。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：healthy (adj. 健康的)，timetable (n. 时间表)，review (v. 复习)，hobby (n. 爱好)
My plan for the winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. I’m happy to make a plan for it.
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11．新年假期，你的好朋友 Tony来到天津旅行。作为东道主，你带他领略了这座城市的独特魅力。请将你们三天的行程记录在你的 blog上，词数80词左右（开头所给文字不计数），可适当增加细节致情节完整。
第一天 天津站接人， 沿海河散步， 体验特色美食， 看夜景；
第二天 乘马车(horse-ride)，游览五大道(Five Great Avenues)，欣赏不同国家建筑；
第三天 去天津博物馆，展品众多，了解天津的历史和文化；送别 Tony
Tony的感受：人们友好、天津话有趣、期待再来……
Last week, it was time for the New Year holiday. My friend Tony came to visit me, and I took him around some famous places.
On the first day,
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12．近日，中国春节被列入联合国教科文组织人类非物质文化遗产名录。春节申遗成功彰显了中国文化价值，促进了文化的传播与交流。假如你是李华，你的美国朋友 John 很想了解在中国人们是如何过春节的。请根据以下内容要点和要求，给他写一封邮件。
内容要点：
1. 春节前，打扫屋子，购买年货，贴对联等；
2. 除夕夜以及春节期间的活动；
3. 邀请他来中国过春节。
要求：
1. 词数：100词左右；邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：
对联 couplet；除夕夜 on the eve of the Spring Festival；
燃放烟花爆竹 set off fireworks；压岁钱 lucky money
Dear John,
Knowing that you are interested in the Spring Festival in China, I’m writing to tell you how the Chinese spend it.
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I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
13．假如你是李华，你的笔友Jack想要了解中国传统节日春节的一些习俗，请你给他写一封回信介绍以下内容：
1.春节的时间；
2.春节期间人们进行的一些活动；
3.春节对于你的意义，谈一谈自己的感受。
参考信息如下表：
The Spring Festival Time: January or February
Activities: eat dumplings, paste spring couplets (贴春联), have a reunion dinner (吃团圆饭), play fireworks (放烟花), visit relatives…
要求：
1.短文必须包括所有写作要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他信息；
3.词数：不少于80词。（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Jack,
I’m very glad to tell you something about Chinese Spring Festival.
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．假如你是安娜(Anna)，在中国留学的你今年第一次跟同学体验了中国的传统节日——中秋节。你觉得这次经历非常有意义且打算将此事分享给你的父母。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件分享你的经历。

要求：
1. 须包含图文所有信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Mom and Dad,
How are you I’m fine here. I’m writing to share some interesting things I met here with you.
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Yours,
Anna
15．假设你是李华，你收到了美国笔友 Steve的电子邮件， 请阅读邮件并回复。
FROM: Steve
TO: Li Hua
SUBJECT: Columbus Day
Dear Li Hua,
Here is America. We have Columbus Day on the second Monday in October every year. It’s a national holiday in the US. On that day, we make a boat and create sails to honor (纪念) Columbus, the great man who first discovered the land of America.
In your last email, you mentioned the Dragon Boat Festival, and said it was to honor somebody too. Who is the person When is it What do people usually do Can you tell me more about it
Yours,
Steve
注意：（1）邮件必须包含 Steve所要了解的所有内容（who, when, what等），并适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
（3）词数：约100。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Steve,
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Yours,
Li Hua
16．元旦假期你和几个好朋友去参观了天津体育博物馆，请根据以下提示写一篇日记记录这次经历。
(1) 博物馆位于民园广场3层。
(2) 了解了天津与奥运会的故事。
(3) 看到很多天津优秀的运动员获得的好成绩。
(4) 在那拍摄了很多照片，并把它们发布到了学校网站。
(5) 这次经历给我带来的感受……
参考词汇: 天津体育博物馆 Tianjin Sports Museum
民园广场 Minyuan Square
运动员 athlete
要求：
(1) 词数: 80-100词左右。
(2) 开头已给出，不计入总数。
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Wednesday, 1st Jan. 2025 Sunny
During the New Year’s Day holiday, I went to
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17．你校英文周刊正在举办征文活动，主题是“弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题，写一篇英语作文，为本次活动投稿。
内容提示：
1. 简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日，名称及时间等；
2. 讲述该节日主要有哪些庆祝方式，食物及活动等；
3. 说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
要求：
1. 内容包含以上要点；
2. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，80～100词；
3. 书写工整、规范，文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
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18．寒假即将到来，请以My favourite time of year为题，根据以下的中文提示写一篇短文。
最喜欢的时光 寒假
最想做的事情 1. 看Audrey Hepburn的电影，因为欣赏她在电影和慈善领域的成就； 2. 看各种纪录片，可以更多了解大自然和真实生活的事件； 3. 边看书边聆听谭盾的音乐，他的音乐使人感到平静； 4. 前往北京旅游，例举两个景点。
喜欢寒假的原因 1. ……； 2. ……。
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：90词左右；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
My favourite time of year
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19．你的外教Tim曾在英语课上提到他对中国传统节日很感兴趣，你打算今年春节邀请他到你家一起吃年夜饭，请写一封邮件向他介绍这一传统节日并邀请他来你家共度佳节。
要求如下：
1. 邮件中须包含图中的所有信息，不少于80词；
2. 逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范；
3. 邮件中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。
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20．你的英国笔友Bob想更多的了解我国的国庆节，请根据以下要点用英语写一封信，向他/她介绍我国的国庆节。
内容要点：
1. 我国的国庆节是在每年的10月1日，人们都期待它的到来；
2. 在国庆节当天清晨，天安门广场会举行升旗仪式；
3. 在国庆节期间，人们会外出旅游、购物、看电影等；
4. 学校会举行演讲比赛、征文比赛等活动庆祝国庆节；
5. 国庆节是庆祝的日子，也是回顾国家历史的重要日子：
提示： ①升旗仪式： flag-raising ceremony ②回顾历史： look back in history
注意：
1. 词数80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不能出现自己的真实信息。
Dear Bob,
How’s it going I’m writing to tell you some information about our country’s National Day. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Alice,
I am glad to hear that you are going to visit China and are very interested in Chinese traditional festivals. If you like Chinese traditional culture, I will introduce Spring Festival to you. Because it is the most traditional festival in China. Spring Festival usually comes on the first day of lunar year. There are a lot of celebrations during Spring Festival. On the eve of Spring Festival, people clean their houses to get rid of bad luck. People say happy New Year to each other. Children also receive lucky money. The family get together to have a big meal. Dumplings are the most traditional food.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours, Zhang Ping
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“很高兴收到你的来信”来引出重点介绍的春节；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“时间、庆祝活动和美食”3个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①are very interested in 对……感兴趣
②introduce...to... 把……介绍给……
③lunar year 农历年
④get rid of 摆脱
⑤look forward to 期待着……
[高分句型]
①I am glad to hear that you are going to visit China and are very interested in Chinese traditional festivals. (that引导的宾语从句)
②If you like Chinese traditional culture, I will introduce Spring Festival to you. (If引导条件状语从句，遵循“主将从现”)
③On the eve of Spring Festival, people clean their houses to get rid of bad luck. (to do作目的状语)
2．例文
An Unforgettable Winter Holiday
Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is an unforgettable winter holiday.
Personally, this winter holiday was quite different. Because of COVID-19, I had to study at home and take online classes. As a result, I found I was able to learn by myself. I also helped my parents with housework like cooking. And I learned how to cook well. Last but not least, I had more time to communicate with my parents. Therefore, I learned to get on better with them.
What I learned during this holiday will surely influence my future life. I will be more self-controlled and independent. And I am sure I will face difficulties and challenges more bravely in the future.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your time.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：包含寒假背景、具体经历及从中获得的成长感悟等要点，结构清晰，细节充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以演讲开场词引出主题，明确写作意图是分享难忘的寒假经历；
第二步，详细描述寒假经历：因疫情居家上网课，培养了自学能力，帮父母做家务学会做饭，有更多时间与父母交流、改善关系；
第三步，总结寒假收获对未来的影响，表明自己会更自律独立、勇敢面对困难挑战。
[亮点词汇]
①present my speech发表演讲
②as a result因此
③last but not least最后但同样重要的是
④communicate with与……交流
⑤face difficulties面对困难
[高分句型]
What I learned during this holiday will surely influence my future life. (what引导主语从句)
3．例文：
Dear Mike,
I’d like to share my winter vacation plan with you. This winter vacation, I’m eager to make the most of my time.
First of all, I’ll set aside some time each day for study to keep my mind sharp. Reading some interesting books is also on my to-do list, which will expand my vocabulary and understanding of different cultures. In addition, I’ll focus on physical health. I plan to go jogging regularly in the morning. This not only helps me stay fit but also gives me a fresh start to the day. Moreover, I’m looking forward to celebrating the Spring Festival with my family. We’ll make dumplings, decorate our house and set off fireworks.
What are your vacation plans I can’t wait to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，开门见山，表示很想分享自己的寒假计划，引出下文。
第二步，具体阐述自己的寒假计划，内容包括健康、爱好、旅行等方面；
第三步，书写结语，表达对对方的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②focus on致力于
③not only...but also不仅……而且
④look forward to期待、盼望
⑤hear from收到……的来信
[高分句型]
①Reading some interesting books is also on my to-do list, which will expand my vocabulary and understanding of different cultures.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②This not only helps me stay fit but also gives me a fresh start to the day.（not only...but also连接并列成分）
4．例文：
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we have a meaningful winter holiday I have some good ideas to share with you. First of all, plan our day carefully. I think we should make a list of all the homework we have. Then work out how much time we need to finish it all. This will give us an idea of how much spare time we have.
Reading can help us to learn more about the world. So after finishing our homework, we can read some books. Listening to different kinds of music is a good choice. Music can always make us feel relaxed. My favorite composer is Tan Dun, because his music makes me full of power.
If we get bored with staying at home all day, we can go to the cinema to watch some films. My favorite film star is Jackie Chan. His action films are very exciting.
In addition, don’t forget to help our parents to do some housework.
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态：应使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，点明主题——计划一个有意义的寒假；
第二步，根据题干的要点，讲述寒假计划，分别包括学习、运动、兴趣爱好和家庭活动等方面；
第三步，感谢聆听，给予祝福并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①make a list of列出……的清单
②work out计算出
③get bored with对……感到厌烦
[高分句型]
①I think we should make a list of all the homework we have. (I think+宾语从句)
②If we get bored with staying at home all day, we can go to the cinema to watch some films. (if引导条件状语从句)
5．
Dear Alex,
I’m glad winter holiday is coming! During the winter holiday, I often do many interesting activities with my family. Watching the Spring Festival Gala is one of our favorite activities. We laugh and enjoy the performances together, which always makes our family bonding stronger. Besides, we love playing games like card games and board games. It’s a great way to have fun and relax.
I like these activities because they bring our family closer and create lovely memories. They also allow us to spend quality time together, away from the busy routine. I feel extremely happy and content when doing these activities, as there is always a lot of joy and laughter involved.
One special thing about celebrating the winter holiday in China is the emphasis on family gatherings. To me, being with family is the most precious part of the holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题，介绍和家人的假期活动；
第二步，介绍喜欢这些活动的原因以及感受；。
第三步，谈论假期特别的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①away from远离
②have fun玩得开心
③the emphasis on强调
[高分句型]
①I feel extremely happy and content when doing these activities, as there is always a lot of joy and laughter involved.（原因状语从句）
②We laugh and enjoy the performances together, which always makes our family bonding stronger.（定语从句）
6．例文
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. To make it meaningful, I have some good ideas to share with you. First, plan our days carefully. I think we should make a list of all the homework so that we can finish our homework in time. After finishing our homework, we can do more sports, such as running, playing basketball and football.
Listening to music is a good choice. Music can make us feel relaxed. I’ll practise playing the guitar. Reading more can help us to learn more about the world. I often read detective stories because they are full of mysteries. Besides, I plan to see a film with my parents. I like the film Detective Chinatown 1900 directed by Chen Sicheng. I love solving cases and want to find out the murderer.
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：应使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，点明主题——计划一个有意义的寒假；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，讲述寒假计划，分别包括学习、运动、兴趣爱好和家庭活动等方面；
第三步，感谢聆听，给予祝福并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①so that以便
②find out找出
[高分句型]
①I think we should make a list of all the homework so that we can finish our homework in time.（宾语从句）
②I often read detective stories because they are full of mysteries.（原因状语从句）
7．例文
Dear Jenny,
The winter vacation is coming. How excited I am! I can’t wait to share my plans with you here.
First of all, I’ll have a trip with my family. We plan to visit some places of interest, enjoy the natural scenery and different cultures. I think we can have great fun together. Secondly, to keep making progress in my study, I also set a study plan. I’ll spend some time reviewing the lessons with my friends. What’s more, I hope to do some volunteer work in the community, which can make me more responsible. Last but not least, I will do some sports to keep fit. It will be an interesting and meaningful vacation.
Best Wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，从旅行、学习和志愿服务等方面具体阐述寒假计划；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事
②places of interest名胜古迹
③making progress取得进步
[高分句型]
①I think we can have great fun together. (省略that的宾语从句)
②I hope to do some volunteer work in the community, which can make me more responsible. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
8．例文
How to Spend Your Winter Holiday
Winter holiday is truly a wonderful time for relaxation and self-development. During the upcoming holiday, I plan to do some meaningful things.
Firstly, I plan to watch films with my friends and parents to unwind after a tiring semester. It’s a great opportunity to strengthen my relationships with them. Furthermore, I intend to read some books, as reading enriches my mind and broadens my wisdom. Participating in voluntary work is also beneficial, as it helps develop my community-serving ability.
During Chinese New Year, I will visit my relatives to pay a New Year call so that I can better convey my sincere wishes and love. Moreover, we Chinese cherish family gatherings during this time.
In summary, with these activities, I hope to have a colorful and meaningful winter holiday.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括2个问题提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山：引出寒假及假期计划；
第二步，具体阐述寒假计划，适当拓展；
第三步，着重讲述春节期间的计划；
第四步，总结并表达对寒假的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①in summary 总之
②plan to do sth. 计划做某事
[高分句型]
①During Chinese New Year, I will visit my relatives to pay a New Year call so that I can better convey my sincere wishes and love. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②Participating in voluntary work is also beneficial, as it helps develop my community-serving ability. (动名词作主语、as引导原因状语从句)
9．例文
Dear Miss Zhang,
I am Li Feng. I am writing to express my ideas about the project of “Feeling the atmosphere of the Spring Festival”. I believe this project is a wonderful opportunity for us to know more about Chinese traditional customs.
For our team’s activity, we plan to make jiaozi, stick paper-cuts on the windows and write Spring Festival couplets. These activities will let us experience the joy of preparing for the Spring Festival and understand its meaning. We hope to spread the festival atmosphere and traditional customs to our classmates.
Thank you for considering our ideas.
Yours,
Li Feng
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍对此项目的看法；
第二步，介绍活动内容并说明设计意图；
第三步，对老师表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①know more about更好了解
②prepare for为……做准备
③festival atmosphere节日氛围
[高分句型]
I believe this project is a wonderful opportunity for us to know more about Chinese traditional customs.（宾语从句）
10．例文
My plan for the winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. I’m happy to make a plan for it. For a healthy life, I will make a timetable to work and rest. And I plan to do exercise for an hour each day. As for study, I will make a list. Homework comes first and then I will spend more time on the subjects I’m not good at. At the same time, I am going to develop my hobby—travelling. I think it’s a good idea to go to Harbin to see the snow world.
I’m looking forward to the holiday.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的寒假计划；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“健康生活、规划学习、发展兴趣”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth.计划做某事
②be good at擅长
③look forward to期望
[高分句型]
I think it’s a good idea to go to Harbin to see the snow world. (省略that的宾语从句)
11．例文：
Last week, it was time for the New Year holiday. My friend Tony came to visit me, and I took him around some famous places.
On the first day, after meeting him at the train station, we took a walk along Haihe River. The food we ate there was delicious. When the night fell, Tony and I enjoyed the beautiful view on the riverside. The next morning, we took a horse-ride to see one of the most famous places of interest in Tianjin—Five Great Avenues. There we appreciated different buildings from different countries. What’s more, we went to the Tianjin Museum to see the exhibitions and learned about the history as well as culture of Tianjin. I saw Tony off and waved goodbye to him.
According to Tony, the people in Tianjin are friendly. Besides that, they talk in a funny way. If he has the chance, he will certainly come again.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入主题，交代时间和人物，为下文的旅行经历做铺垫；
第二步，按时间顺序具体描写旅行的所见所闻；
第三步，书写结尾，表达Tony对天津的印象和再次来访的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①took sb. around带某人四处参观；
②places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
If he has the chance, he will certainly come again.（if引导条件状语从句）
12．例文
Dear John,
Knowing that you are interested in the Spring Festival in China, I’m writing to tell you how the Chinese spend it.
Before the Spring Festival, Chinese will make full preparations for it. Cleaning houses is an important activity, which means sweeping the bad luck away. Red couplets are put up on the doors. On the eve of the Spring Festival families get together to have a big meal while watching the TV (the Spring Festival Gala). After that, we stay up late till midnight to welcome the Spring Festival by setting off fireworks.
On the first day of the festival, dressed in new clothes, people visit their relatives and friends. Children are the happiest because they can receive lucky money.
I really hope that you will come to China to spend the Spring Festival with me. If so, you can experience it by yourself.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 体裁：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当补充细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍春节习俗；
第三步，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
① make full preparations for为……做充分准备
② get together团聚
③ stay up熬夜
④ set off引爆
[高分句型]
① Cleaning houses is an important activity, which means sweeping the bad luck away. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
② Children are the happiest because they can receive lucky money. (because引导的原因状语从句)
13．例文
Dear Jack,
I’m very glad to tell you something about Chinese Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional Chinese festivals. It usually falls in January or February.
Chinese people celebrate the Spring Festival in many different ways. For example, on the New Year’s Eve, they paste spring couplets. It’s a custom for people to have a reunion dinner with their family members. They always eat dumplings and different kinds of delicious food. What’s more, children play fireworks with their friends. During the Spring Festival, people wear new clothes and visit their relatives and children will get red packets from old people. They all wish each a happy new year and good luck.
I think the Spring Festival is very meaningful for me. It’s a good chance to get together with my family. Do you want to spend the Spring Festival in China I really hope that you can join us!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍中国传统节日春节的一些习俗，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍春节的时间；
第二步，介绍春节期间人们进行的一些活动；
第三步，介绍春节对于你的意义，谈一谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②different kinds of不同种类的
③get together团聚
[高分句型]
①It’s a custom for people to have a reunion dinner with their family members. (it固定句型)
②I think the Spring Festival is very meaningful for me. (宾语从句)
14．例文
Dear Mom and Dad,
How are you I’m fine here. I’m writing to share some interesting things I met here with you.
Recently, there was a traditional festival named the Mid-Autumn Festival in China, so every street in the city was very busy. My friend invited me to her house and we ate delicious mooncakes. Also, her parents treated us to a big meal and we all enjoyed it. After dinner, we sat outside and admired the moon. It was so big and round. After a while, another friend brought us a lantern and we were all very excited when seeing it flying into the sky.
This is my first time to celebrate a traditional festival in China. I think it’s very interesting and meaningful. I’m looking forward to the next one.
Yours,
Anna
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你第一次跟同学体验中国的传统节日——中秋节的经历的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍你第一次跟同学体验中国的传统节日——中秋节的经历；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
②fly into the sky飞向天空
[高分句型]
①After a while, another friend brought us a lantern and we were all very excited when seeing it flying into the sky. (时间状语从句的省略)
②I think it’s very interesting and meaningful. (宾语从句)
15．Possible versions:
Dear Steve,
It’s great to hear from you. We celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month to honor Qu Yuan, a great poet. He died for his own country, the state of Chu in ancient China. We usually have one day off and different activities are held. One of the most interesting things is to make and eat Zongzi as the family get together. Zongzi, with its cute shape, tastes very delicious. We also watch the exciting Dragon Boat races on TV.
I hope this helps you learn enough about the festival. Write soon.
Yours
Li Hua
(99 words)
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：本文主要是介绍端午节的日期、由来以及如何庆祝端午节，可适当添加细节，完善作文内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍端午节的日期及由来；
第二步，介绍是如何庆祝端午节；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from...收到……的来信；
②one of...……之一；
③learn about...了解……
[高分句型]
I hope this helps you learn enough about the festival. (宾语从句)
16．例文
Wednesday, 1st Jan. 2025 Sunny
During the New Year’s Day holiday, I went to visit the Tianjin Sports Museum with some good friends. The museum is located on the third floor of Minyuan Square. It was an amazing experience.
At the museum, we learned about the stories of Tianjin and the Olympic Games. We saw many achievements of excellent Tianjin athletes. They have won many competitions and brought honor to our city. We felt very proud of them.We took many photos at the museum. I uploaded them to the school website after we came back. I want to share these great moments with my classmates.
This visit was very meaningful to me. I not only learned a lot about sports, but also felt the spirit of sportsmanship. I will work harder and never give up, just like those great athletes.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文，为日记。
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③人称：以第一人称书写。
④提示:根据提示问题介绍自己这次的旅游经历，注意要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍出行的地点，时间，人物。
第二步，介绍具体的活动内容;
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②feel proud of为……感到自豪
③take photos拍照
[高分句型]
I not only learned a lot about sports, but also felt the spirit of sportsmanship.(使用not only...but also...句型。)
17．例文
My Favorite Chinese Festival
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best.
It comes in January or February. It is a time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up late, hoping to have a new start in the following year.
The Spring Festival can make us feel not only love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己最喜欢的中国节日；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍该节日主要有哪些庆祝方式，食物及活动等；
第三步，介绍自己对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional传统的
②get together聚在一起
③stay up熬夜
④happiness幸福
[高分句型]
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. (as引导的非限制性定语从句)
18．例文
My favourite time of year
My favorite time of the year is winter vacation, because during the winter holiday, I have time to do what I like. I will practice playing the piano in the winter holiday. I can also travel during the winter vacation.
However, my favourite thing to do in winter vacation is to see a movie starring Audrey Hepburn, because I like her achievements in film and charity. I also like to watch all kinds of documentaries, because I can learn a lot about nature and real life events. When I am bored, I can also enjoy Tan Dun’s music while I am reading a book. His music can make me calm. I will also travel to Beijing during the holiday. I will visit the Forbidden City and the Great Wall.
This is my favorite winter holiday life. It must be colorful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般将来；
③提示：描述一年中自己最喜欢的的时光，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己在一年当中最喜欢的时光是寒假，解释原因，引出下文；
第二步，介绍自己在寒假最想做的事情，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，总结全文，表达对寒假的期待。
亮点词汇]
①practice doing练习做某事
②all kinds of各种各样的
③learn about…学习……
[高分句型]
①However, my favourite thing to do in winter vacation is to see a movie starring Audrey Hepburn, because I like her achievements in film and charity.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②When I am bored, I can also enjoy Tan Dun’s music while I am reading a book.（时间状语从句）
19．
例文
Dear Tim,
During our English class, you expressed a keen interest in Chinese traditional festivals, which reminded me of the upcoming Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival usually falls in late January or early February. It’s a time for families to reunite and share a joyous meal together. We celebrate it to welcome the new year and to pray for good fortune and happiness. During the festival, people engage in various activities such as watching dragon and lion dances, setting off fireworks, and visiting relatives and friends.
I would like to invite you to join my family for the Spring Festival dinner this year. It would be a wonderful opportunity for you to experience the traditional Chinese New Year atmosphere and enjoy delicious homemade dishes. I’m sure you’ll have a great time and learn more about our culture.
Please let me know if you can make it. We’re looking forward to your company!
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一封电子邮件。
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时。
③提示：邮件中需要包含对春节时间的介绍、春节习俗的阐述以及诚挚的邀请。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头引出话题，提及外教Tim在英语课上对中国传统节日的兴趣，并引出即将到来的春节；
第二步，详细介绍春节的时间、习俗和庆祝活动，如家人团聚、吃年夜饭、观看舞龙舞狮、放烟花等，展现春节的文化氛围；
第三步，表达邀请的意愿，邀请Tim参加你家的年夜饭，并强调这将是一个体验中国传统新年氛围和品尝美味家常菜的绝佳机会。
[亮点词汇]
①keen interest 浓厚的兴趣
②reunite 团聚
③joyous meal 欢乐的聚餐
[高分句型]
①During our English class, you expressed a keen interest in Chinese traditional festivals, which reminded me of the upcoming Spring Festival.（定语从句）
②It would be a wonderful opportunity for you to experience the traditional Chinese New Year atmosphere and enjoy delicious homemade dishes.（It作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式短语）
20．例文
Dear Bob,
How’s it going I’m writing to tell you some information about our country’s National Day. Our National Day falls on October 1st every year, and everyone looks forward to it with excitement.
On the morning of National Day, there’s a grand flag-raising ceremony at Tiananmen Square. People gather to watch the flag being raised, feeling proud of their country. During the holiday, people often go on trips, shop, watch movies, and enjoy themselves. Schools celebrate National Day by holding speech contests, essay competitions, and other activities.
National Day is not only a day of celebration but also a time to look back in history and remember how our country has grown. I hope you find this information interesting.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，描述国庆节的习惯和庆祝活动；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括国庆节的日期、天安门广场的升旗仪式、国庆期间的公众活动、学校的庆祝活动以及国庆节的意义。考生需确保覆盖所有要点，并适当添加细节以增强文章的连贯性和丰富性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。在开头直接说明写信的目的，即向Bob介绍中国的国庆节；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从国庆节的日期开始介绍，提及人们对此节日的期待；详细描述天安门广场的升旗仪式，作为国庆节的重要活动之一；列举国庆节期间人们常见的庆祝方式，如旅游、购物、看电影等；介绍学校如何通过演讲比赛、征文比赛等活动来庆祝国庆节；强调国庆节不仅是庆祝的日子，也是回顾国家历史、铭记历史的重要时刻。
第三步，书写结语。可以表达对Bob未来有机会亲自体验中国国庆节活动的期待，或者邀请他/她有机会来中国感受这一节日的氛围。
[亮点词汇]
①falls on 落在
②grand 盛大的
③feel proud of 为……感到自豪
④look back in history 回顾历史
[高分句型]
①National Day is not only a day of celebration but also a time to look back in history and remember how our country has grown.（并列句，使用“not only...but also...”结构）
②People gather to watch the flag being raised, feeling proud of their country.（现在分词短语作伴随状语，描述人们观看升旗仪式时的情感）
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