2026届高考英语一轮复习课件:读后续写微技能11(14张PPT)

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高考英语读后续写微技能训练11
【训练】阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
I’m smaller than everyone else my age. When I walk in the halls at school, I have to squeeze in between the bigger kids to get by. At the playground, sometimes even little kids try to boss me around. Mia, my best friend, is so tall that when she walks, I have to jog to keep up with her.
I used to try to make myself taller whenever I could. My posture was perfect, straight as an arrow. I hung from the tree in our backyard to stretch out my arms and legs. I even ate all my vegetables. Every day I measured myself, but I was the same height every time. Frustrating!
“Don’t worry,” Mom always said. “Being small has its advantages.” Really I could never notice any.
One day, Mrs. Alvarez announced to the class that we’d be putting on a spring play. I practiced all the lines. But at the audition(试演), when I walked up to the stage, Mrs. Alvarez cried, “You’ll be perfect as the elf(小精灵)!You’re just the right size for the costume.” I even never got a chance to deliver the practiced lines. Back home I grumbled(咕哝) to mum that I was made an elf. But she bet I would be the best elf. To please her, I went to rehearsals(排练), though I only had two lines.
Mia got the lead role—a girl wandering through a magical fairy forest in search of her lost dog. In the last scene, she finds a box under a giant mushroom, and when she opens it, her dog jumps out. Mrs. Alvarez’s dog, Prince, played the dog role. She brought him to all the rehearsals, and when he wasn’t onstage, we got to play with him, but he seemed to like me best.
The night of the show, my first line came early, “Let’s ask the Fairy Queen!” Since my only other line was toward the end, I waited off stage, playing with Prince.
注意: 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Finally, the grand end came, and Prince was brought onstage inside the box.
“How can we get Prince out from beneath the stage ”Mrs. Alvarez asked.
1. 寻找伏笔
位置 伏笔类型 伏笔 续写照应
Para1 细节描写 I’m smaller than everyone else my age. Being small enough, I could crawl inside and comfort Prince.
Para1 动作描写 I have to squeeze in between the bigger kids to get by. After taking off my costume, I squeezed into the underpart of the stage, calling Prince softly.
Para2 情感描写 Frustrating! ... and no longer feel frustrated about my height.
Para3 物件的出现 “Being small has its advantages.” ... that it was my chance to show my advantages to get it out.
Para4 物件的出现 “You’ll be perfect as the elf!” Prince continued his performance while I played the role of the elf!
位置 伏笔类型 伏笔 续写照应
Para4 物件的出现 You’re just the right size for the costume. After taking off my costume, I squeezed into the underpart of the stage…
Para5 物件的出现 ... she finds a box under a giant mushroom. ... when Mia opened the box.
Para5 动作描写 ... her dog jumps out. ...the puppy would jump out immediately...
Para5 物件的出现 The night of the show, my first line came early, ... A perfect show instantly turned into a search for the dog offstage.
2. 续写故事
第一段微技能训练:
首句已给出: Finally, the grand end came, and Prince was brought onstage inside the box.
第一句Transitional sentence衔接句承上(衔接首句的内容):
正如之前一直练习的那样,当米娅打开盒子时,小狗就会立即跳出来。
As practiced previously, the puppy would ____________________ when Mia opened the box.
第二句心理+动作一:然后米娅激动地抱着这只迷路的小狗。
Then, Mia __________________ the stray puppy.
第三句心理+动作二:他们的表演非常出色,大家都欢呼鼓掌起来。
Their performance was excellent, and everyone _____________________ .
第四句心理+动作三:小狗从未经历过如此壮观的场面,他感到害怕,因此开始去寻找一个安全的避难所。The puppy, who had never experienced such a grand scene before, __________ and began to seek a safe haven.
jump out immediately
excitedly hugged
cheered and applauded
felt afraid
2. 续写故事
第五句心理+动作四:他跳下舞台,穿过一个狭窄的洞口,滑到了舞台下面。
He __________ the stage, _____________ a narrow hole, and ____________ the stage.
第六句环境描写:一场完美的表演瞬间变成了在舞台外寻找狗的场景。
A perfect show instantly _______________________ the dog offstage.
第七句衔接句启下(结合第二段首句,结束第一段):不管我们用什么方法,小狗就是不肯出来。
No matter what method we used, the puppy _________________________.
jumped off passed through slid under
turned into a search for
refused to come out
2. 续写故事
第二段微技能训练:
首句已经给出:“How can we get Prince out from beneath the stage ” Mrs. Alvarez asked.
第一句衔接句承上(衔接首句内容):突然,我想到了一个主意,就是展示我的优势来救出狗狗。Suddenly, _____________________ it was my chance to show my advantages to get it out.
第二句动作一:我身材娇小,足以爬进去抚慰Prince。
Being small enough, I could ____________________________.
第三句动作二:在脱下戏服后,我挤进舞台下面并轻声呼唤他。
After taking off my costume, I _______________ the narrow hole, calling Prince softly.
第四句动作+心理一:听到我的声音,他停止了颤抖,开始高兴地对我摇尾巴。
_______________, he stopped trembling and began to wag his tail happily.
an idea came to me that
crawl inside and comfort Prince
squeezed through
Hearing my voice
2. 续写故事
第五句动作三:我成功把Prince带出来了,很快我们回到了舞台。
I ___________________________ and soon we returned to the stage.
第六句动作四:Prince继续表演,我则继续扮演小精灵!
Prince _______________________________ while I played the role of the elf!
第七句回归主题,感情升华:那时,我真正理解了妈妈的话的意思,而且不再会对自己的身高感到沮丧。
___________________________ I truly understood the meaning of my mother’s words and no longer ___________________ my height.
successfully brought Prince out
continued his performance
It was only at that point that
felt frustrated about
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Earlier that day, Kevin was passing by the neighborhood park when he saw an ad outside Mrs. Murphy’s house. It said that the 88-year-old woman had lost $150 of her savings near their local grocery store, and she’d requested the finder to return the money to her as she really needed it. As Kevin stood there staring at the ad, an idea struck him. He hurried home to his piggy bank, Pigzy, and decided to help Mrs. Murphy. After he broke the piggy bank into pieces, he counted all the money, and there was $170 in total. He put the $20 bill in his study table drawer, the rest in his pocket, and ran to Mrs. Murphy’s house. When the older lady opened her door, she was surprised to see an eight-year-old in her doorway, a bright smile on his face.
“I got your MONEY!” said Kevin excitedly as he pulled out crumpled(弄皱的)dollar bills and coins from his piggy bank. “I counted it ... it’s $150.”
“Oh, honey, but did you find this outside the grocery store ” “No,I didn’t,” replied Kevin. “I had to break Pigzy, my piggy bank. I was saving this up for my skateboard, but that’s okay. I’m happy to help you.”
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Mrs. Murphy’s eyes were filled with tears as she held the money. She said, “Oh, thank ...thank you. What’s your name, little man Do you live around here ”
“I’m Kevin,” he said. “I live a couple of houses away. I know you needed the money badly, Mrs. Murphy. I know you don’t have enough money. Mom once told me you aren’t rich ...”
The older lady hugged him with full tears in her eyes and said, “You have a heart of gold, honey. Thank you so much. I appreciate your help. I had saved that money to visit my newborn grandson, but after losing the money, I couldn’t go. Now that I have it back, I think I’ll visit my family. Thank you.”
注意: 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A week later, Kevin was watching TV when he heard a knock on the door.
“Oh God, that’s a lot of money! We can’t keep this,”Kevin’s mom said.
1. 寻找伏笔
位置 伏笔类型 伏笔 续写照应
Para__
Para__
Para__
1
物件的出现
... her savings near their local grocery store
She also explained that someone had found her lost money and returned it to her through the local grocery store.
1
物件的出现
He hurried home to his piggy bank, Pigzy, ...
Mrs. Murphy said that the extra $50 was for him to buy a new piggy bank.
2
细节出现
as he pulled out crumpled(弄皱的) dollar bills and coins from his piggy bank.
When he opened it, Kevin found both crinkled bills and coins totalling $200.
位置 伏笔类型 伏笔 续写照应
Para__
Para__
Para__
Para__
3
物件的出现
I was saving this up for my skateboard ...
He continued, “And it makes me even happier to use the money to help someone than buy a skateboard.”
4
情感描写
Mrs. Murphy’s eyes were filled with tears as she held the money.
Mrs. Murphy said, “What Kevin did really moved me to tears.”
6
人物交代
You have a heart of gold, honey.
Mrs. Murphy told Kevin’s mother that he has a heart of gold.
6
人物的出现
I had saved that money to visit my newborn grandson, ...
... to thank Kevin for helping her see her grandson.
2. 续写故事
A week later, Kevin was watching TV when he heard a knock on the door. Kevin went to the door and saw Mrs. Murphy standing there. Kevin’s mother invited the guest into the living room. Mrs. Murphy began to explain why she was there—to thank Kevin for helping her see her grandson(照应人物的出现). She also explained that someone had found her lost money and returned it to her through the local grocery store(照应物件的出现). It was only at this point that Kevin’s mother learned about Kevin breaking his cherished Pigzy and giving the money to Mrs. Murphy. Mrs. Murphy then handed Kevin an envelope containing $200. When he opened it, Kevin found both crinkled bills and coins(照应细节描写) totaling $200.
“Oh God, that’s a lot of money! We can’t keep this,” Kevin’s mom said. Mrs. Murphy said that the extra $50 was for him to buy a new piggy bank(照应物件的出现). However, Kevin only took the $150 that was rightfully his. He explained he did not need a new piggy bank. Mrs. Murphy told Kevin’s mother that he has a heart of gold(照应人物交代) and that she had done a great job raising him. After the guest left, Kevin’s mother was amazed at what Kevin did. Kevin explained, “Mom, because you told me that we should always help people in need.” He continued, “It makes me even happier to use the money to help someone than buy a skateboard(照应物件的出现).”
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