【单元考点培优】Unit 1 Know yourself 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版Unit 1 Know yourself
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．梦想是指路明灯。没有梦想，就没有坚定的方向。作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么呢？某英文报社正在举办题为“My Dream”的征文活动，请根据以下提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
1. What are you going to be in the future
2. What makes you have the dream (Give some reasons)
3. What are you going to do to realize your dream (More than two plans)
注意：1. 根据以上提示，适当发挥；
2. 要求结构清晰，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Dream
Dreams are different from person to person. Some people want to be writers, while others want to be doctors.
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2．青少年是祖国的未来，家庭的期待。你校英语社团正在开展对青少年未来职业梦想的讨论。假如你是李明，请根据下面的提示写一篇发言稿。
1. 工作的种类 2. 家人的希望 3. 自己的梦想 4. 实现的方法。
要求：文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)
词数为80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
语言通顺，表达正确，要点齐全。
参考词汇：为……做贡献 make contributions to
Hello, everyone!
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Thank you for your listening!
3．路虽远，行则将至；事虽难，做则必成。青年人应有自己的梦想，未来可期。请根据下表所给要点写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。
Name Dream Details
Millie 艺术家 痴迷于画画，艺术节上赢得高度赞扬，父母一直鼓励不断尝试；
Tom 音乐家 认为最好的音乐来自于大自然；梦想将中西方音乐融合，搭建中西桥梁
Sam 导演 喜欢表演，最喜爱的电影明星是赫本 (Hepburn)；…… (原因自拟一条)
I 侦探 喜欢读侦探故事，擅长解谜；
为了实现梦想，我认为……
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Our dreams
Everyone has a dream, but different students have different dreams.
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4．路虽远，行则将至；事虽难，做则必成。青年人应有自己的梦想，未来可期。请根据下表所给要点写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。
Name Dream Details
Millie 艺术家 痴迷于画画，艺术节上赢得高度赞扬，父母一直鼓励不断尝试
Tom 音乐家 认为最好的音乐来自于大自然；梦想将中西方音乐融合，搭建中西桥梁
Sam 导演 喜欢表演，最喜爱的电影明星是赫本（Hepburn）；……（原因自拟一条）
I 侦探 喜欢读侦探故事，擅长解谜
为了实现梦想，我认为……
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头己给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚，语句连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Our dreams
Everyone has a dream, but different students have different dreams.
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5．校园杂志 English for Teens 以“My dream job”为题向读者征稿。请根据以下提示，以李华的名义用英语写一篇短文参赛。
Hi! I am the editor (编辑) of English for Teens. Your ideas about your dream job are needed! Here’s what to do:
Write to share your ideas!
Please let me know:
What is your dream job
What qualities for the job do you think are very important
How can you achieve your dream
Please write to us soon!
Contact us at dreamjob@
注意：
1. 词数80词左右 (已给出的文章开头不计入总词数) 。
2. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
My Dream Job
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for listening to our ideas. I have a dream job.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你是九年级学生李华，得知你所在城市的历史博物馆正在招募暑期英语向导。你想申请该岗位，为传播中国历史文化贡献自己的一份力量。请你给负责人Mr. Lee用英语写一封申请信。
内容包括：
1. 申请成为英语向导；
2. 自我介绍，说明优势；
3. 询问工作时间和工作内容；
4. 表达愿望，希望被录用。
写作要求：
1. 要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确；
2. 100词左右 (格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr. Lee,
I know you are looking for English guides. I’m writing to show my interest in the job.
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．我校“阳光小筑”的青少年辅导员Mrs Jiang正在招聘“小助手”，你看到这则招聘信息后想推荐自己担任“小助手”一职，请根据下列提示写一封自荐信。
What strong qualities do you have for this position
Why do you apply for this position
How will you work for teenagers if you are offered this position
要求：
1.文中不能出现真实姓名、班级等信息；
2.词数100左右，已给出的部分不计入总词数；
3.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Mrs Jiang,
Now, I’m writing to recommend myself as your assistant in Luming Sunshine Little House.
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Yours sincerely,
Kate
8．新时代的广大青年要立大志、成大才，努力成为担当民族复兴重任的时代新人。在时代重任的召唤下，你将来想在什么工作岗位上为国家贡献力量呢？假如你是李华，将参加以“My Dream Job”为主题的全球青少年英语演讲大赛，请结合下列要点写一篇英文演讲稿。
写作要点:
（1）你的理想职业是什么；
（2）谈谈为什么想从事这个职业；
（3）你将怎样实现你的理想。
写作要求:
（1）内容必须积极向上，并包含所给要点；
（2）结构完整，语句通顺，意思清晰、连贯；
（3）使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
（4）文中不得透露个人信息；
（5）词数90左右(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My Dream Job
Good morning, everyone. As we all know, young people must have their own dreams and fight for our nation. As a teenager, I want to
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9．学校英语社团正在举行以 “My dream Job” 为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文
Notice Hello, everyone. What’s your dream job What do you think about it How are you going to do that Please write to us and share your dream jobs.
要求：
（1）短文必须包括题目中的所有要点（黑体部分），可适当发挥；
（2）词数80左右，标题已经给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名等信息。
My Dream Job
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10．假如你是Amy，你看到Rainbow女士颜色治疗中心的一份招聘启事。你想去推荐自己做这份工作，请根据招聘启事的内容用英语写一封信。
Assistant wanted for Therapy Center We need an assistant (助手) for Mrs Rainbow’s Colour Therapy Center. Are you interested in colours Do you know the relationship between colours and people’s moods Have you ever helped others by using the colour therapy Come and join us. Please write to Mrs Rainbow and talk about your experiences and strong qualities for this position.
注意：
1.词数：90词左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥。
Dear Miss Rainbow,
I am writing to recommend myself to be the assistant of your Colour Therapy Center.
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Yours,
Amy
11．作家列夫·托尔斯泰曾说过：“梦想是指路明灯。没有梦想，就没有坚定的方向；没有方向，就没有生活。”作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么呢？某英文报社正在举办题为“My Dream”的征文活动，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。词数80左右。
What are you going to be in the future What makes you have the dream (Give two reasons) What are you going to do to realize your dream (More than two plans)
参考词汇： interest, curious (好奇的), patient, active, study hard, practice, stick to…
注意事项：
1. 必须包含提示信息，可参考以上词汇并适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
My Dream
Dreams are different from person to person. Some people want to be writers, while others want to be doctors.
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12．2022年10月16日，中国共产党第二十次全国代表大会在北京胜利召开。2022年也是习近平总书记提出“中国梦”的十周年。“同心筑梦”是每一个中华儿女的理想和追求。请你以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇英语短文，说一说你对自己梦想的所知所感。
要点：
（1）你梦想的工作是什么？
（2）为什么你有这样的梦想？
（3）为了实现梦想你将如何努力？
要求：
（1）语句通顺，书写工整；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）不少于80词。
My Dream Job
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13．2022年10月16日，中国共产党第二十次全国代表大会在北京胜利召开，同时也是习近平总书记提出“中国梦”十周年。“同心筑梦”是每一个中华儿女的理想和追求。请以“My dream job”为题，写一篇英语短文，说一说你对自己梦想的所知所感。
要点：（1）你梦想中的工作是什么？（2）你为什么有这样的梦想？（3）你为了实现梦想将如何努力？
要求：（1）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确。（2）文章内容可适当发挥。（3）不少于80词。
My dream job
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14．时光如梭, 转眼到了 2023 年, 我们的初中学习生活即将结束。在人生的道路上, 每个人都会对自己的职业理想有所选择。也许你想成为一名宇航员、科学家、发明家, 也许你想当一名作家、教师、运动员……请以“ I want to be a/an ______ ”为主题, 以演讲稿的形式写一篇英语短文。
要点：
(1) 你的职业梦想是什么？
(2) 你的人生梦想(motto) 是什么？
(3) 你想从事这一职业的原因？
(4) 你打算怎么实现你的理想？
要求：
(1) 不得出现所在学校和学生的真实名称；
(2) 词数 100 左右。
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15．理想是人生导航的灯塔，它指引我们成为对祖国和社会有用的人。某英文报刊将举行以“理想”为主题的征文活动。请你以“My Dream Job”为题，结合下图提示及要求，写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求：1.用上图中提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Dream Job
It’s very important for us to be a middle school student with a dream.
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16．56岁的航天员邓清明，经历了25年的努力与坚持，在2022年11月30日，顺利入驻“天宫”。追梦者终于圆梦！
作为一名中学生，请以“My Dream”为话题，根据所给写作导图的提示信息，写一篇英语演讲稿，在主题班会上交流。
写作要求：
1. 词数100左右（格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文章必须包含所给的所有要点，条理清楚，意思连贯；
3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名和所在学校名称。
Hello, everyone!
I’m glad to be here to talk about my dream.
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That’s all. Thank you!
17．假如你是王伟，从去年开始在校园电台工作。最近你收到笔友Mike的邮件，他想了解你在校电台的工作情况。请你根据下面的提示内容，给Mike回一封邮件。
【写作要求】
1. 内容须包含全部所给提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，行文连贯；
3. 80词左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to introduce my job in the school radio station to you.
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Yours,
Wang Wei
18．每个人都有自己梦想中的职业，你梦想中的职业是什么呢？请你以“My Dream Job”为题，根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。
Pay attention to the following points when you plan your composition:
●What is your dream job
●Why do you want to do this job
●What should you do now
The following words may help you:
●when I grow up
●study hard in school
●go to university
要求：1. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和地名等信息；
3. 在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Dream Job
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19．近几年，我们被很多闪光的人物感动：有为国争光的奥运健儿，有抗击疫情的医护人员，有风雨无阻的快递小哥，有兢兢业业的社区工作人员……他们在各自的工作岗位上奉献着光和热。某英文网站正在开展“My ideal job”为主题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的未来职业设想，你这样选择的理由及如何使之实现。提示问题：
●What is your ideal job
●Why do you want to do such a job (at least 2 points)
●How are you going to make it come true (at least 2 points)
注意事项：
1. 词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
My ideal job
Everybody has his ideal job.
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20．假如本周学校将会开展“My dream job”的主题英语演讲比赛，要求每一位同学谈谈自己的梦想职业。请你根据提示，准备一篇发言稿。
要点提示：
1．你的梦想职业是什么？
2．你为什么想从事该职业？
3．你将如何实现该梦想？
要求：
1．内容必须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
2．语言表达需准确，语意要连贯通顺；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4．词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everybody. I want to be
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参考答案及试题解析
1．Possible version:
My Dream
Dreams are different from person to person. Some people want to be writers, while others want to be doctors. As for me, I have a dream that one day I will be a scientist. Here are some reasons.
For one reason, I prefer science to other subjects. It is my favorite subject at school. For another, I am curious and I love exploring the unknown. I am excited about the things that will be discovered in the future.
To realize my dream, I am going to study harder to enter a university to learn more about science. What’s more, I’ll make full use of my spare time to read different kinds of books and obtain more knowledge. As the saying goes, “Roman was not built in a day.” I will stick to my dream no matter how difficult it is.
I am sure that my dream will come true one day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍梦想是什么；
第二步，阐述原因；
第三步，介绍为了实现梦想，自己打算如何做；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make full use of充分利用
②different kinds of不同种类的
③stick to坚持
④come true实现
[高分句型]
①I am excited about the things that will be discovered in the future.（定语从句）
②I will stick to my dream no matter how difficult it is.（no matter how引导的让步状语从句）
③I am sure that my dream will come true one day. （宾语从句）
2．
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. Everyone has his own dream job. Some people want to be engineers, some people want to be scientists and others want to be cooks.
As for me, my parents want me to be a doctor because they think it is a good job. But I want to be a teacher. In order to make my dream come true, I must study hard and get good grades. If I meet difficulties, I will come up with ways to solve them. Of course, I should get along well with others. After all, teachers are good with their students. I also help others with both study and life.
In a word, I will study hard and I believe my dream will come true.
Thank you for your listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示信息介绍自己的未来职业梦想，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍工作的种类；
第二步，介绍家人的希望、自己的梦想以及实现梦想的方法；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②in order to为了
③come true实现
④after all
[高分句型]
①As for me, my parents want me to be a doctor because they think it is a good job.(because引导原因状语从句)
②If I meet difficulties, I will come up with ways to solve them.(if引导条件状语从句)
3．例文：
Our dreams
Everyone has a dream, but different students have different dreams.
Millie wants to be an artist. She is crazy about painting and won high praise at the art festival. Her parents always encourage her to keep trying. Tom hopes to be a musician in the future. He believes that the best music comes from nature, and dreams of bringing Chinese and Western music together to build a bridge between the two cultures. Sam dreams of being a director. He likes acting. His favourite film star is Hepburn. She is considered as a great beauty, a great actress, and a great humanitarian by many people, not only for her success in film industry, but also for her efforts in charity work.
As for me, my dream is to be a detective. I like reading detective stories and enjoys solving mysteries. To realize our dreams, I think we should work harder. Remember, it is you who shape your life and future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分别介绍Millie、Tom及Sam的梦想及细节内容；
第二步，介绍我的梦想；
第三步，谈谈为了实现梦想需要做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be crazy about对……感到痴迷
②be considered as被认为是……
③efforts努力
[高分句型]
①To realize our dreams, I think we should work harder. (动词不定式表目的；宾语从句)
②Remember, it is you who shape your life and future. (强调句)
4．例文：
Everyone has a dream, but different students have different dreams. Millie wants to be an artist. She is crazy about painting and she won high praise in the art festival. Moreover, her parents encourage her to keep trying all the time. Tom hopes to be a musician. He thinks the best music comes from nature. He dreams of mixing Chinese music with Western music to build a bridge between the East and the West. Sam would like to be a director because he likes acting very much. His favourite film star is Hepburn. She is considered as a superstar by many people, not only for her success in the films, but also for her efforts in charity work. As for me, my dream is to be a detective. I like reading detective stories and enjoy solving mysteries.
To realize our dreams, I think we should work harder. Remember, it is you who shape your life and future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，特别注意不要遗漏表格中需要自行补充的内容，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。介绍每个学生都有不同的梦想；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍Millie、Tom、Sam以及自己的梦想；
第三步，书写结语。我们应该更加努力去实现自己的梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①be crazy about着迷于……，热衷于……
②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人去做某事
③hope to do sth.希望去做某事
④come from来自
⑤not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Sam would like to be a director because he likes acting very much.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I like reading detective stories and enjoy solving mysteries.（动名词作宾语）
③To realize our dreams, I think we should work harder.（动词不定式作目的状语；think后接省略引导词that的宾语从句）
5．例文
My Dream Job
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for listening to our ideas. I have a dream job. My dream job is to be a teacher. I think patience and knowledge are very important qualities for a teacher. With patience, I can help students solve problems calmly. Rich knowledge allows me to teach them well. To achieve my dream, I will study hard at school to get good grades. I will also read a lot of books to expand my knowledge. Besides, I will practice my communication skills so that I can get along well with students. I believe I can make my dream come true one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇电子邮件。
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明主题，说出自己的理想工作是教师。
第二步，具体阐述。先介绍教师应具备的重要品质，再详细说明为实现梦想将采取的行动，包括在校努力学习、阅读书籍、练习沟通技能等。
第三步，文章结尾表达对实现梦想的信心。
［亮点词汇］
①solve problems 解决问题
②achieve one’s dream 实现某人的梦想
③study hard 努力学习
④expand knowledge 扩充知识
［高分句型］
I believe I can make my dream come true one day.（宾语从句）
6．例文：
Dear Mr. Lee,
I know you are looking for English guides. I’m writing to show my interest in the job.
My name is Li Hua, and I’m a Grade Nine student. I believe that I’m suitable for this job. To start with, I’m good at speaking English, which is helpful in communicating with foreign visitors. Also, as a fan of Chinese history, my rich knowledge can help me with the job. What’s more, I’m patient enough to answer visitors’ questions and provide them with a wonderful experience. Also, I want to know some information about the job, like working hours. And I’d like to know what I need to do as a guide. Then I can make preparations for this job.
All in all, I’d like to work as an English guide at the museum. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图是申请英语向导这份工作；
第二步，自我介绍，说明优势，询问工作时间和工作内容；
第三步，表达愿望，希望被录用。
[亮点词汇]
①be suitable for适合
②be good at擅长
③make preparations for为……做准备
[高分句型]
①I believe that I’m suitable for this job. (that引导的宾语从句)
②To start with, I’m good at speaking English, which is helpful in communicating with foreign visitors. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．例文
Dear Mrs Jiang,
Now, I’m writing to recommend myself as your assistant in Luming Sunshine Little House.
I believe I have several strong qualities for this position. I am responsible and reliable. I always finish my tasks on time and keep my promises. I am also patient and good at listening. I can understand the problems and concerns of teenagers.
I apply for this position because I care about teenagers. I want to help them grow up healthily and happily. I think I can make a difference in their lives.
If I am offered this position, I will work hard for teenagers. I will organize interesting activities to enrich their after-school life. I will also offer them useful advice and support when they need it.
Yours sincerely,
Kate
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇书信体裁的自荐信，是一篇书信作文。
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章围绕题目中的三个问题展开，分别阐述了自己具备的适合该职位的品质、申请该职位的原因以及如果获得该职位将如何为青少年工作，内容完整，逻辑清晰。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开头明确表明写信是为了推荐自己担任“小助手”一职。
第二步，具体阐述。首先说明自己具备的品质；接着解释申请该职位的原因；最后描述如果获得该职位，将如何履行职责。
第三步，文章结尾处符合书信格式，表达诚挚的敬意。
［亮点词汇］
①recommend myself推荐自己
②keep my promises遵守我的承诺
③care about关心
④make a difference有影响
［高分句型］
If I am offered this position, I will work hard for teenagers.（if引导的条件状语从句）
8．例文：
My Dream Job
Good morning, everyone. As we all know, young people must have their own dreams and fight for our nation. As a teenager, I want to be a teacher.
My dream of becoming a teacher was inspired by Mr. Li, who was my teacher in primary school. When I saw the significant difference he made for us students, I was determined to be a person like him. I am passionate about changing the lives of others and guiding my students to become individuals who can make a contribution to our country.
To make my dream come true, not only will I spare no effort to learn my lessons, but I will also develop some qualities required to be a good teacher.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点和开头部分已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达自己梦想的职业是成为一名教师；
第二步，具体阐述为什么想成为教师；
第三步，表达自己为实现理想的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①inspire鼓舞，激励
②significant重大的
③determined有决心的；意志坚定的
④passionate热爱的，酷爱的
⑤make a contribution to做贡献
⑥spare no effort to do sth.不遗余力做某事
[高分句型]
① My dream of becoming a teacher was inspired by Mr. Li, who was my teacher in primary school. (定语从句)
② When I saw the significant difference he made for us students, I was determined to be a person like him. (时间状语从句)
③To make my dream come true, not only will I spare no effort to learn my lessons, but I will also develop some qualities required to be a good teacher. (not only..., but also...倒装结构)
9．
My Dream Job
We all have dream jobs. As for me, I dream of being a scientist. I have always been interested in science. I want to invent new products to improve people’s lives and I also hope to discover the secrets of the world.
To be a scientist, I need to take action right now. First, I’m going to study science really hard. Second, I plan to do scientific research. And most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible. If I become a scientist, I will live in Beijing. I can communicate with more experts there.
I believe my dream will come true if I work hard.
【解析】[总体分析]
1. 本文是一篇说明文；
2. 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
3. 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中实现梦想职业的具体方法的介绍，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍自己梦想职业的是什么以及对该工作的感想；
第二步，具体阐述为了实现自己梦想职业该如何做。
第三步，书写结语，表达希望实现梦想职业的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
1. invent 发明
2. secret 秘密
3. come true 实现
4. as ...as possible 尽可能……
[高分句型]
1. I want to invent new products to improve people’s lives and I also hope to discover the secrets of the world.（不定式做目的状语）
2. I believe my dream will come true if I work hard.（宾语从句）
10．例文
Dear Miss Rainbow,
I am writing to recommend myself to be the assistant of your Colour Therapy Center. I’m Amy. I’m in Class 8, Grade 9. I am kind. I am willing to help others. I’m organized. I have learned to use the computer to get myself more organized.
I believe colours can change our moods and improve our life. Blue is a calm colour. It can bring peace to our mind and body. Yellow is the colour of the sun. If someone doesn’t feel confident enough, use the colour yellow. If I can be your assistant, I think I can learn more about it.
I hope you can choose me as your assistant.
Thank you!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Amy
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出话题，交代写信目的，推荐自己应聘工作；
第二步，具体阐述自己能胜任这份工作的优势；
第三步，再次简单交代自己的申请内容并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①recommend 推荐
②improve 改善，提高，提升
③learn more about it 更多的了解它
[高分句型]
①I am writing to recommend myself to be the assistant of your Colour Therapy Center.（to do不定式作目的状语）
②If I can be your assistant, I think I can learn more about it.（if引导的条件状语从句）
11．例文
My Dream
Dreams are different from person to person. Some people want to be writers, while others want to be doctors. As for me, I have a dream that one day I will be a scientist. Here are some reasons.
For one reason, I prefer science to other subjects. It is my favorite subject at school. For another, I am curious and I love exploring the unknown. I am excited about the things that will be discovered in the future.
To realize my dream, I am going to study hard to enter a university to learn more about science. What’s more, I’ll make full use of my spare time to read different kinds of books and obtain more knowledge. As the saying goes, “Roman was not built in a day.” I will stick to my dream no matter how difficult it is.
I am sure that my dream will come true one day.
【解析】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍你的梦想，从而引出话题；
第二步，陈述你的理由，至少两点；
第三步，介绍为实现梦想将会如何做；
第四步，书写总结：I am sure that my dream will come true one day.
［亮点词汇］
① make full use of 充分利用
② what’s more 另外
③ realize one’s dream 实现梦想
［高分句型］
① I am excited about the things that will be discovered in the future. (that引导定语从句)
② I will stick to my dream no matter how difficult it is. (no matter how引导让步状语从句)
12．例文
My Dream Job
I want to be a police officer when I grow up because I think becoming a police officer is honorable.
The reason why I want to be a police officer is to serve the people wholeheartedly. In fact, The salaries of the police are not high. And they might be in danger sometimes. However, I still want to be a police officer. I do this not for money, but to protect people and my country.
In order to be a police officer, I must have a strong body. So I run five kilometers every day. I’m also going to study at a police academy after graduating from high school. To make my dream come true, I will try my best to read a number of great books and practice writing from time to time.
I believe that my dream can come true one day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的梦想工作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想工作是什么；
第二步，介绍为什么有这样的梦想；
第三步，介绍为了实现梦想你将如何努力。
[亮点词汇]
①in fact事实上
②come true实现
③try my best to do sth.尽我最大的努力做某事
[高分句型]
①The reason why I want to be a police officer is to serve the people wholeheartedly. (why引导的定语从句)
②In order to be a police officer, I must have a strong body. (动词不定式作目的状语)
13．范文
My dream job
I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession. As we all know, China has respected teachers and valued education since ancient times. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example. Miss Li, the head teacher of my junior high school, is a kind and patient person who is very popular with us students. I have always followed her as an example and made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己梦想的工作是什么；
第二步，介绍自己为什么有这样的梦想；
第三步，介绍为了实现梦想你将如何努力。
[亮点词汇]
①dream of梦想
②because of因为
③be popular with受……喜爱
[高分句型]
①I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession.（since引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
②Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.（although引导让步状语从句）
14．例文
I want to be an English teacher
I want to be an English teacher, and I am going to work and live in the city of Beijing. First, English is becoming more and more useful and important. It is exciting to be an English teacher, too. If I am an English teacher, I can help my students with their English study. Second, I like being with children because it makes me feel young. Finally, Beijing is the capital of China. I can meet many English speakers and I can improve my English by communicating with them. To make my dream come true, I will study English hard every day and speak English as often as possible. I will do more listening in the morning. I’m sure I’ll love my job and students. I’ll be a friend of them. No pains, no gains. As long as I try my best, my dream will come true someday.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按题目要求填入短文标题“I want to be an English teacher”。
第二步，根据提示内容叙述职业梦想，人生梦想是什么，从事这个职业的原因以及如何实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. with sth. 帮助某人某事
②come true 实现
③as often as possible 尽可能经常
[高分句型]
If I am an English teacher, I can help my students with their English study.（if引导条件状语从句）
I like being with children because it makes me feel young.（because引导原因状语从句）
15．One possible version
My Dream Job
It’s very important for us to be a middle school student with a dream.
My dream is to become an excellent doctor. Illness makes many people’s lives terrible. It’s a great thing to make them be healthy and live better. I am patient and careful. I think I can be a good doctor.
To realize my dream is not easy. First, I must study hard all the time and never give up. I may meet difficulties, but I won’t be afraid of them. Success belongs to the person who has courage to overcome difficulties. Second, I must be confident. As the saying goes, “Being confident is half of success.” Confidence will help me learn medicine better. Third, I need to have the courage to explore. It will make me better and better. I must be a good doctor and bring health to people. Hope my dream can come true one day.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍梦想的工作是什么；
第二步，具体介绍其中的原因；
第三步，最后说明如何实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①My dream is to become an excellent doctor.（动词不定式作表语）
②Success belongs to the person who has courage to overcome difficulties.（who引导定语从句）
16．One possible version one
Hello, everyone!
I’m glad to be here to talk about my dream.
Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is to become a teacher.
Teachers can not only teach us many things at school, but they do their best to teach us how to learn. Thanks to them, we gain knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes.
I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers. I know it is not easy to make my dream come true. But I decide to study harder from now on. I will study in a teacher’s college in the future. After graduation, I am going to be a teacher in a middle school. I am sure my dream will come true.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，同学们注意不要遗漏提示的要点，在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容完整。行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，作文开头和结尾已给出，应领悟首句内容衔接好下文，人人都有梦想，明确自己的梦想；
第二步，陈述自己选择这个梦想的原因；
第三步，介绍自己如何实现自己的梦想，并确信自己能够实现梦想。
［亮点词汇］
① not only…but also… 不但……而且……
② thanks to… 多亏了，由于
③ at the same time 在同时
［高分句型］
① I hope to be a teacher because I admire teachers.（because引导原因状语从句）
② I know it is not easy to make my dream come true.（宾语从句）
17．例文：
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to introduce my job in the school radio station to you.
I work as a presenter in the radio station. Every Tuesday and Thursday, I work from 12 pm to 12:30 pm. I really enjoy the short thirty minutes. Usually, my programme begins with a piece of music. After the music, I began to read the latest national and international news, share some great articles or poems. Sometimes I do interviews with some teachers or students. My programme ends with the words “Here is the programme.”
Working in the school radio station may take up most of my free time, but I never feel regretful. The job has brought me great happiness.
Yours,
Wang Wei
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件，要求根据提示给Mike回信介绍在校园电台工作的情况。
② 时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：题目要求根据提示给Mike回信介绍在校园电台工作的情况，包括工作岗位、工作时间、任务以及对这个工作的看法。写作时，注意不要遗漏要点，语言要流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。（已给出）
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍在校园电台工作的情况，包括工作岗位、工作时间以及任务。
第三步，最后谈对这个工作的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①from...to...从……到……
②begin with以……开始
③end with以……结束
[高分句型]
①Sometimes I do interviews with some teachers or students.（频度副词sometimes表示频率）
②Working in the school radio station may take up most of my free time, but I never feel regret. The job has brought me great happiness.（动名词作主语）
18．One possible version:
My Dream Job
Everybody has his dream job. My dream job is to be a tour guide for foreign tourists when I grow up.
Why do I want to be a tour guide First, I like doing some exciting things. Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice. Second, I like singing English songs. I believe I will be popular with foreign tourists.
Now I am still a student. I must study hard in school. Then I’ll go to a university to learn something about being a tour guide. I’m sure I can be a good tour guide in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍自己的梦想工作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示自己的梦想工作是成为一名导游；
第二步，介绍自己为什么想成为导游；
第三步，介绍自己要如何做才能成为导游。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up长大
②be popular with受……欢迎
③in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①My dream job is to be a tour guide for foreign tourists when I grow up.(动词不定式作表语以及when引导的时间状语从句)
②I’m sure I can be a good tour guide in the future.(宾语从句)
19．例文
My ideal job
Everybody has his ideal job. And my ideal job is to be a writer. First of all, I am crazy about reading. Ever since I was able to read, I have read thousands of books, including classical Chinese novels and history books. I enjoy myself in the world of literature every time I read. Second, both my teacher and classmates think highly of my writing. And I have won prizes in a few writing competitions.
To achieve my dream, I plan to take online writing courses to improve my writing kills. Also, I keep a diary to write down my thoughts, my feelings and my dreams for the future. Through hard work, I believe I can make it.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的理想工作；
第二步，介绍你为什么想做这样的工作；
第三步，最后说明你打算怎么实现它。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②think highly of高度评价
③plan to do计划做
[高分句型]
①Ever since I was able to read, I have read thousands of books, including classical Chinese novels and history books（ever since引导时间状语从句）
②To achieve my dream, I plan to take online writing courses to improve my writing kills.（动词不定式作目的状语）
20．例文：
Good morning, everybody. I want to be an English teacher when I grow up.
I think English is very interesting. I like it a lot. And I am also good at it. Besides, I am good with kids. To be an English teacher, I have to work really hard. I need to spend more time practising English every day. I also need to learn about how I can teach students well.
If I keep working, my dream will come true.
Thanks for your listening.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中梦想职业的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。告诉大家，长大后我想要成为一名英语教师；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍为什么选择英语教师作为梦想职业，以及为实现梦想该做哪些努力；
第三步，书写结语。表达“梦想会实现”的美好期待。
【亮点词汇】①grow up成长
②be good at擅长
③spend time (in) doing sth.花费时间做某事
④come true实现
【高分句型】①I also need to learn about how I can teach students well.（how引导宾语从句）
②If I keep working, my dream will come true.（if引导条件状语从句）
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