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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优牛津译林版Unit 2 Colours 专题13 书面表达
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
1.中国红意味着平安、喜庆、和谐、团圆;意味着百事顺意……,假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Toney对“中国红”一词很感兴趣,想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。请你根据以下表格中的信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福、好运、喜庆、团圆等
使用场所 婚礼、春节等
表达方式 剪纸、中国结、红包、灯笼等
注意事项:1. 词数90左右;
2. 包括所给提示内容,可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 短文的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名或校名。
5. 开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:婚礼wedding;中国结 Chinese knot;红包red packet;代表 stand for
Dear Toney,
It’s great to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
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I truly hope my letter will help you understand better Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.现在喜欢中国文化的外国友人越来越多, 并且他们希望能和中国学生成为朋友。假定你是李华,你的网友Robert想更多地了解你。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件,根据邮件内容用英语写一封邮件回复。
To: Lihua@
From: Robert2008@
Subject: Making friends
Dear Li Hua, How are you I’m really interested in Chinese culture and wants to make friends with you. ● Could you share something about Chinese animal signs ● Would you please tell me something about your personality ● Would you like to let me know something about your favourite colour I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon! Best withes! Robert
要点:
1.文中不得提及真实的人名及校名等相关信息。
2.回复须回答所有问题并适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
3.词数100左右,文章开头与结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Robert,
I’m very glad that you’d like to make friends with me.
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I also want to know more about you. I’m looking forward to your reply.
All the best!
Li Hua
3.现在,随着中国的快速发展,越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国文化,并希望和中国学生做笔友。假定你是李华,加拿大学生 Robert希望了解有关你的爱好,成为你的笔友。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件,根据邮件内容及你的了解用英语回复。
To: Lihua@
From:Robert2008@
Subject: Making friends
Dear Li Hua, How are you I’m really interested in Chinese culture and wants to make friends with you, would you please tell me something about yourself: ● What is your animal sign ● What personalities do you have Are they connected to your animal sign ● What’s your favourite colour Why do you like it Please write back soon. Best withes. Robert
注意:
1.词数100左右,文章开头与结尾已写好,不计入总词数。
2.回复须包括注所有内容要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名和学校名称等相关信息。
Dear Robert,
I’m glad that you like to make pen friends with me. Let me tell you something about myself to you.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
4.我国的传统文化源远流长,博大精深 。我们随时都能感受到传统文化的气息,它绽放在异彩纷呈的民俗节日中 。假如你是李华,你的英国朋友 Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣,想了解“中国红”在我们日常生活中的体现,请你根据下面提示写一封回信。
写作要求:
( 1)内容包括提示信息,可适当发挥,文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名。
( 2)字数不少于 80词。
(3)卷面整洁,条理清楚。
参考词汇:红包 red packets 剪纸 paper cutting
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5.假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Tony对“中国红”一词很感兴趣,想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现,请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
含义 幸福,可以带来好运
使用场所及表达方式 婚礼,春节等,剪纸,中国结,红包,灯笼等
影响 深深地影响每一个中国人
提示词:剪纸 paper-cutting,中国结Chinese knot,红包red packet
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about China Red.
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I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about China Red.
Yours,
Li Hua
6.在中国传统文化中,红色寓意丰富,它意味着好运和喜庆,也象征着奋斗与胜利。红包,红灯笼、红歌、红色之旅在中国都很受欢迎,请以“Chinese Red”为题,写一篇约110词的英语短文,让外国朋友了解中国红。
注意:文本不可出现人名,标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Chinese Red
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7.为了让刚刚进入七年级的新同学们更好地了解彼此,光明中学的校报开辟了一个 “Let’s be friends!”的英语专栏,鼓励同学们进行自我介绍,交到新的朋友。假设你是七年级一班的学生刘洋,请你根据下面的信息用英语进行自我介绍,进行投稿。
中文名 刘洋
英文名 鲍勃
班级 七年级一班
年龄 12
家庭成员 父母,一个妹妹
最喜欢的颜色 橙色,棕色
QQ号码 65267168
电话号码 52418397
房间 ……
参考词汇:七年级一班 Class One, Grade Seven
要求:
(1)60词左右。自我介绍要包括表格中所有内容,并可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
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8.假如你经营着一个名为“Kailey’s Clothes Store”的服装店,最近你店里在进行促销活动。请你根据下面给出的信息,用英语写一则促销广告。
Things Colors Price
coats many colors 80 yuan
trousers brown, black 50 yuan
skirts green, yellow 45 yuan
要求:
1. 不少于70词;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Kailey’s Clothes Store
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9.新学期开始了,请根据以下的信息,介绍你的新同学Li Qiang。
Li Qiang Personality: kind, creative, organized, modest …
Favourite colours: blue and green, because …
His future plan: to be a manager, because …
注意:
1. 文章需包涵以上要点,可适当发挥。
2. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。
3. 词数:100词左右;开头结尾已给出,不计入总数。
Li Qiang is my new classmate.
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10.2020年是新中国成立71周年,盛世华诞,举国同庆。在这71年里,我国发生了翻天覆地的变化并取得了举世瞩目的成就。请根据下表提示,以“The Changes in China”为题,写一篇90词左右的短文。
In the past 1. 生活贫困,房屋破旧 2. 道路狭窄,交通不便 3. 通讯不便,休闲活动较少……
At present 1. 生活:建筑物高大、 明亮;很多人有自己的汽车 2. 道路宽阔,交通便捷 3. 通讯便捷,休闲活动丰富……
In the future 展望祖国的未来……
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
2. 语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚。
单词提示:convinient adj. 方便的 Entertainment activities休闲活动
The Changes in China
With the development of society, China has changed a lot.
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11.假设你叫李华,你的英国笔友Mike对“中国红”一词很感兴趣,想知道更多关于红色在中国文化中的象征与意义,请你根据对方的邮件内容写一封回信。
To: Lihua2021@ From: mike@
Hey Li Hua. Happy New Year!
I recently read something about how popular and significant the color red is in China. Why do so many Chinese people like it When, where, and how do you use it I’m looking forward to hearing what you have to say about this. Thanks !
Mike
Hi Mike!
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Li Hua
12.假定你是林晓,你最近新结交的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件,请认真阅读下面的邮件并根据邮件中的内容及你的实际情况用英语写一封回信。
Dear Lin Xiao, Glad to be your new friend. I want to know more about you, so could you please tell me something about your personalities Since we are in the ninth grade, are you confident enough to take so many exams I often feel tired and stressed because of the exams. I know you are good at colour therapy. Could you offer me some advice on colours I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, David
注意事项:
1. 邮件内容根据回信内容自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合语境;
2. 词数90个左右,邮件的收尾已在答题卷给出,不计入总词数;
3. 邮件必须写在答题卷指定位置上,且文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear David,
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you something about myself and give you some advice.
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Best wishes,
Lin Xiao
13.假如你是李年,即将参加北京2022年冬奥会小记者选拔赛。请根据以下表格信息,用英语撰写一封自荐信。
姓名 李华
年龄 15
个性 细致耐心、活泼自信、甘于奉献、乐于挑战
最爱的颜色 绿色,因为……
最敬佩的人 钟南山。作为一名先锋医生,他……
注意:
1.词数80左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.内容须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯,通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm honored to recommend myself to be the young journalist for Beijing 2022 Olympic Games. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14.根据下面的要点提示,以"My favourite colour" 为题写一篇英语短文,不少于80词。
(1)我们生活在一个充满各种色彩的世界里。假设没有颜色,世界将会是什么样?你会产生一种什么感觉?
(2)不同的人对颜色有不同的爱好,有的喜欢红色,有的喜欢蓝色;有的喜欢深色,有的喜欢浅色。你最喜欢什么颜色?
(3)你喜欢这种颜色的理由是什么?
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15.书面表达
威廉是一名初三学生,面对繁重的课业和升学压力,他常常感到焦虑不安,晚上总是失眠,考试成绩不好。请针对他的问题,运用色彩疗法给他提些建议。要点如下:
1.如果你常常感到压力,建议你穿蓝色或白色,它们会使你感到放松。2.如果睡眠不好,建议把卧室的墙漆成蓝色,因为睡在蓝色中的房间里会给你身心带来安宁。3.如果考试成绩不好,建议……,因为……
Dear William
You told me that you had some problems with your study and life. I’d like to give you some advice.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'm sure you will feel much better if you follow my advice.
Yours,John
16.书面表达
请以Colours and Moods为题,选两种颜色,分别代表energetic colour和strong colour,适当介绍它们对情绪的影响,并谈谈你最喜欢的颜色。
要点如下:
1.绿色是活力之色,它能给你能量,因为它是自然之色,代表新生。所以当你疲惫或虚弱时,你应该穿绿色的衣服。
2.红色是强烈的颜色,它会使你看起来更加强大、有力。在中国红色还代表幸运,在过去许多女性都喜欢在结婚之日穿红色。
3.我最喜欢的颜色是白色,因为……(请用1-2、点理由阐述)
注意:80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Colours and Moods
Do you know anything about the relationship between colours and moods
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请你用英文写一篇短文,介绍你的朋友约翰(John)。
内容要点:
1. 约翰是个生意人。他经常穿一身黑色西服( suit),白衬衫,打着黄色或灰色领带;
2. 黑色代表着权力和信任,黑色西服使他看上去很强大;
3. 而白色使他感到平静和安宁,他认为灰色能使他看上去有思想(thoughtful);
4. 黄色是太阳的颜色,能使他……
5. 他对工作充满信心。
注意事项:
1. 短文须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 第4要点须用两句话展开合理想像,作适当发挥;
3. 词数在80个左右。
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1.互相问候! 2.How are you 3.用英语说这是什么? 4.它是什么颜色?
写作要求:1.字迹工整,尽量不要勾画;2.请用英语写下来,以对话形式。(A:_______ B:________)3.对话不少于8句话。
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参考答案及试题解析
1.范文:
Dear Toney,
It’s great to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red. Chinese red is one of the most popular colors in China. It stands for happiness, good luck, celebration, reunion and so on. People in our country use many red things in some important events. For example, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cutting, lanterns and Chinese knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays an important role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题,引出话题;
第二步、介绍“中国红”的地位以及代表的意义;
第三步、介绍“中国红”使用的场所以及表达方式并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①stand for 代表
②be decorated with 装饰着
③be filled with 充满;装满
④play an important role 扮演重要的角色;发挥重要作用
[高分句型]
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.(省略that的宾语从句)
2.例文:
Dear Robert,
I’m very glad that you’d like to make friends with me. The Chinese zodiac features 12 animal signs in this order: Rat, Ox, Tiger, Rabbit, Dragon, Snake, Horse, Sheep, Monkey, Rooster, Dog and Pig. It has a history of more than 2,000 years. There is an animal for each year.
My animal sign is the Dragon. I am very outgoing and I like making friends with people around me. I have extremely high expectations of myself and I am very careful. I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign.
My favourite colour is green. When spring comes, everything comes to life and everything is green. So I think green is a symbol of life and energy.
I also want to know more about you. I’m looking forward to your reply.
All the best!
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据邮件中的信息进行写作,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍一些关于中国生肖的信息;
第二步,介绍自己的性格;
第三步,介绍自己最喜欢的颜色和原因;
[亮点词汇]
①be considered to be被认为是
②be related to和……有关
③a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign. (which引导的定语从句)
②So I think green is a symbol of life and energy. (宾语从句)
3.例文
Dear Robert,
I’m glad that you like to make pen friends with me. Let me tell you something about myself to you.
My animal sign is the Dragon. I am very outgoing and I like making friends with people around me. I have extremely high expectations of myself and I am very careful. I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign.
My favourite colour is green. When spring comes, everything comes to life and everything is green. So I think green is a symbol of life and energy.
I really hope we can be pen friends. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据邮件中的信息进行写作,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍自己的生肖和性格;
第三步,介绍自己最喜欢的颜色和原因;
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be considered to be被认为是
②be related to和……有关
③a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①I’m considered to be energetic and ambitious, which might be related to my animal sign. (which引导的定语从句)
②So I think green is a symbol of life and energy. (宾语从句)
4.例文
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red, I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出本文主题;
第二步,介绍红色所代表的意义;
第三步,介绍红色的应用;
第四步,表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be popular with受欢迎
③what’s more并且
[高分句型]
①People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events.(such…that引导结果状语从句)
②I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.(宾语从句)
5.例文:
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about China Red.
As we all know, China Red is one of the most popular colours in China, and it is deeply loved by people of all ages. The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and wealth. What’s more, it can bring people good luck. When the Spring Festival is coming, China Red will come into your eyes whenever and wherever you are. When you attend someone’s wedding, what impresses you most is the China Red. On these occasions, China Red is put into many things, such as paper cuttings, Chinese knots, red packets and lanterns, which can be used to expect a promising future. The China Red has deeply affected every Chinese. It is not only a colour but also a kind of Chinese spirit and culture.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about China Red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封回信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助你的英国朋友Tony,了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,表明很高兴收到对方来信,然后回信告诉他关于“中国红”的事情;
第二步,从地位、含义、使用场所及表达方式和影响四个方面来介绍“中国红”;
第三步,结语已给出,希望回信能对他有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①stand for代表
②on these occasions在这些场合
③put into把……放进
④be used to do习惯于
[高分句型]
①The reason why Chinese people love red is that it stands for happiness and wealth. (that引导表语从句)
②On these occasions, China red is put into many things, such as paper cuttings, Chinese knots, red packets and lanterns, which can be used to expect a promising future. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6.例文
Chinese Red In China, red is a traditional colour that can be found almost everywhere. It means a lot to every Chinese.
It is a symbol of good luck and happiness. We can see red on some big days, such as the Spring Festival or wedding days. To express our great joy and wishes, we often put up red lanterns, give hongbao or prepare other red items.
Chinese red also stands for hard work and success. It is chosen as the colour of Chinese national flag, reminding us of how Chinese people fought for our country before. Today more of us take red tours and sing red songs, which fill us with pride and strength to work harder.
In conclusion, Chinese red plays a significant role in our traditional culture.
【解析】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,主要是描写红色在中国传统文化中的寓意以及象征等,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般现在时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
7.例文
Hello! My Chinese name is Liu Yang. My English name is Bob. I am in Class One, Grade Seven. I am 12 years old. There are four people in my family, and they are my parents, my sister and me. My favorite colors are brown and orange. My QQ number is 65267168 and my phone number is 52418397. My room is tidy but small. Do you want to make friends with me
【解析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给的表格中的信息,介绍自己的情况。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时。从个人信息,家庭信息,房间情况等方面来介绍自己,写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
8.例文
Kailey’s Clothes Store
Come and buy your clothes at Kailey’s Clothes Store. Things are on sale now. Buy more and save more.
We have coats in different colors and you can buy one for 80 yuan. And we have trousers in brown and black. They’re just 50 yuan for one pair. For girls, we have green and yellow skirts for 45 yuan. Come to our store to try them on. We can help you choose clothes. They must be nice on you.
【解析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。按照提示内容写一篇服装店的促销广告。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时。按照表格内的提示要点一一进行描述,写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
9.例文
Li Qiang is my new classmate. He is 13 years old. He is tall and thin. He has blue glasses. He is kind, creative, organized and modest. He is always ready to help others. If he finds somebody in trouble, he must go and help him. He likes playing sports. He is the best basketball player in our school. He has a great sense of humor and he always makes us laugh. We all like him. His favourite colours are blue and green, because his glasses are blue and his bag is green. He is going to be a manager, because he is like Ma Yun and he wants to have a lot of money.
【解析】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,材料作文;在写作时应承接短文开头。根据材料提示可知,应从三个方面描写李强:性格外貌、喜欢的颜色和理想。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称来叙述;时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时,注意主谓一致,会使用到的句型He is…/He has…等;包含提示要点,适当发挥,叙述完整连贯,保证条理清晰,语法、单词拼写和标点要使用正确。
10.例文:
The Changes in China
With the development of society, China has changed a lot. In the past, the houses were old and small and people lived a poor life. The roads were so narrow that the traffic wasn’t convenient at all. What’s worse, the communication developed slowly and people had little entertainment activities. Watching TV was most people’s choice. They had to stay at home.
Now, great changes have taken place. We live in big and bright houses with well-suited furniture. More and more families have cars. The roads are becoming wider and wider which makes the traffic more and more convenient. Besides, people have more kinds of activities. They can drive or take the high-speed train to farther places for tour.
We each are working hard to make our Chinese dream come true. I believe our country will become stronger and stronger, richer and richer, more and more beautiful in the future.
【解析】题干解读:题目要求以“The Changes in China”为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,要求包含表格中所有的要点,并适当发挥。
写作指导:此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。可采用3段式格式,第一段:介绍中国过去的样子;第二段:介绍目前中国的变化;第三段:介绍未来中国可能会有哪些变化。
11.例文
Hi Mike!
It’s great to hear from you. Yes, we do love red here in China – I’m quite happy to answer your questions about it and tell you a little bit about our culture.
Basically, people in China think that red stands for happiness and good luck. It has been an important color for us since ancient times. You can see it almost everywhere – on buildings, clothing, and even our national flag. It’s especially common to see red color during Spring Festival. We put red paper-cuts on our doors and windows during this holiday. Kids get red envelopes full of “lucky money” from their older relatives. I have a nice red dress myself. It’s one of my favorites. My parents gave it to me. I feel like it represents their love and best wishes for me.
That’s about it. I hope you understand more about China’s love for red now!
【解析】1. 题干解读:文章属于书信作文,英国笔友Mike对“中国红”一词很感兴趣,想知道更多关于红色在中国文化中的象征与意义,要求根据对方的邮件内容写一封回信。按照邮件的信息,红色在中国的象征及意义要写全,也可以适当发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:文章主要以一般现在时为主,人称用第一、三人称展开描述。内容主要是谈谈红色的象征及意义。文章分三段,第一段总体说很高兴回答Mike的问题;第二段具体介绍红色在中国文化中的象征及意义;第三段提出希望。写作时语言要简单易懂,文章结构要完整,多使用简单词语表达,意思要通俗易懂。
12.例文
Dear David,
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you something about myself and give you some advice.
I'm a happy girl. My hobbies are listening to music and reading. I like pop music very much. I dislike sports because I'm not strong. It's hard for me. Although we are in the ninth grade, I am confident enough to take exams. In my school, I have many friends. All my friends are polite and helpful. My friends are all nice to me. They can make me happy. So I like playing with them.
It is true that color can be incredibly enlightening and transforming. This wonderful planet does not contain all the beautiful colors of the rainbow without reason. However, more often, many people may not realize how we attach importance to colors unknowingly and express out feelings through colors. Colors have certain energy in them, and these have a kind of control over the way we feel or we may even use certain colors to express ourselves unknowingly. If you feel stressed and tired, maybe you can wear white or blue clothes. Both of them are peaceful and calm colors. If you aren't doing very well in your lessons or you feel worried, I think you should use yellow or orange stationery. You can also paint bedroom yellow or orange. Orange represents joy and it can bring you success. Yellow is the color of wisdom. It can help you do better in the exams and become more confident.
Best wishes,
Lin Xiao
【解析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据邮件的内容,给David写一封回信,主要包括两方面的内容,个人介绍和颜色方面的建议;注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第二人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍个人信息和对考试的看法;第三段给出颜色方面的建议。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
13.例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm honored to recommend myself to be the young journalist for Beijing 2022 Olympic Games.
My name is Li Hua. I’m 15 years old. I’m patient, lovely and confident. I’m very helpful and always ready to devote. I like to challenge. I like green best, because I love the nature. The person I admire most is Zhong Nanshan. As a pioneer doctor, he led his team to the front lines and didn’t care about his safety, and he told all the people how to protect ourselves during the epidemic. His spirit encourages me to work hard to be a useful person.
【解析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇自荐信。根据所给的提示要点,写一篇参加北京2022年冬奥会小记者选拔赛的自荐信。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称,时态主要采用一般现在时。分为两段式:第一段点明主旨;第二段介绍自己的个人信息,喜欢的颜色以及最敬佩的人。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
14.例文:
My favourite colour
We live in a world full of colours. Without them, our world will be a dull one. Different people have different ideas about colours. Some like red. Some like blue. And others like dark colours or light ones. I like red. It is my favourite. I think red is the colour of heart and it represents power and strong feelings. Wearing red can make it easier for me to take action. It can help me when I have difficulty making a decision. So I like red better than any other colour.
【解析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文,要求以“我最喜欢的颜色”为题写一篇文章,根据题干中内容介绍颜色的重要性、不同的人对颜色有不同的爱好、我喜欢的颜色及原因等内容。
2.写作指导:本文主题为“最喜欢的颜色”;文章以第三人称、一般现在时为主介绍颜色的重要性,以第一人称阐述“我”最喜欢的颜色及个人感受等,注意主谓一致问题;写作时注意要点齐全,语句通顺,使读者一目了然。
15.Dear William
You told me that you had some problems with your study and life. I’d like to give you some advice.
If you always feel stressed, I advise you to wear blue or white. They will make you feel relaxed. If you can’t sleep well at night, you'd better paint the walls of your bedroom blue, as sleeping in a blue room will bring peace to both your mind and body. If you can't get good marks in exams, I think it's good for you to use yellow pens. Yellow is the colour of wisdom. Some people prefer this colour when they hope for success. I'm sure you will feel much better if you follow my advice.
Yours,
John
【分析】本题是写一封书信。格式给出,注意要素完整。
【解析】本短文从不同方面分析了颜色各种精神疾病的影响和治疗方法。多用条件状语从句,主句用一般将来时表达,在描述科学事实时,则运用一般现在时。提出建议用短语had better do sth.最好做某事。If you can't get good marks in exams, I think it's good for you to use yellow pens.通过和蓝色进行比较,得出黄色有助于考试得高分,因为黄色代表智慧。
16.Colours and Moods
Do you know anything about the relationship between colours and moods
Green is an energetic colour. It can give you energy, as it is the colour of nature and represents new life. So when you are tired or weak, you should wear green clothes.
Red is a strong colour. It can make you look more powerful. It also represents luck in China and many women preferred to wear red on their wedding day in the past.
My favourite colour is white because it is the colour of purity and it can help me calm down when I feel nervous.
All the colours make our world colourful and wonderful.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,介绍颜色对情绪的影响以及自己最喜爱的颜色。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一和第三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意要表达出提纲所列内容,防止漏写。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;要灵活运用自己熟悉的高级词句,以提高文章的档次。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
17.John is a businessman. He always wears a black suit, a white shirt and a yellow or grey tie. Black represents power and trust. Black suits make Mr Smith look powerful. White makes him feel calm and peaceful. He also thinks wearing grey can make him look thoughtful. Yellow is the colour of the sun. It can remind him of a warm, sunny day. It is also the colour of wisdom. It can bring him success.
So Mr Smith is confident about his work.
【解析】试题分析:这是一篇材料作文,属于人物介绍。人称为第三人称,时态为一般现在时,注意主谓一致关系。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料,根据汉语提示,选择恰当的句型去完成写作,注意文章的层次脉络。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
18.例文:
A: Good morning!
B: Good morning!
A: How are you
B: Fine, think you. And you
A: I’m fine, too.
B: What’s this in English
A: It’s a book.
B: What color is it
A: It’s white.
【解析】1.题干解读:题目要求编写对话,对话中要互相问候,用到句子“How are you ”,询问一个物体用英语怎么说并询问它的颜色。要求对话不少于8句话。
2.写作指导:写作时要主语对话的形式,时态用一般现在时,人称根据语境灵活运用,问候可用“Good morning/afternoon/evening”等,注意“How are you ”如何作答,并按要求询问物体用英语怎么说、询问物体的颜色,可适当发挥。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
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