Unit1 A new start写作拓展训练（含答案）-2025-2026学年高中英语外研版（2019）必修第一册

Unit 1 A new start
写 作 拓 展 训 练
【写作强化专练】单元写作
写英语日记
一、文体分析
日记是描述一天中所见、所闻、所做及所思的一种文体。
1.日记的规范格式:
(1)开头：写日期、星期。
(2)正文：交代事件涉及的人物、时间和地点，具体讲述事件发生的原因、经过和结果以及对事件的感受。
2.日记的时态:
讲述一天所发生的事情应用一般过去时，发表议论或感想时可以用一般现在时、现在完成时或一般将来时等相应的时态。
日记的人称和语言:
叙述自己亲身经历的事情常用第一人称；语言尽量口语化，按照事件发生的先后顺序清楚、连贯地表达出来。
二、常用表达
思维导图解构写作思路
三、微写作
假定你是李华,今天是你上高中的第一天,请你根据以下提示写一篇英文日记,描述高中生活第一天的情况。
1.学校的总体情况;
2.同学和老师的情况;
3.你的感受。
【注意】：1、写作词数应为80左右;
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Monday, 1st September
It is my first day at senior high. My new school is 1.___________ (large) my previous one, and every classroom is equipped with one computer. My classmates are all friendly and helpful. What's more, I 2.__________(impress) my teachers’ different teaching methods. At the first lesson, I 3.__________(nervous), but I soon felt relaxed after our teacher asked us to 4.__________ (introduce). I like my new school very much. I think I can 5.__________ (progress) in this school.
【能力提升专练】综合写作
书面表达
【2025江苏扬州市期末考试】假如你是李华，今天你参加了学校举行的体能测试(physical fitness test)，英语老师要求你们写一篇英文日记，记录这次经历。内容包括：
1、测试内容;
2、你的表现;
3、你的感想。
【注意】：1、写作词数应为80左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In a small village set between rolling(起伏的)hills,there lived a young girl named Lily. Lily had always dreamed of becoming a painter, but in her village, most girls were expected to help their families with farming or housework. Despite this, Lily's parents recognised her gift and supported her passion for art. They saved to buy her brushes and paints, and Lily spent every spare moment practicing.
One day , an artist passing through the village noticed Lily's paintings displayed in her small home. Impressed by her skill at such a young age, he encouraged Lily to follow her dreams in the city, where there were a lot of opportunities for artists. When she heard his words , Lily's heart filled with hope. With her parents' blessing and a backpack filled with her artwork, Lily set off on a journey to the busy city.In the city , Lily faced many challenges. She lived in a narrow apartment and took part-time jobs to make ends meet. Despite frustration(挫败) and refusals, Lily held on to her dream. She joined art classes, visited galleries , and looked for teachers who could guide her. Her determination caught the eye of a famous gallery owner who saw potential in her unique style. Lily's first exhibition was a success,selling a few pieces that earned her just enough to cover her rent.As Lily's fame grew , so did her confidence. She painted scenes inspired by her village. Her paintings began to attract collectors and art lovers from far and wide, Lily's dream of making a living through art finally became a reality.
But success didn't protect Lily from self-doubt, The pressure to produce more to meet expectations weighed heavily on her shoulders. One day, Lily found herself staring at an empty canvas (画布), unable to find inspiration. Frustration started to appear, and doubts clouded her mind. Was she really good enough Could she maintain her success
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
Paragraph 1 :
Just when Lily was on the edge of giving up, she received a letter from her village. _______________________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2 :
With renewed determination, Lily returned to her canvas.___________________
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【参考答案】单元写作
二、常用表达
(一) ①since I entered senior high
②took part in a carefully organised activity
③have so much to say
(二)①none of us gave up
②it was our turn to
③was afraid to have a try
④to find that we spoke English so fluently
① is not only an experience
② benefit a lot from
③will be beneficial to my whole life
三、微写作
1. much larger than
2. am very impressed by/with
3. was/felt nervous at first
4. introduce ourselves to each other
5. make great progress
综合写作
书面表达
【范文赏读】
Tuesday, 16th September
Today , I participated in the school's physical fitness test, which included various activities such as running, push-ups,sit-ups, and a flexibility assessment.
I felt both nervous and excited at the beginning. In the running test, I managed to complete the 800 meters in a decent time , which was better than I expected. I did push-ups and sit-ups well , though I need to work on my flexibility.
After the test, f realize the importance of physical fitness. It's not only about passing a test but also about maintaining a healthy lifestyle. I decide to exercise regularly to improve my physical condition. (不定式作目的状语)
二、读后续写
【解题导语】
山村女孩 Lily 梦想成为画家，她的父母也支持她的艺术梦想。一位路过村庄的艺术家鼓励 Lily去城市追求梦想。进城后，Lily克服重重困难，坚持不懈地学习与创作，最终获得了成功，她的乡村风景画吸引了广泛的关注。然而，随着名气的增长，Lily也面临着自我怀疑和创作压力……
【词块积累】
set of on a journey 动身踏上旅程 make ends meet使收支相抵;勉强维持生计
far and wide 到处;各处;广泛 make a living 谋生
cloud ones mind 使某人思路变模糊 on the edge of 濒临;非常接近(某事)
【写作指导】 情节和情感
One possible version
Paragraph 1:
Just when Lily was on the edge of giving up, she received a letter from her village.
The letter, written by her mother, referred to the village's pride in her achievements
and how her paintings had inspired many children. It reminded Lily of the joy she
found in capturing the simple beauty of her surroundings. Tears welled up in her eyes
as she realized that her roots were her greatest source of inspiration. The letter was a
gentle reminder that her art was not just about success, but about expressing her love for the world she came from. With this idea, Lily felt a surge of motivation to continue creating.
Paragraph 2 :
With renewed determination, Lily returned to her canvas. She took a deep breath and began to paint, not just with her hand but with her heart. With the brush strikes flowing effortlessly, she captured the beauty of her village.
The empty canvas was changed into a masterpiece that spoke of peace and the
power of perseverance. As she finished, Lily knew that she had not only created a piece of art, but also rediscovered her purpose in life. She realized that her success was rooted in her love for her village and her unwavering belief in her talent. (that引导的宾语从句）