【单元考点培优】Unit 1 The Changing World 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版Unit 1 The Changing World
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，学业考试后要参加“21世纪杯”中学生英语演讲大赛，题目为“A/An ______ Winter Holiday”，请你根据所给信息完成一篇英文演讲稿，讲述刚过去的那段寒假经历，并谈谈它对你今后的影响。
A/An ______ Winter Holiday
Activities you did Something you learned Influences on your future
◆study at home ◆help with housework ◆… ◆learn by myself ◆… ◆… ◆be more self-controlled ◆… ◆…
注意：
(1) 将演讲稿标题补充完整；
(2) 演讲稿必须包含所有要点，并适当拓展；
(3) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(4) 词数100左右；首尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
A/An ______Winter Holiday
Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your time.
2．寒假即将开始，请写一篇演讲稿， 给你的同学们讲一讲应该如何过一个有意义的寒假。
1. 仔细地计划好每天的生活，将所有的作业列一个清单， 从而……（至少两点）。
2. 完成作业之后，多看书，通过书本更多地了解这个世界。
3. 听听音乐，了解不同的音乐类型。我最喜欢的作曲家是谭盾（Tan Dun）……（至少一点）。
4. 如果整日待在家中，感到烦躁的话，看看自己喜欢的电影。
要求:
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we have a meaningful winter holiday I have some good ideas to share with you.
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Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
3．寒假将至，欢乐来袭! 假如你是李华，你在寒假会和家人一起做很多有趣的事，如看春晚 (Spring Festival Gala) 玩游戏等，请你写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Alex，分享你和家人的假期活动，并谈谈喜爱的原因与感受。
内容提示：
What activities do you often do with your family during winter holiday
Why do you like these activities
How do you feel when doing them
Is there anything special about it
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
I’m glad winter holiday is coming!
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．寒假即将来临，如何过一个有意义的寒假呢？请你以“How to have a meaningful winter holiday”为题写一篇演讲稿，向你的同学介绍一下你的计划。
学习 仔细计划每天，按时完成作业
运动 每天多运动，如……
兴趣 听音乐，练习吉他；多读书，常读侦探故事，因为……
活动 陪父母看场电影，喜欢陈思诚导演的电影《唐探 1900》（Detective Chinatown 1900），热爱破案，想要找出凶手
注意：
1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. To make it meaningful, I have some good ideas to share with you.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
5．为了让学生们的寒假生活有意义，你校英语报将举办“How to Spend Your Winter Holiday”的征文活动。你将向英语报投稿，征稿内容如下：
1. What activities will you do during the winter holiday Why (like learning a kind of instrument, watching a film, playing sports...) 2. During Chinese New Year, how will you pay a New Year call to your relatives By visiting them or shooting short videos Why 提示词：拜年 pay a New Year call；拍短视频 shoot short videos
要求：
1. 所写内容必须围绕上述问题进行表达，需适当发挥；
2. 词数：90词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
How to Spend Your Winter Holiday
Winter holiday is truly a wonderful time for relaxation and self-development. During the coming holiday,
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6．寒假即将到来，你校英语报刊正在开展以“A meaningful winter holiday”为主题的征文活动。请谈谈你的寒假计划，并写成一篇英语短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 健康生活 (如作息……)；
2. 规划学习 (如复习……)；
3. 发展兴趣 (……)。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：healthy (adj. 健康的)，timetable (n. 时间表)，review (v. 复习)，hobby (n. 爱好)
My plan for the winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. I’m happy to make a plan for it.
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7．新年假期，你的好朋友 Tony来到天津旅行。作为东道主，你带他领略了这座城市的独特魅力。请将你们三天的行程记录在你的 blog上，词数80词左右（开头所给文字不计数），可适当增加细节致情节完整。
第一天 天津站接人， 沿海河散步， 体验特色美食， 看夜景；
第二天 乘马车(horse-ride)，游览五大道(Five Great Avenues)，欣赏不同国家建筑；
第三天 去天津博物馆，展品众多，了解天津的历史和文化；送别 Tony
Tony的感受：人们友好、天津话有趣、期待再来……
Last week, it was time for the New Year holiday. My friend Tony came to visit me, and I took him around some famous places.
On the first day,
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8．假设你是李华，你收到了美国笔友 Steve的电子邮件， 请阅读邮件并回复。
FROM: Steve
TO: Li Hua
SUBJECT: Columbus Day
Dear Li Hua,
Here is America. We have Columbus Day on the second Monday in October every year. It’s a national holiday in the US. On that day, we make a boat and create sails to honor (纪念) Columbus, the great man who first discovered the land of America.
In your last email, you mentioned the Dragon Boat Festival, and said it was to honor somebody too. Who is the person When is it What do people usually do Can you tell me more about it
Yours,
Steve
注意：（1）邮件必须包含 Steve所要了解的所有内容（who, when, what等），并适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
（3）词数：约100。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Steve,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．元旦假期你和几个好朋友去参观了天津体育博物馆，请根据以下提示写一篇日记记录这次经历。
(1) 博物馆位于民园广场3层。
(2) 了解了天津与奥运会的故事。
(3) 看到很多天津优秀的运动员获得的好成绩。
(4) 在那拍摄了很多照片，并把它们发布到了学校网站。
(5) 这次经历给我带来的感受……
参考词汇: 天津体育博物馆 Tianjin Sports Museum
民园广场 Minyuan Square
运动员 athlete
要求：
(1) 词数: 80-100词左右。
(2) 开头已给出，不计入总数。
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Wednesday, 1st Jan. 2025 Sunny
During the New Year’s Day holiday, I went to
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10．你的英国笔友Bob想更多的了解我国的国庆节，请根据以下要点用英语写一封信，向他/她介绍我国的国庆节。
内容要点：
1. 我国的国庆节是在每年的10月1日，人们都期待它的到来；
2. 在国庆节当天清晨，天安门广场会举行升旗仪式；
3. 在国庆节期间，人们会外出旅游、购物、看电影等；
4. 学校会举行演讲比赛、征文比赛等活动庆祝国庆节；
5. 国庆节是庆祝的日子，也是回顾国家历史的重要日子：
提示： ①升旗仪式： flag-raising ceremony ②回顾历史： look back in history
注意：
1. 词数80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不能出现自己的真实信息。
Dear Bob,
How’s it going I’m writing to tell you some information about our country’s National Day. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Molly对中国的传统节日很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，给Molly写一封电子邮件，向她介绍重阳节这一中国传统节日。
提示：
1. 时间：农历九月初九；
2. 习俗：登高、赏菊、佩茱萸；
3. 意义：祈求健康好运，敬爱老人；
4. 感受…… (如亲近自然；家庭聚餐；提醒……关爱老人）
要求：
1. 邮件包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
3. 词数：不少于80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：chrysanthemum菊花；wear dogwood佩茱萸；pray for...祈求……
Dear Molly,
I’m glad that you’re so interested in Chinese culture. Let me tell you something about the Double Ninth Festival in China.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
12．假如你是李明，你的英国笔友 Jack 对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下提示给他回信。80 词左右。
提示：1. 中国的传统节日之一，已有 2000 多年的历史；
2. 为了纪念著名诗人屈原（honor the great poet）；
3. 中国南方有赛龙舟的习俗；
4. 家人团聚吃粽子和其他美食；
5. 有三天假期，可以外出旅游。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
Dear Jack,
How’s it going I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you.
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Yours,
Li Ming
13．上个月，三门成功举办了第三届三门中国青蟹节 (Crab Festival of Sanmen China)。假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息并结合你的所见所闻，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
Main Programs Activities people/I did My Feelings
Folk Art Tour admire Lion Dance, watch art shows
Local Product Fair enjoy local specials, learn sea culture
Bicycle Journey ride along the seaside
注意：
(1)短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)词数80-100；首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Last month, the third Crab Festival of Sanmen China was successfully held.
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14．寒假和春节即将来临，对如何安排假期活动，父母和孩子们各有各的想法。请根据下表提示，写一篇英语短文，阐述他们不同的看法，同时发表自己的观点。
Parents’ opinions Study ... reasons
Kids’ opinions Relaxing ...
Your opinions ...
注意：表格中三方的观点都不能少于两项，并需说明理由
要求：
1.词数80左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2.语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
How will you spend the coming winter vacation and the Spring Festival Parents and kids have their own opinions.
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15．时间飞逝，转眼一学期快要结束了，寒假也即将开始。请根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿，给同学们讲一讲应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假。
学习 计划好每一天；将作业列清单；复习所学内容； 多读书，更多了解世界；
休闲 听音乐、看电视、锻炼身体； 旅游……（至少一条）
志愿服务 ……（至少一条）
要求：
1. 词数：90词左右，文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
How to Have a Meaningful Winter Holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we make it a meaningful one I have some good ideas to share with you.
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Wish you all a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
16．初三上学期的生活即将结束，寒假即将到来。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封电子邮件给爸爸妈妈，总结本学期的收获，并制定出寒假计划。
本学期的收获 养成了良好的学习习惯，提高了英语成绩； 在学习上帮助同学，收获了友谊。
寒假计划 旅游：享受美食，放松心情； 阅读：了解中外文化； 运动：练习跑步，体测 (physical education test) (请你补充1-2点)
注意：
(1)书信应包括所有要点；
(2)词数80个左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)；
(3)不能透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear mum and dad,
How time flies and this term is going to end soon.
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I hope we can have a wonderful winter holiday together. I am looking forward to it!
Yours,
Li Hua.
17．假设你是李平，你的外国朋友Sam想了解除夕夜的食物和活动，以及中国的餐桌礼仪。请阅读以下邮件并回复。
To: Li Ping@
Subject: The New Year’s Eve dinner
Hi there, Li Ping! I’m happy that you invited me to the New Year’s Eve dinner with your family. Could you please tell me something about the food and activities And I’m a little nervous, as I know little about Chinese table manners. Could you give me a hand Many thanks! Sam
要求：(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
(2)词数80—100词(短文开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hi Sam,
Knowing that you will have dinner with us, I feel so excited. I’m sure we’ll have a good time.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Ping
18．请你根据下面表格的提示，以 “Great Changes in My Hometown” 为题用英语写一篇描述家乡所发生的变化。
过去 现在
房屋又小又旧，人们生活贫困。 房屋宽敞明亮，新建了许多高楼大厦，人们过上了幸福的生活。
环境污染严重，垃圾随处可见。 环境变好了，山更绿了， 水更清了，天更蓝了。
交通不方便，游客很少。 交通便捷，很多人拥有自己的汽车，很多游客来旅游。
写作要求：
1. 词数80词左右（标题和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯；
3. 文章中不得出现自己的真实信息。
Great Changes in My Hometown
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I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.
19．假设你是李华，根据以下内容要点，用英语写一篇日记，记述你和英国朋友Jack在端午节的所见所闻。
(1) 上午，你们在海河边观看龙舟赛。
(2) 30多支龙舟队、近500名选手参赛。
(3) 选手们奋力划船，观众们加油助威。
(4) 下午，你们学习包粽子 (Zongzi)。
(5) 能吃到自己包的粽子，Jack很开心。
(6) 你向Jack讲述了端午节的历史。
(7) Jack表示……
参考词汇：the Haihe River 海河 race 比赛 row 划
要求：
(1) 词数：80~100个。
(2) 短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Monday, Sunny
My friend Jack is interested in Chinese traditional festivals. Today is the Dragon Boat Festival. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
20．节日对大多数人来说意味着团聚与欢乐。然而却有这样一群人——他们在假日不能休息，默默坚守在自己的岗位上。他们为了大多数人的平安幸福而无私奉献，值得我们尊敬与学习。请根据以下提示，介绍一位我们身边的榜样。
(1)张健职业：警察；年龄：50；爱好：读书；
(2)对于张健，节日(festivals)意味着更多工作；
(3)节日意味着挑战，因为有更多的人需要帮助；
(4)他很少有时间和家人在一起，但是他从不后悔成为一名警察；
(5)有一次，他不得不连续工作20个小时，没有休息；
(6)我认为……
参考词汇：challenge 挑战
写作要求：
(1)不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
(2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
(3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。
(4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Zhang Jian is a policeman.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
An Unforgettable Winter Holiday
Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is an unforgettable winter holiday.
Personally, this winter holiday was quite different. Because of COVID-19, I had to study at home and take online classes. As a result, I found I was able to learn by myself. I also helped my parents with housework like cooking. And I learned how to cook well. Last but not least, I had more time to communicate with my parents. Therefore, I learned to get on better with them.
What I learned during this holiday will surely influence my future life. I will be more self-controlled and independent. And I am sure I will face difficulties and challenges more bravely in the future.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your time.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：包含寒假背景、具体经历及从中获得的成长感悟等要点，结构清晰，细节充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以演讲开场词引出主题，明确写作意图是分享难忘的寒假经历；
第二步，详细描述寒假经历：因疫情居家上网课，培养了自学能力，帮父母做家务学会做饭，有更多时间与父母交流、改善关系；
第三步，总结寒假收获对未来的影响，表明自己会更自律独立、勇敢面对困难挑战。
[亮点词汇]
①present my speech发表演讲
②as a result因此
③last but not least最后但同样重要的是
④communicate with与……交流
⑤face difficulties面对困难
[高分句型]
What I learned during this holiday will surely influence my future life. (what引导主语从句)
2．例文：
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we have a meaningful winter holiday I have some good ideas to share with you. First of all, plan our day carefully. I think we should make a list of all the homework we have. Then work out how much time we need to finish it all. This will give us an idea of how much spare time we have.
Reading can help us to learn more about the world. So after finishing our homework, we can read some books. Listening to different kinds of music is a good choice. Music can always make us feel relaxed. My favorite composer is Tan Dun, because his music makes me full of power.
If we get bored with staying at home all day, we can go to the cinema to watch some films. My favorite film star is Jackie Chan. His action films are very exciting.
In addition, don’t forget to help our parents to do some housework.
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态：应使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主;
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，点明主题——计划一个有意义的寒假；
第二步，根据题干的要点，讲述寒假计划，分别包括学习、运动、兴趣爱好和家庭活动等方面；
第三步，感谢聆听，给予祝福并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①make a list of列出……的清单
②work out计算出
③get bored with对……感到厌烦
[高分句型]
①I think we should make a list of all the homework we have. (I think+宾语从句)
②If we get bored with staying at home all day, we can go to the cinema to watch some films. (if引导条件状语从句)
3．
Dear Alex,
I’m glad winter holiday is coming! During the winter holiday, I often do many interesting activities with my family. Watching the Spring Festival Gala is one of our favorite activities. We laugh and enjoy the performances together, which always makes our family bonding stronger. Besides, we love playing games like card games and board games. It’s a great way to have fun and relax.
I like these activities because they bring our family closer and create lovely memories. They also allow us to spend quality time together, away from the busy routine. I feel extremely happy and content when doing these activities, as there is always a lot of joy and laughter involved.
One special thing about celebrating the winter holiday in China is the emphasis on family gatherings. To me, being with family is the most precious part of the holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题，介绍和家人的假期活动；
第二步，介绍喜欢这些活动的原因以及感受；。
第三步，谈论假期特别的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①away from远离
②have fun玩得开心
③the emphasis on强调
[高分句型]
①I feel extremely happy and content when doing these activities, as there is always a lot of joy and laughter involved.（原因状语从句）
②We laugh and enjoy the performances together, which always makes our family bonding stronger.（定语从句）
4．例文
How to have a meaningful winter holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. To make it meaningful, I have some good ideas to share with you. First, plan our days carefully. I think we should make a list of all the homework so that we can finish our homework in time. After finishing our homework, we can do more sports, such as running, playing basketball and football.
Listening to music is a good choice. Music can make us feel relaxed. I’ll practise playing the guitar. Reading more can help us to learn more about the world. I often read detective stories because they are full of mysteries. Besides, I plan to see a film with my parents. I like the film Detective Chinatown 1900 directed by Chen Sicheng. I love solving cases and want to find out the murderer.
Wish you all have a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：应使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，点明主题——计划一个有意义的寒假；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，讲述寒假计划，分别包括学习、运动、兴趣爱好和家庭活动等方面；
第三步，感谢聆听，给予祝福并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①so that以便
②find out找出
[高分句型]
①I think we should make a list of all the homework so that we can finish our homework in time.（宾语从句）
②I often read detective stories because they are full of mysteries.（原因状语从句）
5．例文
How to Spend Your Winter Holiday
Winter holiday is truly a wonderful time for relaxation and self-development. During the upcoming holiday, I plan to do some meaningful things.
Firstly, I plan to watch films with my friends and parents to unwind after a tiring semester. It’s a great opportunity to strengthen my relationships with them. Furthermore, I intend to read some books, as reading enriches my mind and broadens my wisdom. Participating in voluntary work is also beneficial, as it helps develop my community-serving ability.
During Chinese New Year, I will visit my relatives to pay a New Year call so that I can better convey my sincere wishes and love. Moreover, we Chinese cherish family gatherings during this time.
In summary, with these activities, I hope to have a colorful and meaningful winter holiday.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括2个问题提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山：引出寒假及假期计划；
第二步，具体阐述寒假计划，适当拓展；
第三步，着重讲述春节期间的计划；
第四步，总结并表达对寒假的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①in summary 总之
②plan to do sth. 计划做某事
[高分句型]
①During Chinese New Year, I will visit my relatives to pay a New Year call so that I can better convey my sincere wishes and love. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②Participating in voluntary work is also beneficial, as it helps develop my community-serving ability. (动名词作主语、as引导原因状语从句)
6．例文
My plan for the winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. I’m happy to make a plan for it. For a healthy life, I will make a timetable to work and rest. And I plan to do exercise for an hour each day. As for study, I will make a list. Homework comes first and then I will spend more time on the subjects I’m not good at. At the same time, I am going to develop my hobby—travelling. I think it’s a good idea to go to Harbin to see the snow world.
I’m looking forward to the holiday.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的寒假计划；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“健康生活、规划学习、发展兴趣”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth.计划做某事
②be good at擅长
③look forward to期望
[高分句型]
I think it’s a good idea to go to Harbin to see the snow world. (省略that的宾语从句)
7．例文：
Last week, it was time for the New Year holiday. My friend Tony came to visit me, and I took him around some famous places.
On the first day, after meeting him at the train station, we took a walk along Haihe River. The food we ate there was delicious. When the night fell, Tony and I enjoyed the beautiful view on the riverside. The next morning, we took a horse-ride to see one of the most famous places of interest in Tianjin—Five Great Avenues. There we appreciated different buildings from different countries. What’s more, we went to the Tianjin Museum to see the exhibitions and learned about the history as well as culture of Tianjin. I saw Tony off and waved goodbye to him.
According to Tony, the people in Tianjin are friendly. Besides that, they talk in a funny way. If he has the chance, he will certainly come again.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入主题，交代时间和人物，为下文的旅行经历做铺垫；
第二步，按时间顺序具体描写旅行的所见所闻；
第三步，书写结尾，表达Tony对天津的印象和再次来访的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①took sb. around带某人四处参观；
②places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
If he has the chance, he will certainly come again.（if引导条件状语从句）
8．Possible versions:
Dear Steve,
It’s great to hear from you. We celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month to honor Qu Yuan, a great poet. He died for his own country, the state of Chu in ancient China. We usually have one day off and different activities are held. One of the most interesting things is to make and eat Zongzi as the family get together. Zongzi, with its cute shape, tastes very delicious. We also watch the exciting Dragon Boat races on TV.
I hope this helps you learn enough about the festival. Write soon.
Yours
Li Hua
(99 words)
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：本文主要是介绍端午节的日期、由来以及如何庆祝端午节，可适当添加细节，完善作文内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍端午节的日期及由来；
第二步，介绍是如何庆祝端午节；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from...收到……的来信；
②one of...……之一；
③learn about...了解……
[高分句型]
I hope this helps you learn enough about the festival. (宾语从句)
9．例文
Wednesday, 1st Jan. 2025 Sunny
During the New Year’s Day holiday, I went to visit the Tianjin Sports Museum with some good friends. The museum is located on the third floor of Minyuan Square. It was an amazing experience.
At the museum, we learned about the stories of Tianjin and the Olympic Games. We saw many achievements of excellent Tianjin athletes. They have won many competitions and brought honor to our city. We felt very proud of them.We took many photos at the museum. I uploaded them to the school website after we came back. I want to share these great moments with my classmates.
This visit was very meaningful to me. I not only learned a lot about sports, but also felt the spirit of sportsmanship. I will work harder and never give up, just like those great athletes.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文，为日记。
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③人称：以第一人称书写。
④提示:根据提示问题介绍自己这次的旅游经历，注意要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍出行的地点，时间，人物。
第二步，介绍具体的活动内容;
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②feel proud of为……感到自豪
③take photos拍照
[高分句型]
I not only learned a lot about sports, but also felt the spirit of sportsmanship.(使用not only...but also...句型。)
10．例文
Dear Bob,
How’s it going I’m writing to tell you some information about our country’s National Day. Our National Day falls on October 1st every year, and everyone looks forward to it with excitement.
On the morning of National Day, there’s a grand flag-raising ceremony at Tiananmen Square. People gather to watch the flag being raised, feeling proud of their country. During the holiday, people often go on trips, shop, watch movies, and enjoy themselves. Schools celebrate National Day by holding speech contests, essay competitions, and other activities.
National Day is not only a day of celebration but also a time to look back in history and remember how our country has grown. I hope you find this information interesting.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，描述国庆节的习惯和庆祝活动；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括国庆节的日期、天安门广场的升旗仪式、国庆期间的公众活动、学校的庆祝活动以及国庆节的意义。考生需确保覆盖所有要点，并适当添加细节以增强文章的连贯性和丰富性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。在开头直接说明写信的目的，即向Bob介绍中国的国庆节；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从国庆节的日期开始介绍，提及人们对此节日的期待；详细描述天安门广场的升旗仪式，作为国庆节的重要活动之一；列举国庆节期间人们常见的庆祝方式，如旅游、购物、看电影等；介绍学校如何通过演讲比赛、征文比赛等活动来庆祝国庆节；强调国庆节不仅是庆祝的日子，也是回顾国家历史、铭记历史的重要时刻。
第三步，书写结语。可以表达对Bob未来有机会亲自体验中国国庆节活动的期待，或者邀请他/她有机会来中国感受这一节日的氛围。
[亮点词汇]
①falls on 落在
②grand 盛大的
③feel proud of 为……感到自豪
④look back in history 回顾历史
[高分句型]
①National Day is not only a day of celebration but also a time to look back in history and remember how our country has grown.（并列句，使用“not only...but also...”结构）
②People gather to watch the flag being raised, feeling proud of their country.（现在分词短语作伴随状语，描述人们观看升旗仪式时的情感）
11．例文
Dear Molly,
I’m glad that you’re so interested in Chinese culture. Let me tell you something about the Double Ninth Festival in China.
The Double Ninth Festival is celebrated on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month. On that day, people do something traditional to celebrate the festival. They usually go climbing, enjoy beautiful chrysanthemums and wear dogwood. The true meaning of this festival is praying for health and good luck. Another meaning behind the festival is to show love to the old people.
I love the Double Ninth Festival because it’s a chance for my family to get close to nature and have a big dinner together. It also reminds us to care for and love the old people.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍重阳节的时间、习俗和意义；
第二步，谈谈你对重阳节的感受，如亲近自然，家人团聚，对老人的爱和尊重等。
[亮点词汇]
①celebrate庆祝
②traditional传统的
③get close to nature亲近大自然
④remind提醒
[高分句型]
①The Double Ninth Festival is celebrated on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month. (被动语态)
②I love the Double Ninth Festival because it’s a chance for my family to get close to nature and have a big dinner together. (原因状语从句)
12．例文
Dear Jack,
How’s it going I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the traditional Chinese festivals with a history of more than 2,000 years. It is to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. In southern China, there is the custom of dragon boat racing. Families get together and eat zongzi and other delicious food. We have a three-day holiday and can go traveling. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is. I like it very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍端午节的来历以及人们的庆祝活动等方面的具体详情。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①more than超过
②get together聚会
③go traveling去旅行
④with a history of有……的历史
[高分句型]
①It is to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. (动词不定式作表语)
②How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is. (感叹句)
13．例文
Last month, the third Crab Festival of Sanmen China was successfully held. At the Folk Art Tour, I admired the Lion Dance and watched art shows. It was really exciting. At the Local Product Fair, I enjoyed local specials and learned about sea culture. I tasted many delicious foods. I was happy. During the Bicycle Journey, I rode along the seaside. The scenery was beautiful and I had a great time. I hope there will be more such festivals in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，内容必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍中国三门第三届螃蟹节成功举办。
第二步，介绍在螃蟹节上的所见所闻及经历。
[亮点词汇]
①admire欣赏
②have a great time过得愉快
③in the future 将来
[高分句型]
①I hope there will be more such festivals in the future.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
14．例文
How will you spend the coming winter vacation and the Spring Festival Parents and kids have their own opinions.
Parents think kids should study hard during the vacation. They want kids to take after-school classes to improve their grades. They also think kids should do some reading to enrich their knowledge. However, kids have different ideas. They hope to relax during the vacation. They want to travel to different places to enjoy the beauty of nature. They also look forward to spending more time with their friends.
In my opinion, we should have a balance between study and relaxation. We can make a study plan and finish our homework on time. At the same time, we can also take part in some outdoor activities to relax ourselves. For example, we can go hiking, play sports or visit museums. In this way, we can not only improve our study but also have a good time.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍父母和孩子对于如何安排假期活动的想法，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据表格内容详细介绍父母和孩子的想法和原因；
第三步，介绍自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①want sb. to do sth.想要某人做某事
②look forward to期待
③in my opinion以我来看
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①Parents think kids should study hard during the vacation. (宾语从句)
②They want to travel to different places to enjoy the beauty of nature. (动词不定式作目的状语)
15．例文
How to Have a Meaningful Winter Holiday
Dear classmates,
The winter holiday is coming. How can we make it a meaningful one I have some good ideas to share with you.
Firstly, plan our days well. I think we should make a list of all the homework we have to do and allocate the time needed for each task. We should also review what we have learned during the semester.
Secondly, we should read some books so that we can gain a better understanding of the world. Additionally, remember to have fun. Listen to music, watch some good shows, and stay active by playing sports or exercising. Perhaps we can even visit a new place nearby.
And don’t forget to help others. Volunteering at a local event or contributing to our community is a great way to learn new things and make a positive impact.
Wish you all a happy and meaningful winter holiday!
Thank you for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍寒假即将开始，引出话题：分享自己的想法；
第二步，依据表格提示，逐一介绍自己的想法，适当拓展；
第三步，书写总结，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①make a list 列清单
②make a positive impact 产生积极影响
[高分句型]
①We should also review what we have learned during the semester. (what引导的宾语从句)
②Secondly, we should read some books so that we can gain a better understanding of the world. (so that引导状语从句)
16．例文
Dear mum and dad,
How time flies and this term is going to end soon. I’m excited to share with you the progress I’ve made this semester and my plans for the upcoming winter vacation.
This semester has been quite productive. I’ve developed good study habits and my English grades have improved significantly. I also helped my classmates with their studies, which not only made my learning more enjoyable but also allowed me to forge some great friendships.
For the winter break, I have a few plans. I’m looking forward to traveling to new places, enjoying local cuisines and relaxing. I plan to read extensively to learn about different cultures both from China and abroad. What’s more, I will practice running to prepare for my physical education test. I also intend to learn a new skill, perhaps playing a musical instrument, to enrich my holidays. Lastly, I will spend quality time with family, especially with you.
I hope we can have a wonderful winter holiday together. I am looking forward to it!
Yours,
Li Hua.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 本文是一封电子邮件。
② 时态：介绍本学期收获时用“现在完成时”，介绍寒假计划时主要用“一般将来时”。
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，引出下文；
第二步，介绍本学期的收获；
第三步，介绍寒假计划并补充一到两点。
[亮点词汇]
①share with与……分享
②the upcoming winter vacation即将到来的寒假
③develop good study habits养成良好的学习习惯
④allow sb to允许某人去做……
⑤enjoy local cuisines享受当地美食
[高分句型]
①I’m excited to share with you the progress I’ve made this semester and my plans for the upcoming winter vacation. (省略that的定语从句)
②I also helped my classmates with their studies, which not only made my learning more enjoyable but also allowed me to forge some great friendships. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
17．Possible version:
Hi Sam,
Knowing that you will have dinner with us, I feel so excited. I’m sure we’ll have a good time.
On New Year’s Eve, celebrations begin with the reunion dinner. In the north the traditional main food is dumplings shaped like a crescent moon. In the south Niangao is also pretty popular. After dinner, we usually set off fireworks, chat and watch the Spring Festival Gala. Then children are given lucky money from adults as a lunar New Year gift.
As for the table manners, you are not supposed to point at anyone with your chopsticks. Also, it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into the food. Another thing is that you shouldn’t use your chopsticks to hit the bowl. Hope this will help you.
Li Ping
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，重点介绍中国除夕夜的食物和活动；
第三步，介绍餐桌礼仪。
【亮点词汇】①begin with开始
②set off fireworks放烟花
【高分句型】①Also, it’s impolite to stick your chopsticks into the food. （固定句型：It is +adj for sb to do sth）
18．例文：
Great Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very poor. The houses were small and old. People lived a hard life. What’s more, the environment was polluted seriously and garbage could be seen everywhere. Besides, the traffic was inconvenient and there were few tourists.
However, with the development of society, great changes have taken place now. There are many high-rise buildings and the houses are big and bright. People are living a happy life. The environment has become better. The mountains are greener, the water is clearer and the sky is bluer. Also, the traffic is convenient. Many people have their own cars and a lot of tourists come to visit. I’m proud of the great changes in my hometown.
I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，适当增加细节。考生结合自身经历，写出家乡的变化。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡过去的状况；
第二步，介绍现在家乡的变化；
第三步，最后展望家乡的未来。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②what’s more而且
③be proud of为……骄傲
[高分句型]
①There are many high-rise buildings and the houses are big and bright. (there be句型)
②I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future. (省略that的宾语从句)
19．例文
Monday, Sunny
My friend Jack is interested in Chinese traditional festivals. Today is the Dragon Boat Festival.
In the morning, we went to the Haihe River to watch the dragon boat race. There were more than 30 dragon boat teams and nearly 500 participants competing. The rowers paddled with all their strength while the audience cheered them on enthusiastically. In the afternoon, we learned how to make Zongzi. Jack was very happy to eat the Zongzi he made himself. I also told Jack about the history of the Dragon Boat Festival. Jack expressed his admiration for the rich cultural heritage of China and said he would love to experience more Chinese festivals in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据提示要点，描述与Jack在端午节的活动和感受，可适当增添细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍上午观看龙舟赛的情况，包括参赛队伍和观众的反应；
第二步，描述下午学习包粽子的经历和Jack的感受；
第三步，向Jack介绍端午节的历史以及Jack对中国文化的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①enthusiastically热情地
②cheer sb on为某人加油
③be happy to do sth高兴做某事
[高分句型]
①There were more than 30 dragon boat teams and nearly 500 participants competing. (there be句型)
②Jack was very happy to eat the Zongzi he made himself. (定语从句)
20．例文
Zhang Jian is a policeman. He is 50 years old and he likes reading very much. We all respect him because he has dedicated over half of his life to serving and protecting others as a police officer.
For him, holidays mean more work and challenges because there may be more people need help during holidays. Even though he seldom gets time to spend with his family, he never regrets becoming a policeman. On one occasion, he had to work for 20 hours without break.
I think that Officer Zhang Jian is a shining example in our everyday lives. His actions remind us of the importance of serving others.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：介绍一位我们身边的榜样，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍张健的职业，年龄，爱好，引出下文；
第二步，具体描述张健警官在假日的生活和工作，注意遵照所给提示，细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，表达自己对于张健警官的感情，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①dedicate 奉献
②on one occasion 有一次
③remind…of… 让某人想起某事
[高分句型]
①For him, holidays mean more work and challenges because there may be more people need help during holidays.（原因状语从句）
②Even though he seldom gets time to spend with his family, he never regrets becoming a policeman.（让步状语从句）
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