【单元考点培优】Unit 2 Saving the Earth 专题15 书面表达（含答案解析）-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优仁爱科普版Unit 2 Saving the Earth
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．地球是人类共同的家园，时代的一粒灰，落在个人头上就是一座山，没有人能独善其身。假如你叫李华，作为一名中学生，你应该为环境保护作出哪些贡献呢？请以“Let’s try our best to protect the environment”为题，向中学生发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，尽最大的努力保护环境！
要求：
1．文中不得出现人名、校名等相关信息；
2．100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends，
I’m a student of Grade 9 in a city. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters have happened on the earth and unusual weather has appeared very often. As students in this city, what should we do
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If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
2．污染是我们的大敌，环保是个永恒的话题。请根据方框中的提示写一篇英语短文。
Pollution problems What the students can do
1.来自工厂的污染遍及城市和乡村； 2.路上的汽车也导致污染； 3.污染致病。 1.建设绿色学校； 2.在班里收集可循环或再利用的废品； 3.在家中节约能源和做到回收再利用。
展望……
注意：
1.短文词数：80左右。
2.短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名或地名。
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3．假设你是李华，你很喜欢你所在的城市，但你发现它存在一些环境问题。请你根据下表中的提示信息给市长写一封信，分析造成这些问题的原因并提出改善建议。
Problem Reason Advice
white pollution too many plastic things... make laws, encourage...
river pollution waste water from factories... close down...
smog (雾霾) give off (排放)... public transportation...
要求：
(1)信件必须包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
(3)100词左右，开头和落款部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Mayor,
My name is Li Hua. I’m a university student here. I like this city, but I have found some environmental problems in it. That’s why I write this letter to you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．为倡导绿色环保新时尚，学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Go green at school”为题，根据表格中的内容要点写一份英语演讲稿，号召全体同学行动起来，共建美好校园。
Purposes develop a green lifestyle
Actions save resources 1. save paper: reuse the textbooks; use both sides of the paper; 2. save…: two examples; 3. save…: two examples;
reduce pollution 1. take care of the trees and flowers 2. …
Hopes ...
要求：
1. 短文必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
4. 词数：80~100词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示
Go green at school
Hi, guys.
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways.
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That’s all. Thank you!
5．创建绿色校园，从我做起。现在请你用英语写一篇短文，向你的校英语网站 “TEENS SPEAK OUT” 专栏投稿，结合你自己的校园生活经历和感受，提出你的建议。
要点：
1.创建绿色校园的重要性；
2.给出你的建议；
3.提出倡议。
要求：
(1)中心突出， 语意连贯， 层次清晰， 书写规范：
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名：
(3)词数80词左右。
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6．假设你是李辉（Li Hui），请以“My low-carbon life”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，向学校英语俱乐部投稿，介绍你践行低碳生活的经历和感悟，词数80~100词。
提示：
1. 对低碳生活的看法。
2. 日常做法：至少包括出行方式、家庭节能等方面；
3. 发出号召。
注意：
1.词数为80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
My name is Li Hui. I’m trying my best to live a low-carbon life. A low-carbon life is
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7．为建设生态一流，绿色低碳的海南自贸港，目前“美丽海南我行动”公益计划正热烈进行中。为了响应号召，提高学生的环保意识，某校英语报Protect the environment栏目将针对以下海报征稿。假如你是该校学生，请按以下要求写一篇英语稿。
内容包括：
1. What are the environment problems
2. What can we do to protect the environment
注意：
1.行文中必须包含图中所给提示内容，并做适当拓展；
2.语言表达准确，语意通顺，连贯；
3.词数100词左右。（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：dustbin垃圾桶
Build a green Hainan
To build a green Hainan, it’s important for us to protect the environment, but some pollution problems are still serious.
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8．科技创新，就像撬动地球的杠杆，总能创造令人意想不到的奇迹。为鼓励青少年探索，你校英语报正发起“I want to invent ________”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下内容要求，写一篇短文参赛。
内容：
1. What do you want to invent
2. Why do you want to invent it
3. What can it be used to do
要求：
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名：
4. 100词左右 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)
I want to invent ________________
As we know, great inventions have brought great changes to our life, but we still need creative ideas to make our world better.
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9．为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，学校开展了“绿色城市，健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City, the Healthy Life”为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。
注意：（1）词数80-100；
（2）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
主题 绿色城市，健康生活
做法 骑车出行，减少空气污染； 垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁； 多种树木，保护自然环境。
你的观点 ……（至少2条）
The Green City, the Healthy Life
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. In order to have a healthy life, it’s our duty to help build a green city.
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10．假如你班要开展一次以“环境保护”为主题的英语班会，请你以班长的身份准备一份发言稿，倡导大家作为一名中学生，从身边小事做起，在日常生活中注意环境保护。
要点提示：
1. 每天步行或者坐校车上学；
2. 离开教室时关灯；
3. 不用水时，记住关水龙头 (tap)；
4. 带自己的购物袋去超市。
5...
How to protect our environment
The environmental problem is attracting more and more attention. As students, we can do a lot to protect our environment.
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11．How to Protect the Rainforests
提示：热带雨林在调节全球气候，防止水土流失，净化空气，保证全球生态循环有序进行等方面发挥着重要的作用。然而，由于人类乱砍滥伐和过度开荒，有很大一部分热带雨林已经遭受了严重的破坏。请以“How to Protect the Rainforests”为题，写一篇短文，谈一谈我们应该如何保护热带雨林。
要求：
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2.文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名等，否则以零分计；
3.请将短文书写在答题卡上，写在试题卷上无效。
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12．近年来，污染问题困扰整个世界。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈对污染问题的看法。请从water pollution，land pollution和air pollution选择一个话题，写一篇文章。题目已经给出，词数80—100词。
内容包括：1. 你认为哪种污染最严重；
2. 列出此项污染的具体现象及引发污染的原因；
3. 你有哪些保护环境，减少此项污染的建议，并发出倡议。（至少2个建议）
We should do something to protect the environment
With the development of science and technology, our life is becoming better and better. However, the environment problems are still serious.
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13．随着社会文明的不断进步，请以“How to protect the environment ”为题写一篇英语短文。环境污染日趋严重，为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢
要求：
1. 短文词数不少于 80词；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
How to protect the environment
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14．随着社会的发展，环境污染越来越严重，保护环境迫在眉睫。保护环境是每个人不可推卸的责任，请你根据以下要点，以 “Protect our environment” 为题，从 “Reduce. Reuse. Recycle”三个方面写一篇关于如何保护环境的文章。
要点：
1. 减少：减少意思是“少用”，不要浪费东西，这节约钱并造成更少的污染。
2. 重复利用：重复利用的意思是“再使用”，尽可能长时间地使用东西。
3. 回收利用：“将某件东西变成别的东西再利用”。
4. 我们不能期待立竿见影的变化，但是让我们从今天就开始采取这些简单的措施吧，以便我们将来为我们的子孙拯救世界。
注意：
1. 文章词数：100 左右。
2. 文章必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，文章中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
3. 文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Protect our environment
With the development of the society, there is more and more pollution.
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15．为了改善市民的居住环境，提升城市形象，重庆实施了“蓝天行动”，“碧水行动”和“宁静行动”。作为一中学生，应该为这些行动做什么事呢？请根据提示写一封倡议书。
注意事项：
1. 80—120词，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文章中不能出现真实姓名和地名。
参考信息：
Blue Sky Movement Clear Water Protection Noise Control
throw rubbish around, spit everywhere, by public transportation, protect the environment plant trees, walk on grass, protect water resource from pollution, save water be polite, make noise in public, disturb others for one’s own reasons
Recently, Chongqing has taken many measures to protect the environment in our daily life
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16．绿色环保，人人有责。假如你是中学生李冰，你的英国笔友Jason对你的“绿色生活方式”很感兴趣，来信向你询问具体情况。请你给他写一封回信，介绍你的绿色生活方式（lifestyle）。
提示问题：
1. Why is green lifestyle necessary
2. What do you usually do in the daily life to develop a green lifestyle
3. What influence docs your green lifestyle bring to you
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰；
4. 词数为100词左右。
Dear Jason,
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Yours,
Li Bing
17．在外旅游时，我们时常会看到一些不文明行为。某英文刊物旅游专栏正以“Traveling in Good Manners” 为题，向广大学生征稿，倡导大家文明旅游。请你结合内容提示，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
内容提示：
（1）列举人们旅游时的不文明行为（至少两点）；
（2）提出个人观点及建议；
（3）倡导文明旅游。
写作要求：
（1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
（2）词数90~100词，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular.
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18．现在环境污染尤其是空气污染越来越严重，近年来我国多地出现雾霾 (smog) 天气，更引发了人们对环境污染的关注。请你围绕这一主题，谈谈家乡存在的问题，作为中学生该如何保护环境。
要求：
1.要点明确，条理清晰，语句通顺。
2.词数100左右。
参考信息：Reasons: in the past, fresh air, clean water, at present, chemical factories, waste air and waste water
Measures: walk or ride a bike, reuse the paper, not throw rubbish, turn off
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19．假如你是李华，是你校英文报小记者，上周日你校开展了以“环境保护”为主题的实践活动。请你根据以下提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，报道此次活动。
When 8:00 a.m.
Where The West Hill Park
How By bus
Who Head teacher Mr. Wang, and all the students in Grade 9
Activities 1. Collect the rubbish; 2. Give a speech about how to sort (分类) rubbish; 3. ...
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
Last Sunday, our school carried out practical activities with the theme of “Environmental Protection”.
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20．为了倡导环境保护，你校English Club将以“Going Green Starts with Small Things”为主题，组织全校英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，呼吁大家节约能源，保护环境。
注意：1. 短文须包含所有提示信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；4. 不得抄袭试卷原文。
To protect our environment Reduce pollution on foot, …
Save energy use air conditioners less, …
Reuse things plastic bags, …
参考词汇：honor n. 荣幸
Going Green Starts with Small Things
Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to make a speech here.
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Let’s act now to protect our environment!
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1．例文
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends，
I’m a student of Grade 9 in a city. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters have happened on the earth and unusual weather has appeared very often. As students in this city, what should we do
Firstly, we need to spread something to protect our environment. For example, we can give talks on how important the environment is. It’s bad for our health to live in a bad environment. Secondly, we’re supposed to save water and energy in our daily life. Thirdly, in order to reduce air pollution, it’s better to go to school by bus, by bike or on foot. Fourthly, the garbage can be divided into four categories: recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste. Before putting the garbage into the dustbins, we should learn how to sort it. And we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags.
If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题型：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：用一般现在时；
③提示：写作话题已给出，考生应注意描述的全面性，向中学生们发出倡议，大家一起为环境保护做贡献。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，注意衔接好下文。
第二步，从不同方面介绍怎样保护环境。
第三步，呼吁大家抓紧时间行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②in our daily life在日常生活中
③instead of 代替
[高分句型]
①We can give talks on how important the environment is. (使用宾语从句)
②Fourthly, the garbage can be divided into four categories: recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste.(使用被动语态)
2．One possible version:
Pollution is our great enemy. In some places, pollution from factories spreads over cities and villages. Cars on the roads cause pollution as well. It makes people ill, and may even kill them.
As students, we can make our school a green school. We can collect waste which can be recycled or used again in our class. We can also save energy and recycle at home.
Though pollution is heavy now, I don’t think it’s hopeless. If everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据要点提示写明污染的来源、危害以及作为学生能做什么。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写明污染的来源；
第二步，具体阐述作为学生，减少污染的措施有哪些；
第三步，书写结语，展望未来。
[亮点词汇]
①enemy 敌人
②save energy 节约能源
③hopeless 绝望的
④start to do 开始做某事
[高分句型]
①We can collect waste which can be recycled or used again in our class. (which引导的定语从句，情态动词的被动语态)
②Though pollution is heavy now, I don’t think it’s hopeless. (前一句为though引导的让步状语从句，后一句为that省略的宾语从句)
③If everyone starts to do something, the world will be saved. (If引导的条件状语从句)
3．例文
Dear Mr Mayor,
My name is Li Hua. I’m a university student here. I like this city, but I have found some environmental problems in it. That’s why I write this letter to you.
First, white pollution is a serious problem in our city. People use too many things made of plastic. I think the government should make laws to limit the use of them and encourage people not to use plastic products. Second, the river is heavily polluted. Some factories pour waste water into the river. I suggest that the government should close down these factories. Finally, smog is also becoming a big problem in our city. There are more and more cars that give off too much waste gas on the road. I think the government should encourage people to use public transportation.
I hope the environment in our city can become better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据写作要求，适当分析原因并提出建议，可适当添加细节，突出写作重点，注意不要遗漏给出信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己，表明写信的目的（已给出）；
第二步，提出自己发现的环境问题，并分析原因然后给出建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己希望自己城市越来越好的心愿。
[亮点词汇]
①make laws 制定法律
②limit the use限制使用
③encourage sb to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
④be heavily polluted被严重污染
[高分句型]
①People use too many things made of plastic.（过去分词做后置定语）
②There are more and more cars that give off too much waste gas on the road. （that引导的定语从句）
4．参考范文
Go green at school
Hi, guys.
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways.
First, we can save paper by reusing the textbooks and using both sides of the paper. We should save water by taking short showers and reuse water. We should save electricity. Turn off the lights when we leave the room. Second, we have polluted the land, the river and the air. So we should reduce pollution. We can choose the public transport and use the cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should develop a green lifestyle. We should take care of the trees and flowers.
If we take good care of our earth today, it will be more beautiful tomorrow. I hope we can go green at school.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：按照写作要点逐点展开叙述，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍主题；
第二步，介绍节约能源和减少污染的具体做法；
第三步，号召大家行动起来保护地球并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①by doing sth通过做某事
②develop a green lifestyle养成环保的生活方式
[高分句型]
①Turn off the lights when we leave the room. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If we take good care of our earth today, it will be more beautiful tomorrow. (if引导的条件状语从句)
5． Hello, everyone. It’s our duty to make our school green. What should we do Here is my advice.
First, we should save water and electricity. Second, saving paper is necessary. All the used textbooks should be recycled. Third, we should plant more trees to make our school more beautiful. Last but not least, don’t litter everywhere, or it will pollute our environment.
If everyone can make a contribution to our school, it will be better and better.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：按照要点提示进行写作，结合自己的校园经历和感受，提出建议，可适当添加细节，突出写作的重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，结合文章写作目的，直接开门见山，介绍建设绿色校园，人人有责。由“我们该做什么，这里是我的建议”引出下文；
第二步，正文部分，阐述如何做，给出具体建议；
第三步，表达感受，如果每个人都有所贡献，校园会越来越好。
【亮点词汇】①make a contribution to做贡献
②Last but not least 最后
③better and better越来越好
【高分句型】①All the used textbooks should be recycled.（含情态动词的被动语态）
②If everyone can make a contribution to our school, it will be better and better.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．例文
My name is Li Hui. I’m trying my best to live a low-carbon life. A low-carbon life is not only good for the environment but also helps us save energy and money.
I usually go to school by bike instead of by car. It’s good exercise and doesn’t produce harmful gases. At home, I always remember to turn off the lights and electrical appliances when I’m not using them. I also use energy-saving bulbs. When taking a shower, I try to keep it short to save water.
I think everyone should take part in living a low-carbon life. Let’s start from small things and make our world a better place.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，谈谈自己对低碳生活的看法；
第二步，介绍在日常生活中，自己是如何践行低碳生活方式的；
第三步，号召大家行动起来，让我们的世界变得更美好。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do sth. 尽力做某事
②instead of 代替，而不是
③turn off 关闭
④take a shower 淋浴
⑤take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①A low-carbon life is not only good for the environment but also helps us save energy and money.（not only...but also连接的并列句）
②I think everyone should take part in living a low-carbon life.（宾语从句）
7．例文：
Build a green Hainan
To build a green Hainan, it’s important for us to protect the environment, but some pollution problems are still serious. First, the air and water are often polluted because factories release chemicals. We can ride bikes instead of driving cars, which will reduce air pollution. Another problem is too much garbage, so we should use dustbins to dispose of our trash properly. When we reduce, reuse, and recycle, we help lessen the waste. Let’s act together to make our environment clean and healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为一般现在时态；
③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明写作主题，保护环境很重要；
第二步，描述日常行为导致的问题，包括空气、水的污染和如何处理垃圾问题；
第三步，提出改善措施，呼吁大家共同爱护环境。
[亮点词汇]
①ride bikes骑自行车
②instead of代替
③too much太多
[高分句型]
①The air and water are often polluted because factories release chemicals.（原因状语从句)
②When we reduce, reuse, and recycle, we help lessen the waste.(时间状语从句)
③Let’s act together to make our environment clean and healthy.(祈使句)
8．例文
I want to invent a smart box
As we know, great inventions have brought great changes to our life, but we still need creative ideas to make our world better. For example, I have always dreamed of inventing “A Smart Box”.
Nowadays, how to keep public places clean and tidy is still a problem. The Smart Box I want to invent can help solve this problem. The Smart Box looks like a common one on the street, so it doesn’t cost too much. And it can get energy from the sun and the wind. It can collect and hold rubbish on its own. As soon as people litter around, the smart box will clean it up at once. At the same time, the smart box can speak to the one who throws away the rubbish—No Littering.
My invention can work well. Do you think so
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你想发明什么；
第二步，介绍为什么想发明这个东西；
第三步，最后介绍这个发明物可以用来做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①as soon as一……就……
②at the same time同时
③clean up打扫
[高分句型]
①At the same time, the smart box can speak to the one who throws away the rubbish—No Littering. (who引导的定语从句)
②As soon as people litter around, the smart box will clean it up at once. (as soon as引导的时间状语从句)
9．One possible version:
The Green City, the Healthy Life
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. In order to have a healthy life, it’s our duty to help build a green city.
We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.
In my opinion, I will try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can save water by taking shorter showers. Secondly, I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room. In a word, everyone should play a part in protecting the environment. I hope our city will become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题：说明建设绿色城市的重要性及必要性；
第二步，描述做法：骑车出行减少污染；垃圾入箱保持整洁；多种树木保护环境；
第三步，个人观点：附加2条以上建议，如节约用水，使用节能电器等。
[亮点词汇]
①had better do最好做某事
②turn off关闭
[高分句型]
①I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope our city will become better and better.（宾语从句）
10．例文
How to protect our environment
The environmental problem is attracting more and more attention. As students, we can do a lot to protect our environment. Here is some advice.
First, walk or take the school bus. By walking or taking the school bus, we can reduce the number of cars on the road, which helps to lower pollution levels. Second, turn off the lights. When we leave a room, it’s important to turn off the lights. This small action can save a lot of energy and reduce our carbon footprint. Third, remember to turn off the tap when it’s not in use. Water is a vital resource, and conserving it is crucial for our planet. Fourth, use your own shopping bag. Instead of using plastic bags, bring your own reusable bag when you go shopping. This helps to reduce plastic waste and is better for the environment.
By following these simple steps, we can all contribute to a healthier and cleaner environment. Let’s work together to make a difference!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 本文是一篇讲稿。
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，表明有一些环保建议，引出下文；
第二步，介绍日常生活中保护环境的行为，包括走路去上学、离开房间要关灯、关水龙头以及自己带购物袋等；
第三步，总结，并呼吁大家一起保护环境。
[亮点词汇]
①the number of……的数量
②Instead of代替，而不是
③make a difference产生影响
[高分句型]
①By walking or taking the school bus, we can reduce the number of cars on the road, which helps to lower pollution levels. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Instead of using plastic bags, bring your own reusable bag when you go shopping. (when引导的时间状语从句)
11．例文
How to Protect the Rainforests
Tropical rain forest plays an important role in regulating global climate, preventing soil erosion, purifying air and ensuring the orderly progress of global ecological cycle. So, it is necessary for us to protect them. Here are some suggestions to protect the rainforests.
Firstly, we should show and tell people about the importance of protecting the rainforests by some channels, such as advertisement, broadcast and school education etc. Secondly, we should do anything we can. When we eat, we can’t use disposable chopsticks or paper cups. We should use less paper and make sure not to waste paper. Thirdly, the government should also publish some regulations to protect the rainforests.
In a word, it is our duty to protect the rainforests. Let us try our best to leave a green home together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述热带雨林的重要作用，开门见山，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“人人们了解保护热带雨林的重要性”、“做我们力所能及的的事情”以及“政府应该发布相关法律法规”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，倡导大家一起保护热带雨林。
[亮点词汇]
①plays an important role in在……中发挥重要作用
②global climate全球气候
③soil erosion水土流失
④disposable一次性的
⑤make sure确保
⑥indiscriminately任意地
⑦In a word换言之
[高分句型]
①Here are some suggestions to protect the rainforests. (倒装句)
②When we eat, we can’t use disposable chopsticks or paper cups. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③Let us try our best to leave a green home together. (祈使句)
12．例文
We should do something to protect the environment
With the development of science and technology, our life is becoming better and better. However, the environmental problems are still serious. Among them, air pollution is the most severe. In many cities, the air is filled with smoke and harmful gases from factories and cars. This pollution is mainly caused by the burning of fossil fuels. To reduce air pollution, we should encourage the use of public transportation and promote clean energy like solar and wind power. We should also plant more trees as they can clean the air.
Let’s work together to make our world a cleaner and healthier place.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你认为哪种污染最严重；
第二步，介绍此项污染的具体现象及引发污染的原因；
第三步，最后给出保护环境，减少此项污染的建议，并发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
① the most severe最严重的
② the burning of fossil fuels化石燃料的燃烧
③ solar and wind power太阳能和风能
[高分句型]
To reduce air pollution, we should encourage the use of public transportation and promote clean energy like solar and wind power.（动词不定式表目的）
13．例文
How to protect the environment
Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer. It’s time to take steps to protect the environment.
Firstly, save water. Water is the source of life, so it’s very important for us to save water. Not only should we protect drinking water, but also should we make full use of it. Secondly, save electricity. Don’t forget to turn off the lights or other electric machines when we finish working. Thirdly, save forests. Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead.
If we can try our best to save resources, I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要介绍如何保护环境，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述如何保护环境；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take steps采取措施
②not only...but also不仅……而且
③make full use of充分利用
④turn off关闭
[高分句型]
①Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.（让步状语从句）
②Not only should we protect drinking water, but also should we make full use of it. （倒装句）
14．例文
Protect our environment
With the development of the society, there is more and more pollution. Though we are young, we can still do something to help. Here are some ideas for you. Remember these three words: Reduce, Reuse and Recycle.
Reduce means “use less”. Don’t waste things. This saves money and reduces pollution and waste going into the environment. Reuse means “use again”. Use things for as long as possible. When we buy things, make sure that they last a long time. We should look after them so that they will last, and we should repair them. Recycle means “change things into something else”. Although it takes energy to change something into something else, it’s better than throwing things away or burning them.
We cannot expect immediate changes, but let’s take these simple measures from today in order to save the world for our future generations.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中给出的关键信息，写一篇关于如何保护环境的文章。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍保护环境迫在眉睫；
第二步，从 “Reduce. Reuse. Recycle”三个方面介绍该如何保护环境；
第三步，呼吁大家行动起来保护环境，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①as long as possible尽可能长的时间
②make sure确保
③look after照顾
④immediate立刻
[高分句型]
①When we buy things, make sure that they last a long time.（时间状语从句）
②Although it takes energy to change something into something else, it’s better than throwing things away or burning them.（让步状语从句）
15．例文
Recently, Chongqing has taken many measures to protect the environment in our daily life, such as the Blue Sky Movement, Clear Water Protection, and Noise Control. As middle school students, we should actively participate in these actions.
Firstly, let’s use public transportation more often to reduce air pollution. Secondly, avoid throwing rubbish and spitting everywhere; it will help keep our city clean. Moreover, do not walk on grass, and remember to save water to protect our water resources. Planting trees is also a good way to support the environment. Finally, be polite and avoid making noise in public places, so as not to disturb others.
Let’s work together to make our city a better place to live!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍有哪些活动；
第二步，根据提示具体介绍应该怎么做；
第三步，最后表达总结。
[亮点词汇]
① such as比如
② avoid doing sth避免做某事
③ remember to do sth记得做某事
[高分句型]
①Moreover, do not walk on grass, and remember to save water to protect our water resources.（祈使句）
②Planting trees is also a good way to support the environment.（动名词短语作主语）
16．例文：
Dear Jason,
Thank you for your interest in my green lifestyle. A green lifestyle is necessary because it helps to protect our environment and conserve natural resources for future generations. In my daily life, I take several steps to maintain a green lifestyle. I always bring a reusable bag when shopping, use public transportation or a bike instead of a car, and switch off lights and appliances when they are not in use. I also try to reduce waste by recycling and reusing items whenever possible.
Living a green lifestyle positively influences me by making me more aware of my environmental impact, and it inspires me to encourage others to adopt sustainable habits. I feel healthier and more responsible by knowing that my actions contribute to a better planet.
Yours,
Li Bing
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述绿色生活的必要性；
第二步，阐述如何做到绿色生活，形成绿色生活方式；
第三步，阐述绿色生活带来的影响，书写结语，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of代替
②switch off lights关灯
③be aware of意识到
[高分句型]
①A green lifestyle is necessary because it helps to protect our environment and conserve natural resources for future generations. （原因状语从句）
②I feel healthier and more responsible by knowing that my actions contribute to a better planet. （宾语从句）
17．例文：
Traveling in Good Manners
Nowadays traveling is getting more and more popular. However, some people don’t behave themselves in tourist attractions when traveling.
For example, some travelers throw rubbish everywhere. It’s not only impolite but also harmful to the environment around us. We should put rubbish into dustbins. Some of the travelers like picking flowers in a park. It should also be stopped because flowers are beautiful and we should protect them. We can put up signs beside the flowers to remind travelers not to pick them.
Let’s take action right now and travel with good manners.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，列举两个不文明的行为进行介绍；
第二步，介绍自己对不文明行为的看法并给出改正建议；
第三步，号召大家文明旅行。
[亮点词汇]
①behave themselves 举止得体
②put rubbish into dustbins 把垃圾扔进垃圾桶
[高分句型]
①However, some people don’t behave themselves in tourist attractions when traveling.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Let’s take action right now and travel in good manners.（祈使句）
18．例文：
It’s Important to Protect the Environment
Now pollution is getting worse and worse, especially air pollution. In recent years, smog weather has appeared in many places in China. So more and more people have started to realize the importance of the environment.
In my hometown, the air was fresh in the past and the water was clean. It was pleasant for us to work and study. But at present, we can hardly see the blue sky. There are too many chemical factories. They produce much waste air and waste water. We know it’s our duty to protect the environment.
As a student, we should do what we can to protect the environment. We can walk or ride a bike to school. We can reuse the paper and try not to throw the rubbish away. We can turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms. In a word, we should try our best to protect the environment. We believe we can have a beautiful world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：考试应紧扣环境保护这一主题进行发挥，不要遗漏要点，表达清楚。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，强调保护环境的重要性；
②第二步，描述家乡存在的环境问题；
③第三步，介绍中学生保护环境的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①start to do sth.开始做某事
②turn off the lights关灯
③try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力做某事
④in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①As a student, we should do what we can to protect the environment.（what引导的宾语从句）
②We can turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms.（when引导的时间状语从句）
19．例文
Last Sunday, our school carried out practical activities with the theme of “Environmental Protection”. All the students in Grade 9 and the head teacher Mr. Wang took part in it. At 8 o’clock in the morning, they went to the West Hill Park by bus. As soon as they arrived at the park, they started collecting rubbish. After finishing collecting, Mr. Wang gave a speech to the students on how to sort rubbish. Then, students worked together to make a poster to spread the knowledge of environmental protection.
Through this activity, students have gained a deeper understanding of protecting the environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍参加活动的人员、时间、地点、交通方式等；
第二步，具体阐述活动内容；
第三步，书写结语，总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②as soon as一……就……
③gain a deeper understanding of获得更深的理解
④environmental protection环境保护
[高分句型]
As soon as they arrived at the park, they started collecting rubbish.（as soon as引导时间状语从句）
20．例文
Going Green Starts with Small Things Hello, everyone! It’s my honor to make a speech here. Everyone can make small changes in lifestyle and make a difference to reduce pollution and waste.
First, you’d better ride a bike or walk to school, because it’s a green way which doesn’t pollute the air. Second, saving electricity, water and food is necessary. You should turn off the light when going out. Turning off the tap when you brush your teeth can save a lot of water. We should use air conditioners less. What’s more, don’t use plastic bags when you go shopping. Plastic is harmful to the environment.
Let’s act now to protect our environment!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、具体阐述写作内容，从减少污染、节约能源和再利用这三个方面介绍如何保护环境；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make a difference起作用；有影响
②turn off关掉
③what’s more另外
④is harmful to…对……有害
[高分句型]
First, you’d better ride a bike or walk to school, because it’s a green way which doesn’t pollute the air.(which引导的定语从句)
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