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新高考英语应用文写作与读后续写微技能 1
Ⅰ.应用文专练(建议信——校园生活)
假定你是李华,你的朋友Jimmy即将迈入高中生活,请你给他写一封邮件给他一些建议,内容包括:
(1)高中前的现状;(2)高中生活的建议。
第一步 字斟句酌 优化表达
①得知你即将进入高中,我迫不及待地想和你交流我的想法。(senior high, exchange)
②随着开学日的临近,你可能既兴奋又紧张。(with复合结构)
Learning that you will enter senior high, I can’t wait to exchange my ideas with you.
With the school day approaching, you may be very excited but nervous.
③这是多么真实啊! (感叹句)
④你对即将到来的新校园生活充满好奇。(curious, campus)
⑤你担心如何应对学习中更多的挑战,这会给你带来很大的压力。(deal with,challenge,put...under pressure,非限制性定语从句)
How true it is!
You are curious about the upcoming new campus life.
You are worried how to deal with more challenges in study,which will put you under great pressure.
⑥虽然有时会恐慌,但你应该冷静下来,对自己有信心。(in panic,calm,confident,状语从句的省略)
⑦你应该自愿参加各种活动,通过这些活动,你会明白如何努力成为最好的自己。(volunteer,various,struggle,介词+关系代词引导定语从句)
Although in panic sometimes, you should calm down and be confident about yourself.
You should volunteer to take part in various activities, through which you will understand how to struggle to be a best self.
⑧在我看来,只有这样我们才有机会在高中时期展现出精彩的表现。 (view,opportunity,performance,倒装句)
From my point of view/In my view,only in this way can we have the opportunity to have a wonderful performance in senior high.
第二步 恰当过渡 完美成文(使用恰当的过渡衔接词连句成篇)
Dear Jimmy,
Learning that you will enter senior high, I can’t wait to exchange my ideas with you.
With the school day approaching,you may be very excited but nervous.How true it is!On the one hand, you are curious about the upcoming new campus life.On the other hand,you are worried how to deal with more challenges in study,which will put you under great pressure.Although in panic sometimes, you should calm down and be confident about yourself.Furthermore,you should volunteer to take part in various activities, through which you will understand how to struggle to be a best self.
From my point of view/In my view,only in this way can we have the opportunity to have a wonderful performance in senior high.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.续写微技能
1.续写语料积累
单 词 campus n. 校园
curious adj. 好奇的
frightened adj. 受惊的,害怕的
eagerness n. 热切,渴望
breathe v. 呼吸
panic n. 恐慌
pressure n. 压力
单 词 confident adj. 自信的
schedule n. 计划表,进度表,日程表
opportunity n. 机会
improve v. 改善,改进
anticipate v. 期待
词 块 go all out 全力以赴,竭尽全力
butterflies in one’s stomach 情绪紧张,心里发慌
in panic 惊慌地
look forward to (兴奋地)期待,盼望
around the corner 即将发生
词 块 make the most of 充分利用
a hint of nervousness 一丝紧张
ease the tension 缓解紧张
a sense of belonging 归属感
fade away 消退,消失
靓 句 1.The thought of entering a new grade, with unfamiliar teachers and classmates, sent butterflies fluttering in my stomach.
一想到要进入一个新的年级,和不熟悉的老师和同学在一起,我心里就紧张得直打颤。
2.The students begin to explore every corner with curiosity.
学生们开始好奇地探索每一个角落。
3.As they look ahead, they are filled with a sense of excitement and determination, ready to embrace whatever challenges and opportunities come their way.
当他们展望未来时,他们充满了兴奋和决心,随时准备迎接任何挑战和机遇。
2.场景片段训练(新生入学的心理活动:兴奋、紧张→充满希望)
① (with复合结构),I entered the school gate, ②___________________________________________________ (独立主格结构). My heart was beating fast, as if it wanted to escape the chest.③ (动词-ing形式作状语), I opened my eyes wide, taking in every new sight with curiosity.Stepping into the classroom, ④ (倒装句). But soon, ⑤ .
With butterflies in my stomach
excitement mixed with a hint of nervousness welling up inside
Looking at the new campus
so terrified was I that I lowered my head
the warm greetings and friendly smiles of classmates eased the tension
⑥ (强调句型), and the fear faded away.Now, ⑦
(动词-ed形式作状语), I started my new journey.
It was at that time that a sense of belonging started to grow
filled with anticipation
我忐忑不安地走进校门,兴奋中夹杂着一丝紧张。我的心怦怦直跳,好像要从胸腔里逃出来似的。看着新的校园,我睁大了眼睛,好奇地看着每一个新景象。走进教室,我吓得低下了头。但很快,同学们热情的问候和友好的微笑缓解了紧张的气氛。就是在那个时候,一种归属感开始滋长,恐惧逐渐消失。现在,我满怀期待,开始了我的新旅程。