【单元考点培优】Unit 1 Wise men in history 专题15 书面表达-2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教牛津版（含答案解析）

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2025-2026学年九年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教牛津版Unit 1 Wise men in history
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假设你是李华，你校英语校刊Teens Junior发起“运动小达人” (the Sports Talent) 的评选活动。请你阅读以下评选要求，结合自身经历，用英语写一封邮件自我推荐。
The Sports TalentWe are looking for the Sports Talent in our school. Would you like to be one of them Please tell us how you exercise. Who do you take exercise with What benefits (good points) has exercise brought you Who’s your sports hero What’s your exercise plan for the future Welcome to join us!
1.短文须包括表格内的所有要点，并适当发挥；
2.词数：100左右；
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student who shows great interest in sports.
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．现今越来越多的人开始参加各种体育锻炼，有的跳广场舞，有的练瑜伽，有的甚至报名参加马拉松比赛。请根据提示，以“The benefits (好处) of taking exercise”为题，用英语写一篇短文在课堂上分享你经常参加的运动项目。
提示：
l. What kind of activities do you often take part in
2. What benefits does it bring to you
注意：
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100 词左右。
The benefits of taking exercise
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3．为使广大青少年积极参与运动健身，学校学生会决定开展“乐享运动”主题班会活动。请你根据下面提示的三个问题， 用英文写一篇短文在主题班会上发言。
Enjoy Sports
1. What do sports bring us (make us strong, …)
2. What sports do you do (run, …)
3. How do you feel after sports (feel relaxed, …)
注意：
1. 根据以上所给提示，适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数80词左右，开头、结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。
There is no doubt that sports benefit us in many ways.
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All in all, it’s helpful for us to do sports. So, let’s go out to exercise and enjoy sports.
4．随着生活水平的提高， 健康越来越受到重视。假定你是学生李辉， 你们班准备组织一次以“健康”为主题的英语演讲活动。请你准备一篇题为“How to live a healthy and happy life”的英语演讲稿， 内容包括：
(1)引出话题；
(2)陈述观点；
(3)表达希望。
注意：
(1)词数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
How to live a healthy and happy life
Hello, my dear classmates.
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That’s all. Thank you!
5．近年来，中学生身体健康越来越受到重视。假定你是李华，你校英语校报正在开展主题“我运动，我健康”的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向校报投稿。
内容包括：
1. 你喜欢的运动方式：每天在操场上跑步半小时，经常放学后与朋友踢足球。
2. 运动的益处：增强(build up)体质，缓解压力(stressed 有压力的，紧张的) ，结交朋友。
3. 你对运动的看法。
注意：
1. 词数不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
As students, we can do different kinds of sports after class. As for me,
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6．近年来，马拉松成为一项受大家欢迎的运动。眉山每年春天也都举行半程马拉松比赛。请你根据以下要点,以 Marathons in Meishan 为题写一篇短文。
要点：
1. 项目：半程马拉松，十公里跑和欢乐跑；
2. 年龄不限；
3. 参加比赛的目的：
（1）保持健康，强健体魄；
（2）缓解压力，挑战自我；
（3）培养坚定的意志。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
参考词汇：run a marathon 跑马拉松比赛 half marathon 半程马拉松 Happy Run 欢乐 relieve 缓解
Marathons in Meishan
Marathons have become more popular in recent years.
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7．全国第十四届冬季运动会即将在呼伦贝尔市举办。为此，我们修建了一些新的场馆，清扫了城市街道，张贴了许多宣传画和海报，掀起了全民运动热潮。这些变化也影响到了中学生。同学们参加了多种多样的体育活动，了解到体育锻炼的重要性，同时意识到人人都应该爱护环境，与人为善……共同建设美好家乡。请你根据以上内容写一篇短文。
要点：
1. What has changed in our city
2. What are the influences (影响) on students
3. What will you do in the future
要求：
1. 文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥。
2. 文章应句式多样，语句流畅，意思连贯；
3. 词数90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息。
2. 不许抄袭、套改。
参考词汇：场馆 gyms and stadiums
The 14th National Winter Games of the People’s Republic of China will be held in Hulunbeir.
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8．课间十分钟你在做什么呢？近期，一些地方中小学 “课间十分钟被约束” 的问题受到社会广泛关注。你觉得课间十分钟应该怎么安排才更有意义呢？请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法并说明理由。
要求：
1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2. 请将思维导图中所示内容表达自己的观点，句式规范，字迹工整。
3. 可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
How to make ten minutes between classes more meaningful
Nowadays, students are always busy with their lessons. How to make ten minutes between classes more meaningful
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9．假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在举行以“中国古代杰出人物”为主题的征文比赛。请你认真阅读该通知，并按要求写一篇英语短文。
Notice Dear students, The English Club in our school plans to organize a writing competition about Historic Figures (历史人物) in ancient China. Please write an article on these following questions. ★Which Chinese historic figure will you introduce ★Why do you want to introduce this person ★What can you learn from this person Looking forward to your article. School English Club
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
I’m Li Hua from Class One. I’m glad to introduce
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10．随着全民健身国家战略的深入实施，全民健身的热情日益高涨，本着“我运动，我健康；我运动，我快乐”的思想，人们在运动中挖掘生活的乐趣。请你以“Doing Sports”为题，写一篇短文。
提示：
1. What sports do you do in your school？
2. What sports do you like Why do you like the sport(s)
要求：
1．文章必须包含以上要点，可适当发挥；
2．语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3．文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4．词数：不少于70词。
Doing Sports
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11．对于课余时间，同学们该如何充分利用呢？请你根据下面表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文；并根据实际谈谈你的看法，在学校英语角社团活动中与大家交流。
写作要点 活动内容 活动意义
Activities join the clubs improve skills, make more friends
do sports, have enough sleep keep healthy and active
do some reading, watch movies make us relax, open up our eyes
get close to nature... learn about the world better
Your opinions ... ...
要求：
1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Free time is important for us. How should we spend our free time well Here are some ideas.
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12．假设你是李华，你校英语社团将在本周举行主题为“低碳出行·你我同行”的演讲比赛。请你根据下图提示，以“Walking to school is a good choice”为题，写一篇英文发言稿。
要求：
1. 可参考提示内容，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Walking to school is a good choice
Dear students,
I’m glad to share my idea with you.
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I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.
13．由于父母的工作变动，英国的Dave两年前随父母来到了中国北京，他想给祖父母写一封信，叙述他来到中国后的各种变化。请你根据下列表格内容提示，代替Dave完成这封信。
In England (used to) In China (now)
Free time talk with you, happy have nobody to talk with, parents are busy
Breakfast like bread and milk, delicious be used to noodles and eggs, make me stronger
Sports not play ball games, boring... be interested in, play basketball, fun...
要求：
1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear grandparents,
How is it going I hope you are both healthy. I haven’t seen you for two years, and I miss you very much.
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That’s all I want to tell you. Wish you happy and healthy.
Yours,
Dave
14．为促进学生身心健康成长，深圳市中小学正在全面推行“每天一节体育课”。假定你是学校英语报小记者，请根据以下要点完成一篇新闻报道。
要点：(1)介绍“每天一节体育课”的背景，如落实时间、活动目的等基本信息；
(2)概括学校体育课开设情况：①上课频率；②上课形式和内容；
(3)总结同学们的感受及看法。
要求：(1)要点齐全，可适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；(3)条理清晰， 语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；(4)词数100左右。
参考词汇：每天一节体育课 daily PE class
Daily PE Classes at Our School
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15．第33届夏季奥运会在巴黎举行，你和你的英国笔友Tony都关注了这场盛会。请你给你的笔友Tony写一封电子邮件介绍你最喜欢的奥运项目。内容包括：
1. 你喜欢的奥运项目及运动员代表；（比如跳水运动员全红婵；乒乓球运动员樊振东；羽毛球运动员林丹；网球运动员郑钦文……）
2. 你喜欢该项目的原因；（原因不少于两个）
3. 该运动项目对你的影响。
要求：（1）80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
（4）标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：跳水 diving; 跳水运动员diver; 训练training; 巨大压力的 stressful;
Dear Tony,
I am very glad that
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Yours,
Li Hua
16．体育强则国强，国运兴则体育兴。今年暑假，奥运会在法国巴黎成功举办。奥运会上，中国队健儿的风采激发了人们参与体育锻炼的热情，开启了全民健身的热潮。在全民健身的氛围下，校报英语栏目发起了“Enjoy sports, enjoy life”主题征文活动，旨在让更多同学爱上运动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1.你喜欢的运动项目和平常的运动情况；
2.体育锻炼给你带来的好处：①强身健体；②……；
3.你对体育锻炼的建议：①规律运动；②……
要求：
1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯；
3.邮件中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名；
4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范
提示词：规律地 regularly
Exercise one hour a day, keep us happy every day! In my daily life,
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17．每个人都有自己喜欢的体育运动。你最喜欢的运动是什么？为什么喜欢它呢？请“My Favourite Sport”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的体育运动，并说明原因。
写作要点：
1. 最喜欢的运动；
2. 喜欢此项运动的原因。
写作要求
1. 不得出现真实姓名；
2. 字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，有条理；
3. 字数至少70字。
My Favourite Sport
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18．运动有益身心健康。一所英语研究中心(English Research Center)正在对目前中学生最喜欢的运动项目展开调查。请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的运动项目。要点如下：
1. 你最喜欢的运动是什么；
2. 你喜欢这项运动的原因；
3. 你从这项运动中学到了什么。
注意：
1. 词数80—100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Doing sports makes people happy and healthy.
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19．国务院印发了《全民健身计划（2021-2025）》，目标之一是到2025年经常参加体育锻炼的人数比率达到38.5%。教育部也鼓励各地逐渐提高体育中考分值。体育锻炼得到了高度重视。作为一名中学生，体育锻炼给你带来了什么改变呢？请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇英语短文来谈谈你的改变吧。
要点提示：1. 锻炼前的你；2. 锻炼后的你；3. 你对发生的变化的感想。
要求：1. 内容必须包括所有要点提示，并可适当发挥；2. 条理清晰，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 词数80-100词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I have changed a lot since I took up exercising and I enjoy these changes a lot.
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20．当前，学生心理健康备受社会关注。某英语网站拟举办一次以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为题的征文比赛。作为青少年，我们该如何健康生活？请根据下表要点提示，从如何保持身体健康和心理健康两方面写一篇英语短文投稿。
身体健康方面 1. 坚持锻炼 2. 保证睡眠 3. 吃健康的食物……
心理健康方面 1. 拥有自信 2. 保持好心情 3. 学会处理负面情绪，遇事要和父母，老师沟通交流……
写作要求：
（1）条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80。开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。
参考词汇：physical health身体健康 psychological health心理健康
How to Live a Healthy Life
Nowadays, more and more people have come to focus on teenagers’ health. The followings are my opinions about how we teenagers live a healthy life.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student who shows great interest in sports. I bet I’m the right person for the Sports Talent. The reasons are as follows.
Influenced by my brother, I picked up the skill of playing basketball at a very young age. Since then, I’ve practiced it with my friends in the park every weekend. I benefit a lot from it, which helps me refresh myself and develop my teamwork spirit. It’s basketball that makes me confident and active. As for my hero, undoubtedly, it’s Yao Ming, whose spirit of never giving up influences me all the time and pushes me ahead no matter what difficulties I’m facing.
I plan to keep on practising and take part in more matches so that I’ll improve myself more quickly. I’ll be grateful if you can take me into consideration.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明身份及申请意向。
第二步，阐述自己热爱运动的原因，包括从小受哥哥影响学习篮球、坚持练习及从中获得的益处、偶像姚明对自己的激励等。
第三步，表明未来计划并希望得到考虑。
[亮点词汇]
①benefit...from...从……中获益
②refresh使恢复精力；使振作精神
③as for至于
④undoubtedly毫无疑问；确实地
[高分句型]
①I’m Li Hua, a middle school student who shows great interest in sports. (who引导定语从句)
②It’s basketball that makes me confident and active. (强调句)
2．One possible version:
The benefits of taking exercise
With the development of our society, we begin to pay more attention to our health. In order to keep healthy, people choose to take different kinds of exercise, such as running, dancing and so on.
Among all types of exercise, I spend most time in running, because it brings many benefits. Firstly, running can stop me from being ill. Secondly, it also helps me keep thin, so that I will never worry about sickness caused by fatness. Thirdly, I become more confident than before through running, because it enables me to overcome many difficulties.
In a word, exercise is important to everyone. Let’s take regular exercise and make ourselves healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，可试当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文的话题，当今运动有很多种类；
第二步：具体阐述写作内容，结合自己的实际情况谈谈自己经常参与的运动项目以及它带来了哪些好处；
第三步：书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①With the development of 随着……的发展
②pay more attention to 更加注意
③choose to 选择做某事
④all types of exercise 所有种类的运动
⑤stop me from being ill 防止我生病
⑥enables me to overcome many difficulties 使我能够克服许多困难
[高分句型]
In order to keep healthy, people choose to take different kinds of exercise, such as running, dancing and so on. (in order to do作目的状语)
3．例文
There is no doubt that sports benefit us in many ways.
Sports make us strong and healthy. They improve our physical fitness and keep us energetic throughout the day. Personally, I enjoy running and playing basketball. Running helps to clear my mind and improve my endurance, while playing basketball allows me to work on my teamwork skills and agility. After engaging in these activities, I feel very relaxed and refreshed, ready to take on new challenges.
All in all, it’s helpful for us to do sports. So, let’s go out to exercise and enjoy sports.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题（开头已给出）；
第二步，介绍运动的好处、自己参加的运动及运动后的感受；
第三步，收尾（结尾已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事
②allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
③take on new challenges 接受新挑战
[高分句型]
Running helps to clear my mind and improve my endurance, while playing basketball allows me to work on my teamwork skills and agility.（while连接并列句）
4．Possible version:
How to live a healthy and happy life
Hello, my dear classmates. With the improvement of our living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life
Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. Meanwhile, we still need enough sleep every day. Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends openly.
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出“如何过上健康快乐的生活”的主题；
第二步，分别从身体健康和心理健康上提出建议；
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②in a proper way以适当的方式
③get along well with与某人和睦相处
④communicate with与……沟通
[高分句型]
①Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day.（倒装句）
②We need to love our life and try to be active.（动词不定式作宾语）
5．例文
As students, we can do different kinds of sports after class. As for me, I enjoy running on the playground for half an hour every day. I also love playing football with my friends after school. It’s not only fun but also a great way to stay fit. Doing sports is very beneficial. It helps us build up our bodies and relieve stress. Moreover, sports provide a wonderful opportunity to make friends. I made some good friends through football. In my view, sports are essential for a healthy and happy life. Let’s embrace sports and enjoy the benefits they bring.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章开头，介绍自己的运动方式；
第二步，根据题干中的要点，描述运动的益处；
第三步，分享自己对运动的看法，号召大家都要积极运动，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also不仅……而且
②stay fit保持健康
[高分句型]
①Doing sports is very beneficial.（动名词作主语）
②Let’s embrace sports and enjoy the benefits they bring.（祈使句）
6．例文
Marathons in Meishan
Marathons have become more popular in recent years. In Meishan, a half marathon is also held every spring.
The half marathon in Meishan has three races—a half marathon, ten-kilometer race and Happy Run. Whether you are young or old, you can take part in the sport.
Many people may wonder why running a marathon is so popular. For one thing, it can help us stay healthy and make us stronger. Running is also a good way to relieve our stress. It’s a good chance to challenge ourselves and develop our strong mind.
If I get the chance, I will try my best to finish a marathon myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题，讲述“什么是半程马拉松”以及参加年龄；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“马拉松为什么受欢迎”展开，阐述其带来的好处；
第三步，表明自己会尽全力参加比赛。
[亮点词汇]
①for one thing一方面
②whether...or...无论是……还是……
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①Many people may wonder why running a marathon is so popular. (宾语从句)
②If I get the chance, I will try my best to finish a marathon myself. (if引导的条件状语从句)
7．
The 14th National Winter Games of the People’s Republic of China will be held in Hulunbeir.
We built some new gyms and stadiums, cleaned the city streets, put up many posters, and set off a nationwide movement. These changes have also affected middle school students. Students took part in a variety of sports activities and realized the importance of physical exercise. At the same time, they realized that everyone should care for the environment and be kind to others.
In the future, I will keep exercising, care for the environment, and contribute to building a better hometown.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出，开门见山，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“城市的改变”以及“城市的改变对学生的影响”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，讲述自己能为建设美好家乡作些什么。
[亮点词汇]
①put up张贴
②set off掀起
③nationwide全民性的
④took part in参加
⑤a variety of各种各样的
⑥At the same time同时
⑦care for爱护
[高分句型]
①At the same time, they realized that everyone should care for the environment and be kind to others.（that引导的宾语从句）
②In the future, I will keep exercising, care for the environment, and contribute to building a better hometown.（and连接并列短语）
8．例文：
How to make ten minutes between classes more meaningful
Nowadays, students are always busy with their lessons. How to make ten minutes between classes more meaningful
First of all, we can do some simple exercises like running or jogging. This can help us relax our bodies and relieve the tiredness from studying. Secondly, we can communicate with our classmates. We can talk about interesting books or our hobbies. It can not only strengthen our friendship but also broaden our horizons. In addition, if we have some questions about study, we can discuss them with our classmates.
In a word, a well-arranged ten-minute break can make us more energetic for the next class.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，结合图片适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“课间十分钟应该怎么安排才更有意义”这个话题；
第二步，介绍你关于合理安排课间十分钟的建议；
第三步，最后总结合理安排课间十分钟的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②not only…but also…不但……而且……
③in addition此外，而且
[高分句型]
In addition, if we have some questions about study, we can discuss them with our classmates. (if引导的条件状语从句)
9．例文
I’m Li Hua from Class One. I’m glad to introduce Confucius. He is one of the most outstanding figures in ancient China.
Confucius is famous for his thoughts and teachings. His ideas about kindness, respect, and learning have influenced many generations. We can learn to be kind to others, respect our elders, and value education from him. His teachings are still relevant today and can help us become better people.
In conclusion, Confucius is an important figure in Chinese history, and his wisdom will always be remembered.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示问题介绍中国古代杰出人物，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述要介绍哪位中国历史人物；
第二步，介绍为什么要介绍这个人以及你能从这个人身上学到什么；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因为……而闻名
②learn to do sth.学习做某事
③in conclusion总的来说
[高分句型]
He is one of the most outstanding figures in ancient China.(最高级)
10．例文
Doing Sports
We do many sports in our school. We usually play basketball every day. And we can play football in our PE class. After class, we always take part in many sports, such as jumping the lines, running, playing ping-pong and so on.
Of all the sports, I like playing basketball best. I think I can learn many things from it. Playing basketball can teach me a lot of useful skills, as well as helping me to keep fit and healthy. I can know teamwork from it, too.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意文章必须包括上述写作要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。说明在学校里每天都会做运动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详述在学校里做哪些运动以及自己最喜欢的运动是什么；
第三步，书写结语。简述自己喜欢这项运动的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①every day 每天
②take part in 参加
③such as 例如
④useful skills 有用的技能
[高分句型]
①I think I can learn many things from it.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Playing basketball can teach me a lot of useful skills, as well as helping me to keep fit and healthy.（动名词作主语）
11．例文
Free time is important for us. How should we spend our free time well Here are some ideas.
Firstly, we can join the clubs in our school. We can not only improve our skills, but also make more friends in clubs. Secondly, we should do more sports and have enough sleep. As the saying goes, “The first wealth is health”. So it’s important for us to keep healthy and active. Thirdly, we can spare our time to do some reading, watch movies and listen to music. These activities can not only make us relax but also open up our eyes. Fourthly, we should also get close to nature more often. For example, we can travel or go camping. In this way, we’ll learn about the world better. Last but not least, we can do some housework at home. Besides school work, some useful life skills are also necessary for us.
I think we should spend our free time doing something meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“课余时间的活动内容和意义以及我的观点”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“空闲时间对我们很重要。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“空闲时间的活动内容和意义”重点介绍如何利用空闲时间；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我认为我们应该花费空闲时间做有意义的事情。”。
[亮点词汇]
① free time空闲时间
② for example例如
[高分句型]
① We can not only improve our skills, but also make more friends in clubs.（not only...but also...表示“不但……而且……”）
② So it’s important for us to keep healthy and active.（it的特殊句式“It is+adj+for sb to do sth”表示“做某事对某人来说是……的”）
12．例文
Walking to school is a good choice
Dear students,
I’m glad to share my idea with you. Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise. I think going to school on foot is good for us.
First of all, walking to school is a safe way to exercise and it’s good for health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can help each other and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents will not send us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now.
I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容写一篇演讲稿，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，表达“走路上学是一个很好的选择”这个看法；
第二步，根据提示，说明走路上学的好处有哪些；
第三步，书写结语，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb与某人分享某物
②not as…as不如……怎么样
[高分句型]
①Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise.（动名词作主语）
②Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
13．例文：
Dear grandparents,
How is it going I hope you are both healthy. I haven’t seen you for two years, and I miss you very much.
I remember I used to talk with you when I was free. I felt very happy. But now I have nobody to talk with because my parents are very busy every day. And my eating habits have changed, too. I used to like to have bread and milk for breakfast in England. I thought they were delicious. But now I am used to eating noodles and eggs. They make me stronger than before. As for sports, I didn’t use to play ball games, because I thought it was very boring. But now I am interested in playing basketball. It’s fun to play with friends after school.
That’s all I want to tell you. Wish you happy and healthy.
Yours,
Dave
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己对祖父母的思念（开头已给出）；
第二步，分别从空闲时间、早餐及运动三方面介绍来到中国后的变化；
第二步，书写结语，表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①talk with和……聊天
②be used to doing sth.习惯于做某事
[高分句型]
①I remember I used to talk with you when I was free. (宾语从句)
②But now I have nobody to talk with because my parents are very busy every day. (because引导的原因状语从句)
14．例文
Daily PE Classes at Our School To improve students’ health, primary schools and junior high schools in Shenzhen have had a daily PE class since the beginning of this term. In our school, students also have a PE class every day.
Besides three regular PE classes, students have one music-based exercise class and one sports game class every week. They can join in colourful sports activities, like basketball, table tennis, rope skipping, swimming and kung fu at school. Among them, one of the students’ favourite sports is basketball. Not only can it offer students a chance to communicate with teammates in sports, but it also helps improve their learning efficiency after playing basketball.
“I’m glad that the daily PE classes enrich my school life as well as reduce my stress,” said Liu Xiaojun, an eighth grader. And most students hold the same idea as Liu. They think they are good for their physical and mental health.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇新闻报道；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，条理清晰，语句连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述学校每天一节体育课开设情况；
第二步，介绍一项最受同学们欢迎的体育活动；
第三步，总结同学们的感受及看法。
[亮点词汇]
①join in加入
②communicate with与……交流
③learning efficiency学习效率
[高分句型]
①Not only can it offer students a chance to communicate with teammates in sports, but it also helps improve their learning efficiency after playing basketball.（not only...but also句型，倒装句）
②They think they are good for their physical and mental health.（宾语从句）
15．例文
Dear Tony,
I am very glad that you are paying attention to the summer Olympic games. Next I will tell you the star that makes a difference to me.
Zheng Qinwen is one of the most famous players in Olympic Games now. I admire her very much, which is the reason why I take up playing tennis.
Playing tennis is of great value to me. Firstly, it is a great way to keep fit. During a game, I need to run, jump and swing, which can exercise my whole body. Secondly, playing tennis is a social activity. I can play with my friends or join tennis clubs. I have made some friends who share the same interest with me. We all have a good time together.
All in all, playing tennis can not only help reduce stress but also build up my strength. I will continue playing tennis in my free time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格内容介绍你最喜欢的奥运项目，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍你喜欢的奥运项目及运动员代表；
第二步，介绍你喜欢该项目的原因；
第三步，介绍该运动项目对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①take up doing sth.开始做某事
②keep fit保持健康
③build up建立
[高分句型]
①I admire her very much, which is the reason why I take up playing tennis. (which引导的定语从句，why引导的定语从句)
②All in all, playing tennis can not only help reduce stress but also build up my strength. I will continue playing tennis in my free time. (not only...but also连接的并列句)
16．例文
Exercise one hour a day, keep us happy every day! In my daily life, I often do sports. My favourite sport is swimming. Whenever I am free, I will have a swim with my friends in the swimming pool. After swimming, I usually feel happy and relaxed. What’s more, I can put more energy into my study. I usually swim once a week for two hours at a time.
As we all know, it’s very important for everyone to do sports. I like sports because they’re not only good for my health but also good for my study. Let’s do sports and we will become stronger and stronger. As a sports lover, I believe that regular physical exercise is necessary for maintaining a healthy lifestyle.
Let’s do exercise together and live a happy life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍喜欢的运动项目和平常的运动情况；
第二步：具体阐述体育锻炼给你带来的好处；
第三步：书写结语，呼吁大家进行体育锻炼。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also不仅……而且……
②be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①Whenever I am free, I will have a swim with my friends in the swimming pool.（时间状语从句）
②As we all know, it’s very important for everyone to do sports.（it句型）
③As a sports lover, I believe that regular physical exercise is necessary for maintaining a healthy ifestyle.（that引导宾语从句）
17．例文
My Favorite Sport
I like sports very much, such as running, skating, playing basketball and so on. My favorite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy. It is also a good way to lose weight. If you want to keep fit, you can have a try. I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. Now I can swim very well. I usually spend an hour swimming in the swimming pool every Sunday. Swimming is really very interesting. If you swim in the water, you will look like a lovely fish. And I’m sure you will feel very happy. My favorite swimming player is Sun Yang. I hope I will become a swimming player when I grow up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，点出最喜欢的运动；
第二步，介绍喜欢此项运动的原因；
第三步，谈谈未来的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①strong and healthy身强体壮
②look like看起来像
③grow up长大
[高分句型]
①My favorite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy.（原因状语从句）
②And I’m sure you will feel very happy.（宾语从句）
18．例文
Doing sports makes people happy and healthy. Dancing is my favorite sport, which can make me look much prettier and healthier. Whenever I was free, I danced to popular songs with my roommate. Both of us enjoyed it a lot. At first, we just danced to the music and we even didn’t know how to dance correctly. However, as the saying goes, practice makes perfect. The more we practise, the better we dance.
The reason why I like dancing is that it can bring me happiness and help me keep healthy. Besides, dancing is also my dream in my childhood.
Though I am still not good at dancing, I love it, because what it brought to me has greatly changed my life. By dancing, I become more outgoing and confident in talking with others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己最喜欢的运动；
第二步，具体阐述自己喜欢这项运动的原因；
第三步，阐述自己从这项运动中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②be good at擅长
③talk with sb.与某人交谈
[高分句型]
①Dancing is my favorite sport, which can make me look much prettier and healthier.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Though I am still not good at dancing, I love it, because what it brought to me has greatly changed my life.（though引导的让步状语从句）
19．例文
I have changed a lot since I took up exercising and I enjoy these changes a lot. Before I started exercising, I was often tired and lacked energy. I found it hard to concentrate on my studies and was frequently in a bad mood. However, after I began to exercise regularly, I noticed significant improvements. I became more energetic and focused, and my overall mood improved. I also became physically stronger and healthier. These changes have made me realize the importance of regular exercise. It not only benefits my body but also my mind. I will continue to exercise regularly to maintain these positive changes.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，要求介绍体育锻炼给自己带来的变化。
② 时态：本文以“一般过去时”为主，在谈论感想时，可以用“一般现在时”。
③ 提示：题目要求根据提示谈谈锻炼前后的我和对发生的变化的感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先谈锻炼前的我。
第二步，谈锻炼后的我。
第三步，谈对发生变化的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① lack energy 缺乏精力
② concentrate on 专注于
③ realize the importance of 意识到……的重要性
[高分句型]
Before I started exercising, I was often tired and lacked energy. (时间状语从句)
20．例文
How to Live a Healthy Life
Nowadays, more and more people have come to focus on teenagers’ health. The followings are my opinions about how we teenagers live a healthy life.
Firstly, we must keep healthy. We should have a balanced diet. This means eating different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit and vegetables. We’d better play sports at least one hour every day. Exercise makes us stronger and helps us relax. We should get at least eight hours’ sleep at night, so that we can have enough energy to study.
Secondly, we have to be mentally healthy. We must be confident and have good moods every day.
Finally, be happy. Happiness is important for our health. If you are worried about something, try to solve it as soon as possible.
To sum up, health is wealth. Keeping healthy is very important for us. I hope everybody can live a healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己对青少年如何过健康生活的看法；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从身体健康和心理健康两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②different kinds of不同种类的
③be worried about担心
④sum up总结
[高分句型]
①Exercise makes us stronger and helps us relax.(使役动词make用法)
②We should get at least eight hours’ sleep at night, so that we can have enough energy to study.(so that引导结果状语从句)
③If you are worried about something, try to solve it as soon as possible.(if引导条件状语从句)
④Keeping healthy is very important for us.(动名词作主语)
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