Section Ⅴ Writing Workshop
Activity 1 Read for details [细节把握]
1．Why was Lang Ping named “Iron Hammer”？
A．Because she played on China’s national volleyball team during the 1980s.
B．Because she played volleyball in a strong and powerful style.
C．Because she led her team to win a series of success.
D．Because she played volleyball with an iron hammer in hand.
答案 B
2．What can we know from the second paragraph
A．China’s national volleyball team won several medals in the 1980s.
B．Lang Ping was recognised only because of the great success she achieved.
C．Lang Ping was the coach of China’s national volleyball team in the 1980s.
D．Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team for more than ten years.
答案 A
3．Which is the right order of what Lang Ping did according to the passage
a．Lang Ping became the coach of the women’s national team.
b．Lang Ping worked as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.
c．Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team.
d．Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards at the CCTV Sports Personality Awards.
A．a，b，d，c B．b，c，a，d
C．c，b，a，d D．a，b，c，d
答案 C
4．What can we know about Lang Ping according to the passage
A．She is the best volleyball coach both at home and abroad.
B．She is the most popular figure in China’s volleyball history.
C．She is successful as a volleyball coach now in the United States and India.
D．She has been a volleyball star for over forty-five years and has contributed greatly to the sport.
答案 B
Activity 2 Read for structures [文章架构]
Fill in the blanks according to the article you read on P40.
Activity 3 Read for language features [增分靓句]
写某一个人的传记要以时间为线索介绍这个人的主要事迹，因此要学会用不同的方式来表示时间。本文中表示时间的句子有：
答案 1.Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team during the 1980s.
2．Lang Ping was a member of the team when they achieved a series of success including gold medals at the 1984 Olympics...
3．After retiring as an athlete in 1986，she became a successful volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.
4．In 1995，she returned to become the coach of the women’s national team...
5．That year，Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards...
6．She was also named “Touching China Personality” of 2016.
本单元的写作任务是写一篇人物介绍。
在描写人物时，我们可以通过以下三个部分来写作：
1．首段常用句式
Born in...，sb is a/an...in...出生于……，某人是在……领域的一位……
He is a/an...(外貌特征) person with...他长得……
2．中段常用句式
When he was in...，he was enthusiastic about...and determined to do...
当他在……的时候，他对……充满热情，并决心要做……
He has a talent for...他擅长……
In...(时间)，he graduated with honor/won a gold medal for the first time.
在……时，他光荣毕业/第一次获得了金牌。
He applied himself to/was committed to...他投身于……
3．尾段常用句式
He made a great contribution to...and was honored as one of the most important...
他对……做出了重要贡献，被认为是最重要的……之一。
He sets a good example to...and he is respected and admired by many people.
他为……树立了好榜样并被很多人尊重和仰慕。
请以Madame Curie为题，写一篇英语短文，要点如下：
1．Madame Curie是一位世界著名的女科学家，1867年出生于波兰的一个教师家庭，卒于1934年。
2．从小爱学习并希望成为科学家，24岁赴巴黎就读于巴黎大学，学习刻苦。
3．一生致力于科学研究，于1903年和1911年分别荣获诺贝尔物理学奖和诺贝尔化学奖。
4．居里夫人将作为一位伟大的女性永远为人们所怀念。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步 审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇人物介绍。写作时应注意下列几点：
1．确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，写作中应注意常规格式；
2．主体时态：介绍人物经历以一般过去时为主；写评价以一般现在时为主；
3．主体人称：第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：介绍居里夫人的身份和生卒时间。
第二段：简单介绍居里夫人的学习经历，重点介绍她的成就。
第三段：人们对于居里夫人的评价。
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇 (含本单元词汇)
1．世界著名的world-famous
2．出生于(……家庭)be born into
3．被……录取/就读于……be admitted to
4．致力于apply/devote/commit oneself to
5．被授予……be awarded...
6．被誉为/认可为 be honored/recognis(z)ed as
7．做出巨大贡献make great contributions to
8．奉献devotion
连词成句 (含本单元句型)
1．居里夫人是一位世界著名的科学家，她于1867年出生在波兰的一个教师家庭，1934年去世。
Madame Curie is a world-famous scientist，and she was born into a teacher’s family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
2．在她还是一名学生时，她很勤奋，并决心成为一名科学家。
When she was a school girl，she was diligent and determined to become a scientist.
3．她一生致力于科学研究，并于1903年获得诺贝尔物理学奖，1911年获得诺贝尔化学奖。
She applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research and was awarded Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911.
4．众所周知，因为她为科学做出了巨大的贡献，她被誉为最伟大的科学家和女性之一。(what 引导名词性从句)
What was known to the world was that she has made great contributions to science，for which she was honored/recognised as one of the greatest scientists and women.
第三步 句式升级
1．用同位语把句1转化成一个简单句。
Madame Curie，a world-famous scientist，was born into a teacher’s family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
2．用形容词短语作状语改写句2。
Determined to become a scientist，she was diligent when she was a school girl.
3．用现在分词短语作状语改写句3。
Having applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research，she was awarded Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
参考范文
Madame Curie，a world-famous scientist，was born into a teacher’s family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
Determined to become a scientist，she was diligent when she was a school girl.At the age of 24，she was admitted to Paris University and studied hard there.Her hard work paid off.Having applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research，she was awarded Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911.
What was known to the world was that she has made great contributions to science，for which she was honored/recognised as one of the greatest scientists and women.
你校准备在新建的“名人长廊”中为每一位名人画像配上英语介绍，以便让同学们有更多的机会学习英语。请你根据以下信息写一篇80词左右的短文介绍郎平。
1．郎平，1960年12月10日出生于天津市。1973年，13岁的郎平开始练习打排球；
2．1978年，因在全国排球比赛中表现突出，进入国家队；
3．从1980年起，郎平获得了很多荣誉及奖励；
4．退役后，郎平成为排球教练。2016年，郎平带领中国女排，时隔12年，在里约奥运会(the Rio Olympic Games)上获得金牌；
5．郎平是中国第一位作为球员和教练员均夺取奥运会冠军的排球运动员。
参考范文
Lang Ping，who was born on Dec.10th,1960，is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach.
She insisted on practising playing volleyball at the age of 13 and joined the national team several years later as a consequence of her extraordinary performance.She was committed to volleyball，consequently，obtaining numerous awards.After retiring from the volleyball team，she took up a position as a volleyball coach.Her powerful team defeated many other teams.In 2016，she led the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games with the objective of winning the gold medal and they made it.
Apparently，Lang Ping is the first volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach in China.(共29张PPT)
Section Ⅴ
Writing Workshop
SUCCESS
UNIT 2
内容索引
Part 1 品读文本学写法
Part 2 熟悉技法练写作
品读文本学写法
1.Why was Lang Ping named “Iron Hammer”？
A.Because she played on China’s national volleyball team during the
1980s.
B.Because she played volleyball in a strong and powerful style.
C.Because she led her team to win a series of success.
D.Because she played volleyball with an iron hammer in hand.
Activity 1 Read for details [细节把握]
√
2.What can we know from the second paragraph
A.China’s national volleyball team won several medals in the 1980s.
B.Lang Ping was recognised only because of the great success she
achieved.
C.Lang Ping was the coach of China’s national volleyball team in the
1980s.
D.Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team for more than
ten years.
√
3.Which is the right order of what Lang Ping did according to the passage
a.Lang Ping became the coach of the women’s national team.
b.Lang Ping worked as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.
c.Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team.
d.Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards at the CCTV Sports Personality Awards.
A.a，b，d，c B.b，c，a，d
C.c，b，a，d D.a，b，c，d
√
4.What can we know about Lang Ping according to the passage
A.She is the best volleyball coach both at home and abroad.
B.She is the most popular figure in China’s volleyball history.
C.She is successful as a volleyball coach now in the United States and
India.
D.She has been a volleyball star for over forty-five years and has
contributed greatly to the sport.
√
Fill in the blanks according to the article you read on P40.
Activity 2 Read for structures [文章架构]
introduction
Important life
experience
Major awards/achievements
comments
写某一个人的传记要以时间为线索介绍这个人的主要事迹，因此要学会用不同的方式来表示时间。本文中表示时间的句子有：
Activity 3 Read for language features [增分靓句]
答案 1.Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team during the 1980s.
2.Lang Ping was a member of the team when they achieved a series of success including gold medals at the 1984 Olympics...
3.After retiring as an athlete in 1986，she became a successful volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.
4.In 1995，she returned to become the coach of the women’s national team...
5.That year，Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards...
6.She was also named “Touching China Personality” of 2016.
返 回
熟悉技法练写作
本单元的写作任务是写一篇人物介绍。
在描写人物时，我们可以通过以下三个部分来写作：
常用表达
1.首段常用句式
Born in...，sb is a/an...in...出生于……，某人是在……领域的一位……
He is a/an...(外貌特征) person with...他长得……
2.中段常用句式
When he was in...，he was enthusiastic about...and determined to do...
当他在……的时候，他对……充满热情，并决心要做……
He has a talent for...他擅长……
In...(时间)，he graduated with honor/won a gold medal for the first time.
在……时，他光荣毕业/第一次获得了金牌。
He applied himself to/was committed to...他投身于……
3.尾段常用句式
He made a great contribution to...and was honored as one of the most important...
他对……做出了重要贡献，被认为是最重要的……之一。
He sets a good example to...and he is respected and admired by many people.
他为……树立了好榜样并被很多人尊重和仰慕。
分步演练
请以Madame Curie为题，写一篇英语短文，要点如下：
1.Madame Curie是一位世界著名的女科学家，1867年出生于波兰的一个教师家庭，卒于1934年。
2.从小爱学习并希望成为科学家，24岁赴巴黎就读于巴黎大学，学习刻苦。
3.一生致力于科学研究，于1903年和1911年分别荣获诺贝尔物理学奖和诺贝尔化学奖。
4.居里夫人将作为一位伟大的女性永远为人们所怀念。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步 审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇人物介绍。写作时应注意下列几点：
1.确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，写作中应注意常规格式；
2.主体时态：介绍人物经历以一般过去时为主；写评价以一般现在时为主；
3.主体人称：第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：介绍居里夫人的身份和生卒时间。
第二段：简单介绍居里夫人的学习经历，重点介绍她的成就。
第三段：人们对于居里夫人的评价。
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇 (含本单元词汇)
1.世界著名的
2.出生于(……家庭)
3.被……录取/就读于……
4.致力于
5.被授予……
6.被誉为/认可为
7.做出巨大贡献
8.奉献
_____________
____________
______________
____________________________
_____________
_________________________
_________________________
_________
world-famous
be born into
be admitted to
apply/devote/commit oneself to
be awarded...
be honored/recognis(z)ed as
make great contributions to
devotion
连词成句 (含本单元句型)
1.居里夫人是一位世界著名的科学家，她于1867年出生在波兰的一个教师家庭，1934年去世。
Madame Curie is ，and she _______________
in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
2.在她还是一名学生时，她很勤奋，并决心成为一名科学家。
When she was a school girl，she was diligent and ____________________
.
a world-famous scientist
was born into a
teacher’s family
a scientist
determined to become
3.她一生致力于科学研究，并于1903年获得诺贝尔物理学奖，1911年获得诺贝尔化学奖。
_______________________________________________________________________ Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911.
4.众所周知，因为她为科学做出了巨大的贡献，她被誉为最伟大的科学家和女性之一。(what 引导名词性从句)
________________________________________________________________________，for which she was honored/recognised as one of the greatest scientists and women.
She applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research and was awarded
What was known to the world was that she has made great contributions to science
第三步 句式升级
1.用同位语把句1转化成一个简单句。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________ 2.用形容词短语作状语改写句2。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Madame Curie，a world-famous scientist，was born into a teacher’s family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
Determined to become a scientist，she was diligent when she was a school girl.
3.用现在分词短语作状语改写句3。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Having applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research，she was awarded Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
参考范文
Madame Curie，a world-famous scientist，was born into a teacher’s family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
Determined to become a scientist，she was diligent when she was a school girl.At the age of 24，she was admitted to Paris University and studied hard there.Her hard work paid off.Having applied/devoted/
committed herself to scientific research，she was awarded Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911.
What was known to the world was that she has made great contributions to science，for which she was honored/recognised as one of the greatest scientists and women.
你校准备在新建的“名人长廊”中为每一位名人画像配上英语介绍，以便让同学们有更多的机会学习英语。请你根据以下信息写一篇80词左右的短文介绍郎平。
1.郎平，1960年12月10日出生于天津市。1973年，13岁的郎平开始练习打排球；
2.1978年，因在全国排球比赛中表现突出，进入国家队；
3.从1980年起，郎平获得了很多荣誉及奖励；
达标检测
4.退役后，郎平成为排球教练。2016年，郎平带领中国女排，时隔12年，在里约奥运会(the Rio Olympic Games)上获得金牌；
5.郎平是中国第一位作为球员和教练员均夺取奥运会冠军的排球运动员。
参考范文
Lang Ping，who was born on Dec.10th,1960，is generally acknowledged
to be a remarkable volleyball coach.
She insisted on practising playing volleyball at the age of 13 and joined the national team several years later as a consequence of her extraordinary performance.She was committed to volleyball，consequently，
obtaining numerous awards.After retiring from the volleyball team，she took up a position as a volleyball coach.Her powerful team defeated many other teams.In 2016，she led the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games with the objective of winning the gold medal and they made it.
Apparently，Lang Ping is the first volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach in China.
返 回
本课结束
