Section Ⅴ Writing Workshop
Activity 1 Read for details [细节把握]
1．What is the purpose of the first paragraph
A．To present some arguments for the idea.
B．To introduce the idea of factory farming.
C．To describe the details of factory farming.
D．To present some arguments against the idea.
答案 B
2．What is one of the advantages of factory farming
A．Its costs are high and the production is low.
B．It is more expensive than traditional farming.
C．It provides more food for a world population.
D．It can provide more working positions.
答案 C
3．Why are people fighting for animal rights against factory farming
A．Because factory farming may cause serious pollution.
B．Because many farm animals suffer terrible stress.
C．Because factory farming creates a lot of waste products.
D．Because factory farming can produce cheap food.
答案 B
4．What is the writer’s attitude to factory farming
A．Negative. B．Positive.
C．Objective. D．Indifferent.
答案 A
Activity 2 Read for structures [文章架构]
Para.1 What factory farming is and the present situation.
Para.2 Arguments for factory farming.
Para.3 Arguments against factory farming.
Para.4 Despite the advantages，we should reduce factory farming.
Activity 3 Read for language features [增分靓句]
这篇文章中使用了正反论点类文章的经典句式，请在文中找出这些句子，并积累起来。
答案 1.Factory farming involves keeping farm animals inside buildings to increase the production of meat or eggs.
2．The main argument for factory farming is that，apart from being a lot cheaper than traditional or organic farming，it provides more food for a world population that has already reached seven billion...
3．On the other hand，opponents of factory farming say that it is cruel to the animals.
4．People who fight for animal rights claim that these animals suffered terrible stress.
5．In addition to this，factory farming has a negative impact on...
6．To sum up，despite producing cheap food，factory farming is bad for the planet and for the animals themselves.
7．In my opinion，we should try to reduce this kind of farming...
本单元的写作任务是写一篇包含正反观点的文章。
一般结构如下：
1．介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：
We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to...我们讨论了是否有必要……
We’ve had a survey on...我们对……做了调查。
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about...我写信告诉你我们关于……的讨论。
2．过渡句：
Opinions are divided on this issue.
对这个问题观点不一。
Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.
观点主要分两组。
Different people，however，have different opinions/think quite differently on this matter.
然而，不同的人对这个观点态度不同。
3．介绍正方观点：
45% of the students hold the view that...For one thing...For another thing...
45%的学生认为……一方面……另一方面……
60% of the students are for the idea.
60%的学生支持这一观点。
4．介绍反方观点：
On the contrary/However/As the old saying goes，each coin has two sides.Nearly half of the students think that...
相反/然而/常言道，事物都有两面性。接近一半的学生认为……
5．陈述自己的观点：
In my opinion/In my view/Personally，I think.../Taking everything into consideration，we should make good use of.../Only in this way can we do...
依我看/考虑到一切因素，我们应该充分利用……/只有这样，我们才能……
目前，《中学生英语报》组织了一场关于城市内是否可以饲养宠物的讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。
支持的理由 反对的理由 你的看法
1.安慰空巢老人； 2.增添生活乐趣。 1.造成环境污染； 2.制造噪声，有的甚至会伤人。 ……
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
第一步 审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是阐述“城市内是否可以饲养宠物”的讨论结果，写作时应注意下面几点：
1．确定文体：这是一篇议论文，写作时要注意议论文的写作特点。
2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。
3．主体人称：由于是关于“城市内是否可以饲养宠物”的话题，所以人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：说明讨论的话题——城市内是否可以饲养宠物；
第二段：说明正方和反方的观点及理由；
第三段：表明自己的观点。
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇 (含本单元词汇)
1．安慰 comfort
2．对……造成威胁 pose a threat to
3．反对be against/object (to)
4．除……之外，也，还besides
5．相反 on the contrary
6．采取措施 take measures
7．阻止……做某事 prevent...from...
连词成句 (含本单元句型)
1．一些学生认为在城市里养宠物是个好主意。
Some of the students think it a good idea to keep pets in cities.
2．没有宠物的陪伴，独自生活的人无法感到安慰。
Without pets accompanying them，people who live alone would not feel comforted.
3．此外，与动物相处融洽会使生活更有趣。
Besides，getting along well with animals will make life more interesting.
4．在他们看来，如果太多人在家里养宠物，对环境不好。
In their opinion，if too many people keep pets at home，it is bad for the environment.
5．宠物可能会发出过多的噪声，甚至对人类安全构成威胁。
Pets may make too much noise and even pose a threat to human safety.
6．我认为在家养宠物并不坏。
I don’t think it is bad to keep pets at home.
7．但我们必须采取一些措施防止它们污染我们的环境，并在带它们外出时要小心。
But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment and be careful when we take them out.
第三步 句式升级
1．请把第1、2句话合并成含原因状语的句子。
Some of the students think it a good idea to keep pets in cities，because without pets accompanying them，people who live alone would not feel comforted.
2．请把第6、7句话合并成含让步状语的句子。
Although I don’t think it is bad to keep pets at home，we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment and be careful when we take them out.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether we should keep pets in cities.
参考范文
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether we should keep pets in cities.
Some of the students think it a good idea to keep pets in cities，because without pets accompanying them，people who live alone would not feel comforted.Besides，getting along well with animals will make life more interesting.On the contrary，the other students are against the idea.In their opinion，if too many people keep pets at home，it is bad for the environment.What’s worse，pets may make too much noise and even pose a threat to human safety.
Personally，although I don’t think it is bad to keep pets at home，we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment and be careful when we take them out.
假设你是李华，最近你班就“使用手机的利与弊”进行了讨论，请根据讨论结果，写一封信向校报编辑反映此事。
赞成的理由 反对的理由 你的看法
联系他人便利；获得更多的学习资源。 沉溺手机；浏览不健康网站。 ……
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Editor，
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the cellphone benefits us or not.
Some students have a preference for cellphones.Cellphones make it more convenient to keep in touch with friends and relatives.The instant/Instantly they switch on cellphones，they can obtain relevant learning resources.Nevertheless，there are some students who are opposed to/oppose using cellphones too much.So occupied in playing cellphones are many students that they keep those around them at a distance.Besides，with many unhealthy websites on the Internet，they will suffer a lot physically and mentally.
Personally，I advocate that all the students (should) combine using cellphones with face-to-face communication.
Yours，
Li Hua(共33张PPT)
Section Ⅴ
Writing Workshop
CONSERVATION
UNIT 3
内容索引
Part 1 品读文本学写法
Part 2 熟悉技法练写作
品读文本学写法
1.What is the purpose of the first paragraph
A.To present some arguments for the idea.
B.To introduce the idea of factory farming.
C.To describe the details of factory farming.
D.To present some arguments against the idea.
Activity 1 Read for details [细节把握]
√
2.What is one of the advantages of factory farming
A.Its costs are high and the production is low.
B.It is more expensive than traditional farming.
C.It provides more food for a world population.
D.It can provide more working positions.
√
3.Why are people fighting for animal rights against factory farming
A.Because factory farming may cause serious pollution.
B.Because many farm animals suffer terrible stress.
C.Because factory farming creates a lot of waste products.
D.Because factory farming can produce cheap food.
√
4.What is the writer’s attitude to factory farming
A.Negative. B.Positive.
C.Objective. D.Indifferent.
√
Para.1 What factory farming is and the present .
Para.2 Arguments factory farming.
Para.3 Arguments factory farming.
Para.4 Despite the ，we should factory farming.
Activity 2 Read for structures [文章架构]
situation
for
against
advantages
reduce
这篇文章中使用了正反论点类文章的经典句式，请在文中找出这些句子，并积累起来。
Activity 3 Read for language features [增分靓句]
答案 1.Factory farming involves keeping farm animals inside buildings to increase the production of meat or eggs.
2.The main argument for factory farming is that，apart from being a lot cheaper than traditional or organic farming，it provides more food for a world population that has already reached seven billion...
3.On the other hand，opponents of factory farming say that it is cruel to the animals.
4.People who fight for animal rights claim that these animals suffered terrible stress.
5.In addition to this，factory farming has a negative impact on...
6.To sum up，despite producing cheap food，factory farming is bad for the planet and for the animals themselves.
7.In my opinion，we should try to reduce this kind of farming...
返 回
熟悉技法练写作
本单元的写作任务是写一篇包含正反观点的文章。
一般结构如下：
常用表达
1.介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：
We had a discussion about whether it is necessary to...我们讨论了是否有必要……
We’ve had a survey on...我们对……做了调查。
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about...我写信告诉你我们关于……的讨论。
2.过渡句：
Opinions are divided on this issue.
对这个问题观点不一。
Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.
观点主要分两组。
Different people，however，have different opinions/think quite differently on this matter.
然而，不同的人对这个观点态度不同。
3.介绍正方观点：
45% of the students hold the view that...For one thing...For another thing...
45%的学生认为……一方面……另一方面……
60% of the students are for the idea.
60%的学生支持这一观点。
4.介绍反方观点：
On the contrary/However/As the old saying goes，each coin has two sides.Nearly half of the students think that...
相反/然而/常言道，事物都有两面性。接近一半的学生认为……
5.陈述自己的观点：
In my opinion/In my view/Personally，I think.../Taking everything into consideration，we should make good use of.../Only in this way can we do...
依我看/考虑到一切因素，我们应该充分利用……/只有这样，我们才能……
分步演练
目前，《中学生英语报》组织了一场关于城市内是否可以饲养宠物的讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。
支持的理由 反对的理由 你的看法
1.安慰空巢老人； 2.增添生活乐趣。 1.造成环境污染； 2.制造噪声，有的甚至会伤人。 ……
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
第一步 审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是阐述“城市内是否可以饲养宠物”的讨论结果，写作时应注意下面几点：
1.确定文体：这是一篇议论文，写作时要注意议论文的写作特点。
2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。
3.主体人称：由于是关于“城市内是否可以饲养宠物”的话题，所以人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：说明讨论的话题——城市内是否可以饲养宠物；
第二段：说明正方和反方的观点及理由；
第三段：表明自己的观点。
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇 (含本单元词汇)
1.安慰
2.对……造成威胁
3.反对
4.除……之外，也，还
5.相反
6.采取措施
7.阻止……做某事
________
______________
___________________
________
_______________
_______________
_______________
comfort
pose a threat to
be against/object (to)
besides
on the contrary
take measures
prevent...from...
连词成句 (含本单元句型)
1.一些学生认为在城市里养宠物是个好主意。
Some of the students .
2.没有宠物的陪伴，独自生活的人无法感到安慰。
，people who live alone _____________
.
3.此外，与动物相处融洽会使生活更有趣。
will make life more interesting.
think it a good idea to keep pets in cities
Without pets accompanying them
would not feel
comforted
Besides，getting along well with animals
4.在他们看来，如果太多人在家里养宠物，对环境不好。
In their opinion，if too many people keep pets at home，______________
.
5.宠物可能会发出过多的噪声，甚至对人类安全构成威胁。
Pets may make too much noise .
6.我认为在家养宠物并不坏。
I don’t think it is bad .
it is bad for the
environment
and even pose a threat to human safety
to keep pets at home
7.但我们必须采取一些措施防止它们污染我们的环境，并在带它们外出时要小心。
_______________________________________________________________
and be careful when we take them out.
But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our
environment
第三步 句式升级
1.请把第1、2句话合并成含原因状语的句子。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.请把第6、7句话合并成含让步状语的句子。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Some of the students think it a good idea to keep pets in cities，because without pets accompanying them，people who live alone would not feel comforted.
Although I don’t think it is bad to keep pets at home，we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment and be careful when we take them out.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether we should keep pets in cities.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether we should keep pets in cities.
Some of the students think it a good idea to keep pets in cities，because without pets accompanying them，people who live alone would not feel comforted.Besides，getting along well with animals will make life more interesting.On the contrary，the other students are against the idea.In their opinion，if too many people keep pets at home，it is bad for the environment.What’s worse，pets may make too much noise and even pose a threat to human safety.
Personally，although I don’t think it is bad to keep pets at home，we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment and be careful when we take them out.
假设你是李华，最近你班就“使用手机的利与弊”进行了讨论，请根据讨论结果，写一封信向校报编辑反映此事。
达标检测
赞成的理由 反对的理由 你的看法
联系他人便利；获得更多的学习资源。 沉溺手机；浏览不健康网站。 ……
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor，
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Editor，
Recently our class has had a discussion about whether the cellphone benefits us or not.
Some students have a preference for cellphones.Cellphones make it more convenient to keep in touch with friends and relatives.The instant/
Instantly they switch on cellphones，they can obtain relevant learning resources.Nevertheless，there are some students who are opposed to/
oppose using cellphones too much.So occupied in playing cellphones are many students that they keep those around them at a distance.
Besides，with many unhealthy websites on the Internet，they will suffer a lot physically and mentally.
Personally，I advocate that all the students (should) combine using cellphones with face-to-face communication.
Yours，
Li Hua
返 回
本课结束
