Section Ⅴ Writing Workshop
Activity 1 Read for details [细节把握]
Read the passage on P62 and choose the best answer.
1．What was the challenge of Tu Youyou’s research
A．Lack of research staff.
B．Limited reference information.
C．Without guidance of other experts.
D．With no equipment to do experiment.
答案 B
2．What is Tu Youyou’s attitude to fame
A．Interested. B．Longing.
C．Indifferent. D．Not mentioned.
答案 C
Activity 2 Read for structures [文章架构]
Read the passage again and match each paragraph with its main idea.
Para.1 A．Tu Youyou’s attitude towards fame.
Para.2 B．Tu Youyou’s mission and research.
Para.3 C．Tu Youyou won the Nobel Prize.
Para.4 D．Personal information of Tu Youyou.
答案 Para.1：C Para.2：D Para.3：B Para.4：A
Activity 3 Read for language features [增分靓句]
Read the summary of “A Medical Pioneer” on P62 and find out the sentences.
1．找出文中简要说明重要事件发生的时间的句子。
(1)On 7 December,2015，Tu Youyou was awarded a Nobel Prize for...
(2)Tu Youyou majored in medicine in university and later studied...
(3)In 1969，Tu Youyou was given the mission to set up...
2．找出文中介绍人物重要成就的句子。
Despite their limited resources and hundreds of failed experiments，they found a possible chemical.
3．找出文中有关人物评价的句子。
Although Tu Youyou has won the Nobel Prize and become well-known，she is uninterested in fame and prefers to continue her research.
概要写作将阅读和写作紧密结合，要求学生在正确把握文章结构的基础上理解文章主题，然后通过判断并整合段落主次要点，进而提炼出段落要点；通过对原文中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，并有效使用连接词、过渡词将其组成一篇内容要点完整、连贯通顺的内容概要。注意概要写作不能改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构。在写概要时，要按照“六步法”的程序进行，具体步骤如下：
1．Scan the passage—览全文，定体裁
2．Underline the main points—划要点
3．Miss the details—省细节
4．Analyse the structure—析结构
5．Restate the points—换表达
6．Connect the sentences to a passage—连全文
1．议论文开头语
The passage/author argues that...
本文/作者主张……
The passage/author highlights the importance of...
本文/作者强调了……的重要性。
2．说明文开头语
According to the passage，we can know...
根据文章我们可知……
This passage/article is mainly about...
这篇文章主要是关于……
It is reported/believed that...
据报道/人们认为．..
As is shown in the study/research...
如研究所示……
3．记叙文开头语
The passage/story is mainly about...
本文/故事主要是关于……
The author tells us a story about...
作者给我们讲述了一个关于……的故事。
According to the passage/article，we know that...根据这篇文章我们知道……
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It’s the first day of school and you have to find the perfect clothes to make a good impression.Luckily for me，I don’t have this problem：my private school requires me to wear a uniform.Some may think this is not a good idea，but I think it is very positive.
In school，one of the most important things is your style.The more you have，the more popular you will probably be.With uniforms，there’s no discrimination because of what you’re wearing.Everyone is united in the same style.Clothing often reflects who you are.In most schools，there are groups of students who dress alike.You may even avoid a particular person because of what they are wearing.Uniforms require students to get to know each other by finding out who they really are.
There are many styles of clothing，some appropriate(合适的) for school and others not.Peers and the media pressure us into dressing in a certain way.Some clothing contains logos(标志) promoting alcohol or even violence.Since some students want to fit in and be cool，they tend to wear this type of clothing.In most school systems，however，it is not allowed.Uniforms help remove these problems.All students look similar.They all fit in.There are no distractions(使人分心的事物)．Uniforms allow students to concentrate on learning instead of what they are wearing.
Money also plays a big part in the clothing we wear.Not all styles are affordable.Some students may even feel pressured to steal to get the right clothing.Although uniforms are initially expensive，they can be worn for years，making them cost less than regular clothes.I believe uniforms help unite us in a common goal: to do well in school.They are a symbol of our unity.They make it clear to everyone that we are more than just our clothes.
第一步 审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇概要，写作时要注意：
1．确定文体：这是一篇议论文的概要。
2．结构应该为“总—分—总”模式。
3．主体时态：以一般现在时为主。
4．主体人称：以第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：要点1——穿校服有好处
第二段：要点2——穿校服有助于消除歧视，认识自己
第三段：要点3——穿校服能让学生关注自己的学习而不是穿着
第四段：要点4——穿校服经济实惠
第五段：总结要点
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇
1．穿校服wear school uniforms
2．好处，益处benefit
3．消除歧视get rid of discrimination
4．减轻同辈压力reduce the peer pressure
5．使某人能够做……enable sb to do
6．专注于focus/concentrate on
7．省钱save money
8．展示我们的独特性showcase our individuality
连词成句
1．一些学生认为穿校服不是个好主意。
Some students consider wearing school uniforms is not a good idea.
2．但是我认为穿校服有很多好处。
However，I think it has many benefits.
3．穿校服有助于消除歧视和减少同辈压力。
Wearing school uniforms can help get rid of discrimination and reduce the peer pressure.
4．穿校服可以让学生更加专注于学业而不是时尚。
Wearing school uniforms enables students to focus more on their school work instead of fashion.
5．校服很耐穿，能为学生节省一大笔钱。
School uniforms withstand wear and tear，so they can save students a lot of money.
6．校服让我们在学业成功这一共同目标上团结一致，同时展现出我们超越服装本身的个性。
School uniforms unite us in our common goal of academic success and showcase our individuality beyond our clothing.
第三步 句式升级
1．用连词while连接句1和句2。
While some students consider wearing school uniforms is not a good idea，I think it has many benefits.
2．用“not only...but also...”连接句3和句4。
Wearing school uniforms can not only help get rid of discrimination and reduce the peer pressure but it can also enable students to focus more on their school work instead of fashion.
第四步 组句成篇
为使各要点之间完整连贯，可利用衔接过渡词汇firstly，secondly，lastly，to begin with，moreover等连接成一篇60词左右的概要。
参考范文
While some students consider wearing school uniforms is not a good idea，I think it has many benefits.First of all，wearing school uniforms can not only help get rid of discrimination and reduce the peer pressure but it can also enable students to focus more on their school work instead of fashion.In addition，school uniforms withstand wear and tear，so they can save students a lot of money.All in all，school uniforms unite us in our common goal of academic success and showcase our individuality beyond our clothing.
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
These days a green buildings means more than just the colour of the paint.Green buildings can also refer to environmentally friendly houses，factories，and offices.
Green building means “reducing the impact of the building on the land”，Taryn Holowka of the U．S.Green Building Council in Washington，D.C.said.According to Holowka，building accounts for 65 percent of total U．S.electricity use.
But green buildings can reduce energy and water use.Also，the buildings are often located near public transportation such as buses and subways，so that people can drive their cars less.That could be good for the environment，because cars use lots of gas and give off pollution.Green buildings are often built on developed land，so that the buildings don’t destroy forests.
Marty Dettling is the project manager for a building that puts these ideas into action.The Solaire has been called the country’s first green high-rise building.According to Dettling，“We’ve reduced our energy use by one-third and our water by 50 percent.”
The Solaire cuts energy in part by using solar power.“On the face of the building we have solar panels which change the sun’s energy into electricity，”Dettling explained.The Solaire also has lights that automatically turn off when people leave the room.In addition，the building has lots of windows，allowing people to use the sun for light during the day.The Solaire cuts water by reusing it.
Not everyone is eager to move into a green building，however.Some people think that things like solar panels cost more money than many traditional energy sources.Anyhow，Holowka said，“It’s going to be big.”
参考范文
Environmentally friendly structures are called green buildings.(要点1)They can reduce energy and water use by a considerable percentage，and thus lessen pollution and avoid destroying forests as well.(要点2)For example，the green building，Solaire，has substantially reduced its energy and water use partly by applying solar power and reusing water.(要点3)Although not all people like a green building yet，it is expected to be popular in the near future.(要点4)(共31张PPT)
Section Ⅴ
Writing Workshop
THE ADMIRABLE
UNIT 6
内容索引
Part 1 品读文本学写法
Part 2 熟悉技法练写作
品读文本学写法
Read the passage on P62 and choose the best answer.
1.What was the challenge of Tu Youyou’s research
A.Lack of research staff.
B.Limited reference information.
C.Without guidance of other experts.
D.With no equipment to do experiment.
Activity 1 Read for details [细节把握]
√
2.What is Tu Youyou’s attitude to fame
A.Interested. B.Longing.
C.Indifferent. D.Not mentioned.
√
Read the passage again and match each paragraph with its main idea.
Para.1 A.Tu Youyou’s attitude towards fame.
Para.2 B.Tu Youyou’s mission and research.
Para.3 C.Tu Youyou won the Nobel Prize.
Para.4 D.Personal information of Tu Youyou.
Activity 2 Read for structures [文章架构]
Read the summary of “A Medical Pioneer” on P62 and find out the sentences.
1.找出文中简要说明重要事件发生的时间的句子。
(1)_________________________________________________________
(2)_________________________________________________________
(3)______________________________________________
Activity 3 Read for language features [增分靓句]
On 7 December,2015，Tu Youyou was awarded a Nobel Prize for...
Tu Youyou majored in medicine in university and later studied...
In 1969，Tu Youyou was given the mission to set up...
2.找出文中介绍人物重要成就的句子。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.找出文中有关人物评价的句子。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Despite their limited resources and hundreds of failed experiments，they found a possible chemical.
返 回
Although Tu Youyou has won the Nobel Prize and become well-known，she is uninterested in fame and prefers to continue her research.
熟悉技法练写作
概要写作将阅读和写作紧密结合，要求学生在正确把握文章结构的基础上理解文章主题，然后通过判断并整合段落主次要点，进而提炼出段落要点；通过对原文中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，并有效使用连接词、过渡词将其组成一篇内容要点完整、连贯通顺的内容概要。注意概要写作不能改变原文中心思想、体裁和结构。在写概要时，要按照“六步法”的程序进行，具体步骤如下：
1.Scan the passage—览全文，定体裁
2.Underline the main points—划要点
3.Miss the details—省细节
4.Analyse the structure—析结构
5.Restate the points—换表达
6.Connect the sentences to a passage—连全文
常用表达
1.议论文开头语
The passage/author argues that...
本文/作者主张……
The passage/author highlights the importance of...
本文/作者强调了……的重要性。
2.说明文开头语
According to the passage，we can know...
根据文章我们可知……
This passage/article is mainly about...
这篇文章主要是关于……
It is reported/believed that...
据报道/人们认为...
As is shown in the study/research...
如研究所示……
3.记叙文开头语
The passage/story is mainly about...
本文/故事主要是关于……
The author tells us a story about...
作者给我们讲述了一个关于……的故事。
According to the passage/article，we know that...根据这篇文章我们知道……
分步演练
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It’s the first day of school and you have to find the perfect clothes to make a good impression.Luckily for me，I don’t have this problem：my private school requires me to wear a uniform.Some may think this is not a good idea，but I think it is very positive.
In school，one of the most important things is your style.The more you have，the more popular you will probably be.With uniforms，there’s no discrimination because of what you’re wearing.Everyone is united in the same style.Clothing often reflects who you are.In most schools，there are groups of students who dress alike.You may even avoid a particular person because of what they are wearing.Uniforms require students to get to know each other by finding out who they really are.
There are many styles of clothing，some appropriate(合适的) for school and others not.Peers and the media pressure us into dressing in a certain way.Some clothing contains logos(标志) promoting alcohol or even violence.Since some students want to fit in and be cool，they tend to wear this type of clothing.In most school systems，however，it is not allowed.Uniforms help remove these problems.All students look similar.They all fit in.There are no distractions(使人分心的事物).Uniforms allow students to concentrate on learning instead of what they are wearing.
Money also plays a big part in the clothing we wear.Not all styles are affordable.Some students may even feel pressured to steal to get the right clothing.Although uniforms are initially expensive，they can be worn for years，making them cost less than regular clothes.I believe uniforms help unite us in a common goal: to do well in school.They are a symbol of our unity.They make it clear to everyone that we are more than just our clothes.
第一步 审题谋篇
审题
写作要求是写一篇概要，写作时要注意：
1.确定文体：这是一篇议论文的概要。
2.结构应该为“总—分—总”模式。
3.主体时态：以一般现在时为主。
4.主体人称：以第三人称为主。
谋篇
第一段：要点1——穿校服有好处
第二段：要点2——穿校服有助于消除歧视，认识自己
第三段：要点3——穿校服能让学生关注自己的学习而不是穿着
第四段：要点4——穿校服经济实惠
第五段：总结要点
第二步 遣词造句
核心词汇
1.穿校服
2.好处，益处
3.消除歧视
4.减轻同辈压力
5.使某人能够做……
6.专注于
7.省钱
8.展示我们的独特性
___________________
________
______________________
______________________
______________
__________________
___________
_______________________
wear school uniforms
benefit
get rid of discrimination
reduce the peer pressure
enable sb to do
focus/concentrate on
save money
showcase our individuality
连词成句
1.一些学生认为穿校服不是个好主意。
Some students consider is not a good idea.
2.但是我认为穿校服有很多好处。
However， .
3.穿校服有助于消除歧视和减少同辈压力。
Wearing school uniforms can _____________________________________
.
wearing school uniforms
I think it has many benefits
help get rid of discrimination and reduce
the peer pressure
4.穿校服可以让学生更加专注于学业而不是时尚。
Wearing school uniforms ________________________________________
instead of fashion.
5.校服很耐穿，能为学生节省一大笔钱。
School uniforms withstand wear and tear，so _______________________
.
6.校服让我们在学业成功这一共同目标上团结一致，同时展现出我们超越服装本身的个性。
School uniforms unite us and
beyond our clothing.
enables students to focus more on their school
work
they can save students a lot
of money
in our common goal of academic success
showcase our individuality
第三步 句式升级
1.用连词while连接句1和句2。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.用“not only...but also...”连接句3和句4。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
While some students consider wearing school uniforms is not a good idea，I think it has many benefits.
Wearing school uniforms can not only help get rid of discrimination and reduce the peer pressure but it can also enable students to focus more on their school work instead of fashion.
第四步 组句成篇
为使各要点之间完整连贯，可利用衔接过渡词汇firstly，secondly，lastly，to begin with，moreover等连接成一篇60词左右的概要。
参考范文
While some students consider wearing school uniforms is not a good idea，I think it has many benefits.First of all，wearing school uniforms can not only help get rid of discrimination and reduce the peer pressure but it can also enable students to focus more on their school work instead of fashion.In addition，school uniforms withstand wear and tear，so they can save students a lot of money.All in all，school uniforms unite us in our common goal of academic success and showcase our individuality beyond our clothing.
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
These days a green buildings means more than just the colour of the paint.Green buildings can also refer to environmentally friendly houses，factories，and offices.
Green building means “reducing the impact of the building on the land”，Taryn Holowka of the U.S.Green Building Council in Washington，D.C.said.According to Holowka，building accounts for 65 percent of total U.S.electricity use.
达标检测
But green buildings can reduce energy and water use.Also，the buildings are often located near public transportation such as buses and subways，so that people can drive their cars less.That could be good for the environment，because cars use lots of gas and give off pollution.Green buildings are often built on developed land，so that the buildings don’t destroy forests.
Marty Dettling is the project manager for a building that puts these ideas into action.The Solaire has been called the country’s first green high-rise building.According to Dettling，“We’ve reduced our energy use by one-third and our water by 50 percent.”
The Solaire cuts energy in part by using solar power.“On the face of the building we have solar panels which change the sun’s energy into electricity，”Dettling explained.The Solaire also has lights that automatically turn off when people leave the room.In addition，the building has lots of windows，allowing people to use the sun for light during the day.The Solaire cuts water by reusing it.
Not everyone is eager to move into a green building，however.Some people think that things like solar panels cost more money than many traditional energy sources.Anyhow，Holowka said，“It’s going to be big.”
参考范文
Environmentally friendly structures are called green buildings.(要点1)They can reduce energy and water use by a considerable percentage，and thus lessen pollution and avoid destroying forests as well.(要点2)For example，the green building，Solaire，has substantially reduced its energy and water use partly by applying solar power and reusing water.(要点3)Although not all people like a green building yet，it is expected to be popular in the near future.(要点4)
返 回
本课结束
